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【24 考研】图画作文模板及范文
一、第一段模板:
1. 开篇引言:
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The picture/cartoon appears to offer a/an (informative/inspiring/vivid) glimpse into....
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这幅图片/漫画(内容翔实/富有启迪性/生动形象),似乎可以让我们窥见到……
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或:The picture/cartoon brings the issue/problem of…to the surface.
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这幅图片/漫画让……问题浮出水面。
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或:What’s presented in the picture is not an alien phenomenon.
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图中现象并不陌生。
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注:第一句比较万能,几乎适用所有主题;第二句较适合讽刺画;第三句是权宜
之计,其优势是无需填写主题词F,但这同为劣势,有预先背诵的嫌疑。
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As can be seen, sb does sth + 介词 + n, ving + 定语从句
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或:As can be seen, there is sb ving + 介词 + n + 定语从句
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解析:“As can be seen”相当于“如图”,然后用“sb does sth”描述主体事件,
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再用“介词+n”进行延展,然后加上一个伴随状态的从句,在从句的基础上还可
以再添一个定语从句(我们可以用5w法来引导思路,即what, which, when, who,
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where)。其中,“ving”和“介词 + n”的位置可以对调。
注1:这些句子成分不需要逐一用全。另外,提供的两种写法可选其一,也可互
补。
注2:动词的词形可随主语变化,时态随情境变化。通常情况下,图片描述的时
态可以是一般现在时或现在进行时,不过 14 年的作文题(《相携》)就需要用
到过去时。
注3:如果是对比性的图片内容,只需要用By contrast(相比之下)另起一句即可,且“右图”可以用“on the right-hand side of the picture”来表达。
二、中间段模板:
1. 确立主题:
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Tapping into (such a phenomenon/behavior/theme/trend/the essence of...), there is
every reason / a good reason to (seek.../believe...).
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鉴于(这一现象/行为/主题/趋势/……的本质:这里可利用主题词构词法填空),
我们有充分的理由/有理由(寻求/相信……)。
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注:Tap into点击详解(文中第一个语言点),这里近似“挖掘”之意,表示“进
入到……当中”,例如Tapping Into Our Past, Tapping Into Our Future(回顾过去,
展望未来)。另外,Tapping into也可替换成Exp 的 loring into。
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2. 提出问题: n
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Yet in the modern days / reality / practices, ...is/are poised to...
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可是在现代社会/现实/实践中,……往往会……
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注:Poised to 详解(文中第三个语言点), 一般只要中文意思是“倾向于”的情
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况,通常都可以用be poised to 的表达。另外,如果后接名词,我们也可以用be
poised for + n 的表达。如果感觉这个词组较难应用,也可以用tend to 代替。
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3. 分析号原因:
At the heart of...is a lost sense/sight of... / a revealing lack of… / an inability
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to (see the values/meaning of...)
……问题的症结在于忽视了……/缺乏……/不能(看到……的价值/意义)
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4. 回归主题:
However, … is the very condition to render the possibility of…, while a lost sight of...
/ too much pursuit of / too much indulgence in … will subject us to its slavery / could
threaten (to)… / may reduce one’s capacity to...
然而,只有……才有可能……,而忽视 / 过分追求 / 沉迷于……会使我们沦为
其奴隶 / 可能会损害到……/会降低……的能力注:如果第3句中使用了a lost sense/sight of...的表达,这里要避免重复使用,另
外如果用“a lost sense/sight of...”来搭配“will subject us to its slavery”,需要把
“its slavery”改成“the slavery of...”
5. 升华主题: 食
In a larger sense, ...
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进一步来讲,……
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注:如果有现成的切题素材(群文件可下载分主题素材),可以在 In a larger sense
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后面直接应用素材,并去掉“分析原因”部分,不然字数会超,而且增加构思负
担。
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三、结尾段模板
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1. 总结词:By and large / Considering all of this / To put it all together / To wrap it all
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up / Given these points / In a nutshell / To sum up
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2. 行动句:the path to... should be approached by a shift in mindset: translating our
focus on… into that on…
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通往……的道路应当通过观念的转变来实现:将我们的关注重点从……转变
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为……
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注:Translate into点击详解(文中第二个语言点)
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3. 收尾句:
And it will secure the highest opportunities for... / Such a move may hold a particular
promise of… / Then...is no longer a remote possibility.
这样就能最大限度地确保…… / 这种做法能够实现…… / ……的实现不再遥远
23 年真题范文食
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The picture appears to offer a glimpse into the revival of traditional Chinese culture.
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As can be seen, people flock to a bridge to watch dragon boat races. Among the locals,
there is an old couple, hand in hand, one saying to the other with satisfaction: “Great!
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The dragon boat racing is gaining more popularity in our village!”
这幅图片似乎可以让我们窥见到中国传统文化的复兴。如图,人们蜂拥到一座桥
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上观看龙舟比赛。这些当地人中,有一对手挽着手的老夫妇,其中一人满意地对
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老伴说:“真好啊!咱们村的龙舟赛越来越热闹了!”
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Tapping into China’s time-honored leigacy, there is every reason to take pride in our
folk traditions and cultural heritage. Yet in reality, the younger generation are poised
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for a single-minded pursuit of fashion and fads when the country is experiencing
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modernization and urbanization. At the heart of such a phenomenon is an inability to
see the country’s cultural depth and dynamism. However, a willingness to honor
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traditions is the very condition to render the possibility of cultural confidence, while a
lost sight of cultural roots could threaten our national psychology and identity.
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中国悠久历史,我们完全有理由为其民间传统和文化遗产感到自豪。然而在现实
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当中,年轻一代在国家现代化和城市化的进程中,倾向于一味地追求时尚和潮流。
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这种现象的症结在于,这些年轻人看不到我们国家的文化深度和活力。然而,尊
重传统是获得文化自信的必要条件,而对文化根源的忽视可能会削弱我们的民族
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心和认同感。
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注:填空部分尽己所能,不必追求高端,考场上没有时间精雕细琢,写一些简单
句也是可以匹配模板的~
例:Tapping into China’s rich history, there is every reason to be proud of our
traditional culture. Yet in reality, people are poised to celebrate western festivals,
instead of our traditional ones. At the heart of such a phenomenon is an inability to
see the value of our cultural treasures. However, embracing traditions is the very
condition to render the possibility of cultural confidence, while a lost sight of these
traditional things could threaten the development of our future.To wrap it all up, the path to a culturally enriched future should be approached by a
shift in mindset: translating our focus on “modernity only” into an appreciation of our
cultural treasures. And it will secure the highest opportunities for cultural prosperity.
总而言之,通往文化丰饶的未来之路,需要一种观念的转变:抛开对现代事物的
一味追求,去欣赏我们文化瑰宝。这样就能最大限度地确保文化的繁荣。
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14 年真题范文:
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The picture appears to offer a glimpse into the mutual support of family members. As
can be seen, there w站as a young mother holding the tiny hand of her lovely daughter
thirty years ago. By contrast, on the right-hand side of the picture, the little girl has
grown up, holding her aged mother into her arm.
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这幅图片让我/们看到了家人之间的相互扶持。如图,三十年前,一位年轻的母亲
握着她号宝贝女儿的小手。而在右图中,她的小女儿已经长大成人,将年迈的母亲
拥入臂弯。
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Tapping into the essence of family love, there is every reason to be each other’s
leaning rock in a loving home. Yet in reality, children are poised to enjoy the
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unconditional parental love, but neglect to take care of their parents as growing into
an adult. At the heart of such a phenomenon is a revealing lack of filial consciousness
when they are mired in a world full of distractions. However, family warmth is the
very condition to render the possibility of emotional well-being, while a lost sight of
family bonds and affection may reduce our capacity to love as a person.
通过探索亲情的本质,我们充分认识到,在一个充满爱的家庭中,家人之间应当
互为依靠。而在现实当中,孩子们乐于享受无条件的父母之爱,却在长大成人后
忽视了对父母的照顾。这种现象的症结是其孝道意识的缺失,因为他们深陷在一
个充满纷扰的世界中。然而,家庭的温暖是在情感上获得幸福的必要条件,而无
视家人和亲情可能会削弱我们人之爱人的能力。To sum up, the path to a mutually supportive family should be approached by a shift
in mindset: translating our focus on meaningless desires into that on companion and
support towards our loved ones. And such a move may hold a particular promise of
navigating us into a life with larger meaning.
总之,通往家人相互扶持的道路,需要一种观念的转变:抛开无意义的欲望,去
陪伴和支持我们所爱的人。这种做法能够让我们驶入更有意义的生活。
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