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阅卷老师悄悄提醒:初中英语期中作文这样写更容易得高分

阅卷老师悄悄提醒:初中英语期中作文这样写更容易得高分
单词背了不少,单独拿出来都认识,可一落笔写作文就犯难:只会反复用简单句,句式没有变化;想到哪写到哪,逻辑乱糟糟;一不小心冒出语法错误、中式英语;明明意思写出来了,却拿不到高分。
作文扣分,往往不是孩子不会这道题,而是缺少清晰的写作框架、地道的替换句型,不懂阅卷老师的打分偏好,小问题累积起来,悄悄丢掉不少印象分。
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✍️ 万能开头句(6-9年级通用)

1. As we all know, … plays an important part in our life.
众所周知,……在我们的生活中很重要。
2. I’m writing to tell you something about …
我写信想告诉你关于……的事(书信类必用)
3. Recently, we had a discussion about …
最近,我们开展了一场关于……的讨论。
4. There is no doubt that …
毫无疑问,……
5. It’s important for us to …
对我们来说,……很重要。

✍️ 中间高分过渡、提建议句型

1. First of all, … What’s more, … Last but not least, …
首先……此外……最后……(分点神器)
2. Why not …? / Why don’t you …?
为什么不……呢?(委婉提建议)
3. It’s a good idea to do …
做……是个好办法。
4. I suggest that we should …
我建议我们应该……
5. If we …, we will …
如果我们……,我们就会……(条件状语从句,加分)
6. Not only … but also …
不仅……而且……(高年级提档次)

✍️ 万能结尾句

1. In a word, it’s necessary for us to …
总之,我们有必要……
2. I believe if we keep trying, we will make great progress.
我相信只要坚持,我们就会取得很大进步。
3. Let’s take action from now on.
让我们从现在行动起来。
4. I’m looking forward to your reply.
期待你的回复(书信结尾)
5. I hope my advice can help you.
希望我的建议对你有帮助。

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模板1:建议类(求助、提建议|考试超高频)

Dear ____,
I’m glad to receive your letter. You told me you have some trouble in ____. Here is my advice.
First of all, you should ____. What’s more, it’s a good idea to ____. Last but not least, why not ____? It can help you a lot.
I hope my advice will work. I believe you will do better soon.
Yours,

模板2:活动介绍类(班会、志愿活动、出游、比赛)

We held an activity about ____ last week. It was great.
At first, we ____. Then we ____. We learned a lot and had great fun.
From this activity, I know that ____. I hope we can have more activities like this.

模板3:观点讨论类(手机、阅读、做家务、线上学习)

Recently we had a discussion about ____. Different students have different ideas.
Some students think that ____. However, others believe ____.
In my opinion, we should ____. It is good for us.

模板4:人物/爱好介绍(我的朋友、榜样、兴趣爱好)

____ is someone I admire a lot. He/She is kind and hard-working.
He/She often ____. And he/she always tries his best to ____.
I can learn a lot from him/her. I want to be a person like him/her.

✨ 加分替换词(低年级先用简单版,高年级升级)

基础版:good → nice / useful
进阶版:good → helpful / meaningful / wonderful
基础版:many → lots of
进阶版:many → plenty of
基础版:I think
进阶版:In my opinion / As far as I know

💛结尾寄语

作文高分,从来不是临时背几句就能拿到。打好框架基础,打磨句式表达,持续练习,才是长久提分的办法。希望这些模板句子能帮到大家。
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