2026北京海淀区高三（上）英语期中考试题：书面表达解题策略

第一部分 试题

💡第二部分

✅ 审题精讲（结合这道真题）

题目：

李华给外国好友Jim写邮件，介绍“爱在我家”作品展，两点任务：①介绍作品 ②提交作品的原因

1. 文体：电子邮件（写给外国朋友，语气友好自然，不用过于正式）

2. 人称：第一人称 I

3. 时态：主线一般过去时（上周参加展览、提交作品）；介绍作品内涵、家庭的爱可用一般现在时

4. 两个硬性要点必须全部写到，缺一不可

◦ 要点1：

介绍作品（可以自己设定作品：一幅全家福绘画 / 照片拼贴画 / 一段短视频，推荐全家福绘画，好写、不容易卡词）

◦ 要点2：

提交原因（体现“爱在我家”：记录家人陪伴、家人互相照顾，高三备考家人默默支持，传递温暖）

5. 词数：100词左右，开头结尾已给，不计入词数

📝 范文（稳妥高分版，适配高考）

Dear Jim,

How is it going? I’m writing to tell you about the “Love at My Home” exhibition held in our school last week.

The work I handed in is a painting of my whole family. It shows my parents chatting gently and my grandma making fruit salad in our living room.

I chose this work because I want to record the quiet love in my family. As a Senior Three student, I’m busy with my studies every day. Whenever I feel stressed, my family always give me care and comfort. This painting carries all the warm moments we share together.Isn’t it meaningful?

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

👉 词数统计：

正文大约96词，完美符合要求

✨ 进阶优化版（想冲更高分，句式更丰富）

Dear Jim,

How is it going? I’m writing to share with you my experience of the school exhibition themed “Love at My Home”.

What I submitted was a painting featuring my family. In the picture, my parents are talking happily while my grandma prepares snacks for us.

The reason why I picked this painting is that it captures ordinary but precious love at home. Buried in heavy schoolwork, I often feel worn out. Yet my family’s constant support warms me up all the time. I hope this work can show that love lies in those small daily moments.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

📌 逐句拆解 + 写作思路、技巧

第一步：开头过渡（引出写信目的）

I’m writing to tell you about… / I’m writing to share with you…（给朋友写信，用这个非常自然）

第二步：

要点1 

介绍作品（固定思路：作品是什么 + 画面内容）

✅ 万能模板：

The work I handed in is… 

It shows…可选替换作品（如果不想写画）：

• a short video（短视频，记录家人做饭、聊天）

• a photo collage（照片拼贴画）

第三步：

要点2 

说明提交原因（扣主题 Love at My Home）逻辑链条：高三压力大 → 家人默默陪伴、鼓励 → 平凡日常藏着爱 → 所以提交这个作品高分句型：

• The reason why…is that… （定语从句，加分）

• lie in small daily moments 爱藏在日常小事里

• constant support 一直以来的支持

第四步：结尾（简单互动，期待回信）

Isn’t it meaningful? / What do you think of it? Looking forward to your reply.

⚠️ 避坑提醒（高考高频扣分点）

1. 不要两个要点混在一起写，最好分开成两层，阅卷老师一眼看到要点

2. 时态不乱跳：上周展览、上交作品→过去时；画面内容、家庭常态→现在时

3. 不要写太长，控制90–110词，太长容易出错

4. 不要跑题：全程紧扣 爱在我家，不要写成单纯介绍我的家人

📚 好词积累（直接背，同类亲情作文通用）• be themed … 以……为主题

• submit / hand in 提交

• capture the warm moments 捕捉温暖瞬间• constant care and support 一如既往的关爱与支持

• be buried in schoolwork 埋头学业

• lie in little daily things 藏在日常小事中

一、范文逐句翻译（稳妥版）Dear Jim,How is it going? I’m writing to tell you about the “Love at My Home” exhibition held in our school last week.你好吗？我写信是想跟你讲讲上周我校举办的“爱在我家”作品展。The work I handed in is a painting of my whole family. It shows my parents chatting gently and my grandma making fruit salad in our living room.我提交的作品是一幅全家福绘画。画里，爸爸妈妈轻声交谈，奶奶正在客厅做水果沙拉。I chose this work because I want to record the quiet love in my family. As a Senior Three student, I’m busy with my studies every day. Whenever I feel stressed, my family always give me care and comfort. This painting carries all the warm moments we share together.我选择这幅作品，是想记录家里这份平淡的爱。作为一名高三学生，我每天学业繁重。每当我感到压力大的时候，家人总会给予我关心和安慰。这幅画承载着我们一起度过的所有温暖瞬间。Isn’t it meaningful? Looking forward to your reply.是不是很有意义？期待你的回信。Yours,Li Hua二、另外2套不同作品版本范文（直接背诵，换素材）版本2：作品是短视频（short video）Dear Jim,How is it going? I’m writing to share with you the “Love at My Home” exhibition held in our school last week.What I submitted is a short video. It records small moments at home: my mom preparing breakfast early in the morning and my dad helping me review lessons.I sent this video because these little things show the love of my family. Faced with heavy pressure from the college entrance examination, their love gives me strength to keep going. I hope more people can notice love in ordinary daily life.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua正文约98词版本3：作品是照片拼贴画（photo collage）Dear Jim,How is it going? I’m writing to tell you about the school exhibition themed “Love at My Home”.My entry is a photo collage made up of photos taken in the past years. They record our family trips, birthday parties and quiet dinners.I picked this work because I value the time spent with my family. Life as a Senior Three student is tough, but my family’s love supports me all the way. These photos remind me that love is always around me.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua正文约95词三、配套答题步骤复盘（考场标准流程，适配这一类书信）1. 圈划题干任务：两个要点：①介绍作品 ②说明提交原因；圈关键词：last week, exhibition “Love at My Home”, email to Jim，词数100左右2. 定框架三段式◦ 第一段：开门见山，告知写信目的（引入作品展）◦ 第二段：要点1（介绍作品+画面内容）→要点2（提交原因，扣家庭之爱+高三背景）【核心得分段】◦ 第三段：简单互动，收尾3. 定时态：展览、上交作品 → 一般过去时；画面内容、家人常态、感悟 → 一般现在时4. 选词造句：优先保证要点齐全，再嵌入1个加分从句（定语从句/表语从句），不要堆砌难词5. 自查30秒：要点有没有全、时态有没有乱、词数是否在90–110区间、拼写标点错误四、同类话题迁移（举一反三）这个主题属于亲情、家庭温暖、校园活动分享，遇到下面题目可以直接套用里面句型：• 给外国朋友介绍一次校园艺术展• 介绍一件承载回忆的物品• 分享一件感动自己的家庭小事五、可直接默写的加分句型（本话题专属）1. I’m writing to share with you… 我写信想和你分享……2. What I submitted is… 我提交的作品是……（主语从句，高分）3. The reason why I chose it is that… 我选择它的原因是……4. It captures the warm moments in my daily life. 它捕捉了我生活里温暖的瞬间。5. Their love gives me strength to move forward. 他们的爱给我前行的力量。