练一练｜读后续写I hadn’t seen Anne in nearly 20 years since college, yet we could still party like old times. It was great to have her here, sharing our lives.She was looking at the few blooms left in my yard. I hadn’t planted much after losing my job. It had been a difficult year for me. Just when I thought I was done with the bitterness, it would all come rushing back and the last thing on my mind was flowers.“One of my hobbies is taking photos of flowers,” she said and steadied herself near the last rose of the season. I shrugged, wondering why anyone would bother taking time to look at a lowly rose.Suddenly a hot song rang from her cell phone. “I set it to remind me to take my medicine,” she said calmly.“An alarm for medicine?” I laughed. “Are we that old?”“For my brain,” she smiled. “I have been diagnosed with a rare cancer, a small tumor no bigger than your fingernail,” she laughed softly. That was Anne — ever optimistic. Even cancer was no more than joking about.So shocked that I was beyond words.Later next day, an e-mail filled with the flower photos popped up from Anne — clear and beautiful. She had gotten past the anger, the pity and unfairness, taking one moment at a time and polishing it until it shined.I shifted my eye to outside, and I had her flowers in full bloom. Actually, I always had them, but it was Anne who got me to really appreciate them.续写段落开头Paragraph 1: That night, I walked into the yard and knelt down beside the roses.Paragraph 2: Months later, Anne and I met again in my yard full of blossoms.写作要求1.两段词数合计150词左右；读后续写范文Paragraph 1: That night, I walked into the yard and knelt down beside the roses.A soft breeze brushed my cheeks, carrying the faint scent of the only surviving rose. I reached out and gently touched its thin petals, thinking of Anne’s calm smile when talking about her cancer. All my past bitterness and self-pity faded away little by little. I pulled out my phone, carefully taking photos of every bloom just as Anne did. For the first time since losing my job, I didn’t see sorrow in the flowers but quiet warmth. I realized I had been blind to small beauty trapped in my own pain.Paragraph 2: Months later, Anne and I met again in my yard full of blossoms.Rows of roses were in full bloom, bright and lively. Anne wandered among the flowers, clicking her camera happily. She told me she kept taking flower photos to cheer herself up during treatment. I handed her a folder filled with the flower pictures I had shot these days. We chatted and laughed like old times, sharing our gains and peace of mind. Her optimism taught me a precious truth: if we polish every ordinary moment, even tough days will shine brightly.作文语料分类整理（一）北京高考应用文/大作文通用语料（议论文、书信、演讲稿可用）1. 主题观点类（挫折、乐观、珍惜当下、心态力量）1.face hardships with an optimistic attitude 以乐观心态面对磨难2.get past anger, self-pity and unfairness 放下愤怒、自怜与命运不公3.take one moment at a time 活在当下，认真感受每一刻4.polish ordinary moments until they shine 打磨平凡时光，让其绽放光彩5.bitterness will rush back when we are trapped in trouble 身处困境时，心酸失意总会涌上心头6.small beautiful things around us can lift our spirits 身边微小的美好能治愈内心7.misfortunes are no more than a test of our mindset 磨难不过是对心态的一场考验2. 高级连接句式（书信/议论文加分句型）1.Just when I thought I was done with the pain, sadness would all come rushing back.正当我以为摆脱痛苦时，悲伤又会席卷而来。2.It was XX who got me to really appreciate the beauty hidden in daily life.正是XX让我真正学会欣赏藏在日常里的美好。3.Even severe misfortune was no more than joking about for her.于她而言，再沉重的厄运也不过一笑置之。3. 基础高级词汇（替换简单词）optimistic adj. 乐观的（替换positive）bitterness n. 苦楚、失意（替换sadness）rare adj. 罕见的（替换unusual）polish v. 打磨、细细体味（替换treasure）appreciate v. 欣赏、珍视（替换enjoy）（二）读后续写专用高分语料（心理、动作、环境、情感描写，适配叙事续写）1. 人物动作描写（场景复刻类）1.steady oneself near the flower bush 在花丛旁稳住身子2.shrug one’s shoulder 轻轻耸肩，心生疑惑3.shift one’s eye to the yard outside 转头望向院外4.kneel down beside the blooms 蹲在花丛旁5.laugh softly despite misfortune 身处不幸却轻声浅笑2. 心理情绪描写（震惊、心酸、释然、治愈，续写高频情绪）1.be so shocked that one is beyond words 震惊到无以言表2.the bitterness comes rushing back 心酸涌上心头3.filled with pity and unfairness 心中满是自怜与不甘4.calm down and let go of negative feelings 平复心情，放下负面情绪5.feel warm and peaceful at the sight of blooming flowers 看见盛放鲜花，内心温暖安宁3. 环境景物描写（鲜花、庭院，治愈类续写万能意象）1.the few blooms left in the quiet yard 寂静小院里仅剩的几朵花2.the last rose of the whole season 本季最后一朵玫瑰3.flowers in full bloom 鲜花肆意盛放4.clear and beautiful photos of delicate blossoms 干净动人的鲜花照片5.lowly but lovely little roses 平凡却动人的小玫瑰4. 场景万能短语（情节过渡、结尾升华）1.an e-mail filled with warm photos pops up 一封满载温暖照片的邮件突然弹出2.set an alarm to remind oneself to take medicine 定闹钟提醒自己按时服药3.a tumor no bigger than one’s fingernail 一块指甲盖大小的肿块（细节具象化）4.party like old times 像旧日时光一样欢聚畅谈5.share our lives and inner feelings 分享彼此的生活与心底心事5. 读后续写升华金句（可直接放在第二段结尾）1.It was those tiny flowers and Anne’s optimism that pulled me out of my dark days.正是那些小小的花朵与安妮的乐观，将我拉出灰暗的日子。2.We don’t need grand happiness; we only need to appreciate every small shining moment around us.我们无需盛大的幸福，只需珍惜身边每一个闪光的微小瞬间。3.Optimism turns ordinary moments into something bright and unforgettable.乐观，能把平凡的瞬间变得明亮又难忘。
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