第 23 讲 道歉信
目录
01 考情透视·目标导航········································································································································1
02 知识导图·思维引航········································································································································2
03 考点突破·考法探究········································································································································2
一 道歉信写作技巧··············································································································································2
知识点1 命题规律········································································································································2
知识点2 写作技巧········································································································································2
二 道歉信经典必背··············································································································································3
知识点1 好词好句积累·······························································································································3
知识点2 满分模板必背·······························································································································5
04真题练习·命题洞现
1.真题实战···················································································································································5
2.命题演练···················································································································································6
近年高考真题道歉信考点细目表
年份 卷区 话题 命题形式
2021 北京卷 因故不能赴约,写信表达歉意。 道歉信
2016 全国卷 因故不能赴约,请给他写封邮件表达歉意 道歉信一 写作技巧
知识点1 命题规律
道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事,给别人带来了麻烦和损失,发觉后给对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。
知识点2 写作技巧
第一段:开门见山,表明写信目的,表达歉意。
第二段:说明道歉的具体原因,并提出补救措施。
第三段:再次道歉,请求原谅,并希望得到原谅。语言诚挚,理由真实充分。
二 道歉信经典必背
知识点1 好词好句积累
【必背词语】1.apologize to sb. for sth./make an apology to sb. for sth. 因某事向某人道歉
2.accept my apology 接受我的道歉
3.have no intention to do sth. 并非故意做某事
4.cause you inconvenience 给你带来不便
5.cause you much trouble 给你带来许多麻烦
6.be more careful 更加小心
7.make such a stupid mistake 犯这样愚蠢的错误
8.be responsible for/be to blame 承担责任
9. fix another time for 安排另外一个时间
10.consider/understand my situation 考虑/理解我的情况
11.feel extremely sorry about...对…… 感到极其抱歉
12. owe sb an apology 欠某人一个道歉/应向某人道歉
13. inconvenience n. 不便
【必背开头段】
1. I'm writing to make an apology to you for not being able to see you off at the airport as planned.
我写信为没能按计划去机场送你向你道歉
2. I would like to take this opportunity to offer an apology to you for failing to keep you company to the museum as
scheduled. 我想为我没能按计划陪你去博物馆向你道歉。
3. I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to attend your birthday party next saturday evening.我写这封信是要
表达我最深的歉意,因为不能参加你下星期六的生日聚会
4. I would like to express my deepest apology for not being able to pick you up at the airport.
我写这封信是要表达我最深的歉意,因为没能到机场接你
5.I am very sorry that I can not go on a trip to BeiJing with you next weekend,which I have promised you.我很抱歉下周我不能
和你一起去北京旅游了,这是我答应你的
6. It is a pity I'll miss such as a valuable opportunity to share my thoughts with you about Steve Jobs,who has changed the way
we live.
很遗憾我将错过和你分享有关Steve Jobs的宝贵的机会,他改变了我们的生活方式
【必背主题段】
1. To my regret, I was unable to meet you at the airport because something unexpected came up.
令人遗憾的是,我无法在机场接你,因为发生了一些意外的事情。
2. The reason for my mistake was...我犯错的原因是……
3. So important is the activity that I couldn't miss it.
这个活动是如此重要,所以我不能错过它。
4. Hardly had I left my home, when it began to rain, leading to my catching a cold.
我刚离开家,天就开始下雨了,导致我感冒了。
5. What is the pity is that I couldn't attend your lecture in this case.
令人遗憾的是我因此无法参加你的讲座了。
6. My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to the hospital last night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now. I'mafraid that I'll have to take care of her these days.
我妈妈昨天突然病倒了,被带去了医院,并且我的爸爸现在在北京出差,恐怕我这几天都要去照顾她
7. I'm afraid that I'll have to cancel our meeting, as something unexpected has come up.
对不起我不得不取消会议,因为临时发生了点意外情况
8. The reason for my absence was that I had to take my father to the hospital.
我缺席的原因是我不得不送我父亲去医院
9. I know my mistake has caused a lot of inconvenience for you.So to make up for my fault, could you please extend my deadline
to next Friday?
非常抱歉我的错误给您带来诸多不便,为了弥补这一过错,可以把截止日期延长到下周五吗?
10. I wonder if we could put off the meeting until next Monday if that's OK with you.
我们可以把这个会议推迟到下周一再开吗?
11. I’m really sorry, but I have no choice but to ...
非常抱歉,但是我除了.....毫无选择。
12. You know I have no intention to break our appointment, so shall we make it next Sunday if you’re available?
您知道我并非有意爽约,如果您有空的话,我们下周日再约如何?
13. To make up for it, I am wondering whether it is convenient for you to ...
为了弥补这一点,我想知道你是否方便.........
【必背结尾段】
1. I do apologize again for any inconvenience the changes might bring to you.
再次为这些变动可能给您带来的不便表示抱歉
2. Please allow me to say sorry again. I do hope you will understand and excuse me for cancelling our appointment temporarily.
请允许我再次说声抱歉,希望您能理解并原谅我临时取消了约定
3. I'm truly sorry for my absence,and I hope you will accept my apology.
我真诚的为我的缺席道歉,希望您能接受我的道歉
4. Anyhow, I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for... Will you be available this Sunday morning?
无论如何,我真心希望我们可以再找一个时间……这个星期天早上你有空吗?
5. Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence/this unexpected change and all the best wishes to you.
再次为我的缺席/意外的变化给您带来的任何不便表示歉意,并向你致以最美好的祝愿。
6. I’m in the sincere hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology.
我真诚地希望你能理解我的处境并且接受我的道歉。
7. Once again, I sincerely apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by this unexpected change.
对于这一意外变化给您带来的不便,我再次表示诚挚的歉意。
知识点2 满分模板必背
Dear (道歉对象),
I would like to express my deepest apology for ___________________________(道歉的事由)
The reason why I will fail to do so/can't make it is that___________________________(说明原因).Would you mind if I
suggest___________________________(弥补措施)?
Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused(再次道歉).Hope you can accept my sincere apology.Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
一、 真题实战
1.(2021·北京·高考真题)假设你是李华。你和英国好友Jack原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他
写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达歉意并说明原因;
2. 提出建议并给出理由。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 作文开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总字数。
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2.(2016·全国·高考真题)假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容
包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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二、 命题演练
1.(24-25高三上·河北邢台·开学考试)假定你是校英语社社长李华,原定于下周举行的英语戏剧比赛因故推迟,请给
担任评委的外教Mr. Johnson写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;2. 推迟原因及后续调整。
注意:1. 写作词数应在80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2.(24-25高三上·湖南长沙·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你班同学决定本周日下午为外教 Daniel举办生日聚会,你因故
无法参加,请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 说明原因;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应的位置作答。
Dear Daniel,
We’ re throwing a party for your birthday this Sunday afternoon.
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Yours,
Li Hua
3.(24-25高三上·黑龙江·开学考试)假定你是李华,你不小心遗失了交换生好友Judy借给你的英文小说。请你给她写
封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意;
2.解释原因;
3.补救措施。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Judy,
I hope this email finds you well.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4.(2024高三·全国·专题练习)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能
赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5.(23-24高二下·山东淄博·期末)假定你是李华,你把交换生Jerry的书弄丢了,请你给他写一封电子邮件表示歉意,
内容包括:
1.说明具体情况;
2.提出解决方案。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Jerry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6.(2024·全国·模拟)假定你是校英语戏剧社社长李华,原定于下周举行的英语戏剧表演赛因故推迟,请你给担任评委
的外教Katherine写邮件,内容包括:1. 表达歉意;
2. 说明理由;
3. 后续调整。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Katherine,
I’m Li Hua, leader of the English drama club.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7.(2024高三·江苏苏州·模拟)假如你是李华,你约好昨天去公交车站接你的英国朋友Dylan,然后一起去公园。但你
却迟到了,他有些生气,没有等到你就离开了。请用英语给他写一封道歉信,内容如下:
1.认错,道歉,解释原因;
2.许诺以后一定守时;
3.请求原谅。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Dylan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8.(24-25高二上·湖北·阶段练习)假定你是李华,在英国就读。前几天同学 Jim在背后议论你,愤怒之下你在网上发
帖指责他。后来你认识到自己的错误,写信向他致歉并承认错误,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.反思。
注意:
1. 写作词数 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
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Sincerely,
Li Hua
9.(23-24高二下·辽宁锦州·期末)假定你是李华,你答应上周给新西兰朋友Mike邮寄一套英文版的《西游记》,但是
由于某种原因耽误了。请你给Mike写封邮件表达歉意,内容包括:
1.表达歉意;
2.耽误的原因;
3.弥补措施。
注意:
1.词数 80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:《西游记》The Journey to the West
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li hua
10.(23-24高二下·广东惠州·期末)假定你是李华,外教Mike邀请你担任英语俱乐部下周五举办的“Drama Night”的
主持人。现你因故无法出席,请写信说明情况。内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因。
注意:
1.开头和结尾已经给出;
2.词数80左右;
3.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
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Yours Sincerely,