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04 邀请信
(2020年1月，浙江卷）假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的
英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear George,
I'm writing to invite you to join us in the “Chinese speech contest for foreigners” to be held in
our school. The activity is scheduled at 8:00 a.m. on January 20th in the lecture hall.
The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”, through
which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese splendid traditional
culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China.
Immensely fascinated by its mysterious culture and age-old history, you can, undoubtedly give
us a wonderful and impressive performance. You are expected to sign up for the contest at www.
Chinesespeechcontestforforeigners.com. I'd appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇应用文写作。
第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文
演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.比赛时间；2.演讲
话题；3.报名方式。
第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组） ：Chinese speech contest（中文演讲比赛）；be
scheduled（安排）；be bound to（必然）；gain a better understanding of（更好地了解）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主
要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰,
保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,
如 The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”,
through which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese splendid
traditional culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China.运用了定语从句；I'd appreciate
it if you could accept our invitation.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显
示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增
色添彩。
【篇首句】介绍自己，简要说明活动，并邀请对方。
1. I’m Wang Ming from YuWen School，the president of the Student Union.
我是来自育文学校的王明，学生会主席。
2. An English speaking contest of our school will be held on August 6.
我们学校有一场英语演讲比赛将在8月6号举行。学科&网
3. There will be a party in my garden on Sunday.
周日，在我的花园里会举行一场聚会。
4. I’d like to invite you to judge it.
我想邀请你做它的裁判。
5. I’m writing to invite you to...
我写信是邀请你……
6. I wonder if you can come to...
我想知道你是否能来……
7. We sincerely hope you can attend it.
我们真诚希望你能够参加。
8. It’s my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to...
我很荣幸的邀请你……
9. It’s a pity that you have to go back to America soon. So a farewell party for you will be held inthe Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come at 6:00 pm?
很遗憾你不久就要回美国了。所以，这周六，在阳光俱乐部我们会为你举行一个欢送会。
下午六点你能来吗？
【篇中句】介绍活动具体内容，并说明受邀人参加理由。
1. It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will
deliver their speeches.
它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
2. We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。
3. During the afternoon, we’ll...together.
下午，我们会一起……
4. Remember to take water and lunch with you.
记得带上水和午餐。
5. By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly
to the club.
顺便说一下，你可以乘坐你家公寓前的322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
6. I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our
school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest.
我知道你的母语是英语，还是一个英语老师。我，代表我们学校，真诚的邀请你来比赛现
场。
7. Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。
8. I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
【篇尾句】期待对方接受邀请，并期待对方尽快回复。
1. Will you be available during that time? Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest
convenience.
那期间你有空吗？请方便时尽快给我打电话1234567。
2. Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation?
请尽快告诉我你能否接受我的邀请好吗？
3. We will feel much honored if you could come.如果你能来，我们会非常荣幸。
4. We are looking forward to your coming.我们期待着你的到来。5. I am longing to see you soon.我期待着尽早见到你。
模板①
Dear________,
________(开门见山地点、活动)，It would be pleasant to have you here(表达邀请愿望).
Will you give me the pleasure of your company(正式发出邀请)？
During the party/conference, we will have a lots of activities you will be interested
in (开始介绍活动内容). First, __________(介绍举行的活动一). Second, _________(介绍举
行的活动二). I know/believe you be very interested in _________(引出受邀请人参加的理
由 ). First/For one thing________( 希 望 受 邀 人 参 加 的 理 由 一 ) ， Second/For
another__________(希望受邀人参加的理由二)。 The party/conference would not be
complete without you(总结受邀人参加的必要性).
The party/conference will begin at ________(提出活动的地点). It is possible for us
to meet at ________(提出具体约定时间). We do hope you can come ________(再次发出
邀请).
Yours
Li Hua
模板②
Dear________,
There will be a________(内容) at/in________(地点) on________(时间). We would be
honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at________________(具体时间). This will be followed by
a________( 进 一 步 的 安 排 ). At ________________( 时 间 ), we will have
________________________(另一个安排).
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before_____________________(通知你的最后期
限).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua【写作注意事项】
a. 盛情邀请参加聚会、共度假期或游览某地等；
b. 建立密切联系，加强感情交流；
c. 拓展相关内容，激发他人兴趣。
【写作方法】
① 首段：开门见山说明写作目的。
② 主体：
a. 具体交代邀请原因；
b. 邀请内容：活动性质、时间、地点、日期；
c. 有关要求和希望。
③ 尾段：
a. 再次盛情邀请；
b. 希望尽快答复。
【写作流程图】
发出邀请
说明事由
说明活动的时间、地点、对象等
表达期待和感谢
假定你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth
Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：
1. 出发及返回时间；
2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 结语已为你写好。
Dear Lucy,
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Lucy,
I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the
Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings
and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing
and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back at around 4 o’clock
in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the
gate at 9 in the morning.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点说明】
本文结构紧凑，层次分明。We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and
playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了 which 引导的定语从句和句式
spend time doing。此外，还有if从句以及一些短语如invite you to join us，for a visit to，
make dumplings等。
【名师点睛】
本作文从实际生活出发，以英语的交际性和实用性为目标，兼顾尊老敬老和做志愿者的教育意义，体现了课程标准要求的以知识运用为教学目标的要求。在高三备考时，应该
多从把语言作为交流的工具的角度去准备书面表达。
1. 假如你是李华，是新华中学的学生会主席。为了丰富同学们的业余生活，提高同学
们的英语水平，学生会成立了一个英语俱乐部。请你写一封邀请信邀请同学们参加。内容
应包括以下要点：
(1)俱乐部成立的目的；
(2)俱乐部要开展的活动；
(3)邀请大家参加俱乐部。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)邀请信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：礼堂 auditorium
Boys and girls，
I’m the chairman of Student Union, Li Hua, and I have big news for you.
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2. 假设你是李华，学校本周六要去附近的Happy Village感受美丽乡村，你想邀请朋友
Lucy一起去，请给她写一封邀请信，内容要点包括：
1.乡村介绍；2.活动安排；3.往返时间和方式。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3. 假如你叫李华，为了让同学们更好地了解党史，你们班将去省党史博物馆(Provincial
Party History Museum) 参观，这是一个非常著名的红色景点，你想邀请好友——你校的留
学生Bob一起参加，请给他写一封邀请信。内容包括：
1.集合时间及地点；
2.注意事项。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.短文的开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Bob,
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_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4. 假定你是李华，你市大剧院下周末将举行一场民乐演奏会，你打算邀请来自英国的好友
Linda一起领略中国音乐之美。请你给她写一封邀请信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的； 2. 音乐会时间、地点； 3. 期待回复。
注意：1)可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2)写作词数应为80左右(超字数不扣分)。
Dear Linda,
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_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5. 假定你是李华，你们班想邀请外教Jack来参加主题为“中国画(Chinese painting)”的校园
艺术展览活动(School ArtExhibition)。请你用英语写一封邀请信，内容包括:
注意:
1.时间和地点:
2.词数80左右;
3.具体活动与意义;
Dear Jack,
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参考答案
1. Boys and girls,
I' m the chairman of Student Union, Li Hua, and I have big news for you. To enrich our
school life and improve our English ability, we, Student Union, set up an English club.Obviously,
besides study, there are also other things beneficial to us. It is believed that the club can make our
school life colorful. The plan is as follows.
It is arranged that we will see English films in the auditorium on Saturday evening. Apart
from that, there is going to be an English debate or discussion on Sunday evening. Yet, the specific
topics haven' t been settled. If you have wonderful ideas and suggestions, please let us know.
I' ll highly appreciate it if you are actively involved in the club. You will never regret joining
us. So, just do it.
【解析】第一步：审题，确定人称和时态。人称以第一，第二和第三人称，时态以一般现
在时为主。
第二步：重点单词或词组：enrich；set up；things beneficial to us；Apart from；involved in等。
第三步：遣词造句：同学们在写作时不能逐句翻译，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，
同时要点表述要完整，文章要通顺，准确使用时态和语态。
第四步：连句成文：写作时要适当使用过渡词和插入语，如Obviously， as follows，Apart
from that, Yet等，使文章浑然一体。同时恰当而合理地使用一些高级词汇和句型，如主语
从句等，以提高文章档次。
【亮点表达】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连
贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多句式，如：第一段和第二段都使用了主语从
句“It is believed that the club can make our school life colorful”“ It is arranged that we will see
English films in the auditorium on Saturday evening.”；第三段中使用了“I' ll highly appreciate
it if you are actively involved in the club”（it充当形式宾语）”这样的高分句式，全文中没有
中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上
下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2. Dear Lucy,
I’m writing to invite you to visit Happy Village, which is located about five miles away from
downtown. It is surrounded by green fields and thick forests. The villagers there are friendly.
We’re going to spend two hours exploring the local museum, which is an opportunity to learn
about the long history of the village. After that, we’ll be free to move around in the village.
We will leave by bus at 9 a.m. this Saturday and come back in the afternoon. If you’d like to
join, please email me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达是应用文。要求考生给朋友Lucy写一封邀请信，邀请她在周六
一起去附近的Happy Village感受美丽乡村。
【解析】1.词汇积累
邀请：invite→send an invitation to
参观：visit→pay a visit to
位于：be located→be situated
环绕：surround→encircle
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句原句：It is surrounded by green fields and thick forests. The villagers there are friendly.
拓展句：It is surrounded by green fields and thick forests, where the villagers are friendly.
【亮点表达】【高分句型1】I’m writing to invite you to visit Happy Village, which is located
about five miles away from downtown.（运用which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2 】If you’d like to join, please email me soon.（运用if引导的条件状语从句）
3. Dear Bob,
I’m writing to invite you to visit the Provincial Party History Museum, which is a very
famous red tourist attraction. The visit is very meaningful, because it will enhance our knowledge
of party history and I’m sure you will learn more about our great Communist Party of China.
We’ll meet at the school gate at 8:00 am this Friday and assemble at 11:00 am at the west gate of
the museum to return. The weather is cold and dry, please take drinking water and wear enough
clothes to keep warm.
I warmly invite you to join us at your convenience. I am looking forward to seeing you this
Friday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校留学生Bob写信邀请其一起参加学
校组织的参观红色景点活动，告知其活动时间、地点以及注意事项等。
【解析】1.词汇积累
著名的：famous→ well-known
增加：enhance → improve/heighten
集合：assemble → gather
热烈地：warmly→ affectionately/ardently
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I warmly invite you to join us at your convenience.
拓展句：I warmly invite you to join us when it is convenient for you.
【亮点表达】【高分句型1】I’m writing to invite you to visit the Provincial Party History
Museum, which is a very famous red tourist attraction.（运用which引导的非限制性定语从
句）
【高分句型2】The visit is very meaningful, because it will enhance our knowledge of partyhistory and I’m sure you will learn more about our great Communist Party of China.（运用了
because引导的原因状语从句和省略引导词that的宾语从句）
4. Dear Linda,
I’m writing to invite you to attend a folk music concert to be held next Saturday in the City
Theatre.
The concert will start at 7 p.m. and last for about two hours. As far as I know, you’ve been
quite interested in Chinese traditional music since you came to China two years ago. Thus it will
be a good chance for you to have a taste of the beauty of Chinese traditional music.
Let me know if you can come with me! Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】这是一篇应用文写作。要求学生邀请英国朋友Linda参加你市大剧院下周末
举行的一场民乐演奏会，一起领略中国音乐之美，内容包括写信目的，音乐会时间、地点
并期待她的回复。
【解析】1. 词汇积累
参加：attend → take part in
举行：hold → conduct
对……感兴趣：be interested in → have an interest in
机会：chance → opportunity
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The concert will start at 7 p.m. and last for about two hours.
复合句：The concert which focuses on the Chinese traditional music will start at 7 p.m. and last
for about two hours.
【亮点表达】【高分句型1】I’m writing to invite you to attend a folk music concert to be held
next Saturday in the City Theatre. (不定式作后置定语)
【高分句型2】Let me know if you can come with me! (if引导条件状语从句)
5. Dear Jack，
Aimed to enrich our school life and promote traditional Chinese culture, a School Art
Exhibition with the theme of Chinese painting is to be held in our school. I’m writing to invite you
to come to join it.The exhibition is scheduled to be held at 3pm next Friday in the library hall, lasting for 2
hours. There will be a wide range of Chinese paintings on display, where you can admire the
profound art. At the same time, some well-known experts will give us a presentation on the history
of Chinese painting.
I bet you will have an amazing experience. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Jack写信邀请他来参加校园艺术
展览活动。
【解析】1.词汇积累
真诚的：sincerely → faithfully
同时：at the same time → meanwhile
各种：a wide range of → a variety of
欣赏：admire → appreciate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Aimed to enrich our school life and promote traditional Chinese culture, a School Art
Exhibition with the theme of Chinese painting is to be held in our school.
拓展句： A School Art Exhibition with the theme of Chinese painting is to be held in our school,
which is aimed to enrich our school life and promote traditional Chinese culture.
【亮点表达】【高分句型1】Aimed to enrich our school life and promote traditional Chinese
culture, a School Art Exhibition with the theme of Chinese painting is to be held in our school.
（运用了非谓语动词作状语）
【高分句型2】There will be a wide range of Chinese paintings on display, where you can admire
the profound art.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
