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精彩结尾1 画面定格——人物动作的画面定格
精彩结尾 2 画面定格——特殊寓意的写景画面
精彩结尾3 对话结尾
精彩结尾 4 主题升华
精彩结尾5 结尾留白
精彩结尾6 首尾呼应
精彩结尾01：画面定格——人物动作的画面定格
01
They stood there for a moment, side by side, waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it. Then
the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother. And slowly, almost reluctantly, she placed her arm
with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother’s shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge.
她们并肩站在那里，等待着节日的浪潮，等待着她们在浪潮中的位置。然后女儿扫了一眼，立刻注视着她
的母亲。慢慢地，几乎是不情愿地，带着明显不习惯的爱她把胳膊放在她母亲的肩膀上，轻轻地引导她回
到洪水中。
02
His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he
got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora’s hand. Never had Dora received
such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
他的努力得到了回报！鲁本紧紧地握着汽水罐，冲向商店去买胸针。他一拿到那枚漂亮的胸针，就冲进前
门，把它放在朵拉的手里。多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。她高兴得说不出话来，紧紧地把儿子抱在怀
里，眼泪涌了出来。
03
The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face，“No.” God felt a bit relieved and said，“Tomorrow you can become
human again.” But she shook her head and said, “No, I want to be a butterfly for the rest of my life...” Then the
butterfly would stay together with her lover forever. On the top of the mountain, she seemed to enjoy the sunrise
and the sunset happily with them.
蝴蝶擦干了脸上的眼泪，说，“不。”上帝松了一口气，说。“明天你就可以变回人类了。”但她摇了摇
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】头说，“不，我想做一辈子蝴蝶... ”然后蝴蝶就会永远和她的爱人在一起。在山顶上，她似乎和他们一起
快乐地享受着日出和日落。
读后续写精彩结尾 02：画面定格——特殊寓意的写景画面
01
The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had
become one beautiful moment. Dawn had come.
天空像是十亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经
来临。（黎明到来的画面）
02
Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean, bestowing a golden path from the shore to the
horizon.
黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。（黎明到
来的画面）
03
The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded through it, the sunset like orange paint on a blue
canvas.
当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。（美好日落时的画面）
04
The lingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly falling night，resembling a pitch-black curtain draped
over the sky.
逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。（日落时的画
面）
05
The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night bringing forth stars that shone and hung in
the blackness. The never ending blackness consumed everything.
被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描
写夜空的画面）
06
Looking up, I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree in the distance glisten
gently as it reflected the sun's rays. My consciousness ebbed away with the heat. I took a few blinks
before I landed with a thud.
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。
我的意识随着热度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，恢复了知觉。（特殊寓意）
07
Dotted with glittering stars, the sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality.
缀满星光的天空，午夜的蓝色，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。（神话般美丽的夜空画面）
08
The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.
雨水打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。 （雨水来临的画面）
Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet ground is cold under foot. A dense earthly sweet smell rises
from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.
潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在
它柔软的怀抱里。（雨后清新的画面）
09
The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street. Occasionally, one would fall past me,
lightly swaying as the air gently carried it to the ground.
我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，缓缓落到到地
面。（描写落叶的画面）
读后续写精彩结尾 03：对话结尾
01
Chester said his father told him he had tried to search for him and his brother, but both brothers had
changed their last names. “He does remember me and my older brother and he told me that he’s been
looking for us ever since we lost contact,” he said. Chester said his brother has since flown to
Colombia to be reunited with Urrea as well. When asked how the reunion with his father will change his
life, Chester said, “I got family everywhere, so it might lead to many more trips now.”
Chester 说他父亲告诉他，他曾试图寻找他和他哥哥，但两兄弟都改了姓。“他确实记得我和我哥哥，他
告诉我，自从我们失去联系以来，他一直在找我们，”他说。Chester 说他哥哥也飞去哥伦比亚和 Urrea
团聚了。当被问及与父亲的团聚会如何改变他的生活时，Chester 说，“我的家人无处不在，所以现在可
能会有更多的出行。”
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What was most fascinating about the reunion is that Shavi also moves others. Nina’s family had moved
to a bigger apartment. “I’ve heard amazing stories about dogs’ loyalty, but I never imagined this sort
of thing would ever happen to me. Even now, I can hardly believe this dog traveled such a long distance
to find us，” said Nina，“I would never give this kind of friend away again. I never grow tired of
repeating this—animals are the most devoted and loving creatures. They need our love and care.”
这次重聚最吸引人的地方在于，沙维也打动了其他人。妮娜的家人搬到了一个更大的公寓。”我听说过
狗狗忠心耿耿的故事，但我从没想过这种事会发生在我身上。即使是现在，我也很难相信这只狗走了这么
远的路来找我们，”妮娜说，“我再也不会放弃这样的朋友了。我总是不厌其烦地重复这句话——动物是
最忠诚和最可爱的生物。他们需要我们的爱和关心。”
03
Her husband spoke to the director of Heightvale, Dolores Haworth. Soon she offered him a job working
for the company. She said，“He just had a brilliant working attitude and is definitely the type of
employee we are looking for. I was told, ‘If he does this for free, imagine his jobs if he was being
paid. ’I met him and he was a lovely and polite young man and he has already started working for
us.”
她丈夫和 Heightvale 的主管 Dolores Haworth 谈过了。很快她就给了他一份为公司工作的工作。她说，
“他的工作态度很好，绝对是我们要找的那种员工。有人告诉我，‘如果他这么做是免费的，想象一下他
的工作是有报酬的。’我见过他，他是个可爱又有礼貌的年轻人，他已经开始为我们工作了。”
04
They hung all the things back to the wall. Jack asked Paisley, “Are you really willing to lead a tough
life with me？” She patted away the ashes on hands and looked at the walls with loads of stuff on
them satisfactorily, saying，“Yes! For me，it is not a suffering to live.”
他们把所有的东西都挂回墙上。杰克问佩斯利: “你真的愿意和我一起过艰难的生活吗? ”她拍拍手上的
骨灰，满意地看着墙上挂满东西的墙，说: “是的！对我来说，活着不是一种痛苦。”
读后续写精彩结尾 04：主题升华
01
Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model. To me there is none other than my mom. She
has beauty, brains, and one of the best hearts I know. Without her in my life, I would have no idea
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】whether I can be a famous dancer. Someday, when I am older and have children of my own, I hope I
can be just as great a parent as my mom.（母爱的深远影响）
每个人都有一个榜样。对我来说，不是别人，正是我妈妈。她很漂亮，很聪明，而且是我认识的最用心的
人之一。如果没有她，我不知道我能不能成为一个著名的舞者。有一天，当我长大了，有了自己的孩子，
我希望我能成为像我妈妈一样伟大的父（母）亲。
02
I am extremely unhappy about it. I think money doesn’t equal happiness. And free life style also
doesn’t equal happiness. The real happiness is that everyone loves each other, and does everything
useful for our society. Most of my classmates support me. But some of them think money is everything.
In my opinion, money can’t take the place of everything, such as your life, your time and your
happiness. (表达自己的价值观）
我对此非常不高兴。我觉得金钱不等于幸福。自由的生活方式也不等于幸福。真正的幸福是每个人都彼此
相爱，为我们的社会做一切有益的事情。大多数同学都支持我。但有些人认为钱就是一切。在我看来，金
钱不能代替一切，比如你的生活，你的时间和你的幸福。
03
“Two reasons account for that you won，” the teacher answered. “First, you’ve almost mastered one
of the most difficult throws in all of judo. Second, the only known defense for that move is for your
opponent to grab your left arm. It is your biggest weakness that makes you win the match. As a proverb
says, ‘Every coin has two sides.’ Making full use of your strength is your achievement. Please
remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble. God is fair to everyone.” (借用名言警
句来升华主题）
“有两个原因可以解释为什么你赢了，”老师回答。“首先，你几乎掌握了柔道中最难的一个动作。其次，
这个动作唯一已知的防御方法，就是让你的对手抓住你的左臂。这是你最大的弱点，让你赢得比赛。正如
谚语所说，‘每枚硬币都有两面。’充分利用你的力量就是你的成就。请记住，在任何情况下，你都不要
放弃，尤其是遇到麻烦的时候。上帝对每个人都是公平的。”
读后续写精彩结尾 05：结尾留白
01
While she wrapped them, I took a deep breath and asked Joy, “Do you have dinner plans?” I explained that I’d like
to wait a bit before I went back to the hospital – to give Grace and her husband some time alone with baby. “Would
you be interested in joining me in a bite to eat?” I asked. “I’d love to,” she replied, her eyes sparkling like
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】diamonds. And, this was the beginning of the end to my months of heartbreak following Betsy’s death.（故事结尾
留白，给予读者想象空间）
当她把它们包起来的时候，我深吸了一口气，问 Joy：“你晚餐有安排吗? ”我解释说我想等一会儿再回医
院——让Grace 和她丈夫有时间单独和孩子在一起。“你有兴趣和我一起吃点东西吗? ”我问。“我很乐
意，”她回答，她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。而且，这是我在 Betsy 死后几个月心碎的结束的开始。
02
The beggar hesitated for a moment, then he decided to open it. He declared aloud, “Who cares? He wanted me to
have it anyway. I might as well enjoy it now.” With that, he unwrapped the white tissue paper, but to his surprise,
there was no hard rock candy inside. Instead, into his fingers fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dollars.
乞丐犹豫了一会儿，然后决定打开它。他大声宣布: “谁在乎呢？不管怎样，他还是想让我拥有它。我还不
如现在就享受呢。”说着，他打开了白色的纸巾，但令他惊讶的是，里面没有硬糖。相反，一颗价值数千
美元的闪亮的白珍珠掉进了他的手指里。
读后续写精彩结尾 06：首尾呼应
01
2017年浙江高考题
开头：I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with suprises and amusements, all because of my mother--
loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange faimly trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about
her.
结尾：Despite mom's being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice mom. 尽管妈妈总是心不
在焉，健忘，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈。
02
2018年浙江高考题
开头：It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a
trip to the Wild West.
结尾：Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply
engraved in my mind. 我从来没有过这么刺激又危险的假期。那次去西部的特别旅行，深深地印在我的脑海
里。
03
2016年浙江高考题
开头：A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.
资料收集整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】结尾：What a funny day. Arthur couldn't stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious experience. 多
么有趣的一天啊，每当亚瑟回想起这次欢乐的经历，他就忍不住笑个不停。
04
2020年浙江高考卷
原文结尾：
A few minutes later, the helicopter arrived. As we were lifted into the air, we saw the stubborn bear was already
heading back to our camp. When Elli and I got home and developed our pictures, we noticed this bear had broken
an important tooth. Like humans, polar bears feel pain, have emotions, and can be afraid. Elli and I learned our
lesson: beware of a bear with a toothache.
【2021新高考1卷】
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day.
How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French
toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff
knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They
decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the
French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into
the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going
smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna
threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it
cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge
boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the
stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But
Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she
caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
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