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2024 济南中考英语作文|新闻稿类「三段模板」

发布时间：2026-10-29 16:50:46 最近访问：2026-10-29 16:50:46

先记住这九个字：谁在何时何地做了什么，结果如何，为什么有意义。

新闻稿是五年里最好写的一种，因为它有固定的三段三要素。这篇把 2024 那道题的模板句全列出来，能抄的直接抄。

先看题目

假定你是李华，你校与某乡镇希望中学（Hope Middle School）是友好学校，上周五两校英语社团在希望中学举行了共演英文课本剧活动。请你为校英文报写一则新闻稿。

内容包括：

1. 时间、地点、参与人员；
2. 活动过程简介；
3. 活动意义。

注意：词数 100 左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇：英文课本剧 English textbook drama　友好学校 sister school

为什么这篇最值得练：

2022 到 2026 五年，只有 2024 这一道是新闻稿——它是唯一一道有明确格式要求的题。
新闻稿的三要素是硬性的：漏掉"参与人员"或者"活动意义"，直接掉一档，没有商量余地。

最容易丢分的一个地方

记叙类必须用一般过去时，但"意义"部分要用一般现在时。

写"上周五发生了什么"用过去时（was held / took part / performed）；
写"这件事的意义"用现在时（improved / deepened / means）。
两套时态混用，是记叙类最常见的致命错误。

记一个判断方法：凡是写"已经发生完的事"，一律过去时；凡是写"这件事带来的影响"，一律现在时。

三段结构（照着写，25 分能拿 18 分以上）

段落	写什么	模板句
第一段	时间 + 地点 + 事件谁主办、什么活动	Last Friday, an ______ was held in ______ by the English clubs of our school and ______.
第二段	参与人员 + 过程 + 一处细节	Students from both schools took part in the activity. They performed several ______ on the stage. The actors spoke English fluently and acted vividly, which won loud applause from the audience.
第三段	活动意义 + 展望	The activity was meaningful. It not only improved ______, but also deepened the friendship between the two sister schools. We all hope more activities like this will be held in the future.

能抄的句型清单

这一栏建议你抄在本子上，早读念三遍。新闻稿的分就是这么一句一句堆出来的。

用途	英文
新闻开场	Last Friday, an English textbook drama show was held in Hope Middle School by the English clubs of our school and Hope Middle School.
参与人员	Students from both schools took part in the activity.
活动过程	They performed several classic English textbook dramas on the stage.
细节＋从句	The actors spoke English fluently and acted vividly, which won loud applause from the audience.
活动之后	After the show, students shared their ideas with each other and made new friends.
意义总起	The activity was meaningful.
意义展开	It not only improved our spoken English and performing skills, but also deepened the friendship between the two sister schools.
展望结尾	We all hope more activities like this will be held in the future.

三档范文对照

满分版（21—25 分）

An English Textbook Drama Show

Last Friday, an English textbook drama show was held in Hope Middle School by the English clubs of our school and Hope Middle School.

Students from both schools took part in the activity. They performed several classic English textbook dramas on the stage. The actors spoke English fluently and acted vividly, which won loud applause from the audience. After the show, students shared their ideas with each other and made new friends.

The activity was meaningful. It not only improved our spoken English and performing skills, but also deepened the friendship between the two sister schools. We all hope more activities like this will be held in the future.

降一档（16—20 分）

An English Textbook Drama Show

Last Friday, our school and Hope Middle School had an English textbook drama show. It was in Hope Middle School.

Many students took part in it. They performed some English textbook dramas. They spoke English well and acted well. The audience clapped. After that, students talked with each other and made friends.

The activity was good. It improved our English and friendship. I hope we can have more activities.

降两档（11—15 分）

An English Textbook Drama Show

Last Friday, we had a show. We went to Hope Middle School. We performed dramas. It was very interesting. We were very happy. I like this activity. I hope we can do it again.

两档都掉在哪

降一档：三要素只写全了两块，而且过程是流水账。

"参与人员"只写了 Many students，没点出"两校"这个关键信息——这道题的核心是友好学校之间的交流，写"两校"才扣题。
过程四句全是"主语＋动词"，没有推进词，也没有细节。
改法：参与人员写成 Students from both schools took part in the activity.；过程加上 fluently、vividly 和 which 从句。