可打印|外研版五上英语Unit1作文模板+范文

同学们好！五年级上册Unit 1 What's on your plate? 是一个和“吃”密切相关的单元。今天，我们就围绕这个单元，从基础篇、提升篇到强化篇，一步步学习如何用英语介绍盘子里的食物、表达健康的饮食选择，甚至给我们的“胃”写一封信！三个层次的写作框架和范文都在这里，快收藏起来吧！

一、基础篇：介绍盘里食物+健康选择

写作要点

人称和时态：用第一人称I，描述平时习惯用一般现在时。

开头：介绍盘子里的食物。

Look at my plate. There is some ______（不可数/单数，如 meat/rice）on my plate.

There are some ______（复数，如 vegetables）too.

中间：表达喜好和健康选择。

I like ______ very much, but I should eat more ______.

I shouldn't eat too much ______.

I should drink more ______.

结尾：A healthy meal is important.

范文

Look at my plate. There is some rice on my plate. There are some vegetables too. I like beef very much, but I should eat more fruit. I shouldn't eat too much chocolate. I should drink more milk. A healthy meal is important.

小贴士

1.There is后面接不可数名词或单数名词；There are后面接可数名词复数。

2.too much后接不可数名词（如 chocolate, juice）；3.too many后接可数名词复数（如 sweets）。

4.should / shouldn't后面一律接动词原形。

二、提升篇：介绍三餐食物均衡搭配

写作要点

人称和时态：仍用第一人称 I，一般现在时。

开头：I think my diet is ______ (healthy / not very healthy).

中间：按三餐展开。

I have ______ for breakfast.

For lunch, I eat ______ and ______.

I have ______ and ______ for dinner.

I like ______, but I should eat more ______.

结尾：A healthy diet makes me strong and happy.

范文

I think my diet is healthy. I have noodles for breakfast. For lunch, I eat beef and rice. I have fish and vegetables for dinner. I like candies, but I should eat more fruit. A healthy diet makes me strong and happy.

小贴士

1.表示“某餐吃某物”用 have ... for breakfast/lunch/dinner。

2.三餐搭配要均衡：早餐有主食，午餐有肉有饭，晚餐有鱼有菜。

3.结尾句A healthy diet makes me strong and happy. 既点题又升华。

三、强化篇：给胃的一封信

写作要点

人称和时态：第一人称 I，一般现在时；表承诺用will / won't + 动词原形。

格式：书信格式，开头 Dear stomach,，结尾 Yours, + 署名。

正文框架：

I'm sorry that I often eat too much ______ and ______. I sometimes eat ______ and ______, and I don't like ______. You work hard for me every day, but I don't always take good care of you. I should eat more ______ and ______, and drink more ______.

I shouldn't eat too much ______ or drink too much ______.

I will eat three meals on time and not eat too fast.

Thank you for working hard for me, and please be healthy.

范文

Dear stomach,

I'm sorry that I often eat too much sweet food and unhealthy food. I sometimes eat chips and ice cream, and I don't like vegetables. You work hard for me every day, but I don't always take good care of you. I should eat more vegetables and fruit, and drink more water. I shouldn't eat too much candy or drink too much cola.

I will eat three meals on time and not eat too fast. Thank you for working hard for me, and please be healthy.

Yours,

Amy

小贴士

1.给“胃”写信，语气要真诚，先道歉、再反思、后承诺。

2.will / won't表示决心和承诺，如 I will eat three meals on time.

3.书信格式不能忘：Dear + 收信者，Yours, + 署名。

四、三篇对比总结

基础篇：盘里食物+健康选择 | There is/are... I should... | A healthy meal is important. 

提升篇：三餐均衡搭配 | I have...for... | A healthy diet makes me strong and happy. 

|强化篇：给胃的一封信 | I will/won't... | Please be healthy.

三篇范文层层递进：基础篇学会描述盘子里的食物，提升篇学会安排一日三餐，强化篇学会反思并承诺健康饮食。同学们可以先从基础篇练起，熟练后再挑战提升篇和强化篇。

五、写作小锦囊

1. 可数不可数要分清：

rice, meat, beef, fish, milk, water, juice, chocolate 不可数；

vegetables, noodles, eggs, candies 可数。

2. should 家族：should eat more... / shouldn't eat too much...

3. 连接词：but 表转折，and 表并列，or 用于否定句。

4. 健康主题词：healthy, strong, happy, important, take good care of...

同学们，只要掌握这三个层次的写作框架，Unit 1 的作文就再也不用愁啦！快拿起笔，写一写你的“healthy plate”，或者给胃写一封真诚的信吧！

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