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续写故事的情节与情感分析
【要点释义】
读后续写故事的情节分析框架
【什么是情节】
情节是事件的形式系列或语义系列，它是故事结构中的主干、人物、环境的支撑点，
情节的类型包括线型、非线型、转换型、范畴型情节。其中，线型又称故事型，是情节的
形式分类，它标明情节发展的轨迹，显示情节的组织关系，线型情节又分为单线、复线和
环型三种子类型。单线顾名思义指只有单一线索的情节类型，多以一个单一连贯的故事为
主，一般情节紧凑，人物有限，结构简单。童话故事、民间故事和大部分短篇小说均属于
这一类。非线型情节类型是相对于线型情节而言的，是对传统的故事情节的一种冲击，非
线型情节的趋势之一就是情节的淡化。情节淡化主要有以下几种基本特征：一是叙事文中
会打乱时间顺序和因果关系，从而淡化人物和情节；二是情节平淡、朦胧乃至支离破碎，
故事成自然状态，在情节淡化中，作品会有意无意地放弃“序幕、开端、发展、高潮、结
局、尾 声”的情节模式，不以高潮和悬念取胜，叙述的只是故事的自然流程；三是故事中
非动作因素比重增大，故事充满各种议论和感觉。
读后续写是语言模仿与创造性使用的有机结合，是语言理解与产出交互协同、相互促
进的结果，有助于激发学生的想象力、创造力，达到以读促写、以写促读的外语学习效果
读后续写的阅读材料一般以叙事性文本为主，故事情节多有曲折，故事线索清晰，逻辑性
强。目前学生在读后续写中存在的问题主要有续写情节偏离主题、续文结构松散无序、语
言知识不足以表达思想等。情节在读后续写中占 据十分重要的地位，一个好的情节会让人
产生情感共鸣与价值认同。然而，在续写过程中，学生往往会出现续写情节偏离主题、隐
性话语（伏笔）未能回应、内容单薄、因果不清、时空混乱、角色引 入失当、结局模糊与
价值升华缺失等现象，表明他们缺乏情节设置的基本策略。长此以往， 学生难免会产生读
后续写的畏难情绪 。为此，熟悉并使用读后续写的情节设置策略是考生取得读后续写成功
的关键因素之一。
【续写中的情节】
情节是叙事性文本的构成要素之一，由一系列相互关联的事件构成，是叙事性文本中
最为典型、最为生动的内容。解读叙事性文本，不仅应抓住情节的起因、发展、高潮、结
局，更应抓住情节的内在冲突、矛盾等。一方面，高考续写内容主要集中在情节的高潮和
结局部分。此部分反映个体经验及思想上的困惑 与冲突、危机的出现或转折、矛盾冲突以某种方式得到解决及事件的最终结局。因而，合理的续写情节应包括矛盾冲突、危机转折
问题 解决和最终结局。另一方面，高考读后续写不是独立存在的，它是已有叙事情节的延
续，这就要求学生在主题、情感、人物和事件等方面与已有情节保持一致 。读后续写中，
学生可以利用如下步骤进行故事的情节分析及设置：
1.研读续写源语篇，确定故事话题与主题
读后续写，首先在于“读”。“读”的一个重 要意图在于确定材料的主题 。主题也
称之为“中心思想”，是语篇的灵魂 。因此，续写情节应紧紧围绕主题这个核心，突显
主题的现实价值和情感意义。主题的确定有两条途径：一是提炼，二是感悟。认识事物是
由浅入深、由表及里的过程。我们要对已有材料进 行分析、归纳、筛选，并从不同的角度
进行比较鉴别，去粗取精，由感性到理性，这样才能提炼 出事物的本质和深刻的主题 。
感悟来自苦思 而产生的灵感 。苦思的过程就是对材料信息 进行去伪存真、由表及里的感
悟过程。主题始终蕴藏着作者的意图或价值取向。主题一般包括中心内容与价值取向两个
方面。中心内容是文章所负载的信息 。价值取向是作者想要通过作品传达的思想。作者可
能会用标题、一个词、一句话或一段话呈现主题，而学生需要敏锐地获取这些关键信息以
提炼出主题及作者的价值取向 。一般来说，作者的价值取向包括历史意义、伦理意义、人
生意义、现实价 值、情感价值等。
2.寻找语篇的隐性话语，发现隐藏在故事背后的问题
隐性话语（隐性话语（伏笔））是上文看似无关紧要的事或物，对下文将要出现的人
物或事件预先作出的某种提示或暗示。隐性话语（伏笔）有以下三种作用：为故事的展开
服务，给予读者暗示；制造悬念，提高读 者继续阅读的兴趣；强调伏线必须有始有终，
前文的迹象提示必在后文中体现 。阅读材料中的隐性话语（伏笔）在续写部分得以体现，
才能使得续 文情节合情合理，即学生在续写中要遵循“寻找隐性话语（伏笔）— 回应隐
性话语（伏笔）”的写作规则 。然而，隐性话语（伏笔）经常零星散落在试题材料中，不
易发觉 。有 时，试题材料中看似“闲笔”之处却是重要的伏笔信息。学生如何才能精准
地找出“潜伏”在 试题材料中的隐性话语（伏笔）？ 通过梳理历次高考读后 续写试题材
料，我们发现，隐性话语（伏笔）通常体现在特 定的人、物(事件)、语言、情感、主人公
期待和 反常情境六个方面 。通过关注这六个方面， 我们就能找到隐性话语（伏笔），进
而通过回应隐性话语（伏笔）来设置合理的情节。需要注意的是，试题材料中 可能会有很
多隐性话语（伏笔），而续写内容不可能回应 所有隐性话语（伏笔），这就需要学生选取
有助于推动情 节发展或能突显试题材料价值取向的隐性话语（伏笔）来 设置情节 。例如，以 2021 年6月浙江卷读后续写试题的隐性话语（伏笔）及其回应为例进行详细阐述：
【物(事件)】
隐性话语（伏笔）：
①My dad earned money to pay family expenses from age 14.
②I didn’t really understand his world.
③ I thought that I would surpass anything he had accomplished after high school gradua-
tion.
④I planned to do with the pay as I wished.
⑤I wasn’t interested more work.
⑥I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.
⑦ the truck
回应：
①He exerted all his energies to support the family without any bitter words.
② I now understand all the efforts my dad put into the family.
③I would never surpass what my dad did for the family due to my little responsibility
tak- en for the household.
④ I decided to contribute all my money to mend the truck instead of buying a new
basket- ball.
⑤That night, before I went to bed, I decided to continue my work if I could because I
learned the true meaning of growing up.
⑥⑦My parents had intended to fix the bro- ken truck but couldn’t get enough money to
afford it.
通过梳理试题材料中人、物(事件)、语言、 情感、主人公期待及反常情境等隐性话语
（伏笔）信息，我们能够快速把握叙事的情节，找到矛盾冲突的 原因，进而发现亟待解决
的问题。
3.丰富故事情节的内涵，突出问题解决的实际意义
历次高考读后续写试题材料多为遇险脱困、生活趣事等常见的个体经历，其情节主线
并不复杂 。学生三言两语便能写完情节主线内容，而这又引发了另一个问题： 学生写出
的情节徒有主线骨架，并无“血肉”。 例如，2021 年新高考I卷读后续写试题中写完
Jenna 和 Jeff做好早餐送到母亲床前，看着母亲吃完早餐的时候，是否就应该结束续写呢？
其实不然。 我们还可以从环境、心理、动作、语言和情感等五个方面着手，丰富情节内容，推动问题的解决。
4.聚焦事件发生始末，确保叙事的层次性
叙事文本就是叙述人物活 动、事件发生经过、作者抒发情感的语篇，其结 构一般遵
循以下三种顺序：
（1） 时间顺序：叙事主要用来叙述过去发生的事件，这个 事件既可以是真实的，也
可以是虚构的 。叙事的特点是，叙事中事件发生的时间顺序就是事件实际发生的时间顺序
如果叙述的时间发生改变，那么叙述的事件也会发生相应改变 。例如：
事件一：On the way home full of excitement, I thought about how to make use of the
“huge”sum of money.“I need a new football in the future.”I whispered to myself. Approaching my
house, I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old truck of my family, looking sad.
事件二：On the way home full of excitement, I thought about how to make use of the
“huge”sum of money. Approaching my house, I noticed my dad and mom standing beside the old
truck of my family, looking sad.“I need a new football in the future.”
事件一是基于 2021年6月 浙江卷读后续写试题材料进行的续写，其传递的是作者可
能会改变钱的用途，将钱用于解决家里的困难 。而事件二则恰恰相反，其传递出作者即便
知道了家里的困难，仍然想买新足球的想法 。事件一、二传达的意义之所以大相径庭，原
因就在于改变了叙述的时间。
（2）空间顺序：叙事文本尤其是关于景物的叙事文本，常常会出现空间位移的现象，
这在一定程度上是 由于景物都是以一定的空间为背景的 。空间位移一般可以分为两种：
一种是以作者的位置 为中心，推向其他人或物的位置；另 一种是作者在行动中，按行动
路线所涉及的空间逐个叙事状物，即人们常说的“移步换形”。 例如：
(2018 年 6 月浙江卷读后续写 ) I knew we had gotten hopelessly lost. After
seemingly ages, there came a loud cry of my dad. As a quick response, I shouted in a
loud voice.“Dad, I’m here!”Tracing my voice, Dad finally found me and we got
reunited.
( 2021年6月浙江卷读后续写)On the way home full of excitement, I thought about
how to make use of the“huge” sum of money. Approaching my house, I noticed my
dad and mom standing beside the old truck of my family, looking sad. That night, before
I went to bed, I decided to continue my work if I could because I learned the true
mean- ing of growing up.（3）情感顺序：情感顺序指将客观事物固有的逻辑关系巧妙地组合在思想情感发展的线
索中，组成一个层次式的语篇，体现了人在认识事物过程中的情感变化与不断成长的心路
历程，以及面对 矛盾冲突时的思想转变和情感变化 。情感层次的不断提升不仅有助于推
动情节的发展、矛盾冲突的解决，更有助于突显语篇的情感价值，进一步升华主题 。例如：
( 2021 年6月浙江卷读后续写 ) From age 14, my dad earned and used it to pay family
expenses. I didn’t really understand his world either. At home, my dad said, “A job’s a big step to
growing up. I’m glad you will be contributing to the household. ”My dad’s words made me
realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished. My labors lasted about two
weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn’t interested. I decided it was not
fair that I had to contribute my money.
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. My parents had intended to
buy a new truck but couldn’t get enough money to afford it. Suddenly, I realized what I should do
my part in the family responsibilities. Hold- ing the money, I said,“Dad, here is what I got for my
work. I hope it would help. ”That night, before I went to bed, I decided to continue my work if I
could because I learned the true mean- ing of growing up.
2021 年6月浙江卷读后续写试题材料体现出作者情感 层次的不断递进和升华 。首先，
语篇描写了作者情感的第一层次---自私 。作者不理解为 何父亲从小就赚钱养家，对父亲
暗示他要将打 工赚来的钱用于补贴家用较为抵触 。两周后，作者便萌生了不愿再工作的
想法，并认为将自 己辛苦赚来的钱用于补贴家用是不公平的 。接着，语篇描写了作者情
感的第二层次---责 任 。当作者意识到父母因没有足够的钱购买 全家赖以生存的卡车而担
忧时，他主动把赚来的钱交给父母。最后，语篇描写了作者情感的第三层次---成长 。作者
决定继续工作，主动承担起一份家庭责任 。上述语篇通过情感描写的不断递进，既推动了
情节的发展，又突显了主题。
5.基于故事进展引入新角色，以合理解决矛盾冲突
续写内容中最主要的情节就是故事的高潮部分。所谓高潮就是矛盾冲突激化最激烈、
涉事各方最终角力即将分出胜负的关键节点。一旦矛盾冲突得以解决，叙事就走向结局。
在有些情形下，主人公会碰到自己无法解 决的矛盾冲突，此时就需要叙事材料中其他涉
事人或物来帮助主人公走出困境 。如果协助 主人公走出困境的其他人或物已在试题材料
中出现，我们称之为介质。介质在高考读后续 写试题中经常出现。介质就是作者安排的某
个人物或事件为下一个人物或事件的出现埋 下的隐性话语（伏笔）。如果协助主人公走出困境的人 物或事件没有出现在试题材料中，或试题材料 只是暗示这一人物或事件即将出
现，我们称之
为第三方角色 。第三方角色引入的唯一目的 就是帮助主人公脱离困境，使叙事朝着主人
所期待的结局发展 。例如，2020年7月浙江卷读后续写试题最后解决人熊大战这一矛盾
冲突的第三方角色是护林员(rangers)。护林员这个角色虽然在所给材料中并未出现，但试
题材料已对其进行了暗示“I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter
was on its way. ”。叙事情节中矛盾冲突的解决要遵循“意料之外，情理之中”的原则，
即无论作 者设计的情节多么惊险曲折，介质的回应或第 三方角色的引入必须合乎情理，
并能助力问题 的解决。
6.点明人物或故事的结局，回应源语篇的隐性话语
结局是指一系列事件的结束，包括人或物 的下场、目的的实现或失败等。叙 事的结
局是指主要矛盾冲突解决后至故事结束的阶段。在此阶段，事件最终以符合主人公 预期的
结局收尾，即便结局不符合主人公预期，那也对主人公有着重要的意义或价值。结局是建
立在开端、发展、高潮基础上的对整个故事情节所做的最后完结和交待，其不是孤立存在
的，具有不可替代性。结局若设置巧妙则 对作品的内容、主旨都具有画龙典型句式之用；
结 局若草率结束则成狗尾续貂之憾。结局的设置有虚实两种情况 。虚的结局是指作者不
直截了当告知读者事件的准确结局，而是留有 空间让读者去想象；实的结局是指作者明确
告知读者事件的结局 。例如， 在 2018 年 6 月浙江卷读后续写试题中，对于“we”能
否找到回农场的路，虚的结局可以设置为“And just when all hope seemed lost, anxious
shouts were heard in the distance with torches coming into sight. ”，实的结局则可以
设置为“Finally, Uncle Paul found us and we were back, safe and sound. ”。因此，成
功的结局只是叙事活动在时空上的暂时停止，其文本的现实价值与精神意 义由读者去想象
和阐释，从而赋予文本更长久 的生命力。
读后续写中的情感传递
【什么是抒情】
抒情是与叙事相对的概念。一般地说，抒情偏于表现作者自己的主观世界，叙事偏于
再现客观世界；抒情偏于用话语的声音组织和画面来象征性地表现感情，叙事偏于用话语
的意义来讲故事。抒情作为一种主观表现，并不脱离现实，而是对现实生活的反映与评价
感情源于对现实的感受，没有真实的生活感受，便没有真正价值的抒情。对现实感受的深
浅，又往往取决于对现实认识的深浅程度。所以抒情总是包含着对现实的反映。抒情是一种特殊的反映方式，抒情反映的对象主要是社会生活的精神方面。现实生活并不只是物质
生活，它害包括现实存在着的精神生活。文学抒情主要从一个侧面反映了特定的社会心理
精神状态与时代精神。抒情反映必带主观色彩，即情感反映了主体与对象之间的特定关系
抒情反映具有评价性，即抒情中所表现出来的赞美、向往、同情、憎恶等情感倾向都不同
程度地含有对现实的价值判断。抒情也是对现实的一种意识中的改造：通过创造性想象，
抒情主体把现实之物转化为贯注了主观情思的想象，使外在世界成为一个与内心世界协调
融洽的审美世界。
高中英语读后续写是一种将语言输出与输入紧密结合、旨在加速提高学生语言运用能
力的一种方法。读后续写的过程注重激发学生的写作热情，培养学习者写作目的意识、读
者群意识以及写作方向意识，鼓励学生进行合作交流。纵观浙江卷高考英语读后续写试题
我们不难发现，读后续写在很大程度上也是在考查学生对故事情感的感知、理解与深层推
理的能力，同时也体现了《普通高中英语课程标准（2017年版2020年修订）》（以下简
称《课程标准》）在学业质量评价的要求。
《课程标准》在“学业质量”部分指出，高中英语学业质量以学生在语言能力、文化
意识、思维品质和学习能力等方面的核心素养为基础，结合高中英语课程标准的内容以及
高中学生英语学习的进阶情况，重点描述高中学生在特定问题情境中运用英语解决问题的
能力和表现。同时，课程标准也将“学业质量水平”设置为三个水平，并明确指出“水平
二”是英语高考命题的主要依据。“水平二”对书面表达的“质量描述”如下：
表1：高中英语学业质量水平二（节选）
序号 质量描述
2-13 能在书面表达中有条理地描述自己或他人的经历，阐述观点，表达情感态度；能
描述事件发生、发展的过程；能描述人或事物的特征、说明概念；能概述所读语
篇的主要内容或续写语篇。
2-14 能在表达过程中有目的地选择词汇和语法结构，确切表达意思，体现意义的逻辑
关联性；能使用多模态语篇资源，达到特殊的表达效果。
例如， 2021年1月浙江省高考英语读后续写遵循了课程标准学业质量“水平二”2-13
所强调的对人物的经历、情感态度、事件发展的过程及特征等的表达能力的考查。这在很
大程度上引发了学生结合自己的人生经历、对家庭情感的进一步的回顾与思考。特别是在
家庭生活的重要时刻，如重大的节假日，家庭成员之间的情感的维系与表达方式等。例
如，此次读后续写的原文的第二段中的“All of us were hard at work at the kitchen
table, with my mom filming the annual event”这一句，刻画了节日来临之时家庭内部成
员关系融洽、家庭生活多彩的氛围，这就为后文以及续写中，学生该如何处理意外引发的情感变化，提供了一个思考的基础。
【续写中如何抒情】
读后续写教学需要情感培养，通过情感上 的共鸣，学生才能对给定的文章进行续写。
如果没有进行情感渗透，那么学生在学习的过程中，只是将知识和技能进行浅层的提升，
对于读后续写的认知程度只停留在完成基本任务的 阶段，没有进行情感的深层体验，这样
学生就 会缺乏对读后续写学习的整体兴趣和积极性。 情感对于教学的影响看似无用，但
是其实际的影响十分深远，可以影响到学生对课程的整体态度，而态度决定行为，行为决
定结果，如果 教师不进行情感培养，读后续写教学的效果必 定会受到影响。所以，在读
后续写教学过程中，教师不能只注重知识和能力的培养，还要关注学生的情感体验和升华
积极引导学生以开朗的心态接纳读后续写教学，从而帮助学生不断提升自身英语语言能力。
情感表达是读后续写任务解决的必要手段之一。实际上，英语读后续写源语篇中有大
量的表达情感的细节刻画。例如：
“Tom! ”she cried. “Help!”（2016年10月，浙江卷）[害怕/担忧]
If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. （2016年10月，浙江卷）
[遗憾/后悔]
Mac’s heart jumped. （2017年6月，浙江卷）[恐惧/害怕]
I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my
mother---loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful.（2017年11月，浙江卷）[开心/幸福]
“I'm going to miss you so much, Poppy, "said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his
old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions(情
绪)get the better of him.（2020年1月，浙江卷）[依依不舍]
“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such
a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don't see what he can
do.”（2020年，新高考I卷）[同情]
It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how
much it would amount to.（2021年6月，浙江卷）[坚定决心]
人物情感变化历程的自主探究示例
下面我们将结合2021年1月浙江省英语高考读后续写试题的分析为例，简要谈谈读后
续写是如何依据课程标准的评价要求、在亲情传递的过程中促进学生的思维认知能力提升
的。2021年1月浙江卷读后续写为记叙文。文章以第一人称的角度叙述了一个作者万圣节
去农场里采摘南瓜，制作万圣节南瓜灯，参与选拔赛，但是作者不知道南瓜的重量，于是
为了证明自己胜出就把头伸进南瓜，但最终作者的头卡在掏空的南瓜里面了。这篇文章以
“头试南瓜---身陷窘境---智取脑袋---分享经历”为故事主线，以“兴奋---焦虑---害怕---释
然”这条情感线为辅线，向读者呈现由窘态变趣味的故事。该续写以作者的情感变化为主
要考查角度，展现了家庭内部的日常生活乐趣，并进而通过关键词提示以及细节刻画，能
引发学生关于如下问题的思考：
1.家庭与个人需要之间的矛盾如何处理？
文章第一个提示词“pumpkin”是本文的主题词之一，全文的故事就是围绕这个词展开
的，同时这个词也预示了作者与弟弟之间的冲突产生的根源。而提示词“dad”“Jason”
与“mom”也进一步引发学生对家庭成员之间的日常的交往活动的思考。“pumpkin”与
三位家庭成员的关键词提示，能引发学生进一步思考如何在家庭生活中正确地处理个人的
需求与家庭成员之间的矛盾，从而让学生能在续写中围绕与家庭成员之间的关系处理，来
合理地展开故事的延续。
2.年长子女如何维系与弟妹之间的亲情？
文章第一段中的“In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and
sisters”、第二段中的“This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen
by my 14-year-old broher, Jason, was the winner”以及第四段中的“...with Jason helping
to support the weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest”这三处叙
述，给学生展现了作为家里的年长子女的作者，与自己的弟弟Jason之间的冲突与友爱，
进而能引发学生进一步思考：在自己深陷困境的情况下，自己的对手来帮助自己，自己该
如何应对？结合文章的家庭成员关键词提升，这一问题将直接影响续写第一段的细节刻
画：Jason能帮作者完全摆脱困境吗？Dad与Mom又有何反应呢？
3.心理落差的负面情绪该如何正确释放？
根据文章第一段最后一句中的“...as the eldest child I have an advantage”，我们可
以体会到作者对自己是家里年长的子女的优越感与自信。但是，第四段尾句中的“...my
voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space”却将这种优越感与自信完全吞没
了。那么，这一心理落差又该如何应对呢？结合续写第一段中的“...it felt much longer”
这一焦虑心态的刻画，以及续写第二段首句的新的信息“That video”，学生会进一步思考
在续写部分作者该如何通过合理的方式，释放这种负面情绪。【提升练习】
1．（2024·江西上饶·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
Crane climbed into the last remaining lifeboat. Three men got into the boat with him. They
were the ship’s captain, the cook and a sailor named Billie. For three days, the men steered the
small boat through high waves along the coast of Florida. At last, they saw land.
A long stretch of coast lay before the eyes of the men. Slowly, the land rose up out of the
mountainous sea. The men could see a small house against the sky. To the south, they could see a
lighthouse. Tide, wind and waves were pushing the lifeboat northward. The men thought someone
on land would have seen the boat by now.
The men waited and waited but nothing happened.
The waves grew stronger. They seemed always just about to break and roll over the little
boat. The coast was still far away. The sailor said: “Boys, the boat won’t live three minutes more,
and we’re too far out to swim. Shall I take her to sea again, captain?”
“Yes! Go ahead!” said the captain. The sailor turned the boat and took her safely out to sea
again.
“It’s funny those life-saving people haven’t seen us,” one of the men said.
“Maybe they think we’re out here for sport! Maybe they think we’re fishing. Maybe they
think we’re fools.”
The coast was still far away. The sun began to go down. It got dark and cold. Billie rowed,
and then Crane took his turn. They rowed and rowed through the long night. The land had
disappeared but they could hear the low sound of the waves hitting the shore. This was surely a
quiet night.
A night on the sea in an open boat is a long night. The sailor continued to row until his head
fell forward and sleep overpowered him. Then he asked Crane to row for a while. They exchanged
places so the sailor could sleep in the bottom of the boat with the cook and the captain.
Crane thought that he was the one man afloat on all the oceans in the world. The wind had a
sad voice as it came over the waves.
注意1. 续写词数应为150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para.1:Suddenly, there was a long, loud swishing(嗖嗖声) sound behind the boat and a shining trail of
silvery
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When day came, the four men saw land
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【参考范文】
Suddenly, there was a long, loud swishing sound behind the boat and a shining trail of
silver y blue. It might have been made by a huge knife. Then there was another swish and another
long flash of bluish light, this time alongside the boat. Crane saw a huge fin speed like a shadow
through the water, leaving a long glowing trail. The thing kept swimming near the boat. He noted
its speed and power. Crane woke up the men. They knew that only they could keep the boat from
sinking. And so they rowed, hour after hour, tirelessly, through the night.
When day came, the four men saw land again. They began to turn the boat toward the
beach. As the boat came closer to land, the waves got bigger and more violent. At last, a large
wave climbed into the air and fell on the small boat with great force. The boat turned over as the
men jumped into the sea. The water was like ice. Fortunately, the life-saving people rescued them
in time. People welcomed the men from the sea to the land.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述Crane和其他三个人在海上漂流并奋力求生的
故事。【要点解析】1.段落续写：
①由续写第一段首句“突然，船后面传来一阵长长的、响亮的嗖嗖声，还有一条银蓝色的
闪光痕迹。”可以预测续写第一段主要内容：蓝色的光促使他们不停地轮流划动着救生船。
②由第二段首句“天一亮，四个人又看到了陆地。”可以预测续写第二段主要内容：他们
开始把船转向海滩，最总获救。
2.续写线索：船后出现蓝色的闪光——轮流划船——再次看到陆地——朝海滩划去——最
终获救
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.看见：see/spot/catch the sight of
②.注意到：note /notice/take notice of
③.拯救：rescue/save
描述形容词类
①.巨大的： huge/giant/enormous
②.猛烈的：violent/fierce
[高分句型1].Crane saw a huge fin speed like a shadow through the water, leaving a long glowing
trail. （运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2].They knew that only they could keep the boat from sinking. （运用了that引导的
宾语从句）
[高分句型3]. As the boat came closer to land, the waves got bigger and more violent.（运用As
引导的时间状语从句）
2．（2024·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，
使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Due to my unhealthy eating habits, I became fatter and fatter after college. My good friend
Anoush was a running enthusiast. So he advised me to lose weight by running. I didn’t agree at
first until he promised to accompany me to run although he was busy with his work.
Seven years later, I got more serious about running. And I dreamed to participate in Boston
Marathon. Anoush encouraged me to realize my dream. He also said he enjoyed running too and
wanted to attend the same marathon with me. Every day we spared our time to practise hard and
did about 2 marathons a year, during which time Anoush gave me much professional guidance and
encouragement. And then one day, both of us qualified for the 2017 Boston Marathon. We wereexcited but unfortunately, several weeks before the marathon, we had a serious quarrel. Even I
swore never to talk with him in the future.
The day came. Anoush and I stood at the starting line. He said, “Good luck! You will
certainly finish the marathon.” Hearing his words, I looked at him, saying, “It’s none of your
business.”
Then we started running. I had strong mental confidence by using positive self-talk when
running distances, which has helped me finish 18 marathons. Soon, I passed Anoush.
But I struggled in the heat starting at mile 16. I felt most of my oxygen went to the muscle
in my legs and less in my brain, which made me feel a bit lightheaded and fuzzy (迷迷糊糊的). I
continually encouraged myself. “Just get to the finish, run bold, and you will win,” all phrases that
I say to myself didn’t work any more.
Gradually I felt out of breath and had to slow down my pace. As I ran down the famous last
stretch of the Boston Marathon on Boylston Street, I fell down on the ground with my legs moving
like jello (果冻).
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just then, I felt that someone picked me up.
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When Anoush and I crossed the finish line, the audience at present applauded.
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【参考范文】
Just then, I felt that someone picked me up. Turing around, I found it was Anoush who helped
me up. A wave of embarrassment swept over me and I was even at a loss at that moment. “Just
stand up and go on to run. I will keep you company.” Anoush encouraged me with a big smile on
his face. Looking into his faithful eyes, I realized that he was not cheating me and that he was
really helping me. He just forgot the quarrel between us. I stood up and began to run with him.
When Anoush and I crossed the finish line, the audience at present applauded. Without any
preparation, I was hugged by Anoush tightly. Suddenly, I felt regretful to break up with him. Then,
I mustered up my courage to say sorry to Anoush. “Thank you and I am so sorry to you, my dear
friend. I should not have quarreled with you.” “Just forget it. You know, we are good friends.”
Anoush said. I felt more than happy and lucky to have such a friend in my life. Though quarrels
between friends could not be avoided, as long as we have him/her in our mind, we would be good
friends forever.
【写作分析】本文以人物为中心展开，主要讲述作者的朋友阿努什（Anoush）一直都在陪
伴他锻炼身体进行减肥，最后两个人还一起报名参加了马拉松。但就在比赛前的几周，两
个人却因为争吵而关系破裂了。在比赛开始的时候，阿努什还鼓励作者。作者并没有理睬
他。跑到16英里的时候，作者身体感到不适。在最后一段时，作者摔倒在地。
【要点解析】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“就在那时，我觉得有人把我拉起来了。”可知，第一段可描写阿努
什帮助作者坚持跑到终点线。
②由第二段首句内容“当我和阿努什冲过终点线时，在场的观众报以掌声。”可知，第二
段可描写作者和朋友道歉并和好的事情。
2. 续写线索：帮助——完成——感谢并道歉——原谅——和好——感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①陪伴某人：keep sb company/ accompany sb
②鼓励：encourage/ support
③鼓起勇气：muster up one’s courage/ pluck up one’s courage
情绪类
①后悔的：regretful/ repentant②高兴的：happy/ glad
【高分句型1】Looking into his faithful eyes, I realized that he was not cheating me and that he
was really helping me.（由that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Though quarrels between friends could not be avoided, as long as we have
him/her in our mind, we would be good friends forever.（由Though引导的让步状语从句和as
long as引导的条件状语从句）
3．（2024·广东汕头·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
Edward and Stephen were both eighteen years old. They were so together in friendship that
they felt themselves to be brothers. They had known each other since childhood, growing up in the
same block in Liverpool.
Edward was fair and lean, while Stephen was dark and short. Edward’s brown hair was
always falling over his eyes, while Stephen wore his black hair in a natural style.
Each youngster had a dream of someday becoming champion of the world. Whenever they
had time, the boys worked out at the Fencing (击剑) Club. Early morning sunrises would find
them running along the Mersey River, wrapped in sweatshirts, with short towels around their
necks.
Edward and Stephen studied hard and dreamt positively. Between them, they had a
notebook filled with torn tickets of every fencing match they had ever attended. They each had
taken part in many elimination bouts (淘汰赛) and had won many gold medals. The difference
was in their style.
As fencers, Edward’s lean form and long reach made him better in attack, while Stephen’s
short and muscular frame made him speed y in movement. Whenever they had met in the piste (击
剑台), it had always been intense and competitive.
After a series of elimination bouts, they were informed that they were to meet each other in
the finals next month —the winner to represent the Club in the Championship Tournament.
Fencing was like any other profession. The two boys knew friendship had nothing to do
with it. But how would the competition affect their relationship? Everyday they continued to run
together along the Mersey River. However, while joking with each other, they both sensed an
invisible wall rising between them.The day before the finals, they met as usual for their daily workout. After a mile or so,
Stephen stopped.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“I think we both got something to say to each other.” Stephen
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“I think we both got something to say to each other.” Stephen said. Edward acknowledged
this with a nod. For a brief, uneasy moment, silence filled the air. “Let’s be honest with each
other,” Stephen proposed, his voice steady and resolute. Edward gazed at him, and a silent
recognition and sense of comfort exchanged between them “Absolutely! We’ve shared a bond that
goes beyond mere competition; we’re brothers,” Edward affirmed. At last they reached an
agreement that they would treat the upcoming match with intense competition and fair play. The
following day marked the arrival of the finals.
As the two went onto the piste, the audience held their breath. Edward and Stephen stood
face to face, their friendship temporarily forgotten in the heat of competition. Each fencer
displayed his own distinct talents, Edward’s precise attacks and Stephen’s swift footwork, leavingthe audience unable to guess who would come out as a winner. The boys were completely engaged
in the match, and in the final second, Stephen was narrowly defeated. In the thunderous applause
from the audience, they embraced tightly, fully aware that whoever the champion was, the true
champion was their unbreakable bond of friendship.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开。爱德华和斯蒂芬是形影不离的好友，同为18岁，有
着共同的击剑冠军梦。他们晨跑、刻苦训练，获奖无数，但击剑风格各异，一攻一守，在
剑道上竞争激烈。如今，二人将在决赛相遇，友谊面临考验，虽表面如常，内心却渐生隔
阂。决赛前最后一次训练，斯蒂芬突然停下，一切似乎到了转折点。
【要点解析】1.段落续写
①由第一段句首内容“‘我想我们都有话要对彼此说。’斯蒂芬说。”可知，第一段可以
描写二人的语言和心理活动。
②由第二段句首内容“当两人走上击剑台时，观众都屏住了呼吸。”可知，第二段可以描
写二人比赛的过程。
2.续写线索：有话要对彼此说—坦诚相待—达成协议—走上击剑台—激烈比赛—拥抱在一
起
3.词汇激活
行为类
①承认：acknowledge/recognize
②充满：fill/replete
③建议：propose/suggest
情绪类
①心神不安的：uneasy/restless
②安慰：comfort/consolation
【高分句型1】At last they reached an agreement that they would treat the upcoming match with
intense competition and fair play.( 运用了that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】Each fencer displayed his own distinct talents, Edward’s precise attacks and
Stephen’s swift footwork, leaving the audience unable to guess who would come out as a winner. (
运用了现在分词leaving作状语、who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型3】In the thunderous applause from the audience, they embraced tightly, fully aware
that whoever the champion was, the true champion was their unbreakable bond of friendship. (运
用了that引导的宾语从句、whoever引导让步状语从句)4．（2024·安徽马鞍山·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jameson Lobb, a 24-year-old investment banker from Toronto, was just one week into his
new job on Wall Street. Over the past month, he’d been settling in to the New York City apartment
he was sharing with his friend, an artificial intelligence engineer named Raphael Jafri.
Now, on Oct.4, the two were taking a quick lunchtime workout on Pier (码头) 15,
overlooking the East River, when Lobb froze. “Somebody’s in the water,” he said. Before Jafri
could respond, Lobb climbed over the rail at the edge of the pier and jumped into the cold,
polluted water without taking the time to remove his shoes. What Lobb had heard was an alarming
shout from Pier 16, nearly 50 yards away, “Help! He’s in the water!” And what he’d seen was a
person floating (漂浮), motionless.
Approaching the victim, Lobb saw that it was a middle-aged man. He was big, around 200
pounds, respectably dressed and sinking fast. He was 3 feet below the surface by the time Lobb
reached him. The rescuer dived, felt around, grasped the man and kicked upward until they both
resurfaced.
Jafri was in water now. The two friends used all their strength to float the man on his back,
even as the water threatened to overtake them. As Jafri put his arms around the man’s shoulders
and Lobb supported him, the pair struggled back to Pier 15. Their lungs cried out for air and their
muscles burned as they pushed and pulled the immobile figure through the freezing and fast-
moving water.
The man was breathing shallowly, his face pale. When at last they reached Pier 15, they
faced a new uncertainty. How to get out? The pier’s decking (甲板) stood an unreachable 10 feet
above their heads. It is unlikely for them to climb onto the pier.
Suddenly the man made a slight move, struggling confusedly.
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On the pier, a crowd had gathered.
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On the pier, a crowd had gathered. From somewhere, the onlookers produced a rope and a
life jacket, which they threw to Jafri and Lobb. The friends immediately worked the victim’s arm
through the life jacket and tied the rope around his body. With the two men pushing from below
and the crowd pulling from above, the man slowly rose until helping hands pulled him onto the
pier. Then the crowd quickly threw the rope to Lobb and Jafri, and they were able to grab on and
be pulled to safety.
As they climbed onto the pier, Lobb and Jafri were met with cheers and applause. Luckily,
the man woke up and thanked Jafri and Lobb for their bravery. They said that they had been
passing by when they saw what was happening and knew just what to do. Then they thanked the
crowd for their help. As they walked away from the pier, Lobb and Jafri knew that this was a
moment they would never forget. They had saved a life, and in doing so, they had proven that
even the smallest act of kindness could make a big difference in the world.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了詹姆森•洛布和朋友在码头锻炼时，遇到了一
个人掉进水里，洛布下水救了这个人。在其他人的帮助下，救起了这个人，拯救了一条生
命。
【要点解析】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“码头上聚集了一群人”可知，第一段可描写大家一起营救落水者的
经过。
②由第二段首句内容“当他们爬上码头时，洛布和贾夫里受到了欢呼和掌声的欢迎”可知，第二段可描写男子感谢洛布和贾夫里以及他们的感悟。
2.续写线索：人群帮忙——男子获救——男子感谢——感谢人群——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①能够：be able to/be capable of
②拿出：produce/take out
③挽救：save/rescue
情绪类
①感谢：thank/show gratitude to
②善意：kindness/goodwill
[高分句型1] With the two men pushing from below and the crowd pulling from above, the man
slowly rose until helping hands pulled him onto the pier. (运用了with的复合结构)
[高分句型2] As they walked away from the pier, Lobb and Jafri knew that this was a moment
they would never forget. (运用了as引导时间状语从句)
5．（2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，
使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Scanning the court, Luis pretended to pass the ball to another teammate but finally gave it
to Nicholas. As Luis expected, Nicholas kicked hard and… GOAL! Just then, Devon walked up
angrily. “What were you DOING there, Luis?!” he yelled. Luis rolled his eyes.
Devon started playing soccer with them weeks ago. He was nice when he felt like things in
the game had gone his way. Otherwise, he would lose temper.
“Playing soccer.” Luis shrugged. “Why didn’t you pass to me? I was closer to the goal than
Nicholas.” Devon yelled again.
As the group walked in, Devon continued. Luis ignored him to avoid arguing. Nicholas
approached and began complaining about Devon’s yelling and disrespect. “What can you do about
that?” Luis asked. Nicolas said he wanted to organize a new team without Devon. Luis was upset
to hear that. Nicholas said, “It’s more fun before he started playing with us. I’ve told the other
teammates. They agreed.”
Reaching home, Luis dragged his feet into his bedroom, which confused his mom. “What’s
wrong?” She asked. Then, Luis told what happened to her. “Have any of you tried talking to
Devon about this?” She asked. “I don’t know.” Luis scratched his head.“Maybe a boundary could help. When playing soccer, how do you know whether someone
is at the right position on the court? What’s that line called?” Mom reminded. “A boundary.” Luis
murmured.
“Tell Devon whether he’s crossing a line with how he talks.” She suggested. Luis took the
advice and decided to have a try.
The next day at school, Luis found Devon and told him all the teammates liked playing
soccer with him but they didn’t like being yelled at by him.
“I don’t yell at people.” Devon immediately interrupted.
“You yelled at me the other day because I didn’t pass to you,” Luis reminded calmly. “And
you are yelling now. If you keep yelling at your teammate, we won’t play with you anymore.”
Devon was too embarrassed to speak. “Being yelled at isn’t fun but playing soccer is
supposed to be fun.” Luis said, patting Devon’s shoulder gently.
Later, during the training, Luis met Nicholas and told him what he’d told Devon.
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“Just give him another chance, okay?” Luis whispered.
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“Just give him another chance, okay?” Luis whispered. After thinking for a while, Nicholas
nodded his head and forced a smile. When they were playing, it seemed that a wave of concern
flooded over Luis. He was attentively watching Devon’s performance. Fortunately, this time,
Devon tried his best to cooperate with other teammates, and didn’t show disrespect or yell at
anyone, though sometimes the situation didn’t develop as he expected. Luis was satisfied with
Devon’s behavior, and Nicholas was surprised but happy to see Devon’s change.
As the training came to an end, Luis and Nicholas jogged towards Devon. “That was a fun
game. You’ve done a good job!” Nicholas said. Moved by Nicholas’s praise, Devon smiled and
apologized for his impoliteness in the past. Nicholas grinned at Luis, and both of them offered to
give Devon a tight embrace. Obviously, the “boundary” helped Luis find the way to include
Devon in the team. From that experience, it could be seen that respect for others and proper limits
for speech are important in becoming part of a team.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了路易斯和尼古拉斯踢球，但是比赛过程中因
为德文的表现发生了冲突，两人不欢而散。最后同意给德文一次机会，路易斯和尼古拉斯
也和好了。
【要点解析】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘再给他一次机会，好吗？’路易斯低声说”可知，第一段可描写
同意给德文一次机会，观察他的表现。
②由第二段首句内容“训练结束后，路易斯和尼古拉斯慢跑着向德文走去”可知，第二段
可描写两人和好，主动提出要紧紧拥抱戴文。
2.续写线索：再给德文一次机会——观察德文表现——德文合作顺利——对表现满意——
两人和好
3.词汇激活
行为类
①淹没：flood over/overwhelm
②道歉：apologize/make an apology to
③看到：see/notice
情绪类
①专注地：attentively/intently②满意：satisfied/content
[高分句型1] Fortunately, this time, Devon tried his best to cooperate with other teammates, and
didn’t show disrespect or yell at anyone, though sometimes the situation didn’t develop as he
expected. (运用了though引导让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] When they were playing, it seemed that a wave of concern flooded over Luis. (运用
了when引导时间状语从句)
6．（2024·河南信阳·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，
使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was 40 years ago. One day, Emma came back to their apartment from work and realized
that her husband, David, was extremely ill. He was throwing up and slurring (发音不清) his
words. Immediately, Emma grabbed her purse and took him by taxi to the nearest hospital, on the
Lower East Side of New York City. The minutes slowly passed as they waited to see a doctor.
They sat there for a couple of hours, and it was pretty clear that nobody was going to pay
attention to David. So they rushed to a second hospital, where they were also ignored. Emma
knew something was very wrong with David, so they went to a third hospital. As she told the
receptionist what was happening, Emma sensed the person wasn’t going to treat their case with
urgency.
Emma was on the edge of a breakdown. After three failed attempts to get help, she had
reached her limit. She started to shout in the lobby (大厅). That’s when her unsung hero appeared.
That person was a young man with dark hair and a white physician’s coat. He came to
Emma and said, “How can I help you? What’s going on here?” Emma explained what was
happening to David, and that she was afraid it was serious.
The young man said, “You know, I just got done with my neurological residency (神经系统
的实习期) up at Lenox Hill Hospital. I’ll take him in the back and look.” Within two or three
minutes, the young man came out and said, “You are absolutely right. Something is very seriously
wrong with your husband.”
The man told Emma to take her husband to Lenox Hill Hospital, and that he had called the
doctor with whom he had done his residency.
“He’ll be waiting for you,” said the young man.
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But Emma began to cry, realizing she had no way of getting there, because she didn’t have
any more cash for a taxi.
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But Emma began to cry, realizing she had no way of getting there, because she didn’t have
any more cash for a taxi. The young doctor quickly noticed her distress and offered to arrange for
a taxi, ensuring her that it would be paid for. “Don’t worry, I’ll make sure you get there safely,” he
said with kindness. Emma felt a wave of relief wash over her, knowing that her husband would
finally receive the medical attention he desperately needed.
Soon Emma and her husband arrived at the hospital. The doctor who had been waiting for
them immediately began to examine David thoroughly. Emma watched anxiously as the doctor
conducted various tests and questioned David. After a few tense moments, the doctor turned to
Emma with a serious expression. “Your husband has suffered a stroke,” he said. “We’ll need to get
him into surgery immediately.” Emma nodded, grateful for the doctor’s quick action and expertise.
She knew that without the help of the young doctor who had intervened, her husband’s conditioncould have been much worse.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开。四十多年前，艾玛下班回家发现丈夫大卫病重。艾
玛立即带他去了最近的医院，但没有得到及时诊治，接连换了两家医院情况依旧。艾玛心
急如焚，决定不再等待。在第三家医院的大厅里，她情绪崩溃大声呼救，这时一位年轻的
神经科实习医生出现了。他主动提出帮忙检查大卫，并确认病情严重，随即安排他们前往
伦诺克斯山医院，自己已联系好医生等候。这位无名英雄的及时出现，为大卫争取到了宝
贵的救治时间。
【要点解析】1.段落续写
①由第一段句首内容“但是艾玛开始哭了起来，她意识到她没有办法去那里，因为她没有
更多的钱打车了。”可知，第一段可以描写这位医生帮她打车并付钱，以便让她顺利到达
了想去的医院。
②由第二段句首内容“不久，艾玛和她的丈夫来到了医院。”可知，第二段可以描写到达
医院后一生的救治和她的感受。
2.续写线索：没钱打车—医生找车并付钱—到医院—救治—感激
3.词汇激活
行为类
①注意到：notice/perceive
②确保：ensure/guarantee
③接收到：receive/get
情绪类
①感到如释重负：feel a wave of relief/feel relieved
②焦急地，忧虑地：anxiously/worriedly
【高分句型1】The young doctor quickly noticed her distress and offered to arrange for a taxi,
ensuring her that it would be paid for. ( 运用了现在分词ensuring作状语、that引导的宾语从
句)
【高分句型2】Emma felt a wave of relief wash over her, knowing that her husband would
finally receive the medical attention he desperately needed.( 运用了现在分词knowing作状语、
that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型3】The doctor who had been waiting for them immediately began to examine David
thoroughly.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
7．（2024·黑龙江·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When John was in Grade 9, his class went on a canoeing (划独木舟) trip. Canoeing is a
water sport practiced in a light narrow boat with a paddle. It can be very dangerous, especially if
the river has rapids, a fast-flowing part of a river. Since it requires strength, balance and a lot of
skills, all the students are trained hard.
To qualify for the trip, the whole class had to be able to swim. However, John had a
problem. He weighed over 180 pounds. He had never learned to swim before, so he took
swimming lessons and worked hard for many weeks. He eventually graduated with a certificate
saying that he could swim.
John’s classmates were all glad to have him along—all except one person, Nicky. She
didn’t like him. In fact, she seemed not to like many. She was on the school water polo team. She
was a swimming star and extremely proud of herself too.
The trip went well and everyone enjoyed the day. That is, until the end of the trip when they
were heading down some rapids. Nicky had been warned over and over to wear her life jacket, but
she did not listen to others.
When they arrived at a steep valley, the speed of the water picked up. They entered some
dangerous rapids. All of a sudden, their canoes turned over. They were all thrown into the water—
all except John! He was heavy enough and somehow was not thrown into the water.
They all swam back to the canoe where John quickly pulled them in. Then, they saw
Nicky’s life jacket floating on the water. She was not wearing it when the accident happened.
When they spotted her floating on the water, she was barely conscious. She was in serious danger.
It seemed like she had hit her head on a rock. As they were approaching her, their canoes broke
loose from the tree branches they were stuck to and sent them farther away from Nicky. Everyone
in the canoes looked in horror as the current dragged Nicky away from them.
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Someone exclaimed, “we’ve got to help her!”
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Someone exclaimed, “We’ve got to help her!” Before anyone could react, a figure with a life
jacket had already jumped into the turbulent water. “It was John!” a boy shouted. He was carried
along by the rapid flow, floating up and down. He struggled against the fierce current. Thanks to
his weight and exquisite swimming skills, he managed to keep his balance. He went all out to
swim toward Nicky. Cold as the water was, John didn’t care. As the water became faster, John felt
himself being pulled under by the strong current. But he didn’t give up. With all his might, he tried
to reach out and grab Nicky’s arm. Fortunately, he made it. He clutched onto her tightly while
putting a life jacket on her. Meanwhile, other students paddled hard to reach them. Eventually,
Nicky was dragged back to the canoe. They started to perform CPR on Nicky. All the class looked
at her with anxiety.
Finding Nicky opening her eyes, everyone sighed with relief. “Are you okay?” one of them
asked gently. Nicky nodded slowly and said, “Yeah, thank you all for saving me.” Suddenly, a
voice exclaimed, “John saved all of us!” Nicky turned to look at John with deep gratitude and
said, “Thank you, John! I don’t know what would have happened to me without you. Could you
forgive me for being so rude to you?” John smiled and said, “Of course, I just did what anyone
else would have done.” At that time, Nicky realized that John wasn’t the big, slow and clumsy guyshe had always thought him to be. Actually, he was the real hero, brave and strong. It was the
unlikely hero in her eyes that saved her life. From that day on, Nicky and John became friends.
Nicky was no longer the proud and self-centered swimmer that she had been. Instead, she changed
into an easy-going girl. It was kindness and forgiveness that broke down the barrier.
【写作分析】本文是一篇记叙文，以人物为线索。John的班级要去划独木舟，为了能够参
加这次旅行，John学会了游泳。班上有个叫Nicky的女孩，她是个傲慢并以自我为中心的
游泳运动员，她不喜欢John。在划独木舟的过程中，他们遭遇了事故，所有人都掉进了水
里，除了John。John把大家救了上来。但Nicky因为不愿意穿救生衣，在水中失去了意识，
John奋不顾身把她救了上来。这件事让Nicky对John印象改观，她后来也改变了性格。
【要点解析】1. 续写线索：
①由续写第一段首句“有人惊呼：“我们得帮帮她！””可知，第一段可以描写John跳入
水中把Nicky救上来的过程。
②由续写第二段首句“看到Nicky睁开眼睛，大家都松了一口气。”可知，第二段可以描
写Nicky得知John救了自己后非常感激，她改变了对John的看法，也改变了自己以前的傲
慢、目中无人的态度。
2. 段落续写：有人惊呼要帮助Nicky——John跳入水中把Nicky救了上来——大家看到
Nicky苏醒后松了一口气——Nicky得知John救了自己后非常感动——Nicky改变了自己
3. 词汇激活：
行为类
①全力以赴：go all out to do…/spare no effort to do…
②放弃：give up/quit
③抓紧：clutch onto/hold tightly
情绪类
①焦急地：with anxiety/in anxiety/anxiously/impatiently
②感激：gratitude/appreciation/thankfulness
【高分句型1】At that time, Nicky realized that John wasn’t the big, slow and clumsy guy she
had always thought him to be.(使用了that引导宾语从句、省略关系词的定语从句、不定式作
宾补)
【高分句型2】It was the unlikely hero in her eyes that saved her life. (使用了强调句)
8．（2024·河南三门峡·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。The six-year-old Lucy was the only child of her parents and they spoilt her totally. One day
Lucy’s mother, Nitya Mehta, suddenly noticed that her daughter was not ready to share anything
with her friends and that most children did not like to play with her daughter. Would Lucy be able
to make good friends and learn to share things with them? She would soon know, for Lucy was
now admitted to Class I in a proper school.
Everyone in her class admitted that Lucy was very intelligent. But she had no friends until
Rita joined her class. New to the city and too shy to make any friends, she did not mind being
taken under Lucy’s wing. At least she had someone to play with.
One day, the teacher scolded Rita for doing her sums without thinking. The little girl cried
because the whole class had laughed at her. The teacher had patiently explained how to do the
sums, but Rita was just not able to understand. Lucy told her mother about Rita crying in class.
“Why don’t you try to explain to her simply,” asked her mother, “She likes you very much and if
you teach her, she will understand.”
“Mummy, I don’t have time to waste. What can I do if she is so silly?” said Lucy. Then she
decided to tell Lucy a story of an ant and a dove. One day an ant fell into a stream. A dove picked
a leaf and let it fall into the stream close to the ant. The ant climbed onto it. A little later, a
birdcatcher came to throw a net over the unsuspecting dove. The ant knew what he was planning
and stung him in the foot. The birdcatcher yelled out in pain and the noise made the dove fly away.
“Did you understand the story, Lucy?” asked her mother, “It means that if you do a good
turn, you will only get good in return.” To this Lucy said, “What a silly story, mummy. It is for
little children, and I have grown big.” Having no other choices, Lucy’s mother decided to act
tough.
“If not, you can’t watch cartoons for a week,” said Lucy’s mother.
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“If not, you can’t watch cartoons for a week,” said Lucy’s mother. Lucy had no alternative but
to set out to help Rita. However, gradually Lucy showed her friendly and patient quality, who
spent much time teaching Rita over and again. To everyone’s great surprise, Rita understood the
sums, for Lucy knew the trick of explaining simply and logically. The teacher was pleased that
Rita had finally made it and praised her in front of the class, who received thunderous applause
from her classmates. Experiencing such an extraordinary success, Rita could hardly contain her
excitement and as Lucy’s best friend, she found a new amazing Lucy, and she understood that
Lucy was credited with all she had received.
In return, Rita hoped to present the true Lucy to her classmates. Knowing most classmates had
some misunderstanding with Lucy, Rita turned to the teacher for a special chance. The teacher’s
permission given, Rita marched to the front of the classroom and began a prepared speech, in
which she explained how she managed to master the sums and how warm-hearted, straightforward
and helpful Lucy was. She finally appealed honestly and earnestly to everyone to appreciate the
heart of gold hidden beneath Lucy’s bossy or cold mask. No sooner had Rita finished the speech
than many students cheered up and hugged Rita and Lucy tightly, after which Lucy became one of
the most popular students in the class.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了六岁的露西是家中独女，被溺爱而不愿
分享。入读小学后，她遇到新同学丽塔。丽塔因数学被同学嘲笑而哭泣，露西妈妈
建议露西帮助她，但露西拒绝。妈妈用寓言教导露西，露西却嗤之以鼻，妈妈决定
采取强硬措施。
【要点解析】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“露西的母亲说：“如果没有，你一周都不能看动画片。””可知，
第一段可描写作露西迫于无奈的情况下开始给同学丽塔辅导算术，帮助她成功理解算术。②由第二段首句内容“作为回报，丽塔希望把真实的露西呈现给她的同学。”可知，第二
段可描写作丽塔用自己的例子让同学们认识到露西宝贵的品质。
2.续写线索：辅导丽塔——取得成功——感谢——介绍露西——得到认可
3.词汇激活行为类
①除了做某事别无选择：have no alternative but to do/have no choice but to do
②帮助：help/aid
③控制：contain/control
情绪类
①惊讶：surprise/amazement
②高兴的：pleased /delighted
[高分句型1]. However, gradually Lucy showed her friendly and patient quality, who spent much
time teaching Rita over and again.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]. No sooner had Rita finished the speech than many students cheered up and hugged
Rita and Lucy tightly, after which Lucy became one of the most popular students in the class.（运
用了no sooner…than…引导的时间状语从句及部分倒装，介词+which引导的非限制性定语
从句）
9．（23-24高一下·江苏·阶段练习）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写第一
段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
No amount of begging (乞求) would change my father’s mind about getting a pet. No
matter how desperately I begged, his answer was "No! " Finally, I accepted that he was not going
to change his mind. I did the only thing that I could. I spent as much time as possible around other
people’s pets and I often spent time at a place called Best Friends, an animal shelter near my
house. Animals ended up there when their owners could no longer care for them.
Whenever I visited the shelter (收容所), I dreamed about taking one of the dogs home with
me. One day after school, I stopped off at Best Friends like I usually did. Suddenly, I saw a large,
shaggy, yellow dog standing in the corner, and when he saw me, he wagged his tail and began
whining (哀鸣).
“That’s Fenway,” Renee, the woman at the desk, said. “He whines continuously. His owners
brought him here when they moved overseas.”
“He must be lonely,” I suggested.
“Your parents won’t let you have a dog?” Renee asked. I didn’t answer, but my look musthave said everything, because then she said, “That’s too bad. These dogs need good homes and
good people to take care of them.” On my way home, I had an idea to assist shelter pets like
Fenway. I wrote a touching story as if Fenway were writing it. I told all about his family and why
he had no home, shedding light on (解释) his longing for a loving family. With the shelter
director’s approval, I proposed sharing more stories in newspapers and online to attract potential
adopters.
The next weekend, the shelter was flooded with families who wanted pets. They were all
drawn by the heartfelt stories of animals like Fenway. Fenway’s tail wagged so fast that I was
afraid it might fall off. I stood with Fenway as people admired him. His playful nature and hopeful
eyes won over many visitors` hearts, leading to a rise in adoptions.
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1. 续写词数应为80左右；
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【参考范文】Suddenly, I saw my parents walking into the shelter towards Fenway. I couldn’t believe my
eyes. Were they here to adopt a pet? My heart started to race with excitement. I wondered how this
could be happening. Maybe they had read my story and were touched by it.
I was confused why my father changed his mind. Did he really want to adopt Fenway? I
looked at him, searching for an answer. He gave me a smile and said, “We thought it was time to
give a home to a furry friend, and Fenway seemed like the perfect choice.” I was overjoyed and
ran towards Fenway, hugging him tightly. This was a dream come true.
【写作分析】本文为一篇记叙文。文章作者通过描述自己与父亲关于养宠物的争执、对收
容所宠物的关注、为帮助这些宠物而写故事并分享、以及最终父母决定收养Fenway这一
故事。
【要点解析】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然，我看见我的父母走进避难所，向Fenway走来。”以及第二
段首句内容“我不明白父亲为什么改变主意。”可知，第一段可描写作者的父母前来领养
Fenway。
②由第二段首句内容“我不明白父亲为什么改变主意。”可知，第二段可描写作者成功领
养了Fenway。
2.续写线索：作者非常想要领养一只宠物，可是作者的父亲坚决不同意——作者只能经常
前往一个动物收容所，照顾那些宠物——一次，作者在收容所看到一只叫Fenway的狗
——作者非常想要领养，但是想到态度坚决的父母，作者放弃了——作者决定在网上发帖，
为Fenway找一个有爱的领养家庭——看到这个故事后，许多人前来收容所想要领养
Fenway——就在这时，作者看到了自己的父母也来领养Fenway——作者非常激动自己终于
领养了Fenway
3.词汇激活
行为类
①想知道：wonder/want to know
②寻找：search for/look for
③拥抱：hug/embrace
情绪类
①兴奋：excitement/thrill
②被打动的：touched/moved
【高分句型1】I wondered how this could be happening.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】We thought it was time to give a home to a furry friend, and Fenway seemed like
the perfect choice.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句）
10．（2024·湖南岳阳·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Sai Baba! Sai Baba! Hahahaha!” Rani’s cheeks burned with shame and tears welled up in
her eyes as she pushed her way to the exit through the crowd of laughing boys in the packed
school bus. It wasn’t the first time she’d been called Sai Baba, after the famous Hindu holy man
she’d seen on TV with his trademark afro (非洲式卷发) towering over his head. But this time was
the worst. Rani jumped off the school bus and landed hard in the muddy rainwater. It had been a
Friday full of disasters! Angry thoughts ran inside Rani’s head as she marched home in the
drizzling rain. Why did the rain have to come pouring down so hard just at the end of the school
day? Why did she have to forget her raincoat back home? Why did her hair have to be like a giant
cotton candy balloon just when she wanted it to behave? Why, why, why, Rani grew angrier as she
turned the back door key.
“Rani, is that you?” Papa called from the family room.
“I hate my hair!” Rani cried as tears of anger and shame streamed down her cheeks.
“Why, your hair’s beautiful!”
“Then why does everyone make fun of it al the time? The boys teased me about my hair on
the bus ride back home…” She paused and then tore at her hair and pulled out a couple of paper
balls stuck in it. “Look, they even shot paper balls at my hair.”
Papa went up to Rani, hugging her tightly in his arms. “Listen! Those boys are bullies. They
did so only to get an emotional response from you. What you need to do is either ignore them or
speak up for yourself.”
Rani nodded uncertainly, remembering the hours, days and weeks she had spent trying to
bring her hair under control. “Papa?” she murmured, “I don’t want to participate in the speech
competition on Monday.”
“Why?” Papa sounded puzzled.
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“Why?” Papa sounded puzzled. “You’ve put your heart and soul into practicing for it all
these past months.” Yes, Rani wanted to say. Instead, she murmured, “But my hair…” Seeing the
sad expression on his daughter’s face, Papa was quiet for several moments and finally said “It is
not your hair that makes you who you are.” Papa slowed down, touching her hair softly and
gently, “You’re better and smarter than all of them put together. Go and show them who you really
are!” Hearing Papa’s words, Rani was filled with a surge of strength and courage.
The next Monday morning dawned bright and it was time for the competition. “Sai Baba,
Rani! Hahahaha!” was what Rani heard when she was approaching the stage for the speech.
Different from what she used to be, Rani threw back her shoulders and held her head high as she
walked past the boys, leaving the boys in awe behind. She stepped onto the stage and took her
place. “Where the mind is without fear…” Rani started her speech. Her voice rang out strong and
clear, her face shining and her eyes glittering. And right then, she knew she’d won.
【写作分析】本文属于记叙文，本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了女孩Rani因她标志性的非
洲卷发被同学嘲笑而愤怒，她的爸爸在得知原因后安慰她，告诉她她的头发很美。Rani还
是不自信，不想参加下周的演讲比赛。在爸爸的进一步开导下，Rani意识到不需要受到别
人评价的影响，一个人的内在美和内心强大更重要，于是，她在第二周周一的演讲比赛过
程中，不再受别人的负面言语所影响，自信大方展现自己。
【要点解析】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容““为什么？”爸爸听起来很困惑。”可知，第一段可描写Rani不想参加比赛的原因，爸爸开导Rani，Rani解开心结。
②由第二段首句内容“第二个星期一的早晨天刚亮，比赛时间到了。”可知，第二段可描
写Rani参加演讲比赛，不再畏惧别人的嘲笑，实现个人成长。
2.续写线索：父亲询问原因——Rani道出担心——父亲开导——Rani解开心结——Rani参
加演讲比赛——Rani得到成长
3.词汇激活
行为类
①走近：approach/step close to
②开始：start/begin
③知道：know/be aware of
情绪类
①悲伤的：sad/sorrowful
②勇气：courage/bravery
【高分句型1】Go and show them who you really are! (运用了who引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】“Sai Baba, Rani! Hahahaha!” was what Rani heard when she was approaching
the stage for the speech.(运用了what引导的表语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)
11．（2024·河南三门峡·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，
使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Arnold and Iris were sitting outside the office of the children’s home, excited and nervous.
Then the office door opened, and Mrs. Ronald appeared. “Mr. and Mrs. Arnold, please come in.”
Arnold and Iris entered the office. Arnold handed Mrs. Ronald a folder of documents. She
carefully reviewed them. Finally, she looked up at the couple.
“Here’s the thing,” she began to say and Iris felt her heart quicken. Mrs. Ronald’s tone
sounded unpromising.
“I’ve read your application to adopt Patrick,” Mrs. Ronald continued. “You are indeed a
great couple, with no legal issues, but your income is, frankly, not the best for guardianship. Mr.
Arnold is a repairman. Besides, Ms. Arnold, as a nurse, doesn’t have enough time. Last week, we
found the boy suffered from depression(抑郁) because of the loss of his parents in an accident and
may need regular visits to professionals, which adds to the expenses. In my opinion, you are not
suitable as guardians.”
“We can provide Patrick with a loving home,” Iris said, trying to hold back tears. “We haveinteracted with Patrick for several times. We’re the only family that Patrick is willing to interact
with! We love him and will do everything to make him happy.”
“But we’re doing what’s best for Patrick. I’m so sorry we can’t allow you to take Patrick
home,” Mrs. Ronald said.
“Who will take care of Patrick then?” “We are looking for his only relative, his aunt.
Although she is really busy, maybe she can look after him.”
Iris asked, “Can I see Patrick?”
“Of course,” Mrs. Ronald replied.
Patrick was sitting at the desk in a room, drawing something.
“Hey, Patrick, it’s me, Iris. What are you drawing?” she said softly. Patrick handed her the
paper.
“Is this your father and mother?” Patrick nodded. Iris felt really sorry for the poor boy,
thinking he needed a warm family.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右；
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Leaving the children’s home, the couple decided to continue to take good care of Patrick
while working hard to earn money.
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Leaving the children’s home, the couple decided to continue to take good care of Patrick
while working hard to earn money. Arnold found a part-time job in his spare time. Besides, Iris
looked through books every day, trying to get information about how to take good care of
children. Arnold and Iris constantly contacted Patrick’s aunt to learn about Patrick. They went to
see him occasionally in spite of their busy life. Once in a while, the couple invited Patrick and his
aunt to their home, where Patrick felt that he was treated as the family member.
One day, they heard Patrick’s aunt could no longer look after him due to work change. The
couple applied to the children’s home again to adopt Patrick. Mrs. Ronald rechecked Arnold and
Iris’s condition. This time, she confirmed that this couple were qualified. On a sunny afternoon, a
car stopped in front of the couple’s house, out of which came Patrick. The little boy ran to them.
The couple welcomed the new member of the family with great hugs. From then on, they lived
together happily.
【写作分析】本文是一篇记叙文，以人物为线索。Arnold和Iris想要收养Patrick这个孤儿，
虽然他们是Patrick唯一愿意接触的夫妇，但儿童之家的负责人认为他们的经济水平不足以
支撑孩子的费用，于是拒绝了他们的收养申请，并为Patrick寻找了他的姑姑。Arnold和
Iris并没有放弃，他们努力赚钱，学习育儿知识，定期去探望Patrick。后来Patrick的姑姑
因为工作变动而不能继续抚养他了，这对夫妇又去申请收养Patrick，这次儿童之家的负责
人认为他们的条件满足收养要求，他们顺利收养了Patrick，从那之后，他们一家过着幸福
的生活。
【要点解析】1. 续写线索：
①由续写第一段首句“离开儿童之家，这对夫妇决定继续好好照顾Patrick，同时努力赚
钱。”可知，第一段可以描写这对夫妇努力赚钱并关心照顾Patrick。
②由续写第二段首句“有一天，他们听说Patrick的姑姑因为工作变动不能再照顾他了。”
可知，第二段可以描写这对夫妇重新申请收养Patrick，他们的申请获得批准，从此他们一
家过着幸福的生活。
2. 段落续写：这对夫妇努力赚钱，学习育儿知识——他们经常与Patrick接触——得知
Patrick姑姑无法继续抚养他后，他们重新提出收养申请——他们的申请获得批准——他们
接走了Patrick——一家过着幸福生活
3. 词汇激活行为类
①浏览：look through/scan
②照顾：take care of/look after
③联系：contact/get in touch with
情绪类
①快乐地：happily/merrily
【高分句型1】Besides, Iris looked through books every day, trying to get information about how
to take good care of children.(使用了现在分词作状语、“特殊疑问词+不定式”结构)
【高分句型2】On a sunny afternoon, a car stopped in front of the couple’s house, out of which
came Patrick. (使用了“介词+which”引导非限制性定语从句，且从句使用了完全倒装结构)
12．（2024·广东广州·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两
段，’使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Birthday Surprise
I stood at the kitchen window watching Papa as he sat in the old, wooden lawn chair staring
out at the lake. Ralph, his old black dog, lay on the ground at his side. Papa’s hand absently
stroked (抚摩) the head of his old companion as they dreamed the dreams of old men and old dogs
in the evening sun. “He does this day after day?” I asked Mama.
She nodded, sadness filling her eyes. “I don’t know what to do for him. There is a strong
desire in his eyes that I can’t satisfy -a desire for the past. The past can’t be brought back to the
present. Once days are gone, they are gone forever,” Mama sighed.
“I’m going down to talk to him,” I said.
I called out to Papa and handed him a cup of coffee. “What are you and Ralph thinking
about all these hours you spend out here?” I asked,
“We’re not thinking,” he said softly. “We’re wishing.” I sat on the grass beside his chair.
“Wishing for what?” “For the impossible, I suppose,” he sighed. “You always told me that nothing
was impossible if you wanted it badly enough and were willing to work hard for it,” I reminded
him.
He laughed softly, but there was no amusement in the sound. “But Ralph and I have come
to learn that when you reach our age, some things are actually impossible.” “Maybe I can help
you. What do you want so badly?” I asked.
Papa grinned (咧嘴大笑), and his eyes shone brightly at the thought of his dream becominga reality. “Ralph and I want to fix up the old boat and go out on the lake again. We used to spend
all day out on the lake, fishing, drinking beer and eating sandwiches,” Papa said.
Yes, I remember. When I was young, Papa and Ralph often enjoyed themselves on the lake
on weekends. They’d start for home when the sun went down, totally satisfied with themselves
and with life. Now, Papa was almost eighty-five years old and had a heart condition, so Mama was
horrified by the idea of him going out on the lake again at first. But eventually I managed to
convince her.
注意：
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After Mama agreed, I persuaded my friends to join in my secret plan.
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After Mama agreed, I persuaded my friends to join in my secret plan. I decided to fix up
the old boat. The boat didn’t fall apart, and the paint had faded and cracked. We spent several
weekends repairing and painting the boat. I replaced the faded and cracked seat cushions while my
friends repaired the motor. We expected Papa to be proud of the boat a s he and Ralph went out on
the lake again. Tired as we were, we were happy to complete the restoration. I wouldn’t let off thesecret until Papa’s birthday.
Then came the day and we were all eager to give him a surprise. He could hardly believe
his eyes when we showed him the new boat. Then we said “Happy birthday” to him in chorus, and
he was so touched that tears blurred his eyes. After that, we put sandwiches and dog biscuits on it
while Mama also bought Papa a new hat. Soon, we all stood by the lake and watched as Papa and
Ralph sailed away, Papa waving and laughing. Seeing him so happy, I felt that everything I did for
him was rewarding.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者为了让父亲开心，于是和朋友一起把父
亲的旧船修好，让父亲可以和朋友出海，父亲也非常感动。
【要点解析】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“妈妈同意后，我说服我的朋友们加入我的秘密计划。”可知，第一
段可描写作者和朋友修理船的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“到了那天，我们都迫不及待地想给他一个惊喜”可知，第二段可描
写父亲看到惊喜的反应。
2.续写线索：开始修理船——完成修复工作——给父亲惊喜——父亲感动——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①看到：see/spot
②修理：repair/fix up
③完成：complete/finish
情绪类
①高兴：happy/glad
②值得的：rewarding/worthy
[高分句型1] Tired as we were, we were happy to complete the restoration. (运用了as引导的让
步状语从句的半倒装结构)
[高分句型2] Seeing him so happy, I felt that everything I did for him was rewarding. (运用了现
在分词作状语、that引导的宾语从句以及省略关系代词that的定语从句修饰先行词
everything )
13．（23-24高三下·安徽蚌埠·期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两
段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Though traveling is not a big deal for me today, before my trip to the mountains, I used tobe a homebody. I had friends to hang out with, several hobbies, and I felt completely comfortable
spending weeks or even months in my hometown — or sometimes even on my block — without
going anywhere. All my demands of novelty were satisfied by the Discovery and National
Geographic channels, and I seriously thought there was no difference between seeing something
on the TV and with one’s own eyes.
The situation changed when one day David, my best friend who always has a couple of
colorful bugs in his head (or, in other words, was always carrying out several crazy plans at once),
walked into my room and declared his disgust (厌恶) for civilization. I will not describe how he
managed to persuade me to join him on his journey to the Rocky Mountains; all I will say is that
we departed in five days. This was my first time in the mountains, so I was turning my head in all
directions. Unfortunately, the weather was foggy most of the time, and the higher we got into the
mountains, the worse the visibility was.
Even despite this fact, I still enjoyed the hike — I felt like I was Bear Grylls, whose show I
used to watch with excitement: in the wild, with food and water in my backpack, carrying a
flashlight and a knife. On the first day, we were making our way along the foothills; but the next
day, we started to climb on one of the peaks. Though it was not that steep and high, I was still
excited. I regularly hastened, and because of that, I ran out of energy long before we got to the top;
David, on the other hand, was more well-paced.
When we finally got to the top, nothing had changed. The same fog was covering the
surroundings, and even though I was filled with positive emotions, I felt disappointed, because I
counted on seeing the view from above and perhaps being able to take some photos.
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We spent a couple of hours on the top, and decided to turn back.
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We spent a couple of hours on the top, and decided to turn back. As the fog began to lift
slightly, we caught glimpses of the breathtaking landscape that had been hidden from us. The sight
of the rugged terrain and the distant peaks, even partially obscured, was more than I could have
imagined. The reality of the mountains was far more profound and awe-inspiring than any TV
show could convey. It was a moment of realization that the world was much bigger and more
magnificent than the confines of my hometown.
Seeing all this scenery with my own eyes was truly an eye-opening experience for me. It was
a stark contrast to the comfort of my home and the familiarity of my daily routine. The fresh air,
the sounds of nature, and the challenge of the climb all contributed to a sense of adventure and
discovery that I had never felt before. It was then that I understood the difference between
experiencing something through a screen and immersing oneself in it. The disappointment of the
foggy view was replaced by the satisfaction of having stepped out of my comfort zone and into the
unknown. This trip was not just a physical journey; it was a personal one that changed my
perspective on life and the world around me.
【写作分析】本文讲述了作者原本是宅家一族，后被好友David说服，第一次去洛基山脉
徒步旅行，尽管天气多雾，但作者依然享受了这次探险，意识到亲身体验与电视观看的差
别。
【要点解析】1. 段落续写：
① 第一段首句“我们花了几个小时在山顶，决定返回。”表明作者和David在山顶停留并
决定下山，可以描写他们在山顶的体验和决定返回的原因。
② 第二段首句“看到所有这些景色用我自己的双眼，对我来说真是一次开阔眼界的经
历。”说明作者通过这次旅行获得了新的视角和认识，可以描写作者的感悟和内心变化。2. 续写线索：停留山顶——决定返回——体验——感悟——内心变化
3. 词汇激活
行为类
① 决定做某事：decide to do/determine to do
② 返回：turn back/return
③ 走出：step out of/walk away from
情绪类
① 失望：disappointment/despair
② 满足：satisfaction/contentment
[高分句型1]. As the fog began to lift slightly, we caught glimpses of the breathtaking landscape
that had been hidden from us.（由as引导的时间状语从句，由that引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]. Seeing all this scenery with my own eyes was truly an eye-opening experience for
me.（动名词作主语）
[高分句型3]. This trip was not just a physical journey; it was a personal one that changed my
perspective on life and the world around me.（that引导的定语从句）
14．（2024·江西景德镇·三模）读后续写
Ridoy, a 12-year-old boy, lived a carefree life under good care of his mom and dad. Just like
any other boy of his age, he often lost his temper with his parents. Sometimes he obeyed what they
said, but sometimes he would completely ignore them. For example, one day, Ridoy’s mom
needed to go shopping for some ingredients for cooking and she asked Ridoy to help look after his
one-year-old sister. But Ridoy just blurted “no way”, slapped the door and locked himself into his
bedroom. There was another time when Ridoy’s dad urgently needed Ridoy to fetch a pair of fliers
for him when he was fixing his bike. Ridoy just refused without thinking. But Ridoy’s parents did
not worry a lot since this was very common in kids.
It was an unexpected holiday announced by the school of Ridoy and he had a five-day
holiday. For the first two days, he spent a good time with his mother. She took him for outings.
They went to the beach and amusement parks, and had delicious dining. She cooked his favorite
foods and played with him. Three days were left and Ridoy’s mother wanted to clean the house,
which she intended to involve Ridoy in. To her surprise, he accepted without hesitation. With the
help of Ridoy, the house instantly became very tidy and the floor shone like a mirror. Everything
she asked him to do during the three days was done to perfection. Although she was astonished byhis behavior, a delicious sweetness well up in Ridoy’s mom’s heart.
While she was cooking the dinner meal on the fifth day, Ridoy gave her a piece of paper
written by him. Since his mom was busy cooking, she asked him to place the paper on the dining
table. After cooking the meals, she took the paper left by his son. The piece of paper contained the
following list:
Cutting grass in the garden -$2
Cleaning the house -$3;
Taking care of my sister -$3;
Removing the garbage -$ 2;
…
In total, you owe me $20
She was literally shocked,
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She was literally shocked! She thought back the days and nights spent on her son, to whom
she dedicated all her time and energy. Speechless, she took out a piece of paper and wrote: Before
you were born, I carried you day and night for nine whole months. Whenever you were sick, I
spent sleepless nights taking care of you. Whenever you were down, I did what I can to cheer you
up. For so many years, I have been caring for you like a precious gift. So, my dear son, how muchdo you owe me?
The boy was in tears when reading the paper. How ridiculous he was to charge his mom for
doing such tiny things. He rushed to his mom and gave a tight hug that he had never done before.
Ridoy murmured, “Mom, I’m sorry for everything!” She took him in her arm and kissed him on
the forehead, a warm smile spreading across her face. That day, Ridoy learned his mom’s
unconditional love for him. Since then, he has changed a lot, taking his share in housework as a
member of the family.
【要点解析】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她真的被震惊了”可知，第一段可描写妈妈用一张纸条回应儿子，
列出自己为儿子所做的事，让儿子明白母爱的无价。
②由第二段首句内容“男孩读着那张纸条，泪流满面。”可知，第二段可描写男孩读完妈
妈的回复后的反应，他意识到自己的荒谬，并向妈妈道歉，从此改变，学会了分担家务，
懂得了家庭成员的责任。
2.续写线索：震惊——回忆付出——列出母爱——男孩反应——道歉改变——学会分担
3.词汇激活
行为类
①回忆：recall/reflect on
②列出：enumerate/list down
③拥抱：hug/clasp
情绪类
①感动：touched/moved
②抱歉：apologetic/ self-deprecating
[高分句型1]. Whenever you were sick, I spent sleepless nights taking care of you. （使用了由
whenever引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]. Since then, he has changed a lot, taking his share in housework as a member of the
family.（使用了现在分词作状语）
15．（2024·广东广州·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。
This Friday brought a mix of emotions—both excitement and disappointment — all
because of a flyer from school. When I got home, Mum saw the flyer in my hand and asked,
“What’s this?”“A flyer for a five-day art camp,” I explained. “But Emily can’t go.”
“Would you like to attend?”Mum asked. “You’ve always loved art.” Her words reminded
me of what Emily had said earlier: “Tessa, you’re the real artist. My brother thought the roses I
painted were rocket ships.” I sighed. Mum patted my back. She knew I had a hard time jumping
into something with no familiar faces around. “Maybe next year.”
“Maybe,” I echoed. Then I told Mum I wanted to go outside to draw the Westons’ pine tree
(松树). She nodded with an encouraging smile.
As I walked into the bright sunshine, I couldn’t help but think about the art camp. I wished I
felt a little bit braver. Emily could make friends with a whole bus of kids in ten minutes, but my
stomach felt like a little boat tossed in a heavy storm when I was surrounded by strangers... By the
time I started drawing, I had made up my mind to forget about the art camp.
I began by drawing the pine tree’s strong and straight trunk, and then added the beautiful
branches, making sure the upper ones lifted gently towards the sun. Lost in my work, I jumped
when I heard Mr. Weston speak up, “You’ve done a great job showing the strength of that tree on
paper.”
“Thanks,” I smiled, glancing up.
As I drew the needles to the branches, Mr. Weston told me something I never knew about
pines: If you plant the root ball too deep, the tree dies. Their roots grow out, not down—to get
enough water and grow tall.
“You have a good eye, Tessa.”With these words, Mr. Weston nodded goodbye.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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His words made me pause and think. As I reflected on his wisdom, I realized that I had been
burying my own roots too deep, suffocating my growth and potential, no matter how often I was
told about my talent in drawing. I had always unknowingly turned a deaf ear, forgetting to spread
my roots outward, to seek nourishment and reach for the sky. Encouraged by Mr. Weston’ s words,
I decided to reassess my approach to life and started branching out .
The next Monday, I signed up for the camp. Once I was there, I discovered that I didn’t
have to be like Emily, jumping into some unfamiliar faces around to prove I was a real artist. From
landscapes to portraits, and water color to oil painting, each brushstroke on the canvas was proof
and brought me a lot of attention I had never experienced before. I began to make friends with
other kids, the boat in my stomach rocking gently in calm waters. It was here that I truly
flourished, drawing my own way to reach out for a whole new world.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者有绘画天赋，想要参加艺术营，又因为
很难像朋友艾米丽一样融入群体而不敢于去参与。作者在画松树的时候遇到了Weston老师，
老师的话给了作者启发。作者意识到应该重新评估自己对于生活的态度。作者决定去参加
艺术营，在画画的时候专心致志，交到了朋友，也接触了一个全新的世界。
【要点解析】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“他的话使我停下来思考。”可知，第一段可描写作者听了Weston老
师的话之后对于自己生活态度的思考及想法的改变。
②由第二段首句内容“下个星期一，我报名参加了艺术营。”可知，第二段可描写作者参
加艺术营的经历和感受。
2.续写线索：引发思考——态度转变——决定参加艺术营——经历——感受
3.词汇激活
行为类①意识到：realize/be aware
②决定做某事：decide to do/make up one’s mind to do
发现：discover/spot
情绪类
①受鼓舞的：encouraged/inspired
②平静的：calm/peaceful
[高分句型1]. As I reflected on his wisdom, I realized that I had been burying my own roots too
deep, suffocating my growth and potential, no matter how often I was told about my talent in
drawing.（由as，no matter how引导的状语从句，that引导的宾语从句和现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]. From landscapes to portraits, and water color to oil painting, each brushstroke on
the canvas was proof and brought me a lot of attention I had never experienced before.（attention
为先行词，省略关系代词的限制性定语从句）