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PET故事写作(Part 2)四段式模版
PET故事写作(Part 2)的关键是:首句必须用题目给的开头,然后用"起因→经过→高潮→结尾"四段式。下面按故事发展顺序整理万能句,孩子全背下来任何题都能套。
第一段:承接开头 + 背景铺垫时间背景 It was a sunny Saturday morning.天气反转 The weather was perfect, but little did I know that day would change everything.心情 I was really excited because … / I couldn't wait to …和谁 My best friend Sam and I decided to …地点 We went to the park near my house.
第二段:事情发展 + 铺垫悬念正在做 We were walking / playing / having fun when suddenly…意外发生 Suddenly, I heard a strange noise behind me.发现异常 To my surprise, there was a …转折 Everything was fine until… / At first, everything went well, but then…内心活动 I felt nervous, but I decided to be brave.
第三段:高潮 + 解决问题行动 Without thinking twice, I ran to help. / I quickly called the police / my parents.求助 Luckily, a kind man came to help us.灵机一动 Then I had an idea!紧张感 My heart was beating fast.解决 In the end, we managed to … / Finally, everything was OK.
第四段:结尾 + 感悟(点题升华)松口气 I was so relieved!结局 Everyone was happy, and we all laughed.感悟(必背!) It was an unforgettable day. / I'll never forget that day.道理 From that day on, I learned that helping others is always the right thing to do.幽默收尾 And that's how I became famous at school!
连接词串(让故事有"流动感")First → Then → Suddenly → After that → Luckily → In the end → Finally这些词在故事里比邮件里更重要,考官专门看故事是否连贯。
完整示例骨架(套任何题)It was a sunny Saturday morning. My best friend and I decided to go cycling in the countryside. At first, everything went well, but then my bike broke down in the middle of nowhere. Suddenly, it started to rain heavily. Luckily, a farmer saw us and invited us into his house. Without thinking twice, we called my dad to pick us up. In the end, we got home safe and sound, and my dad fixed the bike.It was an unforgettable day, and I learned that strangers can be kind too.
考前叮嘱(故事篇特有)
第一段第一句必须抄题目给的开头句(这是硬性要求,没抄直接扣分),第二句才开始自己编。 时态99%用一般过去时,写完专门检查动词有没有加 -ed。 必须有一个意外/转折(Suddenly…),没有转折的故事得不了高分。 结尾一定加一句感悟(I learned that…),这是拿高分的标配。 字数 80–100词,只写一件事,别贪多。背熟这40多句+5个连接词,任何故事题都能现场拼装。















































































