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2026 年高考英语读后续写复习之隐性情感表达策略
06.内心独白间接化:让情感“有层次”
内心独白间接化
---让情感“有层次”
一、原理:与高考评价的深层联系
高考英语读后续写旨在考查学生的阅读理解、语言运用和逻辑思维能力,而内心独白间接化的表达与
高考评价体系中的 “情境化”“层次化”“交际化” 要求高度契合。
在 “情境化” 方面,高考评价强调语言在具体情境中的运用。内心独白间接化通过描写环境、动作、
语言等元素来反映人物内心,能更好地融入故事设定的情境。例如,在描写人物紧张时,不直接写 “ I 
was very nervous”,而是通过 “His hands trembled uncontrollably as he stared at the exam paper(他盯着试卷,
双手不受控制地颤抖)”,将紧张情绪融入到考试场景中,使读者更有代入感。
“层次化” 要求考生展现对情感的深度理解和细腻表达。直接的内心独白往往只能传递单一的情感
强度,而间接化手法能通过不同侧面的描写,展现情感的复杂性和变化过程。比如,描写人物的失落,可
先写 “His eyes dimmed(他的眼神黯淡下来)”,再写 “He dragged his feet as he walked away(他拖着
沉重的步伐离开)”,最后用 “The setting sun cast a long, lonesome shadow behind him(夕阳在他身后投
下一道长长的、孤寂的影子)”,层层递进地表现失落感。
“交际化” 注重语言表达的自然流畅,符合真实交际场景。间接化的内心独白更贴近生活中人们表
达情感的方式,避免生硬直白的表述,让故事更具可读性和感染力,符合高考对优秀写作的评价标准 。
二、策略:实现情感层次化表达
(一)借助环境描写烘托情感
环境描写是间接表达内心的有效方式。通过描写自然环境、场景布置等,将人物的情感投射到环境中,
让读者通过环境氛围感知人物内心。
自然环境:当人物心情愉悦时,可以描写 “Sunlight streamed through the leaves, creating a dancing 
pattern of light and shadow on the ground. The gentle breeze carried the sweet fragrance of blooming flowers, 
making everything seem so alive(阳光透过树叶洒下,在地面上形成光影跳跃的图案。微风带来花朵绽放的
芬芳,让一切都充满生机)”;而在悲伤时,则用 “Dark clouds loomed overhead, and the sky grew gloomy. 
A cold drizzle started to fall, soaking everything in a layer of sadness(乌云笼罩头顶,天空变得阴沉。一场冷
雨开始落下,将一切都浸在一层悲伤之中)”。
场景布置:描写一个孤独的人物,可以刻画房间 “Empty bottles and crumpled papers littered the floor. 
The once - tidy room now felt like a cage, suffocating and desolate(空瓶子和皱巴巴的纸张散落在地板上。曾
经整洁的房间现在就像一个笼子,令人窒息又荒凉)” ,展现其内心的无助和迷茫。
(二)通过动作细节展现情绪
人物的动作往往是内心情绪的外在体现,抓住具有代表性的动作细节进行描写,能生动地反映人物内
心。
手部动作:兴奋时 “Her hands clapped vigorously, and she jumped up and down, unable to contain her joy
(她用力地拍手,不停地跳上跳下,无法抑制内心的喜悦)”;犹豫时 “He reached out his hand, then 
pulled it back, his fingers curling and uncurling nervously(他伸出手,又缩了回来,手指紧张地蜷起又展
开)” 。
身体姿态:自信时 “He stood tall, his shoulders back, looking straight into the eyes of the audience(他昂
首挺胸,直视着观众的眼睛)”;自卑时 “She hunched over, keeping her head down, trying to make herself 
as small as possible(她弓着背,低着头,试图把自己缩得越小越好)”。
(三)利用语言对话暗示心理
人物的语言不仅是交流工具,还能暗示其内心想法。通过巧妙设计对话内容和语气,展现人物的情感
状态。
内容暗示:当人物不愿面对某件事时,可能会说 “Maybe we can talk about it another time. I'm not 
really in the mood right now(也许我们可以下次再谈。我现在真的没心情)”,暗示其逃避心理。
语气变化:愤怒时 “His voice rose sharply, 'How could you do this to me?'(他声音尖锐地提高,‘你怎
么能这样对我?’)”;温柔时 “She spoke softly, almost in a whisper, 'It's going to be okay.'(她轻声说道,
几乎是在耳语,‘一切都会好起来的。’)”。
(四)运用比喻等修辞手法隐喻情感
恰当的修辞手法能将抽象的情感转化为具体可感的形象,让内心独白更具表现力。
比喻:“His heart was a heavy stone, sinking deeper and deeper with each passing second(他的心像一块
沉重的石头,每过一秒就下沉得更深)”,生动地表现出人物的沉重心情;“Hope was a flickering candle 
in the wind, but it refused to go out(希望是风中摇曳的烛光,但它不肯熄灭)”,展现出人物内心对希望的
坚持。
拟人:“The memory haunted him day and night, whispering cruel reminders of his failure(那段记忆日夜
纠缠着他,低声残忍地提醒着他的失败)”,将记忆人格化,凸显其对人物内心的折磨。
(五)借助回忆联想揭示情感状态
在叙述过程中插入与当前情境相关的回忆或联想,以此揭示人物的情感。比如,深秋的傍晚,寒风裹
挟着枯叶掠过公园的长椅,12 岁的艾米蹲在宠物狗 "雪球" 曾经最爱的草地上,指尖无意识地摩挲着褪色
的牵引绳。夕阳将她的影子拉得很长,与远处追逐嬉戏的孩童身影重叠。这一刻,三年前的画面突然在她
脑海中炸开:
"The first time we brought him here, he ran around with such joy, his tail wagging vigorously. The setting sun 
painted his white fur gold as he chased dandelion puffs across the grass, his paws leaving tiny imprints in the dew-
kissed lawn. I remember laughing so hard my sides ached, watching him somersault over his own excitement. Now, 
the empty grassland seemed to mock my loneliness. The same breeze that once carried his playful barks now 
whispered only silence, and the dandelions had long since vanished, leaving behind nothing but a carpet of 
withered leaves."
通过对过去美好时光的细腻回忆与现实场景的强烈对比,不仅生动展现出孩子失去宠物后的悲伤与思
念,更巧妙地将难以言喻的情感转化为具体可感的画面,让读者在字里行间感受到人物内心的震颤。
三、词汇:为情感表达添彩
(一)形容情绪状态的词汇
积极情绪:delighted(欣喜的)、thrilled(激动的)、ecstatic(狂喜的)、elated(兴高采烈的)、
content(满足的) 。在使用时,可以说 “Her eyes sparkled with delight as she opened the gift(她打开礼物
时,眼里闪烁着欣喜的光芒)” 。
消极情绪:miserable(痛苦的)、desperate(绝望的)、anguished(痛苦的)、frustrated(沮丧的)、
anxious(焦虑的)。例如 “He let out a long sigh, looking utterly miserable(他长叹一声,看起来极其痛
苦)” 。
(二)描写动作的词汇
手部动作:clutch(紧握)、fiddle(摆弄)、wave(挥舞)、scratch(抓挠)、poke(戳)。如 
“She clutched the necklace tightly, as if it were her last hope(她紧紧地抓着项链,仿佛那是她最后的希
望)”。
身体动作:stagger(蹒跚)、stride(大步走)、creep(爬行)、slouch(无精打采地坐或站)、spin
(旋转)。像 “He staggered along the street, his mind in a mess(他在街上蹒跚而行,思绪一片混乱)”。
(三)描绘环境的词汇
自然环境:gloomy(阴沉的)、radiant(光芒四射的)、breezy(微风轻拂的)、stormy(暴风雨的)
foggy(有雾的)。比如 “The gloomy sky matched her mood perfectly(阴沉的天空与她的心情完美契
合)”。
场景环境:cluttered(杂乱的)、spotless(一尘不染的)、dusty(满是灰尘的)、cozy(舒适的)、
spacious(宽敞的)。可以写 “The cozy little café was filled with the aroma of freshly brewed coffee(这个舒
适的小咖啡馆里弥漫着 freshly brewed coffee 的香气)” 。
第一部分  策略应用实践
根据上述策略分析,在阅读写作语段后完成后文的分析。
【写作语段】
It was the day of the big piano competition. Lily stood backstage, her fingers hovering over the edges of the 
music stand. The stage lights seemed blindingly bright, even from behind the curtains. She could hear the faint 
murmur of the audience, a low hum that made her ears itch. Her mouth was dry, and she kept running her tongue 
over her chapped lips, tasting the bitterness of nervousness. As she tried to take a deep breath, her chest felt tight, as 
if a heavy weight was pressing down on her. Memories of countless hours of practice flashed through her mind - 
the early mornings, the sore fingers, the frustration of making the same mistake over and over again. She wondered 
if all that effort would be in vain. Suddenly, she caught a glimpse of her mother in the front row, smiling and giving 
her a thumbs-up. A warm feeling spread through her body, and she felt a new sense of determination welling up 
inside.
【语段分析】
在这段范文中,作者充分运用了内心独白间接化的策略。通过 “             
 
 1    
” 这一动作细节,暗示了 Lily 的紧张和不安;“                   
 
 2                        
 
 ” 等
对视觉和听觉的描写,进一步烘托出她在比赛前的紧张氛围;“                   
 
 3    
” 以及 “                    
 
 4                       
 
 ” 等对生理反应的描写,生动地展现了她内
心的紧张和焦虑。同时,“             
 
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 ” 这种碎片化的心理活动描写,体现了她
对比赛结果的担忧和对过去努力的回忆。最后,看到母亲的鼓励后 “                      
 
 6   
 
”,通过生理感受和心理变化的描写,间接表现出她内心的情感转变,使整个情感表达层次丰富、细腻生
动,符合高考英语读后续写对情感表达和人物刻画的要求。
第二部分  综合写作实践
1.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Many people visit the pawn shop (典当行) in search of old items for sale, so it was no surprise when store 
owner Victor saw Tommy with a bag in his hand. Victor immediately played a joke with the young man, “Is it a big 
deal inside?” but his reaction was unexpected.
Nobody knew there was a book inside and Tommy was attracted by its old charm, guessing that it was 
something special. He visited the pawn shop simply to investigate further. What did Tommy find out about the book 
— why it was so special, and how it ended up in the at tic (阁楼) of Grandma Alice?
Tommy was enjoying the warmth of the summer sun while feasting on an ice cream treat with his 
grandmother. It was mid-summer vacation and he had been asked to assist his grandmother in cleaning out her attic. 
As they were doing so, they discovered a variety of interesting items that had not been seen since the death of 
Grandma Alice's husband, Grandpa Glenn.
Grandma Alice was unable to climb up the stairs and did not need any of the attic’s contents. As she was 
planning to retire after the summer, Tommy was asked to help her with the attic clean-out. Most of the items found 
could be donated to charitable organizations or used as second-hand items. Grandma Alice provided Tommy with a 
box to collect the items he desired to keep. There was a box of things that Tommy had collected and he had it put 
under the bed. but it had slipped from his memory for a while.
One day, while cleaning out Grandma Alice’s room, he found it again. He decided to look again at all the 
stuff he had collected. There were some old photo albums, with lots of pictures of his grandparents as kids, a few 
DVDs, and some of Tommy’s old toys from his childhood. But there was one thing that caught his eye — a book.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Unfortunately, the ink had worn off, so he couldn’t read any of the words on the pages.
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He took the book out of his bag and put it down on the counter, and Victor’s eyes went wide.
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2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I’d had a rather stressful day at work. I’d also had another argument with my teenaged daughter that 
morning. By the time I arrived home, I really wanted to get my evening walk. Having some time on my own would 
help clear my mind and refresh myself. It was getting cloudier and I could tell that rain was coming. No problem. I 
would be home long before the rain fell. 
The intense ( 剧烈的) walk worked off much of my energy. I slowed my pace, but a quick look down 
shocked me. The cutest Terrier, a kind of lovely dog, had appeared out of nowhere and was keeping pace beside 
me. “Where did you come from, little one? ” She was not wearing an identification tag (标签). I suddenly realized 
that she had no owner or name. I remembered seeing a Terrier when I drove into the neighborhood a few hours 
earlier. It had rushed into the street in front of my car, but I had assumed it lived in the area. It must be the same 
dog. 
I continued my walk, thinking she would find her way home on her own. The little dog continued to keep 
pace, walking next to me as if we were age-old friends. When I picked up my pace, so did she. When I slowed, she 
slowed. When I looked around, I was not surprised that, other than the dog, I was alone on this boring night. The 
sky had already darkened. I was worried if I left her out there, she might be hit by a car. 
The timing was funny. My sixteen-year-old daughter, Megan, was desiring for a young, lively dog. But her 
dad and I had refused her request since she would be leaving for college in a couple of years. Besides, Megan and I 
had not exactly seen eye to eye earlier that day. I didn’t want it to seem as if I was rewarding her after yet another 
argument. 
注意: 
1. 续写词数应为150 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
With rain pouring hard, I made my decision. 
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On opening the door, the Terrier rushed in and ran straight to Megan. 
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3.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
For as long as I could remember, fear had been a constant shadow in my life. It went into my thoughts at the 
most inconvenient moments, whispering that I wasn’t good enough, that I would fail. When I considered pursuing 
my dreams, the fear was always there, reminding me that failure would be waiting to embarrass me. It was easier to 
listen to its warnings — taking the safe, familiar path rather than risking everything. 
One day, while browsing through a local newspaper, I came across an advertisement for a writing 
competition. The grand prize — a publishing deal — seemed like a distant dream, something only those with true 
talent could achieve. I paused, the excitement briefly overshadowing my doubts. I had always loved writing, but the 
thought of others reading my work — judging my deepest thoughts and emotions — made my hands tremble. I 
could already hear the voice of fear, louder now, “You’ll never be good enough. Don’ t bother. It’s not worth the 
pain of failure.”
As the submission deadline grew closer, my mind became a battlefield. My fingers paused over the 
keyboard, and I would write a sentence, then delete it, doubting every word. My heart raced as I questioned 
whether my story could stand up to the others. Would I be laughed at? Funny? I spent hours reworking my entry, 
staring at the flashing line, unsure if it was even worth submitting. The fear ate at me, whispering, “You don’t 
belong here.”
Then, one afternoon, as the sun dipped low, I sat back in my chair, my eyes closed. The silence in the room 
pressed down on me, and I suddenly realized something important. The fear of never knowing — of never trying — 
was far worse than failing. If I didn’t submit, I would regret it forever. With shaking hands, I clicked the submit 
button, and in that instant, my story was out there in the world, exposed and open to the judgment of strangers. 
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150 个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The days that followed were filled with constant anxiety. 
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The email confirmed it: I had won the competition. 
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4.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The heavy rain beat down on the sidewalk as Leo rushed past his favorite café. Near the cafe’s damp brick 
wall, he noticed Ms. Parks sitting alone — the elderly woman who usually smiled at passersby, despite her worn-
out shoes and a single bag holding all her belongings. Her lips looked dry as she quietly watched the rain. A cold 
rain drop slid down Leo’s neck. “Kindness costs nothing,” his late grandmother’s voice came to his mind. 
He stopped. His fingers tightened around his umbrella handle. Turning back, he pushed open the café door. 
He bought two coffees. Stepping out, he went to Ms. Parks. “Have a cup of coffee. This might help warm you up,” 
he said, holding out the steaming cup. Ms. Parks’s face brightened as she accepted it. “Thank you! you are so kind,” 
she replied. 
That simple act lit a spark. The next day, Leo prepaid five “suspended coffees” at the café — drinks anyone 
can get for free. Soon a “Suspended Coffee” sign appeared in the café. Within weeks, the idea spread, and more 
people followed in his steps. 
For a while, things went well. Ms. Parks came by often for a free coffee. But before long, someone 
whispered, “She’s always taking, never giving.” Leo’s heart sank when Ms. Parks stopped showing up. One 
evening, he came across her in a bus stop. She looked away shyly when she saw him. “I don’t want to cause 
trouble,” she said softly, her voice breaking. At that moment, he realized though well-meaning, the “suspended 
coffee” system wasn’t enough. His good intentions had unintentionally made Ms. Parks feel ashamed. 
Determined to address the problem, Leo made some changes. The “Suspended Coffee” sign remained, but 
new words appeared below, “Bring a gift if you can — a used book, spare gloves, a story, a song, or even a smile to 
others. This is about sharing, not charity.”
注意:
(1) 续写词数应为150 个左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Leo’s new rules worked. 
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The café, filled with Leo’s kindness, attracted attention. 
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5.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“What is your name? ” is a question most frequently asked when people meet for the first time. But for me, it 
was the first challenge I encountered as an international student in Ireland. 
The pronunciation system of the Chinese language is quite different from that of English. For native speakers 
of English, some Chinese words are rather difficult to pronounce. My given name Qiuyu (秋雨), for instance, 
happened to be a great challenge for many of them. Every time I gave a self-introduction, I had to explain how to 
pronounce my name at least five times, yet they still could not say it the way I did. 
Once in a lecture, the professor tried repeating my name after me over and over in front of thirty classmates. 
I really did not know whether I should continue correcting him or simply drop the matter. I feared that my 
classmates might grow tired of my efforts or even lose patience with me. After all, I did care about how others 
would think of me. I realized that if I didn’t stop, the entire lecture would be ruined. “It’s okay, professor,” I 
shrugged (耸肩). The awkward moment ended with the class erupting into laughter. I forced a smile, unsure how to 
respond further. 
After that incident, I stopped acting as a “Chinese teacher.” Instead of correcting others when they were 
struggling to pronounce my name, I just smiled and nodded approvingly. This approach spared me the discomfort 
of having to over-explain. However, I soon found that by doing so, I might be losing something more important: the 
opportunity to share a small part of my cultural identity. 
注意:
(1) 续写词数应为150 个左右;
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
In a class discussion, I was invited to explain the meaning of my name. 
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Many of my classmates got interested and came up to me after class. 
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6.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the 
early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order. 
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My 
brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s 
small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and 
keep him outside. 
My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard 
and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone 
went indoors. 
It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t 
happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. 
A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him 
to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over 
the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned. 
Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call 
first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing 
health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant 
companion, the one who kept him going. 
注意: 
(1)续写词数应为150 个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I realized it was me who was at fault. 
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With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. 
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7.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The air was pure and fresh; it refreshed Richard’s soul. He rode very slowly on his way to school, 
daydreaming about his father agreeing to his fishing trip. Although they both enjoyed the fishing trip, they couldn’t 
have enough time to spend together because his father was very busy. Richard was so busy dreaming about all the 
fish he would catch that he didn’t know everything around him.
He rode along until a strange sound around drew him to the present. He came to a stop and looked curiously 
up to the air. Four tall trees stretched up to the heavens. What he saw shocked him. A huge swarm (大群) of bees 
filled the sky like cloud and the buzzing mass was moving towards him.
Since childhood, he had a lot of courage. He liked various small animals in the wild and even tried to raise 
them at home. But he was the most afraid of bees. Once, he was stung (蜇) in the face by bees, and his face was 
swollen like a ball. Richard knew that he was sensitive to bee stings. The last sting had cured him in hospital — and 
that was only one bee sting! He had been forced to stay in bed for two whole days.
Once bitten by a snake, three years afraid of a well rope. With no time to waste, Richard sped off in the 
opposite direction, riding furiously (猛烈地) without knowing how to escape the swarm. With a rapidly beating 
heart and his legs pumping violently, he sped down the rough road. As the bees cam e closer, his panic increased. 
Suddenly, his father’s words came to him, “When you are in a tight situation, don’t panic. Use your brain and think 
your ways out of it.”
On a nearby hill, he could see smoke waving slowly skywards from the chimney of the Nelson family home. 
Mr. Nelson is his father’s good friend. They travel together and gather at his house, where there is a small dam (坝) 
cutting the streams in the middle. It is used by Mr. Nelson to water his vegetable garden.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150 个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Bees don’t like smoke,” he thought.
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After holding his breath for as long as he could, Richard came up for air and noticed the bees had gone.
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8.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As a new teacher, I faced a lot of challenges, but one student, a10-year-old girl named Mia, caught my 
attention. With her head down, chin (下巴) against her chest, and fists (拳头) balled up, she was ready to take on 
(较量、对抗) any and all comers. She was nicknamed the “little tornado”.
The first day she was in my class, we talked about how she felt about school. Mia had had very negative 
experiences in school, which colored her outlook on almost everything else in her life. When I inquired about her 
interests, I made progress. Sometimes our conversation went well. Sometimes it drove me mad. But I refused to 
give up on her — or myself.
While living on my own, I would eat at K&W Cafeteria at least twice a week. There I made a 
conversation with Ms White, who served the side dishes and called me “Sugar”. She asked about my day as she 
dished out my mashed potatoes. One frustrating day, I told her about Mia — the Mia who did not value school, who 
disrupted (扰乱) my classroom, and who hated everything and everybody. Ms White, a wise woman, advised me to 
bring Mia in to see her during the dinner rush.
The next evening when we arrived at K&W, Ms White looked at Mia and said, “Help you?”
Mia ordered the meal.
Ms White said, “I heard about you. I heard a lot about you. Do you want to be me one day?”
Mia was shocked. “Uh, no.”
“Then you need to start doing what you’re supposed to do in school because people like me never had that 
chance. So don’t waste it.”
Then she served up Mia’s favorite green beans and mashed potatoes, and I gave Ms White a secret wink (眨
眼). It was the first time that I had ever seen Mia speechless.
The experience at K&W Cafeteria marked a turning point in her life.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150 左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
As weeks passed, Mia’s progress became evident in the classroom.
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After fourteen years of being a teacher; I encountered a familiar face at a teacher training session. 
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