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专题 04 读后续写精彩结尾及主题升华仿写（讲义）原卷版
目录
01—首尾呼应法仿写 P1
02—画面定格法仿写 P 2
03—主题升华法仿写 P 4
04—结尾高频句式仿写 P 5
句式一：From then on…+表示行动或决心的句子 P 5
句式二：Only+状语/Never…/Not until…/Had it not been for…+did he…(倒装句) P 5
句式三：It is/was+被强调部分+that…（强调句型） P 6
句式四：It dawned on sb/It occurred to sb/It turned out that…（It 形式主语） P 6
句式五：现在分词/过去分词短语，sb did sth…（非谓语作状语） P 6
句式六：With sb doing, sb. did…（with 复合结构营造气氛） P 7
读后续写精彩结尾及主题升华精炼篇
2024·新课标 I&II 卷 P 7
2025·八省联考卷 P 8
读后续写精彩结尾及主题升华精讲篇
01—首尾呼应法仿写
首尾呼应式结尾，是指续写文章与材料原文开头相呼应，采用与原文前后逻辑一致、主题一致的结尾
方式，不仅能够增加叙述的连贯性，而且加深了读者对故事情节和人物感受的共鸣，起到深化主题，画龙
点睛的效果。
【示例】叙述作者的母亲很健忘，一家自驾旅游去祖父母所居住的地方，途中发生了一些有趣的事情。
故事开头：I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother--
loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. 我有一个有趣的童年，充满了惊喜和娱乐，都是因为我的母亲
——可爱，却心不在焉，健忘。
续写结尾：Despite mom's being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice mom. 尽管妈妈
总是心不在焉，健忘，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈。
【仿写1】(2024·新课标I&II卷)
梗概：作者在旅途中匆忙搭乘出租车前往车站赶去布拉格的车取钱遭遇困难遇到好客的出租车司机冈特。
故事开头：I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. 我在九月一个寒冷、潮湿、难
忘的夜晚遇到了冈特。
续写结尾：_____________________________________________________________________________
每当我想起那个又冷又湿的夜晚，我都感到很幸运能有一个像冈特这样心地善良的朋友。
【仿写2】(2021·新课标I&II卷)
梗概：讲述双胞胎为了献给母亲一份美味早餐，自己动手做起饭餐，但是不幸的是他们连连失败的故事。
故事开头：The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’sDay. 想到他们为母亲节准备的惊喜，这对双胞胎兴奋不已。
续写结尾：_____________________________________________________________________________
妈妈吻了吻他们，灿烂的笑 “亲爱的谢谢你们。真是个大惊喜！”
【仿写3】 (2020·新课标卷)
梗概：善良的Meredith想帮助一个贫困家庭。孩子们想出一个主意--制作爆米花，让Bernard去卖爆米花。
故事开头：The Meredith family lived in a small community…Many of their families were struggling to make
ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges. 梅雷迪思一家住在一个小社区里……他们
的许多家庭都在努力维持生计。人们试图互相帮助以应对挑战。
续写结尾：_____________________________________________________________________________
伯纳德拿着钱，非常感动，一句话也说不出来。即使是一个小小的善举也能让世界变得更美好。
【仿写4】(2018·浙江6月卷)
梗概：讲述的爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场游玩迷路的故事。
故事开头：It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me
on a trip to the Wild West. 那是夏天，我爸爸想像以前一样请我去度假。 他决定带我去西部荒野之旅。
续写结尾：_____________________________________________________________________________
我从来没有过这么刺激又危险的假期。那次去西部的特别旅行，深深地印在我的脑海里。
【仿写5】(2020·浙江7月卷)
梗概：讲述作者和妻子前往被称为“北极熊之都”的加拿大丘吉尔镇拍摄北极熊遇到攻击最后得救的故事。
故事开头：One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research
camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. 一年秋天，我和妻
子艾莉只有一个目标：拍摄北极熊。我们当时住在“世界北极熊之都”外的一个研究营地——加拿大曼尼托
巴省的丘吉尔镇。
续写结尾：_____________________________________________________________________________
在回家路上，我检查了相机，惊讶发现照片如此清晰生动比以前拍的任何照片都好。
02—画面定格法仿写
画面定格法，指的是通过描写具体的环境和人物的动作，构建出一个情感丰富且富有画面感的故事结
尾，从而增强故事的视觉效果，加深情感共鸣，提高故事的吸引力。
第一步：确定动作和情感基调
根据情节发展，确定此刻的人物动作和情感基调，如喜悦、感动、释然等。
第二步：选择合适的环境描写
选择一个能够增强当前情感基调的环境背景，例如自然元素、天气状况或具体场景。
第三步：整合环境与人物动作
将环境描写与人物动作有机结合，形成一个完整的画面。通过细致的描写，使读者能够感受到人物的内心
世界和情感波动，增强故事的吸引力和共鸣。【示例】
普通结尾句：She was happy to receive the trophy.
画面定格法：
1.确定动作与情感基调：轻抚奖杯，喜悦；
2.选择合适的环境描写：温暖的阳光；
3.整合环境与人物动作：阳光照在奖杯上，她轻轻抚摸奖杯。
画面定格结尾句： She touched the trophy lightly as it caught the glow of the sun outside the
window.
【仿写1】续写结尾：
His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The
moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora's hand. Never had Dora
received such a gift. _______________________________________________________________________
他的努力得到了回报！鲁本紧紧地握着汽水罐，冲向商店去买胸针。他一拿到那枚漂亮的胸针，就冲
进前门，把它放在朵拉的手里。多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。她高兴得说不出话来，紧紧地把儿子抱
在怀里，眼泪涌了出来。（母子相拥感人的画面）
【仿写2】续写结尾：
The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face, “No.” God felt a bit relieved and said, “Tomorrow you can become
human again.” But she shook her head and said, “No, I want to be a butterfly for the rest of my life...” Then the
butterfly would stay together with her lover forever. ____________________________________________
蝴蝶擦干了脸上的眼泪，说，“不。”上帝松了一口气，说。“明天你就可以变回人类了。”但她摇
了摇头说，“不，我想做一辈子蝴蝶... ”然后蝴蝶就会永远和她的爱人在一起。在山顶上，她似乎和他们
一起快乐地享受着日出和日落。（日出和日落的画面）
【仿写3】续写结尾：
Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet ground is cold under foot.
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潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都
包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。（雨后清新的画面）
【仿写4】续写结尾：
The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street.
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我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，缓缓落
到到地面。（描写落叶的画面）
【仿写5】续写结尾：
The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day
had become one beautiful moment.
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天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎
明已经来临。（黎明到来的画面）03—主题升华法仿写
升华主题要求写作者不仅在故事结束时总结经历，而且能将经历或情节中的深层次意义提炼出来，由
浅入深从故事引出道理，赋予故事更广泛的影响力和启示。
第一步：总结故事结局
总结故事情节和结局，并思考故事中的关键事件和结局带来的直接影响。
第二步：提炼深层次意义
从故事结局中提炼出深层次的意义和主旨，这部分通常与主题相关。
第三步：衔接结局与意义
将故事结局与提炼出的深层次意义巧妙衔接，形成一个完整的结尾。
【示例】
普通结尾句：He received a big round of applause from the audience.
主题升华法:
1.总结故事结局：在舞台上赢得掌声;
2.提炼深层意义：战胜恐惧就能获得胜利;
3.升华衔接结局：赢得掌声→提升自信→相信自己能战胜所有恐惧。
主题升华后的结尾句：
His courageous speech not only earned him applause but also developed a newfound confidence
within him , showing him that he could overcome any fear .
【仿写1】续写结尾：(历险脱困类)
普通结尾：She managed to survive the desert and find her way back to safety.
续写思路：生存下来→展现坚韧和智慧→相信坚韧和智慧能带来希望
主题升华后：_____________________________________________________________________________
在沙漠中幸存下来并找到回到安全地带的路，这向她表明，即使在绝望的情况下，韧性和智慧也能带来希
望。
【仿写2】续写结尾：(人与动物类)
普通结尾：The wounded bird he cared for finally flew back to the forest.
续写思路：鸟飞回森林→建立联系→相信人与动物的关爱可以跨越物种界限
主题升华后：_____________________________________________________________________________
当他培育的鸟飞回森林时，他明白了对动物的同情可以建立超越物种界限的纽带。
【仿写3】续写结尾：(家庭亲情类)
普通结尾：Our family trip to the mountains was full of laughter and bonding.
续写思路：愉快的时光→感受到亲情的力量→相信亲情的温暖和力量是无尽的
主题升华后：_____________________________________________________________________________
我们全家上山旅行时的笑声和亲密感提醒我，无论我们在哪里，家庭牢不可破的纽带都为我们提供了无尽
的温暖和力量。
【仿写4】续写结尾：(个人成长类)
普通结尾：He felt a sense of accomplishment after finishing the marathon.
续写思路：完成马拉松→获得成就感→相信坚持和努力可以带来巨大的成就感和潜力
主题升华后：_____________________________________________________________________________Crossing the marathon finish line filled him with a profound sense of accomplishment , showing him
that perseverance and determination could unlock his true potential .
【仿写5】续写结尾：(助人为乐类)
普通结尾：After a long day of volunteering, I felt tired but happy to have made a difference.
续写思路：志愿服务→感到快乐→相信助人为乐带来内心的满足和幸福感
主题升华后：_____________________________________________________________________________
经过漫长的一天的志愿者工作，我感到很累，但也深感满足，因为我知道善意的行为会给给予者和接受者
带来巨大的快乐和满足。
04—续写结尾高频句式仿写
句式一：From then on…+表示行动或决心的句子
【示例】从那时起，我在我的车里放了一个千斤顶（jack）和一些常见的工具。当我在路上遇到需要帮助
的人时，我会尽力像家人一样帮助他们。
From then on, I placed a jack and some common tools in my car. When meeting people in need on the road, I
would try my best to help them like the family.
【 仿 写 1 】 _____________________________________________________________________________, I
always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that the Mexican family offered me.
从那天起，每次我遇到需要帮助的人，我总是联系他们，希望把墨西哥家庭给我的善意传递给我。
【仿写2】_____________________________________________________________________________ Just as
a saying goes: “Rose given and fragrance in hands. ”
从那时起，我就决定把“爱”传递给别人。正如一句谚语所说：“赠人玫瑰，手留余香。”
【仿写3】_____________________________________________________________________________Only in
this way, could more and more people help each other. (2020·新课标卷)
从那时起，伯纳德就决定去帮助那些需要帮助的人。只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。
【仿写4】_____________________________________________________________________________Only in
this way can we live in harmony with nature. (2023·浙江1月卷)
从那以后，我总是远离野生动物。只有这样，我们才能与自然和谐相处。
【仿写5】_____________________________________________________________________________, but I
also knew the truth--fear never builds the future, but hope does. (2022·新课标I&II卷)
从那时起，我不仅能很好地写作，而且我知道了真相——恐惧永远不会造就未来，但希望会。
句式二：Only+状语/Never…/Not until…/Had it not been for…+did he…(倒装句)
【示例】讲述了作者和杰西卡一起去远足，他们蹚水穿过池塘，作者陷了进去，作者内心以为自己可能熬
不过去了，但是勇敢克服恐惧，最终得到救援。
Finally, I was saved out of the quicksand. Tears welling up in our eyes, Jessi c a and I thanked the team with
all our hearts gratefully . Only then did I realize that bravery can overcome any difficulties .
【仿写1】直到通过这次经历我才意识到，只有勇敢和决心才能克服一切困难。
_____________________________________________________________________________
【仿写2】只有当我们打开心扉，我们才能沐浴在阳光中享受爱的温暖。
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【仿写3】我从来没有想到，一个随意的善举会给他人注入如此巨大的力量，并改变他们的生活。_____________________________________________________________________________
【仿写4】如果不是因为这次活动，他们就不会意识到他们应该通过合作和培养团队精神来实现自己的目
标。
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【仿写5】(2023·新课标I&II卷) 我刚听到我的名字，一阵狂喜就猛烈地席卷了我。
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句式三：It is/was+被强调部分+that…（强调句型）
【示例】 三个孩子在有限的条件下，通过爆米花制作，帮助了另一个想要帮助父母维持生活的小男孩
Bernard的故事。在社会经济萧条的环境下，大家仍保留自己的善良。
All this was because of John’s bright idea, and the way he carried it out . It was small acts of kindness that
made a big difference. Hard work pays off!
【仿写1】正是这种独特的经历使我理解了我们所面临的任何困难，我们不能放弃我们的希望
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【仿写2】(2024浙江1月卷)正是由于这次经历，伊娃才真正理解了老子的话：千里之行始于足下。
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【仿写3】(2025八省联考卷)正是通过这次冒险，我结识了这些热情的动物救援人员，他们外表坚强，内
心温柔。
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【仿写4】(2025八省联考卷)是我的老师体贴地鼓励我，敦促我发挥自己讲故事的潜力。
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【仿写5】(2024·新课标I&II卷)正是这段难忘的经历教会了我，朋友就像一把伞，无论晴天还是雨天，他
们都会一直在你身边。
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句式四：It dawned on sb/It occurred to sb/It turned out that…（It形式主语）
【示例】多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们不放弃希望，就总有办法摆脱困境。
What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any dilemma as long as we
never give up hope .
【仿写1】我突然想到，我父亲教我的宝贵的一课肯定会指引我未来的道路。
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【仿写2】我突然意识到，一瞬间的善意对另一个人来说意义重大，一个简单的举动就能让世界变得更好。
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【仿写3】这证明是一次有益的经历，从中不仅收获快乐，而且认识到努力的价值。
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【仿写4】(2023·新课标I&II卷)我突然意识到，虽然这很艰难，但没有什么比成就感更有价值的了。
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【仿写5】(2025·浙江1月卷)原来“窃贼”是手表的主人，所以这名男子在证明自己拥有这些物品后被警
方释放。
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句式五：现在分词/过去分词短语，sb did sth…（非谓语作状语）【示例】看到那架直升机，简觉得它好像在用雷鸣般的声音安慰她,“你的坚持是有回报的。”
Seeing the helicopter , Jane felt as if it had been comforting her with its thunderous voice, "Your persistence
pays off."
【仿写1】再次看到字母表，我觉得它好像在鼓励我并说,“学习永远不会太晚”。
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【仿写2】看到手提箱，亚瑟觉得好像在称赞他,“干得好!”
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【仿写3】Simmons被她的朋友深深地感动了，她泪流满面地向 Norwood表达了真挚的感激之情。
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【仿写4】回想起这个故事，她仍然觉得很温暖，想起了那句谚语：任何人都不能以貌取人。
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【仿写5】温暖的阳光照进窗里，我和妈妈紧紧拥抱在一起。
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句式六：With sb doing, sb. did…（with复合结构营造气氛）
【示例】阳光温暖又温柔地笼罩着她，她抬起头，脸上挂着灿烂的微笑。
With the sunlight greeting her gently and warmly, she raised up her head, wearing a shining smile on her
face.
【仿写1】清晨的阳光照进来，全家人沉浸在幸福和爱中。
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【仿写2】她含着感激的泪水，不停地表达感激之情:“太感谢你了!”
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【仿写3】随着时间的流逝，这只曾经可怜脆弱的小猫渐渐活了过来，变得勇敢而坚强。
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【仿写4】温暖的阳光照进来,他们拥抱在一起,感到被原谅,被爱和被信任。
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【仿写5】两人互相搀扶着,站起身来,朝家走去,夕阳在地上投下两个长长的、肩并肩的影子。
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读后续写精彩结尾及主题升华精炼篇
【典例01】（2024·新课标I&II卷）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成
一篇完整的短文。
I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take
a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched
down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran
like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I
thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I
was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted
for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big
smile on his face. "We made it," he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my
Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of
helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash
machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the
message: "Out of order. Sorry."
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
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Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.
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【典例02】(2025·八省联考卷)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a
documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the
country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would
go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt
restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the
area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and
room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was
on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers — very big,
tough-looking bikers.
I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman
all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men — all wearing insignia
(徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club — standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my
head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event?
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered
if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would besafer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意：
(1) 续写词数应为150个左右；
(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
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When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
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