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木易和Ruth老师整理的《硬货汇总作文书》（二） 公众号：研木易木子
二、网络流传英语二高价作文模板整理
（二 ）第二套（积极与消极维度）
1、消极模板
With the rapid advance in the standard of living of Chinese people in recent years,
(题目主旨) has a significant change. What is shown in the table（bar /chart）above
indicates that dramatic changes have taken place in (主旨或其紧密相关的内容) from
年份 to 年份.
According to the figures given, there was an obvious growth in the number of
___between 年 and 年 , climbing nearly to（从图表找出） 百分数 / 数字. Meanwhile,
___has declined by 百分数 from 年 to 年. The statistics of rise and fall seem to exist
in isolation but closely related to one another.
The matter of (主旨及它导致的问题)_has become increasingly widespread in spite of
the fact that most people are still unaware of the problems it brings about.
Primarily, if we mishandle this problem, it will break the harmony of our society.
Furthermore, （主旨可能导致的问题，请列举）____would also produce factors
leading to social instability.
As mentioned above, I think that the threatens of （主旨，否定态度）__ do more
harm than good. And it’s imperative for us to take drastic measures. One measure
is to enhance people’s awareness with respect to the problem of （面对群众，有一
定普遍性）___. But, more importantly, man must take practical actions to prevent
the misguided action from happening. If we could make every effort to settle this
matter, I believe that a happy and bright future is awaiting us.
如今,越来越多的人开始意识到，（题目主旨）___对社会每个成员产生的影响越来越大. 以
上图表表明，从___年到___年，(主旨或其紧密相关的内容)___发生了巨大改变。
根据所给数据可知，__年到__年有明显的增长，达到了（从图表找出）百分数/数字。然而
__年到__年下降了百分数/数字。这些数据的升降看起来似乎是孤立的，但其实它们紧密相
连。
(主旨及它导致的)____问题已经逐渐扩大，然而大多数人任然没有意识到这一现象所引发的
问题。首先，如果我们处理问题不当，它将阻碍社会主义和谐社会的发展。此外，（主旨可
能导致的问题，请列举）____还将产生导致社会动乱的因素。
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如上所述，我认为（主旨，否定态度）____问题利大于弊，所以采取严厉的措施非常必要。
一个方法是加强人们对（面对群众，有一定普遍性）___问题的关注。但更重要的是，人们
必须采取实际措施去防止发生错误行为。我相信如果我们尽所能去解决这个问题，那么快乐
美好的未来正在等着我们。
2、积极模板
With the rapid advance in the standard of living conditions of Chinese people in
recent years, (题目主旨)___ has a significant change. According to the figures given,
there was an obvious growth in the number of ___between 年and年, climbing nearly
to 百分数/数字. Meanwhile, ___has declined by 百分数from__年to__年. The statistics
of rise and fall seem to exist in isolation but closely related to one another.
There are two factors accounting for these changes. Development in economy is an
essential one in these days. The increased income resulting from economic growth
plays an important part in (示例) the growth of tourist/( less expense on food). Hence,
a small percentage of total income is enough to cover food/tourist expense. The
other major factor is (示例) many China’s tourist attractions/(encouragement policies
of government). Supported by the government and attracted by the colorful
food/scenery, people never hesitate to make changes.
As mentioned above, we may come to the conclusion that ____have been
constantly improved between__年and __年. With the further growth in economy and
more changes in life style, the tendency indicated in the table will continue in the
better direction.
如今,越来越多的人开始意识到，（题目主旨）___对社会每个成员产生的影响越来越
大。以上图表表明__年到__年(主旨或其紧密相关的内容)_____发生了巨大改变。根据所给
数据可知，___年到___年有明显的增长，达到了百分数/数字。然而___年到___年下降了 百
分数/数字。这些数据的升降看起来似乎是孤立的，但其实它们紧密相连。
对于这些改变，可归结于两个原因。当今经济发展是其中一个原因。经济的发展引起的
收入增加对(示例) 旅游业发展/食物消费降低有很重要的作用。因此，只需要收入的一小部
分就足以支付(根据主旨填写) 食品/旅游的消费。另一个主要原因是(示例,根据主旨填写)
中国有许多吸引游客的旅游景点/食品/政府的鼓励政策，受到政府鼓励并有吸引人眼球的食
物/景色。人们会毫不犹豫地做出改变。
如上所述，我们可以得知，(主旨,归纳)____从__年到__年已经发生了明显增长。随着经
济的进一步增长，更多生活方式的改变，以上图表所表示的趋势将向着更好的方向发展。
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三、 英语一作文高价模板素材整合
1. 积极模板
It's pretty intriguing and instructive to digest the profound connotation
conveyed by this cartoon. It seems to be a simple story that 一句话描述图片. (At first
glance, it’s a little bit exaggerative, however, on the second thoughts,) the
meaningful character about 主题词 implied is anything but superficial.
As is incisively described in the philosophic drawing above, the cartoonist wishes
to convey that 主题词 plays an important role in shaping sunny personality,(though
various changes have mushrooming with the rapid development of economy
society.) As far as I'm concerned, it's one of the keys for youth to mature to embody
主题词 as it can advocate positive actions and frustrate negative ones. Meanwhile,
the realistic of influence of 主题词would eventually encourage people to pursue long-
term development rather than immediate fame and recognition. What the cartoon
shows reminds me of Ma Yun, the most influenced entrepreneur in China, owes his
success to 主题词 in his public speeches. (Meanwhile it’s 主题词 that leads his
company to stand out in the internet competition .) Ma Yun 's success convinces us
of the truth that we can never grow up without 主题词. (Imagine for a moment that
if we ceased to 主题词,what would happen tomorrow? Thanks to 主题词, ,though
challenging to form, it introduces us to a brand new world where people are noble
and elegant as we abandon barbarism and embrace civilization)
In conclusion, close attention should be paid to the cultivation of 主题词 as it
enables us to make more progress. Combined with the current situation of
globalization, government officials ,social organizations and individuals should
collaborate as much as possible to strengthen the awareness of 主题词 and make the
current social system more reasonable so that citizens' values can be more up right.
(主题词 is the best belief in a brighter future that gives us enough power and patience
to fight against undesirable phenomenon.)
领悟这幅图的深刻含义是非常有趣并具有教育意义。这看起来是一个简单故事，一句话
描述图片。（虽乍看起有些夸张，但转念一想，）它传达的关于主题这个意味深长的品质却
一点也不肤浅。
正如上面富含哲理的图所生动呈现的那样，作者想要表达的是主题词在塑造阳光的性格
方面扮演重要的角色，（尽管在快速发展的经济社会下涌现了各种的变化）。就我而言，拥
有主题词对年轻人是成熟的关键之一，因为它提倡积极的行为并抵消消极行为。同时，主题
词的现实影响力最终鼓励社会追求长远的发展，而不是即时的命理和认可。
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图片描述的内容让我想起了马云，中国最具有影响力的企业家，在公众发言多次表示，
他的成功归功于持续的主题词，（同时也是因为主题词，使得他领导的阿里巴巴在互联网竞
争中脱颖而出。）马云的成功告诉我们，没有经历主题词，一个人无法成长。（想象一下，
如果我们停止主题词，明天会发生什么？归功于___，尽管他比较难形成，不过它带领我们
进入一个全新的世界，那里人们都会高尚和优雅，并且摒弃野蛮，拥抱文明）
【（人物素材有点过时了，大家可以换成其他自己喜欢的人）】
总而言之，鉴于可以让我们不断进步，我们应该重视培养主题词，而且目前的全球一
体化形式，政府、社会、组织、个人都应该最大可能的合作来加强主题词并且把当前的社会
制度改进的更加合理，从而让公民价值观更加健康。（主题词是对美好未来的信念，可以给
予我们足够的力量和耐心让我们与现有不良问题做斗争）
2、消极模板
It is pretty disappointment and discouragement to digest the profound connotatio
n conveyed by this cartoon. It seems to be a simple story that (一句话描述图片内容).
(A little bit exaggerative as it is at first glance.) the potential social issue about (主
题词) implied is anything but superficial on second thoughts.
As is incisively described in the philosophic drawing above, the cartoonist wishes to
convey that various ironic social problems declarer 主 题 词 existence ,(while
surprising changes have been mushrooming with the rapid development of
economy society.)(What are the roots of 主题词？) As far as I'm concerned, the
problem of 主题词 is caused by overwhelming crush for vanity a nd f ame w hich h as
deteriorated the intimate the relationship among individuals. Furthermore, people
have struggled in the fierce social competitions, which prevents them from caring 主
题词. Finally, during the process of transition from tradition planned economy to
modern market economy, the problem of 主题词 becomes widespread, leading to
more short-term and personal interests. (Imagine for a moment that if we gave up
solving problems of 主题词, what would happen tomorrow? For young people, we
should responsible for 主题词 , though challenging to solve, the action will introduces
us to a brand new world where people are noble and elegant as we abandon
barbarism and embrace civilization)
In conclusion, close attention should be paid to the cultivation of 主题词 as it
enables us to make more progress. Combined with the current situation of
globalization, government officials ,social organizations and individuals should
collaborate as much as possible to strengthen the awareness of 主题词 and make the
current social system more reasonable so that citizens' values can be more up right.
(主题词 is the best belief in a brighter future that gives us enough power and patience
to fight against undesirable phenomenon.)
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领悟这幅图片所蕴含的深刻含义是非常令人失望和沮丧的，这看起来是一个简单故事，
一句话描述图片。（虽乍看起来有些夸张，但转念一想，）她传达关于主题词这个千载的社
会问题却一点也不肤浅。
正如上面富含哲理的图所生动呈现的那样，作者想要表达的是（当快速发展的经济社会
涌现了许多惊人的变化的同时，）各种社会问题宣告了主题词的存在。（什么原因是主题词
的根源呢？）
就我的观点而言，对名利的过分狂热导致了主题词问题的出现，这已经破坏了人与人之
间亲密关系。另外，人们在激烈的社会竞争中苦苦挣扎，很难关注到主题词这样的问题。最
后，在中国市场从传统的计划经济到现代市场经济体制转变过程中，主题词问题的短缺成为
一种普遍现象，导致了人们更多的偏向于短期的经济和个人利益行事。（想象一下，如果放
弃解决主题词问题，明天的历史会变成什么样子？对于年轻人，应该对主题词负责，尽管它
比较难解决，不过这样的行为将带领我们进入全新的世界，那里的人们高尚和优雅，并且摒
弃野蛮，拥抱文明。）
总而言之，鉴于可以让我们不断进步，我们应该重视培养主题词，而且目前的全球一体
化形式，政府、社会、组织、个人都应该最大可能的合作来加强主题词并且把当前的社会制
度改进的更加合理，从而让公民价值观更加健康。（主题词是对美好未来的信念，可以给予
我们足够的力量和耐心让我们与现有不良问题做斗争）
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