考点 40 应用文写作之建议信&求助信（核心考点
精讲精练）
1. 高考真题考点分布
年份 试卷 体裁 话题 题材内容
新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ
告知信 学校生活 介绍美术课的个人作品和感想
卷
2024 全国甲卷 演讲稿 社会科技 中国交通发展
天津卷 演讲稿 社会生活 低碳生活
浙江卷 征文投稿 学校生活 课间开展的运动
新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ
建议信 学校生活 给外教提建议
卷
全国甲卷 征文投稿 历史文化 介绍中国历史人物
2023
全国乙卷 征文投稿 生活学习 假期习得新技能
“中国工坊”活动
天津卷 申请信 社会生活
浙江卷 活动报道 学校生活 认识我们身边的植物
全国卷乙卷 征文投稿 调查结果 学习英语的状况
全国卷甲卷 征文投稿 世界海洋日 保护海洋
新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ
学校的电台访谈
邀请信 文化生活
卷
2022
图书馆开设了一个小组学习室
浙江卷 邀请信 学校生活
视频文字
社团活动
天津卷 稿 学校生活
2. 命题规律及备考策略
【命题规律】
近3年命题规律：
1. 对中国传统文化种类的考查，既有有高度概括性的全面考查，也有针对某一具体文化现象的考查；
2. 体现个人成长与时代发展相融合；
3. 体裁上有：提纲作文；开放性作文；图表作文；看图作文；
4. 内容上选材贴近考生实际生活。所写内容都是学生熟悉内容。尽管对写作内容有限制，学生仍有较大
的自由发挥空间（自己的感想），以展示自己的个性和创意
【备考策略】1. 熟练掌握各种应用文的基本构架；
2. 积累基本词汇和句式，尤其是简单基本句式，写好简单句；
3. 背诵优美的段落和范文，模仿高级句式和表达；
4. 加强审题（主题、时态）训练；
5. 练习书写，达到整洁美观的程度。
【命题预测】
预测2025年应用文考查仍然贴近考生实际生活，以电子邮件和投稿为主，考查考生的解决问题能力。
考点一、建议信
必备基础知识：
建议信通常是写给家人或朋友，对于对方在生活、工作、求学等过程中遇到的实际问题或困惑提供看法、
指导或给予对方所需要的建议，或对于对方不明智的举动进行劝勉、告诫或展开讨论。建议信的写作目的
是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉信。观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
【思路点拨】
① 首段：
a.介绍自己，不要罗嗦；
b. 说明目的，注意语气。
② 主体：
a. 提出具体建议；
b. 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；
c. 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文。
③尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，使对方易于接受。
3. 写作流程图
【必备词汇】
1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议
2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见3.as follows 如下
4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view 在我看来
5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用
6.take part in/participate in... 参加
7.follow/take/adopt one's advice 采纳某人的建议
8.take sth. into account/consideration 把……考虑在内
9.with regard to 关于；就
10. put forward 提出
11.in this regard/in this respect 在这点上/在这方面
12.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事
13.with time going on 随着时间的推移
14. Be faced with 面临
15.take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待
【万能句式】
第一部分：说明写信的目的
套语：
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps
the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following
suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients
（顾客）.
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions
here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few
suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。
6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English
well in high school.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。
第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因
套语：
(1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver theirspeeches.
(2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。
We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
(3) 下午，我们会一起……
During the afternoon, we’ll...together.
(4) 记得带上水和午餐。
Remember to take water and lunch with you.
(5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club.
(6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。
I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite
you to be part of the contest.
(7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。
Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
(8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
第三部分：提出建议
套语：
我建议……
I’d like to suggest that…
May I suggest that…?
In my opinion…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
I am writing to advise…
If I were you, I would…
第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复
套语：
1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never
say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。
3. Best wishes!
（给你）最美好的祝愿！
4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your
studies/work！我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。
6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
【写作模板】
模板①
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some
conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to
further details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建
议的主题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also
helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建
议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
【2023年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主
题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
,
【答案】Dear Jim
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to
offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can
participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by
themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will
all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→tip
提供：offer→provide
开展：carry out→conduct
主题：theme→topic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am
writing to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing
to offer you my suggestions.
（24-25高三上·重庆沙坪坝·开学考试）假设你是李华，你的英国好友Jack所在的学校计划组织学生来重庆
旅行，请你给他写一封建议信。内容包括：
（1）表示欢迎；
（2）推荐景点（至少两个）；
（3）注意事项。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m thrilled to hear that your school is planning a trip to Chongqing! I wholeheartedly welcome you to my
hometown, which is known for its unique culture, delicious food, and breathtaking landscapes.
I suggested visiting two must-see spots: Hongya Cave and Ciqikou Ancient Town. Hongya Cave offers
stunning views of the city’s skyline and river, especially at night when it’s beautifully li t up. Ciqikou Ancient Town
provides a glimpse into Chongqing’s rich history and traditional culture, with its charming old streets and local
crafts. What’s more, please note that Chongqing’s summer can be very hot and humid. Make sure to stay hydrated,
wear sunscreen, and carry an umbrella for both sun and sudden rain.
Wish you an amazing journey filled with wonderful memories. Enjoy your trip and feel free to reach out if
you need any more advice or assistance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jack写一封建议信，因为他所在的学校计划组织
学生来重庆旅行。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→excited
建议：suggest→recommend
充满：be filled with→be full of
极好的：amazing→marvelous
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：What’s more, please note that Chongqing’s summer can be very hot and humid. Make sure to stay hydrated,
wear sunscreen, and carry an umbrella for both sun and sudden rain.
拓展句：Since Chongqing’s summer can be very hot and humid, make sure to stay hydrated, wear sunscreen, and
carry an umbrella for both sun and sudden rain.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m thrilled to hear that your school is planning a trip to Chongqing! (运用了that引导宾语
从句)
[高分句型2] I wholeheartedly welcome you to my hometown, which is known for its unique culture, delicious
food, and breathtaking landscapes. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)考点二、求助信
求助信是一种写给朋友或机构的正式信件，请求他们提供帮助、支持或资金，以实现某个目标或完成
某项任务。通常，求助信会详细说明请求帮助的原因、需要的具体支持以及如何使用这些支持。
【思路点拨】
求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括三部分内容:
1.表明写信目的，请求帮助。
2.要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。
3.希望得到帮助。
注意语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。
【必备词块】
1.have trouble/difficulty(in)doing sth. 做某事有困难
2.do sb. a favor/give sb. a hand 给某人帮助
3.ask for help/seek for help 寻求帮助
4.encounter some problems 遇到一些问题
5.be busy/occupied/engaged in doing sth.忙于做某事
7.make preparations for.…为某事做准备
9.put...in use 学以致用
10.let sb. down 让某人失望
11.overcome the fear 克服恐惧
12.be anxious/eager to do sth./long to do sth.渴望做某事
13.take the trouble to do sth. 费心地去做某事
14.offer some constructive guidance提供一些有益的指导
15.be grateful/thankful/appreciative to sb.for sth.因某事感激某人
【万能句式】
首段：请求帮助
1.Now I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor/lend me a hand.
现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。
2.Iam writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.
我希望你能帮我一个忙。
3.I wonder if you could do me a fvour, this is the first time that my uncle visits us.
我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙，这是我叔叔第一次来访，所以我希望你能到机场接他。
4.Iwonder if you some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and
otherbmaterials.
我想知道你是否能帮我出售一些中国结，这是我自己用 红丝线、布等材料做的
5.Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished?
你愿意帮我润色草稿吗？
中间段：描述具体困难1.1am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with,… What’s more, … What
troubles me most is …
我遇到的三个间题很困扰我，首先 ……另外……最困扰我的是……
2.Unfortunately,I find/feel it quite/extremely difficult/hard to do with(使用形式宾语)
不幸的是，我觉得做某事十分/非常难。
3.lt is difficult/challenging for me to do sth.
做某事是困难的/有挑战性的。
4.Thave trouble/difficulty/problems (in)doing sth.
我做某事有困难。
5.Domg sth.is another terrible headache for me.(使用动名词做主语）
做某事是另一件让我很头痛的事。
6.I find myself struggling with sth.(使用find复合结构）
我发现自己做某事有困难。
7.Faced with the above problems,I am anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on...?
面对上述问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。请你给我一些建议。
结尾段：希望得到帮助：
1.Iwonder if can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me ?
我想知道你能不能帮我解决这些困难。如果你能帮助我，我真的很感激。
2.I would appreciate it very much if you can offer me some necessary/timely help(give/lend me some
practical/valuable advice)
如果你能给我一些必要的帮助/及时的帮助（给我一些实用的/有价值的建议）。我会很感激。
常见困难：
【生活方面】
与人相处
get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents.
和我的同学/新老师/父母相处
把握时间
arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things.
安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情
明确目标
know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order to passionately
live a purpose-driven life everyday.
知道我生命的目的和未来的目标，以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活
【学习方面】
不懂语法
have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into use in my s
peaking and writing.进步太慢
find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a l
ong time.
精力有限
can’t be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful
and splendid.
【写作模板】
模板①
Dear ______ ,
I am writing to formally request to ______ （ 请 求 的 内 容 ） .The reason for _____________is
that_____________（给出原因）. I___________ , so I _____________（给出细节）.I would also like to request
___________（提出进一步的要求）. I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention
to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at __________（电话号码）.
I look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
模板②
Dear________,
My name is _______________(自我介绍). I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have
met difficulty in _______________(求助内容). First, I find ___________(困难1). Besides, ________(困难
2). What’s more, __________(困难3).
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to
____________(委婉提出请求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to (请求内容) so that ___________(请求目的).
Also, I would like you to (请求内容).
I’m sure that I can make great progress in _____________(表达期待).
Yours,
Li Hua
（2024·江西吉安·模拟预测）假定你是校英语报的编辑李华。你校英语报拟开设一个新栏目“英文电影赏
析”，请你给外教Johnson 写封邮件, 内容包括：
1. 请他推荐一部英文电影；
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Johnson,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Johnson,
Our school English newspaper intends to set up a new column “English Movie Appreciation”. Knowing that
you are a movie fan, I’m writing to ask for your recommendation.
It is widely accepted that English movies can not only help greatly improve students’ interest and acquisition
of the language, but also broaden students’ mind as well as deepen cultural understanding. As a movie fan, you
must have seen a lot of English movies that are both interesting and thought-provoking. Could you please
recommend one that you appreciate most, and list some reasons for it? I’m sure students will like it.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，学校英语报拟开设一个新栏目“英文电影赏析”，要求考生给外教
Johnson 写封邮件，请他推荐一部英文电影并说明推荐理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
普遍地：widely→universally
提高：improve→boost
肯定的：sure→certain
打算做某事：intend to do→plan to do
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our school English newspaper intends to set up a new column “English Movie Appreciation”.
拓展句：Our school English newspaper intends to set up a new column, whose name is “English Movie
Appreciation”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is widely accepted that English movies can not only help greatly improve students’
interest and acquisition of the language, but also broaden students’ mind as well as deepen cultural understanding.
(运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句)
【高分句型2】Could you please recommend one that you appreciate most, and list some reasons for it? (运用了
that引导的限制性定语从句)（最新模拟试题演练）
Writing 1
（2024·河南郑州·模拟预测）假设你是郑州外国语学校高三学生李华，临近毕业，你们班的英语老师请每
位同学给新高一学弟学妹写封英文邮件，邮件内容包括：
1. 你的建议；
2. 你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear fellow students,
Congratulations on becoming a part of our wonderful school community. At the request of our English
teacher, I’m reaching out to offer you some advice on navigating your time here.
First, treasure every moment spent with your teachers and classmates. Your time here will pass quickly, so
seize the opportunity to forge meaningful and lasting connections. Secondly, let go of your past achievements or
failures. Instead, focus on the tasks at hand. It is the dedication and effort you invest now that will shape your
future. Finally, explore what truly sparks your passion. Take English learning for instance. Whether it’s watching
movies or reading novels, try to find what genuinely motivates you.
Wishing you all a fulfilling and rewarding journey ahead filled with joy, growth, and success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写出对高一学弟学妹各方面的建议，最后表达美好的祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
珍视：treasure→cherish
抓住：seize → grasp/catch hold of
专注于：focus on→concentrate on
以……为例：take sth. for instance→take sth. for example2.句式拓展
宾语从句变定语从句
原句：Whether it’s watching movies or reading novels, try to find what genuinely motivates you.
拓展句：Whether it’s watching movies or reading novels, try to find something that genuinely motivates you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is the dedication and effort you invest now that will shape your future.（运用了强调
句型：It is/was+被强调部分+that+其他部分）
【高分句型2】Finally, explore what truly sparks your passion.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
Writing 2
（24-25高三上·山东滨州·开学考试）假定你是李华，你刚刚得知你的美国笔友Jim打算雇一个同学帮他完
成期末论文。请你给他写封信，指出他的错误并提出建议。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
I hope you’re doing well.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I hope you’re doing well. I heard that you are planning to hire a classmate to help you with your final term
paper, but I am afraid that’s improper. Firstly, it goes against academic integrity, which could lead to serious
consequences. Secondly, it may not help you truly understand the subject and develop your own skills.
As an alternative solution, I suggest seeking help actively. You can approach your teacher for guidance,
consul relevant books and resources, or even join a study group to discuss ideas and improve your writing skills.
Only in this way can you not only learn the material better, but also enhance your abilities for future assignments.
I’m confident that you can finish this paper on your own and make huge progress!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Jim写封信，他打算雇一个同学帮他完成期末论
文，要求信中指出他的错误并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
打算：plan to→intend to不合适：improper→inappropriate
导致：lead to→contribute to
建议：suggest→recommend
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Firstly, it goes against academic integrity, which could lead to serious consequences.
拓展句：Firstly, it goes against academic integrity so that it could lead to serious consequences.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I heard that you are planning to hire a classmate to help you with your final term paper, but
I am afraid that’s improper. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Firstly, it goes against academic integrity, which could lead to serious consequences. (运用了which
引导非限制性定语从句)
Writing 3
（2024·江苏南京·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的朋友Daniel被伊利诺伊大学厄巴纳-香槟分校(University
of lllinois Urbana-Champaign)录取了，但是他对未来的大学生活感到紧张。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达祝贺；
2. 表示理解；
3. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Daniel,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Daniel,
I’m so happy to hear that you’ve been admitted to University of lllinois Urbana-Champaign. Congratulations!
I understand your nervousness about the upcoming college life as it’s a new chapter with many unknowns. But
don’t worry too much. Here are some suggestions for you. Try to get familiar with the campus and its facilities
before you start. Besides, make a study plan to manage your time well. And don’t hesitate to join various clubs and
activities to make new friends.
I am sure you will adapt to your new life soon by following the suggestions above.
Yours,Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就你的朋友Daniel对未来的大学生活感到紧张这事给他写一
封邮件。其内容包括：表达祝贺、表示理解和提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→glad
焦虑：nervousness→anxiety
很多：many→plenty of
建议：suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Besides, make a study plan to manage your time well.
拓展句： Besides, it is advisable that you should make a study plan to manage your time well.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I’m so happy to hear that you’ve been admitted to University of lllinois Urbana-
Champaign.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 I understand your nervousness about the upcoming college life as it’s a new chapter with many
unknowns. （运用了as引导原因状语从句）
Writing 4
（24-25高三上·江苏南京·开学考试）假定你是李华，最近收到好友Ben来信，信中说他因为使用人工智能
完成翻译作业而受到老师批评，请你写一封回信，内容包括：1.你的宽慰；2.对使用人工智能完成作业的
看法；3.你的建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Ben,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ben,
I’m sorry to learn about your current trouble regarding the use of AI tools for your assignment. I can fully
relate to your situation as I once faced similar temptations to manage heavy academic workloads. However, AI
should never replace our own intellectual efforts.
As a scientist once said, “Our intelligence is what makes us human, and AI is an extension of that quality.”
While AI can assist in certain areas, over reliance on it undermines the essence of learning and compromiseacademic integrity. Therefore, I suggest you improve your work without solely depending on AI tools and have an
open conversation with your teacher, clarifying your intentions and demonstrating your commitment to genuine
learning.
Learning is not just about completing tasks but also about the process of acquiring knowledge. Wish you
all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给因为使用人工智能完成作业而受到老师批评的好友Ben写
一封回信，表达你的宽慰、阐述对使用人工智能完成作业的看法并提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
理解：relate to→ understand
代替；取代：replace→take the place of
因此：therefore→thus
建议：suggest→advise
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：However, AI should never replace our own intellectual efforts.
拓展句：However, it is our own intellectual efforts that AI should never replace.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I can fully relate to your situation as I once faced similar temptations to manage heavy
academic workloads. (运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】While AI can assist in certain areas, over reliance on it undermines the essence of learning and
compromise academic integrity. (运用了while引导的让步状语从句)
Writing 5
（24-25高三上·福建厦门·开学考试）假定你是李华，在美国某博物馆参观时，发现博物馆对一些中国文物
(artifacts)的英文介绍有误。请你就此向博物馆写一封信，内容包括：1. 投诉问题并举例说明；2. 提出建议。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my concern regarding the inaccuracies found in the English descriptions of someChinese artifacts at your museum.
During my visit, I noticed that the explanation for a Tang Dynasty vase was not only misleading but also
historically incorrect. I kindly suggest that your museum review and correct these descriptions to ensure they
accurately reflect the cultural heritage they represent. It would also be beneficial to collaborate with Chinese
cultural experts or institutions to guarantee authenticity and respect for the artifacts.
Thank you for your attention to this matter.
Yours sincerely,
L
i Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。这是一封写给博物馆的建议信，反映了博物馆对中国文物英文介绍有误的问
题，并提出建议。
【详解】词汇积累
表达：express→ convey
不准确：inaccuracies → imprecisions
建议：suggest → propose
合作：collaborate → cooperate
句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：I am writing to express my concern regarding the inaccuracies found in the English descriptions of some
Chinese artifacts at your museum.
拓展句：I am writing to express my concern regarding the inaccuracies which were found in the English
descriptions of some Chinese artifacts at your museum.
【点睛】【高分句型1】During my visit, I noticed that the explanation for a Tang Dynasty vase was not only
misleading but also historically incorrect. （使用了连接代词that连接的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】I kindly suggest that your museum review and correct these descriptions to ensure they accurately
reflect the cultural heritage they represent. （使用了动词不定式做目的状语）
Writing 6
（2024·江苏·模拟预测）假定你是李华，将担任学校英文情景喜剧表演大赛的主持人，并正在设计节目串
词。请你给外教Mr. Smith写封邮件，请他给予指导。内容包括：
1. 陈述问题；
2. 请求指导。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：串词program cue 情景喜剧 sitcom
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to seek your guidance as I’m going to host our school’s upcoming English sitcom competition.
What challenges me most is designing the program cues, especially when it comes to creating smooth transitions
between programs and incorporating appropriate humor.
I have long heard of your expertise in drama and performance, so I wonder if you could kindly provide me
with suggestions on structuring the program cues effectively and maintaining a lively atmosphere throughout the
competition. Any advice on my hosting work would be greatly appreciated.
I’m eager for your precious guidance. Looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生将担任学校英文情景喜剧表演大赛的主持人，并正在设计节目串
词。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封邮件，请他给予指导。
【详解】1.词汇积累
合适的：appropriate→proper
比赛：competition→contest
建议：suggestion→advice
维持：maintain→sustain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m eager for your precious guidance.
拓展句：I would appreciate it if you could offer your precious guidance.
【点睛】[高分句型1] What challenges me most is designing the program cues, especially when it comes to
creating smooth transitions between programs and incorporating appropriate humor. (运用了what引导主语从句)
[高分句型2] I have long heard of your expertise in drama and performance, so I wonder if you could kindly
provide me with suggestions on structuring the program cues effectively and maintaining a lively atmosphere
throughout the competition. (运用了if引导宾语从句)
Writing 7
（23-24高一下·湖北·期末）假定你是学校英语社负责人李华，为参加你校即将举办的“多彩社团 青春绽
放”社团文艺汇演，你社准备了一个英语节目。请就此写信给外教Brien。内容包括：
1.介绍节目； 2.询问建议。
参考词汇：多彩社团 青春绽放：Colorful Clubs, Blooming Youth注意：1.写作词数80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Brien,
I hope this message finds you well. I am Li Hua, the head of the school’s English Club.
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______________________________________________________________________________________
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Brien,
I hope this message finds you well. I am Li Hua, the head of the school’s English Club. We are excited to
participate in the upcoming “Colorful Clubs, Blooming Youth” cultural festival with an English program. Our plan
is to present a skit highlighting the charm of English language and culture. We aim to showcase the mix of tradition
and modernity through English.
As we are eager to make our performance more engaging and polished, I would greatly appreciate any
suggestions or advice you might have. If possible, could we schedule a meeting to discuss this further?
Thank you very much for your time and consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。为参加学校即将举办的“多彩社团 青春绽放”社团文艺汇演，英语
社社准备了一个英语节目。要求考生代表英语社负责人李华给外教Brien写信，向他介绍节目并询问建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
希望：hope → wish
参与：participate in → take part in
即将来临的：upcoming → forthcoming
展示：showcase →demonstrate/exhibit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our plan is to present a skit highlighting the charm of English language and culture.
拓展句：Our plan is to present a skit highlighting the charm of English language and culture, which features
classic literature and modern pop culture elements.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As we are eager to make our performance more engaging and polished, I would greatly
appreciate any suggestions or advice you might have. (运用了as引导原因状语从句和省略关系代词的定语从
句)
[高分句型2] If possible, could we schedule a meeting to discuss this further? (运用了省略的条件状语从句)
Writing 8（24-25高三上·湖南·开学考试）假定你是李华，你校一年一度的艺术节即将来临。你们班为艺术节准备了
一个英语短剧。请给外教Miss Ellis写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.介绍你校的艺术节：
2.你班的准备：
3.请求指导。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Miss Ellis,
I’m writing to ask for your help.
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_________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Miss Ellis,
I'm Li Hua, and I'm writing to seek your valuable guidance. Our school's annual Arts Festival is approaching,
and our class has decided to present an English short play. We've been hard at work, selecting the script, assigning
roles, and practicing our lines. However, we recognize the importance of native English speakers' input and would
greatly appreciate your advice on our performance.
Your feedback on our pronunciation, intonation, and overall delivery would be immensely helpful. We hope
that with your guidance, we can bring our short play to life and truly captivate our audience. Thank you for
considering our request, and we eagerly await your response.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一封求助信，要求考生以李华的身份给外教Miss Ellis写信，介绍学校艺术节的情
况，班级的准备情况，并请求对方给予指导。
【详解】词汇积累
请求：ask for → seek
到来：iapproach → draw near
表演：present → perform
投入：input → contribution
句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：Our school's annual Arts Festival is approaching.
拓展句：The time when our school celebrates its annual Arts Festival is drawing near.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I'm Li Hua, and I'm writing to seek your valuable guidance.（使用了动词不定式作状语）
【高分句型2】We hope that with your guidance, we can bring our short play to life and truly captivate our
audience.（使用了连接词that连接的宾语从句）
Writing 9
（2024·河北沧州·三模）假设你是李华，希望在未来成为一名农业专家，但是你的家长并不支持，于是你
给外教Alice写信，征求她的意见。内容包括：
1. 说明你的想法;
2. 家长反对的理由;
3. 征求老师的意见。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alice,
I feel upset these days because I have conflicts with my parents over my career choice.
Inspired by Yuan Longping, a great agricultural expert, I’m eager to devote myself to agriculture in the
future. However, my parents are strongly opposed. They wish me to become a lawyer, thinking I will find a good
job after graduation. I am caught in a dilemma. I don’t know whether I should obey my parents or pursue what
brings me happiness and satisfaction.
What would you do if you were in my position? I really hope that you can give me some advice.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Alice写一封信，就希望在未来成为一名农业专家，
但是家长并不支持这件事来征求她的意见。内容包括：说明你的想法、家长反对的理由、征求老师的意见。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
奉献，投身于：devote→dedicate
强烈地：strongly→violently
顺从：obey→be obedient to
建议：advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句：Inspired by Yuan Longping, a great agricultural expert, I’m eager to devote myself to agriculture in the
future.
拓展句：Inspired by Yuan Longping, who is a great agricultural expert, I’m eager to devote myself to agriculture
in the future.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I feel upset these days because I have conflicts with my parents over my career choice.
(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】I don’t know whether I should obey my parents or pursue what brings me happiness and
satisfaction.(运用了whether以及what引导的宾语从句)
Writing 10
（2024·山东威海·二模）假定你是李华，现已完成主题为“Food & Culture”英语演讲比赛的写作大纲，
请给外教写一封邮件，简述大纲中你的观点和论证思路，并就此征求对方的建议。
注意：
1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sara,
I’m seeking guidance on my speech outline about “Food & Culture”....
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I’d greatly appreciate your thoughts and any suggestions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sara,
I’m seeking guidance on my speech outline about “Food & Culture”. My point is that food and culture
go hand in hand. Two sub-points are provided to support it. One is that food reflects culture and the other is that
cultural changes and integration influence food landscape. To support the two points, many examples are used. For
example, people’s preference for spicy food is a way to adapt to the humid climate. Moreover, Chinese cuisine and
culinary culture were introduced to the world through the Silk Road. Apart from giving examples, other methods,
including making comparison and quotation, are also employed in my essay. Do you think my outline is well-
organized?
I’d greatly appreciate your thoughts and any suggestions.
Your,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教写一封邮件，简述大纲中自己的观点和论证思路，
并就此征求对方的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累
许多的：many→all kinds of
例如：for example→for instance
除了：apart from→in addition to
此外：moreover→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To support the two points, many examples are used.
拓展句：Many examples are used so that I can support the two points.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
My point is that food and culture go hand in hand.（运用了that引导表语从句）
[高分句型2]
For example, people’s preference for spicy food is a way to adapt to the humid climate.（运用了动词不定式作后
置定语）
Writing 11
（2024·山西·二模）假定你是李华，暑假你准备去澳洲游学，为了更快地融入当地生活，你准备求助你的
澳洲好友William。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.表达期望。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear William,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear William,
I am one of your Chinese friends, Li Hua. I will come to your country for a study tour on July 5th. Could you
do me a favour to help me adapt to local life more quickly?
First, I’d be grateful if you could help me find an apartment next to Tanner High School. Besides, it would be
better if you could tell me some customs and lifestyle of your country. Actually, any constructive suggestions are
welcome.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生就去澳洲游时如何能够更快地融入当地生活，给澳洲好友William
写一封邮件，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.表达期望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮某人一个忙：do sb. a favour→give sb. a hand
使用：adapt to→adjust to
首先：first→to begin with
事实上：actually→as a matter of fact
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am one of your Chinese friends, Li Hua.
拓展句：I am one of your Chinese friends, whose name is Li Hua.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
First, I’d be grateful if you could help me find an apartment next to Tanner High School.（运用了if引导条件状语
从句）
[高分句型2]
Besides, it would be better if you could tell me some customs and lifestyle of your country.（运用了it would be
better if…这个固定句型）
Writing 1
【2024北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投
稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文
给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary
of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights
in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it
showcases China’s determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s
role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中
国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的：great →wonderful
成就：achievement→ accomplishment
建议：suggestion →advice
此外：In addition → what’s more
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary
of the founding of this country.
拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th
anniversary of the founding of this country.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements,
which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases
China’s determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
Writing 2
【2023 ▪新高考I&II卷】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在
问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；2. 提出建议 。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training
after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This
can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for
the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone
who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后
练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
.
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own
partners.拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let
students choose their own partners.
Writing 3
【2021年全国甲卷】
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给
外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1.阐明写信事由；
2.征求建议；
3.表示感谢。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs.
Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get
more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate my
website with some Chinese elements, what should I do? Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can
help me solve these puzzles.
If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate
your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 4
【2020·新课标Ⅲ】
假定你shi 李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指
导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to
the textbook.
We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English
play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is
going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script,
we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script
attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next
Tuesday to give you more details?
Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to
your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于《the Steamboat》改编短
剧的支持。第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构：总分总法
第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表
达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
write to；according to ；combine ； adaption ；challenge；attached to ；convenient
第三步：连词成句
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改
Writing 5
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学
在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：
1. 条件及要求；
2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How are you doing? I hope everything's OK with you.
Our school's drama club plans to start practising. Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in
your place. Would you please recommend one for us?
He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and
teaching.
Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when necessary.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教
师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给 Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指
导教师，内容包括：1. 条件及要求；2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：drama club (戏剧俱乐部)；plan to do sth.(计划做某事)；in one's
place(代替某人)；recommend(推荐)；a native English speaker(以英语为母语的人)；currently (目前)；
experienced(熟练的)；both…and…(两者都……)；take care of(照顾)；wear a mask(戴口罩)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在
时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美
观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如
Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然。
