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2026年10月17日雅思小作文真题

2026年10月17日雅思小作文真题

The charts below show the proportion of holidaymakers using four different types of accommodations in three different years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

一、审题与数据分析

图表类型: 三张饼图(Dynamic Pie Charts)

时间: 1988、1998、2008

单位: Percentage (%)

四种住宿方式:

  • Staying with family and friends:住在亲友家

  • Hotels:酒店

  • Camping:露营

  • Rented apartments:租赁公寓

数据整理

pp = percentage points(百分点),用于表示两个百分比之间的差值。

二、Overview:最重要的两个总体特征

Overview建议写两句话,分别概括排名特征和变化趋势。

特征①:住在亲友家始终最受欢迎

尽管2008年比例有所下降,但 staying with family and friends 在三个年份中都占据最大份额。

52% → 54% → 44%

可以写:

Staying with family and friends remained the most popular accommodation choice throughout the period.

特征②:租赁公寓明显上升,露营明显下降

■ Rented apartments

■ Camping

■ Family and friends

■ Hotels

单位:%

  • Rented apartments: 7% → 11% → 22%,增长15个百分点,是增幅最大的类别。

  • Camping: 26% → 13% → 12%,下降14个百分点,是降幅最大的类别。

  • Hotels: 15% → 22% → 22%,先增长,后保持稳定。

可以写:

The proportion choosing rented apartments increased considerably, whereas camping became much less popular.

推荐完整Overview

Overall, staying with family and friends remained the most popular accommodation option in all three years. Meanwhile, rented apartments experienced the most significant increase in popularity, whereas camping showed the largest decline.

这个Overview不需要具体数据,就已经概括了整张图的主要特征。

三、Body段如何分组?

我建议不要按照1988、1998、2008逐年描述。

更推荐按照变化趋势分组。

这种分组能够让比较更加自然,避免流水账。

Body 1:Family and friends + Hotels

Family and friends

52% → 54% → 44%

  • 1988年至1998年略微上升

  • 随后下降10个百分点

  • 始终是最主要的住宿方式

Hotels

15% → 22% → 22%

  • 前十年上升7个百分点

  • 后十年保持稳定

可用表达:

The figure for staying with family and friends rose slightly from 52% in 1988 to 54% in 1998, before falling to 44% in 2008.

By contrast, the proportion of holidaymakers staying in hotels increased from 15% to 22% during the first decade and then remained unchanged.

Body 2:Camping + Rented apartments

Camping

26% → 13% → 12%

  • 1988年是第二受欢迎的住宿方式

  • 1998年比例减半

  • 2008年继续小幅下降

Rented apartments

7% → 11% → 22%

  • 1988年占比最低

  • 20年间增长15个百分点

  • 2008年与酒店并列第二

可用表达:

Camping accounted for 26% of accommodation choices in 1988, but this figure halved to 13% in 1998 and declined marginally to 12% in 2008.

In contrast, the share of rented apartments rose steadily from 7% to 22%, matching the figure for hotels in the final year.

四、Band 8参考范文

Holiday Accommodation Choices Between 1988 and 2008

The three pie charts compare the proportions of holidaymakers who chose four different types of accommodation in 1988, 1998 and 2008.

Overall, staying with family and friends remained the most popular option throughout the period, despite a decline in its share by 2008. Meanwhile, rented apartments became considerably more popular, whereas camping experienced the most substantial decrease.

In 1988, just over half of holidaymakers (52%) stayed with family and friends. This figure increased slightly to 54% in 1998 before falling to 44% in 2008, although it remained the largest proportion. By comparison, the percentage choosing hotels rose from 15% in 1988 to 22% in 1998 and then remained unchanged in the final year.

The other two categories showed contrasting trends. Camping was the second most common choice in 1988, accounting for 26% of holidaymakers. However, its share halved to 13% in 1998 and declined marginally to 12% in 2008. In contrast, rented apartments were initially the least popular option, representing only 7% in 1988. Their share then rose to 11% in 1998 before doubling to 22% in 2008, equalling the proportion staying in hotels.

约205词|Band 8目标参考范文,非官方评分

五、这道题值得积累的高分表达

六、重点语法:百分比、百分点与倍数

1. Increase by VS Increase to

以租赁公寓为例:

1988年:7%

2008年:22%

正确表达:

The proportion increased to 22%.

最终达到22%。

The proportion increased by 15 percentage points.

增加了15个百分点。

注意:从7%增长到22%,不能说 increased by 15%,因为这表示相对增长15%,而不是增加15个百分点。

2. Double VS Halve

这道题有两处非常适合使用倍数表达。

Camping:26% → 13%

The proportion halved between 1988 and 1998.

Rented apartments:11% → 22%

The proportion doubled between 1998 and 2008.

这两个变化都是精确的倍数关系,不需要使用 approximately。

3. Remain + 形容词

酒店在1998年和2008年都是22%。

The figure remained stable at 22%.

The proportion remained unchanged at 22%.

注意:remained unchanged 只适用于1998年至2008年,不能用来描述整个1988—2008年,因为最初的数据是15%。

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