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大学英语四级---作文题型训练
第一篇：
Directions: Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicof
Welcometoourclub.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:
欢迎辞，欢迎加入俱乐部。
标题：Welcometoourclub
书写提纲：
1. 表达你的欢迎；
2. 对你们俱乐部作一个简要介绍。
注意：此部分试题在答题卡1上。
Welcometoourclub
答案解析
审解题目：
从文体上看，本文是应用文，但是在三段论的结构里面，又加入了说明文，说明这个
社团的好处。首先说明社团活动的主要内容；然后阐述加入这个社团的好处；最后给出参加
社团的联系方式。
写作步骤：
本文采用的是提纲式作文，写作应按照试卷上给出的汉语提纲进行，分三段将所涉及内容论
述清楚：
第一段：表示对参加本社团的欢迎，介绍本社团的活动内容；
第二段：阐述参加本社团的一些好处；
1第三段：如何参加本社团 。
范文一：
LadiesandGentlemen,
Firstofall,pleaseallowmetoexpressthemostheartfeltwelcometoallofyouonbehalfof
ourEnglishClub.Wehavebeenlookingforwardtoseeingyouforlong.Itisawonderfulday
today.
NowIwouldliketobriefmyclubtoyousinceIwanttoleavethemostwonderfulforyouto
discover.Ourclub,organizingvariousactivitiesregularlycateringfortheneedsofparticipants,is
well-knownamongmanyEnglishlearners.IfyouwanttomeetnativeEnglishspeakers,please
joinus.IfyouwanttospeakEnglishnotonlyaccuratelybutalsofluently,pleasejoinus.Ifyou
wanttodiscoverthemostattractiveaspectsinEnglish,pleasejoinus.Idohopethatyouwill
enjoyyourjourneyofEnglishstudywithus.Thankyou!
SincerelyYours
LiMing
范文二：
WelcometoEnglishClub!Itcouldserveasaplatformtoshowyouroutstandingabilitiesandhelp
youdeveloparangeofgreatskills.
Youcanbeinvolvedinavarietyofactivitiesincludingstagingmusicaldramas,holdinggroup
discussionsandwatchingOscar-winningmovies.Theseextra-curricularactivitiescouldofferyou
ampleopportunities.First,youractiveparticipationishelpfultostrengtheningthesenseof
responsibilityandmanaginginterpersonalrelations.Second,variousactivitiesorganizedbyus
couldraiseyourlevelofproficiencyinEnglish.AgoodcommandofEnglishempowersyouto
enjoydecidedcompetitiveedgeoveryourpeers.
Youcanfileawrittenapplicationtoourstaffofficeoremailusviabonoo@diandian.net.The
deadlineforentriesisSept.25th.Comeon,joinusnow!
范文三：
TheSpeechClubisorganizingschool-widespeechtrainingandconteststobeheldoneach
SaturdayattheStudents’RecreationalCenter.Fiveprestigiousexpertsandprofessorswillbe
invitedtobespeechlecturersandcontestjudges.Foreachspeechcontest,thefirstsixwinnerswill
begivenawards.
Attendingourclubhassubstantialadvantages.Firstly,itcanimproveyourabilitytodelivera
speechwhichisofutmostsignificancetoyourfuturecareeranddevelopment.Secondly,itcan
helpyoutopossessself-confidence,enrichyourextracurriculaactivitiesandmakeyourcampus
2lifedimensional,colorfulandvigorous.Tosumup,theexperiencesinourclubwillbe
extraordinarilyunforgettablethroughoutyourlife.
Studentswhoareinterestedintakingpartinitmaysignupwiththemonitoroftheirclasses
beforeTuesdaynextweek(June26).Everybodyiswelcometoattendourclub.
SpeechClub
第二篇：
Directions: Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteashortessayentitled
RecreationalActivities.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutline
givenbelowinChinese:
1. 娱乐活动多种多样，
2. 娱乐可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性，
3. 作为大学生，我的看法。
RecreationalActivities
答案解析：
范文:
Abundant recreational activities are available for people to release their strain and stress, ranging
from sports to online activities. There is going on a hot debate arguing whether they are good for
thepublicornot,especiallyforcollegestudents.
As for such a question, different people hold different views. Some believe that recreation is
helpful if we want to keep healthy physically and mentally. While there also sounds an opposite
3voice,whichclaimsthatactivitiesalsobringmanyproblems.Forexample,someyoungpeopleare
easily addicted to the virtual world online, which affects their study seriously and may lead to
worseconsequencesaswell.
As for me, I hold a belief that recreational activities do more good than harm. They do give
us a good chance, and efficiency too. As long as we can arrange the time reasonably, they will
definitelyprovidemorebenefitsforus.
第三篇：
Directions: Forthis part, you areallowed 30minutes towrite ashortessay entitled Limiting the
Use of Disposable Plastic Bag. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given
below.
1.一次性塑料袋的使用
2.使用一次性塑料袋带来的问题
3.限制一次性塑料袋的意义
Limiting theUseof DisposablePlasticBag
答案解析
* 解题思路
1. 审解题目：
本文为问题解决类作文。首先提出一种社会现象；然后对这一现象所带来的问题进行分
析和阐述；最后对解决这一问题的方法进行论述：赞成或反对。
2. 写作步骤：
本文为提纲式作文，写作应按照试卷上给出的汉语提纲进行，分三段将所涉及内容论述清楚：
第一段：引出一次性塑料袋在人们生活中广泛使用的现象；
第二段：列举使用一次性塑料袋带来的问题；
第三段：对限制使用一次性塑料袋这一政策阐述自己的观点：可以支持以上观点，并进行总
结强调；也可以否定以上观点，并提出反对理由。
范文：
LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBags
Plastic bags have been an indispensable part of our daily life for many years. But recently
theproblemsofusingdisposableplasticbagshavebeenbroughtintopeople’sconcern.
Although plastic bags have brought great convince to people, it has also caused a lot of
4problems. First ofall, theuseofdisposableplastic bags causesgreat harmtoour environment.As
thesebagscannotbediscomposed,theypollutethefieldandwater.Besides,plasticbagsdoharm
to people’s health as well, because they are made of chemical materials which may contaminate
ourfood.What’smore,theoveruseofplasticbagsisalsoakindofwasteofresources.
Therefore,limitingtheuseofdisposableplasticbagsisofgreatsignificance.Thispolicynot
only enhances people’s awareness of environmental protection, but also reduce the waste of
resources.In short,we shoulddo ourbestto limit the useof plastic bags for ourselves and for the
nextgeneration.
经典句式:
1.Recently,theproblemof…hasbecomethefocusofthepublicconcern.
2.Itisimportanttopointoutthat…
3.Ononehand,….Ontheotherhand,…
4.Obviously,ifwedon’tcontroltheproblem,thechancesarethat…
5.Firstofall,….Besides,….What’smore,…
6.…isofgreatsignificance.
7.Itishightimethatweputanendto
第四篇：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the
topic of students selecting their lectures. You should write at least 120
wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:
1. 越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么？
2. 也会带来一些问题
3. 你的看法？
Freeadmissiontomuseums
答案解析
范文：Free Admission To Museums Nowadays, an increasing number of museums are
5admission-free to visitors home and abroad. The hidden reason behind this is not hard to analyze
as there’s a growing awareness for the authorities regarding the urgency of popularization of
culture, knowledge and history with every average person in our society.Only with free accessto
thislive‘database’,canmostpeoplefullyenjoywhatmuseumscouldoffertothem.However,free
admission to museums might lead to some social problems as well. The most obvious problem is
thatitmight give museums avery heavyeconomicburdenwhichdirectly impedesthe sustainable
development of these organizations. As a result, our government has to work out other ways to
collect funds from different channels, which might be difficult to operate or control. On the other
hand,freeadmissionattractstoomanyvisitors, someofwhichmightnotbewell-purposedanddo
some conscious orunconsciousdamage to the valuable treasures which used to be well-preserved
in the museums. As a university student, I am in favor of the free-admission conduct. Yet it is
proposed that some measures should be taken to solve the potential problems caused by it. For
example, museums can make some regulations to guide the behavior of visitors or set some
‘closed’ days for museums for regular maintenance. Only in this way can free-admission to
museumsbecomealong-lastingphenomenonandhavesustainabledevelopment.
第五篇：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of
CreatingaGreenCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:
1. 建设绿色校园很重要
2. 绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……
3. 为了建设绿色校园，我们应该……
CreatingaGreenCampus
答案解析
审题谋篇
本次四级作文主题为“绿色校园”，这是一个看似简单普通的话题，写起来却不是那么
容易。因为很多考生对于“绿色校园”所表达的内涵感觉比较生僻。假如对“绿色校园”这
一主题感到难以把握，考生可以从作文提纲入手进行分析以获取对“绿色校园”这一概念的
相关信息。根据作文提示2，可以看出此处的“绿色校园”指的决不仅仅是青青的草地和高
大的树木构成的校园绿色风景，也不仅仅指对校园环境的珍视和爱护，而是指一种环境保护
的文化氛围和师生具有的环境素养，以及由此带来的和谐的人文环境和社会绩效。在深入理
解概念的基础上，考生还应对 “绿色校园”的重要性进行剖析，这时，考生可以从多个角
度组织素材，比如从校园的环境问题出发，进而扩展到师生的环境意识对“绿色校园”所产
6生的长远意义以及为未来环境改善所做的贡献。最后是阐述建设“绿色校园”所要采取的措
施。需要注意的就是作文给分的重点在于考生如何用恰当的语言词汇表达自己的思想观点。
而不是写得越多，得分就越高。一般分成三个自然段，大概十句话，基本的分布为首段、末
段合起来五句或六句，中间段五句或四句，做到结构清楚，重点突出，就可以了。
参考范文
CreatingaGreenCampus
Recently,withtheideaofmakingandmaintaining “agreenearth” beingthefocusofthe
society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in universities or
colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our
society.
Theconceptof “greencampus” doesnotonlymeanagreenenvironmentbutalsorefers
toanenvironmentalsenseinpeople’smind.Campusplaysacrucialroleineducatingtheyoung
generationandtheconsciousnessof “greencampus” willdefinitelyproduceaprofoundeffect
onstudents’variousenvironmentalprotectionactivitiesaftertheirgraduation.What’smore,the
young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many
problemswaitingforthemtosolve.
Tomake “greencampus” cometrue,firstly,itisnecessarytoworkouteffectiveprinciples
for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus. Secondly, it calls for people’s
awarenessoftheseriouspollutionaroundusandactualactiontoreducethewaste.Lastbutnot
least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that
“greencampus”canworksmoothlywiththeco-effortofthewholesociety.
建设绿色校园
近来，随着建设并保持“绿色地球”的观念成为社会关注的焦点，“绿色校园”也成为
校园里流行的话题。这无疑会给我们的校园和社会带来长远的利益。
“绿色校园”不仅仅指绿色的环境，还包括人们头脑中的环境意识。学校在培养年轻一
代上起着关键作用，“绿色校园”的意识必定会对学生毕业后的环境保护意识产生长远影响。
更为重要的是，年轻一代面临着严重的环境污染，有太多问题等待他们去解决。
为使“绿色校园”成为现实，首先应该制定出可持续发展、可长远发展的有效政策。其
次，还需要人们对环境污染的严肃性有正确认识并采取实际行动切实减少污染。最后但同样
重要的是，有必要加强学校和社会的联系以便在全社会共同努力下使“绿色校园”顺利实施。
范文点评
范文以“绿色校园”开篇，保证了文章切题。第一段开门见山，强调当今环保理念下构
建“绿色校园”的长远意义。第二段，着重讨论“绿色校园”的含义，指出“绿色校园”不
仅指校园中的绿化，还指生活在校园中的人们的绿色和环保意识，把校园这个小环境和社会
这个大环境结合起来，说理更加深刻。第三段是谈及具体的做法，分一、二、三点进行论述，
无疑是使“绿色校园”的理念落在实处。结构完整，首尾呼应，用词准确。关系词的正确使
用让句与句之间、段与段之间衔接紧凑，思想表达成熟有深度。
【生动的用词】 maintain 保持;concept 概念;profound 长远的;sustainable 可持续
的;recyclable可循环的。
【丰富的短语】bringbenefitto 带来利益;playacrucialrolein 发挥关键作用;underthe
burdenof在……重负下;cometrue实现;callfor要求。
【多变的句式】
范文中长句、短句、简单句、复杂句交叉使用。不同句型之间的转换，能让阅卷老师更
好地了解考生对句子结构的掌握运用，从而获得高分。
7避错指导
本次作文在题材上，虽然仍然延续了我们所熟悉校园类话题，但与社会背景有很大关系。
刚刚闭幕的哥本哈根世界气候大会使环保减排这个主题成为焦点，在全世界都提倡可持续发
展、和谐发展这一背景下的“绿色校园”，同时也是一个社会热点话题，这是我们审题时所
必须考虑的。另外开篇时，切忌拖泥带水，应直截了当，使阅卷老师对文章主题一目了然。
除正确审题之外，考生还应注意语言的准确运用，不落俗套。不同句型之间转换时，考
生应对句子结构全面掌握，避免句式错误造成扣分。
最后，应尽量避免单词拼写错误。本次作文常见的卷面拼写错误如下表：
正确拼写 词性及词义 错误的拼写
focusn. 焦点 focuse
effectn. 影响 effection/affect
environmentn. 环境 envirment/invironment
burdenn. 负担 burdon
solvev. 解决 slove
seriousa. 严肃的 serous
truea. 真的 ture
societyn. 社会 soceity
theoryn. 理论 thery
总之，考生在构思和写作过程中要尽可能做到思路完整，恰如其分地选择词汇。毕竟，
无错表达才是四级语言表达合格的核心。
第六篇：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a shortessay on the topic of Due
AttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling.Youshouldwrite atleast120wordsfollowingtheoutline
givenbelow:
1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题
3.我的建议
OnlineShopping
答案解析
标准版
DoingShoppingOnline
8With the development of the Internet, shopping is no longer a tiring thing. Just click your
mousetochoosethearticlesyoulike,andthepurchaseisdone.Youdon'tevenhavetostepoutof
theroom.Itseemsalleasyandquick.
However,people'sopinionsvaryonthistrend.Somebelievethatonlineshoppingistimeand
money saving. With plentiful selection options, they can buy whatever they like at any time
convenient. Still others insist that mis-purchasing alone is annoying enough, not to mention the
credibilityofthesellersandthesafetyoftheiraccounts.
In my opinion, the convenience and excitement of on line shopping is beyond all doubts. In
the meantime, we must always bear in mind that certain traps do exist, so we'd better make sure
the sellers are trustworthy before buying. In addition, we should also guard ourselves from the
potentialhackerswhomightstealouraccountinformation.
文章点评：
这是一篇“中等偏上”的学生作文。 本文先对网购热潮进行简介，引出全篇；接着对网
络购物的正反两方面进行对比；最后提出自己的看法结束全篇。整体看思路清晰，逻辑严密，
行文流畅，用语较为地道。
下面说一下这篇文章的有待提高之处：
1. 文章结构上，能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”（提出问题、分析问题、
解决问题）。 但是，以“WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet”为开首语，有些落入俗套，有硬
套模板的嫌疑。稍加注意，应该能写出更好的句子。
2. 微观语言点方面，有些语句稍显啰嗦，比如Withplentifulselectionoptions… 简化成
Withplentifulselections… 更好，意思没有丝毫减损，表达力反而增强许多。
高分版
With the help of the ever rapid development of internet technology, online shopping is
comingintofashioninmostofcities.
Onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeopleduetovariousreasons.Fromtheperspectiveof
consumer,itcansavesometimeforpeoplewhodon'thavemuchsparetime.Justclickthemouse,
theycangetwhatever theywantwhile stayingathome. For the retailers, itcancutsome costs for
thosewhodon'thavemuchcirculatingfunds.Theydon'thavetorentahouseandspendmoneyon
employees compared with the traditional trade mode. However, there are still some defects in
online shopping. First, lace of face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and
trustworthy.Second,peoplewilllosethefunofbargain.
It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern
society. It's of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws accordance with the rapid
growthof onlineshopping. Only inthis waycanwe enjoythepleasureandconvenienceofonline
shoppingwithouttheconcernofbeingtreated.
点评：
本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题之一——互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是众
所周知，因此，考生对于该话题还是比较熟悉的。但是，比较特殊的是，题干所列出的要求
的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该话题，而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以，考生应当审
清楚题，在写作时不仅仅要列出网购的优点，还必须给出相应的缺点。
按照四级作文的要求，考生在第一段时应该总述现象并引出话题；
第二段考生应当从正反两方面来论述网购，分别铺陈其优缺点；关于优点，网购的优点
很多，考生可择其最突出显著的方面来阐述，比如说网购可以节省很多时间；网购可以节省
很多成本开支等；其次，缺点方面考生可以把重心放在诚信方面；为了不至于跟优点相比，
9缺点方面太轻，考生可以考虑稍微提一下其他缺点，比如说与传统购物相比，网购少去了很
多砍价的乐趣；
第三点要求考生对于第二段列出的缺点给出自己的建议。此处我们可以根据第二段列出
的缺点方面给出相应的防范应对措施。
整篇作文话题比较好展开，难度不大，只要考生审好题，列出相应点，相信作文不会他
是难题。
外教版
Online shopping has been a boon to many industries and companies looking to expand their
markets.Also,it's convenientforshopperswhoaretoobusytoleavethehouse.However,insome
casesnothingcanreplaceatruefacetofaceshoppingexperience.
Internetshoppingisconvenientforthemotherswhospendalldaydoinghousechoresandfor
the fathers who work a full-time job. On the other hand, there are limits to shopping online, for
example:guessingthecorrectsizeofclothingonacomputerscreencanbeveryfrustrating.
For the busy mother and father, online shopping is a very useful and convenient tool. But,
thereareinstances,likeclothesshopping,wherenothingbeatstherealthing.
点评：
作者在第一段描述了网购作为一种时尚给大家的生活带来了便利，然后话锋一转，说网
购仍然取代不了面对面的购物交流。
第二段主要还是从正反两方面分析了网购的优势和不足，以此描述大家对网购的不同反
应。
第三段作者表明了自己的观点，对网购的便利和不足之处都做了描述。
综合来讲，本篇文章观点明确，结构清晰，语言表达地道，有不少闪光词汇，但是，内
容深度上来讲还有些欠缺，另外，最后一部分表达个人观点，和第二段稍有重复。考生需要
注意观点的清晰，不宜模棱两可。
第七篇：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled
Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should
write at least 120words but nomorethan 180words.
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
OnExcessivePackaging
10答案解析
参考作文:
OnExcessivePackaging
Nowadaysthe phenomena ofexcessive packaging ofgoodsare prevailing inour
society:clothesswathedintissuepaper,placedincardboardboxandfinallywrapped
in well-designed plastic bags, imported bottles of grape wine packed in wooden
boxes,fruitsputinhand-wovenbaskets,tonamebutafew。
There are several causes of excessive packaging. The first reason is that a large
number of companies believe that they can attract customers’ attention and
stimulate their purchasing desire by over-packaging their goods, thus gaining more
profits. On the other hand, quite a number of consumers mistakenly hold that the
more delicate the package is, the better the quality will be, thus encouraging
excessivepackaging。
In mypointofview,excessive packaging hasdisastrousconsequences, including
the loss of precious resources, excessive consumption of water and energy, and
unnecessaryextractionofscarcelandforlandfill。
To solve the problem, it’s necessary to take the following measures. First, laws
and regulations must be made to restrict excessive packaging of companies. In
addition, we need to raise consumer’s awareness that excessive packaging doesn’t
equaltohighqualityandadvocatepackagingrecycling.
【解析】
本次作文的话题是“过度包装”，话题不断新，考生应该都比较熟悉。写好本
篇作文的关键在于紧跟题目所列提纲：现象——原因——看法和建议，确定相应
的写作结构。重点分析产生此现象的原因有哪些，把最重要的两三点罗列下来。
最后，根据分析出的原因提供相应的建议。
范文首段开门见山，首先一句话总结如今社会上过度包装现象盛行，而后举
出一些实例补充说明。
第二段重点从公司和消费者两方面论述产生过度包装的原因。公司方面是为
了吸引顾客，刺激消费，赢取更多的利润；消费者方面是认为包装越精美，质量
越好这种错误的消费意识。
接下来作者表明自己的看法，认为过度包装会导致很多问题：稀缺资源的流
失；水，能源的过度消耗以及产生不必要的垃圾场等。
最后一段作者针对原因提出了一些解决方案。第一方面，建立法律规章制度
来约束企业的过度包装行为。第二方面，必须让消费者认识到过度包装不等同于
高质量，并提倡包装物的回收利用。
本文条理清晰，论述充分，语言使用规范得当，如：tonamebutafew，thefirst
reasonisthat…，ontheotherhand，inmypointofview，tosolvetheproblem，first，
inaddition等。
11第八篇：
Direction: Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionentitledEducation
Pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below (Weekly earnings of
2010).Pleasewriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.
Education:AWorthyInvestment
Weeklyearningsin2010($)
Doctoraldegree 1,550
Master’sdegree 1,272
Bachelor’sdegree 1,038
Somecollege,nodegree 712
Highschooldiploma 626
Lessthanhighschooldegree 444
Source:U.S.BureauofLaborStatistics
EducationPays
答案解析
作文范文
EducationPay
What is shown in the chart above is that those people with high degree earn more
than those with lower. For example, staff with master’s degree receive a better
paymentthanthose with bachelor’s degree,according to a surveyofthe paymentto
theemployee.Thesesurveyindicatesthateducationdegreedoeshavearelationship
12withearnings,contrarytotherecenttheoryofuselesseducation.
Recently, there is a heated discussion about the significance of the education. Some
people hold a view that higher education is useless since college education cannot
mesh with the social needs. Some think that higher educationis indispensable if you
wanttogofarinbothyourstudiesandlife.Nowthatsurveyhasprovedwhichpartis
wiser.
As for me, I definitely support the view that education is necessary for people’s
life. Reading can not only make me survive well in this society with fierce
competitionbutalsohelpmemakesenseoflife.Ipursueforitformywholelife.
第九篇：
Directions: Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealettertoaforeignfriendwhowantsto
teachEnglishinChina.Pleaserecommendacitytohim.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomore
than180words.
答案解析
MyViewonthePopularityofTranslationApps
The use of translation apps is becoming increasingly popular.Translation apps have become
an essential part of peoples life especially among people who are learning English and other
foreign languages. Just as a coin has two sides, translation apps also have their advantages and
disadvantages.
On the one hand, they have made language learning much more convenient and can help
people who do not speak the same language communicate smoothly. On the other hand, many
people are not willing to learn to improve their language ability because the apps are easy to use.
Besides, the translation given by many translation apps is full of grammatical errors, which is
boundtoseriouslymisleadpeopleslearningandcommunication.
13Translation apps have changed peoples life in many ways, but they also lead to some
negativeconsequences.People shoulddiscerngoodfrombadwhenusingtranslation appsanduse
themreasonablyandflexibly.Onlyinthiswaycantranslationappsbetterservepeopleandnotthe
otherwayaround.
第十篇：
Directions: Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealettertoaforeignfriendwhowantsto
learnChinese.Pleaserecommendaplacetohim.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180
words.
答案解析
DearMark,
How’s everything going? Last time you said you felt inclined to learn Chinese but had no
clue where to start. So I’m writing to recommend a place to you—the Confucius Institute, an
establishedlanguagecenteraimedtopromoteChineselanguageandculture.
The reasons for my recommendation are as follows. Firstly,this Chinese government-funded
educational institute is staffed by the most experienced, professional Chinese teachers, which
ensures high-quality instruction. You can turn to them whenever you encounter difficulties in
mastering the tones and the characters. Secondly, students there are encouraged to take part in
activities ranging from making traditional food to learning calligraphy, as a means of exposing
them to the appealing aspects of Chinese culture. Besides, the organization is now widely
embraced by more than two million students. That means you aren’t alone as a beginner and will
probablyforgedeepfriendshipswithotherlearners.
Learningalanguagefromscratchwon’tbeeasy.ButIbelieveyou’llfindyourselfhavingfun
whileimprovingyourChineseproficiency.
14Bestwishes,
LiHua
第十一篇：
Directions: Forthis part, youare allowed 30 minutestowritea short essay entitled
ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?Youshouldwriteat
Least120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:
1. 名校校园正成为旅游新热点
2. 校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同
3. 我认为…
ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?
答案解析
ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentotourism?
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular
tourist attraction. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year
thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and
Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from
the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own
province.
Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned,isitagoodorbadthingtoopenthe
university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one
hand, some people argued thatit is a good thing forthe studentsto visit the famous
university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information
about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare
themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some
people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public
tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm
totheenvironmentbutalsototheintellectualatmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is
15mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the
spiritualatmosphereinthislearningfield.
第十二篇：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the
topic of students selecting their lectures. You should write at least 120
wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:
1. 有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师
2. 学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素
3. 学生自选任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题
OnStudentsSelectingLecturers
答案解析
范文：
OnStudentsChoosingLecturers
Nowadays, some universities give students the right to choose who teaches
some of their classes. This has led to some debate over whether students should be
giventhismuchpower.
There are several factors that students consider when choosing a lecturer,
including the teaching style of the lecturer, the lecturer’s academic background, and
the lecturer’s reputation among students. The ideal lecturer is one who has an
interesting teaching style, a diverse academic background, and a good reputation
amongstudents.
There are both positive and negative aspects to allowing students to choose
their lecturers. Giving students the choice encourages them to take ownership for
theirclasses,andalsoputspressureonteacherstoimprovetheirteachingquality.
However, the factors that students consider might not be the ones that lead to
the highest quality of education. Schools might end up with lecturers who teach
16interestingclasseswithoutmuchcontent.
第十三篇：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the
topic of students selecting their lectures. You should write at least 120
wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
答案解析
参考范文：
The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue concerning
the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala. Its established status is being
challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger generations. It is
increasinglydifficulttocaterforalltastes.
Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other
programs. These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration
insteadofimmersingthemselvesinTV.Despitethat,themajorityofmid-agedpeople
and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance. The most
striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people’s lives.
Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring
FestivalEve.Theyallhavearestlessnightandgluetheireyesonthetelevision.
I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned.
Undoubtedly, it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year. To increase
its appeal and meet young adults’ need, the upcoming performance should invite
somebignamesincludingsuperstarsfromHongKongandTaiwan.Wearealleagerly
anticipatingthisunforgettableeveningshow.
17第十四篇：
Directions ： Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthefollowingquestion.Youshouldwriteatleast
120wordsbutnomorethan180words.
SupposeaforeignMendofyoursiscomingtovisitChina,whatisthefirstplaceyouwouldliketotakehim/herto
seeandwhy？
答案解析
审题思路
本次作文通过设置虚拟情景，要求考生描述具有特色的名胜古迹、文化圣地或者山水名
地等，写作形式和内容不拘一格，与往年常考的议论文、图表作文和名言评述作文题型区别
较大。仔细审查题目要求，考生首先应回答“what”，即去什么地方；其次，考生应回答“why”，
即推荐该地点的原因；最后，考生需要作简要的总结。
写作提纲
一、回答“what”，说明去何处（accompanyyoutotheNationalCenterforthePerforming
Arts)
二、回答“why”,叙述原因 ：1、现场体验国粹（enjoytheauthenticperformance，celebrated
actors,essenceandminiatureofChineseculture) 2、欣赏其他艺术表演（feastyoureyesonthe
otherformsofarts)
三、简要总结：1、探访国家大剧院的意义(haveafurtherunderstandingofChinesearts，
enrichyourartisticaccomplishment) 2、朋友的感受(awonderfulandunforgettableexperience)
18范文点评
高分范文 精彩点评
NationalCenterforthePerformingArts ①引出话题。
②由因到果:朋友喜欢京剧，因而带他去国家大剧院
现场感受京剧的魅力。
③说明带朋友去国家大剧院的一个原因：观看京剧名
家现场表演。
① I know you are fascinated by Chinese arts, Beijing
Operainparticular.② SinceyouwillcometoChina,Iamwilling
toaccompanyyoutotheNationalCenterforthePerformingArtsto
appreciatethesplendidperformance.
④⑤说明京剧的独特之处:是我国的国粹, 是中国
文化的缩影,融合了地方戏和民歌的优点，深受中外人
士的欢迎。
③ There, you can enjoy the authentic performance of
Beijing Opera by celebrated actors. ④ As the essence and
miniature of Chinese culture, Beijing Opera incorporates the
advantages of local opera and folk melody, prevailing in every ⑥说明带朋友去国家大剧院的另一个原因：可以欣赏
comer of China.⑤ WithitsexposuretotheWesternworld,many 其他艺术表演。
foreigners begin to fall in love with it. ⑥ Besides, you can also
havetheopportunitytofeastyoureyesontheotherformsofarts,
whichmightalsoarouseyourinterest.
⑦ By enjoying the authentic performance of Beijing
⑦⑧说明去国家大剧院的意义和感受。
全O文pe翻ra,译you are bound to have a farther understanding of Chinese
arts,which我w知ill道en你ric对hy中ou国ra艺rt术isti十ca分cc着om迷p，lis尤hm其en是t.京⑧剧I。am既s然ur你e 要来中国，我愿意效劳，陪你去国家大剧院体验
thatit精m彩us的tb表ea演w。onderfulandunforgettableexperienceforyou.
在那里，你能够欣赏到京剧名家名角的现场表演。作为我国的国粹和中国文化的缩影，京剧融合了地
方戏和民歌的优点，风靡全国。随着京剧传到西方世界，许多外国人开始爱上它。此外，你还有机会一饱
眼福其他艺术表演，这可能也会引起你的兴趣。
加分亮点
通过欣赏京剧的现场表演，你一定会对中国艺术有更加深入的理解，这将会增强你的艺术修养。我确
信，这对你来说必将是一次美妙而令人难忘的经历。 befascinatedby 对…着迷
authenticperformance 现场表演
第十五篇：
incorporate包含，吸收
Directions ：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthefollowingquestion.
Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your campus, what is the most
feastone’seyeson 大饱眼福
19interestingplaceyouwouldliketotakehim/hertoseeandwhy?
答案解析
审题思路
这是一篇描述性作文，主要是向外国朋友推荐一个校园里最有趣的地方（themostinteresting
place)。考生应将重点放在第二段阐释推荐的理由上。
写作提纲
一、对朋友来访表示欢迎并概述要推荐的地方:文化广场(CultureSquare)二、具体阐述推荐
的理由：1、活动丰富多彩(colorfulactivities)2、可以与其他学生交流和互动（communicateand
interactwithotherstudents)3、可以借此更好地了解校园文化（anopportunitytoknowbetterthe
campusculture)
二、三、总结推荐的理由并表达对朋友来访的期待：1、它是一个充满生机与活力的世界（a
worldfullofvigorandvitality)2、它是了解校园文化的一个窗口（awindowthroughwhichyoucan
getabigpictureofthecampus)
范文点评
20高分范文 精彩点评
CultureSquare ①开门见山，点明文章主题:对朋友来访表示欢迎并
向朋友推荐文化广场。
②概括文化广场的亮点：非常有趣、充满乐趣。
③说明推荐文化广场的第一个原因：活动丰富多彩。
① I am excited to .hear that you are coming to visit my
cam-pusandcannotwaittoexpressmywelcome.HerebyI’dlike
to recommend the Culture Square on the campus to you, ②
whichisofgreatinterestandenjoymenttogiveitatry. ④⑤使用besides..，moreover...说明第二、三点原
因，层次分明。
TheCultureSquareistheheavenforstudentswhere ③ you
can see colorful activities organized to add extra pleasure to ⑥对文章进行总结。
students’ monotonousroutine.④ Besides,youarealwaysfree to
engage yourself in any of these activities that fascinate you. I am
quiteconfidentthat you’llfind itbeneficial tocommunicateand
interact with other students. ⑤ Moreover, as a major part of the
⑦⑧利用同位语结构总结推荐文化广场的原因。
campusculture,theCultureSquareofferswhoever wantstogetan
insightintothe campus an opportimity to know better the campus
culture.
全文翻译
⑨表达对朋友来访的期待。
文化广场
加分亮点
⑥ Inaword,theCultureSquare, ⑦ aworldfallofvigor
giveitatry 试一试
andvitality, ⑧ awindowthroughwhichyoucangetabigpicture
monotonous 单调的
ofthecampus,isdefinitelyaplaceworthvisiting.I’msureyou’ll
得知你即将来访我的校园，我真是十分兴奋，迫不及待地向你表示欢迎。在此，我想向你推荐我们学
have fun. ⑨ Look forward to seeing you soon in the Culture
校的文化广场——个非常有趣、充满乐趣的地方，值得一试。文化广场是学生的天堂，在这里你可以看到
Square.
丰富多彩的活动，为学生单调的生活增添额外的乐趣。另外，你还可以自由地参与到你喜欢的任何活动中。
我确信你会发现和其他学生交流和互动受益良多。此外，文化广场作为校园文化的一个重要组成部分，可
spectacularity 壮丽
以为那些想要洞悉校园的人提供一个更好地了解校园文化的机会。总而言之，文化广场是一个充满生机与
活力的世界，一个可以窥见整个校园景象的窗口，一定值得一游。我相信你会玩得很开心。期待早日在文
化广场见到你。
getaninsightinto 洞悉
vigorandvitality 生机与活力
第十六篇：
Directions ： For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following
question.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your hometown,
whatisthemostinterestingplaceyouwouldliketotakehim/hertoseeandwhy?
21答案解析
审题思路
本次作文一改往年常考的三段式议论文、图表作文和名言评述作文题型,设定虚拟情
景，要求考生描述某处景点，考生应该把重点放在说明选取这一景点的原因上，也就是
说明其独特性上。仔细分析可知,本文依旧可以分三部分展开。考生首先应回答“what”
的问题,即去什么地方游玩;其次，考生应回答“Why”的问题，即推荐该地点的缘由;最
后, 考生需要做简要的总结。
写作提纲
一、回答“what”，说明去某地游玩(takevacation,onthetopofmylist)
二、回答“why”，描述某地的独特之处：1、以泰山为例(MountTai）
2、泰山的独特之处(spectacularity,sacredness,hopeandauspiciousness)
三、简要总结：1、探访泰山很有意义（engagementinancientcultureandcontemporaiy
prosperity) 2、表达愿望(wonderfulexperience)
范文点评
22高分范文 精彩点评
ATourtoMountTai ①②引出并点明主题:外国朋友要来家乡游玩，泰山
是首选之地。
③④古今对比:古今名人都对泰山有着特殊的感情。
① I am delighted to learn that my foreign Mend, Bill, is
going to take vacation in my hometown. For the sake of his
hospitality I enjoyed in England, I will show him around3the ⑤泰山的独特之处:泰山不仅仅是一座山，她还象征
landscape, ② amongwhichMountTaLisunquestionablyonthe着希望和祥瑞，体现了深厚的文化。
topofmylist. ⑥泰山的独特之处:泰山是神圣之地,历代帝王奉泰
山如神灵，到泰山祈求国泰民安。
③ Centuries ago, at the summit of the mountain, Con-
fucius exclaimed that the world was small; ④ in modem times, ⑦总结到访泰山的意义。
everyone is bound to appreciate its spectacularity and
sacredness.⑤ Mount Tai is more than a mountain; it is a place
which symbolizes hope and auspiciousness, embodying profound
culture.⑥ Furthermore, Mount Tai is considered to be sacred to
⑧表达愿望。
thepoint wherealmosteveryancientChineseemperorcamehere
to make offerings to Heaven and Earth, praying for a prosperous
countryandapeacefullivingenvironment.
全文翻译
泰山之旅
欣闻我的外国朋友比尔要来我的家乡度假。由于我在英国曾受到比尔的热情款待，我将带他四处看看
家乡的风景。在所有风景中，泰山无疑是首选之地。
加分亮点
⑦ V几is个iti世ng纪M前ou，n孔t T子ai登is上m泰o山re之th巅an，a发m出ou登nt泰ain山c而lim小b天ing下之感叹;在现代，每个人必定会去欣赏泰山的壮
unquestionably毫无疑问地
excur丽sio和n,神b圣ut。a泰h山an不ds-仅on仅e是ng一ag座em山en，t她in还a象nc征ien着t 希cu望ltu与re祥an瑞d，体现了深厚的文化。此外，泰山被看作是如此
beboundto... 一定会…
conte神mp圣or，ary以p至ro于spe几rit乎y.每Th位us古, 代⑧帝I王as都su会re到yo这u里tha祭ty祀ou天w地ill,祈lik求e 国家昌盛、国泰民安。
thiswonderfulexperience.
登泰山不仅是一次登山远足，还是一次亲身体验古代文化和现代繁荣的旅行。因此，我向你保证你一
定会喜欢这次美妙的旅行的。
spectacularity 壮丽
sacredness 神圣
tothepointwhere …到了…程度
hands-on亲身实践的
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