高频话题 11 语言学习
近五年考情分析
年份 卷区 体裁 话题 命题形式
对外交提出的“Fun at my school”和“Guess who
全国一卷 建议信 提纲类
I am”两个选项做出选择
全国二卷 咨询信 咨询外交介绍加拿大体育运动的文章进展 提纲类
2025年 浙 江 卷 1 发表关于在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象的演
发言稿 提纲类
月 讲稿
北京卷 建议信 给参加联合国倡议征集活动的好友提建议 提纲类
在论坛交流上围绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提
天津卷 推荐信 提纲类
出推荐
新 高 考 I
告知信 分享在公园上了一堂美术课经历 提纲类
和II卷
以Development of Transport in China 为题的发言
全国甲卷 发言稿 图标类
稿
北京卷 建议信 对好友介绍中国的发展成就提出建议 提纲类
2024年
天津卷 发言稿 “低碳校园,从我做起”英语主题的演讲稿 提纲类
浙 江 卷 1
征文投稿 推荐一项适合课间开展的运动 提纲类
月
在“排忧解难”专栏回复校友父母不容许自己做
上海卷 安慰信 提纲类
饭
新高考全
建议信 提出随机分组存在的问题并给建议 提纲类
国卷
全国甲卷 征文投稿 以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿 提纲类
用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得
全国乙卷 征文投稿 提纲类
2023年 的体验和感受
浙 江 卷 1
报道 报道“认识我们身边的植物”活动 提纲类
月
北京卷 建议信 为以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动提供建议 提纲类
天津卷 申请信 申请参加“中国工坊” 活动 提纲类
2022年 新高考全 邀请信 邀请外教做访谈 提纲类国卷
校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”
浙江卷 邀请信 提纲类
邀请外国留学生一同体验
浙江卷 (1
回忆经历 回忆中国-爱尔兰文化节 提纲类
月)
全国甲卷 征文投稿 世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛 提纲类
全国乙卷 征文投稿 英语学习方式图标的调查投稿 提纲类
北京卷 邀请信 邀请好友做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流 提纲类
天津卷 视频文字稿 用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 提纲类
新高考全
征文投稿 庆祝英文报创刊十周年投稿 提纲类
国卷
浙江卷 宣传稿 宣传学生国画作品展 提纲类
浙江卷 (1
发言稿 欢迎新西兰学生访校致辞 提纲类
2021年 月)
全国甲卷 咨询信 咨询国外友人对中国传统文化的看法 提纲类
全国乙卷 发言稿 以 Be smart online learners为题的发言稿 提纲类
北京卷 道歉信 你因故不能赴约周末一起外出 提纲类
天津卷 征文投稿 介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方 提纲类
语料表达
1. 通用词汇和句式
提高: improve → enhance
面临困难: be faced with difficulties → encounter problems
学习过程 取得进步: make progress → make improvements
流利地: fluently → proficiently
沟通: communicate → interact
口语: oral English / spoken English
通用核心词汇 听力: listening ability / listening comprehension
学习方法 阅读: reading → extensive reading (泛读)
写作: writing → keeping journals (写日记)
词汇量: vocabulary → word power
辅导: tutor → coach
教学相关 顾问: adviser → consultant
讲座: give a lecture → deliver a speech课程: lesson → course / class
解释: explanation → interpretation
文化意识: cultural awareness
开阔眼界: broaden one's horizons → widen one's perspective
文化理解 传统文化: traditional culture
风俗习惯: customs and habits
文化差异: cultural differences
I'd like to give you some suggestions on how to improve...
(我想就如何提高……给你一些建议。)
提出学习 The most effective way to learn any language is to...
建议 (学习任何语言最有效的方法是……)
I strongly recommend that you (should)...
(我强烈建议你……)
The lesson will be given from...to... on... in...
(课程将于……[日期]在……[地点]举行,时间是……到……。)
说明学习 In the class, you will mainly learn...
安排 (在课堂上,你将主要学习……)
You'd better make full preparations before class.
(你最好课前做好充分准备。)
万能句式
I'm writing to express my wish to become your language partner.
(我写信是希望能成为你的语言伙伴。)
表达互助 I hope we can be helpful to each other.
意愿 (我希望我们能互相帮助。)
It would be a win-win choice.
(这将是一个双赢的选择。)
I'm writing to recommend... to you.
(我写信向你推荐……)
推荐学习 It is widely used by... because of its...
资源 (它因……[优点]而被……[人群]广泛使用。)
I believe it is a helpful tool, especially for...
(我相信这是一个有用的工具,特别是对……而言。)
2. 实用范文片段
I'm glad to share my suggestions on improving your English. First and foremost, try to
speak a little every day, even if it's just talking to yourself. This is crucial because consistent
提出学习建议
practice builds confidence and fluency. Additionally, reading English books or news articles
regularly can significantly expand your vocabulary.我很高兴能就提高英语水平与你分享我的建议。 首先, 试着每天都说一点英语,哪怕
只是自言自语。这一点至关重要,因为 持续的练习能建立自信和流利度。此外, 定期
阅读英文书籍或新闻文章能显著扩大你的词汇量。
I believe we can form a perfect language partnership. On the one hand, I can help you
practice authentic Chinese conversation and correct your pronunciation. On the other hand, you
could assist me in improving my English writing skills. This win-win arrangement would
语言互助邀请 benefit us both greatly.
我相信我们可以形成一个完美的语言学习伙伴关系。 一方面, 我可以帮助你练习地道
的中文会话并纠正发音。另一方面, 你可以帮助我提高英语写作技能。这种双赢的安排
将使我们都受益匪浅。
Our next Chinese lesson is scheduled for this Saturday afternoon in the school library. We
will focus on practical daily dialogues, such as greetings and ordering food. To make the most
of our session, I suggest you review the vocabulary list I sent you last time.
课程安排
我们的下一节中文课定于本周六下午在学校图书馆进行。 我们将重点学习 实用的日常
对话,比如问候和点餐。为了充分利用我们的课程, 我建议你复习一下我上次发给你的
词汇表。
Many students ask me about effective ways to memorize new words. From my
experience, creating flashcards and using the words in sentences works wonders. More
importantly, don't just memorize them in isolation – try to associate new words with images or
解释学习方法 stories.
许多学生问我记忆新单词的有效方法。 根据我的经验, 制作单词卡并在句子中使用这
些单词效果奇佳。更重要的是, 不要孤立地记忆单词——试着将新词与图像或故事联系
起来。
For improving your listening skills, I highly recommend the "Easy Chinese" podcast. What
makes it stand out is that it offers conversations at different speeds, from slow and clear to
natural pace. Furthermore, each episode comes with a transcript, allowing you to check your
推荐学习资源 understanding.
为了提高听力技能,我强烈推荐《轻松中文》播客。 它的突出之处在于 它提供不同语
速的对话,从缓慢清晰到自然语速。而且, 每期节目都附有文字稿,方便你检查自己的
理解。
必背满分范文
1.(2025·宁夏·月考)假定你是李华,应美国朋友George请求,帮他购买了学习汉语的教科书,但是忘
记及时寄出。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件:
1.表示歉意;
2.解释原因;3.弥补措施。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear George,
I’m terribly sorry to tell you I’ve forgotten to send you the Chinese textbook you asked to buy this Friday as
promised.
As you know, I’ve been super busy preparing for the final exams the whole week. My mind was so
preoccupied with all the mathematical formulas and English grammar items that it totally slipped my mind. Plus,
my grandpa suddenly fell ill last week and I had to attend him after class.
You have my word that I’ll go to the post office first thing tomorrow morning.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,给美国朋友George写一封道歉信,解释未能
及时寄出教科书的原因并提出补救措施。
【解析】1. 词汇积累
非常抱歉:I’m terribly sorry → I sincerely apologize
忙于:been super busy preparing for → been fully occupied with
占据心思:preoccupied with → absorbed in
忘记:slipped my mind → escaped my memory
承诺:You have my word → I assure you
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My mind was preoccupied with all the mathematical formulas and English grammar items. It
totally slipped my mind.
拓展句:My mind was so preoccupied with all the mathematical formulas and English grammar items
that it totally slipped my mind. (使用“so...that...”结果状语从句,清晰地表达了“过于专注”与“忘记”
之间的因果关系,使解释更有力)【点睛之笔】
【高分句型1】
I’m terribly sorry to tell you I’ve forgotten to send you the Chinese textbook you asked to buy this Friday as
promised.
句型剖析:此句开篇点题,道歉明确。“I’m terribly sorry to tell you...” 是道歉信经典开头,语气强
烈。句中包含一个省略了关系代词 that 的宾语从句 (that) I’ve forgotten... 和一个定语从句 you asked to
buy,信息量大且结构紧凑。“as promised” 一词的使用,凸显了己方失约的事实,体现了真诚的反省态
度。
【高分句型2】
My mind was so preoccupied with all the mathematical formulas and English grammar items that it totally slipped
my mind.
句型剖析:此句是解释原因的核心,运用了 “so...that...” (如此……以至于……) 引导的结果状语从句。
该结构生动地描绘了因备考压力巨大而导致疏忽的心理过程,使解释非常具体、真实且令人信服,远比简
单说“I was busy”更有说服力。
【高分句型3】
You have my word that I’ll go to the post office first thing tomorrow morning.
句型剖析:此句提出了强有力的补救措施。“You have my word that...” 是非常地道的表达,意为“我
向你保证……”,比“I promise”更正式、更有分量。“first thing tomorrow morning” (明天一早第一件
事就是) 这个短语清晰地传达了紧迫感和解决问题的决心,能有效打消对方的疑虑。
2.(2025·安徽淮北·阶段考)假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Lisa学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次
上课的计划。内容包括:
(1)时间和地点;
(2)内容:学习唐诗(Tang poetry);
(3)课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Lisa,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Lisa,
How are you?Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and I'm writing to tell
you something about our next lesson.
The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom
502.In the class,you will mainly learn Tang poetry,which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is
deeply loved by Chinese.You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry.You'd better
make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty,which
makes it easy for you to go through the class.
If there is anything that I can help you,please don't hesitate to tell me.Looking forward to
meeting you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友写信,告知朋友下次汉语课的课程计划。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般将来时
结构:总分
要求:
1. 表明写信目的
2.下次汉语课程计划
(1)时间和地点;
(2)内容:学习唐诗(Tang poetry);
(3)课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
Be glad to do sth/ tell sb sth/ make preparation for/ leave a deeply impression on/ be aware of/ learn about/ go
through…
第三步:连词成句
Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and I'm writing to tell you something
about our next lesson.
The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502.
In the class,you will mainly learn Tang poetry,which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply
loved by Chinese.
You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry.
You'd better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang
Dynasty,which makes it easy for you to go through the class.
If there is anything that I can help you,please don't hesitate to tell me.第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列 连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范
文中使用了一些主从复合句,例如:In the class,you will mainly learn Tang poetry,which reflects traditional
Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese.句中which引导非限定性定语从句;If there is anything
that I can help you,please don't hesitate to tell me.句中if引导条件状语从句,that引导定语从句。文章
虽然短小,但长句较多,展示了作者的语言运用能力。
3.(2025·四川·月考)假如你是育新中学的学生李平,你校下个月将举办汉语文化周,打算请你校外教
Lucy来参加活动,并就美国学生的学校生活开一个讲座。请根据以下要点写一封邀请信。
1. 汉语文化周的活动情况。
2. 邀请Lucy来参加活动并做讲座。
3. 表示感谢。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ping
【范文】
Dear Lucy,
I’m writing to tell you that there will be an event named Chinese Culture Week. It will be held on our school’s
playground lasting for a week. With the intention to improve the students' culture consciousness and the passion for
our motherland, our school arranges the event and thinks it will make a great difference. There will be many things
you can do, such as appreciating Chinese landscape paintings, reading Chinese classical works and enjoying
Chinese idioms.
I sincerely invite you to experience the event and give a lecture for us.
I'm certain that you will like the event, and I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Ping【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Lucy写一封邀请信,邀请参加学校的汉语文化周活
动。
【解析】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 汉语文化周的活动情况。
2. 邀请Lucy来参加活动并做讲座。
3. 表示感谢。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
Chinese Culture Week; last for; with the intention to; improve; culture consciousness; passion; make a great
difference; such as; Chinese classical works; sincerely invite; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m writing to tell you that there will be an even named Chinese Culture Week.
2. It will be held on our school’s playground lasting for a week.
3. With the intention to improve the students' culture consciousness and the passion for our motherland, our school
arranges the event and thinks it will make a great difference.
4. There will be many things you can do, such as appreciating Chinese landscape paintings, reading Chinese
classical works and enjoying Chinese idioms.
5. I sincerely invite you to experience the event and give a lecture for us.
6. I'm certain that you will like the event, and I'm looking forward to your coming.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore(供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I’m writing to tell you that there will be an even named Chinese Culture Week. (运用了
that 引导宾语从句)
[高分句型 2] There will be many things you can do, such as appreciating Chinese landscape paintings,
reading Chinese classical works and enjoying Chinese idioms. (运用了动名词作宾语)
4.(2025·海南·阶段考)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Jimmy想利用暑假学习汉语, 想让你给他推荐一
个汉语老师。请你给他写封回信,简单介绍一下你绐他推荐的情况。内容包括:1. 介绍汉语老师的情况;
2. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Jimmy,
I hope you
In response to your request for a Chinese teacher, I have found a candidate for you, who I think is the best
suited for you. First, he is open-minded and eager to communicate with people, especially from different
backgrounds. Besides, his major is Chinese, which guarantees you will get professional help. Plus, he also wants to
learn English. If you want details, please contact him at Young@126. com.
Wish you success in Chinese Learning.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Jimmy写封回信,简单介绍一下你绐他推荐的汉语老师的
情况。
【解析】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分总法
要求:
1. 介绍汉语老师的情况。
2.表示祝愿
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
in response to ;communicate with
第三步:连词成句1. In response to your request for a Chinese teacher, I have found a candidate for you, who I think is the best suited
for you.
2. First, he is open-minded and eager to communicate with people, especially from different backgrounds.
3. Besides, his major is Chinese, which guarantees you will get professional help.
4. Plus, he also wants to learn English. If you want details, please contact him at Young@126. com.
5. Wish you success in Chinese Learning.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First
2.表并列补充关系:Besides, Plus
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
5.(2025·江苏南通·月考)假定你是李华,你校的外籍交换生 Henry 给你发了一封邮件,想让你为他推
荐一种词典,用来学习汉语,请你用英语给他回复。内容包括:
1. 词典名称;
2. 推荐理由;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Henry,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Henry,
Pleased to know your passion for learning Chinese, I’m writing to recommend Xinhua Dictionary to you. As a
native speaker, I believe it is a helpful tool, especially for the beginners.
Firstly, it’s one of the most widely used dictionaries in China, not only for its wide range of vocabulary but
also for its precise explanation of each word. Besides, its reasonable price is undoubtedly an appealing factor.
I hope my suggestion helpful and wish you great progress in learning Chinese.
Yours,
Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外籍交换生Henry写一封邮件,为他推荐一种词典,用来
学习汉语。
【解析】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 介绍词典名称;
2. 说明推荐理由;
3. 表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
recommend sth to sb; one of the most widely used dictionaries in China; its wide range of vocabulary; its precise
explanation of each word; its reasonable price; wish you great progress in learning Chinese
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m writing to recommend Xinhua Dictionary to you.
2. Firstly, it’s one of the most widely used dictionaries in China, not only for its wide range of vocabulary but also
for its precise explanation of each word.
3. Besides, its reasonable price is undoubtedly an appealing factor.
4. I hope my suggestion helpful and wish you great progress in learning Chinese.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:Firstly
2.表并列补充关系:Besides, not only…but (also)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】
[高分句型 1]Pleased to know your passion for learning Chinese, I’m writing to recommend Xinhua
Dictionary to you.(用过去分词pleased作状语)
[高分句型2] Firstly, it’s one of the most widely used dictionaries in China, not only for its wide range
of vocabulary but also for its precise explanation of each word.(用not only…but also…连接两个并列的
原因状语)
6.(2025·南宁·阶段考)假如你是李华,是新华高中的一名学生。近年全球掀起了学汉语的热潮,美国人
Tony也是汉语爱好者,他在网上招募一名汉语学习顾问,请你给Tony写一封应征信,
要点如下:
1.写信目的;
2.性格优点;3.语言优势。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tony,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Tony,
I’ve learned from your post that you are recruiting an adviser to help you learn Chinese so I’m writing to
recommend myself.
I’m Li Hua, a student from Xinhua High School. First of all, as an out-going, friendly and open person, I love
making friends and helping them with their studies. Besides, I can speak both English and Chinese fluently. More
importantly, in my spare time, I love reading books about Western and Chinese culture and customs. I think we are
sure to help each other make progress if you choose me as your adviser.
I believe I’m the right person you’re looking for. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,给 Tony写一封应征信,申请汉语学习顾问
一职,需说明写信目的、性格优点和语言优势。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
招募:recruiting → seeking, looking for
顾问:adviser → consultant, tutor
推荐自己:recommend myself → put myself forward
流利地:fluently → proficiently
取得进步:make progress → make improvements
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I love reading books about Western and Chinese culture and customs. This helps me understand
both cultures better.拓展句: I love reading books about Western and Chinese culture and customs, which helps me
understand both cultures better. (使用“which”引导的非限制性定语从句,将两个简单句合并,使句子更
紧凑,逻辑更紧密)
【点睛之笔】
【高分句型1】
I’ve learned from your post that you are recruiting an adviser to help you learn Chinese so I’m writing to
recommend myself.
句型剖析:此句是应征信的经典开头。“I’ve learned from... that...” 结构清晰交代了信息来源。“so”
自然引出申请意图,直接使用 “recommend myself” (毛遂自荐) 表达了自信的态度,开门见山,规范得
体。
【高分句型2】
First of all, as an out-going, friendly and open person, I love making friends and helping them with their studies.
句型剖析:此句使用 “as...” 介词短语作状语,概括性地介绍自己的性格优点,并用 “love doing...”
结构具体说明了这些性格特点如何转化为实际行动,表明自己乐于助人,非常适合顾问的角色。
【高分句型3】
More importantly, in my spare time, I love reading books about Western and Chinese culture and customs.
句型剖析:此句通过介绍个人爱好,巧妙地展示了超越语言本身的深层优势——文化理解。使用 “More
importantly” 进行递进,强调了对中西文化和习俗的了解,这对于担任汉语学习顾问至关重要,体现了申
请者的独特价值。
【高分句型4】
I think we are sure to help each other make progress if you choose me as your adviser.
句型剖析:此句展现了合作精神和共赢思维。使用 “if” 引导的条件状语从句,在表达自信的同时也体
现了对对方的尊重。“help each other make progress” (互相帮助,共同进步) 的表述非常得体,表明这
不仅仅是一份工作,更是一次文化交流和友谊建立的机会。
7.(2025·浙江·月考)假定你是来自美国的高中生Tom,你的中国朋友李华刚刚开始高中的学习生活,他
在英语学科的学习中遇到了一些困难和挑战,于是给你写信询问如何学好英语。请给他用英语写封回信。
信中需包含以下内容要点:
1. 多用英语交流,提高口语和听力水平;
2. 大量的阅读,增加词汇量和开拓眼界;
3. 写英语日记,学以致用。
注意:1. 词数80左右。
2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Dear Li Hua,
Learning that you are faced with difficulties and challenges in learning English, I'm glad to share my suggestions
with you.
As we all know, communication plays an important role in language learning, so you had better talk with your
classmates or e-pals online in English as much as possible. It is an effective way to improve your oral English and
listening ability. Besides, spending much time reading English newspapers and magazines will be helpful, which
can both enlarge your vocabulary and broaden your horizons. Moreover, I strongly recommend you keep English
journals every day. Only by putting what you have learned into use will your English be improved.
Hopefully, you can find my advice useful. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Tom
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以美国高中生 Tom的身份,给中国朋友李华写一封回信,就
如何学好英语提供建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
1. 词汇积累
面临:are faced with → encounter
建议:suggestions → advice, recommendations
有效的:effective → efficient
扩大:enlarge → expand
开阔眼界:broaden your horizons → widen your perspective
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Spending much time reading English newspapers and magazines will be helpful. It can both
enlarge your vocabulary and broaden your horizons.
拓展句:Spending much time reading English newspapers and magazines will be helpful, which can both
enlarge your vocabulary and broaden your horizons. (使用“which”引导的非限制性定语从句,将两个简
单句合并,使句子更紧凑,逻辑关系更明确)
【点睛之笔】
【高分句型1】
Learning that you are faced with difficulties and challenges in learning English, I'm glad to share my suggestions
with you.
句型剖析:此句开篇使用现在分词短语 “Learning that...” 作原因状语,自然地表达了获悉对方困难并愿
意提供帮助的友好态度,比直接说“I know you have problems”更显地道和体贴。【高分句型2】
Besides, spending much time reading English newspapers and magazines will be helpful, which can both enlarge
your vocabulary and broaden your horizons.
句型剖析:此句使用动名词短语 “spending much time...” 作主语,体现了句式多样性。句末的
“which”引导的非限制性定语从句 具体阐述了阅读带来的双重好处(扩大词汇量和开阔眼界),使建议
的价值更加凸显。
【高分句型3】
Moreover, I strongly recommend you keep English journals every day.
句型剖析:此句使用 “I strongly recommend (that) you (should) do...” 的句型提出建议,语气坚定而诚
恳,其中省略了“that”,且从句中使用动词原形“keep”是英式英语中虚拟语气的体现,表达了一种强烈
的建议。
【高分句型4】
Only by putting what you have learned into use will your English be improved.
句型剖析:此句是全文的亮点。“Only by doing...” 结构位于句首引起部分倒装 “will your English be
improved”,极大地增强了语气,强调了“学以致用”的绝对重要性。句中还包含了 “what”引导的宾语
从句 “what you have learned”。这个句子结构复杂,表意深刻,是典型的高分句型。
8.(2025·江苏苏州·月考)假如你是李华,你的美国朋友 Peter向你写信请教如何学好汉语,请你给他回
信,要点如下:
1. 提出建议;
2. 表达祝福。
注意:1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? Knowing that you have difficulties in Chinese, I’d like to give you some
suggestions as requested in your letter.
My advice are as follows: first, speak a little Chinese every day. The absolute best way to learn any new
language is just to speak it. Second, attend a Chinese class or discussion group.
After all, language learning settings are of great importance.
Hopefully, my advice is of some help to you. If you have any further questions, please don’t hesitate to write
to me. Wish you good luck.Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,给美国朋友 Peter写一封回信,就如何学好
汉语提供建议并表达祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
进展:How is everything going? → How are things with you?
困难:difficulties → trouble, problems
按照要求:as requested → as you asked
建议:suggestions → advice, recommendations
至关重要:are of great importance → are vital/crucial
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Language learning settings are very important.
拓展句:Language learning settings, where you can practice with others, are of great importance. (使用
“where”引导的非限制性定语从句,补充说明语言环境的益处,使句子内容更丰富)
【点睛之笔】
【高分句型1】
Knowing that you have difficulties in Chinese, I’d like to give you some suggestions as requested in your letter.
句型剖析:此句开篇使用现在分词短语 “Knowing that...” 作原因状语,自然地引出了写信的背景和目
的,显得亲切而及时。“as requested” 的使用表明这是应对方要求,语气非常得体。
【高分句型2】
My advice are as follows: first, speak a little Chinese every day.
句型剖析:此句使用 “My advice are as follows:” 这个非常正式和清晰的表达来引出具体建议,使文章
结构一目了然。(注意:advice 为不可数名词,谓语动词应为 "is")。
【高分句型3】
After all, language learning settings are of great importance.
句型剖析:此句使用 “After all” (毕竟) 来引出第二条建议的根本原因,增强了说服力。“be of great
importance” 是比 “are very important” 更正式、更书面的表达,提升了文章的档次。
【高分句型4】
If you have any further questions, please don’t hesitate to write to me.
句型剖析:此句是书信结尾的万能句。“don’t hesitate to do sth.” (请不要犹豫做某事) 是一种非常礼
貌和地道的表达,鼓励对方随时联系,体现了真诚和乐于助人的态度。
9.(2025·陕西西安·月考)假定你是李华。你在网上看到一个帖子:英国青少年Eric正在寻找一名中国高
中生作为语言学习伙伴。请你根据以下要点提示,给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;2. 你的优势;
3. 你的期待。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Dear Eric,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Eric,
I am Li Hua, a Chinese high school student. Learning that you are looking for an English learner whose
native language is Chinese, I am writing to express my wish to become your language (exchange) partner/ language
buddy.
Firstly, having studied in London for a year/ having studied English for years, I can understand you better
culturally and make sure we communicate smoothly. Secondly, I have a wide range of interests and a good
knowledge of Chinese. So there are lots of topics which we can talk about, especially those related to Chinese
language learning.
I hope we can be helpful to each other. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以中国高中生李华的身份,给英国青少年 Eric写一封应征邮
件,申请成为语言学习伙伴。
【语言亮点解析】
1. 词汇积累
寻找:looking for → seeking
表达愿望:express my wish → state my intention
顺畅地:smoothly → fluently, effectively
广泛的兴趣:a wide range of interests → broad interests
丰富的知识:a good knowledge of → a solid understanding of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I have a wide range of interests. I also have a good knowledge of Chinese. We can talk about
lots of topics.拓展句:With a wide range of interests and a good knowledge of Chinese, I can discuss many topics
with you. (使用“With”复合结构整合信息,使表达更简洁)
【点睛之笔】
【高分句型1】
Learning that you are looking for an English learner whose native language is Chinese, I am writing to express my
wish to become your language partner.
句型剖析:此句开篇非常精彩。使用现在分词短语 “Learning that...” 作原因状语,其中还嵌套了
“whose”引导的定语从句 “whose native language is Chinese”,精准地对应了招聘要求。整个句子结
构复杂,信息量大,且完全契合情境,展现了出色的语言驾驭能力。
【高分句型2】
Firstly, having studied in London for a year, I can understand you better culturally and make sure we communicate
smoothly.
句型剖析:此句使用现在分词完成式 “having studied...” 作原因状语,强调了“曾在伦敦学习”这一经
历带来的持续影响——即更深的文化理解和更顺畅的沟通能力。这比简单说“I studied in London”更具
说服力,直接点明了这一经历对担任语言伙伴的价值。
【高分句型3】
Secondly, I have a wide range of interests and a good knowledge of Chinese, so there are lots of topics which we
can talk about, especially those related to Chinese language learning.
句型剖析:此句通过 “so” 连接了因果关系:因为兴趣广泛、中文知识扎实,所以能提供丰富的谈资。
句末使用 “especially those related to...” 进行补充强调,将话题范围精准锁定在对方最关心的“汉语学
习”上,体现了为对方着想的思维。
【高分句型4】
I hope we can be helpful to each other.
句型剖析:此句简洁地表达了互利共赢(win-win) 的期待。这比单方面说“我能帮助你”或“希望你能
帮助我”都更显成熟和公平,更容易获得对方的好感,是此类合作请求中的点睛之笔。
10.(2025·湖南长沙·阶段考)假定你是李华,新学期你校来了一位英国留学生 Mark。他希望有人能帮助
他提高普通话(Mandarin)水平,他以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给他写封电子邮件,内容
包括:
1. 表达你的意愿;
2. 说明你的优势;
3. 提出你学英语的需求。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头和结束语已写好,不计入总词数;
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mark,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours, sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Mark,
Learning that you want to improve your Mandarin, I’m writing to offer my help. For one thing I have a good
command of Chinese and I got the first prize in Mandarin contest. For another, I like helping others.
Meanwhile, I want to speak fluent English. If you could help me with my oral English, we can improve ourselves
together. It would be a win-win choice. If you agree, we can meet face to face to talk about the details.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours, sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国留学生Mark写一封电子邮件,帮助他提高普通话,并请他教
英语作为回报。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作 总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 表达你的意愿;
2. 说明你的优势;
3. 提出你学英语的需求。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
offer one's help,for one thing,for another,have a good command of, meanwhile,win-win choice,
face to face,look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1.Learning that you want to improve your Mandarin, I’m writing to offer my help.
2. For one thing I have a good command of Chinese and I got the first prize in Mandarin contest. For another, I like
helping others.
3.Meanwhile, I want to speak fluent English.4.If you could help me with my oral English, we can improve ourselves together.
5.It would be a win-win choice.
6. If you agree, we can meet face to face to talk about the details.
7. Looking forward to your early reply!
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but
(also), including,(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系:for one thing,for another
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you want to improve your Mandarin, I’m writing to offer my help.
(现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] If you agree, we can meet face to face to talk about the details.(if引导条件状语从句)