专题 02 高考英语书信体（一）-建议信+申请信
一、建议信核心考点精讲
（一）建议信必背高分句型
1、万能开头句
（1）表明写信目的
I am writing this letter to give you some suggestions on...（我写这封信是为了给你一些关
于…… 的建议。）
I'm writing to you with the purpose of offering some advice on...（我写信给你是为了就……
提供一些建议。）
（2）引出话题
I have learned that you are facing some problems in... and I'd like to give you some advice.（我
得知你在…… 方面正面临一些问题，我想给你一些建议。）
It has come to my attention that you have difficulty in... Therefore, I'm writing to offer you some
suggestions.（我注意到你在…… 方面有困难。因此，我写信给你提供一些建议。）
2、逻辑衔接句
（1）列举建议
First of all, it would be beneficial if you could...（首先，如果你能…… 将会是有益的。）
Secondly, I suggest that you should...（其次，我建议你应该……） Thirdly, why not...? / It
might be a good idea to...（第三，为什么不…… 呢？/…… 可能是个好主意。）
（2）说明原因
The reason why I suggest this is that...（我建议这个的原因是……） This is because...（这是
因为……）
It is due to the fact that...（这是由于…… 的事实。）
（3）对比选择
On the one hand,... On the other hand,...（一方面，…… 另一方面，……）
Instead of..., you can...（与其……，你可以……）
3、亮点结尾句
（1）表达期望I hope that my suggestions will be helpful to you and that you can make great progress in...
（我希望我的建议对你有帮助，并且你能在…… 方面取得很大的进步。）
I'm looking forward to seeing your improvement in...（我期待着看到你在…… 方面的进
步。）
（2）鼓励信心
Believe in yourself and I'm sure you can overcome the difficulties with these suggestions.（相
信你自己，我确信有了这些建议你能克服困难。）
With these suggestions, I have full confidence that you will succeed in...（有了这些建议，我
完全有信心你会在…… 方面取得成功。）
（3）委婉结语
If you have any further questions, please don't hesitate to contact me.（如果你有任何进一步
的问题，请随时联系我。）
Please let me know if you need any more information.（如果你需要更多信息，请告诉我。）
（二）建议信注意事项：
1、格式规范
称呼：顶格写在信的开头，根据收信人的身份确定合适的称呼，如 “Dear + 人名”。
正文：另起一行，空两格开始写。分段阐述写信目的、建议内容及理由等，使文章层次清
晰。结尾语：一般用 “Yours sincerely”“Yours truly”“Best regards” 等，置于正文右下角。
署名：在结尾语下方写上写信人的姓名。
2、语言表达
语气恰当：建议信是向他人提出建议，语气要诚恳、委婉。
用词准确：使用恰当的词汇准确表达自己的意思，避免出现词汇拼写错误或用词不当的情
况。句式多样：不要通篇用简单句，可适当运用复合句、强调句，使文章句式丰富，增强
表现力。
3、内容结构
明确目的：开头要开门见山，清楚表明写信目的是提出建议，让读者迅速了解信件主旨。
条 理 清 晰 ： 主 体 部 分 提 出 的 建 议 要 条 理 分 明 ， 可 用 “ First of
all”“Secondly”“Thirdly”“Finally” 等连接词进行衔接。每个建议单独成段，并说明理由或给
出具体措施。
贴合实际：建议要切实可行，符合收信人的实际情况，避免提出不切实际或难以操作的建议。
结尾有力：结尾部分要对建议进行总结，再次表达希望对方采纳建议的愿望，或者表示对
对方的鼓励和信心。
4、检查修改
语法错误：检查句子的语法结构是否正确，包括主谓一致、时态、语态、从句的使用等。
例He don't like reading books.” 应改为 “He doesn't like reading books.
拼写错误：仔细检查单词的拼写，特别是一些容易混淆的单词，如 “affect” 和
“effect”，“principal” 和 “principle” 等。
标点符号：确保标点符号使用正确，英文中没有中文的顿号，并列词之间用逗号隔开；句
子结尾用句号，不能用中文的句号 “。” 等。
在写作时，要认真审题，明确题目要求和写作要点，同时注意书写工整，保持卷面整洁，
给阅卷老师留下良好的印象。
（三）高考英语建议信模版：
首段：①简明扼要地介绍自己（1句话-短句）
②点明写作目的，即我为什么写信给您（1-2短句话/1长句）
段中：①提出具体建议，简明扼要（1-2句）
②提出自己建议的优点，边提优点边说明其理由（1-2句话/长句）
段尾：①总结采纳建议的好处；
②表达期盼。
写作流程图
说明写信目的
介绍详情、说明原因
提出建议
希望采纳、盼望回复
1、写作模板
模板（2）
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to makesome conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的
内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with
you to further details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板（2）
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方
需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then,
it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also
___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition,
_________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心
和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
二、申请信核心考点精讲
（一）申请信必背高分句型
高考英语申请信中，使用一些高分句型可以让文章更加出彩，提高得分。以下是从开头、
主体和结尾三个部分为你精讲申请信的必背高分句型：
1、开头部分
表明写信目的
I am writing this letter to apply for the opportunity to.../ I am writing to apply for... （我写这封
信是为了申请…… 的机会 / 我写信是为了申请……）例如：I am writing this letter to apply for the opportunity to participate in the international exchange
program.（我写这封信是为了申请参加国际交流项目的机会。）
Learning that... I am eager to apply for...（得知……，我渴望申请……）
2、主体部分
（1）介绍个人情况
I am a/an... student majoring in... at... University / School.（我是…… 大学 / 学校…… 专业
的…… 学生。）
With a good command of... I believe I am qualified for...（凭借对…… 的良好掌握，我相信
我有资格担任……）
I have a strong interest in... and have been actively involved in... - related activities.（我对……
有浓厚的兴趣，并一直积极参与与…… 相关的活动。）
（2）说明申请原因
The main reason for my application is that...（我申请的主要原因是……）
I am deeply attracted by... and I think it will be a great opportunity for me to...（我被…… 深深
吸引，我认为这将是我…… 的一个绝佳机会。）
（3）强调个人优势
I am confident that I possess the necessary skills and qualities for this position /program, such
as...（我有信心我具备这个职位 / 项目所需的技能和素质，例如……）
Compared with other candidates, I believe my advantage lies in...（与其他候选人相比，我相信
我的优势在于……）
3、结尾部分
（1）表达期待
I sincerely hope that my application will be considered favorably.（我真诚地希望我的申请能得
到积极的考虑。）
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.（我期待着在您方便的时候尽
早收到您的回复。）
（2）表示感谢
Thank you for your time and consideration.（感谢您抽出时间考虑我的申请。）
I would be very grateful if you could give me this opportunity.（如果您能给我这个机会，我将
不胜感激。）（二）英语申请信和建议信在写作上有什么不同？
英语申请信和建议信在写作目的、内容结构、语言风格等方面存在明显不同，以下是详细
分析：
1、写作目的
申请信：主要目的是向对方提出申请，请求获得某个机会、职位、奖项、资助或加入某个
组织等，希望对方能够批准自己的申请。
建议信：目的是针对某人或某事给出自己的建议、意见或看法，旨在帮助对方解决问题、
改进情况或做出更好的决策。
2、内容结构
申请信
（1）开头：明确表明写信目的，说明自己申请的具体事项，如申请奖学金、申请实习岗位
等。
（2）主体：重点介绍个人情况，包括教育背景、工作经历、技能特长、相关成就等，以证
明自己符合申请要求；阐述申请原因，说明为什么对该机会感兴趣以及该机会对自己的重
要性。
（3）结尾：表达期待得到对方认可和批准的愿望，通常还会感谢对方考虑自己的申请。
建议信
（1）开头：一般先提及与对方相关的事情或问题，以此引出写信的目的，即提出建议。
（2）主体：详细说明问题所在，并针对问题给出具体的建议和理由。建议要具有可行性和
合理性，理由要充分，能够支持所提出的建议。
（3）结尾：希望对方能够考虑自己的建议，可适当表达对对方的祝福或对问题解决的期待。
3、语言风格
申请信：语言应正式、礼貌、客观。要注重使用规范的词汇和句式，避免使用过于随意或
口语化的表达。在介绍自己的优势和成就时，要注意语气自信但不过于自负，给人以真诚
稳重的印象。
建议信：语言风格相对较为灵活，可以根据与对方的关系适当调整。如果是给朋友或同学
的建议，语言可以较为亲切、随和；如果是给上级或不太熟悉的人写信，语言则要更加正
式、礼貌。但无论如何，都要保持诚恳、谦逊的态度，避免使用命令式或过于强硬的语气。
4、侧重点申请信：侧重于展示个人的能力、资质和与申请事项的匹配度，强调自己能够为所申请的
机会带来什么价值，以及自己获得该机会后可能取得的成果。
建议信：侧重于对问题的分析和解决方案的提出，要站在对方的角度思考问题，充分考虑
对方的实际情况和需求，使建议具有针对性和可操作性。
三、名校模拟提升精练
（一）建议信名校模拟提升精练
Writing01
（2025·山东枣庄·二模）假定你是李华。在英语课上，外教Mr Smith经常采用“同伴合
作”方式改作文。请你给他写一封邮件，建议使用人工智能 (AI) 工具，如Deepseek批改，
内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.你的理由。
注意：
1.词数 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua. I’d like to suggest using AI tools like Deepseek for marking compositions instead
of the “peer-cooperation” way.
There are several reasons for this. Firstly, AI tools like Deepseek can provide immediatefeedback. Secondly, the feedback is highly detailed. It can point out not only grammar and
spelling mistakes but also offer in-depth analysis of vocabulary usage and logical coherence. This
helps us better understand our weaknesses. Moreover, AI can give a wide range of language
suggestions, enabling us to learn different ways of expression.
I sincerely hope you’ll consider this proposal. It could potentially bring about a more
efficient and effective writing - learning experience for all of us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封信，建议他用人工智能
(AI) 工具，如Deepseek批改作文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：firstly→ first of all
此外：moreover→ what’s more
希望：hope→ wish
真诚地：sincerely→ genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Moreover, AI can give a wide range of language suggestions, enabling us to learn different
ways of expression.
拓展句：Moreover, AI can give a wide range of language suggestions, which enables us to learn
different ways of expression.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can point out not only grammar and spelling mistakes but also offer
in-depth analysis of vocabulary usage and logical coherence.（运用了not only…but also…连接
的并列谓语）
【高分句型2】I sincerely hope you’ll consider this proposal.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
Writing 02
（2025·安徽合肥·一模）假定你是李华，外教 Chris计划周一至周五在你班开展课外英语拓
展阅读(supplementaryreading)。你对此活动很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.你的看法；
2.你的建议。注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share my thoughts on the supplementary reading activity..
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share my thoughts on the supplementary reading activity. I believe it’s a
fantastic opportunity for us to improve our English skills and gain insights into different cultures.
It will also help us develop critical thinking by exploring various themes beyond textbooks.
To maximize its effectiveness, I suggest incorporating a mix of fiction and non-fiction texts
that cater to our interests and levels. Additionally, setting aside time for discussions or debates
based on the readings could greatly enhance our comprehension and speaking abilities. Lastly,
perhaps we can have a weekly sharing session where students present their favorite parts or
reflections on the readings.
Looking forward to this enriching experience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教 Chris写一封邮件，就他计划周一至
周五在班上开展课外英语拓展阅读活动发表看法并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：opportunity →chance
各种各样的：various →all kinds of建议：suggest →advise
此外：additionally → in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additionally, setting aside time for discussions or debates based on the readings could
greatly enhance our comprehension and speaking abilities.
拓展句：Additionally, setting aside time for discussions or debates, which are based on the
readings, could greatly enhance our comprehension and speaking abilities.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To maximize its effectiveness, I suggest incorporating a mix of fiction
and non-fiction texts that cater to our interests and levels.（运用了不定式短语作目的状语以及
that引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Lastly, perhaps we can have a weekly sharing session where students present
their favorite parts or reflections on the readings.（运用了where引导的限制性定语从句）
Writing 03
（2024·山西运城·二模）假定你是李华。你的新西兰好友Jack计划组织一个以“环保”为
主题的活动，特发邮件向你征求建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐一种活动形式；
2. 说明理由。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear you plan to organize an activity with the theme of environmental
protection. And I’m willing to offer my advice.
I think a bicycle race, which can encourage people to travel in a green way, fits in well with
the theme. Biking is familiar to a majority of people, so the race will definitely attract many
participants, contributing to spreading the awareness of environmental protection. Moreover, it’s
such a good way to keep fit that more people will follow the green practice.
I hope my idea is helpful and that your event will be a great success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面属于应用文，新西兰好友Jack计划组织一个以“环保”为主题的活动，
要求考生回复一封邮件，向他推荐一种活动形式并说明理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累：
①环保：environmental protection → environmental conservation
②鼓励：encourage → inspire/motivate
③绿色出行：green travel → eco-friendly transportation/sustainable commuting
④意识：awareness → consciousness
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：And I’m willing to offer my advice.
拓展句：And I’m willing to offer my advice which I hope can be of assistance.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I think a bicycle race, which can encourage people to travel in a green
way, fits in well with the theme. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Moreover, it’s such a good way to keep fit that more people will follow the green
practice.(such...that引导的结果状语从句)
Writing 04
（2025·湖南·一模）假定你是李华，你所在的城市今年夏天将开办一个国际音乐夏令营，该
夏令营面向世界各地爱好演奏中国民族乐器(Chinese musical instruments) 的学生。你想建
议你的英国朋友James参加该夏令营。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.夏令营的开办信息；
2.你的建议；
3.夏令营的课程：
（1）中国民族乐器演奏训练课；
（2）中国传统音乐欣赏课。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear James,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear James:
Good news! An international music camp is due to open in our city this summer to any
student worldwide interested in playing Chinese musical instruments. As a Chinese music lover,
why not come and join the camp?
At the camp, you will be given full training. Of course, to play well, you are required to
have a good understanding of the Chinese traditional music, so there will be music classes
intended to help you to appreciate such kind of music.
I’m sure you will have a lot of fun at the camp.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。考生想建议自己的英国朋友James参加该夏令营。请你给他
写封邮件。
【详解】1. 词汇积累感兴趣：be interested in → be passionate about / enthusiastic about
提供培训指导：give full training → provide with comprehensive instruction
深入的理解：good understanding → thorough comprehension / solid grasp
玩得开心：have a lot of fun → greatly enjoy yourselves / create wonderful memories
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At the camp, you will be given full training.
拓展句：At the camp, where professional instructors will guide you step by step, you will be
given full training.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sure you will have a lot of fun at the camp. (运用了省略that的宾
语从句)
【高分句型2】Of course, to play well, you are required to have a good understanding of the
Chinese traditional music, so there will be music classes intended to help you to appreciate such
kind of music.(运用了不定式作状语，运用了不定式作补足语)
Writing 05
（2025·陕西咸阳·二模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter因学业压力将放弃足球训练，
请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示理解；2．给出建议。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re considering quitting football training due to academic
pressure.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,I’m sorry to hear that you’re considering quitting football training due to academic pressure.
I know how difficult it can be to manage both studies and a passion like football. The
mountains of assignments and looming exams are indeed overwhelming, making you feel like you
have no choice but to let go of football.
But think about it. Football isn’t just a sport; it’s a great stress reliever. After focusing on
textbooks for hours, a short training session can help you relax and recharge. My suggestion is to
draw up a well-organized schedule. Set fixed time for study, training, and rest. By doing this, you
can keep up with your studies while still enjoying football. I sincerely hope you won’t give it up.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就你的英国笔友Peter因学业压力将放弃足
球训练这事给他写一封邮件。内容包括：表示理解和给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
困难的：difficult→tough
放弃： let go of →give up
专注于：focus on→concentrate on
帮助：help→assist
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The mountains of assignments and looming exams are indeed overwhelming, making you
feel like you have no choice but to let go of football.
拓展句：The mountains of assignments and looming exams are indeed overwhelming, which
will make you feel like you have no choice but to let go of football.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I know how difficult it can be to manage both studies and a passion like
football. （运用了how引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】By doing this, you can keep up with your studies while still enjoying football.
（运用了状语从句的省略）
Writing 06
（2025·河南郑州·二模）假定你是李华，你在Global Forum上看到了Jason的求助帖。请给
他回帖，内容如下：(1)你的看法；(2)你的建议。Jason: In the era of widespread AI, I feel confused about my future career choices. What should I
do?
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hi Jason,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
【答案】Hi Jason,
I empathize with your concerns regarding career choices in the age of widespread AI.
Although AI is revolutionizing industries, it also paves the way for new opportunities.
I suggest focusing on developing skills that are irreplaceable by machines. Critical thinking
is one such skill. Practice analyzing complex problems and coming up with innovative solutions.
This will make you valuable in any workplace. Additionally, soft skills like communication are
highly sought-after. Strong communication can bridge the gap between humans and AI systems.
Also, explore emerging fields where AI intersects with traditional industries. For instance, in the
transportation industry, AI-based logistics management is becoming increasingly important. By
studying relevant knowledge and getting hands-on experience, you’ll stand out among job
seekers. Remember, with the right skills and a forward-looking attitude, you can thrive in this new
era.
Best wishes!
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给Jason回帖，就他在Global Forum提出的
问题表明自己的看法和建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
强调：empathize →stress
选择：choice→option集中精力于：focus on→concentrate on
重要的：important→significant
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Practice analyzing complex problems and coming up with innovative solutions. This will
make you valuable in any workplace.
拓展句：Practice analyzing complex problems and coming up with innovative solutions, which
will make you valuable in any workplace.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Although AI is revolutionizing industries, it also paves the way for new
opportunities.（运用了although引导让步状语从句）
[高分句型2]I suggest focusing on developing skills that are irreplaceable by machines.（运用了
that引导定语从句）
Writing 07
（2025·山东青岛·一模）假定你是李华，外教Chris计划于下周六组织一次春游活动（spring
outing），现面向全班同学征集活动建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）具体活动；
（2）你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,I’m glad to hear that we’ll have a spring outing next Saturday. I suggest we go to the
botanical garden. There, we can admire various plants and learn about different species, which is
both educational and relaxing. Also, we can have a picnic in the garden. It will be a great chance
for us to enjoy the outdoors and communicate with each other. I’m looking forward to the
activity.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给外教Chris写封信，就其计
划于下周六组织一次春游活动一事给出自己的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→ delighted
建议：suggest→ advise
各种各样的：various→ a variety of
机会：chance→ opportunity
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Also, we can have a picnic in the garden. It will be a great chance for us to enjoy the
outdoors and communicate with each other.
拓展句：Also, we can have a picnic in the garden, which will be a great chance for us to enjoy
the outdoors and communicate with each other.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad to hear that we’ll have a spring outing next Saturday.（运用了
that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】There, we can admire various plants and learn about different species, which is
both educational and relaxing.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
Writing 08
（2025·陕西·一模）假定你是李华，校英文报正在筹划增设艺术栏目，并向广大师生征求意
见和建议。请你对此谈谈自己的看法并提出合理化建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor,
I think it's a great idea to add an art column to our school's English newspaper. It can showcase
students' creativity and talent, and also provide a platform for us to learn more about different
art forms. I suggest including articles on painting, sculpture, photography, and even digital art.
We could also feature interviews with local artists and reviews of art exhibitions.
Yours,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。校英文报正在筹划增设艺术栏目，并向广大师生征求
意见和建议。请考生对此谈谈自己的看法并提出合理化建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
认为：think→figure
提供：provide→offer
建议：suggest→recommend
展示：showcase→demonstrate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：It can showcase students' creativity and talent, and also provide a platform for us to learn
more about different art forms.
拓展句：It can showcase students' creativity and talent, providing a platform for us to learn
more about different art forms.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I think it's a great idea to add an art column to our school's English
newspaper. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句作think的宾语以及it作形式主语)
[高分句型2] I suggest including articles on painting, sculpture, photography, and even digital art.
(运用了动名词including作宾语)（二）申请信名校模拟提升精练
Writing 01
（2025·山东青岛·二模）假如你是李华，你对某大学关于人工智能的暑期课程——大语言模
型（Large Language Models）十分感兴趣，请按要求写一封申请信，内容包含以下方面：
1.申请意愿和自身优势；
2.希望被录用。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Admissions Committee,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
Warm regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Admissions Committee,
I am Li Hua, a senior high school student passionate about artificial intelligence. Having
excelled in mathematics and computer science courses, I possess solid logical thinking and
programming skills. My participation in the school’s AI innovation team has equipped me with
hands-on experience in natural language processing projects.
The university’s summer program on Large Language Models perfectly aligns with my
academic interests. I believe my analytical abilities and persistent curiosity about AI mechanisms
can contribute meaningfully to course discussions. Furthermore, my bilingual communication
skills will facilitate effective collaboration with international participants.
I would be honored to join this program to deepen my understanding of cutting-edge AI
developments. Thank you for considering my application. I eagerly await the opportunity to learnfrom your esteemed faculty.
Warm regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封申请信，申请学习人工智能的暑期课程。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
热情的：passionate → enthusiastic / keen
匹配：aligns with → matches / corresponds to
加深理解：deepen my understanding → enhance my knowledge / gain deeper insights
擅长于：excelled in →performed exceptionally in
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Furthermore, my bilingual communication skills will facilitate effective collaboration with
international participants.
拓展句：Furthermore, my bilingual communication skills, which enable me to bridge cultural
and linguistic gaps, will facilitate effective collaboration with international participants.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Having excelled in mathematics and computer science courses, I
possess solid logical thinking and programming skills. （运用了非谓语作状语）
【高分句型2】 I believe my analytical abilities and persistent curiosity about AI mechanisms
can contribute meaningfully to course discussions.（运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句）
Writing 02
（2025·江西·二模）假定你是李华，学校将举行以“茶文化”为主题的中外学生交流活动，
正在招募志愿者，请你根据以下内容写一封申请信。
内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 个人优势；3. 希望获批。
注意：
1. 词数80左右。
2. 信件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 不得出现真实姓名和学校名字。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I am writing to apply as a volunteer for the Chinese and foreign
students’ exchange activity with “tea-culture” as the theme.
During my tenure as a language assistant in an international organization, I was fortunate
enough to accumulate valuable experience. Not only did this role develop my confidence in
English communication, but it also honed my skills in teamwork and problem-solving. In addition,
as an enthusiastic tea lover, I have rich knowledge about tea, from its varieties to brewing
methods. This background equips me well to be a highly effective volunteer for this event.
I would be grateful if you give me the opportunity to contribute to this cultural bridge.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，申请成为学校即将举行的以
“茶文化”为主题的中外学生交流活动的志愿者。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
积累：accumulate → amass
宝贵的：valuable → precious
热情的：enthusiastic → passionate
另外：in addition → what’s more
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to apply as a volunteer for the Chinese and foreign students’ exchange
activity with “tea-culture” as the theme.
拓展句：I am writing to apply as a volunteer for the Chinese and foreign students’ exchange
activity which is themed “tea-culture”.【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only did this role develop my confidence in English
communication, but it also honed my skills in teamwork and problem-solving. (运用了部分倒装
句)
【高分句型2】I would be grateful if you give me the opportunity to contribute to this cultural
bridge. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
Writing 03
（2024·安徽合肥·一模）假定你是李华，你从网上得知联合国教科文组织（UNESCO）将在
你的家乡举办“一带一路”（the Belt and Road Initial）茶文化交流活动。请你写一封英文
信申请做志愿者。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 对活动的认识；
3. 个人优势。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply as a volunteer for “the Belt and Road Initial” Tea Culture Exchange
event to be organized by UNESCO in my hometown.
According to me, this event presents a unique opportunity to promote cultural exchange
and understanding. It will serve as a platform for showcasing the rich and diverse tea cultures of
different countries, fostering mutual respect and appreciation among participants.I have a good understanding of the importance of tea culture and its significance in the
history and traditions of our region. It has been several years since I was fascinated by the art of
tea making and brewing. Moreover, my excellent communication skills and ability to work well
with others will make me a valuable addition to the volunteer team.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，写一封英文信申请做
“一带一路”茶文化交流活动的志愿者，需表述写信的目的，谈论自己对活动本身的认识，
并介绍个人的优势。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
机会：opportunity→chance
展示：showcase→display, exhibit
丰富的：rich→abundant, plentiful
培养：foster→develop, nurture
迷住：fascinate→attract, captivate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：According to me, this event presents a unique opportunity to promote cultural exchange
and understanding.
拓展句：I believe that this event presents a unique opportunity to promote cultural exchange
and understanding.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It will serve as a platform for showcasing the rich and diverse tea cultures
of different countries, fostering mutual respect and appreciation among participants. (运用了现
在分词短语fostering…作状语)
[高分句型2] It has been several years since I was fascinated by the art of tea making and
brewing. (运用了since引导时间状语从句)
Writing 04
（2024·福建漳州·一模）假定你是李华。你得知“大美漳州”推介活动组委会正在招募英语
义务讲解员，为来访的外国友人进行讲解，请你给相关负责人写一封申请信，内容包括：1．介绍相关经验和优势；
2．希望被录用。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
Sincerely Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is Li Hua, and I am writing to express my keen interest in applying for the position
of English volunteer interpreter for the upcoming “Beautiful Zhangzhou” promotion event.
I have consistently achieved high scores in English proficiency tests, which have equipped
me with strong communicative skills across linguistic boundaries. Having worked as a part-time
tour guide during my university years, I can effectively communicate with people from diverse
backgrounds and interests.
I eagerly await the opportunity to contribute to the success of the “Beautiful Zhangzhou”
promotion event and look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely
Yours,
Li
Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给相关负责人写一封申请信，申请当“大美
漳州”推介活动的英语义务讲解员。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→convey即将到来的：upcoming→forthcoming
担任：work as→serve as
为……做贡献：contribute to→make contributions to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My name is Li Hua, and I am writing to express my keen interest in applying for the
position of English volunteer interpreter for the upcoming “Beautiful Zhangzhou” promotion
event.
拓展句：My name is Li Hua, and I am writing to express my keen interest in applying for the
position of English volunteer interpreter for the “Beautiful Zhangzhou” promotion event which
will be held soon.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I have consistently achieved high scores in English proficiency tests, which
have equipped me with strong communicative skills across linguistic boundaries. (运用了which
引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Having worked as a part-time tour guide during my university years, I can effectively
communicate with people from diverse backgrounds and interests. (运用了现在分词的完成式
作原因状语)
Writing 05
（2024·四川攀枝花·三模）假定你是攀枝花某中学高三学生李华。美国马斯卡廷中学生代表
团（the delegation from Muscatine High School）将在暑假期间访问中国, 行程包括你的城市。
他们将与学生交流，游览特色景点，体验中国文化。你从网上得知你市正在招募从事接待
工作的志愿者, 于是决定用英语写一封电子邮件申请加入，要点如下：
1. 写信目的；
2. 自我介绍；
3. 希望获准。
注意: 1. 词数100词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
Wish all my best regards.
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student in our city. Knowing the city is looking for volunteers for
hospitality work for the delegation from Muscatine High School during the summer holiday, I am
writing to apply for the post advertised on the Internet.
I’m convinced I have the right qualifications for it. For one thing, with fluent oral English, I
have no difficulty in communicating with foreign visitors. For another, not only am I familiar with
the history and traditions of our city, but also I have strong affection for them, which enables me
to provide visitors with more professional service. In all, I feel proud to promote and spread our
fine culture.
Should you take my application into consideration and give me a chance, I would be grateful.
Looking forward to your early reply.Wish all my best regards.
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封电子邮件申请成为从事美国马斯卡廷
中学生代表团招待工作的志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
职位：post→position
熟悉……：be familiar with→be acquainted with
总之：in all→in short
考虑：take into consideration→take into account
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：For one thing, with fluent oral English, I have no difficulty in communicating with foreign
visitors.拓展句：For one thing, since I can speak fluent oral English, I have no difficulty in communicating
with foreign visitors.
【点睛】[高分句型1] For another, not only am I familiar with the history and traditions of our
city, but also I have strong affection for them, which enables me to provide visitors with more
professional service. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和not only置于句首引起的部分
倒装)
[高分句型2] Should you take my application into consideration and give me a chance, I would be
grateful. (运用了虚拟语气的倒装)
Writing 06
（2024·黑龙江·二模）假定你是李华，正在英国某高中上学。从你校网站上获悉你校将举办
运动会并在招聘相关记者。你打算给相关人员发一封电子邮件应聘，内容包括：
1. 发邮件的原因；
2. 你的能力和特点；
3. 盼望得到肯定的答复。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to apply for the position of a journalist for the school sports meet.
I am passionate about sports and possess excellent writing and communication skills. As a
responsible and reliable individual, I can accurately report on sports events and capture thewonderful moments. I also have some experience in multitasking and working under pressure,
which will enable me to handle the job effectively. Please consider my application and I would be
delighted to discuss my qualifications further.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的应聘信。要求考生写一封电子邮件，向校网站
应聘在校运动会上担当记者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
拥有：possess→ be possessed of
处理：handle → deal with
考虑：consider → take…into consideration
高兴的：delighted→ happy/pleased
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to apply for the position of a journalist for the school sports meet.
拓展句：The reason for my writing is that I want to apply for the position of a journalist for the
school sports meet.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I also have some experience in multitasking and working under
pressure, which will enable me to handle the job effectively.（运用了which引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】 I am writing to apply for the position of a journalist for the school sports
meet.（运用了不定式作目的状语）
Writing 07
（2024·浙江宁波·二模）假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习。你对当地一个社区在网上发布的
志愿者招募信息十分感兴趣，于是给该社区写信，内容包括：
1.说明报名原因；
2.询问相关情况；
3.表达你的期待。
注意：
1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
Fascinated by your volunteer recruitment advertisement online, I’m writing to extend my
fervent anticipation to participate and enquire about some relevant information.
Yearning for blending into local society and extending my abilities to help others, I find this
work exactly caters to my expectations. I wonder if you could endow me with detailed
arrangements, thus guaranteeing appropriate preparations for the work in advance. Hopefully, I
could be given the golden opportunity to get involved in your program and enrich my experience.
I’m grateful for your attention and looking forward to your prompt reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习。你对当地一个社区
在网上发布的志愿者招募信息十分感兴趣，于是给该社区写信，内容包括：1.说明报名原
因；2.询问相关情况；3.表达你的期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
能力：ability→capability
准确地：exactly→accurately
预期：expectation→anticipation
提前：in advance→ahead of time
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Fascinated by your volunteer recruitment advertisement online, I’m writing to extend my
fervent anticipation to participate and enquire about some relevant information.
拓展句：Upon encountering your volunteer recruitment advertisement online, I am writing to
express my enthusiastic interest in participating and seek some pertinent details.【点睛】【高分句型1】Fascinated by your volunteer recruitment advertisement online, I’m
writing to extend my fervent anticipation to participate and enquire about some relevant
information. (运用了过去分词作状语)
【高分句型2】Yearning for blending into local society and extending my abilities to help others,
I find this work exactly caters to my expectations. (句首运用了现在分词作状语，find后面为省
略了that的宾语从句)
