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March 12th, 2020, Tuesday Sunny (fine)
My parents are teachers, so they want me to read more books. WhenＩstarted to learn reading, they bought
me a lot of novel books, such as Harry Potter, Alice in the Wonderland and so on.Ｉsaw the movie first, and
thenＩwould have the interest to read the novels.Ｉfound that the novel were with much more details and Ｉwas
absorbed in it. The literary books not only described an attractive world, but the more important thing was that it
enlightened me to be a better girl. What learned from these novels helps me to be independent and Ｉhave my own
thinking.
一、基本要求
1. 注意日期、星期和天气的书写位置
英语日记日期和星期要写在正文的左上角，其顺序多是“星期 + 月、日、年”（也有把星期放在后
面的），如“ 20XX 年 11 月 22 日，星期一”可写为“ Ｍ onday Ｎ ovember 22， 20XX 或 Ｎ
ovember 22， 20XX Ｍonday ”。天气情况应写在正文的右上角，如： Ｆine， Ｒainy， Ｃloudy， Ｗ
indy 等。
2. 关于题目的书写
在日期和天气的下一行中间可以写上日记小题目，也可以不写题目。
3. 关于正文的书写
正文是关于一天生活的记载，也是日记的主习题。在书写正文时要做到：
1 ）要选择当天感受最深刻、最有意义的事件来描述，不要写成简单的流水帐；
2 ）日记的内容多是亲身经历和耳闻目睹的事情，所以要用第一人称来写；
3 ）日记多是在当天晚上来记述当天发生过的事情，因为动词时态常使用过去时，但使用时必须灵敏
掌握并且要简明扼要，层次清楚，写出真实感。
二、主要格式
英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。日记常以第一人称记下当天生活中的所见、所闻、所做或
所想的事情。中、英文的日记三格式大致一样。英语日记的书端是专门写日记的日期、星期和天气的。左
上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况，如：Ｓ unny, Ｆine, Ｒainy, Ｗindy, Ｓ
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nowy, Ｃloudy等。
1.日期表达有多种形式
英语日记年、月、日都写时，通常以月、日、年为顺序，月份可以缩写，日和年用逗号隔开。例如：
December 18, 2019 或者 Ｄec. 18, 2019
2.星期的特殊性
星期也可以省略不写，可将其放在日期前或后，星期和日期之间不用标点，但要空一格，星期也可缩
写。如：
Saturday, October 22nd, 2019；October 22nd, 2019 Saturday
3.天气情况必不可少
天气一般用一个形容词如 :Sunny, Fine, Rainy, Snowy 等表示。写在日期之后，用逗号隔开，位于日
记的右上角。如：
Saturday, Ｍarch 4, 2020, Windy；1st January, 2019, Fine
三、日记的类型和训练
日记分为记事型、议论型、描写型和抒情型。建议大家在学习写日记的过程中，可按以下步骤进行：
①将一天所经历的主要事情和过程依次简要地记下来，不附加任何感情色彩，这是最简单的记日记的
方法；
②阅读别人的日记，并利用所学过的句型来表达个人在一天中观察到的或感受到的事情。
押题范文
1．根据下列提示，请你写一篇日记，记述五月一日（星期五）你和李明一起参观科技博物馆的事情。
1. 天气：晴。
2. 距离：离家约一公里。
3. 交通工具：自行车。
4. 时间：早八点半出发，十一点回家。
5. 内容：见到了很多照片、实物等，学到了很多东西。
6. 游人：见到很多父母和孩子、学生、老师等。
7. 参考词汇：科技博物馆the Science and Technology Museum ，公里kilometer，实物things
注意：1. 词数：60—80左右。日记的格式已给出；
2. 可根据内容适当发挥。
Friday May 1, 2009 Fine
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Friday May 1, 2009 Fine
It was a sunny day today. Li Ming and I went to visit the Science and Technology Museum. It is about one
kilometer away from my home. So we decided to go there by bike. We set off at 8:30 in the morning. At the
museum, we saw many photos and other interesting things. We learned a lot. We also saw a lot of students, teachers
and many children with their parents. We got home at eleven o’clock and we had a great time.
【写作分析】
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍自己去科技博物馆的一天，适当添加细节，并突出写作
重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己去了哪里；
第二步，具体介绍做了什么；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①away from距离
②decide to do sth决定做某事
③set off 出发
④have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
2．假如你是Alice，你和家人“五一”假期自驾游览了牡丹江市旅游打卡地镜泊湖。请根据下面信息，
写一篇旅行日记记录旅游经历。
时间 天气 活动 感受
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1日 欣赏瀑布、赏月、放孔明灯
5月1日、2日 晴、有风 放松……
2日 坐船游湖、野餐、拍照留念
写作要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁；
2. 词数90左右。
My Trip on May Day
May 2nd
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My Trip on May Day
May 2nd
This May Day, I went to Jingpo Lake with my family by car. On May 1st, it was sunny and windy, so we
decided to watch the waterfall. It was very wonderful. In the evening, we admired the moon with a lot of people on
the beach near our hotel and we also sent out the sky lanterns there. It was very exciting to watch them slowly rise
into the air.
The next day, we went boating on the lake. There were many people there. We enjoyed beautiful mountains
and water along the way. It was very relaxing. At noon, we had a picnic under the trees. The air was very fresh. We
enjoyed ourselves. We took quite a few photos there.
Although we felt very tired, we were very happy.
【写作分析】
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数
要求。
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[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍5月1日的旅游经历；
第二步，介绍5月2日的旅游经历；
第三步，谈谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth决定做某事
②a lot of许多
③enjoy oneself玩得开心
④quite a few相当多
[高分句型]
①There were many people there.（There be句型）
②Although we felt very tired, we were very happy.（让步状语从句）
3．今天是4月17日（星期三），距离中考还有两个多月的时间，为了更好地复习英语学科迎接中考，
九年级四班今天开了讨论会，请根据以下所提供的信息，写一篇日记。
写作要点：
1.表达因讨论会有意义而喜悦的心情。
2.讨论会具体事项：
（1）时间及地点：上午9点到10点，五楼大厅。
（2）参加人员： 所有九年级年四班学生。
（3）讨论会内容：同学们互相交流分享英语学习方法经验。
3.说说在接下来的两个月里你将如何复习英语学科。
写作要求：
（1）不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
（3）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。
（4）至少80词。
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Today is April 17th. There are more than two months left until senior high school entrance examination. I am
very happy to have today’s meeting about how to revise English.
We had a meeting from 9 a.m to 10 a.m in the lobby on the fifth floor. All the students from the Class 4 Grade 9
attended the meeting. We shared some of our experience in learning English with each other. After discussion, I
think the most important thing is to do more exercises. Reading English magazines and books can increase the
number of vocabularies. When I wake up and on the way to school, I can listen to the English tapes.
I hope all of us can get a good result.
【写作分析】
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：本文时态一般过去时，一般将来时；
③提示：本文的时态较复杂，注意使用正确时态。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己对这次讨论会整体感受；
第二步，详细介绍时间地点参加的人物及内容。
第三步，介绍自己的接下来如何做及希望。
[亮点词汇]
the number of vocabularies词汇量
[高分句型]
When I wake up and on the way to school, I can listen to the English tapes.（时间状语从句）
4．恩施市正在积极创建“全国文明城市”和“国家卫生城市”。作为中学生，我们也在为之努力。
上周五学校组织同学们到和平社区参加实践活动，建设最美社区。请根据以下要点写一篇日记。
要点提示；
（1）活动时间、地点、人物；
（2）活动内容（打扫卫生、帮助老人、宣传……）；
（3）你的体会。
写作要求；
（1）文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；
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（2）条理清晰，字迹工整；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息，词数为80词左右。
参考词汇：全国文明城市National Civilized City；国家卫生城市National Sanitary City；散发传单hand out
leaflets
Friday, Apr.28th Sunny
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Friday, Apr. 28th Sunny
Enshi is building “National Civilized City” and “National Sanitary City”. As middle school students, we are
working hard for it. Last Friday, our school organized students to take part in some activities in Peace Community.
We helped clean up in the community. We helped the old people take out the rubbish and wash the clothes. We also
handed out leaflets to let more people know how to be civilized people. Through this activity, I not only improved
my independence but also made a contribution to our city.
【写作分析】
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据题干中的内容介绍自己和同学们到和平社区参加的实践活动，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍活动时间、地点、人物以及活动内容；
第三步，介绍你的体会。
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[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②hand out分发
[高分句型]
①We also handed out leaflets to let more people know how to be civilized people.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②Through this activity, I not only improved my independence but also made a contribution to our city.(not
only...but also结构)
5．疫情期间，人们居家隔离。有人在家制作美食，有人在家跳舞健身。你居家隔离时做了什么？请
写一篇日记，从学习、饮食、卫生、运动等方面介绍自己的生活，并进行反思和总结，写出你的感受。
注意：1. 字数80词左右；
2. 开头已经给出，所给单词不计入总词数；
3. 请不要写出你的真实姓名和校名。
提示词：study online, eating habits, clean, exercise, feelings
My home quarantine (隔离) diary
During the epidemic ( 疫 情 ), we students in Luannan stayed at home for more than one month.
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One possible version:
My home quarantine (隔离) diary
During the epidemic (疫情), we students in Luannan stayed at home for more than one month. From Monday
to Friday, we studied online. The teachers taught us through Dingding, but sometimes I didn’t listen very carefully.
My parents cooked delicious meals for me, because they couldn’t go out to work. I didn’t do much housework and I
put on weight because of being short of exercising.
In the beginning, I felt excited about not going to school. But gradually I felt bored, because we couldn’t go
outside to play and staying at home all day is not fun at all. I really hope that the epidemic can be over soon. I miss
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my classmates and teachers. I really want to go back to school.
【写作分析】1.题干解读：该题目要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇日记，介绍自己在疫情期间的生活。注
意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承
接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍自己在疫情期间的学习、饮食、卫生、运动等方面，并进行反思和总结，
写出你的感受；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；
注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
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