高频话题 15 人物介绍
近五年考情分析
年份 卷区 体裁 话题 命题形式
对外交提出的“Fun at my school”和“Guess who
全国一卷 建议信 提纲类
I am”两个选项做出选择
全国二卷 咨询信 咨询外交介绍加拿大体育运动的文章进展 提纲类
2025年 浙 江 卷 1 发表关于在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象的演
发言稿 提纲类
月 讲稿
北京卷 建议信 给参加联合国倡议征集活动的好友提建议 提纲类
在论坛交流上围绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提
天津卷 推荐信 提纲类
出推荐
新 高 考 I
告知信 分享在公园上了一堂美术课经历 提纲类
和II卷
以Development of Transport in China 为题的发言
全国甲卷 发言稿 图标类
稿
北京卷 建议信 对好友介绍中国的发展成就提出建议 提纲类
2024年
天津卷 发言稿 “低碳校园，从我做起”英语主题的演讲稿 提纲类
浙 江 卷 1
征文投稿 推荐一项适合课间开展的运动 提纲类
月
在“排忧解难”专栏回复校友父母不容许自己做
上海卷 安慰信 提纲类
饭
新高考全
建议信 提出随机分组存在的问题并给建议 提纲类
国卷
全国甲卷 征文投稿 以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿 提纲类
用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得
全国乙卷 征文投稿 提纲类
2023年 的体验和感受
浙 江 卷 1
报道 报道“认识我们身边的植物”活动 提纲类
月
北京卷 建议信 为以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动提供建议 提纲类
天津卷 申请信 申请参加“中国工坊” 活动 提纲类
2022年 新高考全 邀请信 邀请外教做访谈 提纲类国卷
校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”
浙江卷 邀请信 提纲类
邀请外国留学生一同体验
浙江卷 (1
回忆经历 回忆中国-爱尔兰文化节 提纲类
月)
全国甲卷 征文投稿 世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛 提纲类
全国乙卷 征文投稿 英语学习方式图标的调查投稿 提纲类
北京卷 邀请信 邀请好友做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流 提纲类
天津卷 视频文字稿 用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 提纲类
新高考全
征文投稿 庆祝英文报创刊十周年投稿 提纲类
国卷
浙江卷 宣传稿 宣传学生国画作品展 提纲类
浙江卷 (1
发言稿 欢迎新西兰学生访校致辞 提纲类
2021年 月)
全国甲卷 咨询信 咨询国外友人对中国传统文化的看法 提纲类
全国乙卷 发言稿 以 Be smart online learners为题的发言稿 提纲类
北京卷 道歉信 你因故不能赴约周末一起外出 提纲类
天津卷 征文投稿 介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方 提纲类
语料表达
1. 通用词汇和句式
scientist (科学家), writer (作家), athlete (运动员), role model
身份
(榜样), national hero (民族英雄)
人物身份
hard-working (努力的), determined (坚定的), brave (勇敢的),
与品质
品质 devoted/dedicated (奉献的), compassionate (有同情心的),
modest (谦虚的)
was born into a... family (出生于...家庭), grew up in... (在...
出身背景
长大)
通用核心词汇
graduate from... (毕业于), receive education in... (在...接受教
生平与事 教育经历
育)
迹
make great contributions to... (对...做出巨大贡献), achieve
成就贡献 great success in... (在...取得巨大成功), devote oneself to...
(致力于...)
克服困难 overcome difficulties (克服困难), face challenges (面对挑战)
影响与感 深远影响 have a great effect on... (对...有巨大影响), inspire... (激励...)learn the spirit of... (学习...的精神), follow one's example
学习精神
悟 (以某人为榜样)
be deeply impressed by... ( 被 ... 深 深 打 动 ), be greatly
个人感悟
encouraged (深受鼓舞)
...is the person whom I admire most. (……是我最敬佩的人。)
开篇引入
When it comes to the person I look up to, ... immediately comes to my
句
mind. (当谈到我敬佩的人，我立刻想到……)
Born in [年份], he/she spent his/her early years... (出生于[年份]，他/她早
年……)
描述生平 What makes him/her extraordinary is not only..., but also... (让他/她非凡的
万能句式 事迹 不仅是……，还有……)
Despite numerous difficulties, he/she never gave up on... (尽管困难重重，
他/她从未放弃……)
His/Her story teaches me that... (他/她的故事告诉我……)
阐述影响 I am deeply inspired by his/her spirit of... (我被他/她的……精神深深鼓
感悟 舞。)
I will always remember him/her as... (我将永远记得他/她是……)
2. 实用范文片段
What makes Yuan Longping a national hero is not merely his scientific achievements, but
伟人英雄类 his profound compassion for all mankind. His lifelong dedication to feeding the world teaches
（以袁隆平为 us that true greatness lies in serving others.
例） 袁隆平之所以成为民族英雄，不仅仅在于他的科学成就，更在于他对全人类深切的同情。
他毕生致力于让世界免于饥饿，这告诉我们，真正的伟大在于为他人服务。
My father may not be a famous figure, but his quiet dedication has shaped me into who I
身边人物类 am today. Through his actions, he has shown me what true responsibility and unconditional love
（以父亲/老 mean.
师为例） 我的父亲或许不是名人，但他默默的奉献塑造了今天的我。通过他的行动，他向我展示了
什么是真正的责任和无条件的爱。
My father may not be a famous figure, but his quiet dedication has shaped me into who I
文化偶像类 am today. Through his actions, he has shown me what true responsibility and unconditional love
（以莫言为 mean.
例） 我的父亲或许不是名人，但他默默的奉献塑造了今天的我。通过他的行动，他向我展示了
什么是真正的责任和无条件的爱。
总结感悟类 In short, his/her life is like a lighthouse, guiding me through my own journey. The values
（通用结尾） he/she represents—perseverance, kindness, and courage—will continue to inspire me to becomea better person.
总之，他/她的人生就像一座灯塔，指引着我自己的旅程。他/她所代表的品质——毅力、
善良和勇气——将继续激励我成为一个更好的人。
必背满分范文
1．（2025·江苏锡山·月考）假如你是李华。你的新西兰朋友Mark在邮件中提到对中国历史很感兴趣，想
请你给他介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Mark回信。内容包括：
1. 你喜欢历史人物是谁；
2. 该历史人物的主要贡献；
3. 该历史人物对你的影响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mark,
There are many famous people in Chinese history,
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【范文】
Dear Mark,
There are many famous people in Chinese history, among of whom I like Lu Xun best. Lu Xun was a famous
writer and fighter during the history who made a great contribution to the Chinese people. First, he wrote varieties
of passages to teach people. Then, he got the people to know the world step by step. Finally, his great books taught
people a lot.
He showed us that we should learn and master knowledge to protect ourselves. I will remember him and take
him as my light in my life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰朋友Mark回信，因为他在邮件中提到对中国历史
很感兴趣，请给他介绍一位自己喜欢的中国历史人物。
【解析】词汇积累多种类型的：many kinds of →a variety of/varieties of/ various
做贡献：do great things→make a contribution
知道懂得：know→master
保护：protect → defend
2.句式拓展【下列两种方式任意一种即可】
简单句变复合句
原句：First, he wrote varieties of passages to teach people.
拓展句：First, he wrote varieties of passages，from which people at that time learned the distinction
between right and wrong ,
【点睛】
[高分句型1] There are many famous people in Chinese history, among of whom I like Lu Xun best.(介
词加whom引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Lu Xun was a famous writer and fighter during the history who made a great contribution
to the Chinese people.（who引导的定语从句）
2．（2025·广西·月考）假设你校英文报开展主题为“用英语讲好中国人的故事”写作比赛活动，要求全体
同学参加。请你以“A Person I Admire”为题描述一位你敬佩的人，内容包括：
1.简要介绍生平；
2.主要事迹或成就；
3.你的认识或感悟。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Person I Admire
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A Person I Admire
Mo Yan is one of the persons I admire, whose real name is Guan Moye,—born in an ordinary peasant family
of Shandong Province in 1955 when people didn’t live a rich life and attached little importance to school education.
As a consequence, he dropped out in the fifth grade in primary school. While working as a young peasant, out of a
strong passion for literature, he committed to a variety of Chinese classics and gradually practiced writing stories.Mo Yan created many famous literature works including Red Sorghum and Frogs. Frogs won him Mao Dun
Literature Award in 2011 and he won the Nobel Prize for Literature in 2012.
In my opinion, what makes Mo Yan so extraordinary is not only his famous works but also his commitment to
what he loves.
【导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“A Person I Admire”为题，描述一位敬佩的人，需包含
人物生平、主要事迹和个人感悟。
【详解】
词汇积累
敬佩：admire → look up to
出生于：born in → came from
导致：as a consequence → as a result
致力于：committed to → dedicated to
非凡的：extraordinary → remarkable
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Mo Yan was born in 1955. At that time people didn't live a rich life.
拓展句：Mo Yan is one of the persons I admire, whose real name is Guan Moye,—born in an ordinary
peasant family of Shandong Province in 1955 when people didn't live a rich life... (运用了定语从句和同
位语结构，将多个简单信息有机整合，使句子结构紧凑，信息丰富)
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] Mo Yan is one of the persons I admire, whose real name is Guan Moye,—born in an
ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province in 1955 when people didn't live a rich life... (运用了定语
从句连缀，清晰地交代了人物的出身背景和时代特征)
[高分句型2] While working as a young peasant, out of a strong passion for literature, he committed to a
variety of Chinese classics and gradually practiced writing stories. (运用了"while+现在分词"作时间状语，
突出了在艰苦条件下坚持文学追求的执着精神)
[高分句型3] In my opinion, what makes Mo Yan so extraordinary is not only his famous works but also
his commitment to what he loves. (运用了主语从句和"not only...but also..."结构，深刻揭示了人物成功的
本质原因)
3．（2025·辽宁葫芦岛月考）你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以A Hero of Our Times为题写一篇发言稿
参赛，内容包括：
1. 介绍人物及事迹；
2. 分享受到的影响。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；2. 题目已为你写好。
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A Hero of Our Times
Yuan Longping (born September 7, 1930) is a Chinese agricultural scientist and educator, known for
developing the first hybrid rice varieties in the 1970s. His hybrid rice has since been grown in dozens of countries
in Africa, America, and Asia, providing a robust food source in high famine risk areas.
Mr.Yuan won the State Preeminent Science and Technology Award of China in 2000, the Wolf Prize in
agriculture and the World Food Prize in 2004. He is currently Director General of the China National Hybrid Rice
RD Center and has been appointed as Professor at Hunan Agricultural University, Changsha. He is a member of the
Chinese Academy of Engineering, foreign associate of the US National Academy of Sciences (2006) and the 2006
CPPCC.
Mr.Yuan was born in Beijing, China. He is a hero of our times.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以A Hero of Our Times为题写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：provide→offer
任命：appoint→nominate
开发：develop→exploit
赢得：win→gain
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Mr.Yuan was born in Beijing, China. He is a hero of our times.
拓展句：Mr.Yuan was born in Beijing, China, who is a hero of our times.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] Yuan Longping (born September 7, 1930) is a Chinese agricultural scientist and
educator, known for developing the first hybrid rice varieties in the 1970s. (运用了过去分词作状语)
[高分句型2] His hybrid rice has since been grown in dozens of countries in Africa, America, and Asia,
providing a robust food source in high famine risk areas.(运用了现在分词作状语)
4．（2025·安徽·阶段考）你校正在组织英语故事比赛。请以"身边乐于助人的人"为题, 写一篇短文参赛,
内容包括∶
1. 人物简介∶2. 试举一例简述他（她）助人为乐的事。
注意∶
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 短文题目已为你写好;
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The person who helps others most
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【范文】
The person who helps others most
Who never fails to give others a hand? Kent, as a senior two student, he does well academically. To my
admiration, his charming personality fascinates us. Not only is he humble and polite, but he is also considerate and
helpful. Here comes a touching example.
The other day Kent's classmate Henry got his right ankle hurt, so it was never convenient for him to walk.
Without hesitation, he offered to support and carry Henry frequently. Additionally, he spared much time to assist
Henry with his lessons.
In a word, Kent sets an impressive example to us all: care makes the world warmer.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“身边乐于助人的人”为题, 写一篇短文参加学校正在组
织的英语故事比赛。其内容包括：该人物简介以及试举一例简述他（她）助人为乐的事。
【详解】词汇积累
帮助别人：give others a hand →do others a favor
有礼貌的：polite →courteous
受伤：hurt→ injured
而且：additionally→ in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To my admiration, his charming personality fascinates us.
拓展句：What I admire is that his charming personality fascinates us.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only is he humble and polite, but he is also considerate and helpful. （运用
了not only构成的部分倒装结构形式）
【高分句型2】The other day Kent's classmate Henry got his right ankle hurt, so it was never convenient
for him to walk.（运用了so连接的并列句）5．（2025·河北信阳考）假定你是李华。你校英语节组织了“A hero in my heart—Hua Mulan”英语征文
评选。请根据以下提示写一篇短文参加评选：
1.简述木兰替父从军的故事；
2.你喜欢这一人物的理由；
3.对你的影响。
注意：1.词数80；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：disguise herself as a man女扮男装, character人物
A hero in my heart—Hua Mulan
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【范文】
A hero in my heart—Mulan
I’m delighted to share the hero in my heart—Mulan with you, who is my favourite cartoon movie character.
Living in ancient times, Mulan was a young girl. She disguised herself as a man to trick the officers so that she
could join the army as a way to help her family. Finally the young girl made it!
I really love this character because she is brave and determined when fighting against the enemies. History
saw the great contributions she has made to the country. Mulan sets a good example and also has great effects on
me in all aspects. Whenever I meet with difficulties, I will think of her and be hugely inspired. Mulan is a true hero!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“A hero in my heart—Hua Mulan”为题写一篇征文，需
简述故事、阐述理由并说明个人影响。
【详解】
词汇积累
高兴：delighted → thrilled / honored
伪装：disguise herself as → pretend to be
最终：finally → eventually / in the end
勇敢的：brave → courageous
坚定的：determined → resolute
树立榜样：sets a good example → becomes a role model
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Mulan was a young girl. She lived in ancient times.拓展句：Living in ancient times, Mulan was a young girl. (运用现在分词短语作状语，将两个简单句合并，
使表达更加简洁生动)
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I'm delighted to share the hero in my heart—Mulan with you, who is my favourite cartoon
movie character. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句，自然引出人物身份，句式富有变化)
[高分句型2] She disguised herself as a man to trick the officers so that she could join the army as a
way to help her family. (运用了"so that"引导的目的状语从句，清晰地揭示了木兰女扮男装的行为动机)
[高分句型 3] Whenever I meet with difficulties, I will think of her and be hugely inspired. (运用
了"Whenever"引导的时间状语从句，强调了木兰精神对作者持续而深远的影响)
6．（2025·吉林·阶段你校正在组织作文比赛，请以你身边值得感恩的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 介绍人物；2. 说明理由。
注意：1. 词数80；
2. 短文题目已为你写好。
The One I’m Grateful to
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【范文】
The One I’m Grateful to
My dad is the person whom I’m most grateful to. Not only does he take good care of me physically, but he
also inspires me spiritually.
Every morning, he gets up early to prepare a healthy breakfast for me. No matter how busy he is, he will drive
me to and from school, rain or shine. When I am down or feel anxious about my grades, my father will take me to a
park, or invite me to see a movie to help me relaxed. If necessary, he will accompany me to a psychologist for
professional assistance. What’s more, he has a positive attitude to life, which has an everlasting effect on me.
It is because of his care and consideration that I grow up happily and healthily. My gratitude to him is beyond
description.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“身边值得感恩的人”为题写一篇短文，需包含人物介绍
和感恩理由。
【详解】
词汇积累
感激：grateful → thankful
照顾：take care of → look after鼓舞：inspire → encourage
无论晴雨：rain or shine → in all weather conditions
积极态度：positive attitude → optimistic outlook
永恒影响：everlasting effect → lasting impact
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My dad takes good care of me physically. He also inspires me spiritually.
拓展句：Not only does he take good care of me physically, but he also inspires me spiritually. (运用"not
only...but also..."倒装结构，强调了父亲在身体和精神两方面对“我”的关怀，使表达更有力度)
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Not only does he take good care of me physically, but he also inspires me spiritually. (运用
了"not only...but also..."的倒装句式，突出了父亲关怀的双重维度，增强了语言的感染力)
[高分句型2] No matter how busy he is, he will drive me to and from school, rain or shine. (运用了"no
matter how"引导的让步状语从句和"rain or shine"的并列结构，生动体现了父爱的坚持与无私)
[高分句型3] It is because of his care and consideration that I grow up happily and healthily. (运用了"It
is...that..."的强调句型，有力地总结了父爱对“我”成长的关键作用)
7．（2025·山东·月考）百度百科打算创建英文版的百度人物词条，请你结合以下信息，为袁隆平编写词条。
姓名：袁隆平 爱好：听音乐，游泳
职业：科学家
生活态度：生活简朴，淡泊名利
出生：1930年，北京
毕业院校：西南农学院(现西南大学)
成就：
(1)提高水稻产量，消除世界饥饿
(2)杂交水稻 之父
注意：1.词数80；
2.适当表达个人看法。
参考词汇：西南农学院Southwest Agricultural College；杂交水稻之父 Father of Hybrid Rice
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【范文】
Yuan Longping is a great scientist who is devoted to agriculture. Born in 1930, Yuan graduated fromSouthwest Agricultural College. After graduation, finding ways to grow more productive rice has been his life goal.
Thanks to his research in hybrid rice, we have more tools to increase the rice output and rid the world of hunger, for
which he is honoured as “Father of Hybrid Rice”.
Yuan Longping lives a simple life and he cares little about money or being famous. As for hobbies, he enjoys
swimming as well as listening to music.
Yuan Longping has made great contributions not only to China, but also to the whole world. Therefore, in my
eyes, he is more of a scientist; he is a pioneer for all people.
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生结合信息，为袁隆平编写英文版的百度人物词条。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
献身于，贡献于：contribute to→be devoted to
多亏了，由于：owing to→thanks to
摆脱，除去：get rid of→move out of
提高：increase → improve
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句：Yuan Longping lives a simple life and he cares little about money or being famous.
拓展句：Yuan Longping lives a simple life ，caring little about money or being famous.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
Yuan Longping is a great scientist who is devoted to agriculture. (运用了关系代词who引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Thanks to his research in hybrid rice, we have more tools to increase the rice output and rid the world
of hunger, for which he is honoured as “Father of Hybrid Rice”. (运用了关系代词which引导的非限制
性定语从句)
8．（2025·江西·阶段考）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 正在学习中文，了解到中国四大名著(China's
four great classics)的知识并写信与你交流。作为一名古典文学爱好者，你很高兴地回信给他， 介绍你最
爱的四大名著中的某个人物(character)以及原因。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以增加适当的细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：
Journey to the West 《西游记》 A Dream of Red Mansions 《红楼梦》
Water Margin《水浒传》 Romance of the Three Kingdoms 《三国演义》Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Tom,
I’m so glad to hear about your experience of learning China's four great classics and thanks for talking of your
personal understanding. Today I’m writing to share with you my favorite character, Sun Wukong, in one of the
classic novels.
There is no denying that so many fantastic characters have been created by ancient Chinese novelists. In the
novel of Journey to the West, Sun Wukong, also known as the Monkey King, is born with supernatural powers.
Through Taoist practices, he learns the 72 transformations, allowing him to transform into various animals and
objects. Sun Wukong is so brave to fight against various evil spirits all the way and he is so faithful to his master
Tangseng despite misunderstanding, making the journey to the western paradise successful. To some extent, Sun
Wukong is rebellious, but his always speaking the truth, even in the face of the power or authority, is the most
important reason why I consider Sun as my favorite character.
Classics open up a window to different worlds and different cultures. I do hope that Chinese classic literature
will deepen your understanding of China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友 Tom写一封回信，介绍中国四大名著中最喜爱的
人物并说明原因。
【详解】
词汇积累
高兴：glad → delighted / pleased
分享：share with → introduce to
超自然力量：supernatural powers → magical abilities
反抗的：rebellious → defiant
忠实：faithful → loyal
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Sun Wukong learns the 72 transformations. This allows him to transform into various animals and
objects.
拓展句：Through Taoist practices, he learns the 72 transformations, allowing him to transform intovarious animals and objects. (运用现在分词短语作状语，将两个简单句有机连接，体现了动作的因果关系，
使表达更流畅)
【点睛】
[高分句型1] There is no denying that so many fantastic characters have been created by ancient Chinese
novelists. (运用"There is no denying that..."经典句型，有力地肯定了四大名著的人物塑造成就，为下文介
绍孙悟空做好铺垫)
[高分句型 2] Sun Wukong is so brave to fight against various evil spirits all the way and he is so
faithful to his master Tangseng despite misunderstanding, making the journey to the western paradise
successful. (运用并列句和现在分词短语，全面概括了孙悟空的核心品质及其对取经成功的贡献)
[高分句型3] ...but his always speaking the truth, even in the face of the power or authority, is the most
important reason why I consider Sun as my favorite character. (运用动名词短语作主语和"why"引导的定
语从句，深刻揭示了作者喜爱孙悟空的根本原因，凸显了人物形象的深层魅力)
9．（2025·四川泸州·质量检测）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以学校你想感谢的人为题，写一篇短文参
赛，内容包括：
1．人物简介；
2．感谢的原因。
注意：1. 词数 80 左右。
2. 作文中不得出现真实的班级和人名。
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【范文】
Blessed with devoted teachers and considerate schoolmates, I would like to take this opportunity on
Thanksgiving to extend my heartfelt appreciation to my seatmate, Joy, a generous and helpful girl.
With sparkling smiling eyes on a clear face, Joy always made a reliable companion, whom I couldn’t thank
enough. I well remember there was a time when I was struck by an unexpected failure in a maths competition,
drowning myself in frustration. Seeing my dismay, Joy constantly comforted and inspired me. It was her concerned
look and optimism that cheered me up, filling me with courage to brave challenges and endeavor to make a
comeback. Eventually, I made it at my second attempt.
Gratefully, I owe this success to Joy, without whom l couldn’t have made such remarkable progress. Hardly
can l do anything to return her favour.
【导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“学校你想感谢的人”为题写一篇短文，需包含人物简介
和感谢原因。【详解】
词汇积累
感激：appreciation → gratitude
慷慨的：generous → big-hearted
可靠的：reliable → dependable
沮丧：frustration → disappointment
安慰：comfort → console
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Joy has sparkling smiling eyes. She has a clear face. She always made a reliable companion.
拓展句：With sparkling smiling eyes on a clear face, Joy always made a reliable companion... (运
用"with"复合结构作状语，将外貌描写浓缩在一个短语中，使句子主干更突出，描写更生动)
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] Blessed with devoted teachers and considerate schoolmates, I would like to take this
opportunity on Thanksgiving to extend my heartfelt appreciation to my seatmate, Joy, a generous and
helpful girl. (运用过去分词短语作原因状语，开场自然流畅，同时准确交代了感谢对象及其品质)
[高分句型 2] It was her concerned look and optimism that cheered me up, filling me with courage to
brave challenges and endeavor to make a comeback. (运用强调句和现在分词短语，突出了对方关怀的关
键作用，并展现了这种关怀带来的积极变化)
[高分句型3] Gratefully, I owe this success to Joy, without whom l couldn't have made such remarkable
progress. (运用"without whom"引导的定语从句，以虚拟语气强调了对方不可或缺的帮助，情感表达强烈而
真挚)
10．（2025·浙江金华·阶段考）你校正在开展“向民族英雄学习”的活动。请你给学校英语报写一篇短文，
谈谈你“心中的民族英雄”内容包括：
1. 英雄人物简介；
2. 成为你心中英雄的原因；
3. 向英雄学习。
注意：1. 词数 80左右；
2. 短文题目与首句已写好，不计入总词数。
The National Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have a national hero or heroes in their hearts.
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The National Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have a national hero or heroes in their hearts. For me, Yuan Longping is actually my
national hero.
Dr Yuan devotes himself to doing research on the rice output. With the development of new rice, gone are the
days when Chinese people suffer from terrible starvation, and more countries of the world are able to grow more
rice to feed the growing world population.
We should learn from him the spirit of striving for the well-being of mankind. His perseverance, indifference
to personal fame and fortune, his devotion to research work and profound insight are also great merits we should
follow!
【导读】本篇书面表达属于议论文。要求考生以“心中的民族英雄”为题写一篇短文，需包含人物简介、
崇敬原因和学习决心。
【详解】
词汇积累
致力于：devotes himself to → dedicates himself to
研究：research → study
饥饿：starvation → famine
福祉：well-being → welfare
毅力：perseverance → persistence
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：New rice has been developed. The days are gone. Chinese people suffered from terrible starvation
in those days.
拓展句：With the development of new rice, gone are the days when Chinese people suffer from terrible
starvation... (运用“介词短语+倒装句+定语从句”的复杂结构，将三个简单句有机融合，强调了袁隆平研
究成果的重大历史意义)
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] With the development of new rice, gone are the days when Chinese people suffer from
terrible starvation... (运用“with复合结构+完全倒装+定语从句”的复杂句式，语言功底深厚，生动展现了
科研成果带来的历史性变革)
[高分句型2] We should learn from him the spirit of striving for the well-being of mankind. (运用动名词
短语作介词宾语，准确概括了袁隆平精神的核心，表达凝练有力)
[高分句型3] His perseverance, indifference to personal fame and fortune, his devotion to research work
and profound insight are also great merits we should follow! (运用并列名词短语排比，全面而具体地阐述
了英雄的可贵品质，增强了文章的说服力和感染力)
