专题08 应用文写作
考点
五年考情（2021-2025）
命题趋势
考点1 书信体
（5 年8 考）
2026 全国二卷—电子邮件；
2025 全国一卷--告知信；
2025 全国二卷—咨询信；
2025 八省联考卷—推荐信；
2024 新课标I&II 卷—告知信；
2023 新课标I&II 卷—建议信；
2022 新课标I&II 卷—邀请信；
2022 浙江1 月卷—电子邮件；
1.最近五年新课标卷应用文写作以书信类为
主。
2.浙江1 月卷应用文写作倾向于非书信体。
3.应用文写作渗透“德智体美劳”理念，尤
其是体育健身、美育教育、劳动意识。
4.写作字数应为80 个左右，实际需要120 词
左右。
5.重视材料审题能力、核心素养和主题把握
能力以及综合运用高级词汇和复杂句式表达
能力。
考点2 非书信体
（5 年9 考）
2026 全国一卷—短文投稿；
2026 浙江1 月卷—短文投稿；
2025 浙江1 月卷—演讲稿；
2024 全国甲卷—演讲稿；
2024 浙江1 月卷—短文投稿；
2024 九省联考卷—活动通知；
2023 浙江1 月卷—活动报道；
2023 四省联考卷—音乐评论；
2022 全国甲卷—短文投稿；
考点01 书信体（邀请信、建议信、告知信……）
【2026 全国二卷—电子邮件】
假定你是李华，外教Kate 计划将你们班的英语作文汇编成册。请给Kate 写封邮件，内容包括：
(1)建议配图。
(2)自荐承担画图工作。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80 个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Kate,
It’s a great idea to make a collection of our English essays.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Kate,
It’s a great idea to make a collection of our English essays. This compilation will surely be a wonderful
showcase of our English learning achievements. I have a suggestion that might enhance the overall quality of this
collection — adding relevant pictures.
Pictures can play a vital role in making the essays more engaging. For example, if an essay is about a travel
experience, a vivid picture of the described scenery can bring the story to life, helping readers better visualize the
places and emotions.
I’m quite interested in contributing to this project. As I have been learning drawing for years and have a good
command of various drawing techniques, I believe I can create pictures that perfectly match the themes of the
essays.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达是李华给外教Kate 写的邮件。外教Kate 计划将班级英语作文汇编成册，李华在邮
件中提出配图的建议，并自荐承担画图工作。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
帮助：help →assist
至关重要的：vital → crucial
增强：enhance → boost
各种各样的：various→ a variety of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Pictures can play a vital role in making the essays more engaging.
拓展句：Pictures, which are an important visual element, can play a vital role in making the essays more
engaging.
【高分句型1】I have a suggestion that might enhance the overall quality of this collection — adding relevant
pictures.（运用了that 引导定语从句）
【高分句型2】As I have been learning drawing for years and have a good command of various drawing
techniques, I believe I can create pictures that perfectly match the themes of the essays.（运用了As 引导原因状
语从句；省略引导词that 的宾语从句；that 引导的定语从句）
【2025 全国一卷--告知信】
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I
am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny 写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)你的选择；
(2)说明理由。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80 个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. I’m writing to express that my
predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.
The column will serve as a catalyst for closer bonds between students. Redoubling efforts to boost
academic performance, we pay little heed to other classmates’ personalities, hobbies, strengths, and even
aspirations. Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to
others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding. More importantly, more friendships will
be forged, since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength.
This eye-catching column, I’m firmly convinced, won’t fail to grant the whole class a harmonious
atmosphere.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外教Jenny 提出的校英文报增设一个栏目，在“Fun at my
school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项中给出自己的推荐，并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express → convey
利用：capitalize on → use
担当：serve as → act as
注意：pay heed to → take notice of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to
others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding.
拓展句：Such an inviting column, which adopts a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone
to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which
capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.（运用了that 引导的宾语从句，which 引导的
定语从句）
【高分句型2】More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables us to befriend
someone on the same wavelength.（运用了since 引导的状语从句）
【2025 全国二卷—咨询信】
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris 上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris
写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)询问进展；
(2)提醒交稿时间。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80 个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Chris,
Hope this email finds you well! Last month, you kindly agreed to write an article about sports in
Canada, and we’re all looking forward to reading it.
I’m writing to politely inquire about the progress of the article. Would you mind letting me know how
it’s going? Also, could I remind you that the deadline for submission is this Friday, June 14th? Your insights
into Canadian sports will surely enrich our readers’ understanding of global sports culture, which will be of
benefit to us.
Thank you again for your support!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Chris 写一封邮件，询问他上个月答应写一篇介绍
加拿大体育运动的文章的进展，并提醒交稿时间。
【详解】1. 词汇积累：
询问：inquire →ask
理解：understanding →comprehension
此外：also →besides
肯定地：surely →certainly
2.句式拓展：
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to politely inquire about the progress of the article.
拓展句：As you know, I’m writing to politely inquire about the progress of the article.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Would you mind letting me know how it’s going?（运用了how 引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型 2】Your insights into Canadian sports will surely enrich our readers’ understanding of global
sports culture, which will be of benefit to us. （运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句）
【2025 八省联考卷—推荐信】
假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Beth 想学打乒乓球，发邮件向你求教。请给她回封邮件，内容包括：
（1）表示支持；
（2）推荐教练。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80 个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Beth,
Glad to know that you want to learn to play table tennis.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Beth,
Glad to know that you want to learn to play table tennis. It’s a fun and exciting sport! I highly support
your decision, as it will not only improve your skills but also help you make new friends.
I recommend you take lessons from Coach Zhang. He is an experienced coach who has trained many
players at different levels. His classes are engaging and tailored to each student’s needs. You can find him at
the local sports center.
Let me know if you need more information. Enjoy your training!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的留学生朋友Beth 想学打乒乓球，发邮件向你求教
这一情况，给她回封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
强烈地：highly→ strongly
提高，增强：improve → enhance
引人入胜的：engaging→ attractive
有趣的：fun→ interesting
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：His classes are engaging and tailored to each student’s needs.
拓展句：His classes are engaging, which are tailored to each student’s needs.
【点睛】【高分句型1】He is an experienced coach who has trained many players at different levels.(运用
了who 引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I highly support your decision, as it will not only improve your skills but also help you make
new friends.(运用了as 引导的原因状语从句以及not only…but also…的固定句型)
【2024 新课标I&II 卷--告知信】
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris 写一封邮件分享这次经
历，内容包括：
（1）你完成的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80 个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I
decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming
flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my
creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep
sense of peace as I painted.
In a word, It was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris 写一封信, 分享在公园上美术课的经历。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
决定：decide→determine
整个的：entire→whole
提供：offer→provide
总之：in a word→in short
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over
the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
拓展句：Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the
small bridge over the park’s pond, which was surrounded by blooming flowers.
【点睛】[高分句型1]We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. (that 引导的定语
从句)
[高分句型2] I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.(as 引导的时间状语从句)
【2023 新课标I&II 卷—建议信】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan 准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在
问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80 个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken
English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the
groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation,
leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less
motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own
partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English
together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后
练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
2 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their
own partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let
students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving
little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along
with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who 引导定语从句）
【2022 新课标I&II 卷—邀请信】
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline 写邮件邀请她做一次访
谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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__________________________________________________Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since
Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.
Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.
As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday,
I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming.
I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline
写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：establish→set up
了不起的：amazing→fabulous
帮助：aid→assistance
许多：plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了
where 引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal
with it.(运用了状语从句的省略)
【2022 浙江1 月卷—电子邮件】
假定你是李华，在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他 写一
封邮件，内容包括：
1. 回忆活动经历；2. 分享个人收获；3. 希望保持联系。
注意：
1 . 词数80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Chris,
How are you doing these days? It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much. I still
remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago. It was at that festival that
you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food,
culture and history. We really enjoyed ourselves there. What’s far more important is that we became good friends
then. Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year, I am pleased to know you are leading a happy life in
your hometown.
I hope we can keep in touch often.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在文化节上结识的外国朋友写一封信叙旧。
【详解】1.词汇积累
返回：come back to → return to
思念：miss→ yearn
分享：share → exchange
玩得开心：enjoy oneself→ have a good time → have fun
开心的：pleased→ happy →delight→ content
过着快乐的生活：lead a happy life→ live a happy life
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much.
拓展句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland and I miss you so much.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years
ago.（运用了定语从句）
【高分句型2】It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together,
through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history.（运用了强调句型和定语从句）
【高分句型3】What’s far more important is that we became good friends then.（运用了主语从句和表语从句）
考点02 非书信体（发言稿、书面通知、短文投稿……）
【2026 全国一卷—短文投稿】
你校英文报“Opinion”栏目正在征稿，请同学们对未来大学生活中的学习(Study)、社交(Socialize)、睡眠
(Sleep)这三件事按重要性进行排序，并阐述理由。
请你写一篇短文向该栏目投稿。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80 个左右。
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Ranking My College Life Essentials
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【答案】
Ranking My College Life Essentials
When it comes to the key elements of college life, I rank study first, sleep second and socialize third for solid
reasons.
Undoubtedly, study tops the list because college serves as a vital platform where we build up professional
knowledge and polish comprehensive abilities for our future. Meanwhile, enough sleep guarantees our physical
health and keeps us mentally sharp. It lays a solid foundation for efficient study. Although socializing enriches our
campus life and develops our teamwork skills, it is only a complementary part rather than a main task.
Only by balancing the three aspects reasonably can we embrace a fulfilling college life.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达要求考生写一篇短文，对未来大学生活中的学习(Study)、社交(Socialize)、睡眠
(Sleep)这三件事按重要性进行排序并阐述理由，向校英文报“Opinion”栏目投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
至关重要的：vital → essential
积累：build up → accumulate
充足的：enough → sufficient
培养：develop → cultivate
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Meanwhile, enough sleep guarantees our physical health and keeps us mentally sharp. It lays a solid
foundation for efficient study.
拓展句：Meanwhile, enough sleep guarantees our physical health and keeps us mentally sharp, which lays a solid
foundation for efficient study.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Undoubtedly, study tops the list because college serves as a vital platform where we
build up professional knowledge and polish comprehensive abilities for our future. (运用了where 引导的限制性
定语从句)
【高分句型2】Although socializing enriches our campus life and develops our teamwork skills, it is only a
complementary part rather than a main task.(运用了although 引导的让步状语从句)
【2026 浙江1 月卷—短文投稿】
假如你是李华，你发现校图书馆的书籍存在被勾画涂写的现象。请你向英文报投稿，内容包括：
(1)具体说明情况；
(2) 呼吁爱护书籍。
注意：
(1) 写作词数应为80 个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Treasure Library Books: Our Shared Responsibility
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【答案】
Treasure Library Books: Our Shared Responsibility
Recently, I’ve noticed a disturbing phenomenon in our school library. Many books have been scribbled and
defaced. Some pages are filled with random drawings, while others have important passages underlined or crossed
out. Even worse, some books have been torn.
These books are our shared assets, not personal notebooks. They deserve our respect and care. Every mark on
them not only ruins the reading experience for others but also shortens their lifespan. Let’s treasure our library
books, keeping them in good condition. After all, a well-kept library is a reflection of our school’s culture and our
own good character.
【解析】
【导语】这是一篇应用文。考生发现校图书馆的藏书存在被勾画涂改的现象。请你向校园电台投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
财产：asset → possession/property
乱涂乱画：scribble → scrawl
满是：be filled with → be stuffed with
寿命：lifespan → life expectancy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Many books have been scribbled and defaced.
拓展句：There are many books that have been scribbled and defaced.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Let’s treasure our library books, keeping them in good condition.（运用了现在分词作
状语）
【高分句型 2】 Some pages are filled with random drawings, while others have important passages underlined or
crossed out.（运用了while 连接并列句，表对比）
【2024 全国甲卷—演讲稿】
英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China 为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
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【答案】
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous
development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to
different ways of travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green
alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times,
making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores
China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate
China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with
environmental responsibility.
In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据所给图片，以Development of Transport in China 为题写
一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇激活
提供：offer→provide
极大地：dramatically→tremendously
减少：reduce→decrease
总之：in short→in a nutshell
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green
alternative for short trips.
拓展句：Firstly, shared bicycles, which offer an affordable and green alternative for short trips have emerged as a
symbol of urban mobility.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people
access to different ways of travelling.(运用了现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】These developments illustrate China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation
network that balances convenience with environmental responsibility.(运用了that 引导的定语从句)
【2025 浙江1 月卷—演讲稿】
你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一
篇演讲稿，内容包括：
（1）陈述看法；
（2）提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80 个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My views on filming short videos on campus
One possible version:
My views on filming short videos on campus
Good morning, everyone! I’ve recently noticed a growing trend of students filming short videos on
campus with their mobile phones.
While I appreciate the enthusiasm for sharing creative content, we must also consider the potential
drawbacks. Filming can disrupt the learning environment by interrupting classes or study sessions, making
it difficult for others to concentrate. Additionally, not everyone is comfortable being recorded. Capturing
someone without their permission can lead to discomfort or conflict.
To create a more harmonious atmosphere, I’d like to offer several practical tips. First, respect our
shared study time by avoiding filming in quiet areas or during class. Second, always ask permission from
anyone featured in your videos. Lastly, follow the school rules regarding filming on campus.
Thank you for considering my suggestions!
【2024 浙江1 月卷—短文投稿】
请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内
容包括：
1. 介绍这项运动；
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
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【答案】
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activity
into your daily routine? One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine
involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s
a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is
recommended for several reasons.
First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness.
Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it
promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.
So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change
that can make a big difference in your day.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同
学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
厌倦：be tired of→be fed up with
首先：first→above all
减轻：combat→relieve
提高：improve→enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and
taking a few deep breaths.
拓展句：This is a simple routine that involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and
back, and taking a few deep breaths.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-
being. (运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back,
and taking a few deep breaths. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. (运用了that 引导的定语从句)
【2024 九省联考卷—活动通知】
你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动，节约粮食”的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知，内容包括：
(1)介绍活动目的；
(2)说明参赛要求。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80 个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
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【答案】
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, themed “Hand
in Hand, Save the Food”. The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food.
All students are encouraged to participate. Entries should consist of an original piece of writing,
focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction. Please submit your
entries to the English Department mailbox by the deadline of June 1st.
We look forward to your participation and creative submissions.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动，节约粮食”的作文
比赛写一则活动通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：competition→contest
集中：focus on→concentrate on
鼓励：encourage→hearten
主题：theme→topic
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, themed
“Hand in Hand, Save the Food”.
拓展句：Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, whose
theme is “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food. (运用了
动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and
showing how we can contribute to its reduction. (运用了how 引导宾语从句)
【2023 浙江1 月卷—活动报道】
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程；
2. 收获与感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
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【答案】
Getting to Know the Plants Around US
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our
Students’ Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics
and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different
plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and
learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for
animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our
ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我
们身边的植物”活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
参与：participate in → attend
开始：begin → start
观察，调查：observe → survey
震惊：strike → astonish/surprise
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our
Students’ Union.
拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by
our Students’ Union, which benefited me a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the
different characteristics and uses of various plant species.（运用了who 引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world
and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter
for animals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）
【2023 安徽省、云南省、吉林省、黑龙江省四省联考卷—音乐评论】
你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内
容包括：
1. 音乐会特点；
2. 观看感受；
3. 意见建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
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【满分作文】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after
another. Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a
live one. I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain
started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. They performed the song in a way that touched my heart
and gave me a feeling of connection.
I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for us Chinese students and our international friends to
learn about and from each other.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会，在
线上留言板上写一则评论。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确定无疑地：undoubtedly→without doubt
尤其地：particularly→ especially
感动：touch→ move
希望：hope→ expect
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different
from a live one.
拓展句：There is no doubt that their performances are of high quality, which makes the concert almost no
different from a live one.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert
almost no different from a live one.（运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls
from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. （运用了when 引导的时间状语从
句）
【2022 全国甲卷—短文投稿】
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 海洋的重要性；
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意：1. 词数100 左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Our oceans, our responsibility
June 8th was named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day...
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【答案】Our oceans, our responsibility
June 8th was named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. When it comes to ocean, its pollution is
becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean
conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the
balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our
daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call
on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect
ourselves.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建
议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
越来越：more and more→increasingly
重视：place importance on→attach importance to
重要的：key→significant
此外：what’s more→furthermore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
拓展句：World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.(运
用了部分倒装结构)
[高分句型2]When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious.(使用了固定句型)
[高分句型3]First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.(使用了主语从句)
