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第 30 讲 感谢信
（模拟精练+真题演练）
书面表达
1．（2023·广东佛山·统考二模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Alex已被香港大学录取。请你写邮件祝贺
Alex，并请教如何申请入读香港大学。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Dear Alex,
I’m thrilled to hear that you’ve been accepted into the University of Hong Kong! Congratulations on this
wonderful achievement! I am so proud of you and I know how hard you have worked to make it happen.
Meanwhile, I was wondering if you could share some insights on how you went about applying to the
university. I’m interested in knowing more about the process since I’m thinking about the possibility of studying
there. Any tips or advice you could offer would be greatly appreciated.
I hope that you’re excited for this new adventure and I wish you all the best for your studies in Hong Kong.
Please keep in touch and let me know how everything is going.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Alex写封邮件，祝贺他被香港大学录取，并请教
如何申请入读香港大学。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→excited
与此同时：meanwhile→in the meantime
提供：offer→provide
为……感到骄傲：be proud of→take pride in
2.句式拓展同义句转换
原句：Any tips or advice you could offer would be greatly appreciated.
拓展句：I would appreciate it if you could offer me some tips or advice.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m thrilled to hear that you’ve been accepted into the University of Hong Kong! (运用了
that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Meanwhile, I was wondering if you could share some insights on how you went about applying to the
university. (运用了if引导的宾语从句和how引导的宾语从句)
2．（2023年四川成都·高三石室中学测试）假定你是李华，得知你的朋友Frank被牛津大学(University of
Oxford)录取，请给他写一封英文邮件，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺;
2.赞扬他的努力及对你的鼓舞;
3.美好祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Frank,
Good news travels fast! Please accept my hearty congratulation on your graduation from senior school and
admission to University of Oxford.
I know how hard you have been working these years and I am very proud of you for your success. I am firmly
convinced that it is your hard work that contributes to your success today. Just as the old saying goes, “No pains, no
gains.” It is a reward for your diligence and persistence. Your success is also a great encouragement to me to study
harder and I hope that one day I will enter a famous university just like you.
I believe it will be a new beginning and a chance for you to embrace a fuller life and pave the way for a
brilliant future. All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future!
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2023·重庆市万州二高高三校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，外教Smith 邀请你本周日陪他去大明湖游
玩，但你因故不能前往。请你写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．感谢邀请;2．说明原因;3．另约时间。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右;
2．请按格式在相应位置作答。Dear Smith,
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Yours
Li Hua
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Dear Smith, Thank you for inviting me to go to Daming Lake with you this Sunday. However, I am afraid that
I could not manage it, because there will be an important test next Monday. With tons of notes to go through, I can
hardly squeeze any time for the trip this weekend. I wonder if it is possible that we reschedule it for another
time.Will next Sunday suit you?Please let me know whether you are available. I hope this will not bring you too
much inconvenience. Looking forward to your reply.
4．（2023·四川绵阳·绵阳中学校考三模）假定你是李华，上周末你受本校交换生David邀请一起外出骑
行，请你给David发一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.感谢邀请；
2.骑行感想；
3.下周末安排。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear David,
What an unforgettable ride it was! Now I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for inviting me and
propose a plan for next week.
To be frank, what’s really remarkable was people’s active involvement in bicycle riding, from the young
pedaling with playmates to well-equipped cyclists racing on paved lanes. Besides, it was your encouraging words
that inspired me to hold on to the last, without which I would have surrendered halfway up the slopes. As to our
next trip, how about camping at the nearby lake next Saturday if weather permits?
Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua5．（2023·四川成都·成都外国语学校校考模拟预测）假如你是李津。你校最近要为高三毕业生举行成人典
礼，你作为学生代表，被要求在典礼上发言。请根据下列要点，写一个发言稿。
1、感谢父母的养育之恩、感谢老师的培养之情；
2、表达努力学习，争取好成绩的决心；
3、表达为社会、为国家承担责任的意志。
注意：1，词数不少于100；
2、可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3、信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,
I am greatly honored to speak on behalf of my schoolmates at this coming-of-age ceremony.
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Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,
I am greatly honored to speak on behalf of my schoolmates at this coming-of-age ceremony. First of all, let’s
express our gratitude to both our parents and teachers for what they have done for us to bring us up. Without their
support and love, we would not be as grown-up as we are today. To pay back, we should spare no effort to work
hard in every subject so that we can be admitted into our dream universities. It goes without doubt that only by
acquiring as much advanced knowledge as possible can we shoulder more responsibilities not only for the society
but also for the future of our country. Dear parents and teachers, you will be proud of us.
Thank you.
6．（2023·重庆万州·重庆市万州第二高级中学校考二模）假定你是李华，最近收到了你的英国朋友Jacob
的来信，得知他已被剑桥大学(the University of Cambridge)录取。请你写信向他表示祝贺，并就你在大学专
业选择上遇到的困惑征求他的意见。内容包括：
1.向Jacob表本祝贺；
2.谈谈你在大学专业选择上的困惑；
3.向对方征求意见和建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Jacob,
How is everything going? I’m glad to receive your letter and know you’ve been admitted to the University of
Cambridge. I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations.
I am now in the process of university application, struggling with which major to choose. I’m a science student
in high school, so I’m supposed to choose majors related to science and engineering. But the problems are that I’m
not sure where my interest lies and which majors have a bright prospect that can ensure me a good job. Do you
have any suggestions on the choice of a major?
I would appreciate it if you could share your opinions with me.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
7．（2023·天津市新华中学校考二模）假定你是李华。近期，你在上海参加了为期两周的以“培养国际视
野的新一代”为主题的全国中学生夏令营活动。在培训期间，外教Smith先生就学习技巧和文化拓展等方
面给予你很多帮助。回家后，你想给他写一封信，以表达感谢，内容包括：
1.表示感谢；
2.回顾你得到的帮助以及收获；
3.祝福和期待。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your generous help during the two-week summer camp.
During the training courses, you were always willing to help me patiently and give me hints on English
learning. It was you who encouraged me to be confident to express myself in English. My oral English has
improved dramatically since. Also, I really admire your lectures about Western culture, from which I have benefited
a lot and had a better understanding of different traditions.My appreciation is beyond words. I will be more than pleased if I can show you around my hometown in
return for your kindness. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8．（2023年·广东肇庆·一中考试）假如你是高三学生李华，请你写一篇演讲稿，代表全体同学在毕业典礼
上发言，内容要点如下：
1. 即将毕业的心情；
2. 高中三年的收获；
3. 表示感谢。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Good morning, everyone!
I'm Li Hua. It's my great honor to stand here on behalf of all the students to deliver my speech. At this
moment, I cannot bear to part but I am also eager for my new life at university. During the past three years, not only
have I made some true friends who share sorrows and joys with me, but also I have gained rich knowledge.
Before leaving, I'd like to express my sincere gratitude to my teachers. Now I am about to start my new
college life and I will live up to the expectations of my teachers and my parents.
Thank you for your listening.
9．（2023年·重庆北碚·高三西南大学附中校考开学考试）我们除了感谢他人，也应该感谢自己。在高中生
活即将结束之际，请根据自身的情况，给自己写一封感谢信，看到美好的自己和更美好的未来。
注意：
1.词数应为80左右；
2.信的开头和结尾已经给出。
Dear Self,
I’m writing to express my thanks to you.
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Dear Self,
I’m writing to express my thanks to you. As time goes by, I will graduate from high school soon. Lookingback on the three years of high school life, I thank you for your courage and hard work. In the face of difficulties,
you are never afraid of failure. Over the past three years, you have been getting along well with your classmates
and teachers, leaving many good memories of your high school life. Your dream university is Zhejiang University,
which is one of the key universities in China. As long as you work hard, you will realize your college dream. I
believe a bright future is waiting for you.
I wish you can be admitted to your dream university.
Self
10．（2023·全国·一模）假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。近期，你校外教Steve做了一场关于读后续写的
在线讲座（A Lecture on Continuation Writing）。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达感谢并简述你的收获；
2. 说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Steve,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Steve,
Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on continuation writing. I’ve learnt really a
lot, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck—how to increase the reading and writing speed.
However, I am still puzzled by some difficulties in it. For example, I find it hard to grasp the gist of the
passages, and I also feel it hard to continue when confronted with new words. What can I do? Would you please
give me some advice? I would be really grateful if you could help me out.
Thank you very much again. Your earliest reply would be appreciated.
Yours,
Li hua
11．（2023·全国·高三专题练习）假定你是李华，春节期间你和朋友Mike一起出游，你刚收到他发给你的
照片。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 收到照片表示感谢；
2. 回顾一起度过的时光；
3. 邀请他周末来家作客。注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下各式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
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Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
How are you? Thank you for sending me the photos that bring back those wonderful memories.
The time we spent together during the Spring Festival was just incredible. We woke up early to see the sunrise
over the sea. On the way back, we tasted the fine local food, which was impressive indeed. And what was truly
unforgettable was the hospitality I had as a guest at your home. I really had a great time.
I’d like to invite you over this weekend. It will be a chance for you to meet my family. Looking forward to
your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
12．（2023·山西·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校英语翻译爱好者协会成功举办了中华诗词英译大赛，请
你代表协会在本次活动的颁奖仪式上进行总结发言，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 回顾本次活动；
3. 表达希望。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow schoolmates,
It’s my great honor to make a concluding statement here.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】Dear fellow schoolmates,
It’s my great honor to make a concluding statement here. At this moment, I’d like to extend my sincere
congratulations to all of the participants.
The competition would not be a great success without the joint efforts of everyone. My hearty thanks go firstly
to our teachers, whose guidance and encouragement have given us much insight into translation of Chinese poetry.
Besides, all the participants’ devotion and wonderful performance impressed us a lot. Most importantly, the
competition has further stimulated our passion for Chinese poetry and boosted our cultural confidence.
I sincerely hope that we students will work to learn English well, carry forward and spread traditional Chinese
culture.
That’s all. Thank you!
13．（2023·福建省德化第一中学校联考）假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统
文化知识竞赛(Chinese Traditional Culture Contest)”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信,内容包
括：
1.表示祝贺；
2.回顾他的付出和努力；
3.期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m
writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
It came as no surprise, for you are keenly interested in Chinese culture and have been continuously exploring
it. Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but also you consulted many locals and professionals, which
equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture.
Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture
and make it more accessible to people around the world.
Yours,
Li Hua14．（2023·全国·模拟预测）假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会举办的英语演讲比赛（English Speech
Contest）得到了外教Pam的大力帮助。活动已圆满结束，请你给她写一封感谢信。内容包括：
1. 表达感谢；
2. 外教的帮助；
3. 同学的收获。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Pam,
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Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Pam,
I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable support and guidance during the
English speech contest. Your unwavering commitment and encouragement have helped us achieve a lot in the
competition.
You have invested so much time and effort in preparing us for the contest that we all have learned a lot more
about English speech. Your excellent teaching skills, patience, and dedication have been instrumental in improving
our English language skills. What’s more, your constructive feedback and suggestions have helped us refine our
pronunciation, style and presentation, which were crucial in delivering an impressive speech.
We all feel blessed to have had such a precious opportunity to learn from you. Your contribution has greatly
enriched our English learning experience, and we will always cherish the memories of the time spent with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
15．（2023·安徽合肥·第八中学模拟预测）假定你是学生李华，你在学校组织的第三届用英语讲中国故事
挑战赛(“Stories of China Retold in English”Challenge)中获得冠军。请撰写一封英语邮件给外教David，分享
这一喜讯并感谢他在赛前给予你的帮助。内容包括：
1. 告知喜讯;
2. 回忆外教提供的帮助并表达感谢。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Li Hua
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Dear David,
Full of joy, I can’t wait to share with you this exciting news! I have been crowned with the championship in
the third “Stories of China Retold in English” Challenge in my school.
My gratitude for you is beyond description. When I was racking my brains for the draft, it was you who helped
me polish it and correct grammar mistakes carefully. With the draft completed, it was you who helped me rehearse
the speech and kindly pointed out how to pause and articulate in a better way. In the tryout, when I stuttered due to
extreme anxiety, it was you who encouraged me to continue. Without your constant encouragement, my morale
would have been dampened.
Thanks again for your generous help and wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
书面表达
1．（2021·天津·高考真题）假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他
母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语
回复，内容包括：
(1) 表示感谢并问候；
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情；
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
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Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during
my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I'm going
toTian 'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy
the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid
development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to
join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for
consultation.
Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.
Yours,
Li Jin
2．（2020·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写
封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
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Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to
the textbook.
We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English
play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is
going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script,
we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft
script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office
next Tuesday to give you more details?
Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look
forward to your early reply. Best regards!Yours truly,
Li Hua
3．（2019·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给
他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3. 临别祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude
to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional
guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank
first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out,
which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong
enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
