2022 高考续写-各模卷【教师版】
【2022 师大附中高三模2】
Only Love Lasts Forever
Yesterday after telling my brother, Rhys, and me to stop playing like wild animals in the
house for what she said was the thousandth time, Mom went to take a bath. That’s when it
happened. We were playing around, bopping each other with pillows, when one slipped from my
brother’s grasp and smashed the glass dome (圆顶) on the coffee table, shattering it into a zillion
pieces!
With her supersonic hearing, my mom heard the big crash and then the sound of glass hitting
the floor. Wasting no time, she came flying into the room to find out what had happened. I was
sure my brother and I were dead meat and she was going to start yelling at us, but instead she just
knelt by the pieces and began to cry.
This made Rhys and me feel pretty awful----We went over and put our arms around her, and
she explained to us why she was so upset. Under the shattered glass dome was a white porcelain
(瓷的) rose. Dad had given it to her on their first wedding anniversary. He had said that if he ever
forgot to bring flowers for an anniversary in the future, Mom was to look at that one. It was like
their love—it would last a lifetime.
Now it lay chipped on the floor one petal (花瓣) gone. We began crying too and offered to
glue it for her. She said that wouldn’t really fix it. Now that it had been broken, the value of the
“limited edition” had lessened. We got our piggy banks out to pay for it, but Mom replied that to
her the rose represented Dad’s love and could never truly be restored.
As Mom slowly began to pick up the mess, we tried everything we could think of to cheer
her up, but even our best funny faces didn’t work. Mom just looked away. The tears kept coming
down her cheeks.
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After everything was picked up and Mom was on her way back to the bath, I stopped her.
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Mom hugged me very tightly then and finally smiled.
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【答案】参考范文
After everything was picked up and Mom was on her way back to the bath, I stopped her. I
whispered to her that I had something important to tell her. She tried to go around me, replying
“Not now.” but I wouldn’t let her by. I told her, “I want to say something very important; it’s a rule
of God.” I put both hands on her shoulders and told her, “All things can be broken, Mom;
everything breaks sometime. The only thing that isn’t like that is love. It’s the only thing that can
never be broken.”
Mom hugged me very tightly then and finally smiled. She said that I was pretty wise and
understood some things that even much older people didn’t! After dinner that night, we had a
family meeting. We discussed mistakes and the importance of learning from them. Mom glued the
petal back onto the rose. The tiny petal now had a thin almost invisible line of glue. Then Mom
softly said, “Even though other people have limited edition roses, mine is truly unique. Its tiny
flaw reminds me of something more important: the realization that only love lasts forever.”
【2022 师大附中高三模3】
My daughter and I were fans of Mister Rogers’ Neighborhood, an educational children’s
television series that was created and hosted by Fred Rogers, more commonly known as Mister
Rogers.
Around my daughter’s second birthday, I had a Mister Rogers-inspired idea. Why not invite
one key person in my daughter’s world to dinner each month? The local children’s librarian could
visit one evening, and perhaps the borough mayor (区长) could drop by a few weeks later.
But I wanted to start at the top.
“Let’s invite Mister Rogers himself, ” I said to my wife. “After all, he lives just a few
neighborhoods away. I bet he’d come.”
She looked at me as if I wanted to invite the President. “You really think Mister Rogers
would come to our house for dinner? Fat chance.”
Undeterred (不气馁的), I sent a letter to Mister Rogers that fall, telling him of my newfound
delight in his show and my idea for inviting neighborhood people over to talk about their lives,
and asking him and Mrs. Rogers to be our guests.
I told my daughter about the letter. Her eyes glistened (发光). “Mister Rogers coming?
Really, Daddy?”
One month later, no reply. My daughter hadn’t forgotten and periodically asked when Mister
Rogers would be visiting. I always told her that he hadn’t called yet and that it was a good
opportunity to learn about patience.
Two months later, no response. At the three-month mark, my wife simply rolled her eyes
when I raised the topic. I was beginning to lose optimism. Mister Rogers had let me down.
Sadly, Mister Rogers passed away in late February of the following year. I was unaware of
his illness and now understood why our invitation had gone unanswered. Mister Rogers would not
be coming to dinner after all. Yet, even after his passing, Mister Rogers gave us a far greater gift
than I ever could have imagined.
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A week later, I was surprised to find a letter in our mailbox from Mister Rogers.
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The letter is a treasured gift and his kind words touched my life and my daughter.
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【答案】参考范文
A week later, I was surprised to find a letter in our mailbox from Mister Rogers. With my
trembling hands, I fingered the letter and read it word for word. He appreciated my daughter’s
enjoyment of his program and thanked us for our invitation, adding that he was much honored to
be our “guest” . But he apologized for not responding sooner and not being able to make it to our
dinner party then due to his stomach cancer treatment. In a delightful tone he expressed his wish to
meet some day. The one-page typed letter was like something from an old friend: personal and
caring.
The letter is a treasured gift and his kind words touched my life and my daughter. We could
never imagine it was written when he was then suffering great pains. Mister Rogers is gone, but
his remarkable talents are left behind. Rogers never came for dinner, but his belief in the
importance of being good neighbors is passed on. His spirits will never die: caring for people
including the unknown, hoping for the future, and most importantly, posing a positive attitude to
life whatever happens. When least expected, sometimes the best presents in life come from a
special neighbor.
【2022 雅礼高三模拟（二）】
My parents do a lot of embarrassing things! Usually, it’s my dad who sings silly songs or tells
corny jokes around my friends. But a few weeks ago, it was my mother who played the
embarrassing-parent role.
While my mom and I were shopping, we ran into my teacher, who mentioned that the school
didn’t have a music teacher to help our class put together a performance for Winter Fair. And, right
then and there, my mom said, “I know the perfect song and dance. I’ll teach it to the kids!”
Before I could say “Please don’t”, my mom had agreed to come to my class every morning at
9:30 for a week. Oh, and just to be clear, it’s not as if she’s a professional entertainer. My parents
run a small grocery store, and the only singing my mom does is in the shower.
“Um,” I said on our way home, “are you sure this is such a good idea?” “Of course!” she
said. “If we want your school Winter Fair to happen, people need to step up and volunteer.” “I
know volunteering is important,” I said, “but couldn’t you help out in Tex and Indi’s kindergarten
instead?” She laughed, “Don’t be silly. We will have fun!”
“OK, fellas!” my teacher said at 9:28 on Monday. “We’re going to stop silent reading a little
early today because a special guest is here to help us with a performance for Winter Fair. Let’s all
welcome Arizona’s mother.”
I looked up to discover my mom standing at the front of the room wearing the world’s silliest
snowflake hat. “I’m super excited to be here with you!” my mom said, “I’m going to teach you a
fun little song-and-dance performance I learned a few years back, when I did some theater in
college. Here goes!”
Oh please, oh please, I said over and over in my head, let there be a fire drill, or an assembly,
or a power failure, or anything to stop my mom from completely embarrassing herself — and
me!!!
But apparently, my mom was not at all concerned about looking silly. She turned on some
background music and started singing and dancing away.
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“How I wish I could find a place to hide!” was all I could think.
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My mom turned out to be more than a little OK at performing.
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“How I wish I could find a place to hide!” was all I could think. I even thought that this
would be the most embarrassing moment in my life. Would my classmates and teachers laugh at
me for that? What could I do to stop her singing and dancing immediately? I found I couldn’t
focus on her performance while she was singing and dancing. However, out of my imagination, all
of my classmates and teachers enjoyed it very much. I could tell that from their reaction. Suddenly
the applause burst out, which really surprised me.
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My mom turned out to be more than a little OK at performing. Not only did she present us
with a great performance, but also she showed us that it is very important to step up and volunteer.
As soon as she walked off the stage, I gave her a big hug and told her I was so proud of her. I'll
always stand by her.
【2022 雅礼高三模拟（一）】
The whole class burst out laughing as Mohi rushed into the classroom. He was a strange
sight. His half-buttoned white shirt revealed a red striped pajama top underneath, and instead of
white school shoes, he had on a pair of bright green sandals that were two sizes too big. The
physics teacher's hand froze in the middle of writing a formula on the blackboard.
Mohi mumbled,‘Sorry, teacher,’ and scuttled (快步疾走) to his seat. Mr. Tan glared at the rest
of the students. The chuckles quickly faded away. Mohi's classmates always looked forward to
Mondays. Nine times out of ten, they would be entertained by Mohi's late arrival and his odd
appearance which usually included inappropriate clothing. That day, it was the pajama top and
green sandals.
Mohi lived just a street away from the school. He walked to school daily. Students passing by
in buses would yell his name in unison (一起) just to see him jump and stop in his tracks. When
he spotted the merry bunch in the bus, he would wave good-naturedly. Although Mohi was likable,
he was too lost in his own thoughts to make friends. His classmates found him amusing but they
ignored him most of the time. Only Hamed, who sat next to Mohi, tried to be his friend.
The following Monday, Mohi did not turn up at school. His classmates were a little
disappointed but quickly forgot about him. After school, Hamed decided to walk over to Mohi's
house to check on him. As he approached the gate, he could hear violin music. Mohi must be
listening to music, he thought. The gate was not locked. Hamed let himself in. He called Mohi's
name a few times but there was no response. The music played on. Hamed peered in through a
window. His eyes widened in surprise. In the middle of the living room, Mohi was playing the
violin. His eyes were closed in concentration as he drew the bow over the strings expertly. He
played flawlessly (完美无瑕地), so much so that it sounded like a recording. Hamed left quietly.
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Paragraph 1 When Teacher's Day came around, Hamed had a plan.
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【答案】When Teacher's Day came around, Hamed had a plan. It was the tradition of the school
to have a concert for the teachers. Every class had to contribute an item. Hamed convinced the
class to let Mohi perform. Short of ideas, the class agreed. On the day of the concert, both the
teachers and students were surprised to see the school's clumsiest student walking on stage with a
violin. When he started to play, the audience fell silent. Jaws dropped.
As the last note ended, there was a moment of silence. Then the audience erupted into
thunderous applause. After the performance, shy and silent as Mohi was, he gave Hamed a big
hug. Love may be silent, but it was always there. Since then, Mohi and Hamed have been best
friends. With the encouragement of Hamed, Mohi has pursued his dream of being a musician. Not
only do friends keep us company but also help us to be a better self.
【2022 雅礼高三压轴（三）】
A dawning sun shaped the massive form of the train. Loaded with fuel, water, and sand for
power, the lead train weighed in at 410,000 pounds. Conductor Robert, 49, ran his eye along the
96 cars behind him.
It was 7 a.m. Robert had already checked the list of dangerous materials aboard the train.
''We've got some gas with us,'' he'd reported to his engineer, Lindley, in the cab (驾驶室). The
presence of gas would mean taking extra care when braking the 6,200-ton train. With explosive
gas on board, an accident would be more dangerous. After a final external inspection, Robert
jumped aboard. Slowly the train pulled out of the station.
Robert and Lindley had 50 years of railroading experience between them. They approached
Lafayette at about 1:45 p. m. and slowed the train to the speed limit. Lindley turned on his
flashing lights and warning bell. The two had been through the city hundreds of times, but they
grew extra cautious rounding the first curve (弯道). Ahead, over just three miles of track, lay no
fewer than 24 street crossings. As the train came out of the curve, Lindley noticed a small dot on
the right rail about 150 yards ahead. He thought it might be a dog. Now, as the train approached
within 100 yards of the object on the rail, Robert looked attentively. Then shock coursed through
him.
''My God!'' he yelled as a tiny face turned toward him. ''It's a baby!''
Lindley had an instant decision to make, applying full emergency brakes with half the train
still wrapped around a curve. He had to risk an emergency stop. Robert opened the left door of the
engine cab quickly and stepped out onto a narrow walkway. He hurried to the front of the engine
and crossed to the right side. He then stepped down to the lower portion of the walkway just to the
back of the train's ''cow catcher''.
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Stretching as far as he could, Robert put his right leg out in front of
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Telling himself he still had a job to do, Robert went back to check on the cars.
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【答案】Paragraph 1: Stretching as far as he could, Robert put his right leg out in front of him.
Swinging his leg out, he swept her aside with his foot. Robert swiftly leapt from the moving train
and ran back to the child. She lay crying by the tracks, blood streaming from a wound beneath her
hair. A great relief sweeping over Robert, Robert lifted her from the dirt. It was only then that
Robert noticed the train had stopped and there were flashing red lights of emergency vehicles
alongside the tracks. With the baby in his arms, Robert began to walk and was met by the police.
Paragraph 2: Telling himself he still had a job to do, Robert went back to check on the cars.
As Robert aboard rested in the train, his pent-up emotions rushed to the surface. It had all
unfolded so fast, and the reality of what he had done was only now hitting him. Within minutes,
Lindley was standing beside Robert, taking the controls again. They looked at each other, their
expressions of relief and gratitude more persuasive than words. Robert’s overalls were still spotted
with blood. The train pulled slowly out of Lafayette.
【2022 雅礼高三月考（七）】
I was responding to a call from a small brick flat in a quiet part of town. I assumed I was
being sent to pick up some party-goers, or someone who had just had a fight with a lover, or a
worker heading to an early shift at some factory for the industrial part of town.
When I arrived at 2:30 a. m. , the building was dark except for a single light in a ground floor
window. Under such circumstances, many drivers just honk(按喇叭) once or twice, wait a minute,
then drive away. But I had seen too many weak people who depended on taxis as their only means
of transportation. Unless a situation smelled of danger, I always went to the door.
This passenger might be someone who needs my assistance, I reasoned to myself. So I
walked to the door and knocked. “Just a minute,” answered a frail (虚弱的)，elderly voice. I
could hear something being dragged across the floor. After a long pause, the door opened. A small
woman in her 80s stood before me. She was wearing a print dress(印花裙子) and a pillbox hat(小
圆帽), like somebody who was going to a party in a 1940s movie. By her side was a small nylon
suitcase. The apartment looked as if no one had lived in it for years. All the furniture was covered
with sheets. There were no clocks on the walls, no equipment on the counters. In the corner was a
cardboard box filled with photos and glassware.
“Would you carry my bag out to the car?” she said. I took the suitcase to the cab, then
returned to assist the woman. She took my arm, and we walked slowly toward the cab.
She kept thanking me for my kindness. “It’s nothing. I just try to treat my passengers the way
I would want my mother treated. ” I told her and asked where she was headed. Having given me
an address, a hospice(临终医院), she asked. “Could you drive through downtown?”
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“But it isn’t the shortest way,” I reminded her.
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We drove in silence to the address she had given me.
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【答案】“But it isn’t the shortest way,” I reminded her. Asked why we didn’t take the shortest
way, the small woman told me it was the last chance for her to visit the city full of happy
memories. We drove through the neighborhood where she and her husband had lived. Besides, she
asked me to slow in front of a particular building or corner and would sit staring into the darkness,
saying nothing but with tears rolling in the eyes. At last, she said she was tired and wanted to go to
the hospice.
We drove in silence to the address she had given me. It was a low building, where the old
lady would live the rest of her life. Two nurses who must have been expecting her came out to the
cab as soon as we pulled up.I opened the trunk and took the suitcase to the door and the woman
was already seated in a wheelchair. When she asked how much she owed me, without thinking,I
said nothing and bent to give her a hug. It was my assistance that helped one of weak people
realize her wish.
【2022 一中高三月考1】
In my thirty-year teaching profession, one of the best teachers I have ever known is Mr
Rowe. I was lucky enough to teach fourth grade together with him.
Mr. Rowe had endless patience and understanding and I learned so much from watching him.
He could perform miracles, like the one he performed with Steven, one of the unhappiest kids I
had ever seen. Steven couldn’t stand school. He didn’t like being picked last for kickball. He
didn’t like the kids who raised their hands and knew all the answers, and most importantly, he
didn’t like himself.
The first day he walked into Mr. Rowe’s classroom, he ignored the other students, looking
angry and annoyed, and slid into his chair, knocking a couple of textbooks onto the floor.
Mr. Rowe walked over to him and touched Steven’s shoulder, but Steven pulled away.
Nevertheless, Mr. Rowe welcomed him:“Hi, Steven. I’m happy you are in my class. We are gonna
have a great year.” Steven looked around the room as if Mr. Rowe must be mistaken. No teacher
in his right mind would want Steven to be part of his classroom. So, while Mr. Rowe seemed
cheerful and relaxed that day of school, it seemed like Steven was angry and confused.
That day after classes, Mr. Rowe chose Steven to pitch (投球) the kickball during the break.
“Hey, Steven,” Mr. Rowe commented, “You are good at pitching. Let me show you my secret
trick.” Mr. Rowe taught Steven one of the tricks that not a single kid could perform. Steven
learned fast and did quite well! Everyone cheered for him!
After the kickball, Steven sat as close to Mr. Rowe in classes as he could. When a question
was asked, Steven lit up; when he knew the answer, he raised his hand; when he answered the
question, his voice shook. However, he got the answer right! He said, with Mr. Rowe, his days of
the fourth grade promised wonderful. It was obvious that Steven grew to love Mr. Rowe more and
more with each passing day.
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Time passed quickly that year, and before we all knew it, it was the last day of school.
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Many years later, Mr. Rowe and I were surprised when a handsome young man walked into
our classroom, dressed in the army uniform.
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Time passed quickly that year, and before we all knew it, it was the last day of school. All the
teachers filled the sidewalk, waving goodbye to the kids. But on that particular day, Steven walked
slowly to the bus, his head down, tears in his eyes. He boarded the bus reluctantly, hesitated, and
then ran back off the bus to hug Mr. Rowe. “I don’t want to leave you.” He sobbed. With red-
rimmed eyes, Mr. Rowe comforted him, “I will miss you, too.”
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Many years later, Mr. Rowe and I were surprised when a handsome young man walked into
our classroom, dressed in the army uniform. The young man stood tall and proud. It was Steven!
Mr. Rowe and I couldn’t believe our eyes. He saluted and hugged Mr. Rowe tightly! “I have come
back to school today just to say thanks to you!” It is my hope that every teacher is blessed with
such a wonderful experience of a former student coming back to say, simply to say a very simple
THANKS.
【2022 一中高三月考6】
As a sixth grader, I began noticing how other kids were separating into different groups in the
class. There were the geeks, the jocks (小丑) , and the popular cool kids. I wasn’t sure where I
belonged. And I think that was a problem.
Our teacher had assigned “secret friends” for the coming week. The purpose of this
assignment was to do nice things for your friend without letting them know who was doing it. We
could leave encouraging notes on their desk or mysteriously leave a card in their backpack or
book. Our teacher wrote each kid’s name on a piece of paper and threw them into a bucket, then
we each closed our eyes and drew the name of the classmate who we were to secretly befriend and
support over the next five school days.
Everyone was excited to get involved, including Rochelle. By the middle of the week, we had
turned this assignment into a contest to see whose secret friend could leave the best gift. Instead of
encouraging notes, we left stationery sets on our friend’s desk. Instead of giving compliments, we
were giving bubble gum, lollipops and even money. It seemed that everyone was getting cool
presents from their friends. Everyone except me, that is.
My secret friend followed our teacher’s directions without a fault. I received handmade cards,
notes with nice thoughts and countless smiley face pictures saying that I was one of the nicest girls
in the class. This friend seemed to think highly of me from the notes that were left, but the lack of
gifts kept me wondering what was up with whoever had pulled my name.
On the last morning of our assignment, I walked into my classroom and noticed a package on
my desk. At last, my secret friend had grasped the idea that a gift was what I really needed. I
quickly ripped open the gift paper, only to find a small doll inside. The pink wool-knit doll seemed
not new but delicate. But the girls sitting near me giggled and gossiped about the “little girl” gift I
had received.
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Hearing this, I felt my face turn red.
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It turned out that my secret friend was Rochelle, coming from a poor family.
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Hearing this, I felt my face turn red. Embarrassed and ashamed, I secretly complained that
the girl gave me so stupid a gift to arouse others’ derision. I even joined other girls in gossiping
about my secret friend and the poor doll. When I continued with mean remarks, a girl sitting at the
last row arose and came up, casting me an angry and disappointed look. With tears streaming
down her face, she admitted, “I’m your secret friend and I’m sorry about the gift.” Then she ran
out of the classroom. Frozen with shock, I couldn’t utter a single word.
It turned out that my secret friend was Rochelle, coming from a poor family. She had
saved every penny in her pocket money in order to give me a cool gift. With the limited money,
she visited a lot of stores and finally selected the lovely doll from a second-hand store. Actually,
she gave me a most valuable gift with her sincere heart. However, I didn’t treasure and hurt her
badly in such a cruel way. So ashamed was I that it took me a few days to pluck up my courage to
face up to Rochelle and apologize. Much to my delight, she forgave me and later we became best
friends. Most importantly, we found where we belonged.
【2022 一中高三月考7】
As 17-year-old Torriell Norwood drove through St. Peters-burg, Florida last February with
her friends to pay a visit to the great park as scheduled. Norwood shared her first aid courses and
her dream of becoming a doctor and other girls shared their precious experiences about the natural
adventures with each other. The laughter and chatter from the four teenage girls inside her car
quickly gave way to screams. As they approached an intersection, another car T-boned them,
sending their black car sailing into the yard of a nearby home, coming to a stop only when it
crashed into a tree. All of them were in panic instantly, totally at a loss!
As smoke waved from the car, a bystander shouted, “It’s about to blow up! Get out!” The
impact had caved in Norwood’s driver’s side door, jamming it shut. The bystander seized the front
door handle of the car, summoned all his strength to pull it open but failed. Shaken, but otherwise
OK, Norwood crawled out through the window. She had a cut on the right side of her face.
Originally her lovely face became very pale. Along with two of her friends, who’d also managed
to free themselves, she ran for her life.
But halfway down the street, she realized that her best friend, Azarria Simmons, was not with
them. Norwood ran back to the wreck and found Simmons slumped in the back seat. “She was not
moving,” Norwood shouted with her heart tightened. She threw open the back door and pulled her
friend out, avoiding the broken glass as best she could. She dragged Simmons a few feet to safety
and laid her on the ground. She checked her pulse. Nothing! She put her head against Simmons’s
chest. No sign of life!
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If the accident had happened a few weeks earlier, she might not have known what to do.
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After awhile, the CPR worked and Simmons regained her consciousness.
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【答案】If the accident happened a few weeks earlier, she might not have known what to do. But
Norwood, who wanted to pursue a career in medicine, had earned her CPR certificate just the day
before. Kneeling on the ground and looking down at her dying friend, Norwood knew she had
precious little time to practise what she'd learned. She started pumping Simmons's chest with her
interlocked fingers and breathing into her friend's mouth in hopes of filling her lungs with the kiss
of life. The other two girls ran back and called 911.
After a while, the CPR worked and Simmons regained her consciousness. Simmons began
coughing and gasping for air but she was still weak. Norwood breathed a sigh of relief knowing
her friend out of danger. Soon the emergency car arrived and rushed Simmons to the hospital,
where she received the comprehensive medical examination. Then after she heard how her best
friend had saved her life, Simmons said gratefully, "I am so blessed to have her by my side. Such
as she is, always ready for helping others in any way she can."
【2022 一中高三月考8】
The watch was my grandfather’s. He hung it by his bed. The face was marked with elegant
Roman numbers and the case was gold. My grandfather got it after his fifty years of faithful
service with his firm. I often gazed at it longingly as I sat with my grandfather after school.
The day I told him of my success in the examinations, he was pleased,“You’ll be going to the
new school next, Will. Remember you’ll need plenty of patience. That’s the right way.” I nodded
when handing him the watch. He gazed at it for some moments, and wound it.
The next morning my mother told me he had died in his sleep and left me his watch. For
safety, my mother was to put it away in trust until she considered me old enough to look after it. I
protested(抗议) so strongly that she finally agreed to hang it in the kitchen where I could always
see it.
The summer soon ended and it was time for me to enter the new school. I never made friends
easily, and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys. One of them
was a rich fellow whose way of impressing us was to parade his possessions before us. Everything
Crawley had was better than ours – until he brought the watch.
“I have a better watch than that,” I announced, attempting to impress them. “Well, show it to
us,” Crawley sneered (冷笑) in disbelief. Embarrassed, I promised to bring it to them that
afternoon.
Considering there was no way to persuade my mother to let me take the watch, I decided to
wait for her to step outside and slip the watch into my pocket. So I did. After lunch, as I was too
excited to wait for the return bus, I got my bike out of the shed.
I rode fast, excitement coursing through me. Then suddenly a puppy ran out into my path. I
pulled at my brakes so hard that the bike stopped to a sharp standstill (急停) and I fell over.
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I picked myself up and put a trembling hand into my pocket.
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“That’s not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience,” a voice echoed in my ears after the boys
left.
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【答案】Para 1:
I picked myself up and put a trembling hand into my pocket. Then I brought out what was
left of my grandfather's proudest possession. There was deep bulge in the watch, the glass
shattered, and the Roman numbers looking crazily at one another. Putting it back, I rode slowly on
to school, numb with misery. After what seemed forever, I finally turned up before the waiting
boys. “My mother wouldn't let me bring it,” I lied. “His mother wouldn't let him,” Crawley jeered.
“What a story!" The others took up his cries and left without a backward glance.
Para 2:
“That’s not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience,” a voice echoed in my ears after the boys
left. Though anger, embarrassment and sadness hung heavily in the air, the voice drew me to the
awareness of the mistakes I had made when I attempted to impress the boys. I shouldn’t have tried
to integrate in such a hasty way, nor should I have stolen the watch behind my mother. It was the
first time that I had truly realized the meaning of the gift—patience. I knew for sure that every
time I lost patience in the future I would remember my grandfather’s words.
【2022 长郡高三考前冲刺（一）】
The story of my new family member
We found a lonely dog a few weeks ago, walking along the road in the countryside. All of a
sudden, he was jumping on cars, and at the same time we thought maybe his family was camping
somewhere in the neighboring areas. As a consequence we passed him by without hesitation. A
few hours later, on our return trip, he was still in the same place, again and again, making an
attempt to get people to stop for him. When he caught sight of us approaching, he lay down in the
middle of the road, so we failed to get around him.
My father braked hard, pulled up and looked around for a few minutes, trying to figure out
whether anyone around from whom he had been separated. After getting off the car, we checked
the dog carefully. It didn’t appear so. Then we took a good look at the poor but cute dog. He gazed
at us eagerly with gloomy eyes. We circled around him in a total silence. We had an overwhelming
desire to find out what was wrong with him. Unfortunately, we couldn’t find any clues. He had no
collar and he was really too thin. Eventually we decided that he had been abandoned. We showed
great sympathy for the poor dog. How helpless he was on such an occasion! He was homeless and
he had no one to rely on.
On seeing the scene, we couldn’t help begging my parents to raise him. My mother agreed
excitedly, “I love this lovely dog. How poor he is! It is high time that we should bring him home.”
She stared at the dog with tears welling up in her eyes. We knew my mother was willing to adopt
the dog because she was so sweet and she loved dogs very much. My father thought it was
dangerous to raise a dog due to the fact that we were too young.
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Paragraph 1:
My father said firmly, “If he doesn’t bite me when I try to pick him up to put him in the car,
then we have a new dog.”
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Paragraph 2:
We took him to the vet (兽医) who said the dog appeared to be in good health.
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【答案】One possible version:
My father said firmly, “If he doesn’t bite me when I try to pick him up to put him in the car,
then we have a new dog.” The dog happily joined us with no fight at all, the only thing we were
in danger of was getting licked. He kept sticking his head between the two front seats and thanked
us for picking him up. The dog had clearly been on the road for some time, he was really too thin.
So we fed him a lot over the course of the next two weeks striving to look after him with the hope
that he would get stronger. Unfortunately, all our efforts were in vain. He was still very thin.
We took him to the vet, who said the dog appeared to be in good health. The vet guessed the
dog was about two years old. He gave the dog all the required shots and sent us on our way.
“Amazing! The dog is healthy.” My mother said in an excited voice. So thrilled were we that we
headed home immediately. We did love our new family member. The dog was a sweet companion
to our family, who was a quick learner and knew how to respond to different instructions. We
learned a lesson from the experience that kindness and sympathy made a big difference to our life.
【2022 长郡高三模1】
Early one cold November morning，my mother dressed me in thick clothes．“Now come
outside with me，” she said．Once outside，she handed me a brown paper bag that held
something that smelled like wet dirt．“We need to plant bulbs（鳞茎植物）before the first hard
freeze．I have already dug the holes，” she said．“So take each bulb from the bag，drop it
in the hole，and then gently push the dirt back into the hole to cover the bulb—like so．”
I opened the bag．“These bulbs are ugly and look dead!”
“You're right．They're not at all pretty．But they're not dead；they're just sleeping until
spring．”
“And all the bulbs look alike，” I continued．“How do we know what they'll look like
next spring？”
“We won't know for sure until spring，but that's the joy of gardening．We'll just have to be
patient．”
All winter long I hoped that the flowers would bloom some day．
One day in late April，I found some pink pushing up through the ground．My mother was
excited when I showed her．Perfect! “she said．They'll be ready at just the right time．”
A few days later，she took me to the local store where she gathered up colored paper，
colored ribbons ，and all the baskets on sale ．“ Okay ，now we're ready to make May
baskets．”
“May baskets？What are May baskets？”
“They are small baskets filled with fresh flowers and secretly left at someone's front
door．” Her eyes shone with delight．“So when we get home we'll cut the flowers that are
blooming in the garden to make May baskets．Then tomorrow，May 1st，we'll get up early
and take them to our neighbors．Doesn't that sound like fun？”
“But I waited all winter for the flowers to bloom，and they're so beautiful．And．．．
and．．．I thought we would keep them forever，” I said，close to tears．
“I know you're disappointed，sweetie，but flowers-like kindness-are meant to be shared．
Their beauty is not ours to keep．You understand？” my mother replied in a tender voice．
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“No! I don't understand．I want to keep the flowers，” I protested．
Shortly after dawn the next morning，we began our journey through the neighborhood．
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“No! I don't understand．I want to keep the flowers，” I protested．Noticing my obvious
reluctance，Mom knelt down and petted my face，“I know you do，sweetie．But in the end，
you'll understand that every drop of kindness you give away returns to you in another way．Just
wait and see．” So later that afternoon，we cut most of the flowers from the garden，tied them
with colored ribbons，wrapped them in colored paper，and then placed them in the refrigerator
to keep them fresh overnight ．Afterwards，I headed to bed，but all night the uneasiness of
losing those beautiful flowers gripped my heart，making it hard for me to fall asleep．
Shortly after dawn the next morning，we began our journey through the neighborhood．At
each house，we hid behind our neighbors' bushes．I ran to the front door，left the basket and
then rang the doorbell ，giggling as I ran for cover ．When I saw delighted smiles spreading
across our neighbors' faces because of those anonymous May baskets ，a surge of pride and
happiness flooded in waves ．My mother was right—every drop of kindness you give away
returns to you in another way．
【2022 长郡高三模2】
Having struggled with financial difficulties for six months and failing to find a way out, I had
to close my technology writing business. Fortunately, I found a new job as a salesperson and soon
got a client. At the time, I wondered if it was too good to be true.
By the second month, something didn’t seem right, and I developed a bad feeling about the
client and the work. When the third month’s check didn’t arrive on time, I sent the client an e-mail
to find out what was going on. But there was no reply. Then I sent another e-mail, and another.
The check never arrived, and I never heard from the client again. With no hope in sight, I hit rock
bottom. Panic replaced cautious optimism along with my last self-confidence.
I hid myself from friends and locked myself in my room. One night, the phone rang. The call
was from Eric, a friend of mine from high school. When he was in high school, he told me many
times about his parents’ divorce and his loss of confidence in the college entrance examination.
During the difficult time, I gave him much comfort and encouragement. Later, he went to college
and was always grateful for what I had done.
After the greetings, I told my problems and challenges, hoping my friend would say
something comforting. What I didn’t expect was a string of sharp words. “What is wrong with
you? You can do anything you want to do,” he said. “You are a writer, so start writing. Write for
magazine.” “Write for magazine? Are you out of your mind? I don’t know the first thing about
writing for magazine, let alone write things that anyone would want to read. And I have to know
where I can send an application form-to what magazine and to what editor,” I shouted at him.
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Surprisingly, I felt a little better after the shouting.
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On finishing the application form I sent it to the editor.
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【答案】参考范文
Surprisingly, I felt a little better after the shouting. After a short silence, Eric replied in a firm
voice. “I always remember what you said when I was in trouble. You said ‘No one can get you out
of trouble but yourself. ’ ” Hearing that, I was speechless and struck by the fact that it was easier
to convince others than to convince myself. Inspired by Eric’s words, I started searching for
magazines the next day and finally found one that accepted online contributions with various
topics. Then I began to prepare my application form.
On finishing the application form I sent it to the editor. Luckily, two days later I received a
positive response and an invitation to write. At first, I only wrote articles I was expert in.
Gradually, I began trying new types. One day, much to my amazement, one of my articles
appeared on the first page of the magazine! Since then, I have been on my way to becoming an
excellent writer. That definitely should be credited to Eric. It was he who enlightened me and
helped me regain confidence to face challenges in my life.
【2022 长郡高三月考6】
This past summer，my family went on our annual vacation in a cottage on a lake ．There
were various activities to keep everyone busy：swimming，fishing and building sand castle on
the beach．In the evenings，we gathered on the beach，having great fun．
However，by the third day of our vacation，I noticed my sister，Jane，spent most of her
time watching videos and looking through online shops indoors．She was so addicted to her cell
phone! Over dinner，I told Jane we would hike to the top of the mountain across the lake the
following morning．I stared at her，“Put your phone away and enjoy the scenery．It's really
amazing．”
“Well，” Jane shrugged（耸）her shoulders and answered unwillingly，“there are some
bargains tomorrow in several online shops，so I'll not be available．”
“Come out to enjoy the fresh air and many views．Hiking is fun!”
“Sounds more like punishment than a vacation，” she didn't look up from her soup and
mumbled（嘟囔），“I cannot walk that far．”
When I said it only took half an hour of steady walking to climb to the top ，she
nodded，“OK，I'll go．”
The next morning was perfect for a hike，with sunny clear skies and gentle winds．I got up
early and packed some sandwiches and bottles of water into my backpack along with the
camera．Jane came slowly downstairs，and announced in a very unenthusiastic voice，“I'm
ready to go，Jim．”
Anyway ，we stepped out of our cottage and quite a different view unfolded before our
eyes．Against the blue skies，a rough path wound to the top of the mountain across the lake
with wild flowers and grass on both sides．The sunlight brightened on the glassy surface of the
lake．We began from the path．“I'm still wondering if this is a good idea，but if you could do
it，I could also do．” She complained，frowning．
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She followed me，her mind wandering．
Reaching the top，Jane widened her eyes，shouting，“How awesome!”
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She followed me，her mind wandering．Minutes later，we started to climb a steep slope．
Jane sighed，dragging her legs behind me．I was surprised to find some rarely-seen trees and
flowers，and took many photos but Jane showed no interest．She stopped and sat on a rock，
thirsty，sweaty and bored．I handed her a bottle of water and we took a break．“I missed my
phone，” she complained as we continued climbing ．Though unhappy，she just climbed
along with me．
Reaching the top ，Jane widened her eyes ，shouting ，“ How awesome !” She looked
around dreamily，her eyes twinkling with indescribably wild excitement．A refreshing breeze
brushed the mountain top ，miles of trees spread out below us and birds chirped between
branches．We sat on a large rock and ate sandwiches，enjoying the sounds，the smells and the
sunlight．“Anyone still wants her phone？” I joked．She rolled her eyes，laughing out
loud ．The next morning ，Jane danced to my room ，crying ，“ Let's hike around the lake
today．” Sure，get our backpack then，I beamed，relieved and joyful．
