第10 讲 道歉信
目录
01
考情解码·命题预警2
02 体系构建·思维可视.........................................................................................................................3
03 核心突破·靶向攻坚.........................................................................................................................3
考点一 写作技巧.............................................................................................................................4
知识点1 命题规律......................................................................................................................................4
知识点2 写作技能提升...............................................................................................................................4
考点二 经典必背.............................................................................................................................4
知识点1 常用词汇......................................................................................................................................4
知识点2 必背开头段..................................................................................................................................5
知识点3 必背主题句..................................................................................................................................6
知识点4 必背结尾句..................................................................................................................................6
知识点5 满分模版必背...............................................................................................................................7
考点三 体悟真题与新考向.............................................................................................................7
知识点1 真题演练......................................................................................................................................7
知识点2 命题新考向................................................................................................................................14
考点要求
考察形式
2025 年
2024 年
2023 年
道歉信
选择题
非选择题
无
无
（2023 年前的道歉信）
2021 年北京卷：原定与英国好友
Jack 本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴
约。
2016 年全国卷：与留学生朋友Bob
约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。
2024 北京卷：给英国朋友Chris 写一
封信，因脚受伤不能一同旅游。
考情分析
一、往年真题特点
1.话题真实具体：常围绕日常生活中的常见冲突或失误设置情境，如失约（未能按时赴约看电影、参
加活动）、损坏他人物品、等，确保考生能够结合自身经历，有真情实感地进行表达 。
2.任务指令明确：题目通常会给定写信人和收信人的身份（如学生与老师、朋友之间），以及道歉的
具体事由，要求考生在信中清晰说明道歉原因、表达歉意，并提出弥补措施或请求原谅。
二、命题思路
通过模拟现实生活中需要致歉的场景，考查学生运用英语进行情感沟通和问题解决的能力。重点检验
考生是否能用恰当的语言表达愧疚之情，合理阐述事件经过，并以得体的方式修复关系，体现英语在人际
交往中的实际应用价值。
三、命题重点
1.语言真诚与准确性：需使用表达歉意的核心句式（如 I'm truly sorry for...、Please accept my
sincere apologies for...），配合恰当的情感词汇（regret、ashamed 等）传递诚恳态度；同时保证语法和词
汇使用准确，避免因语言错误削弱道歉的诚意。
2.内容完整与逻辑性：正文需涵盖道歉事由（如 “因突发疾病未能参加聚会”）、详细解释原因、表
达歉意、提出弥补办法（如 “ 重新安排聚会时间” ）等关键要点；运用连接词（如
Firstly...Secondly...Finally）使内容层次分明，清晰呈现道歉的逻辑链条。
复习目标与备考策略
一、复习目标
1.提升语言能力：积累多样化的词汇和句式，能够根据不同话题灵活运用，实现准确、丰富的语言表
达。
2.强化逻辑思维：学会构建清晰的文章结构，合理组织内容，增强文章逻辑性与连贯性。
3.提高任务完成能力：保证在考试中精准把握题目要点，完整、高效地完成写作任务。
二、备考策略
1.真题模拟演练：分析近五年真题，总结命题规律与高频考点；按照考试时间要求进行限时训练，提
升写作速度与应变能力；对照范文和评分标准，找出自身不足，针对性改进。
2.多样化场景模拟训练：设定不同身份和情境（如因工作失误向客户道歉、因误会向同学道歉）进行
写作练习，提升在复杂场景下灵活运用语言、调整语气的能力，增强考场应变能力。
考点
写作技
一
巧
知识点1 命题规律
道歉信通常是在因自己的爽约、过失或疏忽给他人带来麻烦、不便、损失或造成伤害并在自己发觉或他人指出的情
况下，为了向对方表示歉意而写的信件。
这类信件往往具有明确的写作目的，即修复受损的关系，表达真诚的歉意，并可能提出弥补措施或解决方案。在命
题时，会注重考察考生对于道歉情境的理解，以及能否恰当地运用英语表达歉意、解释原因，并展现出积极解决问题的
态度。同时，命题也会关注考生是否能根据具体情境，灵活运用语言技巧，如选择合适的语气、使用恰当的礼貌用语
等，以使道歉信更加真诚、得体。
知识点2 写作技能提升
一般来说，此类题目的题干对需要道歉的某事都说得比较清楚，但是其他部分则表述得非常笼统，所以考生在写作
时要特别注意扩充题干增加具体内容，以达到题目所规定的字数要求。
第一段：开门见山，表明写信目的，表达歉意。
第二段：说明道歉的具体原因，并提出补救措施。
第三段：再次道歉，请求原谅，并希望得到原谅。语言诚挚，理由真实充分。
考点
必背
二
经典
知识点1 常用词汇
1.keep promise 信守诺言
2.be absent/present from 缺席/出席
3.apologize to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉
4.show an apology to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉
5.make an apology to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉
6.say sorry to sb. 对某人说抱歉
7.beg your forgiveness for 恳求你的原谅
8.cause inconvenience 造成不便
9.miss/cancel the appointment 错过/取消约会
10.make up for.… 弥补
11.express my regret 表达我的道歉
12.be considerate of 体谅
13.accept my apology 接受我的道歉
14.conflict with... 与
冲突
……
15.have no choice/option but to do sth.除了做某事别无选择
16.make a choice 选择
知识点2 必背开头段
1.I'm writing to make an apology to you for not being able to see you off at the airport as planned.
我写信为没能按计划去机场送你向你道歉
2.I would like to take this opportunity to offer an apology to you for failing to keep you company to the museum as scheduled.
我想为我没能按计划陪你去博物馆向你道歉。
3.I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to attend your birthday party next saturday evening. 我写这封信是要
表达我最深的歉意，因为不能参加你下星期六的生日聚会
4.I would like to express my deepest apology for not being able to pick you up at the airport.
我写这封信是要表达我最深的歉意，因为没能到机场接你
5.I am very sorry that I can not go on a trip to BeiJing with you next weekend，which I have promised you.我很抱歉下周我不能
和你一起去北京旅游了，这是我答应你的
6. It is a pity I'll miss such as a valuable opportunity to share my thoughts with you about Steve Jobs，who has changed the way
we live.
很遗憾我将错过和你分享有关Steve Jobs 的宝贵的机会，他改变了我们的生活方式
知识点3 必背主题句
1. To my regret, I was unable to meet you at the airport because something unexpected came up.
令人遗憾的是，我无法在机场接你，因为发生了一些意外的事情。
2. The reason for my mistake was...我犯错的原因是……
3. So important is the activity that I couldn't miss it.
这个活动是如此重要，所以我不能错过它。
4. Hardly had I left my home, when it began to rain, leading to my catching a cold.
我刚离开家，天就开始下雨了，导致我感冒了。
5. What is the pity is that I couldn't attend your lecture in this case.
令人遗憾的是我因此无法参加你的讲座了。
6. My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to the hospital last night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now. I'm
afraid that I'll have to take care of her these days.
我妈妈昨天突然病倒了,被带去了医院,并且我的爸爸现在在北京出差,恐怕我这几天都要去照顾她
7. I'm afraid that I'll have to cancel our meeting, as something unexpected has come up.
对不起我不得不取消会议,因为临时发生了点意外情况
8. The reason for my absence was that I had to take my father to the hospital.
我缺席的原因是我不得不送我父亲去医院
9. I know my mistake has caused a lot of inconvenience for you.So to make up for my fault, could you please extend my deadline
to next Friday?
非常抱歉我的错误给您带来诸多不便，为了弥补这一过错，可以把截止日期延长到下周五吗？
10. I wonder if we could put off the meeting until next Monday if that's OK with you.
我们可以把这个会议推迟到下周一再开吗？
11. I’m really sorry, but I have no choice but to ...
非常抱歉，但是我除了.....毫无选择。
12. You know I have no intention to break our appointment, so shall we make it next Sunday if you’re available?
您知道我并非有意爽约，如果您有空的话，我们下周日再约如何?
13. To make up for it, I am wondering whether it is convenient for you to ...
为了弥补这一点，我想知道你是否方便.........
知识点4 必背结尾句
1. I do apologize again for any inconvenience the changes might bring to you.
再次为这些变动可能给您带来的不便表示抱歉
2. Please allow me to say sorry again. I do hope you will understand and excuse me for cancelling our appointment temporarily.
请允许我再次说声抱歉，希望您能理解并原谅我临时取消了约定
3. I'm truly sorry for my absence,and I hope you will accept my apology.
我真诚的为我的缺席道歉，希望您能接受我的道歉
4. Anyhow, I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for... Will you be available this Sunday morning?
无论如何，我真心希望我们可以再找一个时间
这个星期天早上你有空吗？
……
5. Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence/this unexpected change and all the best wishes to you.
再次为我的缺席/意外的变化给您带来的任何不便表示歉意，并向你致以最美好的祝愿。
6. I’m in the sincere hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology.
我真诚地希望你能理解我的处境并且接受我的道歉。
7. Once again, I sincerely apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by this unexpected change.
对于这一意外变化给您带来的不便，我再次表示诚挚的歉意。
知识点5 满分模板必背
Dear （道歉对象）,
I would like to express my deepest apology for ___________________________（道歉的事由）
The reason why I will fail to do so/can't make it is that___________________________（说明原因）.Would you mind if I
suggest___________________________（弥补措施）？
Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused（再次道歉）.Hope you can accept my sincere apology.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
考点
体
真题
新考向
三
悟
与
知识点1 真题演练
1．（2021·北京·高考真题）
假设你是李华。你和英国好友Jack 原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容
包括：
1. 表达歉意并说明原因；
2. 提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1. 词数100 左右；
2. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。
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【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I’m terribly sorry that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been informed that I have to attend an important class
meeting this Saturday afternoon and I’ll have to give a lecture at the meeting. I hope the change will not cause you too much
trouble.
Shall we go out next Sunday afternoon? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to have a face-to-face talk. If it’s
convenient for you, let’s meet at 2: 30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available
any time after school next week.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jack 写一封信，对不能如约一起外出表示歉意，并说明原因。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
非常地：terribly→extremely
出发：set out→set off
会面：meet→get together
不变：trouble→inconvenience
2.句式拓展
原句：I’ve just been informed that I have to attend an important class meeting this Saturday afternoon and I’ll have to give a
lecture at the meeting.
同义句：I’ve just been informed that I have to attend an important class meeting this Saturday afternoon, when I’ll have to give a
lecture at the meeting.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to have a face-to-face talk.（运用了so that 引导的目
的状语从句）
【高分句型2】If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 2: 30 outside the school gate.（运用了if 引导的条件状语从句）
2．（2016·全国·高考真题）
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob 约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.另约时间。
注意：
1.词数100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I can't go to the bookshop with you on Sunday morning as we planned last week. I am writing to
apologize for breaking my promise.
Here is the reason why I can’t go to the bookstore with you. Since the final exam is just around the corner, I decide to stay at
home to go over my lessons. You know, I didn’t do well in the last exam. So I want to devote all my spare time to working on my
lessons in order to get good scores in the final exam.
I am wondering if we can go to the bookstore on the second Sunday in January. Sorry again for the inconvenience caused to
you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的书信体裁，是李华因无法按约定与Bob 在周日上午去书店而写的道歉信，需涵盖
道歉缘由、解释原因、提出新的解决方案等内容，体现真诚的歉意。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
道歉：apologize→say sorry
即将来临：just around the corner→approaching
复习：go over→review
致力于：devote...to→focus...on
2. 句式拓展
原句：Here is the reason why I can’t go to the bookstore with you.
拓展句：The following is the reason that accounts for why I am unable to go to the bookstore with you.
原句：I am wondering if we can go to the bookstore on the second Sunday in January.
拓展句：I was thinking whether it would be possible for us to visit the bookstore on the second Sunday of January.
【点睛】
[高分句型一] Here is the reason why I can’t go to the bookstore with you.（why 引导定语从句，修饰先行词reason，直接点
明下文是解释不能赴约的原因，使文章逻辑清晰，过渡自然）
[高分句型二] Since the final exam is just around the corner, I decide to stay at home to go over my lessons.（since 引导原因状
语从句，明确阐述不能去书店的原因是期末考试临近，因果关系表达直接且合理 ）
[高分句型三] I am wondering if we can go to the bookstore on the second Sunday in January.（用 “I am wondering if...” 的委
婉句式提出新的时间建议，语气柔和，既体现了对对方的尊重，又表达了自己希望重新约定的意愿 ）
3. （2014·北京卷）
你给英国朋友Chris 写一封信，内容包括：
1.你们原计划7 月份一同去云南旅游；
2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；
3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8 月份。
注意：
1.词数不少于50；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
How’s it going? I can hardly contain my enthusiasm for our trip to Yunnan in July.I was really looking forward to exploring
the beautiful scenery and experiencing the local culture with you.
However, I have some bad news. Recently, I accidentally injured my foot while playing basketball. The doctor told me that I
need to rest for at least a month to fully recover. As a result, I’m afraid I won’t be able to make our planned trip in July. I feel
terribly sorry for letting you down.
I was wondering if it would be possible to postpone our trip to August. By then, I should have recovered completely, and we
can enjoy our journey without any worries. I promise I’ll make it up to you.
Once again, I’m really sorry for the inconvenience. I hope you can understand my situation. Let me know what you think.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的书信体裁，是李华写给英国朋友Chris 的道歉信，围绕无法按原计划7 月同去云
南旅游的事件，包含计划说明、无法成行原因、歉意表达及新提议等内容，体现真诚沟通的意图。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
兴奋：enthusiasm→excitement
探索：exploring→discovering
受伤：injured→hurt
推迟：postpone→put off
2. 句式拓展
原句：I can hardly contain my enthusiasm for our trip to Yunnan in July.
拓展句：My excitement for our upcoming trip to Yunnan in July is overwhelming, and I simply can't hold it back.
原句：As a result, I’m afraid I won’t be able to make our planned trip in July.
拓展句：Consequently, I'm filled with regret to say that I won't be able to join you on the trip to Yunnan as we initially planned in
July.
【点睛】
[高分句型一]
I can hardly contain my enthusiasm for our trip to Yunnan in July.（“hardly” 加强语气，突出对旅行的热切期待，“contain
one's enthusiasm” 短语使用自然，展现语言运用能力 ）
[高分句型二]
The doctor told me that I need to rest for at least a month to fully recover.（that 引导宾语从句，清晰阐述医生的建议，为后文
无法出行提供有力依据，使文章逻辑紧密 ）
[高分句型三]
I was wondering if it would be possible to postpone our trip to August.（“I was wondering if...” 委婉提出建议的经典句式，
语气礼貌且恰当，既表达想法又尊重对方意愿 ）
4. （2014·山东卷）
新
假如你是
华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom 一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期
考
能
点
末
试未
及时回复。请根据双下要
给他回封邮件：
1.未及时回信的原因；
2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）
注意：
1. 词数：120-150；2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, I’ve been
preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back. In your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation.
Now, I am writing to tell you some specific details.
Overall, three things will make my summer vacation meaningful. To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend
to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. In addition, it is a
fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and
make more friends. What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to
enrich my life.
I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, what’s your plan to spend your summer vacation? I am looking
forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的电子邮件体裁，是新华中学学生李华回复美国朋友 Tom 的邮件，需解释未及时
回信的原因，并详细阐述暑假计划，同时体现朋友间交流的亲切与真诚。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
错过：missing→failing to seize
打算：plans→arrangements
兼职：part-time job→side job
开阔视野：broaden my horizons→widen my outlook
2.句式拓展
原句：You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back.
拓展句：As you may understand, I've been fully occupied with the preparations for the final exams recently, which led to my
oversight of writing you back.
原句：Not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons.
拓展句：Not only will I have the opportunity to earn money independently, but I will also be able to expand my knowledge and
understanding of the world.
【点睛】
[高分句型一]
You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days, so I forgot to write back.（使用 “现在完成进行时” 强调一直
以来的备考状态，合理地解释未及时回信原因，使逻辑清晰 ）
[高分句型二]
Not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons.（运用 “not only...but also...” 的倒装结构，强调
做兼职的双重好处，增强句子的表现力和说服力 ）
[高分句型三]
What is more, doing voluntary work, I think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to enrich my life. （“I
think” 作为插入语，使表达更自然；which 引导非限制性定语从句，补充说明做志愿工作对自己生活的积极影响，丰富
句子内容 ）
5. 2010 山东卷
假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom 约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请
根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：
1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.另约时间。
注意： 1.词120~150；2.可适当增加细节。
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Dear Tom,
I am indeed very sorry that I can’t go to Beijing with you next week, which I have promised. I feel sorry about it and want
you to know what happened.
Just now , my cousin ,Li qiang ,who left home to Australia for his further study last year, informed me that he would return
this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family. You know , we haven’t seen each other for
nearly a year.
I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand me . I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date
to show you around Beijing . Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Yours ,
Li hua
用
写作
体
向
【导语】此篇范文属于应
文
中的电子邮件
裁，是李华
英国Tom 解释不能按约下周末去北京旅游的情况，需
新
能
题
包含歉意表达、原因阐述以及重
约定时间，符合邮件的交际功
和
目要求。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
确实：indeed→truly
告知：informed→told
接受：accept→take in
造成：caused→brought about
2.句式拓展
原句：I am indeed very sorry that I can’t go to Beijing with you next week, which I have promised.
拓展句：I truly feel extremely sorry that I won't be able to go on the trip to Beijing with you as scheduled next week, despite
our prior agreement.
原句：Just now , my cousin ,Li qiang ,who left home to Australia for his further study last year, informed me that he would
return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family.
拓展句：Moments ago, my cousin Li Qiang, who went to Australia for further education last year, told me that he will be
coming back this Saturday morning, and he has asked me to go to the airport with our family to pick him up.
【点睛】
[
分句
一
高
型
]
I am indeed very sorry that I can’t go to Beijing with you next week, which I have promised.
“
（that I can’t go to Beijing
with you next week”
为that
句
作
引导的宾语从
，
sorry
“
的宾语，直接表明抱歉的原因；which I have promised”
为
which
引导的非限制性定语从句，补充说明去北京这件事是之前约定好的，使句子内容更丰富）
[高分句型二]
Just now , my cousin ,Li qiang ,who left home to Australia for his further study last year, informed me that he would return
this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family.
“
（who left home to Australia for his further
study last year”
为who
“
引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词
my cousin, Li qiang”
“
，补充说明表哥的情况；that he
would return this Saturday morning”
为that
“
引导的宾语从句，作
informed”
的宾语，清晰传达表哥告知的内容）
[高分句型三]
I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing .
“
（appreciate one's doing sth.” 是常
“
用
体
与
表达，
现礼貌
诚恳；to show you around Beijing” 为动词不定式作目的状语，明确重新约定的目的，使请求更合
理）
知识点2 命题新考向
【与环境保护结合的道歉】
01. （高三模拟题精选）
假如你是李华，你和你的外籍好友Andrew 约好了本周末去图书馆，但是你因为临时要参加学校组织的“垃圾分
类，全民行动”志愿活动而不能赴约。请根据以下要点给他写一份道歉信。内容要点：
1.表达歉意；2.简要介绍活动内容和意义；3.另约时间。
注意：1.词数100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Andrew,
I have signed up for a voluntary activity themed “Trash Sorting, All Involved” and won’t be able to accompany you to the
library this weekend as planned. I feel terribly sorry and want to express my deepest apology.
As you know, we students should spare no efforts in implementing the policy of garbage classification. So, I seized this
opportunity without hesitation. On that day, we will go to communities to publicize the significance as well as methods of trash
sorting and direct the residents to accurately distinguish different kinds of rubbish, which will take a whole day. Considering that,
I’m afraid I can’t keep my word. Shall we put it off till next Sunday?
I am sorry for any inconvenience caused and hope you can accept my heartfelt apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是道歉信。因参加学校组织的志愿者活动，而不能与好朋友Andrew 周末一起去图书馆，要求考生为些给
Andrew 写一封道歉信。
第一步：词汇积累
计划：plan→schedule
表达：express→covey
真诚地：heartfelt→sincere
希望：hope→expect
第二步：句式拓展
原句：I have signed up for a voluntary activity themed “Trash Sorting, All Involved” and won’t be able to accompany you to the
library this weekend as planned.
拓展句：I have signed up for a voluntary activity which is themed “Trash Sorting, All Involved” and won’t be able to accompany
you to the library this weekend as planned.
第三步：高分句式
[高分句型1]
I am sorry for any inconvenience caused and hope you can accept my heartfelt apology.(运用了过去分词作后置定语和省略连
词的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
On that day, we will go to communities to publicize the significance as well as methods of trash sorting and direct the residents to
accurately distinguish different kinds of rubbish, which will take a whole day.(运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
【与公益活动结合的道歉】
02.（高三模拟题精选）
假定你是李华，你和你的朋友Mike 约好了本周六去博物馆，但是由于你临时要参加“美丽市容，从我做
起”(Beautiful city, Start from me)的志愿者活动而不能与其同行。请根据以下要点给他写一封道歉信。
1.表达歉意；
2.简介志愿者活动；
3.另约时间。
注意：1.词数100 左右；2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
Having signed up for a voluntary activity, I’m terribly sorry for not being able to tour the museum with you this Saturday.
Therefore, I’ writing to express my sincere apology for the inconvenience caused all of sudden.
As you know, I’ve been waiting for a chance to devote myself to raising public awareness of environmental protection.
Consequently, when the opportunity to volunteer came, I seized it without hesitation. On that day, all the volunteers will put up
posters about how to lead a low-carbon lifestyle and pick up the trash along the roads, which will take a whole day. Considering
that, I am afraid that I won't keep my word. It is possible for us to fixed another date when you are available.
Words fail to convey how apologetic I feel and I hope that you can accept my heartfelt and genuine
apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Mike 写信，告诉他你因参加“美丽市容，从我做起”志愿者活动
而不能按时和他同去博物馆而表达歉意，并另行约定去博物馆的时间。
第一步：词汇积累
非常：terribly→ awfully
突然：all of a sudden→suddenly
机会：opportunity→ chance
安排：fix→arrange
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Having signed up for a voluntary activity, I’m terribly sorry for not being able to tour the museum with you this Saturday.
拓展句：I’m terribly sorry for not being able to tour the museum with you this Saturday because I have signed up for a voluntary
activity.
第三步：高分句式
【高分句型1】
Having signed up for a voluntary activity, I’m terribly sorry for not being able to tour the museum with you this Saturday.（运用
了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】
Words fail to convey how apologetic I feel and I hope that you can accept my heartfelt and genuine apology. （运用了how 引导
的宾语从句和that 引导的宾语从句）
【与传统文化结合的道歉】
03.（高三精选模拟题）
假定你是李华，你原本与在你们学校做交换生的好友Peter 约定周六上午去观看功夫(kung fu)比赛，但你因为临时有
事不能赴约，请你给他写一封邮件。
内容包括：1.表示道歉；
2.爽约的原因；
3.补救措施。
注意：1.词数120 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t I can’ t accompany you to watch the traditional Chinese kung fu competition to be
held this Saturday. Now I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret.
I hope you will understand me and excuse me for not keeping my word. The reason for my failing to keep the appointment is
that my grandpa caught a serious cold several days ago due to climate change and he is still in hospital now. so I have to take
care of my grandpa these days. I hope the unexpected change will not cause you much trouble.
Please accept my sincere apology. I would appreciate it if you could kindly tell me when you are available so that we will
watch the contest later.
Yours,
Li hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，给彼得写一封道歉信，说明自己无法陪同其观看周六举行
的中国传统功夫比赛的原因，并表达歉意，同时希望能重新约定观看时间。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
非常抱歉：terribly sorry→extremely sorry/awfully sorry
陪同：accompany→escort/go with
违背诺言：not keeping my word→breaking my promise
接受：accept→take in/embrace
2.句式拓展
原句：I am terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t accompany you to watch the traditional Chinese kung fu competition to be held
this Saturday.
拓展句：Since I have an urgent matter to deal with, I am terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t accompany you to watch the
traditional Chinese kung fu competition which will be held this Saturday.
【点睛】
【高分句型 1】
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t accompany you to watch the traditional Chinese kung fu competition to be held this
Saturday.（使用 “to be held” 的不定式被动结构作后置定语修饰比赛，简洁明了地说明比赛的时间和性质，使句子结构
更加紧凑 ）
【高分句型 2】
The reason for my failing to keep the appointment is that my grandpa caught a serious cold several days ago due to climate change
and he is still in hospital now.（运用 “the reason...is that...” 表语从句结构，清晰地阐述不能赴约的原因，“due to” 短语
准确说明爷爷感冒的缘由，增强句子逻辑性 ）
【高分句型 3】
I would appreciate it if you could kindly tell me when you are available so that we will watch the contest later.（“I would
appreciate it if...” 是经典的礼貌请求句型，委婉地表达希望对方告知有空时间的意愿，“so that” 引导目的状语从句，自
然衔接重新约定观看比赛的想法 ）
04.（高三精选模拟题）
假定你是李华，你答应上周给新西兰朋友Mike 邮寄一套英文版的《西游记》，但是由于某种原因耽误了。请你给
Mike 写封邮件表达歉意，内容包括：
1.表达歉意； 2.耽误的原因； 3.弥补措施。
注意：
1.词数 80 左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：《西游记》The Journey to the West
Dear Mike,
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______________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
How is everything going? I had promised to present you a set of The Journey to the West in English last week but I failed to
do it. Now I’m writing to express my deep apology to you.
The Journey to the West that I had intended to present to you was seriously damaged by my little brother and couldn’t be
read. I bought a new set on the Internet for you, but for some reason, it wasn’t delivered to me until yesterday. In order to make up
for my mistake, I will post you a small toy attached to this book.
I hope it won’t bring so much inconvenience to you. I’m sorry again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。李华答应上周给新西兰朋友Mike 邮寄一套英文版的《西游记》，但是由于某种原
因耽误了。要求考生以李华的名义给Mike 写封邮件表达歉意。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
打算：intend → plan
严重地：seriously → badly
购买：buy → purchase
补偿：make up for → compensate
2.句式拓展
原句：In order to make up for my mistake, I will post you a small toy attached to this book.
拓展句：I will post you a small toy attached to this book so that I may make up for my mistake.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The Journey to the West that I had intended to present to you was seriously damaged by my little brother
and couldn’t be read.(运用了关系代词that 引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I hope it won’t bring so much inconvenience to you.(运用了省略连词that 的宾语从句)
05.（高三模拟题精选）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和学校英国交换生Chris 一起报名参加学校下个月举办的“传统文化节”节目
展演，但是你因故不能参加。请你给Chris 写一封邮件。
内容包括：1.表达歉意；
2.不能参加的原因；
3.提出解决办法。
注意：1.词数100 字左右；
2.文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m terribly sorry to inform you that I can’t participate in the show on the Festival of Traditional Culture held by the school
next month.
Unfortunately, I hurt myself accidentally when I was playing basketball last night. As a result, I’m suffering a badly injured
arm, which means it’s impossible for me to practice Taijiquan for at least a month and my show will have to be canceled. To make
up the loss, I strongly recommend Jim replace me. As an enthusiast, he’s an excellent Taiji player. Besides, Jim is very
cooperative and easygoing, who’s the most suitable person I can think of.
I do understand you need me badly but I still hope you could forgive me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文之道歉信写作。要求考生给英国交换生Chris 写封道歉信，就不能参加学校下个月举办的
“传统文化节”节目展演，向他表示道歉并解释的原因。内容包括：表达歉意；不能参加的原因；提出解决办法。首先
要告诉对方“不能参加下个月学校举行的传统文化节的演出”。然后讲原因，这个原因需要仔细斟酌，要恰到好处，不
能自相矛盾。因为“传统文化节的演出”是在下个月举行，所以要找一个“较长时间以后也不能参加演出”的理由(比
如：打篮球/踢足球胳膊受伤，腿受伤等等)。提出解决办法：靠船下篙，立马可以想到推荐他人代替(简要介绍一下这个
“他人”)。最后希望对方予以原谅。
【句式拓展】
原句：As an enthusiast, he’s an excellent Taiji player.Besides, Jim is very cooperative and easygoing, who’s
the most suitable person I can think of.
拓展：As an enthusiast, he’s not only an excellent Taiji player, but also very cooperative and easygoing, who’s the most
suitable person I can think of.
【亮点句型】
1.As a result, I’m suffering a badly injured arm, which means it’s impossible for me to practice Taijiquan for at least a
month and my show will have to be canceled.(运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
2. Knowing that you have been waiting for this moment so long, I strongly recommend Jim replace me.
(运用了现在分词短语作状语，recommend 后省略that 引导的宾语从句用了虚拟语气)
