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2025 考研英语一
原创高分大作文模板教程
公众号@Zachary 的英语视界目 录
前 言.............................................................................................................................1
一、图画类作文模板.................................................................................................3
(1)如何写好第一段?....................................................................................6
1. 首段总起句...............................................................................................7
2. 首段描述句...............................................................................................9
①非对比类............................................................................................11
②对比类.................................................................................................19
③“ddww 结构”知识拓展.....................................................................27
④图画标题描述....................................................................................32
3. 首段总结句.............................................................................................34
①积极类主题.......................................................................................34
②消极类主题.......................................................................................36
(2)如何写好第二段?..................................................................................38
1. 次段过渡句.............................................................................................40
①积极类主题.......................................................................................40
②消极类主题.......................................................................................42
2. 次段语料库.............................................................................................44
①积极类主题.......................................................................................45
a. 个人品质类...............................................................................45
b. 精神文化类...............................................................................55
c. 科技产品类...............................................................................64d. 环境污染类...............................................................................67
②消极类主题.......................................................................................70
a. 个人品质类...............................................................................70
b. 精神文化类...............................................................................74
c. 科技产品类...............................................................................77
d. 环境污染类...............................................................................80
(3)如何写好第三段?..................................................................................82
1. 尾段总结句.............................................................................................89
①积极类主题.......................................................................................89
②消极类主题.......................................................................................91
2. 尾段憧憬句.............................................................................................93
(4)真题套用示范(2009-2024)...............................................................96
①个人品质类..............................................................................................96
②精神文化类............................................................................................116
③科技产品类............................................................................................122
④环境污染类............................................................................................126
二、图表类作文模板.............................................................................................128
(1)如何写好第一段?..................................................................................132
1. 首段起始句...........................................................................................133
2. 首段描述句...........................................................................................135
①静态图..............................................................................................135
②动态图..............................................................................................1383. 首段总结句...........................................................................................153
(2)真题套用示范..........................................................................................156
三、材料类作文模板.............................................................................................164
(1)材料作文模板..........................................................................................164
1. 挖空模板展示......................................................................................164
2. 模板参考译文......................................................................................164
(2)作文模板运用..........................................................................................165
1. 考纲样例题目......................................................................................165
2. 考纲样例范文......................................................................................165
3. 范文参考译文......................................................................................166
(3)作文句型拓展..........................................................................................167
1. 首段引言句型......................................................................................167
2. 阐述观点句型......................................................................................168
3. 分析原因句型......................................................................................169
4. 列举例子句型......................................................................................171
5. 对比对照句型......................................................................................171
6. 解决问题句型......................................................................................172
7. 尾段总结句型......................................................................................173前 言
1. 考研英语大作文的考查范围是什么?
要求考生根据提示信息写一篇 160~200 词(标点符号不计
英一大作文大纲 算在内)的短文。提示信息的形式为文字、图画、图表等。
共20分。
要求考生根据提示信息写一篇约 150 词(标点符号不计
英二大作文大纲 算在内)的短文。提示信息的形式为文字、图画、图表
等。共 15 分。
2. 如何安排考研英语大作文的学习?
根据历年的出题趋势,英语一大作文主要考察图画作文,但在 2024 考
研中出现了图表作文,因此也需引起重视;英语二大作文主要考察图表作
文。为以防万一,建议各位同学全面学习文字、图画和图表这三类作文。
英语一考生:图画类作文(70%)+图表类作文(20%)+材料类作文(10%);
英语二考生:图表类作文(80%)+图画类作文(10%)+材料类作文(10%)。
3. 为什么需要使用考研英语作文模板?
首先,优质的作文模板和背诵总结可以帮助学生快速掌握作文的谋篇
布局,从而在考试中轻松应对。其次,优秀的作文模板不仅能提升学习效
率,还能节省大量时间,使学生能够将更多精力投入到专业课的备考中。
最后,清晰明了的作文结构也有助于改卷老师的批阅。一个结构清晰、逻
辑严谨的作文不仅能让改卷老师一目了然,还能更好地展示学生的写作能
力和思维水平,从而获得更高的分数。
14. 该考研英语作文模板有何特点?
首先,此作文模板性价比相对较高。虽然没有纸质版本,但总价确实
不高。不过,最重要的还是作文模板的内容。在模板的制作过程中,阅读
了许多英美外刊语料,并尽可能将外刊中的地道表达融合到模板中,希望
能让大家的英语作文脱颖而出,并取得理想的成绩。例如,“这幅图画让
我们思考……”这样的表达,除了常见的“The drawing makes us reflect ... ”,
还可以使用更地道的“The drawing invites reflection on ... ”。类似的地道
表达不胜枚举。最后,该作文模板中包含多种语料、多种选择,也就是说,
表达同样意思的句子有很多种供大家选择,而且有多种排列组合形式。这
种多样性可以有效地帮助大家避免作文内容的雷同。
5. 考研英语大作文模板真的能提分吗?
对于内容优质的模板而言,无论英语基础如何,使用模板都是明智之
举。针对基础好的同学,模板可以提供别样的表达和句型,使作文更加锦
上添花;针对基础薄弱的同学,模板可以提供清晰的框架和思路,为作文
分数兜底。如果能保质保量地内化模板内容,英语一大作文平均 14~16 分
(满分 20 分)和英语二大作文 10~12(满分 15 分)是问题不大的。
最后,本书编写过程中因人力、实践和水平有限,如有错漏或不妥之
处,欢迎各位通过公众号留言等形式反馈您的宝贵意见。祝各位考研上岸!
Zachary Wu
编于 2024 年 7 月
2一、图画类作文模板
英语一大作文题目要求:
1)describe thepicture briefly,
2)interpret theimplied meaning, and
3)give your comments.
You should writeneatly ontheANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
(备注*:保证卷面整洁(neatly)也算是评分标准之一。)
英语一大作文段落布局:
3英语一大作文分门别类:
通过梳理 2009 年到 2024 年的考研英语一大作文真题,我们会发现作
文主要分为两大类型:积极类作文和消极类作文。
积极类作文代表 消极类作文代表
2023 年真题 2011 年真题
观看龙舟比赛→弘扬传统文化 随手乱丢垃圾→破坏生态环境
结论:从小事件切入大主题,整篇作文的主基调便可奠定。在此基础上,
整合和内化模板中的功能句,一篇切题的作文便可跃然纸上。另外,大家
需要注意:积极和消极是相对的,也就是说,写破坏环境的危害也可,写
保护环境的好处也不失为一种选择,最重要的还是提炼主题!
我们再将积极类作文和消极类作文再细分归纳,可以大致统计出作文的
出题走向和考试重点:
数据统计(2009-2024)
4分析完表格之后,我们可以得出:英语一作文的重中之重是“个人品
质类”。接下来,我们来提炼这一类作文的主题。之后,我们将讲解一下
如何写好第一、第二和第三段!
2012 年真题:积极态度的重要性 2013 年真题:合理规划的重要性
2016 年真题:以身作则的重要性 2017 年真题:勤奋阅读的重要性
2018 年真题:勇于挑战的重要性 2019 年真题:坚持不懈的重要性
2020 年真题:时间管理的重要性 2021 年真题:坚持热爱的重要性
2022 年真题:课外知识的重要性 2024 年真题:户外运动的重要性
5(1)如何写好第一段?
英语一大作文真题案例:
(2024 年真题)
首段总起句的核心:引出下文图画描述
可以说“从这幅画中浮现出一个富有见解的场景:……”,类似的也
行。这个总起句是“小引子”,建议字数不用太长,尽量保证开门见山。
首段描述句的核心:描述图画内容主干
图画描述抓住主要内容即可,比如左边图片中的背景“树木”就可选
择忽略不计。由此可以这样描述“在左图,年轻男子看到一些人在公园健
身区做运动并表示‘家门口新建的公园真不错’,在右图,公园的数量从
2020 年的 406 座上升到 2022 年的 670 座”。这些主干内容可以一眼锁定。
首段总结句的核心:概括图画背后主题
大家思考一下:为什么公园健身区有运动的人?为什么公园数量逐年
增加?个人觉得,切入点可以是:①青少年的户外活动;②城市公共设施
的改善;③环境保护与绿色城市……
总而言之,各位同学将首段的写作思路牢记心中,并积累本教程后面
的各类模板句,我相信“写作难”的难题便会迎刃而解!
61. 首段总起句
模板句一
In the drawing lies an enlightening scene: (描述图片).
这幅图画中有一个启发性的场景:(描述图片)。
模板句二
From the drawing springs a philosophical scene: (描述图片).
这幅图画中涌现出一个哲理性的场景:(描述图片)。
模板句三
The drawing gives a telling glimpse into (主题). Specifically, (描述图片).
这幅图画让人们对(主题)有清晰的了解。具体而言,(描述图片)。
模板句四
The drawing offers a revealing snapshot of (主题). Specifically, (描述图
片).
这幅图画清楚地揭示了(主题)。具体而言,(描述图片)。
学长点睛
spring from:句中介词提前、部分倒装,整个短语表示“产生于”。
give a telling glimpse into sth.:telling 作形容词,意为“有力的”或“说
明问题的”。整个表达是指提供了有力的、一瞥见真相的观察或感受,
能揭示某个事物的本质或深层含义。
offer a revealing snapshot:revealing 作形容词,意为“揭示性的”或“暴
露真相的”。snapshot 读为/ˈsnæpˌʃɒt/, 作名词,意为“快照”。整个
表达是指提供了揭示性很强的快照,能展示事物的关键或深层细节。
7模板句五
Given above is a contemplative drawing, in which (描述图片).
上面所给的是一幅发人深省的图画,其中(描述图片)。
模板句六
Presented above is an introspective drawing, in which (描述图片).
上面展示的是一幅引人内省的图画,其中(描述图片)。
模板句七
What emerges from the drawing is an insightful scene: (描述图片).
从这幅画中浮现出一个富有见解的场景:(描述图片)。
模板句八
Unfolding right before our eyes is an illuminating scene: (描述图片).
展现在我们眼前的是一个启发性的场景:(描述图片)。
学长点睛
contemplative:意为“发人深省的”,与 introspective 是近义词。整个句
子倒装,正常语序应为“A contemplative drawing is given above.”。
emerge from:意为“浮现出”,与 spring from 是近义表达,可以替换使
用。what emerges from the drawing 充当整个句子的主语,整体是名词性
从句。
unfolding right before our eyes:unfold 意为“展开”,整体是倒装句,
正常语序应为“An illuminating scene is unfolding right before our eyes.”。
另外,illuminating 用来描述某个场景具有启迪作用或能够提供深刻见
解,其他类似的形容词包括 enlightening 或 revealing。
82. 首段描述句
区分图片类型:
非对比类 对比类
2009 年真题 2012 年真题
仅仅是呈现了一幅场景 两个人的态度迥乎不同
结论:根据历年的真题,基本可以分为“非对比类”和“对比类”。“非
对比类”呈现没有变量的场景,直接描述即可;“对比类”有关键的变量,
比如时间的变化(可见 2014 年作文真题)、态度的变化等。
图片描述步骤:
①抓主干〔显性抓取,锁定人物身份,即图片中有谁(who),描写主体部分,
即做了什么(what)〕
②补细节〔隐性抓取,把握图片里面的时间、地点、动作或者神态。可以
尝试现在分词(doing)、过去分词(done)、状语成分(with)或者定语从句
(who),简称“ddww结构”,用于描述人物〕
③写句子〔将主干成分与细节成分用地道的英语写出来即可〕
9“ddww 结构”知识延伸
中文例句一 他坐在船上,递给我一瓶水。
现在分词(doing) He, sitting on a boat, extends a bottle of water to me.
过去分词(done) He, seated on a boat, extends a bottle of water to me.
中文例句二 他面带微笑,递给我一瓶水。
状语成分(with) With a smiling face, he extends a bottle of water to me.
定语从句(who) He who smiles broadly extends a bottle of water to me.
图片描述框架:
①非对比类:
✭中文思路:锁定人物身份 + 描写“细节”部分 + 描写“主体”部分
✭语法结构:主语 + ddww结构 + 谓语 + 宾语
②对比类:
✭中文思路:〔共同点有就写,没有就不写〕+〔锁定人物身份一 + 描写“细
节”部分 + 描写“主体”部分〕+ 转折词 + 〔锁定人物身份二 + 描写“细
节”部分 + 描写“主体”部分〕
✭语法结构:〔共同点(When doing)〕+〔主语 + ddww结构 + 谓语〕+
while/whereas +〔主语 + ddww结构 + 谓语〕
(备注*:大家若觉得比较抽象、难理解,不妨看后面展示的历年真题样例。)
总而言之,通过比较“非对比类”和“对比类”可以发现:“非对比
类”×2=“对比类”。基本上只要掌握“非对比类”的描述框架,就等于
掌握了“对比类”(备注*:2024 年多了简单的图表描述,大家移步图表类
作文模板积累即可,总体的图画描述套路框架仍然适用)。
10①非对比类
真题样例一
2009年真题
1. 抓主干:一群人完全沉浸于互联网的虚拟世界中。
2. 补细节:(被巨大蛛网分割的)一群人完全沉浸于互联网的虚拟世界中(放
弃人际交往)。
3. 写句子:A group of individuals, isolated by a vast spiderweb, find themselves
completely engrossed in the virtual realm of the Internet, forsaking interpersonal
communication.(23词)
学长点睛
be isolated by:意为“被……隔离”,用于表示由于某个原因而使某人或某
物与其他人或物分开,近义表达beseparated by。句子中isolated 作非谓语成
分,修饰前面的主语,提供额外的信息。
find sb. engrossed insth.:意为“发现某人全神贯注于某事”,近义表达有find
sb. absorbed insth.,find sb. immersed in sth.或者find sb.engaged in sth.等。
forsake:意为“放弃”,可以适当用于替换give up。例句:Many traditional
practices have been forsaken in thewake ofmodernization(. 随着现代化的推进,
许多传统习俗已被放弃。)
11真题样例二
2010年真题
1. 抓主干:文化火锅包含了美味又营养的菜肴。
2. 补细节:(冒着诱人的蒸气的)文化火锅包含了美味又营养的菜肴(其中包
含莎士比亚、功夫、爱因斯坦和京剧等)。
3. 写句子:A cultural hot pot, generating a tempting mist of steam, encompasses
delicious and nutritious cuisine, ranging from Shakespeare, kung fu, Einstein to
Peking Opera.(24词)
学长点睛
tempting:作形容词,意为“诱人的”,用于描述某物极具吸引力,使人渴
望。近义词有alluring 或者enticing。例句:The temptingprospect oftaxcuts has
swayed many businesses to support the new policy.(减税的诱人前景使许多企
业支持这项新政策。)
encompass:作动词,意为“包含”或“包括”,强调某事物包含或涵盖广
泛的范围或多种元素,可以适当用于替换 include。例句:The curriculum
encompasses awide rangeof subjects.(课程涵盖了广泛的科目。)
12真题样例三
2011年真题
1. 抓主干:两个人随意扔垃圾到湖面。
2. 补细节:(坐在船上的)两个人随意扔垃圾到(垃圾早已堆积如山的)湖面。
3. 写句子:A couple of individuals, seated aboard a boat, casually throw rubbish
into the lake, already burdened with an overwhelming accumulation of rubbish.
(22词)
学长点睛
beburdened with:意为“被……压得不堪重负”,近义表达be loaded with,
be weighed down with 或者 be overwhelmed with 等。例句:The company is
burdened with heavydebts.(该公司负债累累。)
overwhelming:作形容词,意为“压倒性的”或者“难以抗拒的”,形容某
物非常强大或数量庞大,几乎无法应对。近义词有overpowering、irresistible
或者tremendous 等,常见搭配有an overwhelming majorityof(绝大多数的)。
an accumulation of:意为“大量的”,强调大量事物的聚集或积累,近义表
达acollection of,abuildup of或者a mass of等。
13真题样例四
2013年真题
1. 抓主干:绝大多数的大学毕业生纠结不已地做选择。
2. 补细节:(站在关键的人生十字路口的)绝大多数的毕业生纠结不已地做选
择(是求职、考研、出国还是创业)。
3. 写句子:Anoverwhelming majority ofuniversitygraduates,standing at a critical
life crossroads, find themselves torn between seeking employment, pursuing
advanced degrees, studying overseas andventuring into entrepreneurship(. 27词)
学长点睛
find sb. torn between:这里的 find 是一个使役动词,意思是发现、察觉某人
处于某种状态。torn 是tear 的过去分词,起形容词的作用,用来描述主语的
状态。整个短语意思是被拉扯在两个(或多个)选择之间,无法轻易做出决
定。相近的地道表达有 observe sb. struggling with a choice between 和 see sb.
caught in adilemmabetween。
venture into:表示冒险进入某个领域或尝试新的事物,通常带有不确定性或
风险。例句:Venturing into the unknown is a necessary step for innovation and
personal growth.(冒险进入未知领域是创新和个人成长的必要步骤。)
14真题样例五
2015年真题
1. 抓主干:四名青少年对美食视而不见,也不进行面对面的交流。
2. 补细节:(沉浸在智能手机的迷人世界中的)四名青少年对(摆在面前的)
美食视而不见,也不进行面对面的交流。
3. 写句子:Four adolescents, glued to the captivating world of their smartphones,
ignore the delicious cuisine spread out before them and steer clear of face-to-face
interactions.(24词)
学长点睛
be glued to:在句子中作形容词性短语,描述主语的状态,这个短语的字面
意思是“被粘在某物上”,引申为“全神贯注于某物”。近义表达有be absorbed
in或者be fixated on等。
spread out:意为“展开”,在句中是过去分词短语,作后置定语修饰cuisine。
steer clear of:意为“回避”,steer(驾驶或引导)+ clear(清楚的、没有障
碍的)+ of(介词),即“引导自己远离某个没有障碍的区域”。这个短语
的字面意思是驾驶或引导自己远离障碍或危险,隐喻为在生活中避免接触某
些人或事物以避免麻烦或危险。
15真题样例六
2018年真题
1. 抓主干:一位大学生陷入了两难的抉择境地。
2. 补细节:(坐在电脑前盯着选课系统的)一位大学生陷入了两难的抉择境地:
(是选创新且具有挑战性的课程,还是选只需做少量作业就能得高分的简单
课程)。
3. 写句子:A university student, sitting in front of a computer and staring at the
course selection system, is in a dilemma of whether to enroll in an innovative and
challenging course or an easier one that entails minimal homework and promises
high grades.(42词)
学长点睛
stare at:意为“盯着、凝视”,近义表达有gazeat、look intentlyat 或者fix one’s
eyes on。
bein adilemma:意为“进退两难”,可以与be ina quandary 互换使用。
entail:意为“需要、包含”,近义表达有 involve 和 necessitate 等,可用于
替换 require。例句:Addressing climate change entails adopting sustainable
practices. (应对气候变化需要采取可持续的做法。)
16真题样例七
2023年真题
1. 抓主干:一位老人自豪地说,龙舟赛在我们村越来越受欢迎了。
2. 补细节:一位老人(沉迷于龙舟竞渡的壮观场面和人头攒动的盛况)自豪地
说,龙舟赛在我们村越来越受欢迎了。
3. 写句子:Anelderly man,captivated bya spectacular scene ofdragon boat racing
and a massive gathering of people, proudly states that the racing has enjoyed
growing popularity in ourvillage.(30词)
学长点睛
be captivated by:表示被某事物迷住或吸引住,在句中是过去分词短语,作
状语使用,描述主语an elderly man 的状态。近义表达有befascinated by,be
enchanted by或者be charmed by等。
spectacular:表示“壮观的、精彩的”,近义词有magnificent 或者breathtaking
等,可以替换使用。
a massivegathering:gather 作动词时,意为“聚集”;变成名词 gathering,
则意为“集会”。当要表达“人群聚集”或者“人头攒动”,我们除了用a crowd
ofpeople 和asea ofpeople,也可以尝试 amassivegathering ofpeople。
17真题样例八
2024年真题
1. 抓主干:在左图,年轻男子表示家门口新建的公园真不错,在右图,公园的
数量从2020年的406座上升到 2022年的670座。
2. 补细节:在左图,(看到一些人在公园健身区做运动的)年轻男子表示家门
口新建的公园真不错。在右边的图表,公园数量从 2020 年的 406 座上升到
2022年的670座。
3. 写句子:In the left picture, a young man who observes people exercising in the
park’s fitness area comments on how wonderful the newly built park near his
home is.In the right chart, thenumber of parks has increased from 406 in 2020 to
670in 2022.(46词)
学长点睛
今年首次考了图表,但是图表难度不大。只需要在图画描述(先主干、再细
节、后句子的步骤)之后,再进行图表描述即可。因为图表描述刚刚开先河,
所以按照由易到难、循序渐进的模式,近几年图表描述相对来说不会太难,
一般考察也会偏向“一直增加”或者“直线下降”等单向趋势。因此,这一
部分内容不会成为大家作文首段的绊脚石。
18②对比类
真题样例一
2012年真题
a. 抓主干:左边的人惊呼全完了,然而右边的人则说幸好还有点。
b. 补细节:(看到瓶子被打翻时),(面露沮丧的)左边的人惊呼全完了,然
而(面露微笑的)右边的人则说幸好还有点。
c. 写句子:When seeing an overturned bottle, the person on the left, bearing a
discouraged expression, exclaims it is a complete loss, while the other person on
theright,wearing asmile,remarks that there is still someleft.(37词)
学长点睛
bear adiscouraged expression:bear 在这里的意思是“带有”或“显示出”,
discouraged 意为“泄气的;心灰意冷的”。整个短语可以理解为“面露沮丧”
或“黯然神伤”。除此之外,还可以使用with disappointment etched across one’s
face这一表达,显得更为生动和高级。
exclaim:意为“(因惊讶、高兴、恐惧等)大声说出”。
wear asmile:此处,wear 意为“流露,面带,呈现(某种神态)”。如果想
要表达神态“面带微笑”就可以用这个表达,除此之外,还可以使用 smile
broadly,sport a smile或者be accompanied byaradiating smile等。
19真题样例二
2014年真题
a. 抓主干:在左边,一位母亲握着女儿的手,然而在右边,这位已年迈的母亲
被其长大成人的孩子搀扶着。
b. 补细节:在左边,(面带笑容的)一位母亲握着女儿的手,然而在右边,(三
十年后),(笑容洋溢的)年迈母亲被其长大成人的女儿搀扶着。
c. 写句子:On the left side, a mother, smiling broadly, grasps the hands of her
daughter, while on the right side, the aged mother, with a beaming face, is
supported byher matured offspringafter three decades.(35词)
学长点睛
beaming:动词 “beam” 的现在分词形式,这里用作形容词,这个词在这
里的意思是“喜气洋溢的;面带微笑的”。它通常用来形容一个人脸上带着
非常明亮和开心的笑容。另外,beam 作动词时,意为“满脸笑容”。例句:
Shewas beaming withpride.(她满脸洋溢着自豪的笑容。)
matured offspring:matured 是动词mature的过去分词形式,用作形容词,意
为“长大成人的、成熟的”。offspring 意为“子女;后代”。
20真题样例三
2016年真题
a. 抓主干:在左图,父亲要求儿子专心学习,然而在右图,父亲为儿子树立了
榜样。
b. 补细节:在左图,(沉迷于看电视的)父亲要求儿子专心学习,然而,在右
图,(勤奋工作的)父亲为儿子树立了榜样。
c. 写句子:Thefather in theleft picture,indulging in watchingTV,requests his sonto
dedicate himself to his studies, while the other father in the right picture who
works diligently sets an exampleforhis son.(36词)
学长点睛
indulge in:indulge 作动词,意思是“纵容;放任;沉溺”,整个短语表示某
人沉浸在某个活动中,通常带有不自制的意味。近义表达有beengrossed in、
beabsorbed in、beimmersed in 或者bepreoccupied with。
dedicate oneself to sth.:dedicate 是动词,意思是“献身;致力于”,整个表
达表示某人把自己全身心投入到某个活动或目标中。近义表达有 throw
oneself tosth.或者commit oneselfto sth.等。
set an exampleforsb.:该短语可与be aguiding light for sb.,bea rolemodel for
sb.或者 lead byexampleforsb.等替换使用。
21真题样例四
2017年真题
a. 抓主干:在左图,男孩夸耀着他的大量藏书,然而在右图,另一个男孩争取
在一年内读完二十本书。
b. 补细节:在左图,(懒散地躺在椅子上的)男孩夸耀着他的大量藏书,然而
在右图,(端正地坐在凳子上的)另一个男孩争取在一年内读完二十本书。
c. 写句子:The boyinthe left picture,lounging in achair,boasts about his extensive
collection of books, while the other boy in the right picture, sitting squarely on a
stool,strives to finish twenty books within ayear.(38词)
学长点睛
lounge:作动词时意为“懒洋洋地躺或坐”,作名词时表示“休息室”。如
果要表示“无精打采地坐或站”,我们可以用slouch。
boast about:意为“自夸;吹嘘”,近义表达有brag about,showoff(炫耀)
或者proudly speak of(自豪地谈论)等。
squarely:意为“径直地;直截了当地”,倘若图片中要描述“端正地坐着”
和“端正地站着”,我们就可以说sitsquarely 和stand squarely。
striveto dosth.:意为“争取或努力做某事”,近义表达有endeavor to dosth.,
可用于替换作文中的try to dosth.。
22真题样例五
2019年真题
a. 抓主干:右边的成年人说很累想要放弃,然而左边的成年人劝他休息一下后
继续坚持。
b. 补细节:(当爬山时),(面露失望的)右边的成年人说很累想要放弃,然
而(递给他一瓶水的)左边的成年人劝他休息一下后继续坚持。
c. 写 句 子 : When ascending the mountain, the adult on the right, with
disappointment written all over his face, utters his fatigue and desire to quit,
while another adult on the left who extends a bottle of water to him urges him to
persevere after arespite.(44词)
学长点睛
ascend:作动词,意为“攀登;上升”,强调向上移动,尤其是攀登山峰、
楼梯或其他高处。可以用ascend themountain 来替换climb themountain。
urge sb. todosth.:意味“敦促某人做某事”,相近表达有encourage sb.to do
sth.、motivatesb. todosth.或者prompt sb.to dosth.等。
persevere:作动词,意为“坚持;孜孜以求”,常见表达有persevere indoing
sth.,可替换keep doingsth.。
23真题样例六
2020年真题
a. 抓主干:在左图,女孩展现出她及时完成作业的决心,然而在右图,男孩选
择拖延他的作业。
b. 补细节:在左图,(面对大量的工作的)女孩展现出她及时完成作业的决心,
然而在右图,(靠在椅子上的)男孩选择拖延他的作业。
c. 写句子:The girl in the left picture, facing a substantial amount of work,
demonstrates her determination to promptly complete her homework, while the
boy in the right picture, leaning comfortably back in a chair, chooses to
procrastinatehis assignment.(38词)
学长点睛
asubstantial amount of:意为“大量的”,可以根据具体的语境来替换many,
alot of或者alarge amount of。
demonstrateone’s determination todosth.:意为“展示某人做某事的决心”,
可以适当替换bedetermined to dosth.。
procrastinate:意为“拖延”,固定搭配procrastinateonsth.。例句:Students
who consistently procrastinate on their assignments often experience heightened
stress levels.(作业一拖再拖的学生往往会感到压力倍增。)
24真题样例七
2021年真题
a. 抓主干:孩子哀叹很多同学都认为学习中国戏剧很枯燥,然而父亲鼓励他坚
持自己的兴趣。
b. 补细节:(穿着孙悟空戏服的)孩子哀叹很多同学都认为学习中国戏剧很枯
燥,然而(站在一旁、表情平静的)父亲鼓励他坚持自己的兴趣。
c. 写 句 子 : The kid, wearing a Monkey King costume, bemoans that many
classmates deem learning Chinese opera boring, while his father, standing with a
calm expression,encourages himto persist in hisinterest.(31词)
学长点睛
bemoan:意为“哀叹”,像这样关于说话的词还有complain(抱怨)、grumble
(抱怨;嘟囔)、mourn(哀悼)或者 wail(哀号)等,不过每个单词都要
根据具体的意思和语境来使用。
deem sth. boring:sb. + deem + sth.+ adj.是一种“主语 + 动词 + 宾语 + 宾
语补足语”的结构,这种结构用来表达主语对宾语的评价或看法,比如deem
sth. appropriate(认为某事是合适的)。此外,find sth. adj.也是如此。
25真题样例八
2022年真题
a. 抓主干:左边的女孩认为参加与专业无关的讲座没有明显好处,然而右边的
女孩坚称倾听是有好处的。
b. 补细节:(在讨论公告板上的讲座信息时),(微微扬起眉毛的)左边的女
孩认为参加与专业无关的讲座没有明显好处,然而(姿态更加热情的)右边
的女孩坚称倾听是有好处的。
c. 写句子:When discussing the information of a lecture on a bullet board, the girl
on the left, with her eyebrows slightly raised, opines that attending the lecture
unrelated to her major offers no discernible benefits, while the other girl on the
right, standing with a more enthusiastic posture, asserts that it is advantageous to
lend anear.(56词)
学长点睛
discernible:意为“明显的”,通常用于描述某些特征、变化或差异是可以
被注意到或感觉到的,比如 discernibledifferences(明显的差异)。
beadvantageous to:意为“对……有利、有助于”,同义表达有bebeneficial
to,be favorable to,be useful to 或者behelpful to。
lend an ear:字面意思是“借耳朵给别人”,引申为“仔细听取他人的意见”。
26③“ddww 结构”知识拓展
图画描述中的“说”(重要指数: )
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英文单词 中文释义 使用语境
mention 提到 轻描淡写地提到
He casually mentioned the idea.(他随意提到了这个想法。)
state 陈述 正式、明确地说明
She clearly stated her opinion.(她明确地陈述了她的意见。)
utter 发出声音,表达 多用于书面语或正式场合
He uttered the phrase softly.(他轻声说出了这句话。)
assert 断言 坚定地声明
Heasserts his rights firmly.(他坚定地声明他的权利。)
remark 评论 作评论或简短发言
Sheremarked onthe event briefly.(她简要地评论了这件事。)
respond 回应 对某事做出反应
Heresponded with enthusiasm.(他热情地回应了。)
suggest 建议 提出建议
Shesuggested we shouldfollow ourheart.(她建议我们随心而动。)
persuade 说服 试图通过说话使别人同意自己的观点
Hepersuaded her toreconsider. 他劝她重新考虑。
insist 坚持 坚持某种观点或要求,通常是坚定地重复
Sheinsistedonher viewpoint. 她坚持她自己的观点。
27图画描述中的“看”(重要指数: )
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英文单词 中文释义 使用语境
gaze 凝视 长时间地看,通常带有惊讶、爱慕等情感
例句:The young man, gazing at the flickering flames in the fireplace, pondered
his future dreams.
译文:年轻人凝视着壁炉中的火焰,思索着未来的梦想。
stare 盯着看 盯着看,通常带有惊讶或无意识的含义
例句:The child, staring at the toys displayed in the shop window, forgot all
about the bustling street around him.
译文:在热闹的街头,孩子无意识地盯着橱窗里的玩具,完全忘了周围的喧嚣。
observe 观察 细致地观察,通常用于详细了解某事物
例句:The scientist, observing the rare bird in the tranquil forest, meticulously
recorded every detail.
译文:在静谧的森林中,科学家仔细观察着罕见鸟类,记录下每一个细节。
图画描述中的“站”(重要指数: )
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英文单词 中文释义 使用语境
slouch 懒散地站着 站立时身体松弛,姿势不挺拔
例句:The young man, slouching at the busy street corner, waited for his friend.
译文:在繁忙的街角,一个年轻人懒散地站着,等待他的朋友。
hunch over 弯腰驼背站着 站立时背部弯曲,通常是由于疲劳或年龄
例句:The student, hunched over, carefully read a book in the dimly lit library.
译文:在昏暗的图书馆里,一个学生弯腰驼背地站着,仔细阅读书籍。
28prop up 支撑着站着 借助某物支撑站立,例如拄着拐杖。
例句:The patient, propped up by a cane, tried to sit up in the hospital room.
译文:在医院的病房里,一个病人靠在拐杖,努力坐起身来。
lean against 斜靠着 斜靠在某个物体上,例如墙或树
例句:The young woman, leaning against the tree, enjoyed the gentle breeze on
a sunny afternoon in the garden.
译文:在阳光明媚的下午,花园里一个年轻女子斜靠在树上,享受着微风。
stand upright 直立地站着 笔直地站立,通常表示姿态端正
例句:The soldier, standing upright, expressed his pride during the ceremony.
译文:在典礼上,一个士兵直立地站着,表达出他的自豪。
图画描述中的“坐”(重要指数: )
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英文单词 中文释义 使用语境
sit squarely 径直地坐着 笔直地坐着,通常表示姿态端正
例句:She sat squarely in her chair, exuding an air of unshakable confidence.
译文:她端正地坐在椅子上,显得格外自信。
loll 懒洋洋地坐着 放松地坐着,通常是懒洋洋的姿态
例句:He, lolling in the armchair, was enjoying his day off.
译文:他懒洋洋地躺在扶手椅上,享受着今天的休息时间。
recline 半躺半坐 表示一种放松、舒适的姿态
例句:She, reclining on the sofa, was watching her favorite TV show.
译文:她躺在沙发上,正在看她最喜欢的电视节目。
29图画描述中的“神态”(重要指数: )
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如何表达“面带微笑”?
英文表达 中文释义
beam with a smile 洋溢着笑容
例句:The young boy, beaming with a smile, proudly showed off his first-place
trophy to his parents.
译文:小男孩洋溢着笑容,骄傲地向父母展示他的第一名奖杯。
be accompanied by a radiating smile 笑容四射
例句:The mother, accompanied by a radiating smile, brought out a tray of
freshly baked cookies.
译文:母亲笑容四射,拿出一盘刚出炉的饼干。
brim with cheerfulness 满脸笑意
例句:The children, brimming with cheerfulness, ran towards the playground as
soon as the bell rang.
译文:孩子们满脸笑意,一听到铃声就跑向操场。
glow with a smile 笑容洋溢
例句:The bride, glowing with a smile, walked down the aisle to meet her future
husband.
译文:新娘面带笑容,走过走道去迎接她的未来丈夫。
sport a bright smile 带着灿烂的笑容
例句:The teenager, sporting a bright smile, received his diploma on graduation
day.
译文:少年带着灿烂的笑容,在毕业典礼上领取了他的毕业证书。
30如何表达“面露沮丧”?
英文表达 中文释义
seem downhearted 显得情绪低落
例句:The boy, seeming downhearted, walked off the field after his team’s loss.
译文:男孩显得沮丧,在球队失利后走下了球场。
bear a discouraged expression 灰心丧气
例句:The student, bearing a discouraged expression, looked at his report card.
译文:学生面露沮丧,看着他的成绩单。
have a downcast expression 面露沮丧
例句:The girl, having a downcast expression, sat on the bench while the rain
poured down.
译文:女孩面带沮丧,坐在长椅上,雨水倾泻而下。
with disappointment written all overhis face 满脸失望
例句:The contestant, with disappointment written all over his face, watched as
the winner received the trophy.
译文:参赛者满脸失望地看着获胜者领取奖杯。
withdisappointment etched across one’s face 失望之情溢于言表
例句:The artist, with disappointment etched across her face, gazed at the
rejected painting.
译文:艺术家面露失望,凝视着未被选中的画作。
(备注*:“面露沮丧”类的表达在修改后可用于“满心欢喜”,比如“开
心之情溢于言表”可以说 with happiness etched across one’s face。上述的所有
语言、动作和神态都是图画描述的常考点,各位同学按需积累。)
31④图画标题描述(看个人喜好,可写可不写)
我们知道英语一大作文的要求之一是 interpret the implied meaning(解
释中心思想),“图画标题”可以很好地指明中心主题,所以个人觉得,
图画标题能写最好。不过不写也无妨,因为题目没有明确要求,而且我们
可以自行总结中心思想。另外,历年真题有些图画有标题,有些图画没有
标题。不过为了满足大家的需求,我还是提供图画标题描述的思路。
模板句一
Captioned below the drawing/picture is (图画标题), pointing us towards
(主题).
图画下方标注的是(图画标题),这引导我们关注(主题)。
模板句二
Captioned under the drawing/picture is (图画标题) that places emphasis on
(主题).
图画下方标注的是(图画标题),它强调(主题)。
模板句三
Captioned beneath the drawing/picture is ( 图 画 标 题 ) that invites our
attention to (主题).
图画下方标注的是(图画标题),它吸引我们关注(主题)。
模板句四
Captioned at the bottom of the drawing/picture is ( 图 画 标 题 ), which
accords sufficient priority to (主题).
图画下方标注的是(图画标题),它充分重视(主题)。
32真题例句示范
2009 年真题:Captioned below the drawing is the nearness and farness of the
Internet, pointing us towards the paradoxical nature of the Internet.
2010 年真题:Captioned under the drawing is a deliciousand nutritious cultural
hotpot that places emphasis on cultural exchanges.
2011 年真题:Captioned beneath the drawing is the remainder of the journey
that invites our attention to the issue of environmental pollution.
2013 年真题:Captioned at the bottom of the drawing is choosing, which
accords sufficient priority to the role of rational planning.
2014 年真题:Captioned below the drawing is filial piety, pointing us towards
Chinese traditional virtues.
2015 年真题:Captioned under the drawing is a party in the age of cell phones
that places emphasis on the problem of addiction to digital devices.
2016 年真题:Captioned beneath the drawing is leading by example rather
than just making demands that invites our attention to the power of a model.
2017 年真题:Captioned at the bottom of the drawing is having books and
reading books, which accord sufficient priority to effective reading.
2018 年真题:Captioned below the drawing is course selection in progress,
pointing us towards the attribute of overcoming challenges.
2019 年真题:Captioned under the drawing is amid the journey that places
emphasis on the quality of perseverance.
2020 年 真 题 : Captioned beneath the drawing is the habit that invite our
attention to the significance of time organization.
(备注*:如果写了“图画标题描述句”就不用再写“首段总结句”。如果
没有标题,就把重心放在“首段总结句”。)
333. 首段总结句
①积极类主题
模板句一
Apparently, the drawing aims to emphasize the pivotal role of (主题).
显而易见,这幅图画旨在强调(主题)的关键作用。
模板句二
Apparently, the drawing aims to highlight the underlying value of (主题).
显而易见,这幅图画旨在突出(主题)的潜在价值。
模板句三
Apparently, the drawing seeks to cast light on the fundamental worth of (主
题).
显而易见,这幅图画试图阐明(主题)的根本价值。
模板句四
Apparently, the drawing seeks to shed light on the immense significance of
(主题).
显而易见,这幅图画试图揭示(主题)的巨大意义。
学长点睛
apparently:可替换为 plainly,patently,evidently 或 manifestly。
drawing:可替换为 picture 或者 cartoon。
pivotal:意为“关键性的”,可以将 pivotal 与 pivot(支点)联系起来。
cast light on:字面意思是“投射光线”,引申为使某事物变得清晰或易
于理解,类似于揭示或解释。近义表达 shed light on,可替换使用。
34模板句五
Apparently, the drawing is intended to bring the intrinsic value of (主题) to
the forefront.
显而易见,这幅图画旨在将(主题)的内在价值凸显出来。
模板句六
Apparently, the drawing is intended to shine a spotlight on the vital
importance of (主题).
显而易见,这幅图画旨在突出(主题)的重要性。
模板句七
Apparently, the drawing attempts to attach great weight to the essential role
of (主题).
显而易见,这幅图画试图让我们重视(主题)的重要作用。
模板句八
Apparently, the drawing attempts to invite reflection on why (主题) truly
matters.
显而易见,这幅画试图引发人们思考为什么(主题)如此重要。
学长点睛
bring sth. to the forefront:意为“把某事物带到最前面或最重要的位置”。
单词 forefront 指的是最前面或最重要的部分,强调了某事物的重要性或
优先性。同义表达有 prioritize 或者 emphasize 等。
shine a spotlight on:字面意思是“用聚光灯照亮”,引申为特别关注或
突出某事物。这个表达强调了对某事物的集中注意,与 shed light on 或
者 cast light on 为近义表达。
35②消极类主题
模板句一
Apparently, the drawing aims to unravel the pivotal issue of (主题).
显而易见,这幅图画旨在揭开(主题)这一关键问题。
模板句二
Apparently, the drawing aims to pinpoint the underlying issue of (主题).
显而易见,这幅图画旨在准确指出(主题)的潜在问题。
模板句三
Apparently, the drawing seeks to dive deep into the central issue of (主题).
显而易见,这幅图画旨在深入探讨(主题)的核心问题。
模板句四
Apparently, the drawing seeks to bring to light the core issue related to (主
题).
显而易见,这幅图画旨在揭示关于(主题)的核心问题。
学长点睛
unravel:字面意思是“解开(纠结的线、绳等)”,引申为“揭开(谜
团、难题等)”,这个单词源自于解开缠绕的线团或结的动作,意思与
unveil 和 disclose 等相近。
dive deep into sth.:字面意思是“深潜到某物中”,引申为“深入研究
或探讨某事”,这个表达源自于潜水员深潜到海底的动作。
bring to light sth.:字面意思是“将某物带到光明中来”,引申为“揭示、
曝光某事”。
36模板句五
Apparently, the drawing is intended to throw a spotlight on the key problem
of (主题).
显而易见,这幅图画旨在聚焦(主题)的关键问题。
模板句六
Apparently, the drawing is intended to lay bare the crux of the matter
concerning (主题).
显而易见,这幅图画旨在揭示与(主题)有关的核心问题。
模板句七
Apparently, the drawing attempts to underscore the fundamental issue
regarding (主题).
显而易见,这幅图画旨在强调有关(主题)的根本问题。
模板句八
Apparently, the drawing attempts to cut to the heart of the problem
surrounding (主题).
显而易见,这幅图画旨在切中(主题)问题的核心。
学长点睛
lay bare:意为“揭示”或“暴露”,比如 lay bare the truth(揭示真相)。
crux:意为“(难题或问题的)关键;症结”。它通常指问题、争论或
情况中的关键点或最难解决的部分。
cut to the heart:字面意思是“切入心脏”,引申义为“切中要害、触及
核心”。
37(2)如何写好第二段?
了解段落布局
在第一段中,我们既描述了图片,又总结了主题。主题分为两类,即
积极类(……很重要)和消极类(……有危害)。第二段就是要跟进第一
段的总结内容,并作进一步阐释。如果是积极类(……很重要),那么我
们可以在第二段写某主题重要的原因或者是某主题的好处;如果是消极类
(……有危害),那么我们可以在第二段写某主题有害的原因或者是某主
题的坏处。不过从某种程度上而言,在论证某主题的好处其实也算是侧面
地论证某主题重要的原因。然后,我们来看看第二段的布局:
语料学习思路
紧接着,只要大量积累“次段总起句”和“次段语料库”,遇到任何话
题的作文也能做到“有话可写”。因为历年的考试出题主要围绕着四大类:
个人品质类、精神文化类、科技产品类和环境污染类,所以模板功能句也
围绕着这四大类型展开。学习思路是:熟悉词义→句型句式→短语表达。
首先:熟悉词义 其次:句型句式 最后:短语表达
(记忆所有单词 (运用整个句子 (积累所有短语
的意思和读音) 的句型和框架) 的搭配和用法)
38我们以下面这个句子为例:
例 句 : When nurturing confidence, we are allowed to maximize our
potential and navigate real-life challenges that give us an edge in the job
market.(个人品质类)
译文:当我们培养自信时,我们能够最大限度地发挥潜力并应对现实生
活中的挑战,这使我们在就业市场中占据优势。
①首先:
从
单词 读音 意思 句
子
中
nurture /ˈnɜːrtʃər/ 培养
找
出
maximize /ˈmæksɪmaɪz/ 最大化 不
认
识
navigate /ˈnævɪɡeɪt/ 导航;驾驭 的
单
词
edge /ɛdʒ/ 优势
②其次:
When nurturing(品质), we are allowed to(做某事)and(做某事)that
give us an edge in(领域). 提炼万能句型句式
(提炼出来的句型句式可用于应对各种各样的话题作文,写作文时只需要
完成“填空游戏”。以“创新思维”的话题为例:When nurturing a culture
of innovation, we are allowed to experiment with new ideas and embrace
risk-taking that give us an edge in the technology industry.)
③最后:
内化短语表达 maximize our potential 和 navigate real-life challenges,为
脑子扩容。当积累到一定量时,你将会蜕变,将会“无往而不胜”。
391. 次段过渡句
①积极类主题
模板句一
In my eyes, the advantages of (主题) are manifold.
在我看来,(主题)的好处是多方面的。
模板句二
In my eyes, (主题) offers a long list of benefits.
在我看来,(主题)的好处多不胜数。
模板句三
In my eyes, there are a myriad of benefits to (主题).
在我看来,(主题)有无数好处。
模板句四
In my eyes, (主题) presents a host of advantages.
在我看来,(主题)有许许多多的好处。
学长点睛
manifold:意为“多种多样的”,词根是 many(多)和 fold(折叠),
因此带有多样、多种的含义。同义词有 various、multiple、diverse 或者
numerous 等。
a myriad of benefits to sth./doing:a myriad of 意为“无数的,极大量的”,
一般情况下可以替换 many 或者 a lot of 等。另外,需注意此处的 to 是
介词,后面可以跟动名词 (doing) 或直接跟名词。
40模板句五
In my eyes, (主题) brings with it a cascade of benefits.
在我看来,(主题)带来了一系列好处。
模板句六
In my eyes, (主题) is packed with a plethora of benefits.
在我看来,(主题)好处多多。
模板句七
In my eyes, (主题) is associated with an array of benefits.
在我看来,(主题)有一系列好处。
模板句八
In my eyes, there are several explanations as to the perks of (主题).
在我看来,关于(主题)的好处有几种解释。
学长点睛
a cascade of:cascade 的原意是“小瀑布;层叠”,在这里用来形象地
表示“好处”像瀑布一样接连不断地到来。
a plethora of:plethora 作名词,意为“过多;过量;过剩”。plethora
最初在医学上指的是血液过多的状态,后来引申为任何形式的过量或过
剩。
an array of:array 原意是“数组;阵列;大量”。an array of 这个表达
用来描述一系列、多种多样的事物。它强调数量和种类的丰富性。理解
这个表达时,可以联想到 a wide range of 或 a variety of 这样的短语,它
们都表示某事物有很多不同的种类或选项。
41②消极类主题
模板句一
In my eyes, (主题) is fraught with potential pitfalls.
在我看来,(主题)充满了潜在的隐患。
模板句二
In my eyes, there can be potential downsides to (主题).
在我看来,(主题)可能有潜在的弊端。
模板句三
In my eyes, (主题) is accompanied by a set of challenges.
在我看来,(主题)伴随着一系列挑战。
模板句四
In my eyes, (主题) involve several undesirable consequences.
在我看来,(主题)会带来一些不良后果。
学长点睛
be fraught with:意为“充满、充斥着(通常是问题、困难、风险等)”,
形容某事物带来了许多困难或问题,通常具有负面的意味。近义表达有
be laden with 和 be rife with。
potential downsides to:在此处,to 是介词,后面可以跟动名词 (doing) 或
直接跟名词。
be accompanied by:意为“伴随着;附带着”,描述某事物同时出现或
伴随着另一事物。Technological advancements are often accompanied by
profound societal progress.(技术进步往往伴随着深刻的社会进步。)
42模板句五
In my eyes, (主题) comes with its fair share of disadvantages.
在我看来,(主题)有其自身的缺点。
模板句六
In my eyes, (主题) is responsible for a range of adverse outcomes.
在我看来,(主题)会导致一系列不利结果。
模板句七
In my eyes, the possible drawbacks associated with (主题) are daunting.
在我看来,(主题)可能带来的弊端令人生畏。
模板句八
In my eyes, the detrimental effects of ( 主 题 ) are already cooked into
people’s life.
在我看来,(主题)的不利影响已经融入人们的生活。
学长点睛
fair share of:意为“相当大的一部分”,近义表达有 a significant portion
of(相当大的一部分)或 a considerable amount of(相当多的)等,在一
定语境中可以替换使用。
be responsible for:可以用来表示导致某种结果或后果的原因在于某个行
动、事件或情况,可替换 cause、result in 或者 lead to 等。
be cooked into:这个短语运用了比喻手法,类似于烹饪中将多种食材混
合在一起的过程,使它们成为一个统一的整体。因此,这个短语旨在强
调某物已经被融合或整合在一起,不可分割地成为整体的一部分。
432. 次段语料库
次段语料分为积极类和消极类,但是可以不用都背。因为图画作文具
体写积极内容还是消极内容,主要看提炼的主题是什么!先看 2011 年真题
(左图),从图中可得知“有人往湖面上随意乱丢垃圾”,进而可提炼出
主题“环境污染有危害”,同样也可以反话正说,“保护环境很重要”。
随后再看 2012 年真题(右图),从图中可得知“一个人很沮丧,另一个人
很开朗”,进而可提炼出主题“积极乐观很重要”或者是“消极心态有危
害”。因此,图片反映的现象一般都可以从积极和消极两个方面进行阐释。
2011 年真题 2012 年真题
这边建议:背诵并内化个人品质类积极类语料+精神文化类积极类语
料+科技产品类积极类和消极类语料+环境污染类积极类和消极类语料。
其次,语料库基本包含 5 大板块,即英文语料、参考译文、重点短语、真题
套用和替换语料。每一句英文语料都有挖空的内容需要填写,大家如果不知道如
何填写可以看真题套用。
最后,大家要是有时间的话,可以把积极类语料和消极类语料都看一
下,因为里面有比较丰富的表达和句型。如果能够融会贯通,那么你离写
作高分就近在咫尺啦~
44①积极类主题
a. 个人品质类
1.1 克服自身局限,实现脱颖而出 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:Armed with a strong sense of (主题), individuals are motivated
to push beyond their (主题) limitations and break free from the shackles of
(主题), thus excelling at/in (主题).
参考译文:拥有强烈的(主题)意识,个人会被激励去突破自身(主题)的
局限,摆脱(主题)的束缚,从而在(主题)方面脱颖而出。
重点短语:
bearmed with 拥有
push beyond limitations 突破局限
break free from the shackles of ... 摆脱……的束缚
excel at (常+doing)/in (常+sth.) 在……上脱颖而出
真题套用:
2013年真题(合理规划很重要)
Armed with a strong sense of rational planning (合理规划), individuals
are motivated to push beyond their cognitive (认知 的 ) limitations and
break free from the shackles of disorganization (无组织), thus excelling at
attaining their goals effectively (有效实现目标).
2016年真题(以身作则很重要)
Armed with a strong sense of leading by example (以身作则), individuals
are motivated to push beyond their behavioral (行为的) limitations and
45break free from the shackles of hypocrisy ( 虚 伪 ), thus excelling at
fostering a culture of responsibility (培养负责任的文化).
2020年真题(时间管理很重要)
Armed with a strong sense of efficient time allocation(有效的时间分配),
individuals are motivated to push beyond their mental (思维的) limitations
and break free from the shackles of procrastination (拖延), thus excelling
at accomplishing their tasks (完成任务).
2024年真题(户外运动很重要)
Armed with a strong sense of fitness exercise (健身锻炼), individuals are
motivated to push beyond their physical (身体的) limitations and break
free from the shackles of sedentary pursuits (久坐不动), thus excelling at
embracing a lifestyle of vitality (拥抱充满活力生活).
替换语料①:By nurturing a growing sense of (主题), individuals can
challenge themselves to push through their (主题) barriers and confront the
obstacle of(主题), thus distinguishing themselves from others in (主题).
参考译文:通过培养日益增强的(主题)意识,个人能够挑战自己,突破
(主题)障碍,并应对(主题)障碍,从而在(主题)方面脱颖而出。
替 换 语 料 ② : With a heightened sense of ( 主 题 ), individuals are
empowered to unleash their latent potential and clear the hurdle of (主
题), thus making themselves stand out in (主题).
参考译文:随着(主题)意识的增强,个人能够释放其潜在的潜力,清除
(主题)障碍,从而在(主题)方面脱颖而出。
461.2 释放正向磁场,吸引同频伙伴 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:Individuals, if equipped with (主题), will be capable of (主题)
and hence raising personal vibrations. Accordingly, (主题) will heighten
their likelihood of exuding positive vibes that draw like-minded peers.
参考译文:如果个人具备(主题),他们将能够(主题),从而提升个人能
量。因此,(主题)将增加他们散发正能量的可能性,从而吸引志同道合的
伙伴。
重点短语:
raise personal vibrations 提升个人能量
heighten the likelihood of ... 增加……的可能性
exude positive vibes 散发正能量
draw like-minded peers 吸引志同道合的人
真题套用:
2012年真题(积极心态很重要)
Individuals, if equipped with an optimistic mindset (积极思维), will be
capable of becoming more resilient (变得更有韧性) and hence raising
personal vibrations. Accordingly, a positive attitude (积 极 态 度 ) will
heighten their likelihood of exuding positive vibes that draw like-minded
peers.
2020年真题(时间管理很重要)
Individuals, if equipped with effective time management skills (有效的时
间管理技巧), will be capable of enhancing their productivity (加强生产
47力 ) and hence raising personal vibrations. Accordingly, efficient time
allocation (高效的时间分配) will heighten their likelihood of exuding
positive vibes that draw like-minded peers.
2022年真题(学习课外知识很重要)
Individuals, if equipped with a habit of acquiring extracurricular
knowledge (获取课外知识的习惯), will be capable of boosting their
knowledge base (提升知识基础) and hence raising personal vibrations.
Accordingly, a dedication to extracurricular learning (热衷于课外学习)
will heighten their likelihood of exuding positive vibes that draw
like-minded peers.
2024年真题(户外运动很重要)
Individuals, if equipped with a regular exercise routine (规律的运动作
息), will be capable of enhancing personal charm (加强个人魅力) and
hence raising personal vibrations. Accordingly, frequent physical exercise
(经常锻炼) will heighten their likelihood of exuding positive vibes that
draw like-minded peers.
替换语料:Should individuals nurture (主题), they will be equipped to (主
题 ) and tap into their inner energy. Consequently, (主 题 ) boosts the
chances of radiating positive vibes that bring together like-minded peers.
参考译文:如果个人培养(主题),他们将能够(主题)并挖掘内心
能力。因此,(主题)会增加散发积极能量的机会,吸引志同道合的
人聚集在一起。
481.3 超越舒适区域,提升个人韧性 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:Individuals endowed with an elevated sense of(主题) are capable of
transcending their comfort zone and ( 主 题 ), thereby propelling themselves
towards improved (主题)flexibility and resilience.
参考译文:具有高度(主题)意识的人能够超越他们的舒适区,并(主题),
从而推动他们提升自身的(主题)灵活性和韧性。
重点短语:
beendowed with 被赋予;具有
transcend comfort zone 超越舒适区
propel sb. towards 推动某人朝着
flexibility and resilience 灵活性和韧性
真题套用:
2012年真题(积极心态很重要)
Individuals endowed with an elevated sense of optimism (乐观态度) are capable
of transcending their comfort zone and confronting challenges head-on (直面挑
战 ), thereby propelling themselves towards improved mental ( 心 理 上 的 )
flexibilityand resilience.
2016年真题(以身作则很重要)
Individuals endowed with an elevated sense of leading by example (以身作则)
are capable of transcending their comfort zone and setting a positive example
(树立积极的榜样), thereby propelling themselves towards improved behavioral
(行为上的) flexibilityand resilience.
492017年真题(勤奋阅读很重要)
Individuals endowed with an elevated sense of literary engagement (文学参与)
are capable of transcending their comfort zone and immersing themselves in
diverse perspectives (沉浸于多样视角), thereby propelling themselves towards
improved mental and intellectual (心智上的)flexibilityand resilience.
2018年真题(敢于挑战很重要)
Individuals endowed with an elevated sense of courage (勇敢) are capable of
transcending their comfort zone and embracing formidable challenges (拥抱艰
巨挑战), thereby propelling themselves towards improved physical and mental
(身心上的) flexibilityand resilience.
2019年真题(坚持不懈很重要)
Individuals endowed with an elevated sense of unwavering perseverance (坚毅
不拔) are capable of transcending their comfort zone and maintaining their
efforts in the face of adversity (在逆境中保持努力), thereby propelling
themselves towards improved physical and mental (身心上的) flexibility and
resilience.
替换语料①:Individuals who are imbued with a refined sense of (主题) can
venture outside their comfort zone and (主题), thereby pushing themselves
towards improved (主题)flexibility and resilience.
替换语料②:Individuals, if instilled with an increased sense of (主题),
possess the capacity to step outside their comfort zone and (主题), thereby
rendering themselves more (主题) flexibleandresilient.
501.4 培养能力技能,助力立足社会 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
英 文 语 料 : Through the cultivation of ( 主 题 ), individuals can keep
themselves ( 主 题 ) stimulated while weaving ( 主 题 ) into their
versatile skill set, which will facilitate them in gaining a foothold in (主题).
参考译文:通过培养(主题),人们能保持对(主题)的积极刺激,并
将(主题)融入多样的技能中,这将有助于他们在(主题)中站稳脚跟。
重点短语:
weave ... into ... 将……融入到……
facilitate sb. in doing sth. 促进某人做某事
versatile skill set 技能组合
gain a foothold in ... 在……中站稳脚跟
真题套用:
2017年真题(勤奋阅读很重要)
Through the cultivation of reading habits (阅读习惯), individuals can
keep themselves behaviorally and intellectually (行为上的和智力上的)
stimulated while weaving comprehension and analytical skills (理解和分
析能力) into their versatile skill set, which will facilitate them in gaining a
foothold in their professional endeavors (职业发展).
2019年真题(坚持不懈很重要)
Through the cultivation of persistence (坚持不懈), individuals can keep
themselves mentally and physically (身心的) stimulated while weaving
dedication (专注) into their versatile skill set, which will facilitate them in
gaining a foothold in their professional pursuits (职业追求).
51 替换语料①:When fostering (主题), individuals are better positioned to
develop (主题) and (主题), essential attributes for gaining an competitive
edge in (主题).
参考译文:在培养(主题)时,个人更有条件发展(主题)和(主题),
这些是在(主题)上获得竞争优势的关键品质。
2021年真题(坚持热爱很重要)
When fostering a commitment to passion ( 坚 持 热 爱 的 决 心 ),
individuals are better positioned to develop unwavering determination
(坚定不移的决心) and exceptional self-mastery (卓越的自我管理能
力 ), essential attributes for gaining an competitive edge in their
professional excellence (职业卓越).
替换语料②:Embracing an attitude of (主题) allows individuals to
stimulate their development of (主题) and hone their core competencies
that will set the stage for them to thrive in (主题).
参考译文:拥抱(主题)的态度使个人能够激发(主题)的发展,并磨练
他们的核心能力,这将为他们在(主题)中茁壮成长奠定基础。
2024年真题(户外运动很重要)
Embracing an attitude of exercising frequently ( 频 繁 锻 炼 ) allows
individuals to stimulate their development of resilience and
self-discipline (韧性和自律) and hone their core competencies that will
set the stage for them to thrive in a demanding professional
environment (在苛刻的职业环境中).
521.5 人人身体力行,培养正确风尚 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:From a wider perspective, were individuals to exemplify the
principles of (主题), they would be empowered to cultivate an ethos of (主
题 ). Ultimately, it is this very ethos that would function as a powerful
catalyst for steering the whole society towards (主题).
参考译文:从更广阔的视角来看,如果人人都能成为(主题)原则的典
范,他们就有能力培养(主题)的精神风气。最终,正是这种精神风气
将作为一种强大的催化剂,引导整个社会朝向(主题)发展。
重点短语:
exemplify the principles of ... 体现……的原则
be empowered to 能够
cultivate an ethos of ... 培养……的精神风气
function as a powerful catalyst 发挥强大的催化作用
steer ... towards ... 使……朝向……发展
真题套用:
2020年真题(时间管理很重要)
From a wider perspective, were individuals to exemplify the principles of
effective time management (有效的时间管理), they would be empowered
to cultivate an ethos of efficiency and punctuality ( 效 率 与 守 时 ).
Ultimately, it is this very ethos that would function as a powerful catalyst
for steering the whole society towards greater productivity and
coordination (更大的生产力和协调).
532021年真题(坚持热爱很重要)
From a wider perspective, were individuals to exemplify the principles of
unwavering passion (坚持热爱), they would be empowered to cultivate an
ethos of dedication (专注). Ultimately, it is this very ethos that would
function as a powerful catalyst for steering the whole society towards
greater innovation and collective progress (加强创新和集体进步).
2022年真题(学习课外知识很重要)
From a wider perspective, were individuals to exemplify the principles of
extracurricular learning ( 课 外 学 习 ), they would be empowered to
cultivate an ethos of intellectual curiosity (求知欲). Ultimately, it is this
very ethos that would function as a powerful catalyst for steering the whole
society towards greater enlightenment (更大的启蒙).
2024年真题(户外运动很重要)
From a wider perspective, were individuals to exemplify the principles of
physical exercise (体育锻炼), they would be empowered to cultivate an
ethos of vitality and vibrancy (活力与生机). Ultimately, it is this very
ethos that would function as a powerful catalyst for steering the whole
society towards greater fitness and well-being (更大的健康和福祉).
替换语料①:Through a wider lens, were individuals to embody the
values of (主题), they would be inspired to foster a culture of (主题).
Eventually, it is precisely this culture that would serve as a lubricant for
steering the whole society towards (主题).
54b. 精神文化类
1.1 培养相关意识,树立正确价值 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:As a fundamental pillar of (主题) education, (主题) imbues
individuals with a heightened sense of (主题) towards (主题), which will
galvanize them to cultivate appropriate (主题) values.
参考译文:作为(主题)教育的基础支柱,(主题)使个人对(主题)
具有更强烈的 (主题) 意识,这将激励他们培养正确的(主题)价值观。
重点短语:
afundamental pillar 基础支柱
imbue ... with ... 将……灌输到……
a heightened sense of ... 更强烈的……意识
galvanize sb. to do sth. 激励某人做某事
真题套用:
2010年真题(文化交流很重要)
As a fundamental pillar of national (国家的) education, cultural exchange
(文化交流) imbues individuals with a heightened sense of admiration and
appreciation (赏鉴) towards diverse culture (不同的文化), which will
galvanize them to cultivate appropriate cultural (文化的) values.
2014年真题(孝顺很重要)
As a fundamental pillar of moral (道德的) education, filial piety (孝顺)
imbues individuals with a heightened sense of care and responsibility (关
55爱与责任) towards the elderly and the young (长辈与晚辈), which will
galvanize them to cultivate appropriate familial (家庭的) values.
2023年真题(弘扬传统文化很重要)
As a fundamental pillar of national ( 国 家 的 ) education, organizing
traditional cultural events (举办传统文化活动) imbues individuals with
a heightened sense of respect and reverence ( 尊 重 与 敬 意 ) towards
traditional Chinese culture (中国传统文化), which will galvanize them to
cultivate appropriate cultural (文化的) values.
替换语料①:As an essential backbone of (主题) education, (主题)
instills in individuals a growing sense of (主题) towards (主题), which
will motivate them to champion appropriate (主题) values.
替换语料②:As an indispensable component of (主题) education, (主题)
inculcates in individuals a deepening sense of (主题) towards (主题),
which will inspire them to advocate for appropriate (主题) values.
重点短语:
an essential backbone 重要支柱
instill in sb. sth. 给某人灌输某物
motivate sb. to do sth. 激励某人做某事
a dispensable component 不可或缺的组成部分
inculcate in sb. sth. 给某人灌输某物
inspire sb. to do sth. 激励某人做某事
advocate for 倡导
561.2 促进对话沟通,加强深度理解 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:(主题) provides an accessible avenue through which individuals
can maintain constant (主题) dialogue with (主题) while gaining profound
insights into (主题).
参考译文:(主题)提供了便捷的途径,通过这条途径,个人不仅可以
与(主题)保持持续(主题)对话,还可以更深入地了解(主题)。
重点短语:
an accessible avenue 便捷的途径
maintain constant dialogue with ... 与……保持持续对话
gain a deeper insight into sth. 更深入地了解某物
真题套用:
2010年真题(文化交流很重要)
Cultural exchanges (文化 交流 ) provide an accessible avenue through
which individuals can maintain constant cross-cultural ( 跨 文 化 的 )
dialogue with people from diverse backgrounds (来自不同背景的人)
while gaining profound insights into global traditions and customs (全球
的传统和习俗).
2014年真题(孝顺很重要)
Filial piety ( 孝 顺 ) provides an accessible avenue through which
individuals can maintain constant intergenerational (代 际的 ) dialogue
with different generations (不同的世代) while gaining profound insights
57into the moral principles that underpin strong family bonds (支撑强大
家庭纽带的道德原则).
2023年真题(弘扬传统文化很重要)
Engaging with traditional culture (接触传统文化) provides an accessible
avenue through which individuals can maintain constant cultural (文化的)
dialogue with their ancestors through tangible legacies (以有形遗产的形
式与祖先对话) while gaining profound insights into practices and wisdom
passed down through generations (世代相传的实践和智慧).
替换语料①:(主题) offers a pathway for individuals to maintain constant
(主题) dialogue with (主题), so that they can develop a more nuanced
understanding of (主题).
替换语料②:(主题) serves as a conduit for individuals to engage in (主
题) conversation with (主题), during which they facilitate a more refined
understanding of (主题).
重点短语:
offer a pathway 提供途径
develop a more nuanced
发展更细致入微的理解
understanding
serve as a conduit 作为渠道
facilitate a more refined
促进更精细的理解
understanding
581.3 灌输思想观念,积极参与实践 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:(主题) plays a pivotal role in instilling in individuals a nuanced
appreciation for(主题),thus incentivizingthem to involvein (主题).
参考译文:(主题) 在向个人灌输对 (主题) 的细致理解方面发挥着关键作用,
从而激励他们参与 (主题)。
重点短语:
part and parcel of sth. 某物的重要组成部分
incentivizesb. todosth. 激励某人做某事
真题套用:
2010年真题(文化交流很重要)
Cultural exchange (文化交流) plays a pivotal role in instilling in individuals a
nuanced appreciation for diversity (多样性), thus incentivizing them to involve
ininteractions across different cultures (不同文化间的互动).
2014年真题(孝顺很重要)
Filial piety (孝顺) plays a pivotal role in instilling in individuals a nuanced
appreciation for intergenerational harmony (代际和谐), thus incentivizing
them to involvein the cultivation of strong familial bonds (培养牢固的家庭纽
带).
2023年真题(弘扬传统文化很重要)
Promoting traditional culture (弘扬传统文化) plays a pivotal role in instilling
in individuals a nuanced appreciation for rich heritage (文化遗产), thus
incentivizing them to involve in the preservation of these time-honored
traditions forfuture generations (为子孙后代保护这些悠久的传统).
591.4 培养相关能力,促进全面发展 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:By committing to (主题), individuals are permitted to keep
themselves ( 主 题 ) engaged and incorporate ( 主 题 ) into their
versatile skill set. Therefore, it is precisely (主题) that can set the scene for
their comprehensive development.
参考译文:通过致力于(主题),个人能够保持(主题)的投入,并将(主
题)融入他们多样化的技能组合中。因此,正是(主题)为他们的全面发展
奠定了基础。
重点短语:
commit to doing sth. 致力于做某事
bepermitted to 能够
keep sb.engaged 使某人参与
set thescene for 为……奠定基础
comprehensive development 全面发展
真题套用:
2010年真题(文化交流很重要)
By committing to engaging in cultural exchange programs (参与文化交
流项目), individuals are permitted to keep themselves culturally (文化的)
engaged and incorporate cross-cultural understanding (跨文化理解能力)
into their versatile skill set. Therefore, it is precisely diverse cultural
activities (不同的文化活动) that can set the scene for their comprehensive
development.
602014年真题(孝顺很重要)
By committing to practicing filial piety ( 践 行 孝 顺 ), individuals are
permitted to keep themselves ethically (道德的) engaged and incorporate
caregiving abilities and interpersonal skills (护理能力和人际交往能力)
into their versatile skill set. Therefore, it is precisely the practice of filial
piety (尽孝) that can set the scene for their comprehensive development.
2023年真题(弘扬传统文化很重要)
By committing to promoting traditional cultural practices (推广传统文
化习俗), individuals are permitted to keep themselves culturally (文化的)
engaged and incorporate historical research skills and cultural literacy
(历史研究技能和文化素养) into their versatile skill set. Therefore, it is
precisely the preservation of traditional culture (保护传统文化) that can
set the scene for their comprehensive development.
替换语料①:Through the pursuit of (主题), individuals are afforded the
opportunity to stay (主 题 ) engaged and incorporate ( 主 题 ) into their
versatile skill set. Therefore, it is precisely (主题) that can lay a solid
foundation for their all-rounded development.
611.5 做到身体力行,弘扬社会正气 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:Through a wider lens, if every individual were to exemplify the
principles of (主题), they would be better positioned to cultivate a thriving
(主题) milieu. This would, in turn, ignite greater enthusiasm for (主题)
within the broader populace that ultimately steers the whole society towards
(主题).
参考译文:从更广阔的视角来看,如果个人能够体现(主题)的原则,
他们就能更好地营造繁荣的(主题)环境。进而,这会在更广泛的人群
中激发对(主题)的更大热情,最终引导整个社会迈向(主题)。
重点短语:
ignite enthusiasm for ... 激发对……的热情
steer ... towards ... 引导……迈向……
真题套用:
2010年真题(文化交流很重要)
Through a wider lens, if every individual were to exemplify the principles
of promoting cultural exchanges (弘扬文化交流), they would be better
positioned to cultivate a thriving cultural (文化的) milieu. This would, in
turn, ignite greater enthusiasm for cross-cultural engagement (跨文化参
与) within the broader populace that ultimately steers the whole society
towards greater cultural diversity (更大的文化多样性).
2014年真题(孝顺很重要)
Through a wider lens, if every individual were to exemplify the principles
of promoting filial piety (弘扬孝顺), they would be better positioned to
62cultivate a thriving ethical (道德的) milieu. This would, in turn, ignite
greater enthusiasm for intergenerational harmony (代际和谐) within the
broader populace that ultimately steers the whole society towards greater
social cohesion and harmony (更大的社会凝聚力与和谐).
2023年真题(弘扬传统文化很重要)
Through a wider lens, if every individual were to exemplify the principles
of promoting traditional culture (弘扬传统文化), they would be better
positioned to cultivate a thriving cultural (文化的) milieu. This would, in
turn, ignite greater enthusiasm for heritage preservation (文化遗产保护)
within the broader populace that ultimately steers the whole society towards
greater cultural integrity and unity (更大的文化完整性和统一性).
替换语料①:Through a wider lens, if every individual were to transform
the principle of (主题) into tangible deeds, they would be better equipped
to foster a (主题) climate. This would, in turn, contribute to increased
zeal for (主题 ) within the broader populace that ultimately steers the
whole society towards (主题).
替换语料②:Through a wider lens, if every individual were to translate
the principle of (主题) into tangible actions, they would be in a stronger
position to develop a ( 主 题 ) landscape. This would, in turn, kindle
increased enthusiasm for ( 主 题 ) within the broader populace that
ultimately steers the whole society towards (主题).
63c. 科技产品类
1.1 获取广泛资讯,沉浸多元眼界 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:Underpinned by (主题), individuals are granted unprecedented
access to an extensive reservoir of information, thereby boosting their
cognitive acuity and critical thinking skills.
参考译文:在(主题)的支持下,个人可以前所未有地获取大量信息,
从而提高他们的认知敏锐度和批判性思维能力。
重点短语:
be underpinned by 在……的支持下
be granted access to 可以获取
an extensive reservoir of 大量的
cognitive acuity 认知敏锐度
critical thinking skills 批判性思维能力
1.2 利用教育资源、打磨自学技能 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:With access to (主题)-enabled educational resources, individuals
are empowered to hone their self-directed learning skills, essential
attributes for outperforming other counterparts in a digital age.
参考译文:借助(主题)提供的教育资源,个人能够打磨自主学习技能,
这是在数字时代超越其他人的关键品质。
重点短语:
be empowered to 能够
hone skills 打磨技能
641.3 跨越物理距离,建立社会交往 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:As (主题) has bridged previously insurmountable physical
distances, it offers individuals a different pathway to socialize with
like-minded peers, which will foster a renewed sense of connection and
belonging.
参考译文:因为(主题)跨越了曾经无法逾越的地理距离,个人可以与
志同道合的同龄人进行社交,这将培养新的联系和归属感。
重点短语:
bridge physical distances 跨越地理距离
offer sb. a pathway to do sth. 给予某人途径去做某事
socialize with 与……社交
1.4 提供娱乐选择,释放职业压力 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:By equipping individuals with endless entertainment options, (主
题) offers a much-needed respite from mounting professional pressure, thus
making itan unparalleled avenue to unwind.
参考译文:通过为个人提供无穷无尽的娱乐选择,(主题)可以缓解日
益增长的职业压力,从而使其成为无与伦比的放松途径。
重点短语:
amuch-needed respite 亟需的喘息
mountingprofessional pressure 日益增长的职业压力
unparalleled avenue 绝佳的途径
651.5 提供就业机会,适应多样需求 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:Through a wider lens, the availability of (主题) is poised
to generate an abundance of employment opportunities, finely attuned to
the diverse needs of individuals. Accordingly, those who have proficiency
in (主题) will thrive in an increasingly digital-centric world.
参考译文:从更广阔的视角来看,(主题)的可得性将创造大量与个体
需求紧密契合的就业机会。因此,那些掌握(主题)技能的人将在日益
数字化的世界中蓬勃发展。
重点短语:
be poised to 蓄势待发
be attuned to 与……契合
1.6 建立数字景观,发展数字社会 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:Through a wider lens, if every individuals were to (主题), they
would be better qualified to establish a thriving digital landscape. This
would, in turn, cultivate a dynamic ecosystem of connectivity that sets the
scene for evolving into a digital society.
参考译文:从更广阔的视角来看,如果每个人都能(主题),他们将更
有资格建立繁荣的数字景观。进而,这会培育出充满活力的互联生态系
统,为进入数字社会奠定基础。
重点短语:
be qualified to 有资格;能胜任
set the scene for 为……奠定基础
66d. 环境污染类
1.1 减少环境影响,提升个人福祉 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:(主题) exerts a salutary influence on individuals’ well-being on
the grounds that it renders them less susceptible to a heightened risk of
various environmental threats.
参考译文:(主题) 对个人的福祉产生有益影响,因为它使他们不容易受
到各种环境威胁的高风险。
重点短语:
exert a salutary influence on 对……产生有益影响
render sb. less susceptible to 使某人不易受到……的影响
a heightened risk of 风险增加
1.2 缓解资源压力,促进持续利用 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:Empowered by (主题), individuals can counteract the depletion
of natural resources, thus alleviating the strain on the planet’s reserves. It is
irrefutable that ( 主 题 ) can safeguard their availability for future
generations.
参考译文:受(主题)的推动,个人可以抵制自然资源的消耗,从而减
轻地球资源的压力。毋庸置疑, (主题) 能确保这些资源为未来世代所
用。
重点短语:
alleviate the strain on 减轻……的压力
there is no denying that 毋庸置疑
safeguard availability 保障可用性
671.3 建立自然庇护,增加生物数量 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:(主题) paves the way for the establishment of sanctuaries that
can shield wildlife from the perils of habitat destruction and human
encroachment. Hence, it is these safe havens that allow for increased
biodiversity.
参考译文:(主题)为建立保护区铺平了道路,它们能够保护野生动物
免受栖息地破坏和人类侵占。因此,正是这些安全的避难所使生物多样
性得以增加。
重点短语:
shield ... from ... 保护……免受
human encroachment 人类侵占
safe havens 安全的避难所
1.4 减少垃圾废物,助力环境美化 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:By striving to (主题), individuals can diminish the volume of
waste destined for landfills, which will serve as a catalyst for the
development of aesthetically appealing landscapes.
参考译文:通过努力(主题),个人可以减少进入垃圾填埋场的废物量,
这将有助于发展美观景观。
重点短语:
be destined for 注定要
serve as a catalyst for 作为……的催化剂
aesthetically appealing landscapes 美观景观
681.5 消除疾病媒介,维持健康卫生 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英 文 语 料 : As ( 主 题 ) eliminates potential breeding grounds for
disease-bearing pests, it can mitigate the spread of communicable diseases,
thereby maintaining public health and hygiene.
参考译文:随着(主题)消除了携带疾病的害虫的潜在滋生地,它可以
减少传染病的传播,从而维护公共健康和卫生。
重点短语:
eliminate breeding grounds for 消除……的滋生地
mitigate the spread of sth. 减少某物的传播
public health and hygiene 公共健康和卫生
1.6 改善生态系统,发展旅游产业 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:When endeavoring to (主题), individuals are more prone to
adopt eco-friendly practices that are instrumental in cultivating a healthier
ecosystem. This improved environment, in turn, serves as a strong magnet
for tourism.
参考译文:在努力(主题)时,个人更倾向于采用环保做法,从而有助
于培育更健康的生态系统。进而,这个改善后的环境会成为旅游业的强
大吸引力。
重点短语:
be prone to 倾向于
be instrumental in 有助于
a strong magnet for ... 对……具有强大吸引力
69②消极类主题
a. 个人品质类
2.1 无法突破局限,限制脱颖而出 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:(主题) can dampen people’s enthusiasm to push beyond their (主
题 ) limitations and break free from the shackles of ( 主 题 ), thereby
inhibiting them from excelling at (主题).
参考译文:(主题)使个人的热情受挫,无法突破自身(主题)的局限,也
无法摆脱(主题)的束缚,从而抑制他们在(主题)方面脱颖而出。
重点短语:
dampen one’s enthusiasm to 使某人的热情受挫
inhibit sb. from doing sth. 抑制某人做某事
真题套用:
2020年真题(拖延时间有危害)
Procrastination (拖 延 时 间 ) can dampen people’s enthusiasm to push
beyond their self-imposed (自我施加的) limitations and break free from
the shackles of inaction (不作为), thereby inhibiting them from excelling
at accomplishing their tasks efficiently (高效完成任务).
2022年真题(拒绝学习课外知识有危害)
Rejecting the pursuit of after-class knowledge (拒绝追求课外知识) can
dampen people’s enthusiasm to push beyond their academic (学 术 的 )
limitations and break free from the shackles of narrow-mindedness (思维
狭 隘 ), thereby inhibiting them from excelling at their personal
development (个人发展).
702.2 释放负向磁场,排斥同频伙伴 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
英 文 语 料: If individuals were to succumb to (主 题 ), they would be
ill-equipped to (主题) and sap their inner energy. Accordingly, (主题) will
heighten their likelihood of exuding negative vibes that alienate
like-minded peers.
参考译文:如果屈服于(主题),个人将不能(主题),并削弱内在能量。
因此,(主题)会增加他们散发负能量的可能性,从而排斥志同道合的同伴。
重点短语:
succumb to 屈服于
sap one’s inner energy 削弱内在能量
真题套用:
2012年真题(消极心态有危害)
If individuals were to succumb to a negative mindset (消极心态), they
would be ill-equipped to navigate challenges (克服挑战) and sap their
inner energy. Accordingly, such negativity (如此消极态度) will heighten
their likelihood of exuding negative vibes that alienate like-minded peers.
2019年真题(半途而废有危害)
If individuals were to succumb to the habit of giving up halfway (半途而
废的习惯), they would be ill-equipped to realize their aspirations (实现
抱负) and sap their inner energy. Accordingly, this propensity to abandon
efforts (这种放弃努力的倾向) will heighten their likelihood of exuding
negative vibes that alienate like-minded peers.
712.3 退回舒适区域,降低个人韧性 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:Individuals burdened with a sense of (主题) are inclined to
retreat into their comfort zone and (主 题 ), thereby leading themselves
towards diminished (主题) flexibility and resilience.
参考译文:负担着(主题)感的人倾向于退回到他们的舒适区,因此导致他
们(主题)灵活性和韧性降低。
重点短语:
be burdened with 负担着
be inclined to 倾向于
retreat into one’s comfort zone 退回某人的舒适区
lead sb. towards 导致……朝着……
真题套用:
2013年真题(缺乏规划有危害)
Individuals burdened with a sense of disorganization (无组织) are inclined
to retreat into their comfort zone and neglect proactive planning (忽视积
极的计划), thereby leading themselves towards diminished organizational
(组织的) flexibility and resilience.
2016年真题(只说不做有危害)
Individuals burdened with a sense of hypocrisy (虚 伪 ) are inclined to
retreat into their comfort zone and shirk from taking decisive action (逃避
果断的行动), thereby leading themselves towards diminished behavioral
(行为上的) flexibility and resilience.
722.4 无法培养技能,阻碍站稳脚跟 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:When falling into the habit of (主题), individuals are incapable
of keeping themselves (主题) stimulated and weaving (主题) into their
versatile skill set, which will hinder them from gaining a foothold in (主
题).
参考译文:一旦养成(主题)习惯,人们无法保持对(主题)的积极刺
激,也不能将(主题)融入多样技能,这阻碍他们在(主题)站稳脚跟。
重点短语:
fall into the habit 养成……习惯
hinder sb. from doing sth. 阻碍某人做某事
真题套用:
2017年真题(阅读怠惰有危害)
When falling into the habit of neglecting reading (忽视阅读), individuals
are incapable of keeping themselves intellectually (智力上的) stimulated
and weaving new knowledge (新知识) into their versatile skill set, which
will hinder them from gaining a foothold in their academic endeavors (学
术生涯).
2021年真题(抛弃热爱有危害)
When falling into the habit of abandoning their passions (抛弃热爱),
individuals are incapable of keeping themselves mentally and physically
(身心上的) stimulated and weaving their specialized talents (专业才能)
into their versatile skill set, which will hinder them from gaining a foothold
in their professional endeavors (职业生涯).
73b. 精神文化类
2.1 削弱相关意识,忽视正确价值 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:As a detrimental aspect of (主题) education, (主题) erodes
individuals’ sense of (主题) towards (主题), thereby inducing them to
disregard appropriate (主题) values.
参考译文: 作为(主题)教育的负面方面,(主题)削弱了个人对(主
题)的(主题)意识,从而促使他们忽视正确的(主题)价值观。
重点短语:
induce sb. to do sth. 促使某人做某事
disregard appropriate values 忽视正确价值观
真题套用:
2010年真题(文化隔阂有危害)
As a detrimental aspect of national (国家的) education, cultural isolation
(文化隔阂) erodes individuals’ sense of admiration and appreciation (赏
鉴 ) towards different cultures (不 同 文 化 ), thereby inducing them to
disregard appropriate cultural (文化的) values.
2014年真题(不孝顺有危害)
As a detrimental aspect of moral (道德的) education, unfilial behaviors
(不孝顺的行为) erode individuals’ sense of care and responsibility (关爱
与 责 任 ) towards the elderly and the young (长 辈 与 晚 辈 ), thereby
inducing them to disregard appropriate familial (家庭的) values.
742.2 阻碍对话沟通,无法深度理解 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:(主题) obstructs individuals from maintaining meaningful (主题)
dialogue with (主题), which will render them incapable of gaining profound
insights into (主题).
参考译文:(主题)制造了障碍,阻碍个人与(主题)保持有意义的(主
题)对话,这使他们无法深入地了解(主题)。
重点短语:
obstruct sb. from doing sth. 阻碍某人做某事
render sb. incapable of doing sth. 使某人无法做某事
真题套用:
2010年真题(文化隔阂有危害)
Cultural isolation (文 化 隔 阂 ) obstructs individuals from maintaining
meaningful cross-cultural (跨文化的) dialogue with people from diverse
backgrounds (来自不同背景的人), which will render them incapable of
gaining profound insights into global traditions and customs (全球的传统
和习俗).
2014年真题(不孝顺有危害)
Unfilial behaviors (不孝顺行为) obstructs individuals from maintaining
meaningful intergenerational ( 代 际 的 ) dialogue with different
generations (不同的世代), which will render them incapable of gaining
profound insights into the moral principles underpinning strong family
bonds (支撑强大家庭纽带的道德原则).
752.3 忽视基本原则,带偏社会风气 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:Through a wider lens, if every individual were to overlook the
fundamental principles of (主题), they would contribute to a deteriorating
(主题) environment. This would, in turn, dull incentive for (主题) within
the broader populace that ultimately steers the whole society towards (主
题).
参考译文:从更广阔的视角来看,如果个人忽视(主题)的基本原则,
他们将助长恶化的(主题)环境。进而,这会在更广泛的人群中削弱对
(主题)的热情,最终引导整个社会迈向(主题)。
重点短语:
contribute to 导致;促成
dull incentive for 削弱对的热情
真题套用:
2023年真题(抛弃传统文化有危害)
Through a wider lens, if every individual were to overlook the fundamental
principles of preserving traditional culture (保护传统文化), they would
contribute to a deteriorating cultural and historical ( 历 史 文 化 的 )
environment. This would, in turn, dull incentive for heritage preservation
(文化遗产保护) within the broader populace that ultimately steers the
whole society towards a diminished sense of cultural and historical
continuity (对文化和历史连续性的意识减弱).
76c. 科技产品类
2.1 充斥错误信息,影响价值判断 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:(主题) bombards individuals with a deluge of misinformation,
thereby impairing their capacity to acquire genuine information proficiently
and casting a shadow over their judgement.
参考译文:(主题)向个人灌输大量错误信息,从而削弱他们高效获取
真实信息并给他们的判断蒙上阴影。
2.2 娱乐诱惑繁多,侵蚀专注能力 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英 文 语 料 : With the overwhelming allure of endless entertainment
temptations, ( 主 题 ) subjects individuals to an incessant barrage of
distractions, which will fragment their attention and erode their capacity to
concentrate.
参考译文:面对无尽娱乐诱惑的强烈吸引力,(主题)让个人不断受到
各种干扰,进而分散他们的注意力,侵蚀他们的专注能力。
重点短语:
bombard sb. with sth. 用……进行轰炸
a deluge of 大量的;纷至沓来的
cast a shadow over 给……蒙上阴影
subject sb. to sth. 受制于;使服从
an incessant barrage of 不间断的
fragment one’s attention 分散某人的注意力
erode one’s capacity 侵蚀某人的能力
772.3 陷入虚拟世界,脱离现实社交 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:Those who frequently succumb to (主题) will find themselves
snared in a virtual world where they detach from authentic social
interactions. Consequently, they will feel alienated from their peers for the
absence of meaningful real-life connections.
参考译文:经常沉迷于(主题)的人会发现自己陷入虚拟世界,脱离真
实的社交互动。因此,由于缺乏有意义的现实联系,他们会感到与同伴
疏离。
2.4 易患健康疾病,阻碍学业职业 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:Obsessed with (主题), individuals are prone to adopt a sedentary
lifestyle that renders them susceptible to a myriad of physical health
disorders, such as obesity and cardiovascular disease. Therefore, (主题)
constitutes an impediment to their academic and professional pursuits.
参考译文:沉迷于(主题)的人容易养成久坐不动的生活方式,这使他
们易患各种身体健康问题,如肥胖和心血管疾病。因此,(主题)成为
他们在学业和职业追求上的障碍。
重点短语:
succumb to 屈服于
find oneself snared in 发现某人陷入
detach from 背离
susceptible to 容易受到……的
a myriad of 无数的;大量的
782.5 损害情感能力,酿造疏远情绪 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:The dependence upon (主题) will compromise their cognitive
and affective abilities, rendering them socially and emotionally
incompetent. Accordingly, ( 主 题 ) engenders an ever-growing sense of
estrangement that will inflict severe damage to their mental well-being.
参考译文:对(主题)的依赖将削弱他们的认知和情感能力,使他们在
社交和情感方面变得无能。因此,(主题)会产生越来越强烈的疏离感,
对他们的心理健康造成严重损害。
2.6 剥夺自我控制,沉溺及时享乐 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:(主题) can deprive individuals of their self-discipline as it
gratifies their needs for immediate rewards, be it through social media
notifications or online gaming. So compelling is the relentless quest for
temporary pleasure that individuals find themselves increasingly incapable
of committing to long-term aspirations.
参考译文:(主题)满足个人即时奖励的需求,会剥夺他们的自律能力,
无论是通过社交媒体通知还是在线游戏。这种对即时快感的无尽追求是
如此具有吸引力,以至于个人发现自己愈发难以致力于长期的志向。
重点短语:
cognitive and affective abilities 认知和情感能力
a sense of estrangement 疏离感
inflict severe damage to 造成严重损害
deprive sb. of sth. 剥夺某人某物
the relentless quest for ... 对……的无尽追求
79d. 环境污染类
2.1 易受环境威胁,损害个人福祉 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:(主题) has detrimental ramifications on individuals’ well-being
on the grounds that it renders them susceptible to a heightened risk of
various environmental threats, such as extreme weather events.
参考译文:(主题)对个人福祉产生不利影响,因为它使他们容易受到
各种环境威胁的更高风险,如极端天气事件。
2.2 阻碍建立庇护,减少生物数量 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:(主题) thwarts the establishment of sanctuaries that can shield
wildlife from the perils of habitat destruction and human encroachment.
Consequently, it is the absence of safe havens that translates into decreased
biodiversity.
参考译文:(主题)阻碍避难所建立,这些避难所能保护野生动物免受
栖息地破坏和人类侵占。因此,缺乏这些安全避难所使生物多样性下降。
2.3 增加垃圾废物,有损景观形象 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:By (主题 ), individuals may increase the volume of waste
destined for landfills, which represents an impediment to the development
of aesthetically appealing landscapes.
参考译文:通过(主题),个人可能会增加进入垃圾填埋场的废物量,
这对美观景观的发展构成了障碍。
重点短语:
have detrimental ramifications on 对……有不利影响
represent an impediment to 对……构成障碍
802.4 导致资源枯竭,影响后代使用 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:(主题) may be a significant culprit of the depletion of natural
resources, thus placing more strain on the planet’s reserves. Undeniably,
(主题) will undermine their availability for future generations.
参考译文:(主题)可能是自然资源枯竭的罪魁祸首,从而给地球储备
造成更大压力。不可否认,(主题)将损害为后代所用资源的可用性。
2.5 提供疾病媒介,危及卫生健康 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英 文 语 料 : As ( 主 题 ) provides potential breeding grounds for
disease-bearing pests, it may accelerate the spread of communicable
diseases, thereby jeopardizing public health and hygiene.
参考译文:由于(主题)为携带疾病的害虫提供了潜在的繁殖地,它可
能会加速传染病的传播,从而危害公共健康和卫生。
2.6 削弱自然美景,阻碍旅游发展 (套写指数: )
⭐⭐⭐⭐
英文语料:If left unchecked, (主题) will devastate local flora and fauna,
hence detracting from the natural beauty that captivates an influx of tourists.
Inevitably, (主题) will stymie the growth of the tourism sector.
参考译文:如果放任不管,(主题)将会破坏当地的动植物群落,从而
减损吸引大量游客的自然美景。不可避免,(主题)将阻碍旅游业发展。
重点短语:
a significant culprit 罪魁祸首
put considerable strain on 给……带来巨大压力
leave sth. unchecked 对某事放任不管
detract from 贬低;减损
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得到地道、万能的结尾段。针对第二种类型,我将先给大家讲解如何写好,
因为该类型整体难度大、隐喻多。大家各取所需,不过还是建议大家在有
时间的情况下可以都背,考场上可以随机应变 。个人认为,不管是第一
种还是第二种,都可以成为整篇作文的点睛之笔。
我们先看措施方法句:
例句:In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling environment
where (主题) can be carried forward.
译文:本质上,至关重要的是要建立良好的环境,使(主题)能够得以
发扬。
解析:in essence 意为“本质上;大体上”。be imperative to 可以理解
为 be necessary to 的高级版本。enabling 在该语境中类似于 helpful 和
conducive 。 where 引 导 的 是 定 语 从 句 , 修 饰 先 行 词 an enabling
environment。carry forward 通常与行动、传统、价值观等对象搭配。
措施方法句如何套用:
大家先记住:不管是积极类作文还是消极类作文,括号里都写积极的
内容。如果是主题“沉迷手机”,那括号里就可以写“健康使用手机”,
如果主题是“环境污染”,那括号里就可以写“保护环境倡议”。
82看一眼真题套用示范:
2022 年 真 题 : In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling
environment where the practice of exploring extracurricular knowledge can be
carried forward.(个人品质类)
2023 年 真 题 : In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling
environment where Chinese traditionalculture can be carried forward.(精神文
化类)
2015 年 真 题 : In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling
environment where healthy engagement with mobile phones can be carried
forward.(科技产品类)
2011 年 真 题 : In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling
environment where efforts to reduce environmental pollution can be carried
forward.(环境污染类)
(备注*:措施方法句的落脚点可能是个人、政府或媒体等,属于综合性措
施,只需要填上能和 carry forward 搭配的表达即可。或者你要是基础相对
扎实,where 后面的整句话都可以自行组织。)
我们再看虚实结合句:
例句①:More importantly, by nurturing (积极主题) in our hearts, we can
root out the weeds of (消极主题) and embrace a (主题性质) life in full
bloom.
译文①:更重要的是,通过在心中培育(积极主题),我们可以铲除(消
极主题)的杂草,拥抱一个绚丽绽放的(主题性质)生活。
83 解析①:root out 意为“彻底消除;连根拔起”,指完全地去除某种不
良或有害的事物。in full bloom 意为“盛开,繁茂”,通常用来描述花
朵完全绽放的状态,也用作比喻,表示事物或人达到最佳状态,充满活
力和美丽。
例句②:More importantly, instead of being enslaved by (消极主题), we
should wield (积极主题) as a guiding light, illuminating the path to a (主题
性质) future for generations to come.
译文②:更重要的是,我们不应该被(消极主题)所奴役,而是应该将
(积极主题)作为指路明灯,为子孙后代照亮通往(主题性质)未来的
道路。
解析②:be enslaved by 意为“被(某物)奴役”,指被某种不良或有
害的事物所控制或束缚。wield sth. as sth.意为“将某物作为某物使用”,
指利用某种工具、力量或能力来实现某个目的。illuminate 意为“照亮”,
illuminate the path 这个表达通常用来比喻通过某种方式(如智慧、指导
或启示)使某人的前进方向变得更加明确和清晰,从而帮助他们找到正
确的道路或方法。
例句③:More importantly, rather than succumbing to (消极主题), we
should let (积极主题) be our compass, navigating us through the trials of
(主题性质) life towards a (主题性质) future.
译文③:更重要的是,我们不应该屈服于(消极主题),而是应该让(积
极主题)成为我们的指南针,引导我们克服(主题性质)生活的考验,
走向(主题性质)的未来。
84 解析③:succumb to sth.意为“屈服于某物”,指因无法抗拒某种力量
或压力而放弃抵抗。navigate sb. through sth.意为“引导某人穿过某物”,
指在困难或复杂的情况下,帮助某人找到解决办法或前进的方向。trial
意为“考验”,指人们在生活中遇到的困难、挑战或磨难。
例句④:More importantly, never should we let ourselves be overshadowed
by (消极主题); instead, it is through (积极主题) that we can weather the
storms of (主题性质) life and sail towards a (主题性质) world.
译文④:更重要的是,我们绝不能让自己被(消极主题)所掩盖;相反,
只有通过(积极主题),我们才能经受住(主题性质)生活的暴风雨,
驶向(主题性质)的世界。
解析④:never should we do sth.是倒装句,原本是we should never do sth.,
否定词 never 前置引发倒装。be overshadowed by 意为“被某物笼罩”,
指被某种消极或不利的事物所影响或覆盖,使得正面的事物无法显现。
weather 意为“经受住,度过”,指成功面对并克服困难、危机或挑战。
虚实结合句如何套用:
为何称为“虚实结合句”?因为每个句子中都包含隐喻,相当于修辞
手法与尾段憧憬句的高级结合版。那该如何套用?我们先记住:任何主题
其实都有两面性的,积极主题就写积极面,消极主题就写消极面,主题性
质就填主题相关词。举个例子,如果主题是“环境污染”,积极主题就是
“保护环境”,消极主题就是“环境恶化”,主题性质可以是“环境良好
的”或“可持续的”。如果觉得抽象、晦涩或者难记,大家不妨看看套用
示范,或许就能明白如何使用这些虚实结合句。
85看一眼真题套用示范:
以下是例句①的 4 类套用示范:
More importantly, by nurturing the habit of exploring extracurricular
knowledge in our hearts, we can root out the weeds of ignorance and
embrace an enlightened life in full bloom.
(个人品质类:2022 年真题)
More importantly, by nurturing filial piety in our hearts, we can root out
the weeds of indifference and embrace a harmonious life in full bloom.
(精神文化类:2014 年真题)
More importantly, by nurturing self-discipline in our hearts, we can root
out the weeds of addiction to mobile phones and embrace a balanced and
meaningful life in full bloom.
(科技产品类:2015 年真题)
More importantly, by nurturing ecological responsibility in our hearts, we
can root out the weeds of environmental pollution and embrace a
sustainable life in full bloom.
(环境污染类:2011 年真题)
以下是例句②的 4 类套用示范:
More importantly, instead of being enslaved by ignorance, we should wield
the habit of exploring extracurricular knowledge as a guiding light,
illuminating the path to an enlightened future for generations to come.
(个人品质类:2022 年真题)
More importantly, instead of being enslaved by indifference, we should
wield filial piety as a guiding light, illuminating the path to a harmonious
future for generations to come.
(精神文化类:2014 年真题)
86 More importantly, instead of being enslaved by addiction to mobile
phones, we should wield self-discipline as a guiding light, illuminating the
path to a balanced and meaningful future for generations to come.
(科技产品类:2015 年真题)
More importantly, instead of being enslaved by environmental pollution,
we should wield ecological responsibility as a guiding light, illuminating
the path to an ecologically sound future for generations to come.
(环境污染类:2011 年真题)
以下是例句③的 4 类套用示范:
More importantly, rather than succumbing to ignorance, we should let the
habit of exploring extracurricular knowledge be our compass, navigating
us through the trials of academic life towards an enlightened future.
(个人品质类:2022 年真题)
More importantly, rather than succumbing to indifference, we should let
filial piety be our compass, navigating us through the trials of familial life
towards a harmonious future.
(精神文化类:2014 年真题)
More importantly, rather than succumbing to addiction to mobile phones,
we should let self-discipline be our compass, navigating us through the
trials of digital life towards a balanced and meaningful future.
(科技产品类:2015 年真题)
More importantly, rather than succumbing to environmental pollution, we
should let ecological responsibility be our compass, navigating us through
the trials of environmental life towards an ecologically sound future.
(环境污染类:2011 年真题)
87以下是例句④的 4 类套用示范:
More importantly, never should we let ourselves be overshadowed by
ignorance; instead, it is through the habit of exploring extracurricular
knowledge that we can weather the storms of academic life and sail
towards an enlightened world.
(个人品质类:2022 年真题)
More importantly, never should we let ourselves be overshadowed by
indifference; instead, it is through filial piety that we can weather the
storms of familial life and sail towards a harmonious world.
(精神文化类:2014 年真题)
More importantly, never should we let ourselves be overshadowed by
addiction to mobile phones; instead, it is through self-discipline that we
can weather the storms of digital life and sail towards a balanced and
meaningful world.
(科技产品类:2015 年真题)
More importantly, never should we let ourselves be overshadowed by
environmental pollution; instead, it is through ecological responsibility
that we can weather the storms of environmental life and sail towards an
ecologically sound world.
(环境污染类:2011 年真题)
上文展示了 16 句虚实结合句的套用示范,相信大家看完一定受益匪浅、
恍然大悟。措施方法句+虚实结合句需要填写的细节点稍多一点,所以上
文进行了讲解和示范。相比之下,尾段总结句+尾段憧憬句的写法相对好
掌握一些,接下来就能看到相应的模板句,大家自行组合即可。总而言之,
希望大家多输入多输出,只有重复循环这个过程,作文才会迎来质的飞跃。
881. 尾段总结句
①积极类主题
模板句一
To recapitulate, no wonder that (主题) acts as a stepping stone on our
growth journey.
总而言之,毋庸置疑,(主题)会成为我们成长路上的垫脚石。
模板句二
To recapitulate, (主题) is a rewarding practice that should be ingrained in
our daily habits.
总而言之,(主题)是一种有益实践,应该融入我们的日常习惯中。
模板句三
To recapitulate, (主题) represents a cornerstone that adds momentum to our
personal development.
总而言之,(主题)是基石,为我们的个人发展增添动力。
学长点睛
stepping stone:意为“垫脚石”,是一种隐喻,用来表示一个有助于达
到最终目标的中间步骤或手段,就像石头(stone)在跨越障碍(如溪流)
时提供了短暂的支持和基础。
be ingrained in:意为“扎根于”,ingrained 这个词源自农业用语,指的
是种子或植物根深深地嵌入土壤中,难以移除。引申到习惯或观念上,
表示这些东西已经深深植根,难以改变。
add momentum to:表示为某事物增加动力或推动力,使其发展得更快。
89模板句四
In a nutshell, (主题) is an essential ingredient that showers benefits on our
personal journey.
总而言之,(主题)是重要因素,可让我们的个人旅程受益匪浅。
模板句五
In a nutshell, the drawing serves as a powerful testament to how (主题)
forges us into a well-rounded individual.
总而言之,这幅画有力地证明了(主题)是如何把我们锻造成一个全面
发展的人。
模板句六
In a nutshell, the drawing serves as a sobering reminder of how (主题)
molds us into better versions of ourselves.
总而言之,这幅画清醒地提醒我们,(主题)如何将我们塑造成更好的
自己。
学长点睛
shower benefits on:shower 用作动词时,有“倾注;大量地给”的意思,
类似于“淋浴”时水不断地、大量地倾泻而下。这个比喻用来表示好处
或恩惠的大量给予。
serve as a powerful testament to:testament 意为“证明”,整个短语作为
某事的有力见证或证明,表明某事的真实性或重要性。
mold sb. into:mold 意为“塑造;对……影响重大”,就像工匠用模具
塑造物品一样,这个表达表示通过影响和教育,把某人培养成某种特定
的角色或形象。与 forge sb. into 是近义表达。
90②消极类主题
模板句一
To recapitulate, (主题) acts as a stumbling block in our constant quest for
excellence.
总而言之,(主题)在我们不断追求卓越的过程中充当了绊脚石。
模板句二
To recapitulate, (主题) represents an impediment that drains momentum
from our personal growth.
总而言之,(主题)是个障碍,消耗了我们个人成长的动力。
模板句三
To recapitulate, assuming ( 主 题 ) continues unchecked, our personal
development will remain stunted.
总而言之,如果(主题)不加以遏制,我们的个人发展将停滞不前。
学长点睛
drain momentum from sth.:drain 意为“排出;耗尽”。这个词在这里表
示把能量或动力逐渐消耗掉,近义表达有 sap momentum from sth.。
unchecked:un-表示否定,checked 意为“检查;控制;限制”,所以
unchecked 是没有被控制、限制或检查,意味着自由发展或蔓延。常见
搭配是 leave sth. unchecked。例句:If we leave environmental degradation
unchecked, the consequences for future generations will be catastrophic(. 如
果我们对环境退化听之任之,子孙后代将面临灾难性的后果。)
stunt:意为“阻碍生长;妨碍发展;遏制”。句子中 stunted 作形容词,
表示“受阻的”。这是一个被动意义的形容词,用来描述主语的状态。
91模板句四
In a nutshell, the drawing serves as a powerful testament to how detrimental
(主题) can be.
总而言之,这幅画有力地证明了(主题)是多么有害。
模板句五
In a nutshell, the drawing serves as a sobering reminder of how deleterious
(主题) can be.
总而言之,这幅画警醒人们,(主题)是多么有害。
模板句六
In a nutshell, the drawing serves as a wake-up call that all stakeholders
should act promptly to remedy (主题).
总而言之,这幅画是一记警钟,提醒所有利益相关者应迅速采取行动来
解决(主题)。
学长点睛
deleterious:意为“有害的;造成伤害的”。这个词通常用于描述对健
康、环境或其他方面造成负面影响的事物,近义词有 harmful、detrimental
或者 damaging 等。
a wake-up call:源自字面意义上的“叫醒电话”,引申为使人警觉的事
件或警告,促使人们采取行动或重新审视现状。
remedy:作动词时,指采取措施以解决或纠正问题。近义词有 correct、
fix、resolve 或者 rectify。作名词时,常见搭配是 provide a remedy for sth.。
例 句 : Governments must collaborate to provide a remedy for climate
change.(各国政府必须通力合作,为气候变化提供补救措施。)
922. 尾段憧憬句
模板句一
In this context, when boosting (主题)/navigating the challenge of (主题),
we can unlock substantial gains and nudge ourselves toward a more
fulfilling lifestyle.
在这种情况下,当提升(主题)/应对(主题)的挑战时,我们就能获
益良多,并推动自己过上更充实的生活。
模板句二
In light of this, if we are persistent in capitalizing on the strengths of (主
题)/surmounting the obstacle of (主题), we will pave the way for a more
gratifying life.
鉴于此,如果我们坚持不懈地发挥(主题)的优势/克服(主题)的障碍,
我们就会为更令人满意的生活铺平道路。
学长点睛
unlock:意为“解锁”,表示打开或释放以前无法获得或被锁住的东西,
在比喻意义上,它指的是获得以前无法使用的东西。
nudge sb. toward sth.:意为“推动、鼓励某人朝向某事”,这个表达强
调一种微妙的或轻微的劝导,引导某人做出某个选择或走某条路。
be persistent in:意为“在……上坚持不懈”,可替换 keep doing sth.。
capitalize on:意为“利用”,表示利用某个机会或资源以获得利益。
pave the way for:意为“为……铺平道路”,可理解为“为……打好基
础”,比如 lay the foundation for。近义表达有 set the stage for 和 set the
scene for,可以在作文中互换使用。
93模板句三
In this sense, we can yield enormous gains from strengthening (主题 )/
approaching the problem of (主 题 ) and subsequently carve out a more
enriched life.
从这个意义上说,我们可以从加强(主题)/解决(主题)的问题中获得
巨大收益,并随之创造出更加丰富的生活。
模板句四
Hence, it is by redoubling our efforts to leverage the benefits of ( 主
题)/offset the negative impacts of (主题) that we can elevate our lifestyle to
a new height.
从这个意义上说,正是通过加倍努力来利用(主题)的好处/抵消(主题)
的不利影响,我们才能将我们的生活方式提升至新高度。
学长点睛
yield:意为“获得”,这个动词表示产生、带来或出产,特别是指带来
收益或结果。
carve out:意为“开创”,表示通过努力、时间和精力创造或建立某种
事物。常见搭配有 carve out a niche(创建或开辟一个专门的市场或领
域)、carve out a career(开创职业生涯)和 carve out time(挤出时间)。
redouble one’s efforts:意为“加倍努力;更加努力地付出”,强调在现
有努力的基础上,还要付出更多的努力和精力,可以用来替换 try to do
和 make efforts to do。
leverage:意为“利用”,强调利用资源、影响力或信息达到最大优势。
94模板句五
Admittedly, only by going to great lengths to harness the benefits of (主
题)/rectify the issue of (主题) will we paint a rosy picture of our life down
the road.
诚然,通过不遗余力地利用(主题)的好处/纠正(主题)的问题,我们
将描绘我们未来生活的美好图景。
模板句六
Therefore, with a wholehearted commitment to maximizing the benefits
of (主题)/counteract the adverse effects of (主题), we will pivot towards a
positive perspective of life.
因此,通过全心全意致力于最大限度地发挥(主题)的益处/抵消(主题)
的不利影响,我们将转向积极的人生观。
学长点睛
go to great lengths:意为“不遗余力地”,强调为了达到某个目标或完
成某件事而付出大量努力。
rosy:源自玫瑰的颜色,通常指粉红色或红润的颜色,在比喻意义上,
描述事物的美好、乐观或前景光明。
down the road:意为“在未来”,表示将来或未来是基于时间与道路的
隐喻,人们沿着时间的道路向前走,前方的道路自然就代表着未来。
wholehearted:意为“全心全意的”,用来形容某人对某事的投入或态
度是非常真诚和完全投入的。
pivot towards:意为“转向”,表示在面对变化或新机会时,调整或改
变方向、策略或重点,以适应新的形势或需求。
95(4)真题套用示范(2009-2024)
①个人品质类
真题样例一
2012 年真题
参考范文
In the drawing lies an enlightening scene: when seeing an overturned
bottle, the person on the left, bearing a discouraged expression, exclaims it is a
complete loss, while the other person on the right, wearing a smile, remarks that
there is still some left. Apparently, the drawing aims to unearth the pivotal role
of a positive attitude.
In my eyes, the advantages of optimism are manifold. First and foremost,
armed with a strong sense of optimism, individuals are motivated to push
beyond their mental limitations and break free from the shackles of negativity,
thus excelling in social interactions. Apart from that, individuals, if equipped
with an optimistic mindset, will be capable of becoming more resilient and
hence raising personal vibrations. Accordingly, a positive attitude will heighten
their likelihood of exuding positive vibes that draw like-minded peers. On top
of that, through the cultivation of a positive outlook, individuals can keep
themselves mentally stimulated while weaving emotional resilience into their
versatile skill set, which will facilitate them in gaining a foothold in their future
96professional endeavors.
In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling environment where an
optimistic mindset can be carried forward. More prominently, by nurturing
optimism in our hearts, we can root out the weeds of pessimism and embrace a
joyful and resilient life in full bloom. (219 words)
参考译文
在这幅画中,有一个发人深省的场景:看到瓶子被打翻时,面露沮丧
的左边的人惊呼全完了,然而面露微笑的右边的人则说幸好还有点。显而
易见,这幅画旨在揭示积极态度的重要作用。
在我看来,乐观的优势是多方面的。首先,拥有强烈的乐观精神,个
体能够突破心理上的局限,摆脱消极的束缚,从而在社交互动中脱颖而出。
除此之外,如果个人拥有乐观的心态,就能变得更有韧性,从而提升个人
的能量。相应地,积极的态度会增加他们散发正能量的可能性,吸引志同
道合的人。再者,通过培养积极的人生观,个人可以保持心态上的刺激,
同时将情感韧性融入他们的多样化技能中,这将有助于他们在未来的职业
发展中站稳脚跟。
本质上,要建立一个良好的环境,使乐观的心态能够得以发扬。更重
要的是,通过在心中培养乐观,我们可以根除悲观的杂草,拥抱一个充满
欢乐和韧性的人生。
97真题样例二
2013 年真题
参考范文
From the drawing springs a philosophical scene: an overwhelming
majority of university graduates, standing at a critical life crossroads, find
themselves torn between seeking employment, pursuing advanced degrees,
studying overseas and venturing into entrepreneurship. Apparently, the
drawing aims to highlight the underlying value of rational planning.
In my eyes, reasonable planning offers a long list of benefits. First and
foremost, armed with a strong sense of reasonable planning, individuals are
motivated to push beyond their cognitive limitations and break free from the
shackles of disorganization, thus excelling at attaining their goals effectively.
Apart from that, individuals, if equipped with effective time management, will
be capable of becoming more productive and hence raising personal vibrations.
Accordingly, a well-structured routine will heighten their likelihood of exuding
positive vibes that draw like-minded peers. On top of that, through the
cultivation of strategic planning, individuals can keep themselves behaviorally
stimulated while weaving organizational skills into their versatile skill set,
which will facilitate them in gaining a foothold in their professional endeavors.
In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling environment where the
98awareness of rational planning can be carried forward. More prominently,
instead of being enslaved by chaos and inefficiency, we should wield strategic
planning as a guiding light, illuminating the path to a well-organized and
prosperous future for generations to come. (219 words)
参考译文
从这幅画中展现出一个富有哲理的场景:站在关键的人生十字路口的
绝大多数的毕业生纠结不已地做选择,是求职、考研、出国还是创业。显
而易见,这幅画旨在突显理性规划的内在价值。
在我看来,合理规划有许多好处。首先,拥有强烈的合理规划意识,
个人能够突破认知上的局限,摆脱无序的束缚,从而在有效实现目标中脱
颖而出。除此之外,如果个人具备有效的时间管理能力,就能提高工作效
率,从而提升个人的能量。相应地,一个结构合理的日常安排会增加他们
散发正能量的可能性,吸引志同道合的人。再者,通过培养战略规划,个
人可以在行为上保持刺激,同时将组织技能融入其多样化的技能组合中,
这将有助于他们在职业发展中站稳脚跟。
本质上,要建立一个良好的环境,使理性规划的意识能够得以发扬。
更重要的是,我们不应该被混乱和低效所奴役,而应将战略规划作为指路
明灯,为子孙后代照亮通向井然有序和繁荣未来的道路。
99真题样例三
2016 年真题
参考范文
The drawing gives a telling glimpse into different attitudes towards
education. Specifically, the father in the left picture, indulging in watching TV,
requests his son to dedicate himself to his studies, while the other father in the
right picture who works diligently sets an example for his son. Apparently, the
drawing seeks to cast light on the fundamental worth of leading by example.
In my eyes, there are a myriad of benefits to being a role model. First and
foremost, armed with a strong sense of leading by example, individuals are
motivated to push beyond their behavioral limitations and break free from the
shackles of hypocrisy, thus excelling at exerting a positive influence on those
around them. Apart from that, individuals, if equipped with the habit of
leading by example, will be capable of becoming role models and hence raising
personal vibrations. Accordingly, such exemplary conduct will heighten their
likelihood of exuding positive vibes that draw like-minded peers. On top of
that, through the cultivation of model behaviors, individuals can keep
themselves behaviorally stimulated while weaving leadership qualities into
their versatile skill set, which will facilitate them in gaining a foothold in their
future professional endeavors.
In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling environment where
exemplary behaviors can be carried forward. More prominently, rather than
100succumbing to indifference, we should let responsibility be our compass,
navigating us through the trials of academic life towards an inspiring future.
(239 words)
参考译文
这幅画生动地展现了不同的教育态度。具体而言,在左图,沉迷于看
电视的父亲要求儿子专心学习,然而,在右图,勤奋工作的父亲为儿子树
立了榜样。显而易见,这幅画旨在强调以身作则的基本价值。
在我看来,做榜样有很多好处。首先,拥有强烈的以身作则的意识,
个人能够突破行为上的局限,摆脱虚伪的束缚,从而出色地对周围的人产
生积极的影响。除此之外,个人如果养成以身作则的习惯,就能成为榜样,
从而提升个人的能量。相应地,这种榜样行为会增加他们散发正能量的可
能性,吸引志同道合的人。再者,通过培养榜样行为,个人可以在行为上
保持积极性,同时将领导才能融入其多样化的技能组合中,这将有助于他
们在未来的职业发展中站稳脚跟。
本质上,要建立一个良好的环境,使模范行为能够得以发扬。更重要
的是,我们不应该屈服于漠不关心,而应让责任感成为我们的指南,引导
我们度过学术生活的考验,迈向一个鼓舞人心的未来。
101真题样例四
2017 年真题
参考范文
The drawing offers a revealing snapshot of different attitudes toward
reading. Specifically, the boy in the left picture, lounging in a chair, boasts
about his extensive collection of books, while the other boy in the right picture,
sitting squarely on a stool, strives to finish twenty books within a year.
Apparently, the drawing seeks to shed light on the immense significance of a
genuine commitment to reading.
In my eyes, diligent reading habits present a host of advantages. First and
foremost, armed with a strong sense of diligent reading, individuals are
motivated to push beyond their intellectual limitations and break free from the
shackles of superficial knowledge, thus excelling in academic pursuits. Apart
from that, individuals, if equipped with consistent reading practices, will be
capable of becoming intellectually enriched and hence raising personal
vibrations. Accordingly, a disciplined approach to reading will heighten their
likelihood of exuding positive vibes that draw like-minded peers. On top of
that, through the cultivation of reading habits, individuals can keep themselves
behaviorally and intellectually stimulated while weaving comprehension and
analytical skills into their versatile skill set, which will facilitate them in
gaining a foothold in their professional endeavors.
In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling environment where a
102culture of effective reading can be carried forward. More prominently, never
should we let ourselves be overshadowed by ignorance and distraction; instead,
it is through a commitment to deep, meaningful reading that we can weather the
storms of academic life and sail towards an enlightened world. (251 words)
参考译文
这幅画生动地展现了对阅读的不同态度。具体而言,在左图,懒散地
躺在椅子上的男孩夸耀着他的大量藏书,然而在右图,端正地坐在凳子上
的另一个男孩争取在一年内读完二十本书。显而易见,这幅画旨在强调真
正致力于阅读的重要性。
在我看来,勤奋的阅读习惯带来了诸多好处。首先,有了强烈的勤奋
读书的意识,个人能够突破智力上的局限,摆脱浅薄知识的束缚,从而在
学术追求中脱颖而出。除此之外,如果个人能够坚持阅读,就能丰富自己
的智力,从而提升个人的能量。相应地,纪律严明的阅读方式会增加他们
散发正能量的可能性,吸引志同道合的伙伴。更重要的是,通过培养阅读
习惯,个人可以在行为和智力上保持积极性,同时将理解力和分析能力融
入其多样化的技能组合中,这将有助于他们在未来的职业发展中站稳脚跟。
本质上,要建立一个良好的环境,使有效阅读的文化能够得以发扬。
更重要的是,我们不应该让自己被无知和分心所掩盖,而应通过深入、有
意义的阅读承诺来度过学术生活的风暴,迈向一个充满智慧的世界。
103真题样例五
2018 年真题
参考范文
Given above is a contemplative drawing, in which a university student,
sitting in front of a computer and staring at the course selection system, is in a
dilemma of whether to enroll in an innovative and challenging course or an
easier one that entails minimal homework and promises high grades.
Apparently, the drawing is intended to bring the intrinsic value of embracing
challenges.
In my eyes, confronting challenges bravely brings with it a cascade of
benefits. First and foremost, armed with a strong sense of embracing
challenges, individuals are motivated to push beyond their self-imposed
limitations and break free from the shackles of complacency, thus excelling in
personal growth. Apart from that, individuals, if equipped with a courageous
mindset, will be capable of becoming more resilient and hence raising personal
vibrations. Accordingly, this fearless attitude will heighten their likelihood of
exuding positive vibes that draw like-minded peers. On top of that, through the
cultivation of the ability to confront challenges, individuals can keep
themselves behaviorally stimulated while weaving adaptability into their
versatile skill set, which will facilitate them in gaining a foothold in
competitive environments.
104In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling environment where a
spirit of embracing challenges can be carried forward. More prominently,
never should we let ourselves be overshadowed by fear and doubt; instead, it is
through unwavering determination that we can weather the storms of a
demanding life and sail towards a fulfilling world. (240 words)
参考译文
上图是一幅发人深省的画面:坐在电脑前盯着选课系统的一位大学生
陷入了两难的抉择境地:是选创新且具有挑战性的课程,还是选只需做少
量作业就能得高分的简单课程。显而易见,这幅画旨在突出迎接挑战的内
在价值。
在我看来,勇敢地面对挑战带来了诸多好处。首先,拥有强烈的迎接
挑战的意识,个人能够突破自我设限,摆脱自满的束缚,从而在个人成长
中脱颖而出。除此之外,如果个人具备勇敢的心态,就能变得更加坚韧,
从而提升个人的能量。相应地,这种无所畏惧的态度会增加他们散发正能
量的可能性,吸引志同道合的伙伴。再者,通过培养应对挑战的能力,个
人可以在行为上保持积极性,同时将适应能力融入其多样化的技能组合中,
这将有助于他们在竞争激烈的环境中站稳脚跟。
本质上,要建立一个良好的环境,使迎接挑战的精神能够得以发扬。
更重要的是,我们不应被恐惧和怀疑所掩盖,而应通过坚定不移的决心,
度过充满挑战的生活风暴,迈向一个充实的世界。
105真题样例六
2019 年真题
参考范文
What emerges from the drawing is an insightful scene: when ascending the
mountain, the adult on the right, with disappointment written all over his face,
utters his fatigue and desire to quit, while another adult on the left who extends
a bottle of water to him urges him to persevere after a respite. Apparently, the
drawing is intended to shine a spotlight on the vital importance of unremitting
efforts.
In my eyes, persistence is packed with a plethora of benefits. First and
foremost, armed with a strong sense of perseverance, individuals are motivated
to push beyond their self-imposed limitations and break free from the shackles
of slackness, thus excelling in their personal development. Apart from that,
individuals, if equipped with unwavering determination, will be capable of
becoming more resilient and hence raising personal vibrations. Accordingly,
this steadfast commitment will heighten their likelihood of exuding positive
vibes that draw like-minded peers. On top of that, through the cultivation of
relentless efforts, individuals can keep themselves physically and behaviorally
stimulated while weaving persistence into their versatile skill set, which will
facilitate them in gaining a foothold in their future professional endeavors.
106In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling environment where
tenacity can be carried forward. More prominently, never should we let
ourselves be overshadowed by discouragement and doubt; instead, it is through
steadfast resolve that we can weather the storms of academic life and sail
towards a triumphant world. (239 words)
参考译文
这幅画呈现了一个发人深省的场景:当爬山时,面露失望的右边的成
年人说很累想要放弃,然而递给他一瓶水的左边的成年人劝他休息一下后
继续坚持。显而易见,这幅画旨在强调不懈努力的重要性。
在我看来,坚持不懈带来了许多好处。首先,拥有强烈的坚持精神,
个人能够突破自我设限,摆脱松懈的束缚,从而在个人发展中脱颖而出。
除此之外,如果个人拥有坚定不移的决心,就能变得更加坚韧,从而提升
个人的能量。相应地,这种坚定会增加他们散发正能量的可能性,吸引志
同道合的伙伴。再者,通过培养不懈努力,个人可以在身体和行为上保持
积极性,同时将坚持融入其多样化的技能组合中,这将有助于他们在未来
的职业发展中站稳脚跟。
本质上,要建立一个良好的环境,使坚韧不拔的精神能够得以发扬。
更重要的是,我们不应被沮丧和怀疑所掩盖,而应通过坚定的决心,度过
学术生活的风暴,迈向一个胜利的世界。
107真题样例七
2020 年真题
参考范文
Presented above is an introspective drawing, in which the girl in the left
picture, facing a substantial amount of work, demonstrates her determination to
promptly complete her homework, while the boy in the right picture, leaning
comfortably back in a chair, chooses to procrastinate his assignment.
Apparently, the drawing attempts to attach great weight to the essential role of
time management.
In my eyes, effective time management is associated with an array of
benefits. First and foremost, armed with a strong sense of efficient time
allocation, individuals are motivated to push beyond their mental limitations
and break free from the shackles of procrastination, thus excelling at
accomplishing their tasks. Apart from that, individuals, if equipped with
effective time management skills, will be capable of enhancing their
productivity and hence raising personal vibrations. Accordingly, efficient time
allocation will heighten their likelihood of exuding positive vibes that draw
like-minded peers. On top of that, through the cultivation of disciplined time
management, individuals can keep themselves behaviorally and intellectually
stimulated while weaving punctuality into their versatile skill set, which will
facilitate them in gaining a foothold in their professional endeavors.
108In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling environment where the
approach of meticulous planning can be carried forward. More prominently,
never should we let ourselves be overshadowed by time-wasting and
inefficiency; instead, it is through strategic time allocation that we can weather
the storms of a demanding life and sail towards a well-balanced world. (243
words)
参考译文
上图是一幅深思熟虑的画面:在左图,面对大量的工作的女孩展现出
她及时完成作业的决心,然而在右图,靠在椅子上的男孩选择拖延他的作
业。显而易见,这幅画试图强调时间管理的重要作用。
在我看来,有效的时间管理带来了许多好处。首先,拥有强烈的高效
时间分配意识,个人能够突破心理上的局限,摆脱拖延的束缚,从而在完
成任务中脱颖而出。除此之外,如果个人掌握了有效的时间管理技巧,就
能提高工作效率,从而提升个人的能量。相应地,高效的时间分配会增加
他们散发正能量的可能性,吸引志同道合的伙伴。再者,通过培养纪律严
明的时间管理,个人可以在行为和智力上保持积极性,同时将守时融入其
多样化的技能组合中,这将有助于他们在未来的职业发展中站稳脚跟。
本质上,要建立一个良好的环境,使细致规划的方法能够得以发扬。
更重要的是,我们不应被浪费时间和低效所掩盖,而应通过战略性的时间
分配,度过充满挑战的生活风暴,迈向一个平衡良好的世界。
109真题样例八
2021 年真题
参考范文
Unfolding right before our eyes is an illuminating scene: the kid, wearing a
Monkey King costume, bemoans that many classmates deem learning Chinese
opera boring, while his father, standing with a calm expression, encourages him
to persist in his interest. Apparently, the drawing attempts to invite reflection
on why steadfast passion truly matters.
In my eyes, there are several explanations as to the perks of consistent
zeal. First and foremost, armed with a strong sense of passionate commitment,
individuals are motivated to push beyond their self-imposed limitations and
break free from the shackles of indifference, thus excelling in their personal
development. Apart from that, individuals, if equipped with their genuine
interests, will be capable of becoming more energized and hence raising
personal vibrations. Accordingly, this dedication will heighten their likelihood
of exuding positive vibes that draw like-minded peers. On top of that, through
the cultivation of unwavering passion, individuals can keep themselves
intellectually stimulated while weaving enthusiasm into their versatile skill set,
which will facilitate them in gaining a foothold in their chosen fields.
110In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling environment where the
passion for one’s pursuits can be carried forward. More prominently, never
should we let ourselves be overshadowed by apathy and cynicism; instead, it is
through sustained enthusiasm that we can weather the storms of a challenging
life and sail towards a fulfilling and vibrant world. (231 words)
参考译文
呈现在我们眼前的是一个启发性的场景:穿着孙悟空戏服的孩子哀叹
很多同学都认为学习中国戏剧很枯燥,然而站在一旁、表情平静的父亲鼓
励他坚持自己的兴趣。显而易见,这幅画试图引发人们思考为什么坚定的
热情如此重要。
在我看来,关于坚持热情的好处有几种解释。首先,拥有强烈的热情
承诺,个人能够突破自我设限,摆脱冷漠的束缚,从而在个人发展中脱颖
而出。除此之外,如果个人拥有真正的兴趣爱好,就能变得更有活力,从
而提升个人的能量。相应地,这种奉献精神会增加他们散发正能量的可能
性,吸引志同道合的伙伴。再者,通过培养坚定不移的热情,个人可以在
智力上保持刺激,同时将热情融入其多样化的技能组合中,这将有助于他
们在所选择的领域中站稳脚跟。
本质上,要建立一个良好的环境,使对追求的热情能够得以发扬。更
重要的是,我们不应被冷漠和愤世嫉俗所掩盖,而应通过持续的热情,度
过充满挑战的生活风暴,迈向一个充实而充满活力的世界。
111真题样例九
2022 年真题
参考范文
Unfolding right before our eyes is an illuminating scene: when discussing
the information of a lecture on a bullet board, the girl on the left, with her
eyebrows slightly raised, opines that attending the lecture unrelated to her
major offers no discernible benefits, while the other girl on the right, standing
with a more enthusiastic posture, asserts that it is advantageous to lend an ear.
Apparently, the drawing aims to unearth the pivotal role of exploring
extracurricular knowledge.
In my eyes, the advantages of learning extracurricular knowledge are
manifold. First and foremost, armed with a strong sense of intellectual
curiosity, individuals are motivated to push beyond their academic limitations
and break free from the shackles of a narrow curriculum, thus excelling in their
educational journeys. Apart from that, individuals, if equipped with a habit of
acquiring extracurricular knowledge, will be capable of boosting their
knowledge base and hence raising personal vibrations. Accordingly, this
broadening of knowledge will heighten their likelihood of exuding positive
vibes that draw like-minded peers. On top of that, through the cultivation of
interdisciplinary learning, individuals can keep themselves intellectually
stimulated while weaving critical thinking into their versatile skill set, which
112will facilitate them in gaining a foothold in their professional endeavors.
In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling environment where the
pursuit of extracurricular knowledge can be carried forward. More
prominently, never should we let ourselves be overshadowed by intellectual
complacency; instead, it is through a continuous quest for knowledge that we
can weather the storms of academic life and sail towards an enlightened world.
(261 words)
参考译文
呈现在我们眼前的是一个发人深省的场景:在讨论公告板上的讲座信
息时,微微扬起眉毛的左边的女孩认为参加与专业无关的讲座没有明显好
处,然而姿态更加热情的右边的女孩坚称倾听是有好处的。显而易见,这
幅画旨在揭示探索课外知识的重要作用。
在我看来,学习课外知识的优势是多方面的。首先,拥有强烈的求知
欲,个人能够突破学术上的局限,摆脱狭隘课程的束缚,从而在教育旅程
中脱颖而出。除此之外,如果个人养成获取课外知识的习惯,就能增强知
识基础,从而提升个人的能量。相应地,这种知识的扩展会增加他们散发
正能量的可能性,吸引志同道合的伙伴。再者,通过培养跨学科学习,个
人可以在智力上保持刺激,同时将批判性思维融入其多样化的技能组合中,
这将有助于他们在未来的职业发展中站稳脚跟。
本质上,要建立一个良好的环境,使对课外知识的追求能够得以发扬。
更重要的是,我们不应被智力上的自满所掩盖,而应通过不断追求知识,
度过学术生活的风暴,迈向一个充满智慧的世界。
113真题样例十
2024 年真题
参考范文
Unfolding right before our eyes is an illuminating scene: in the left picture,
a young man who observes people exercising in the park’s fitness area
comments on how wonderful the newly built park near his home is. In the right
picture, the number of parks has increased from 406 in 2020 to 670 in 2022.
Apparently, the drawing aims to unearth the pivotal role of engaging in
physical fitness.
In my eyes, the advantages of regular physical exercise are manifold. First
and foremost, armed with a strong sense of physical fitness, individuals are
motivated to push beyond their physical limitations and break free from the
shackles of a sedentary lifestyle, thus excelling in their health and wellness
journeys. Apart from that, individuals, if equipped with a regular exercise
routine, will be capable of enhancing personal charm and hence raising personal
vibrations. Accordingly, this commitment to physical activity will heighten
their likelihood of exuding positive vibes that draw like-minded peers. On top
of that, through the cultivation of athletic discipline, individuals can keep
themselves mentally and physically stimulated while weaving resilience into
their versatile skill set, which will facilitate them in gaining a foothold in their
future professional endeavors.
114In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling environment where the
spirit of physical exercise can be carried forward. More prominently, never
should we let ourselves be overshadowed by inactivity and lethargy; instead, it
is through a commitment to regular exercise that we can weather the storms of a
demanding life and sail towards a vibrant and healthy world. (258 words)
参考译文
呈现在我们眼前的是一个发人深省的场景:在左图,年轻男子看到一
些人在公园健身区做运动并表示家门口新建的公园真不错,在右图,公园
的数量从 2020 年的 406 座上升到 2022 年的 670 座。显而易见,这幅画旨
在揭示参与身体锻炼的重要作用。
在我看来,定期身体锻炼的优势是多方面的。首先,拥有强烈的健身
意识,个人能够突破身体上的局限,摆脱久坐生活方式的束缚,从而在健
康和保健的旅程中脱颖而出。除此之外,如果个人有规律地进行锻炼,就
能增强个人魅力,从而提升个人能量。相应地,这种对体育活动的承诺会
增加他们散发正能量的可能性,吸引志同道合的伙伴。再者,通过培养运
动纪律,个人可以在精神和身体上保持积极性,同时将韧性融入其多样化
的技能组合中,这将有助于他们在未来的职业发展中站稳脚跟。
本质上,要建立一个良好的环境,使体育锻炼的精神能够得以发扬。
更重要的是,我们不应被不活动和倦怠所掩盖,而应通过定期锻炼的承诺,
度过充满挑战的生活风暴,迈向一个充满活力和健康的世界。
115②精神文化类
真题样例一
2010 年真题
参考范文
In the drawing lies an enlightening scene: a cultural hot pot, generating a
tempting mist of steam, encompasses delicious and nutritious cuisine, ranging
from Shakespeare, kung fu, Einstein to Peking Opera. Apparently, the drawing
aims to unearth the pivotal role of cultural exchange.
In my eyes, cultural exchange brings with it a cascade of benefits. First
and foremost, as a fundamental pillar of national education, cultural exchange
imbues individuals with a heightened sense of admiration and appreciation
towards diverse culture, which will galvanize them to cultivate appropriate
cultural values. Apart from that, cultural exchanges provide an accessible
avenue through which individuals can maintain constant cross-cultural dialogue
with people from diverse backgrounds while gaining profound insights into
global traditions and customs.
Through a wider lens, if every individual were to exemplify the
principles of promoting cultural exchanges, they would be better positioned to
cultivate a thriving cultural milieu. This would, in turn, ignite greater
116enthusiasm for cross-cultural engagement within the broader populace that
ultimately steers the whole society towards greater cultural diversity.
In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling environment where
cultural exchanges can be carried forward. More importantly, instead of being
enslaved by cultural superiority, we should wield cultural diversity as a guiding
light, illuminating the path to a culturally vibrant future for generations to
come. (218 words)
参考译文
在这幅图中展现了一个发人深省的场景:冒着诱人的蒸气的文化火锅
包含了美味又营养的菜肴,其中包含莎士比亚、功夫、爱因斯坦和京剧等。
显然,这幅图旨在揭示文化交流的关键作用。
在我看来,文化交流带来了一系列的好处。首先,作为国家教育的基
础支柱,文化交流使个人对多样化文化产生了更深的敬仰和欣赏之情,这
将激励他们培养相应的文化价值观。除此之外,文化交流提供了便捷的途
径,让个人能够与来自不同背景的人保持持续的跨文化对话,同时深入了
解全球传统和习俗。
从更广阔的视角看,如果每个个体都能体现促进文化交流的原则,他
们将更有可能培育出繁荣的文化氛围。进而,这将进一步在更广泛的民众
中点燃对跨文化交流的热情,最终推动整个社会朝着更大的文化多样性迈
进。
本质上,要建立一个良好的环境,使文化交流能够得以发扬。更重要
的是,我们不应被文化优越感所束缚,而应将文化多样性视为指引灯,为
子孙后代照亮通向充满文化活力的未来。
117真题样例二
2014 年真题
参考范文
In the drawing lies an enlightening scene: on the left side, a mother,
smiling broadly, grasps the hands of her daughter, while on the right side, the
aged mother, with a beaming face, is supported by her matured offspring after
three decades. Apparently, the drawing aims to highlight the underlying value
of filial piety.
In my eyes, filial piety offers a long list of benefits. First and foremost,
as a fundamental pillar of moral education, filial piety imbues individuals with
a heightened sense of care and responsibility towards the elderly and the young,
which will galvanize them to cultivate appropriate familial values. In addition,
filial piety provides an accessible avenue through which individuals can
maintain constant intergenerational dialogue with different generations while
gaining profound insights into the moral principles that underpin strong family
bonds.
Through a wider lens, if every individual were to exemplify the
principles of promoting filial piety, they would be better positioned to cultivate
a thriving ethical milieu. This would, in turn, ignite greater enthusiasm for
intergenerational harmony within the broader populace that ultimately steers the
118whole society towards greater social cohesion and harmony.
In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling environment where the
culture of filial piety can be carried forward. More importantly, never should
we let ourselves be overshadowed by indifference; instead, it is through filial
piety that we can weather the storms of familial life and sail towards a
harmonious world. (239 words)
参考译文
在这幅图中展现了一个发人深省的场景:在左边,面带笑容的一位母
亲握着女儿的手,然而在右边,三十年后,笑容洋溢的年迈母亲被其长大
成人的女儿搀扶着。显然,这幅画旨在突出孝顺的内在价值。
在我看来,孝顺有很多好处。首先,作为道德教育的基本支柱,孝顺
能使个人对老幼产生更强烈的关爱和责任感,从而激发他们培养适当的家
庭价值观。此外,孝顺提供了便捷的途径,个人可以通过这条途径与不同
的世代保持持续的代际对话,同时深刻领悟支撑牢固家庭纽带的道德原则。
从更广阔的视角来看,如果每个人都能以身作则,弘扬孝顺,那么他
们就能更好地营造欣欣向荣的道德环境。进而,这又会激发广大民众对代
际和谐的更大热情,最终引导整个社会走向更大的凝聚力与和谐。
本质上,要建立一个良好的环境,使孝顺文化能够得以发扬。更重要
的是,我们决不能让自己被冷漠所笼罩,相反,只有通过孝顺,我们才能
经受住家庭生活的风雨,驶向和谐世界。
119真题样例三
2023 年真题
参考范文
In the drawing lies an enlightening scene: an elderly man, captivated by a
spectacular scene of dragon boat racing and a massive gathering of people,
proudly states that the racing has enjoyed growing popularity in our village.
Apparently, the drawing attempts to invite reflection on why traditional
Chinese culture truly matters.
In my eyes, promoting traditional Chinese culture is associated with an
array of benefits. To begin with, as a fundamental pillar of national education,
organizing traditional cultural events imbues individuals with a heightened
sense of respect and reverence towards traditional Chinese culture, which will
galvanize them to cultivate appropriate cultural values. Apart from that,
engaging with traditional culture provides an accessible avenue through which
individuals can maintain constant cultural dialogue with their ancestors through
tangible legacies while gaining profound insights into practices and wisdom
passed down through generations.
Through a wider lens, if every individual were to exemplify the
principles of promoting traditional culture, they would be better positioned to
cultivate a thriving cultural milieu. This would, in turn, ignite greater
120enthusiasm for heritage preservation within the broader populace that ultimately
steers the whole society towards greater cultural integrity and unity.
In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling environment where
traditional Chinese culture can be carried forward. More importantly, never
should we let ourselves be overshadowed by mainstream culture; instead, it is
through cultural inclusiveness that we can weather the storms of cultural life
and sail towards a culturally dynamic world. (244 words)
参考译文
在这幅图中展现了一个发人深省的场景:沉迷于龙舟竞渡的壮观场面
和人头攒动的盛况的一位老人自豪地说,龙舟赛在我们村越来越受欢迎了。
显然,这幅画试图引发人们思考为什么中国传统文化如此重要。
在我看来,弘扬中华传统文化好处多多。首先,作为国民教育的基本
支柱,组织传统文化活动可以增强个人对中国传统文化的尊重和敬畏感,
从而激发他们培养适当的文化价值观。此外,参与传统文化还提供了便捷
的途径,使个人能够通过有形的遗产与祖先保持持续的文化对话,同时对
世代相传的习俗和智慧有深刻的了解。
从更广阔的视角来看,如果每个人都能以身作则,弘扬传统文化,那
么他们就能更好地培育繁荣的文化环境。进而,这又会激发更多民众保护
遗产的热情,最终引导整个社会朝着更加完整和统一的文化方向发展。
本质上,要建立一个良好的环境,使传统文化能够得以发扬。更重要
的是,我们决不能让自己被主流文化所掩盖,相反,只有通过文化包容性,
我们才能经受住文化生活的风浪,驶向充满文化活力的世界。
121③科技产品类
真题样例一
2009 年真题
参考范文
From the drawing springs a philosophical scene: a group of individuals,
isolated by a vast spiderweb, find themselves completely engrossed in the
virtual realm of the Internet, forsaking interpersonal communication. Captioned
below the drawing is the nearness and farness of the Internet, pointing us
towards the paradoxical nature of the Internet.
In my eyes, the Internet brings with it several benefits. First, underpinned
by the Internet, individuals are granted unprecedented access to an extensive
reservoir of information, thereby boosting their cognitive acuity and critical
thinking skills. Besides, with access to internet-enabled learning resources,
individuals are empowered to hone their self-directed learning skills, essential
attributes for outperforming other counterparts in a digital age. What’s more,
as the Internet has bridged previously insurmountable physical distances, it
offers individuals a different pathway to socialize with like-minded peers,
which will foster a renewed sense of connection and belonging.
However, the Internet is also accompanied by downsides. More
prominently, the dependence upon the Internet will compromise their cognitive
122and affective abilities, rendering them socially and emotionally incompetent.
Consequently, obsession with the Internet engenders an ever-growing sense of
estrangement that will inflict severe damage to their mental well-being.
In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling environment where
appropriate use of the Internet can be carried forward. More importantly, by
nurturing self-discipline in our hearts, we can root out the weeds of addiction to
the Internet and embrace a balanced and meaningful life in full bloom. (241
words)
参考译文
从这幅图画中呈现出一个哲学性的场景:被巨大蛛网分割的一群人完
全沉浸于互联网的虚拟世界中放弃人际交往。图画下方的标题是“互联网
的近与远”,指向互联网的矛盾性质。
在我看来,互联网可以带来了诸多好处。首先,在互联网的支持下,
个人获得了前所未有的大量信息,从而提高了他们的认知敏锐度和批判性
思维能力。此外,借助互联网提供的学习资源,个人能够提升自主学习能
力,这在数字时代是超越其他人的关键品质。而且,互联网跨越了以往难
以逾越的物理距离,为个人提供了与志同道合者社交的不同途径,这将培
养新的联系和归属感。
然而,互联网也有缺点。最显著的是,对互联网的依赖会削弱他们的
认知和情感能力,使他们在社交和情感上变得无能。因此,对互联网的痴
迷会产生日益增长的疏离感,严重损害他们的心理健康。
本质上,要建立一个良好的环境,使互联网的适度使用能够得以发扬。
更重要的是,通过在心中培养自律,我们可以根除对互联网成瘾的恶习,
迎接平衡而有意义的绽放人生。
123真题样例二
2015 年真题
参考范文
From the drawing springs a philosophical scene: four adolescents, glued to
the captivating world of their smartphones, ignore the delicious cuisine spread
out before them and steer clear of face-to-face interactions. Captioned under the
drawing is a party in the age of cell phones that places emphasis on the problem
of addiction to digital devices.
In my eyes, mobile devices are fraught with potential pitfalls. First,
smartphones bombard individuals with a deluge of misinformation, thereby
impairing their capacity to acquire genuine information proficiently and casting
a shadow over their judgement. Besides, those who frequently succumb to
digital devices will find themselves snared in a virtual world where they detach
from authentic social interactions. Subsequently, they will feel alienated from
their peers due to the absence of meaningful real-life connections. More
prominently, obsessed with their gadgets, individuals are prone to adopt a
sedentary lifestyle that renders them susceptible to a myriad of physical health
disorders, such as obesity and cardiovascular disease. Therefore, addiction to
digital devices constitutes an impediment to their academic and professional
pursuits.
In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling environment where
124appropriate use of smartphones can be carried forward. More importantly, by
nurturing self-discipline in our hearts, we can root out the weeds of addiction to
electronic devices and embrace a balanced and meaningful life in full bloom.
(222 words)
参考译文
从这幅图画中呈现出一个哲学性的场景:沉浸在智能手机的迷人世界
中的四名青少年对摆在面前的美食视而不见,也不进行面对面的交流。图
画下方的标题是“手机时代的聚会”,强调了沉迷于数字设备的问题。
在我看来,移动设备充满了潜在的隐患。首先,智能手机会对个人进
行大量的错误信息轰炸,从而影响他们熟练获取真实信息的能力,并给他
们的判断蒙上阴影。此外,那些经常屈从于数字设备的人会发现自己陷入
了一个虚拟世界,脱离了真实的社会交往。进而,由于缺乏有意义的现实
生活联系,他们会感到与同龄人疏远。更重要的是,沉迷于电子产品的人
很容易养成久坐不动的生活方式,从而容易患上肥胖症和心血管疾病等多
种身体健康疾病。因此,沉迷于数字设备会阻碍他们的学业和职业追求。
本质上,要建立一个良好的环境,使智能手机的适度使用能够得以发
扬。更重要的是,通过在心中培养自律,我们可以根除对智能手机成瘾的
恶习,迎接平衡而有意义的绽放人生。
125④环境污染类
真题样例一
2011 年真题
参考范文
From the drawing springs a philosophical scene: a couple of individuals,
seated aboard a boat, casually throw rubbish into the lake, already burdened
with an overwhelming accumulation of rubbish. Captioned beneath the drawing
is the remainder of the journey that invites our attention to the issue of
environmental pollution.
In my eyes, the possible drawbacks associated with environmental
pollution are daunting. First and foremost, environmental pollution has
detrimental ramifications on individuals’ well-being on the grounds that it
renders them susceptible to a heightened risk of various environmental threats,
such as extreme weather events. In addition, environmental contamination
thwarts the establishment of sanctuaries that can shield wildlife from the perils
of habitat destruction and human encroachment. Consequently, it is the
absence of safe havens that translates into decreased biodiversity. On top of
that, if left unchecked, environmental contamination will devastate local flora
126and fauna, hence detracting from the natural beauty that captivates an influx of
tourists. Inevitably, a worsening environment will stymie the growth of the
tourism sector.
In essence, it is imperative to establish an enabling environment where
environmental preservation can be carried forward. More prominently, never
should we let ourselves be overshadowed by the detrimental effects of
environmental pollution; instead, it is through sustainable practices and
collective action that we can weather the storms of environmentally challenged
life and sail towards a greener and healthier world. (227 words)
参考译文
从这幅画中呈现出一个哲理性的场景:坐在船上的两个人随意扔垃圾
到垃圾早已堆积如山的湖面。图画下方的标题是“旅程之余”,使我们关
注环境污染问题。
在我看来,与环境污染相关的潜在弊端是令人畏惧的。首先,环境污
染对个人健康有着不利的影响,因为它使人们更加容易受到各种环境威胁
的侵害,例如极端天气事件。此外,环境污染阻碍了为野生动物提供庇护
所的建立,而这些庇护所本可以保护野生动物免受栖息地破坏和人类侵占
的危险。结果,正是因为缺乏安全的庇护所,才导致了生物多样性的减少。
再者,如果不加以控制,环境污染将摧毁当地的动植物群落,从而削弱吸
引大量游客的自然美景。不可避免地,恶化的环境将阻碍旅游业的发展。
本质上,要建立一个良好的环境,使环境保护能够得以发扬。更重要
的是,我们绝不应让自己被环境污染的有害影响所掩盖;相反,正是通过
可持续的做法和集体行动,我们才能经受住环境挑战生活的风暴,驶向一
个更绿色和更健康的世界。
127二、图表类作文模板
英语二大作文题目要求:
Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER
SHEET. (15 points)
(备注*:考试要求字数 150 词左右,建议作文字数不要>200 词。)
英语二大作文段落布局:
128英语二大作文分门别类:
通过梳理 2013 年到 2024 年的考研英语二大作文真题,我们会发现作
文主要分为两大类型:静态图作文和动态图作文。
静态图作文代表 动态图作文代表
2013 年真题 2014 年真题
横坐标:学生年级 纵坐标:人数占比 横坐标:时间年份 纵坐标:人口数量
结论:左边的图片展示了高校学生兼职的占比情况,反映的是某一固定阶
段的比例,没有出现随时间而变的特征,所以可以判定为“静态图”;右
边的图片展示了 20 年间城镇人口与农村人口的变化,是动态的,会随着时
间的变化出现上升或者下降的情况,所以可以判定为“动态图”。因此,
看到图表,我们要先把握横纵坐标,再看是否有时间变化。
在过去的 12 年里,静态图和动态图在考试中分别出现了 7 次和 5 次,
这表明这两种图表在考试中的重要性不相上下。为了在考试中从容应对,
我们可以在平时学习中分别积累“静态图”和“动态图”的描述技巧。在
考场上,根据实际遇到的图表类型,灵活运用所学的方法,对症下药,就
能够顺利写出高质量的作文。
129静态图汇总(2013-2024)
2013年真题 2015年真题
2016年真题 2018年真题
2020年真题 2021年真题
1302024年真题
动态图汇总(2013-2024)
2014年真题 2017年真题
2019年真题 2022年真题
2023年真题
131(1)如何写好第一段?
英语二大作文真题案例:
(2024 年真题)
首段总起句的核心:引出下文图表描述
可以说“根据上面的条形图/柱状图/饼状图/折线图/表格,统计数据揭
示了……”,类似的也行。这个总起句是“小引子”,建议字数不用太长,
尽量保证开门见山。
首段描述句的核心:描述图表内容要素
先判断是静态图还是动态图,然后再描述图表中的关键要素或者一些
极值。2024 年真题有 4 个关键要素,可以着重描述一下最大值,其他三项
罗列一下即可。由此可以这样描述“学习了相关知识占大部分,占 91.3%,
其次是提升了动手能力、感觉到心情舒畅和增强了合作能力,分别是 84.8%、
54.4%和 32.6%。”
首段总结句的核心:概括图表背后主题
大家思考一下:为什么学习了相关知识占比最高?个人觉得,切入点
可以是:实践出真知……总而言之,各位同学将首段的写作思路牢记于心,
并积累本模板后面的各类句型,“写作难”的难题定会迎刃而解!
1321. 首段起始句
模板句一
The bar chart/column chart/pie chart/line graph/table above captures the
statistical data regarding (主题).
上面的条形图/柱状图/饼状图/折线图/表格捕捉到了关于(主题)的统
计数据。
模板句二
The bar chart/column chart/pie chart/line graph/table above sheds light on
the statistical data related to (主题).
上面的条形图/柱状图/饼状图/折线图/表格揭示了关于(主题)的统计
数据。
模板句三
The bar chart/column chart/pie chart/line graph/table above mirrors the
statistical data pertaining to (主题).
上面的条形图/柱状图/饼状图/折线图/表格反映了与(主题)有关的统
计数据。
学长点睛
bar chart(左边)和 column chart(右边):
shedlight onsth.:意为“阐明”或“解释清楚”。它通常用于表达通过提供
更多信息或解释来使某事变得更清楚或易于理解。
pertain to sth.:pertain 读为/pərˈteɪn/,整个短语意为“关于”或“涉及”。
133模板句四
The bar chart/column chart/pie chart/line graph/table above lays out the
statistical data concerning (主题).
上面的条形图/柱状图/饼状图/折线图/表格列出了关于(主题)的统计
数据。
模板句五
The bar chart/column chart/pie chart/line graph/table above casts a spotlight
on the statistical data relevant to (主题).
上面的条形图/柱状图/饼状图/折线图/表格聚焦于与(主题)相关的统
计数据。
模板句六
The bar chart/column chart/pie chart/line graph/table above offers a holistic
view of the statistical data associated with (主题).
上面的条形图/柱状图/饼状图/折线图/表格提供了与(主题)相关的统
计数据的整体视图。
学长点睛
cast a spotlight on:spotlight 字面意思是“聚光灯”,引申为“聚焦于”
或“特别关注”。它通常用于强调某个特定的主题或问题,就像在舞台
上用聚光灯照亮演员一样。
offer a holistic view:意思是“提供整体的视角”或“全面地看待”。这
个表达强调的是对某个主题或数据的整体和全面的理解,而不仅仅是局
部或片面的看法。
1342. 首段描述句
①静态图
模板句一
Specifically, (类 别 1) secures a lion’s share, accounting for (数 据 1),
followed by (类别 2), (类别 3) and (类别 4), arriving at (数据 2), (数据 3)
and (数据 4) respectively.
具体来说,(类别 1)占大部分,占(数据 1),其次是(类别 2)、(类
别 3)和(类别 4),分别是(数据 2)、(数据 3)和(数据 4)。
模板句二
Specifically, (类别 1) takes the lead, making up (数据 1). This is followed
by (类别2), (类别3) and (类别4), which stand at (数据2), (数据3) and (数
据 4) respectively.
具体来说,(类别 1)居首位,占(数据 1)。其次是(类别 2)、(类
别 3)和(类别 4),分别占(数据 2)、(数据 3)和(数据 4)。
学长点睛
secure a lion’s share:意思是“占最大份额”,常用于描述某人或某事物
获得了最大的份额或是最重要的一部分。这个表达来源于狮子在分食猎
物时通常占据最大份额的形象。
take the lead:意思是“处于首位”,常用于描述某个项目、团队或类别
在某一方面表现出色或处于领先地位。它也可以用来描述某一指标上某
个主体超过了其他主体,处于首位。这种表达在描述趋势和比较数据时
非常有用。
135模板句三
Specifically, (类别 1) holds the top position with a significant (数据 1),
while the remaining categories, namely (类别 2), (类别 3) and (类别 4),
constitute (数据 2), (数据 3) and (数据 4) respectively.
具体来说,(类别 1)以显著的(数据 1)占据首位,其余类别,即(类
别 2)、(类别 3)和(类别 4),分别占(数据 2)、(数据 3)和(数
据 4)。
模板句四
Specifically, (类别 1) secures the top spot with an impressive (数据 1). In
comparison, the remaining categories, including (类别 2), (类别 3) and (类
别 4), comprise (数据 2), (数据 3) and (数据 4) respectively.
具体来说,(类别 1)以惊人的(数据 1)遥遥领先。相比之下,其余
类别,包括(类别 2)、(类别 3)和(类别 4)分别为(数据 2)、(数
据 3)和(数据 4)。
学长点睛
constitute:表示“构成”或“组成”,一般都是主动用法,直接跟宾语。
hold the top position:意思是“占据首位”,通常用于描述某个数据点
或类别在图表中的表现超过其他所有项,处于最前列的位置。
remaining categories:指的是“剩余类别”或“其他类别”,可用来替
换 other categories。
secure the top spot:secure 在这里表示“确保”,top spot 这个短语意为
“首位”或“第一名”,在任何排名或竞争中指的是最高的那个位置。
136模板句五
Specifically, (类别 1) boasts the largest share at (数据 1), whereas (类别 4)
only accounts for (数据 4), making it the smallest segment. Meanwhile, the
remaining categories, including (类别 2) and (类别 3), consist of (数据 2)
and (数据 3) respectively.
具体而言,(类别 1)拥有最高份额,为(数据 1),然而,(类别 4)
仅占 (数据 4),是最小的部分。与此同时,其他类别,包括(类别 2)
和(类别 3),分别占(数据 2)和(数据 3)。
模板句六
Specifically, (类别1) holds a commanding lead, representing (数据1). Next
comes (类别 2), which reaches (数据 2). By contrast, the remaining groups,
(类别 3) and (类别 4), contribute (数据 3) and (数据 4) respectively.
具体而言,(类别 1)处于绝对领先地位,占(数据 1)。其次是(类
别 2),占(数据 2)。相比下,其余各组,(类别 3)和(类别 4)分
别贡献了(数据 3)和(数据 4)。
学长点睛
boast:意思是“拥有”或“自豪地拥有”。在模板句五中,boast 强调
在某个方面(比如市场份额、资源占有量等)占据了最大份额。
hold a commanding lead:commanding 意为“统帅的;居领先位置的”,
整个短语可理解为“处于领先地位”,强调在数据上占据最高百分比,
意味着在所有类别中是最为显著的。
contribute:后面直接加数据,表示某因素在整体中的具体贡献比例。
137②动态图
图表趋势描述方法
以 2023 年真题为例,介绍常见的趋势描述的 9 种方法,即动副词法、
形名词法、被动句型、对比差值法、非谓语形式、非人称主语、非限定性
定语从句、总体趋势+伴随状语、总体趋势+被动句型+非限定定语从句:
2023 年真题
动副词法
真题例句:The health literacy rate of Chinese residents climbed steadily
from 8.8% in 2012 to 25.4% in 2021.
模板提炼:(类别 1) climbed/declined steadily/remarkably from (数据 1) in
(年份 1) to (数据 1’) in (年份 1’).
例句延伸:The health literacy rate of Chinese residents climbed steadily
from less than a tenth to roughly a quarter between 2012 and 2021.
内容解析:动词和副词搭配来表示趋势的升降,如 grow slightly(小幅
上升)或者 drop significantly(大幅下降)。另外,表达百分数时既可
以直接用 8.8%这样的百分数,也可以将其转化为 less than a tenth,大家
可根据整体字数和自身习惯进行选择。
138少于百分之十 less than a tenth <10%
多于百分之二十五 more than a quarter >25%
少于百分之二十 less than a fifth <20%
约百分之四十 nearly/around/close to/roughly two fifths ≈40%
多于百分之五十 more than half >50%
大于百分之七十五 more than three quarters >75%
形名词法:
真题例句:There was a notable increase in the health literacy rate of
Chinese residents from 8.80% in 2012 to 25.4% in 2021.
模板提炼:There was a notable/slight increase/decrease in (类别 1) from
(数据 1) in (年份 1) to (数据 1’) in (年份 1’).
内容解析:按照形容词和名词的搭配,可以是 a remarkable increase(显
著增长)或 an obvious decline(显著下降)等。
被动句型:
真题例句:A noticeable rise in the health literacy rate of Chinese residents
from 8.80% in 2012 to 25.4% in 2021 was registered.
模板提炼:A noticeable/gradual rise/decline in (类别 1) from (数据 1) in
(年份 1) to (数据 1’) in (年份 1’) was registered.
内容解析:按照形容词和名词的搭配,句首可以是 a remarkable increase
(显著增长)或 an obvious decline(显著下降)等,整体句式按照 sth. be
done 的结构。
139对比差值法:
真题例句:The health literacy rate of Chinese residents arrived at 25.4% in
2021, a massive leap of 16.6% compared with the 2012 level of 8.8%.
模板提炼:(类别 1) arrived at (数据 1) in (年份 1), a massive leap/drop of
(数据差值) compared with the (年份 1’) level of (数据 1’).
内容解析:对比差值法主要是比较这个趋势的极大值和极小值,并算出
其中差值。如果趋势是明显的上升状态,就可用 a massive leap(大幅上
涨),如果趋势是明显的下降状态,就可用 a massive drop(大幅下跌)。
非谓语形式:
真 题 例 句 : The health literacy rate of Chinese people displayed
substantial changes, rising from 8.80% in 2012 to 25.4% in 2021.
模板提炼:(类别 1) displayed substantial changes, rising/declining from (数
据 1) in (年份 1) to (数据 1’) in (年份 1’).
内容解析:后面 rising 是 rise 的现在分词形式,在句子中作非谓语,进
一步补充说明 substantial changes 的情况。
非人称主语:
真题例句:The past decade from 2012 to 2021 saw a noticeable rise in the
health literacy rate of Chinese residents from 8.80% to 25.4%.
模板提炼:(时间间隔) from (年份 1) to (年份 1’) saw a noticeable/steady
rise/decline in (类别 1) from (数据 1) to (数据 1’).
内容解析:非人称主语句的主语不是人。该例句是时间作主语。
140非限定性定语从句:
真题例句:In 2012, the health literacy rate of Chinese residents reached
8.80%, which ascended to 25.4% in 2021.
模板提炼:In (年份 1), (类别 1) reached (数据 1), which ascended/
descended to (数据 1’) in (年份 1’).
内容解析:which 引导的是非限定性定语从句,是对前面内容的进一步
补充说明。
总体趋势+伴随状语:
真题例句:The trend for the health literacy rate of Chinese residents was
upward, with a notable increase from 8.80% in 2012 to 25.40% in 2021.
模板提炼:The trend for (类别 1) was upward/downward, with a notable/
modest ascent/descent from (数据 1) in (年份 1) to (数据 1’) in (年份 1’).
内容解析:先用 the trend 讲一下总体的趋势变化,然后再用 with 引导
的伴随状语描述具体的上升数值和下降数值。
总体趋势+被动句型+非限定性定语从句:
真题例句:An upward trajectory was observed in the health literacy rate
of Chinese residents, which surged from 8.80% in 2012 to 25.4% in 2021.
模板提炼:An upward/A downward trajectory was observed in (类别 1),
which surged/plunged from (数据 1) in (年份 1) to (数据 1’) in (年份 1’).
内容解析:用被动句呈现总体趋势,然后用非限定性定语从句补充说明。
141图表趋势细节补充:
看完八大类型的图表趋势描述方法后,大家应该有所收获。另外,这
边给大家简单地补充一些表达,如大幅上升、大幅下降和稳步上升等。
sharp/steep/massive/significant/substantial/dramatic/remarkable
大幅
leap/climb/increase/rise/growth/ascent
steady/gradual/continuous/consistent/progressive/incremental
稳步 增加
leap/climb/increase/rise/growth/ascent
minor/slight/modest/marginal/sluggish/moderate
小幅
leap/climb/increase/rise/growth/ascent
sharp/steep/massive/significant/substantial/dramatic/remarkable
大幅
dip/fall/drop/decrease/decline/reduction/descent
steady/gradual/continuous/consistent/progressive/incremental
稳步 下降
dip/fall/drop/decrease/decline/reduction/descent
minor/slight/modest/marginal/sluggish/moderate
小幅
dip/fall/drop/decrease/decline/reduction/descent
注意:写成句子时,别忘记不定冠词 a/an。另外,表格中主要是形容词+
名词的形式,如果是要用动词+副词的形式,只需在表格单词的基础上修
改即可,如 a dramatic growth→grow dramatically。
希望各位同学能熟练运用上述的表达,如果觉得自己还行有余力,并
且在这些基础上还想积累“大幅增长”或者“大幅下降”的词汇,可以继
续往下看。
大幅增长
skyrocket
例句:The stock prices skyrocketed from $50 in 2018 to $150 in 2020.
译文:股票价格从 2018 年的 50 美元飙升到 2020 年的 150 美元。
142surge
例句:The demand for electric cars surged from 1 million units in 2019 to 3
million units in 2021.
译文:电动汽车的需求从 2019 年的 100 万辆激增到 2021 年的 300 万辆。
soar
例句:Tourism numbers soared from 2 million visitors in 2017 to 5 million
in 2019.
译文:旅游人数从 2017 年的 200 万激增到 2019 年的 500 万。
spike
译文:There was a spike in online sales from $200,000 in 2016 to $1 million
in 2018.
例句:在线销售从 2016 年的 20 万美元激增到 2018 年的 100 万美元。
balloon
译文:The company’s revenue ballooned from $500 million in 2015 to $1.2
billion in 2017.
例句:公司收入从 2015 年的 5 亿美元大幅增长到 2017 年的 12 亿美元。
大幅下降
plummet
例句:Oil prices plummeted from $100 per barrel in 2014 to $30 in 2016.
译文:油价从 2014 年的每桶 100 美元暴跌到 2016 年的 30 美元。
nosedive
例句:The medical company’s shares nosedived from $80 in 2019 to $20 in
2020.
译文:医疗公司股票从 2019 年的 80 美元暴跌到 2020 年的 20 美元。
143plunge
例句:The value of the currency plunged from 1.5 in 2018 to 0.8 in 2020.
译文:货币价值从 2018 年的 1.5 暴跌到 2020 年的 0.8。
collapse
例句:The housing prices collapsed from $500,000 in 2007 to $200,000 in
2009.
译文:房价从 2007 年的 50 万美元暴跌到 2009 年的 20 万美元。
tumble
例句:The company’s market value tumbled from $300 billion in 2018 to
$100 billion in 2020.
译文:公司市值从 2018 年的 3000 亿美元暴跌到 2020 年的 1000 亿美元。
趋势模板整合思路
大家应该对趋势描述的 8 种方法和图表常用表达有了整体了解。接下
来我们看如何 4 步拿下图表趋势描述。
①首先:抓取图表描述类目
(2 个描述类目) (3 个描述类目)
左图(2014 年真题):2 个描述类目,即城镇人口从 1990 年的 3 亿升至 2010
年的 6.66 亿;农村人口从 1990 年的 8.34 亿降至 2010 年的 6.74 亿。
144右图(2019 年真题):3 个描述类目,即毕业生就业从 2013 年的 68.1%降
至 2018 年的 60.7%;毕业生升学从 2013 年的 26.3%升至 2018 年的 34.0%;
毕业生创业从 2013 年的 1.3%缓慢升至 2018 年的 2.6%。
②其次:选取趋势描述方法
左图:运用动副词法、形名词法
(类别 1) climbed/declined steadily/remarkably from (数据 1) in (年份 1) to
(数据1’) in (年份1’). There was a notable/slight increase/decrease in (类别
2) from (数据 2) in (年份 1) to (数据 2’) in (年份 1’).
右图:运用形名词法、被动句型和对比差值法
There was a notable/slight increase/decrease in (类别 1) from (数据 1) in
(年份1) to (数据1’) in (年份1’). A noticeable/gradual rise/decline in (类别
2) from (数据 2) in (年份 1) to (数据 2’) in (年份 1’) was registered. (类别
3) arrived at (数据 3) in (年份 1), a massive leap/drop of (数据差值)
compared with the (年份 1’) level of (数据 3’).
③另外:句子之间插入连词
可选择 and,meanwhile,at the same time,simultaneously,during the same
period 或 during the same timeframe 等。
④最后:填入具体图表数据
把抓取出来的数据,填入到选中的模板,就可完成动态图趋势的描述。
总而言之,望大家熟练记忆各种句式和表达。下面展示的是 6 句动态模
板句,供大家参考。大家也可自行组合,毕竟有多种可能 。
145模板句一
Specifically, (类别 1) climbed/declined steadily/remarkably from (数据 1)
in (年份 1) to (数据 1’) in (年份 1’). Meanwhile, there was a notable/slight
increase/decrease in (类别 2) from (数据 2) to (数据 2’). And a noticeable/
gradual rise/decline in (类别 3) from (数据 3) to (数据 3’) was registered.
具体而言,(类别 1)从(年份 1)的(数据 1)稳步/显著攀升/下降到
(年份 1’)的(数据 1’)。同时,(类别 2)有明显/轻微的增加/减少,
从(数据 2)到(数据 2’)。另外,(类别 3)出现了明显/逐渐的上升
/下降,从(数据 3)到(数据 3’)。
模板句二
Specifically, (类别 1) climbed/declined steadily/remarkably from (数据 1)
in (年份 1) to (数据 1’) in (年份 1’). Meanwhile, a noticeable/gradual rise/
decline in (类别 2) from (数据 2) to (数据 2’) was registered. And (类别 3)
arrived at (数据3) in (年份1), a massive leap/drop of (数据差值) compared
with the (年份 1’) level of (数据 3’).
具体而言,(类别 1)从(年份 1)的(数据 1)稳步/显著攀升/下降到
(年份 1’)的(数据 1’)。同时,(类别 2)出现了明显/逐渐的上升/
下降,从(数据 2)到(数据 2’)。另外,(类别 3)在(年份 1)达
到(数据 3),与(年份 1’)的(数据 3’)水平相比,实现了(数据差
值)的巨大飞跃/下降。
146模板句三
Specifically, there was a notable/slight increase/decrease in (类别 1) from
(数据1) in (年份1) to (数据1’) in (年份1’). Meanwhile, (类别2) arrived at
(数据 2) in (年份 1), a massive leap/drop of (数据差值) compared with the
(年份 1’) level of (数据 2’). And an upward/downward trajectory was
observed in (类别 3), which surged/plunged from (数据 3) to (数据 3’).
具体而言,(类别 1)有明显/轻微的增加/减少,从(年份 1)的(数据
1)到(年份 1’)的(数据 1’)。与此同时,(类别 2)在(年份 1)达
到(数据 2),与(年份 1’)的(数据 2’)水平相比,实现了(数据差
值)的巨大飞跃/下降。另外,(类别 3)可以观察到上升/下降轨迹,
从(数据 3)猛增/猛跌到(数据 3’)。
模板句四
Specifically, a noticeable/gradual rise/decline in (类别 1) from (数据 1) in
(年份 1) to (数据 1’) in (年份 1’) was registered. Meanwhile, (类别 2)
displayed substantial changes, rising/declining from (数据 2) to (数据 2’).
And in (年份 1), (类别 3) reached (数据 3), which ascended/descended to
(数据 3’) in (年份 1’).
具体而言,(类别 1)出现了明显/逐渐的上升/下降,从(年份 1)的(数
据 1)到(年份 1’)的(数据 1’)。与此同时,(类别 2)发生了重大
变化,从(数据 2)上升/下降到(数据 2’)。另外,在(年份 1),(类
别 3)达到(数据 3),在(年份 1’)上升/下降到(数据 3’)。
147模板句五
Specifically, a noticeable/gradual rise/decline in (类别 1) from (数据 1) in
(年份 1) to (数据 1’) in (年份 1’) was registered. Meanwhile, in (年份 1),
(类别 2) reached (数据 2), which ascended/descended to (数据 2’) in (年份
1’). And the trend for (类别 3) was upward/downward, with a notable/
modest ascent/descent from (数据 3) to (数据 3’).
具体而言,(类别 1)出现了明显/逐渐的上升/下降,从(年份 1)的(数
据 1)到(年份 1’)的(数据 1’)。在(年份 1),(类别 2)达到(数
据 2),在(年份 1’)上升/下降到(数据 2’)。(类别 3)的趋势是上
升/下降的,从(数据 3)到(数据 3’)有明显/温和的上升/下降。
模板句六
Specifically, (类别 1) arrived at (数据 1) in (年份 1), a massive leap/drop of
(数据差值) compared with the (年份 1’) level of (数据 1’). Meanwhile, in
(年份 1), (类别 2) reached (数据 2), which ascended/descended to (数据 2’)
in (年份 1’). And an upward/downward trajectory was observed in (类别 3),
which surged/plunged from (数据 3) to (数据 3’).
具体而言,(类别 1)在(年份 1)达到(数据 1),与(年份 1’)的
(数据 1’)水平相比,实现了(数据差值)的巨大飞跃/下降。在(年
份 1),(类别 2)达到(数据 2),在(年份 1’)上升/下降到(数据
2’)。(类别 3)可以观察到上升/下降轨迹,从(数据 3)猛增/猛跌到
(数据 3’)。
148⑤趋势补充(学有余力,自行补充*)
动态图一:如何描述“先上升,再下降”?
After soaring to (数据 1), (类别 1) settled at (数据 1’).
After peaking at (数据 1), (类别 1) dipped to (数据 1’).
(类别 1) spiked at (数据 1) before sliding down to (数据 1’).
(类别 1) hit its maximum at (数据 1) before receding to (数据 1’).
(类别 1) reached a high of (数据 1) followed by a drop to (数据 1’).
(类别 1) reached a zenith of (数据 1) followed by a decline to (数据 1’).
学长点睛
settle at:表示数据在达到高点后趋于稳定,强调最终的稳定状态。
spike at:意为“达到最高点”,表示突然上升,强调数据突然达到高点。
slide down:slide 常意为“滑倒”,所以该表达形象地描述数据从一个
高点逐渐下降到较低水平的过程。
recede:意为“向后退”,可以将其与“距离变远”或“退回”联系在
一起,这样的联想可以自然地延伸到图表数值从高处逐渐回落到低处的
趋势。
a zenith of sth.:zenith 意为“顶点”,这个表达与 a peak of sth.或者 a high
of sth.相近。在图表中,可以用该表达表示达到顶峰,强调数据达到最
高点的时刻。
149动态图二:如何描述“先下降,再上升”?
After declining to (数据 1), (类别 1) recovered to (数据 1’).
After sinking to (数据 1), (类别 1) bounced back to (数据 1’).
(类别 1) decreased to (数据 1) before skyrocketing to (数据 1’).
(类别 1) dipped to a low of (数据 1) before soaring to (数据 1’).
(类别 1) reached a nadir at (数据 1) followed by a rise to (数据 1’).
(类别 1) bottomed out at (数据 1) followed by an increase to (数据 1’).
学长点睛
sink:意为“沉(船)”,从上往下的画面感油然而生,所以在图表中
也就可以理解为下降。
bounce back to:意为“重回到”,也可以用 rebound,就像弹簧或球一
样,数据在下降后回升到某个水平。
skyrocket:作名词时,意为“火箭”。在图表中,数据就像火箭一样一
飞冲天,故作动词时表示“飙升”或“猛涨”。
nadir:意为“最低谷”,可指事物的最低点或最低水平。在图表描述中,
特别是在描述数据趋势或变化时,nadir 可以用来明确表示某一时间段
或某个变量达到的最低值。
bottom out:意为“触底”,bottom 在此处用作动词,算是小词大用。
整个短语常用于形容趋势、曲线或数据的最低点。
150动态图三:如何描述“先……,再趋于平稳”?
(1) (2)
After ... , (类别 1) levelled off at (数据 1).
After ... , (类别 1) hovered around (数据 1).
After ... , (类别 1) plateaued around (数据 1).
After ... , (类别 1) remained flat at nearly (数据 1).
After ... , (类别 1) stayed unchanged at nearly (数据 1).
After ... , (类别 1) remained consistent at nearly (数据 1).
学长点睛
level off:意为“变得平稳”,通常用于描述一种变化的过程达到一个
稳定的状态,不再继续上升或下降。
hover:意为“徘徊”,表示悬停在某个位置附近,用于描述数据在某个
值附近上下波动,但整体变化不大。
plateau:作名词意为“高原”,因为高原不仅仅是平坦的,还代表了一
种在一定高度上稳定不变的状态。而在数据图表中,当曲线在某个水平
上保持平稳不变时,这种状态与高原的特征高度相似,所以这个短语作
动词时意为“保持稳定水平”。
flat:作形容词,表示某物没有高低起伏,表面是平坦的。在图表描述
中,当某个数据趋势没有显著变化时,我们说它是 flat。
151动态图四:如何描述“于……,类别 1 反超类别 2”?
(月份/年份) marked the point where (类别 1) overtook (类别 2).
(月份/年份) highlighted a pivotal moment as (类别 1) surpassed (类别 2).
In (月份/年份), (类别 1) climbed past (类别 2), signaling a trend reversal.
A trend reversal was seen in (月份/年份), with (类别 1) exceeding(类别 2).
A notable crossover occurred in (月份/年份) when (类别 1) surpassed (类
别 2).
In (月份/年份), (类别 1) outperformed (类别 2), marking a critical turning
point.
学长点睛
overtake:意为“超越,超过”,表示一条线或数据点在特定时间段超
过了另一条线或数据点。近义词有 outperform、surpass 或者 exceed 等。
signal:意为“显示,表明”,是个提示性的词语,常用于描述趋势的
转折点或预期变化。
reversal:意为“逆转,翻转”,强调趋势或数据发生了显著的变化,方
向完全相反。
crossover:意为“交叉,相交”,用来描述图表中两条线相交的点,表
示某一变量的值超过了另一变量,并且两者在特定点上交换了位置。
1523. 首段总结句
描述完图表的趋势或者占比,我们就要思考为什么会有这样的趋势?
为什么会有这样的占比?不管是何种类型的图表,其背后反映的都是一种
现象。而第二段就是要分析图表背后现象的产生原因,如此一来,整体行
文思路就比较清晰。我们以 2014 年真题和 2019 年真题为例:
(2014 年真题)
图表趋势:城镇人口逐渐增多,农村人口逐渐减少。
背后现象:越来越多的人更倾向于城市生活→城市生活受欢迎。
(2019 年真题)
图表趋势:毕业生升学人数大幅增加,就业与创业人数变化不大。
背后现象:越来越多的毕业生更倾向于升学深造→升学受欢迎。
153模板句一
Apparently, the chart aims to reflect the growing popularity of (主题).
显而易见,本图表旨在反映(主题)越来越流行。
模板句二
Apparently, the chart aims to highlight the broadening appeal of (主题).
显而易见,本图表旨在强调(主题)越来越具有吸引力。
模板句三
Apparently, the chart seeks to present people’s surging interest in (主题).
显而易见,本图表试图展示人们对(主题)的越来越有兴趣。
学长点睛
apparently:作副词,意为“显而易见地”,近义词有 plainly、obviously、
evidently 和 manifestly 等,可以按需替换。
aim to:意为“旨在”,近义表达有 seek to、desire to、attempt to 或 be
intended to 等,可替换使用。
highlight:作动词时,意为“强调”,表示将某事物特别显著地展示或
呈现出来,以便他人可以注意到或理解其重要性。
broadening appeal:broadening 作形容词,意为“扩大的”。appeal 作名
词,意为“吸引力”或“感染力”。
surging:作形容词,是“surge”的现在分词形式,意为“急剧上升的”,
用来形容某种情绪、需求或兴趣的迅速增长。另外,可以将 surging
interest 理解为 growing interest 的高级替换。
154模板句四
Apparently, the chart seeks to reveal people’s increasing willingness to (主
题).
显而易见,本图表试图揭示人们越来越想要(主题)。
模板句五
Apparently, the chart attempts to uncover people’s growing fascination with
(主题).
显而易见,本图表试图揭示人们越来越迷恋(主题)。
模板句六
Apparently, the chart attempts to showcase people’s growing inclination
towards (主题).
显而易见,本图表试图展示人们越来越倾向于(主题)。
学长点睛
willingness:作名词,表示“意愿”。它表达了一个人愿意去做某事的
态度或意图。常见的表达是 the willingness to 后面跟着动宾结构 (do
sth.)。
uncover:un-是一个常见的否定前缀,表示“取消、去除”。cover 意为
“覆盖”。uncover 就表示“去除覆盖”的意思,即“揭开;揭露”。
fascination:作名词,表示“迷恋”,指的是强烈的兴趣或吸引力。
inclination:作名词,表示“倾向”或“意向”,指的是偏好或愿望。incline
是其动词形式,常见表达 be inclined to do sth.,表示“倾向于做某事”。
155(2)真题套用示范
真题样例一
2021 年真题
参考范文
The column chart above mirrors the statistical data pertaining to the way
residents do exercise. Specifically, doing exercise alone holds a commanding
lead, representing 54.3%. Next comes exercising with friends, which reaches
47.7%. By contrast, the remaining groups, exercising with family members and
group activities, contribute 23.9% and 15.8% respectively. Apparently, the
chart seeks to present people’s surging interest in doing exercise solely.
In my eyes, the phenomenon is driven by multiple reasons. To start with,
through involvement in exercising alone, people are endowed with the capacity to
develop self-discipline and independence, essential attributes for gaining a
foothold in personal success. Besides, in a world inundated with unproductive
social interactions, solo exercise serves as a counterbalance, hence offering a
leeway to boost personal fitness and keep fit. From a macro view, in the wake of
technological progress, emerging products represented by innovative fitness
applications have made their way into people’s daily exercise regimes, which
156smooths the path for self-directed workouts.
Arguably, a mix of capacity improvement, health maintenance and
technological progress is a recipe for the popularity of sole exercise. In this
sense, we can yield enormous benefits from engaging in solo exercise and
subsequently carve out a more flexible life. (201 words)
参考译文
上面的柱状图反映了居民锻炼方式的统计数据。具体而言,独自锻炼
以最高比例脱颖而出,占 54.3%。其次是和朋友一起,达到 47.7%。相比之
下,其余各组,和家人一起和团体活动分别贡献了 23.9%和 15.8%。显而易
见,本图表试图展示人们对独自锻炼日益增长的兴趣。
在我看来,这一现象是由诸多原因导致的。首先,通过独自锻炼,人
们能够培养自律和独立的能力,这些是获得个人成功的关键品质。此外,
在充斥着无效社交互动的世界里,独自锻炼作为一种平衡手段,为提高个
人体能和保持健康提供了途径。从宏观角度看,随着技术进步,以创新健
身应用为代表的新兴产品已经进入人们的日常锻炼计划,这为自我指导的
锻炼铺平了道路。
可以说,能力提升、健康维持和科技进步的共同作用是独自锻炼受欢迎的原
因。从这个意义上说,通过参与独自锻炼,我们可以获得巨大的收益,并随
之创造出更加灵活的生活方式。
157真题样例二
2022 年真题
参考范文
The column chart lays out the statistical data concerning the express
delivery in China. Specifically, in 2018, the volume of overall express delivery
reached 51 billion, which ascended to 83 billion in 2020. Meanwhile, the
volume of express delivery in rural China climbed remarkably from 12 billion
to 30 billion. Apparently, the chart seeks to reveal people’s increasing
willingness to shop online.
In my eyes, multiple reasons are responsible for the trend. First of all,
rather than being a purchasing behavior, online shopping acts as a powerful catalyst
for convenience so that consumers are increasingly gravitating towards a quick
shopping experience. Secondly,as people’s living conditions have been uplifted, their
consumption behavior has pivoted towards a convenience-oriented mindset, which
has sparked significant demand for online shopping platforms. From a wider
perspective, underpinned by booming economic growth, e-commerce platforms are
undergoing continuous expansion, thereby making online shopping within reach for
many residents.
158In the final analysis, it appears that the express delivery volume is
anticipated to maintain its growth trajectory in the ensuing years. Hence, it is
by redoubling our efforts to leverage the benefits of logistics that we can
elevate our digital lifestyle to a new height. (197 words)
参考译文
上面的柱状图列出了关于中国快递业务的统计数据。具体来说,在 2018
年,中国整体快递业务量达到 510 亿件,并于 2020 年上升至 830 亿件。与
此同时,中国农村的快递业务量表现出明显的上升,从 120 亿件攀升至 300
亿件。显而易见,本图表试图揭示人们对网上购物日益增长的意愿。
在我看来,多种原因导致这一趋势。首先,网上购物不仅仅是一种购
买行为,它还是提供便利的强大催化剂,使得消费者越来越倾向于快速购
物体验。其次,随着人们生活条件的改善,他们的消费行为转向了便利导
向的思维模式,这引发了对在线购物平台的巨大需求。从更广泛的角度来
看,在蓬勃发展的经济增长的支持下,电子商务平台正在不断扩展,从而
使许多居民能够方便地进行在线购物。
总而言之,快递业务量在未来几年预计将继续保持增长趋势。因此,正是
通过加倍努力来利用物流的好处,我们才能将数字生活方式提升至新高度。
159真题样例三
2023 年真题
参考范文
The line graph above casts a spotlight on the statistical data relevant to the
health literacy of residents in China. Specifically, the past decade witnessed a
visible ascent in the proportion of the health literacy of Chinese residents from
8.8% to 25.4%. Apparently, the chart is intended to uncover people’s growing
fascination with health-related information.
In my eyes, behind the trend lie a plethora of reasons. Primarily, in a
world inundated with health misinformation, health literacy serves as a
counterbalance, hence offering a leeway to make sound decisions regarding
health. Apart from that, by bombarding consumers with information about the
importance of health, media platforms hold increasing sway over their
preference, thus spurring them to acquire health knowledge and information.
From a broader perspective, a competitive social environment represents a
breeding ground for the intensifying pressure to enhance personal well-being, which
consequently prompts people to prioritize health literacy and adopt healthier
lifestyles.
In summary, the health literacy rate is forecasting a potential upswing in
160the forthcoming years. Admittedly, only by going to great lengths to harness
the benefits of health-based knowledge will we paint a rosy picture of our life
down the road. (192 words)
参考译文
上面的折线图聚焦于与中国居民的健康素养相关的统计数据。具体来
说,在十年内,中国居民健康素养的比例从 8.8%明显上升至 25.4%。显而
易见,本图表试图揭示人们对健康相关信息日益增长的兴趣。
在我看来,这一趋势的背后有诸多原因。首先,在一个充斥着健康错
误信息的世界中,健康素养起到了平衡作用,从而为人们提供了做出健康
决策的途径。除此之外,通过向消费者灌输健康重要性的信息,媒体平台
对他们的偏好有着越来越大的影响,从而促使他们获取健康知识和信息。
从更广泛的角度来看,竞争激烈的社会环境是增强个人福祉的压力不断增
大的温床,这因此促使人们优先考虑健康素养并采用更健康的生活方式。
总而言之,健康素养比率预测在未来几年可能会出现上升趋势。诚然,只
有通过不遗余力地利用基于健康的知识的好处,我们才能描绘出未来生活的
美好图景。
161真题样例四
2024 年真题
参考范文
The bar chart above offers a holistic view of the statistical data associated
with the major benefits perceived by students from their participation in
practical labor courses. Specifically, learning relevant knowledge secures a
lion’s share, accounting for 91.3%, followed by improving hands-on skills,
feeling at ease and promoting cooperation, arriving at 84.8%, 54.4% and 32.6%
respectively. Apparently, the chart attempts to showcase students’ growing
inclination towards learning through practice.
In my eyes, multiple factors converge to produce the phenomenon. Firstly,
practical learning provides an accessible avenue through which students can tap into
an array of educational resources, thus gaining themselves a competitive edge in their
future careers. In addition, through involvement in practical learning, students are
endowed with the capacity to translate theoretical concepts into real-world
applications, an essential attribute for delving into knowledge. On top of that,
practical learning unlocks the gateway to collaboration and instant feedback that will
set the stage for students to immediately yield learning outcomes and foster deep
162comprehension.
Overall, the appeal of hands-on learning can be chalked up to the interplay
between learning resources, real-world applications and deep comprehension.
Therefore, with a commitment to maximizing the benefits of engaging in
practical labor, we will embrace a positive approach to learning. (206 words)
参考译文
上面的条形图全面展示了学生参加实践劳动课的主要收获的统计数
据。具体来说,学习了相关知识占大部分,占 91.3%,其次是提升了动手能
力、感觉到心情舒畅和增强了合作能力,分别是 84.8%、54.4%和 32.6%。
显而易见,本图表试图展示学生日益倾向于通过实践进行学习。
在我看来,有诸多因素共同促成了这一现象。首先,实践学习提供了
一条便捷的途径,使学生能够利用各种教育资源,从而在未来的职业生涯
中获得竞争优势。此外,通过参与实践学习,学生具备了将理论概念转化
为现实应用的能力,这是深入了解知识的关键属性。最重要的是,实践学
习开启了合作和即时反馈的大门,为学生迅速取得学习成果并促进深刻理
解奠定了基础。
总而言之,实践性学习的吸引力可以归结为学习资源、现实应用和深刻理解
的综合作用。因此,通过致力于最大限度地发挥参与实践劳动的益处,我们
将拥抱积极的学习方式。
163三、材料类作文模板
(1)材料作文模板
1. 挖空模板展示
Much ink has been spilled on the hot topic of (主题). As exemplified by the
excerpt, (概括节选).Hence, I am inclined to favor thevision that/However cogent the
excerpt may be, I am still inclined to favor the vision that (主题) serves as a catalyst
forpersonal development and social advancement.
As far as l am concerned, the following contributing factors should be taken into
consideration. Primarily, there is no denying that (观点一).Another potential benefit
is that (观点二). Accordingly, (主题) can provide a fertile ground for individuals to
embracean enriched lifeand thrivein contemporary society.
To recapitulate in short, ( 主 题 ) presented in the excerpt is of paramount
importance. In this sense, it can be anticipated that a secure and prosperous society is
adirect result ofconstant endeavors to promote (主题).
2. 模板参考译文
关于(主题)的热点话题,已经有很多论述。正如节选中所论证的那样,(概
括节选)。因此,我倾向于认为/尽管节选可能很有说服力,但是我还是倾向于
认为(主题)是个人发展和社会进步的催化剂。
在我看来,应考虑以下影响因素。首先,不可否认的是(观点一)。另一个
潜在好处是(观点二)。因此,(主题)能够为个人提供一个滋养的土壤,让他
们在当代社会中享受丰富的生活并取得成功。
简而言之,节选中提出的(主题)至关重要。从这个意义上讲,可以期待的
是,安全和繁荣的社会是不断努力促进(主题)的直接结果。
164(2)作文模板运用
1. 考纲样例题目
Directions: Read the following excerpt from an article and write an essay. In
your essay,you should explainwhether or towhat extent you agreewith theauthor.
Writeyour answer inabout 160-200words ontheANSWER SHEET.
Many of us, whatever our field of work, fear that showing uncertainty can
damage our image and we may compensate by expressing overconfidence in an
attempt to win trust. But in many situations people are willing to trust those who can
admit they don’t have a definite answer. Recent studies found that communicating
uncertainty and even admitting our mistakes is not harmful and can even be beneficial
to trustworthiness. So, failure in “expertise” can be compensated by higher integrity
and benevolence. When communicating uncertainty in a transparent way, we are
perceived as less biased and willing totell thetruth.
参考译文:我们中的许多人,无论从事什么工作,都会担心表现出不确定性会损
害自己的形象,因此我们可能会表现得过于自信,以试图赢得信任。但在很多情
况下,人们愿意相信那些能够承认自己没有确切答案的人。最近的研究发现,交
流不确定性甚至承认错误并无害处,甚至可能有利于提高可信度。因此,“专业
知识”上的失败可以用更高的诚信和仁慈来弥补。当我们以透明的方式传达不确
定性时,我们会被认为不那么偏颇,并且愿意说出真相。
2. 考纲样例范文
Much ink has been spilled on the hot topic of showing uncertainty. As
exemplified by the excerpt, communicating uncertainty and admitting our
mistakes can enhance trustworthiness. Hence, I am inclined to favor the vision that
acknowledging uncertainty and mistakes serves as a catalyst for personal
development and social advancement.
As far as l am concerned, the following contributing factors should be taken into
consideration. Primarily, there is no denying that recognizing ignorance and
165mistakes allows us to deepen ourunderstanding and expand ourknowledge base,
thereby broadening our perspectives and fostering expertise in a particular field.
Another potential benefit is that embracing uncertainty fosters smoother
interpersonal communication by encouraging open and honest dialogue, which
in turn strengthens relationships and facilitates candid and in-depth exchange of
views. Accordingly, an enabling environment that values transparency about
mistakes can provide a fertile ground for individuals to embrace an enriched life and
thrivein contemporary society.
To recapitulate in short, the act of expressing uncertainty presented in the
excerpt is of paramount importance. In this sense, it can be anticipated that a secure
and prosperous society is a direct result of constant endeavors to promote a culture
thatembraces learning fromuncertainties and mistakes.
3. 范文参考译文
关于表现出不确定性这一热点话题,已经有很多论述。正如节选中所论证的
那样,沟通不确定性和承认错误有助于提高可信度。因此,我倾向于认为承认不
确定性和错误是个人发展和社会进步的催化剂。
在我看来,应考虑以下影响因素。首先,不可否认的是,承认无知和错误可
以加深我们的理解,扩大我们的知识基础,从而拓宽我们的视野,培养特定领域
的专业知识。另一个潜在好处是,通过鼓励开诚布公的对话,拥抱不确定性可以
促进更顺畅的人际沟通,这反过来又可以加强关系,促进坦诚和深入的意见交流。
因此,重视对错误的透明度的支持性环境能够为个人提供一个滋养的土壤,让他
们在当代社会中享受丰富的生活并取得成功。
简而言之,节选中提出的表现不确定性的行为至关重要。从这个意义上讲,
可以期待的是,安全和繁荣的社会是不断努力促进从不确定性和错误中学习的文
化的直接结果。
166(3)作文句型拓展
1. 首段引言句型
句型①:In today’s fast-paced society, the issue of (主题) has garnered
widespread attention.
例 句 ① : In today’s fast-paced society, the issue of environmental
sustainability has garnered widespread attention.
在当今快节奏的社会中,环境可持续性问题已经引起了广泛的关注。
句型②:The advent of technology has brought about a myriad of challenges,
one of which revolves around (主题).
例句②:The advent of technology has brought about a myriad of challenges,
one of which revolves around digital gap.
科技的出现带来了无数的挑战,其中之一就是数字鸿沟。
句型③:In recent years, (主题) is becoming increasingly prevalent at an
amazing rate.
例句③:In recent years, live commerce is becoming increasingly prevalent
at an amazing rate.
近年来,直播带货正以惊人的速度变得越来越普遍。
句 型 ④ : It is widely recognized that ( 主 题 ) has been playing an
increasingly significant role in our lives, providing numerous benefits but
also giving rise to significant challenges.
例 句 ④ : It is widely recognized that the application of technology in
education has been playing an increasingly significant role in our lives,
providing numerous benefits but also giving rise to significant challenges.
167人们普遍认为,技术在教育中的应用在我们的生活中发挥着越来越重要
的作用,给我们带来了许多好处,但也带来了重大的挑战。
句型⑤:Currently, a mounting number of young adolescents are facing the
challenge of (主题).
例句⑤:Currently, a mounting number of young adolescents are facing the
challenge of balancing their academic studies with extracurricular
activities.
目前,越来越多的青少年正面临着平衡学业与课外活动的挑战。
句型⑥:Much ink has been spilled on whether (主题).
例句⑥:Much ink has been spilled on whether to attend a vocational
college or a university.
究竟是上职业学院还是大学,已经有很多争论。
2. 阐述观点句型
句 型 ① : From my perspective, it is evident that (主 题 ) should be a
cornerstone of modern education.
例句①:From my perspective, it is evident that fostering creativity should
be a cornerstone of modern education.
在我看来,培养创造力显然应该是现代教育的基石。
句型②:Personally, I believe that (主题) is crucial for overall well-being.
例句②:Personally, I believe that striking a balance between work and
personal life is crucial for overall well-being.
就我个人而言,我认为在工作和个人生活之间取得平衡对整体幸福至关
重要。
168 句型③:Some people may argue that (主题), while others claim that it is
reasonable for young people to (主题).
例句③:Some people may argue that their fee time should be allotted to
various kinds of activities, while others claim that it is reasonable for young
people to focus on one activity of importance.
有些人可能会认为他们的时间应该分配给各种各样的活动,而另一些人
则认为年轻人专注于一项重要的活动是合理的。
句 型 ④ : The issue is fraught with controversy, with concerns being
expressed over (主题). Some people claim that (主题) is the key factor for
(主题). However, I believe that (主题).
例 句 ④ : The issue is fraught with controversy, with concerns being
expressed over its impacts on the success of a business. Some people claim
that advertising is the key factor for a company to become understanding.
However, I believe that this argument exaggerates the role of advertising.
这个问题充满了争议,人们对其对商业成功的影响表示担忧。有些人甚
至声称广告是公司被理解的关键因素。然而,我认为这种说法夸大了广告
的作用。
句型⑤:In my opinion, the benefits of (主题) dwarf the drawbacks.
例 句 ⑤ : In my opinion, the benefits of online education dwarf the
drawbacks.
在我看来,在线教育的好处远远大于缺点。
3. 分析原因句型
3.1 原因过渡句
169 句型①:Several factors may account for (主题).
例 句 ① : Several factors may account for the decline in traditional
craftsmanship.
有几个因素可以解释传统工艺的衰落。
句型②:There are multiple compelling reasons contributing to (主题).
例 句 ② : There are multiple compelling reasons contributing to the
biodiversity loss.
造成生物多样性丧失的原因有很多。
句型③:The reason for (主题) mainly lie in the following two aspects.
例句③:The reason for appearance anxiety mainly lie in the following two
aspects.
外表焦虑的原因主要有以下两个方面。
3.2 具体原因
句型④:The main reason behind (主题) can be attributed to (主题).
例句④:The main reason behind the rise in obesity rates can be attributed
to sedentary lifestyles and unhealthy eating habits.
肥胖率上升的主要原因可以归结为久坐的生活方式和不健康的饮食习
惯。
句型⑤:This can be explained by the fact that (主题).
例句⑤:This can be explained by the fact that regulatory frameworks
influence investment decisions.
这可以用监管框架影响投资决策这一事实来解释。
句型⑥:Another contributing factor is (主题).
170例句⑥:Another contributing factor is the lack of access to education and
resources.
另一个因素是缺乏获得教育和资源的机会。
4. 列举例子句型
句型①:For instance, (主题).
例 句 ① : For instance, in the realm of technology, the ubiquity of
smartphones exemplifies the transformative power of innovation.
例如,在技术领域,智能手机的普及体现了创新的变革力量。
句型②:A case in point is (主题).
例句②:A case in point is the success story of renewable energy initiatives
in countries like Germany.
一个恰当的例子是德国等国家可再生能源倡议的成功故事。
句型③:This is illustrated by (主题).
例句③:This is illustrated by the increasing frequency of hurricanes and
heatwaves.
这可以通过飓风和热浪的频率增加来说明。
5. 对比对照句型
句型①:On the contrary, (主题) allows for (主题). This enables (主题).
例句①:On the contrary, traditional teaching allows for direct interaction
between students and teachers. This enables immediate clarification of
doubts and promotes active participation.
171相反,传统教学允许学生和教师之间直接互动。这样可以立即澄清疑虑,
促进积极参与。
句型②:In contrast to (主题), (主题) offers flexibility in terms of (主题),
allowing students to (主题).
例 句 ② : In contrast to in-person education, online education offers
flexibility in terms of location and scheduling, allowing students to learn at
their own pace.
与面对面的教育相比,在线教育在地点和时间安排方面提供了灵活性,
允许学生按照自己的节奏学习。
6. 解决问题句型
6.1 措施过渡句
句 型 ① :The multifaceted nature of (主 题 ) requires a comprehensive
approach.
例 句 ① : The multifaceted nature of smartphone use requires a
comprehensive approach.
智能手机使用的多面性要求我们采取全面的办法。
句 型 ② : Confronted with the issue, we should implement a series of
effective measures to address (主题).
例 句 ② : Confronted with the issue, we should implement a series of
effective measures to address environmental degradation.
面对这个问题,我们应该采取一系列有效的措施来解决环境退化。
句型③:Given the seriousness of (主题), it is imperative to take effective
measures to alter the current situation.
172例句③:Given the seriousness of smartphone addiction, it is imperative to
take effective measures to alter the current situation.
考虑到智能手机成瘾的严重性,必须采取有效措施来改变现状。
6.2 具体措施
句型④:To address this issue, one possible solution is to (主题).
例句④:To address this issue, one possible solution is to implement stricter
regulations on carbon emissions.
要解决这个问题,一个可能的解决方案是对碳排放实施更严格的规定。
句型⑤:It is imperative that we find effective measures to tackle the issue
of (主题), such as (主题).
例句⑤:It is imperative that we find effective measures to tackle the issue
of online misinformation, such as enhancing media literacy education.
我们必须找到有效措施来解决网络错误信息的问题,例如加强媒体素养
教育。
句型⑥:A practical approach to this problem is (主题).
例句⑥:A practical approach to this problem is investing in educational
programs to raise awareness about environmental conservation.
解决这个问题的一个切实可行的方法是投资教育项目来提高人们对环
境保护的意识。
7. 尾段总结句型
句型①:To sum up, the significance of (主题) cannot be overstated in the
quest for (主题).
173例句①:To sum up, the significance of promoting sustainable practices
cannot be overstated in the quest for a greener future.
总之,在追求更环保的未来的过程中,推广可持续实践的重要性怎么强
调都不为过。
句型②:Ultimately, it is incumbent upon us to consider (主题).
例句②:Ultimately, it is incumbent upon us to consider the impact of
environmental degradation.
最后,我们有责任考虑环境退化的影响。
句型③:In essence, both options have their own advantages. To determine
the best course of action, we should take into full consideration (主题).
例句③:In essence, both options have their own advantages. To determine
the best course of action, we should take into full consideration our
personal preferences and anticipated career trajectories.
从本质上讲,两种选择都有各自的优势。为了确定最佳的行动方案,我
们应该充分考虑我们的个人偏好和预期的职业轨迹。
句 型 ④ : To summarize, based on the previous discussions, we have
sufficient reasons to expect that the trend will continue for a longtime. In
this regard, we will continue to experience significant advantages from (主
题) and consequently improve our quality of life.
例 句 ④ : To summarize, based on the previous discussions, we have
sufficient reasons to expect that the trend will continue for a longtime. In
this regard, we will continue to experience significant advantages from
urbanization and consequently improve our quality of life.
174总之,基于前面的讨论,我们有充分的理由预计这种趋势将持续很长一
段时间。在这方面,我们将继续享受城市化带来的显著优势,从而提高
我们的生活质量。
句型⑤:In summary, I believe that implementing the mentioned measures
can act as a catalyst for addressing (主题). Only by fully implementing
these measures can we create a more fulfilling life.
例句⑤:In summary, I believe that implementing the mentioned measures
can act as a catalyst for addressing plastic pollution. Only by fully
implementing these measures can we create a more fulfilling life.
总之,我相信实施上述措施可以作为解决塑料污染的催化剂。只有全面
实施这些措施,我们才能创造更充实的生活。
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