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一模前专题练12 第一节写作之建议信
高考英语应用文书信体的写作,通常都是三段论(多数分为三段:首段、中段和尾段)。考生要想在未
来的高考考场上夺取高分,笔者认为考生要力求做到:首段要先声夺人;中段要充实饱满;尾段要锦上添
花。
如何进行“三段”的写作我们要结合具体的写作题展开。
——
一、首段:先声夺人
精准背景的切入(关切对方的需求)+鲜明态度的表达(传递自己的看法)+核心建议
的抛出(一句点击重点)。
(建议考生多多背诵建议信开头常用的套句)
二、中段:
——
充实饱满
具体建议+细节支撑+逻辑衔接+情感共鸣。
——
二、尾段:锦上添花
强化建议价值(呼应首段)+传递真挚情感(期待/祝福)+礼貌规范收尾(符合书信礼
仪)。
(建议考生多多背诵建议信结尾常用的套句)
1
(江西省九校2025-2026 学年高三上学期11 月期中考试)假定你是李华,你校的英语学习报要组织一项
活动以促进同学们口语表达能力的提高。英语报编辑提出英语歌曲比赛和英语演讲比赛两个选项供大家选
择。请给你校英语报写一封邮件。
内容包括:1. 你的提议;
2. 说明理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80 个左右;
2. 首句已经给出不计入词数。
Dear editor, 
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】
【导语】本篇属于应用文建议信的写作。要求考生以李华的身份给校英语报编辑写一封邮件,在英语歌曲
比赛和演讲比赛之间做出选择并提出理由。 
【拓展要点】
1. 你的提议
注意:在写“提议”前要交待写信的背景。
①我是一名高三学生。得知《英语学习报》正在开展一项提升同学们英语口语的活动,我强烈推荐举
办一场英语演讲比赛,我相信这对提升口语能力非常有帮助。
I am a Senior 3 student. Knowing that English Learning Newspaper is launching an activity to improve our 
oral English, I strongly recommend holding an English speech contest, which I believe would be very 
helpful. 
②作为高三学生,我了解到贵报正组织旨在提升英语口语的活动。在此,我强烈建议举办英语演讲比
赛,我坚信它能更有效地助力大家提升口语水平。
As a Senior 3 student, I’ve learned that your newspaper is organizing an activity aimed at improving spoken 
English. Here, I strongly recommend holding an English speech contest, which I firmly believe can more 
effectively help everyone enhance their oral English proficiency.
③作为高三学生,我了解到贵报正组织旨在提升英语口语的活动。在此,我建议在英语演讲比赛中增
设即兴演讲环节(impromptu speech segment)——给定话题准备3 分钟后演讲,这样能提升同学们的
临场(on-the-spot)口语表达技能。
As a Senior 3 student, I’ve learned that your newspaper is organizing an activity aimed at improving spoken 
English. Here, I suggest adding an impromptu speech segment to the English speech contest——preparing 
for 3 minutes after receiving the topic), which can improve students’ on-the-spot oral expression skills.
2. 说明理由
注意:需要有序叙述(至少两条理由)。
①首先,筹备演讲需要学生自主撰写演讲稿,这能有效锻炼独立思考能力与语言架构能力。
First of all, preparing for a speech requires students to write their own drafts, which fosters independent 
thinking and language organization skills. 
更重要的是,英语歌曲演唱更侧重旋律把握与歌词记忆,对自主观点的组织和表达能力提升作用有
限。
More importantly, singing focuses on melody and memorization, which does little to develop the ability to 
organize and express one’s own ideas.
因此,我坚信英语演讲比赛能更高效地提升同学们的英语口语能力。
Therefore, I am convinced that a speech contest would improve our spoken English more effectively. 
②一方面,准备演讲的过程要求学生自主构思(conceive)内容、组织语言,这能显著提升逻辑思维与提
高你的表达能力。
On the one hand, the process of preparing for a speech requires students to conceive content and organize 
language independently, which can significantly enhance logical thinking and strengthen your expression 
competence.
  而另一方面,唱歌主要依赖对旋律和歌词的熟悉度,学生无需主动组织观点,难以真正提升口语表
达的核心能力。
However, on the other hand, singing mainly relies on familiarity with melody and lyrics, and students do 
not need to actively organize ideas, making it difficult to truly improve the core skills of oral expression.
所以,英语演讲比赛是提升口语能力的更优选择。
Therefore, an English speech contest is a better choice for improving oral English skills.
3. 必不可少的结尾套句
①若你能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。期待你的早日回复。
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to your early 
reply.
②若你能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。期待尽快收到你的回复。
I would be extremely grateful if you could consider my suggestions. Looking forward to hearing from you 
soon.
③我真诚地希望我的建议能对你大有帮助。若你有任何进一步的问题,欢迎随时联系我。
I sincerely hope my suggestions will be of great help to you. Please feel free to contact me if you have any 
further questions.
④若你能考虑我的提议,我将非常感激。我迫切期待尽快收到你的反馈。
【答案】
Dear editor,
I am a Senior 3 student. Knowing that English Learning Newspaper is launching an activity to improve our 
oral English, I strongly recommend holding an English speech contest, which I believe would be very helpful. 
First of all, preparing for a speech requires students to write their own drafts, which fosters independent 
thinking and language organization skills. More importantly, singing focuses on melody and memorization, which 
does little to develop the ability to organize and express one’s own ideas. Therefore, I am convinced that a speech 
contest would improve our spoken English more effectively. 
 I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to your early 
reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【词汇积累】
提升,提高:improve→enhance→promote→boost
口语:oral English→spoken English
建议:recommend→suggest→make a proposal→put forward a proposal
有帮助的:helpful→beneficial
旨在,目的是:aim at→be intended to→be designed to
话题:topic→theme→subject→issue
表达能力:oral expression skills→expression competence→communicative ability
筹备,准备:prepare for→make preparations for→get ready for
撰写,起草:write drafts→compose scripts→draft speeches
锻炼,培养:foster→cultivate→develop
独立思考:independent thinking→self-directed thinking
语言架构:language organization→language structuring
依赖,依靠:rely on→depend on→count on→be based on
更有效的:more effective→more efficient
逻辑思维:logical thinking→logical reasoning→critical thinking
把……考虑:take...into consideration→take...into account
反馈:feedback→response→comment→reply
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(2026 届广东省广州市天河区高三一模)假如你是李华。为了提升同学们的英语口语,外教Mr. Smith 打
算组织一次英语戏剧表演比赛,现征集同学们的意见。请你给他写封邮件,表达你的看法和建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】
【导语】本篇属于应用文建议信的写作。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith 写封邮件,表达你对英语戏剧表演比
赛的看法和建议。
【拓展要点】
1. 你的看法
①感谢你组织英语戏剧比赛以提升我们的英语口语水平。我认为这是个很棒的主意,因为它提供了一
个真实的交流场景,让我们能够练习自信且流利地表达。 
Thank you for organizing the English drama competition to improve our spoken English. I think 
it’s a great idea, as it offers a real communication situation to practice speaking confidently and 
fluently.
②非常感谢你策划这场英语戏剧比赛,这是个很棒的想法!它能让我们在模拟真实的情境中大胆开
口,有效提升口语的流利度和表达自信,对口语学习帮助极大。
Many thanks for planning this English drama competition—it’s a wonderful plan! It allows us to speak 
boldly in simulated real-life situations, effectively enhancing our oral fluency and expressive confidence, 
which is highly beneficial for spoken English learning.
③我真心觉得这场戏剧比赛是提升口语的绝佳方式!除了锻炼表达,它还能让我们在角色扮演中自然
运用地道的(authentic)句型和词汇,同时培养肢体语言与口语的配合能力,让表达更生动。
I sincerely believe this drama competition is a fantastic way to improve spoken English! Besides practicing 
expression, it enables us to naturally use authentic sentence patterns and vocabulary in role-playing, while 
developing the ability to coordinate body language with speech, making expression more vivid.
④感谢你搭建这个英语戏剧平台,我认为它不仅能帮我们克服开口恐惧、提升口语流畅度,还能通过
团队合作加深对英语文化的理解,让口语学习更具趣味性和实用性。
Thank you for building this English drama platform. I think it can not only help us overcome the fear of 
speaking and improve oral fluency, but also deepen our understanding of English culture through teamwork, 
making spoken English learning more interesting and practical.
2. 你的提议
注意:需要有序叙述(至少两条提议)。
①为了使得比赛更有效、更具包容性,我建议提供一系列难度各异的短剧剧本——比如给初学者准备
简单对话类的剧本,给水平高的学习者准备情节驱动型剧本。
To make it more effective and inclusive, I suggest offering a variety of short scripts at different difficulty 
levels—like simple dialogues for beginners and plot-driven ones for advanced learners. 
其次,允许我们以3-4 人小组形式表演,能减轻紧张感,鼓励更多学生参与。
Secondly, allowing us to perform in small groups might reduce nervousness and encourage more students to 
join.
最后,设置小奖品奖励创意、团队协作或出色表现,能极大激励我们的积极性。
Lastly, offering small prizes for creativity, teamwork, or outstanding performance can greatly motivate us.
②为优化(optimize)比赛效果,我提议准备多种不同难度的短剧脚本:基础版适合口语入门的同学,包
含常用句型;进阶版适合有一定基础的同学,增加复杂情节和表达。
To optimize the effect of the competition, I propose preparing various short drama scripts of different 
difficulty levels: basic versions for beginners with common sentence patterns, and advanced versions for 
students with some foundation, featuring more complex plots and expressions. 
此外,支持小组合作表演能降低个人压力,吸引更多人参与。
In addition, supporting group performances can reduce personal pressure and attract more participants.
同时,为创意编排或默契团队设置小奖励,能提升大家的参与热情。
Meanwhile, setting small rewards for creative performance design or united teams can boost everyone’s 
enthusiasm.
③为避免表演超时或紧张忘词,建议限定单组表演时长在5-8 分钟。
To avoid overlong performances or forgetting lines due to nervousness, I suggest limiting each group’s 
performance time to 5-8 minutes; 
同时,提供基础道具(props),降低我们的准备难度。
Meanwhile, providing basic props can reduce the difficulty of our preparation. 
此外,可设置“最佳口语表达奖”,专门奖励发音标准、表达流畅的同学,这能激励所有同学重视
口语核心能力并稳步提升。
Furthermore, setting a “Most Outstanding Oral Expression Award” to specifically reward students with 
standard pronunciation and fluent expression can encourage all classmates to focus on core oral skills and 
make steady progress.
3. 必不可少的结尾套句
①我相信这些调整会让这次活动既有趣又有益。期待这场精彩的比赛!
I believe these adjustments will make the event both fun and beneficial. Looking forward to the wonderful 
competition!
②我相信,您的精心组织加上这些小建议,会让这次比赛成为大家的美好体验。期待能在舞台上展现
自己的才华!
I’m convinced that your careful organization and these small suggestions will make the competition a 
wonderful experience for everyone. Looking forward to showing my talent on stage!
③感谢您为我们提供如此好的提升英语口语的机会。我相信有了这些实用建议,这次比赛一定会大获
成功!
Thank you for offering us such a great chance to improve our spoken English. I’m sure the competition will 
be a big hit with these practical tips.
④希望我的建议能有所帮助。愿这次英语戏剧比赛让我们所有人都收获快乐与成长!
I hope my suggestions are helpful. May the English drama competition be full of joy and harvest for all of 
us!
⑤有了这些调整,我相信比赛不仅会很有趣,还能帮助我们更自信地说英语。再次感谢您的辛勤付
出!
With these adjustments, I believe the competition will not only be fun but also help us speak English more 
confidently. Thanks again for your hard work!
⑥期待这场精彩的英语戏剧表演。祝比赛圆满成功,所有参赛者都能有出色的表现!
I’m looking forward to the exciting English drama show. Wish the competition a complete success and all 
participants a great performance!
⑦以上这些只是我的个人想法。我相信在您的指导下,这次比赛会成为每个学生难忘的经历!
These suggestions above are just my personal ideas. I’m sure that under your guidance, the competition 
will be an unforgettable event for every student.
【答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
Thank you for organizing the English drama competition to improve our spoken English. I think it’s a great 
idea, as it offers a real communication situation to practice speaking confidently and fluently.
To make it more effective and inclusive, I suggest offering a variety of short scripts at different difficulty 
levels—like simple dialogues for beginners and plot-driven ones for advanced learners. Secondly, allowing us to 
perform in small groups might reduce nervousness and encourage more students to join. Lastly, offering small 
prizes for creativity, teamwork, or outstanding performance can greatly motivate us.
I believe these adjustments will make the event both fun and beneficial. Looking forward to the wonderful 
competition!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【词汇积累】
认为:think→believe→be convinced that
提供:offer→provide→supply
交流场景:communication situation→interaction context
搭建:build→establish→set up
绝佳方式:fantastic ways→excellent methods→perfect approaches
培养:develop→foster→cultivate
配合:coordinate→match→cooperate with
生动:vivid→lively
克服:overcome→get over
团队合作:teamwork→group cooperation
加深理解:deepen understanding→enhance/strengthen comprehension
趣味性:interesting→amusing→entertaining
实用性:practical→functional
有效的:effective→efficient→fruitful
难度各异:different difficulty levels→various difficulty grades
情节驱动型:plot-driven→storyline-driven
表演:perform→put on a performance
减轻:reduce→lessen
紧张感:nervousness→anxiety→tension
鼓励/激励:encourage→motivate→inspire→stimulate
小奖品:small prizes→mini awards→small rewards
出色表现:outstanding performance→excellent performance→remarkable show
优化:optimize→improve→enhance
常用句型:common sentence patterns→frequently used sentence structures
进阶版:advanced versions→higher-level editions→intermediate-advanced versions
复杂情节:complex plots→complicated plots
压力:pressure→stress→burden
吸引:attract →appeal to
默契团队:united teams→harmonious teams
提升热情:boost enthusiasm→enhance passion→arouse enthusiasm
基础道具:basic→fundamental
重视核心能力:focus on core skills→pay attention to core competencies→emphasize key skills
稳步提升:make steady progress→make gradual progress→advance steadily
精彩的:wonderful→exciting→splendid
展现才华:show one’s talent→display one’s talent
机会:chance→opportunity→occasion
实用建议:practical tips→useful suggestions→practical advice
大获成功:a big hit→a great success→a huge triumph
个人想法:personal ideas→personal opinions→my own thoughts
指导:guidance→direction→instruction
难忘的经历:unforgettable event→memorable experience→unforgettable experience
3
(云南省部分学校2025-2026 学年高三上学期11 月联考)假定你是李华,你校将举办首届“英语配音大
赛(English Dubbing Competition)”活动,现面向全体学生征集活动方案相关建议。请你给校学生会的负责
人Mike 写一封建议信。
内容包括:1. 你的建议;
2. 你的理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】
【导语】本篇属于应用文建议信的写作。要求考生以学生李华的身份给校学生会负责人Mike 写一封建议
信,针对学校首届“英语配音大赛”活动征集方案相关建议这一事件,提出自己的建议并阐述理
由。
【拓展要点】
1. 写信背景
①得知我校将举办首届英语配音比赛,我感到十分兴奋,想分享一些建议。
I am excited to hear that our school will hold the first English Dubbing Competition and would like to share 
some suggestions.
②得知我校首届英语配音比赛即将举办,我很激动,想分享一些建议。
Thrilled to know our school’s first English Dubbing Competition is coming, I’d like to share some 
suggestions.
③很高兴得知首届英语配音比赛,这对口语很有帮助。我有几点小建议。
Glad to learn about the first English Dubbing Competition—it’s great for oral English. I have some small 
suggestions.
④作为英语爱好者,我对配音比赛很期待,想分享一些想法。
As an English lover, I’m looking forward to the dubbing competition and want to share some ideas.
⑤很高兴得知我校将办首届英语配音比赛,我想给出一些实用建议。
Happy to hear our school will hold the first English Dubbing Competition. I’d like to give some practical 
suggestions.
2. 你的建议及理由
注意:需要有序叙述(至少两条建议并附理由)。
①首先,可选取丰富多样的素材,不仅包括热门电影,还涵盖教育纪录片、经典动画,甚至著名演讲
的短视频片段。这能满足不同学生的兴趣,让他们在练习英语的同时拓宽知识面。
For starters, select a wide range of materials, including not only popular movies but also educational 
documentaries, classic cartoons, and even short clips from famous speeches. This caters to different interests 
and broadens students’ knowledge while they practice English. 
此外,可设置团队形式的比赛,这能促进同学间的协作,让大家在发音、语调及情感表达方面取长
补短,让活动更具吸引力。
Moreover, set up team-based competitions. They promote teamwork and allow students to learn from each 
other’s strengths in pronunciation, intonation, and emotional expression, making the event more engaging.
②首先,将片段时长限制在1-3 分钟,节省学生准备时间并减轻压力。
To begin with, limit clip length to 1-3 minutes, saving students’ preparation time and reduces pressure. 
其次,让2-3 人组队,可帮助他们在发音和表达上互相学习。
Secondly, let students form teams of 2-3, which can help them learn from each other in pronunciation 
and expression.
此外,增设现场投票,让活动更具互动性并活跃氛围。
What’s more, add on-site voting, which makes the event more interactive and boosts the atmosphere.
③首先,提供电影、动画等推荐片段清单,帮助选择困难的学生。
To begin with, provide a list of recommended clips like movies and animations. It helps students who feel 
confused about choosing. 
其次,邀请英语老师做简短点评,给出实用改进建议。
Secondly, invite English teachers to give short comments. They can offer practical suggestions for 
improvement. 
此外,允许使用简单道具,让表演更生动且更易传递情感。
What’s more, allow simple props. It makes performances more vivid and helps express emotions better.
④首先,按年级分组,适配学生不同英语水平,让比赛更公平。
To begin with, set groups based on grades. It fits students’ different English levels and makes competition 
fairer. 
其次,增设观众喝彩环节,增强表演者信心并烘托现场。
Secondly, add audience cheering sessions. It enhances performers’ confidence and warms up the scene.
此外,使用优质麦克风,保证音质清晰,助力学生展现真实配音水平。
What’s more, use high-quality microphones. It ensures clear sound and helps students show their real 
dubbing skills.
3. 必不可少的结尾套句
①我希望这些建议能让这次比赛对参赛同学而言既更有益又更有趣。
I hope these ideas can make the contest more beneficial and fun for participants.
②我真诚希望我的建议能有所帮助,也祝愿首届英语配音大赛圆满成功。
I sincerely hope my suggestions will be useful, and may the first English Dubbing Competition be a great 
success.
③我相信这些建议能为比赛增添更多价值与乐趣。期待见证一场充满激情与创意的精彩活动!
I’m convinced these ideas can add more value and fun to the contest. Looking forward to witnessing a 
wonderful event full of passion and creativity!
④愿这次比赛不仅能提升同学们的英语能力,还能为他们带来美好的回忆。感谢你考虑我的建议!
May the competition not only improve students’ English skills but also bring them joyful memories. Thank 
you for taking my suggestions into consideration!
⑤我希望这些提议能让比赛更有意义、更具吸引力。祝愿英语配音大赛取得圆满成功,所有参赛同学
都能收获满满!
I hope these proposals can make the contest more meaningful and appealing. Wish the English Dubbing 
Competition a brilliant success and all participants gain a lot!
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I am excited to hear that our school will hold the first English Dubbing Competition and would like to share 
some suggestions.
For starters, select a wide range of materials, including not only popular movies but also educational 
documentaries, classic cartoons, and even short clips from famous speeches. This caters to different interests and 
broadens students’ knowledge while they practice English. Moreover, set up team-based competitions. They 
promote teamwork and allow students to learn from each other’s strengths in pronunciation, intonation, and 
emotional expression, making the event more engaging.
I hope these ideas can make the contest more beneficial and fun for participants.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【词汇积累】
兴奋的:excited→thrilled→glad→happy
英语爱好者:English lover→English enthusiast→English fan
选取:select→choose→pick
丰富多样的:a wide range of→diverse→various
素材:materials→clips→resources
热门电影:popular movies→hit movies→popular films
满足:cater to→meet→satisfy
兴趣:interests→hobbies→preferences
拓宽知识面:broaden knowledge→expand horizons→widen one’s knowledge
取长补短:learn from each other’s strengths→draw on each other’s advantages
情感表达:emotional expression→expression of emotions→affective communication
更具吸引力:more engaging→more appealing→more attractive
减轻压力:reduce pressure→lessen burden
简短点评:give short comments→offer brief remarks
改进的建议:suggestions for improvement→advice for improvement→tips for progress
传递情感:express emotions→convey feelings
按年级分组:set groups based on grades→divide into grade-based groups
充满激情与创意:full of passion and creativity→filled with passion and originality/enthusiasm and 
innovation
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(北京市朝阳区2025-2026 学年高三上学期期中质量检测)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好
友Jim 的学校正在组织“校园文化建设”(Shaping School Culture)的创意征集活动。Jim 打算参加,为此发
来邮件,就创意内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复。 
内容包括:1. 你的建议;
2. 说明理由。
注意:1. 词数100 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
【导语】本篇属于应用文建议信的写作。要求考生给Jim 回信,告诉他一些关于校园文化建设的建议。
【拓展要点】
1. 写信背景
①很高兴得知贵校正在举办“塑造校园文化”主题活动,且你正在征求我的意见。我很乐意与你分享
我的建议。
I’m glad to know your school is organizing an activity on “Shaping School Culture” and you’re seeking my 
advice. I’d like to share my advice with you.
②得知你校正在发起“塑造校园文化”的创意征集活动,且你打算参与其中,我感到无比兴奋。我很
乐意给你提供一些实用的建议。
I’m absolutely thrilled to hear that your school is launching a creative idea collection for “Shaping School 
Culture” and that you’re planning to participate. It’s my pleasure to offer you some practical suggestions.
③收到你的邮件,得知你在为贵校“塑造校园文化”活动的创意内容征求建议,我非常乐意与你分享
我的想法。
Having received your email asking for advice on creative ideas for your school’s “Shaping School Culture” 
activity, I’m more than happy to share my thoughts with you.
④得知你校高度重视“塑造校园文化”,且正在征集创意方案,真是倍儿棒。作为你的朋友,我很乐
意为你的参与提供一些建议。
It’s wonderful to learn that your school attaches great importance to “Shaping School Culture” and is calling 
for creative ideas. As your friend, I’d be glad to contribute some suggestions to your participation.
2. 你的建议+理由
①首先,我的建议是设立“图书交换角”,学生们可以在这里分享并互换自己喜爱的书籍。这不仅能
促进阅读风气的形成,还能推动文化交流——因为不同背景的书籍会带来多元视角,进而丰富校园
文化内涵。
To begin with, my suggestion is to launch a “Book Exchange Corner”, where students can share and trade 
their favorite books. This not only promotes reading but also encourages cultural exchanges as books from 
different backgrounds can introduce diverse perspectives, which can enrich our campus culture.  
此外,定期组织“文化分享会”也将会大有助益:邀请学生或老师分享各自的文化体验,这类活动
能加深我们对各类文化的理解,同时营造更具包容性的校园环境。
Additionally, organizing regular “Cultural Talks” by inviting students or teachers to share their cultural 
experiences would be beneficial. Such talks can deepen our understanding of various cultures and foster a 
more inclusive school environment. 
②首先,我建议设立 “校园多元文化角”,用以展示来自各国的传统服饰、手工艺品等。这有助于
大家尊重文化差异。
Firstly, I suggest setting up a “Campus Multicultural Corner” to display traditional costumes, handcrafts, 
etc., from various countries. this helps everyone respect cultural differences.
此外,你们最好每月举办 1-2 场文化分享会,让学生们分享各类习俗或节日相关的故事。进而丰富
校园生活,提供一个提升沟通能力的平台。
Besides, you’d better hold 1-2 monthly cultural sharing sessions for students to share customs or festival 
stories, which can enrich campus life and offer a platform to enhance communication skills. 
③首先,我建议建立“文化墙”,让学生们张贴带有简短背景说明的习俗画作。它能清晰展现多种文
化,还能激发大家对不同传统的好奇。
To begin with, I suggest building a “Cultural Wall” where students post drawings of their customs with 
short background notes. It clearly shows various cultures and sparks curiosity about different traditions. 
此外,每月举办“传统美食日”——学生们带来自制美食并分享背后的故事,助力大家更好地了解
文化、增进情谊。
What’s more, hold monthly “Traditional Food Days”—students bring homemade dishes and share their 
stories, helping everyone understand cultures better and strengthen bonds. 
最后但同样重要的是,组织“手工艺品交换活动”,学生们互换具有文化特色的手作,既能培养创
造力,也加深他们的友谊。
Last but not least, organize a “Handicraft Exchange” where students trade handmade cultural works, which 
can cultivate creativity and strengthen their friendship.
④首先,我建议发起“校园文化徽章(Campus Culture Badge)”设计活动。学生们的作品能体现校园精
神,我们还可以投票选出最受欢迎的徽章以提高参与度。
First of all, I advise launching a “Campus Culture Badge” design activity. Students’ works can reflect school 
spirit, and we can vote for the most popular one to raise participation. 
另外,每月举办“文化故事会”,邀请师生分享亲身经历,让校园生活更有意义,同时促进相互理
解。
In addition, hold monthly “Cultural Story Sessions” where teachers and students share personal experiences, 
making campus life meaningful and promoting understanding. 
最后但同样重要的是,安排“多元文化电影展(Multicultural Film Screenings)”——观看来自不同国
家的短片既能获得直接的文化体验,也能拓宽视野。
Last but not least, arrange “Multicultural Film Screenings”—watching short films from different countries 
offers a direct cultural experience and broadens horizons.
3. 必不可少的结尾套句
①希望这些想法能对你有所帮助。同时,我相信你的创意方案定会脱颖而出——祝你取得巨大成功!
I hope these ideas are helpful to you. Meanwhile, I’m sure your creative idea will stand out—wish you a 
great success!
②愿你的方案在活动中表现出色,如需更多支持,我随时都在!
Hope your entry performs well in the activity, and I’m here if you need more support!
③你的创意定会令人印象深刻。祝你好运!若你还有其他疑问,尽管向我咨询!
Your creative idea is sure to be impressive—wish you good luck! Don’t hesitate to ask me for advice if 
you have any other doubts.
【答案】
Dear Jim, 
I’m glad to know your school is organizing an activity on “Shaping School Culture” and you’re seeking my 
advice. I’d like to share my advice with you.
To begin with, my suggestion is to launch a “Book Exchange Corner”, where students can share and trade 
their favorite books. This not only promotes reading but also encourages cultural exchanges as books from different 
backgrounds can introduce diverse perspectives, which can enrich our campus culture.  Additionally, organizing 
regular “Cultural Talks” by inviting students or teachers to share their cultural experiences would be beneficial. 
Such talks can deepen our understanding of various cultures and foster a more inclusive school environment.  
I hope these ideas are helpful to you. Meanwhile, I’m sure your creative idea will stand out—wish you a 
great success!
Yours, 
Li Hua
【词汇积累】
塑造校园文化:Shaping School Culture→Building Campus Culture→Fostering School Culture
参与:participate→take part in→join in→engage in
高度重视:attach great importance to→pay much attention to
创意方案:creative ideas→creative proposals→innovative plans→original schemes
设立:launch→set up→establish→found
推动:encourage→promote→facilitate→boost
文
化
交流
:
cultural exchanges→cultural communication→cultural interaction→cross-cultural 
communication
不同背景:different backgrounds→diverse backgrounds→various backgrounds→mixed backgrounds
多元视角:diverse perspectives→multiple viewpoints→various outlooks→different standpoints
营造:foster→create→build→establish
包容性的校园环境/氛围:inclusive school environment→inclusive campus atmosphere
尊重文化差异:respect cultural differences→value cultural diversity
节日相关的故事:festival stories→festival-related stories→tales about festivals
提升沟通能力:enhance communication skills→improve communication abilities→boost communicative 
competence→strengthen communication skills
张贴:post→put up→display
简短背景说明:short background notes→brief background explanations
激发好奇:sparks curiosity→arouses interest→stimulates curiosity
自制美食:homemade dishes→home-cooked food→self-made meals→homemade cuisine
增进情谊:strengthen bonds→enhance friendships→deepen relationships
短片:short films→short movies→film clips→brief films
拓宽视野:broadens horizons→widens perspectives→expands one’s outlook→broadens one’s vision
咨询:ask(sb.)for advice→consult sb.→turn to sb. for advice
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(吉林省吉林市2025-2026 学年高三上学期第一次调研)假定你是李华,你的英国好友Chris 所在学校的
“Music Club”和“Sports Club”正在招募(recruit)新成员,他想选择其中一个参加,请你给些建议,给他写
一封邮件。
内容包括:1. 你的建议;
2. 说明理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
【导语】本篇属于应用文建议信的写作。要求考生就英国好友Chris 所在学校的“Music Club”和“Sports 
Club”招募新成员一事,给他提供参加哪一个俱乐部的建议并说明理由。
【拓展要点】
1. 写信背景
①得知你们学校的音乐俱乐部和体育俱乐部正在招募新成员,我非常高兴。
I’m glad to hear that your school’s “Music Club” and “Sports Club” are recruiting new members.
②得知你们学校的“音乐俱乐部”和“体育俱乐部”正在招募新成员,我感到非常高兴,因为两个俱
乐部都是丰富校园生活的非常好短得方式。
I’m glad to learn that your school’s “Music Club” and “Sports Club” are recruiting new members, for 
both are very good ways to enrich campus life. 
③得知你们学校的 “音乐俱乐部”和“体育俱乐部”正在招募新成员,我感到十分兴奋。我知道你
既热爱音乐又喜欢运动,所以完全理解你为何难以抉择。
I was excited to hear that your school’s “Music Club” and “Sports Club” are recruiting new members. 
Knowing you have a passion for both music and sports, I can totally understand why you find it hard to 
decide.
④收到你的邮件,信中说你正纠结于要不要加入“音乐俱乐部”和“体育俱乐部”——这两个俱乐部
目前正在招募新成员,我很乐意给你提供一些建议。
Having received your email saying you’re struggling to choose between joining the “Music Club” and the 
“Sports Club” (which are now recruiting new members), I’m happy to offer you some advice.
2. 你的建议+理由
建议:
①在对比了两个选项后,我建议你毫不犹豫地加入音乐俱乐部/体育俱乐部。
Having compared both options, I would recommend you join the Music Club/the Sports Club without 
hesitation.
②其它表达句
After comparing the two options, I suggest your joining the Music Club/the Sports Club without 
hesitation.
Having compared both choices, I advise you to join the Music Club/the Sports Club without any hesitation. 
After weighing the pros and cons of both options, I suggest that you join the Music Club/the Sports Club 
without a second thought. 
与“加入音乐俱乐部”相匹配的理由:
①让音乐俱乐部成为理想选择的是其诸多益处。
What makes the Music Club an ideal choice is its wide range of benefits. 
首先,音乐作为一生的伴侣,不仅能丰富你的精神世界,还能有效缓解压力——这在学业紧张的时
期尤为珍贵。
First, music, functioning as a lifelong companion, not only enriches your mind but also effectively reduces 
stress, which is invaluable during intense school periods.
其次,积极参与团体表演能让你培养合作能力,缔结长久的友谊。
 Second, actively participating in group performances will allow you to develop cooperation skills and build 
lasting friendships. 
此外,探索各类音乐还能加深你对世界各地文化的鉴赏力。
Moreover, exploring diverse types of music can deepen your appreciation for cultures worldwide.
②让音乐俱乐部成为理想选择的是其对实用技能的重视。
What makes the Music Club an ideal choice is its focus on practical skills.
首先,系统学习乐器演奏或歌唱能培养你的专注力和耐心——这对学业进步至关重要。
First, learning to play an instrument or sing systematically trains your concentration and patience, which are 
crucial for academic progress. 
其次,俱乐部定期举办的演奏会为你提供展示才华的舞台,大幅提升自信心。
Second, the club’s regular concerts offer a stage to showcase your talents, boosting your self-confidence 
significantly. 
此外,与同伴合作编排音乐还能激发创造力,增强解决问题的能力。
Moreover, collaborating with peers on music arrangements can spark creativity and enhance your 
problem-solving abilities.
③让音乐俱乐部成为理想选择的是其浓厚的社交与文化价值。
What makes the Music Club an ideal choice is its strong social and cultural value. 
首先,与志同道合的音乐爱好者交流能拓展你的社交圈,找到志趣相投的朋友。
First, interacting with fellow music lovers helps you expand your social circle and find like-minded friends.
其次,俱乐部常邀请音乐老师或专业人士开展讲座,为你提供专业指导和全新见解。
Second, the club often invites music teachers or professionals to give lectures, providing you with 
professional guidance and new insights. 
此外,探索不同时代、不同地区的音乐还能拓宽文化视野,加深国际视野。
Moreover, exploring music from different eras and regions can broaden your cultural horizons and deepen 
your global awareness.
与“加入体育俱乐部”相匹配的理由:
我的建议是基于几点好处。
My suggestion is based on several benefits. 
①首先定期参与体育锻炼无疑会帮助你保持健康,同时也是宣泄学业压力的有效渠道。
First of all, engaging in regular physical activity will undoubtedly help you maintain fitness and serve as 
an effective outlet for academic stress. 
②此外,团队运动能为你提供培养合作能力、缔结长久友谊的绝佳机会。
Moreover, team sports provide excellent opportunities to develop cooperation skills and build lasting 
friendships. 
③最后但同样重要的是体育运动中所需的自律,往往也会转化为更专注的学习状态。
Last but not least, the discipline required in sports often translates into better focus in studies too.
我的建议是基于几点好处。
My suggestion is founded on several advantages.
①首先,体育俱乐部提供专业的指导和系统训练,能帮助你科学提升运动技能,避免盲目锻炼带来的
伤害。
First of all, sports clubs offer professional guidance and systematic training, which can help you improve 
your sports skills scientifically and avoid injuries caused by blind exercise.
②此外,俱乐部定期组织的赛事活动,能为你提供展示自我的平台,增强自信心和竞争意识。
Moreover, the regular competitions and events organized by the club provide you with a platform to show 
yourself, enhancing your self-confidence and competitive awareness.
③最后但同样重要的是,与志同道合的伙伴一起训练,能激发你的运动热情,让坚持锻炼成为一种习
惯。
Last but not least, training with like-minded partners can stimulate your passion for sports and make 
persistent exercise a habit. 
我的建议是基于几点好处。
I propose these ideas based on a few obvious benefits.
①首先,加入体育俱乐部能让你接触到更多样的运动项目,拓宽你的运动视野,发现新的兴趣所在。
First of all, joining a sports club allows you to be exposed to a wider variety of sports, broadening your 
sports horizons and discovering new interests.
②此外,俱乐部的集体训练氛围能培养你的规则意识和团队归属感,让你更快融入集体生活。
Moreover, the collective training atmosphere of the club can cultivate your sense of rules and team 
belonging, enabling you to integrate into collective life more quickly.
③最后但同样重要的是,规律的俱乐部活动能帮助你合理规划课余时间,避免沉迷电子产品。
  Last but not least, regular club activities can help you arrange your after-school time reasonably and avoid 
indulging in electronic products. 
我的建议是基于几点好处。
These are my suggestions, which are rooted in several benefits.
①首先,体育俱乐部的专业教练会根据你的身体状况制定个性化训练计划,帮助你高效达成健身目
标(如增强体质、减脂塑形等)。
First of all, the professional coaches in the sports club will formulate personalized training plans 
according to your physical condition, helping you achieve fitness goals efficiently (such as enhancing 
physical fitness, losing weight and shaping your body, etc.).
②此外,参与俱乐部的交流活动,能让你结识不同年级、不同班级的同学,拓展社交圈,积累宝贵
的人脉资源。
Moreover, participating in the exchange activities of the club allows you to meet students from different 
grades and classes, expand your social circle and accumulate valuable interpersonal resources.
③最后但同样重要的是,运动带来的多巴胺分泌能有效改善情绪,帮助你以更积极的心态面对学业
和生活中的挑战。
  Last but not least, the dopamine secretion brought by sports can effectively improve your mood, helping 
you face the challenges in studies and life with a more positive attitude.
3. 必不可少的结尾套句
①我坚信,加入音乐俱乐部将是一个既能为你带来深厚喜悦,又能助你实现持续个人成长的决定。 
I am confident that joining the Music Club will be a decision bringing you both profound joy and 
continuous personal growth.
我坚信,体育俱乐部会为你带来乐趣与宝贵的生活技能。
I’m confident that the Sports Club would bring you both fun and valuable life skills.
②我坚信,加入音乐俱乐部不仅会大幅提升你的演奏技巧,还能让你结识志同道合的音乐爱好者。
I am confident that joining the Music Club will not only greatly improve your musical 
performance skills but also allow you to meet like-minded music lovers.
我毫不怀疑,加入体育俱乐部将让你在竞技中增强体质,在协作中培养团队精神,助力你实现身心
健康的全面发展。
I have no doubt that joining the Sports Club will enable you to strengthen your physical fitness in 
competitions and foster teamwork spirit through cooperation, contributing to your all-round physical 
and mental health development.
③我确信,成为音乐俱乐部的一员会充分培养你的乐感与节奏感,同时缓解学业压力,为你的青春岁
月注入温暖与力量。
I am convinced that being a member of the Music Club will fully cultivate your sense of music 
and rhythm, while relieving your academic pressure, infusing your youth with warmth and strength.
④我坚信,成为体育俱乐部的一员不仅会提升你的运动技能,还能磨练你的意志品质,为你的校园生
活增添活力与激情。
I am confident that being a member of the Sports Club will not only enhance your sports skills 
but also temper your willpower, adding vitality and passion to your campus life.
【答案】1
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to hear that your school’s “Music Club” and “Sports Club” are recruiting new members. Having 
compared both options, I would recommend you join the Music Club without hesitation.
What makes the Music Club an ideal choice is its wide range of benefits. First, music, functioning as a lifelong 
companion, not only enriches your mind but also effectively reduces stress, which is invaluable during intense 
school periods. Second, actively participating in group performances will allow you to develop cooperation skills 
and build lasting friendships. Moreover, exploring diverse types of music can deepen your appreciation for cultures 
worldwide.
I am confident that joining the Music Club will be a decision bringing you both profound joy and continuous 
personal growth.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】2
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to hear that your school’s “Music Club” and “Sports Club” are recruiting new members. Having 
compared both options, I would recommend you join the Sports Club without hesitation.
My suggestion is based on several benefits. first of all, engaging in regular physical activity will 
undoubtedly help you maintain fitness and serve as an effective outlet for academic stress. Moreover, team sports 
provide excellent opportunities to develop cooperation skills and build lasting friendships. Last but not least, the 
discipline required in sports often translates into better focus in studies too.
I’m confident that the Sports Club would bring you both fun and valuable life skills.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【词汇积累】
难以抉择:find it hard to decide→struggle to make a choice/struggle to choose
对比选项:compare options→contrast choices→weigh options→evaluate alternatives
权衡利弊:weigh the pros and cons→assess advantages and disadvantages→balance pros and cons
乐器演奏:play an instrument→perform on an instrument
团体表演:group performances→team performances
音乐编排:music arrangements→music composition
音乐鉴赏力:appreciation for music→musical appreciation→taste for music
节奏感:rhythm→sense of rhythm→rhythmic awareness
专业指导:professional guidance→expert advice→specialized instruction
体育锻炼:physical activity→physical exercise→sports training→workout
运动技能:sports skills→athletic skills→sports abilities
系统/专业/专门训练:systematic training→professional training→specialized practice
个性化训练计划:personalized training plans→tailored workout plans
增强体质:enhance physical fitness→strengthen physical health
规则意识:sense of rules→awareness of rules→rule consciousness
团队归属感:team belonging→sense of team belonging→team identity
自律:discipline→self-discipline→self-control
缓解压力:reduce stress→relieve pressure
创造力:creativity→innovative thinking→creative ability
个人成长:personal growth→self-development→individual progress