假定你是李华。你得知“大美漳州”推介活动组委会正在招募英语义务讲解员，为来访的外国友人进行讲
解，请你给相关负责人写一封申请信，内容包括：
1. 介绍相关经验和优势； 2. 希望被录用。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir / Madam,
Sincerely Yours,
Li Hua
一、审题定位
体裁 起草者 阅读者 语体 情景 内容 写作意图 写作期待
申请信 李华 “大美漳州” 正 申请英语义务 1. 介绍自身 成功申请 获得组委
推介活动组委会 式、 讲解员职位， 相关经验和 该职位 会认可，
负责人 礼貌 为外国友人讲 优势；2. 表 收到录用
解漳州 达希望被录 回复
用的意愿
明确文体：申请信（需体现诚恳态度和正式语气）
确定时态：以一般现在时为主，描述过往经验时可用一般过去时
划出关键词：招募英语义务讲解员、介绍经验和优势、希望被录用、外国友人、漳州推介
二、结构搭建
Para 1：礼貌问候 + 自我介绍 + 写信目的（表明得知招募信息，申请该职位）
Para 2：主体内容 —— 介绍自身优势（英语能力、对漳州的了解、沟通经验等），体现与职位的匹配度
Para 3：表达希望被录用的愿望 + 承诺（若被录用会认真负责）+ 期待回复
三、常用开头与结尾
开头（正式场合）：
1. I am writing to apply for the position of...... in the...... activity, which I learned about recently.
2. Having heard that you are recruiting...... for ......, I am eager to apply for this position.
3. With great enthusiasm, I am writing to express my interest in the..... position for...... activity.
结尾：
1.I would be grateful if you could give me this opportunity. I am looking forward to your positive reply.
2.I believe I can be a qualified....and would appreciate your consideration. Please feel free to contact me if needed.
3.Hoping to contribute my efforts to ...., I sincerely wish to be accepted. Thank you for your time and
consideration.
四、高分技巧
语言得体：使用正式、礼貌的表达，避免口语化词汇（如 “really want” 可改为 “am eager to”）
细节具体化：避免笼统描述优势，例如：
错误：My English is good.
正确：I have a good command of English, having won the first prize in the school English speech contest and
communicated fluently with foreign teachers.
突出匹配度：结合 “推介漳州” 和 “为外国友人讲解” 的需求，强调对漳州文化、景点的了解（如
“I am familiar with Zhangzhou's history, scenic spots like Tulou and local customs”）
五、常见错误避雷
格式错误：称呼后用逗号（Dear Sir / Madam,），结尾署名 “Sincerely Yours,” 后另起一行写 “Li Hua”
信息缺失：未具体说明自身经验（如只说 “有经验”，未提及相关经历）
语气不当：避免过于随意（如 “Let me join you”）或过于自负（如 “I'm sure I'm the best”）
内容偏离：围绕 “英语讲解” 和 “漳州推介” 展开，不提及无关优势
六、本文可替换语句
可替换开头：
1. Having noticed the recruitment for English volunteer guides in the "Beautiful Zhangzhou" promotion activity, I
am writing to wholeheartedly apply for this rewarding position.
2. I am extremely excited to write this application letter upon learning that your organization is seeking English
volunteer guides for the "Beautiful Zhangzhou" event from ...[具体信息来源，如 school notice/online platform
等].
3. This letter is in response to your advertisement for English volunteer guides in the "Beautiful Zhangzhou"
promotion. As an enthusiastic and qualified applicant, I am eager to submit my application. 可替换经验与优势：
1. I have been actively involved in various English-speaking competitions at school, winning several awards,
which has significantly enhanced my English proficiency and public-speaking skills.
2. I have completed an English - immersion summer camp, during which I had extensive conversations with native
English speakers, greatly improving my language practical ability.
3. In terms of knowledge about Zhangzhou, I have done in-depth research on its historical evolution and
cultural heritage as part of my school project.
4. Also, I have volunteered in local tourism service before, helping domestic tourists navigate around
Zhangzhou, which gives me an edge in dealing with various situations during guiding.
5. I have been a member of the school's culture club, where I have organized multiple cultural events
related to Zhangzhou, such as traditional music performances and local handicraft exhibitions. This
experience has equipped me with strong communication and organizational skills.
可替换结尾：
1. I sincerely hope that you will take my application into consideration. If granted this opportunity, I will spare
no effort to promote Zhangzhou and provide the best service to foreign guests. Thank you for your time and I am
looking forward to your favorable reply.
2. I would be extremely grateful if you could consider my application. I am fully committed to making this
promotion activity a great success and presenting the charm of Zhangzhou to the world. Your prompt response
would be highly appreciated.
3. I am confident that I can be a valuable asset to this activity. I earnestly request you to consider my application.
Should I be selected, I will definitely live up to your expectations. Thank you and I am eagerly waiting for your
reply.
七、范文赏析
Dear Sir/Madam,
Learning that you are recruiting English volunteer guides for the "Beautiful Zhangzhou" promotion event, I
am eager to apply for this position.
I have a good command of English, especially in speaking and listening, as I often chat with foreign exchange
students in our school. What's more, I have read a lot about Zhangzhou's culture, including its unique food, ancient
buildings and folk arts, and once wrote an English article about our city's intangible cultural heritage. I am patient
and enthusiastic, which I believe are essential qualities for a guide.
I sincerely hope to be accepted. I would spare no effort to introduce Zhangzhou to foreign visitors and help
them better understand this beautiful city.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the English volunteer guide position for the "Beautiful Zhangzhou" promotion event.
As an active member of the school English Club, I often host foreign visitors, which has polished my fluent
oral English and communication skills. Born and raised in Zhangzhou, I’m well-versed in its history, scenic spots
like the Tulou, and folk customs. Last year, I volunteered to assist foreign tourists during the city’s flower festival,
receiving praise for clear explanations.
I would be honored to contribute to introducing Zhangzhou’s charm. Please confirm my application, and I’ll
spare no effort to do a good job. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
