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漫画作文第一段
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2024
研课前说明
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研题目要求
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1. describing the drawing/picture and the chart briefly
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简要描述图画
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2. interpret/explain its/the intended/implied meaning, and
解释
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3. give your comments
r h e a第一段写作流程
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年火锅
10
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研
r h e a子
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研年
23
年
24
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研第一段写作流程
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第一步:引出描述(可不写)
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这幅图生动形象地描述了
• xxxx—As is vividly shown in the picture,...
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第二步:描述图画 (有难度)
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某人在做什么;说什么;某物象征什么;
•
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第三步:影响或意义收尾(前面内容如果足够多了,就不写)
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• … highlights the realistic significance of…
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• All this gives enough grounds to...
• The drawing sets us thinking too much due to its far-reaching influence.
• The scene presented in the picture is so remindful that...
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两张图片:
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对比、转折
1.
• The first picture illustrates ________,
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however, in the second picture,
______
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第一张照片展示了 ,然
• ________
而,在第二张照片中
_________子
两张图片:
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并列 对比
2. /
• The first picture presents______,
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and in the meanwhile, _______
第一张照片展示了 ,
• ________
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同时,
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两张图片:
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内容补充
3.
• The picture on the left depicts
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______. The chart on the right
shows _______.
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左边这幅图描绘了 ,
• ________
右边的图表展示了
________.一张子照片:
基础模版
1. :
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• The picture illustrates
。
___________
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这张照片展示了
• _______
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演化版:
2.
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• The picture given above subtly
。
illustrates___________第一段重点:描述
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第二步:描述图画 木
•
某人做了什么;说了什么;某物象征了什么;
•
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积累 记忆 练习
+ +练习:
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学习英语过程中总有自己固
句子 木
执难改的语病,只有将语病
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是
对照分析后熟记英文句法规
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不是只看 熟练撰写基本无错误的句子
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文章为止。
《简明英语句法及句子写作》
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不是只背练习一:用词精确灵活
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The picture given above illustrates___________
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哪些词
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什么词?
研练习一:用词精确灵活
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The picture given above illustrates___________
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• picture cartoon
可替换成: 描绘 描述
• illustrate portray depict
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可添加副词 (选哪个?)
• :
副词的要求
精细地、细致入微的;
subtly
是精确,
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真实地; 生动地; 而不是浮夸
truly vividly
讽刺地; 幽默地;
ironically humorously
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明确地; 简单地;
explicitly briefly
富有哲理地;
philosophically
确实地 残酷地
facually /cruelly练习一:用词精确灵活
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The picture given above illustrates___________
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最终版:
The cartoon given above
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ironically portrays______
研练习一:用词精确灵活
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The picture given above illustrates___________
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哪些词可替换?
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可添加什么词?
研练习一:用词精确灵活
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The picture given above illustrates___________
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可保留
• Picture
可替换成: 展示
• illustrate demonstrate
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可添加副词 (选哪个?)
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精细地、细致入微的;
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真实地; 生动地;
truly vividly
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讽刺地; 幽默地;
ironically humorously
象征意义地 真实地
symbolically ; factually
明确地; 简单地;
explicitly briefly
富有哲理地; 醒目地
philosophically strikingly练习一:用词精确灵活
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The picture given above illustrates___________
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The picture given above
philosophically demonstrates
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______练习一:用词精确灵活
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练写:
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The picture given above
副词 动词
____ __ __ ____
研练习一:用词精确灵活
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练写:
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The picture given above
factually/realistically/vividly/
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graphically/strikingly/cheerfully
displays ____作文素材:
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• Though often viewed as a problem for..., ...is a national concern because of its
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impact on...
• This suggests that ...perceived...as...
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• ...have been shown to engage in multiple forms of reciprocal help and cooperation.
• ...should evolve to focus less on memorizing facts and more on creativity and
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complex communication.
• ...will improve society in ways big and small over the next few years.
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• By most measures, ...has become a lot tighter and more rigorous since...
看模板,改造模板
•
记素材,替换内容
•可替换和添加的名词 动词 副词 形容词:
+ + +
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• drawing/ cartoon/ caricature/ diagram/ picture/ painting/ portrait/ portrayal
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• describe/depict/illustrate/present/portray/demonstrate/display/reveal
清晰地;
• conspicuously/clearly /explicitly 易
巧妙地;精细地 真实地 生动地 象征性地
• subtly /truly / vividly / symbolically
木讽刺地 确实地 残酷地
• ironically/sarcastically /satirically /facually /cruelly
简单地 富有哲理地 幽默地;
• briefly /philosophically /humorously
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• thought-provoking
发⼈深省的
/enlightening
有启迪作⽤的;使⼈感悟的
• compelling/striking/intriguing
引⼈注⽬的
/
引起兴趣的
富有启发性的 很有助益的 印象深刻的
• illuminating ; /impressive
现实意义的 提醒的
• realistic /remindful练习二:人物动作连词成句
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英语句子重结构
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主谓宾
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研子
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研练习二:人物动作连词成句
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人物: 木
• man/young man/people/students/ girl/daughter/mother/
father/son/friends
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动作:范文划一遍动词
•
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研练习二:人物动作连词成句
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找主语?
什么动作?
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(主要动作 次要动作)
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研练习二:人物动作连词成句
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主语:
•
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two people/two young men/two youngsters
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One…, the other
谓语:
•
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主要动作
• : stand/smile/pick up
次要动作 叹气
• : sigh /cover
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次要动作
• : see练习二:人物动作连词成句
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• On木e youngster sees a bottle.
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• One youngster tries to pick up the bottle.
• One youngster smiles.
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• The other stands still.
• The other covers his face.
• The other sighs.练习二:人物动作连词成句
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• On木e youngster sees a bottle.
• One youngster sees a fallen bottle with
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• One youngster tries to pick up the bottle.
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• One youngster smiles.
• One youngster smiles for the remaining
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• The other stands still.
• The other covers his face.
• The other sighs for the loss.练习三:句型复杂
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• One youngster stands still.
• One youngster sees a fallen b易ottle with spilled water.
• One youngster sighs for the loss.
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• The other tries to pick up the bottle.
• The other smiles for the remaining water.
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把这些句子用 组织起来?练习三:句型复杂
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• One youngster stands still.
• One youngster sees a fallen bottle with spilled water.
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• One youngster sighs for the loss.
• The other tries to pick u木p the bottle.
• The other smiles for the remaining water.
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• One youngster sees a fallen bottle with spilled water, but he stands still
and sighs for the loss; while the other tries to pick up the bottle and
smiles for the remaining water.练习三:句型复杂
子
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• One youngster stands still.
• One youngster sees a fallen b易ottle with spilled water.
• One youngster sighs for the loss.
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• The other tries to pick up the bottle.
• The other smiles for the remaining water.
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把这些句子用 组织起来?练习三:句型复杂
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• One youngster stands still.
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• One youngster sees a fallen bottle with spilled water.
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• One youngster sighs for the loss.
• The other tries to pick up the bottle.
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• The other smiles for the remaining water.
研练习三:句型复杂
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• One youngster sees a fallen bottle with spilled water, but he stands
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still and sighs for the loss; while the other tries to pick up the bottle
and smiles for the remaining water.
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从语法结构和语义重点来讲,句木子的核心信息往往通过主句的谓语动词来传达。
因此常见的做法是:主要动作作谓语,次要动作变分词。
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• One youngster sees a fallen bottle with spilled water, but he stands
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still and sighs for the loss; while the other tries to pick up the bottle
and smiles for the remaining water.
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• Seeing a fallen bottle with spilled water, one youngster stands still
and sighs for the loss; while the other tries to pick up the bottle,
smiling for the remai研ning water.练习三:句型复杂
子
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• Seeing a fallen bottle with spilled
water, one youngster stands still,
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sighing for the loss; however, the
other tries to pick up the bottle,
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smiling for the remaining water.
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Seeing a fallen bottle with spilled water, one youngster stands
still and sighs for the loss; while the other tries to pick up the
bottle, smiling for the remaining water.摘自《经济学人》
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America's Justice Department sued Google for violating antitrust laws,
accusing what it described as “the gatekeeper of the internet” of
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choking off competition for search engines by striking deals with Apple,
mobile-phone carriers and other companies.
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找出这句话的动词和分词
研摘自《经济学人》
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America's Justice Department sued Google for violating antitrust laws,
accusing what it described as “the gatekeeper of the internet” of
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choking off competition for search engines by striking deals with Apple,
mobile-phone carriers and other companies.
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研摘自《经济学人》
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With so many people spending so much time at home, cereal consumption
has boomed.
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什么句型?主语都有谁?
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研摘自《经济学人》
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With so many people spending so much time at home, cereal consumption
has boomed.
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什么句型?主语都有谁?独立主格
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研类似练习: 年
24
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找主语
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找动作
•
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研类似练习: 年
24
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易 • With two children running
behind, a young couple
were wallking lesiurely hand
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in hand.
研类似练习: 年 年
22 +23
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找主语
•
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找动作
•
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研类似练习: 年 年
22 +23
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• two students/girls
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• two old men/a
grandpa/a grandma
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• stand
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• talk to each other
• see/watch
• cheer; applaud; clap练习二:人物动作连词成句
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找主语?
什么动作?
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研练习二:人物动作连词成句
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主语:
•
two people/two men
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(精准)
two disabled men
谓语:
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主要动作
• : move/run/go
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• : bind together/hold
次要动作
• : leave sth behind/sth left behind练习二:人物动作连词成句
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• Two disabled men run together.
• Their crippled legs are bound
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together.
• Their crutches/walking sticks are
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left behind.
研练习三:句型复杂
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Two disabled men run together.
Their crippled legs are bound
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together.
Their crutches/walking sticks are
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left behind.
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研练习三:句型复杂
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• With their crutches left behind and
crippled legs bound together, two
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disabled men run together.
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研示错:
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研练习三:句型复杂
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主语?
•
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动作?
•
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怎么连接 ?
•
研练习三:句型复杂
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• A girl is working attentively at the table.
易• Many books are piled up high beside her.
• The girl tries to finish the work as soon as
possible so as to feel relieved and assured.
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• A boy is lying leisurely and comfortably on a sofa.
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• A book is open wide on the desk.
• The boy doesn't want to start his work until the
last minute.练习三:句型复杂
子
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Trying to finish the work as soon as possible
so as to feel relieved and assured, a girl is
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working attentively at the table, with many
books piled up high beside her.
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研练习三:句型复杂
子
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Having no desire to start his work until the
last minute, a boy is lying leisurely and
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comfortably on a sofa, with only one book
open wide on the desk.
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研连句成段
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Trying to finish the work as soon as
possible so as to feel relieved and
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assured, a girl is working attentively
at the table, with many books piled
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up high beside her. By contrast, a
boy is lying lesiurely and comfortably
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on a sofa, having/with no desire to
start his work until the last minute.总结:
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一、精确灵活使用 替换名词 动词木形容词和副词(打破模板印象)
/ + +
二、认真看图,发现动作(动词是描述点)
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三、写句子(简单句 分词 伴随状语 独立主格句)
→ / →
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建议:
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回去按照《 届作文复习每日计划》,积累素材资料,查漏补缺。
1. 25
翻译作文范文(英译中),然后回译(中译英),对照范文。
2.子
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漫画作文第二段
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2024
研题目要求
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• describing the drawing/picture briefly
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简要描述图画
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• interpret/explain its/the intended/implied meaning, and
解释隐含的含义
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• give your comments
给出评论
r h e a主体部分第二段:
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你要写什么??
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研年
17
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研年
19
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研年
23
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研第二段
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木易原理 木
记住四字:
•
(写在试卷旁边)
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木(目的)易(意义)原(原因)理(例子)
•
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在构思作文第二段的时候,不要天马行空,胡思乱想
• 研
按照“木易原理”四个关键词,选择合适的,擅长的角度。
•第二段写作流程:
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研第一种写法:“原” 说明原因
—
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“原” 说明原因(导致某情景的原因)
— 木
首句参考写法
1. :
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• X 数字,建议 ~ 个 reasons, as far as I am concerned, ...are responsible for
( 2 3 )
this situation/this phenomenon/this contrast/this attitude/this behavior.
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我认为,有 个原因要为这一 负责。
• x …
我认为,出现这种 的原因有 个。
• …研x
※习惯用什么?你的词库里又
补充了什么表达?第一种写法:“原” 说明原因
—
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• x
(数字,建议 ~ 个) reasons, as far as I am concerned, ...are responsible for
2 3
the situation/this phenomenon/this contrast/this attitude/this behavior.
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可添加什么词?让句子更精确生动?
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研第一种写法:“原” 说明原因
—
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• x
(数字,建议 ~ 个) reasons, as far as I am concerned, ...are responsible for
2 3
the situation/this phenomenon/this contrast/this attitude/this behavior.
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形容词:
可添加什么词?让句子更精确生动?
• 木
微妙的
subtle
熟悉常见的
familiar/common
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显著的 突出的
striking ,
繁荣的,兴盛的
flourishing
不需要的
undesirable
戏剧性的
dramatic
令人伤心的
heartbreaking第一种写法:“原” 说明原因
—
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• Three reasons, as far as I am concerned, are accounting for
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this heartbreaking situation/
this striking phenomenon/
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this extreme contrast/
this terrible attitu研de/
this undesirable behavior.
简单版:
• There are three reasons accounting for/responsible for this.第一种写法:“原” 说明原因
—
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其他写法:
2.
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比如反问句?
• Why...? /What accounts for...?
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比如
• We can cite several possible reasons for
被动
Several possible reasons can be cited for ( )
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this heartbreaking situation/
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this striking phenomenon/
this extreme contrast/
this terrible attitude/
this undesirable behavior.第一种写法:“原” 说明原因
—
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原因描述的整体框架:
•
结构
• 1.
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三个原因:
• First and foremost, Secondly, Finally.
两个原因:
• an important factor is that…; in addition/additionally, …
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For one thing…, and for another...
还有其他的, 自己积累,别记混。
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思维问题:原因可以有哪些?
• 2.
给你任意图,能不能快速确定原因描述该写什么??
•练习:“原” 说明原因
—
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研练习:
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研第一种写法:“原” 说明原因
—
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内因: 外因:
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经济金钱至上
子女只顾自己的家庭
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人们变得自私自利,逃避责任
缺少对父母的关爱 爱和尊重
/
缺少对这种情况的惩罚措施
没有孝心 责任心研
/第一种写法:“原” 说明原因
—
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• Children only care about themselves or their own families.
• People has grown more money-oriented and self-interested.
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• The related authorities lack punishment measures of this case.
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研第一种写法:“原” 说明原因
—
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• Children only care about themselves or their own families.
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• People has grown more money-oriented and self-interested.
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• The related authorities lack punishment measures of this case
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怎么用进去??
• In our rapidly changing economy, ...
• With the advances in both globalization and the information technology
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revolution,
阅读真题中
• While…, we must face up to the fact that…
的
• There’s no doubt that… 作文素材
• With so much focus on ..., it's easy for sb to forget about...第一种写法:“原” 说明原因
—
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The booming economy/boosting economic development in China
sadly witnesses a deterioration of the public awareness of filial duty.
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有生词吗?
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哪些词和搭配可借鉴?
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哪个角度?第一种写法:说明原因
子
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可以写原因的漫画作文 (历年真题去试练,如
• 13,15,18,21,22,23,24 )
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不是上完这节课句子都能写好,而是知道自己的问题在哪儿
• 木
该怎么去做一些记忆和练习去解决这个问题~
•
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练习!
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研年
11
子
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为什么会有乱扔垃圾的事情发生??
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原因?
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研年
11
子
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为什么会有乱扔垃圾的事情发生?
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首先,很多游客缺乏社会道德,而且
有乱扔垃圾的习惯,环保意识对他们
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而言是相当模糊的概念。
其次,景区的垃圾处理设施不足,让
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公众很不方便。年 分作文第二段核心部分 原因:
11 19 —
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主系表
设问 并列句
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研后置
定语
被动练习:
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如果政府可以发挥它的作用(扮木演一个角色),它应该真正参与
•
提供 (更多的垃圾桶、垃圾处理设备)。
______________
易
木
研练习:
子
木
• If there is a role for government, it should really be getting involved in
providing common goods.
易
• ...encourage the provision of...
• Future governments need to do more to provide the conditions
木
for......to thrive.
研
阅读真题中的原句,
可用的作文素材练习:
子
木
• If there is a role for government, it should really be getting involved in
providing common goods.
易
如果政府可以发挥它的作用(扮演一个角色),它应该真正参与
•
木
提供 (更多的垃圾桶、垃圾处理设备)。
______________
替换成
facilities for garbage disposal
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—
子
木
第二段首句参考写法:
1.
• The implication of the cartoon can be well exemplified by the following example.
易
• One famous celebrity's name directly showed up in my mind.
• I can't help thinking of.../could not but think of.../...have called to mind...
木
第二段什么情况下可以使用举例呢?
2.
研
在考前准备好的例子恰好可以用上!
•
套公式:某某取得 的原因是因为拥有 (漫画主题)。
• xxx xxx
、 、 、 、 , , 都可以用
• 12 13 18 19 20 21 22第二种写法:“理” 举例
—
子
木
对人物进行修饰:
1.
名字 插易入语 定语从句
A typical example is + +
阅读真题实例 木
•
• Anthony Tommasini, a sober-sided classical-music critic.
• Anthony Tommasin研i ,一个严肃的古典音乐评价家。
• A typical example is Lang Lang, a prominent Chinese classical pianist, who has
become an inspiration to tens of millions around the world.第二种写法:“理” 举例
—
子
木
套公式:某某取得 的原因是因为拥有 (漫画主题)
2. xxx xxx
某人做了某事正是因为
xxx
易
• …owes his success to xxx. 木
主题词
• It’s that leads his company to stand out in the… internet competition.
研
• …’s success/story/case convinces us of the truth that we can never grow up
主题词 反证法
without ( )
A typical/telling example is Prof. Youyou Tu, laureate of the 2015 Nobel Prize for Medicine, who is
recognized for her research into an entirely new treatment of a disease.第二种写法:“理” 举例
—
子
引用(改写)箴言谚语: 木
3.
易
年
• Something is learned every time a book is opened. (17 )
• The wealth of mind is the only true wealth.
木
换成
• Time tries all things. --- money
换成 年
• Use legs and have legs. --- brain (18 )
研
换成 年
• Virtue never grows old. --- knowledge (05, 14 )
换成
• Sow nothing, reap nothing. --- try
换成 年
• Experience is the best teacher.--- interest (21 )
换成
• Life is a horse, and either you ride it or it rides you. --- habit第二种写法:“理” 举例
—
子
名人名言 木
换成
• The roots of education are bitter, but the fruit is sweet.— habit
易
• In the middle of difficulty lies opportunity. (Einstein)
• Difficulties increase the nearer we get to the goal. (Goethe)
木
• Success is not final. Failure is not fatal. It is the courage to continue that counts. (Churchill)
• Coming together is a beginning. Working together is success. (Ford)
研
• A healthy body is a guest - chamber for the soul; a sick body is a prison. (Bacon)
• Exercise is king. Nutrition is queen. Put them together and you've got a kingdom.
• Culture is the widening of the mind and of the spirit.
• A people without the knowledge of their past historyand culture is like a tree without roots.第三种写法:“木” 说明目的
—
子
作为漫画,总是具有讽刺或者说木明某一现象的功能
•
易
参考写法 :
•
你可以说图的目的是什么:
• the purpose of this picture is to remind us that…
木
你可以说作者的目的是什么:
• the author’s intention is to awake…to...
研
可用于 , , , , , , , , ,
• 11 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22第四种写法:“易” 揭示意义
—
子
参考写法: 木
•
The picture simply indicates that…
易
The cartoon clearly reveals...
The deeper meaning im木plied/conveyed by the drawing is that...
The picture is to arouse deep concern over the issue of ...
研
这一图片 漫画旨在清楚揭示~
/第三种 第四种:
+
“木易” 说明目的 揭示意义
— 子+
目的和意义 木
•
易
某种程度上是重合的。
•
木
重合的具体释例:
•
研
旨在 意义
这幅图 说明 的 。
• xxx第三种 第四种:
+
“木易” 说明目的 揭示意义
— +
子
木
三个问题:
易
写些什么?
目的和意义
当你第二段采用 描述的时候,内容可以
1.
木
思维
锻炼
2.
研
看图想主题的目的和意义,不加修饰成分,试着写主干。
3.年
08
子
木
易
目的和意义
?
木
研“木易”:说明目的 揭示意义
+
子
参考写法: 木
易
阐述重要性
1.
在什么情况下需要它
2. 木
而 是错误的
3. xxx
研“木易”:说明目的 揭示意义
+
子
木
易
木
研“木易”:说明目的 揭示意义
+
子
具体写法 木
:
易
理应 /不应该逃脱
4. xxx xxx
却没有 /背道而驰
5. xxx 木
研第三种 第四种:说明目的 揭示意义
+ +
子
木
理应 :
• xxx
易
• Morally and legally, .....are supposed to offer adequate care and protection to
their parents.
木
• Normally and usually, ..... are supposed to be role models for their children.
却没有 :
• xxx
研
• But some are blamed for their failure to assume the duty.第二段写作流程:
子
木
易
木
研年
08
子
木
易
重需错?
木
研“木易”:说明目的 揭示意义
+
子
具体写法: 木
重要性
1.
易
• The purpose of this picture is to glorify the spirit of mutual help, which is at the top
of the list of virtues in Chinese tradition/ a series of human virtues.
木
需要性
2.
研
• What we need most in a tight corner is the cooperation with each other.
错误性
3.
• It is wrong to turn a blind eye to others in difficulties.练:
07+19+21
子
木
易
木
研
重需错
?年
07
子
木
重要性:自信是成功的第一秘诀。
•
易
需要性:越是艰难时刻,我们越
•
木
需要信心
研
错误性:夸大困难,失去自信是
•
不可取的。“木易”:说明目的 揭示意义
+
子
重要性
1.
木
• Self-trust is the first secret of success/ holds the key to
易
Confidence is the way to success / is the utmost factor to
Self-confidence is vital for success
木
需要性
2.
研
• The more difficult the situation, the more we need self-confidence
错误性
3.
• It is wrong/not advisable/not wise to exaggerate difficulties and lose confidence快速思维训练: 年 年 目的和意义
16 +17 ?
子
木
易
木
研快速思维训练: 年 年 目的和意义
12 +13 ?
子
木
易
木
研年 年 意义(重要性)
18 +22 —
子
试着写写?
木
易
今天的毕业生必须拥有更多的技能,
而不仅仅是能够完成所有的日常工作。
木
研年 年 意义(重要性)
18 +22 —
子
试着写写?
木
今天的毕业生必须拥有更多的技能,
易
而不仅仅是能够完成所有的日常工作。
木
Today’s...must have many more skills than
研
simply being able to ...年 年 意义(重要性)
18 +22 —
子
试着写写?
木
易今天的毕业生必须拥有更多的技能,
而不仅仅是能够完成所有的日常工作。
木
Today’s graduates must have many more skills than
研
simply being able to do all the day-to-day work.年 年 意义(重要性)
18 +22 —
子
试着写写?
木
在我们快速变化的经济中,
易
我们比以往任何时候都更需要那些
能够采取主动,发挥创造力和想象力,
木
对突发事件做出反应的职场人士。
研年 年 意义(重要性)
18 +22 —
子
试着写写?
木
在我们快速变化的经济中,
易
我们比以往任何时候都更需要那些
能够采取主动,发挥创造力和想象力,
木
对突发事件做出反应的职场人士。
研子
木
• In our rapidly changing economy, we more than ever need people in the
workplace who can take initiative and exercise their (creativity and)
imagination to respond to unexpected events.
易
——英语二
14
年
木
其他可用素材:
研
• ...prepare sb for independence, new responsibilities and environmental
changes.
• ...can lessen the blow when it comes to adjusting to...and being thrown
into a brand new environment.词汇 作文素材
+
子
• Today’s...must have many more skills than simply being able to ...
木
今天的 必须要有很多技能,不仅仅是能够
• …… …
• ...must have a good sense of financial markets and maybe even how the company should trade in them.
易
必须对金融市场有很好的了解,甚至可能要熟知公司应该如何在这些市场中从事交易
• ...
• They also need better public relations skills than their predecessors, as the costs of even a minor slipup can be significant.
木
相比前任们,他们还需要更好的公共关系技能,因为即使是一个小的失误也可能代价巨大。
•
• slipup: a careless mistake不幸;错误
• Then there’s the fact that
还有一研个事实是
• To lead in that system requires knowledge that is fairly mind-boggling.
要在这个体系中发挥领导作用,需要具备超乎想象的知识。
• mind-boggling: difficult to imagine and very big, strange, or complicated
(因复杂,巨大)难以置信的
• a problem of mind-boggling complexity词汇 作文素材
+
子
• Beyond this, ...still have to do all the day-to-day w木ork they have always done.
除此之外, 仍然要做所有他们一直做的日常工作。
• ……
• The common idea that...doesn’t explain h易istory very well
人们普遍认为 并不能很好地解释历史
• ……
:欺骗或剥削 指以不公平或过高的价格出售商品或服务,或以欺诈手段获取金钱或财物。
• rip off —
木
• By most measures, ...has become a lot tighter and more rigorous since...
从大多数方面来看(以多数标准衡量)自 以来, 已经变得越来越严苛。
• ... ...
研
• Yet it is principally during this period of stronger governance that CEO pay has been high and rising.
然而,主要就是在这段治理更强有力的时期,首席执行官的薪酬一直很高,而且还在不断上升。
•
• That suggests it is in the broader corporate interest to recruit top candidates for increasingly tough jobs.
这表明,招聘最优秀的候选人来担任难度越来越大的工作,符合企业更广泛的利益。
•年 意义 原因
23 — +
子
木
这个现象特别值得关注,因为
这些活动给我们带来了快乐的
易
氛围,激发了我们对传统文化
的热情,并帮助我们更好地了
木 解中国的历史。
研年 意义 原因
23 — +
子
木
This phenomenon is particularly
易
worth concerning for the reason
that these activities bring us happy
木
atmosphere, inspire our passion for
traditional culture , and help us
研
know China's history better.总结:
子
木易原理 木
一、第二段思考的角度:
二、原因是首选,目的意义次之,例子酌情
易
三、丰富句型和词汇 状语,状从,定从,同位语,强调句,后置定语,被动
——
木
建议:
研
专门练写第二段,看图头脑风暴,用木易原理想出至少三个可写角度,汉语成文。
1.
大量浏览作文素材(如阅读真题总结的),尝试添加或套用句子结构,表达观点。
2.
练写:翻译作文范文第二段(英译中),然后回译(中译英),对照范文。
3.练习三:句型复杂
子
木
Trying to finish the work as soon as possible
so as to feel relieved and assured, a girl is
易
working attentively at the table, with many
books piled up high beside her.
木
研练习三:句型复杂
子
木
Having no desire to start his work until the
last minute, a boy is lying leisurely and
易
comfortably on a sofa, with only one book
open wide on the desk.
木
研连句成段
子
木
Trying to finish the work as soon as
possible so as to feel relieved and
易
assured, a girl is working attentively
at the table, with many books piled
木
up high beside her. By contrast, a
boy is lying lesiurely and comfortably
研
on a sofa, having/with no desire to
start his work until the last minute.