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中考英语写作---AI论述

中考英语写作---AI论述

一

例题 

     生活在现代化社会的我们感受到了科技发展日新月异,尤其是ChatGPT的出现使人工智能AI (artificial intelligence) 一度成为热门话题,同时也引发了人们对于人工智能取代人类的担忧。写作要点:

1. 告诉人们不必过于担心人工智能的发展;

2. 列举人工智能发展带来的好处(至少两点),并举例说明;

3. 谈谈你对未来人工智能发展的期待。

二

写作点拨

写作分三步,审题-列提纲-写作

1

审题 

  1. 本篇作文的文体是什么?

  2. 话题是什么?

  3. 作文的人称是什么?

  4. 本篇作文的时态是什么?

  5. 字数多少?

2

列提纲

  1. 导入。如何导入本篇作文?

  2. 正文。正文部分该如何写作?

  3. 结尾。我该如何结尾?

3

写作

      Recently, ChatGPT has made AI a hot topic. Meanwhile, some people worry that AI may replace humans. In fact, there is no need to worry too much about the development of AI because it has a great many advantages.

    Firstly, AI makes our lives more convenient. For example, voice assistants like Siri can help us find information quickly. In addition, AI reduces the workload of humans. Take chatbots as an example, chatbots are capable of providing customer service at any moment instead of human customer service representatives.

    How great AI is! I’m looking forward to its further development. I hope it can help doctors diagnose diseases more accurately in the future.

三

素材积累 

   本篇文章共112词,在中考写作中,是一个很理想的篇幅长度,太长或太短都不好。太短会让阅卷老师觉得词数不够;太长会让阅卷老师觉得太过啰嗦。因此,100-120这是一个很理想的区间。

   本篇文章,有宾语从句,状语从句等,长短结合,高级词汇,是一篇佳作,同学们可以积累一下里面的素材,变成自己的好词好句。

1

No need to worry too much 

about the development of AI

    Recently, ChatGPT has made AI a hot topic. Meanwhile, some people worry that AI may replace humans(1). In fact, there is no needto(2) worry too much about the development of AI because it has a great many advantages.(3)

  1. that引导的宾语从句

  2. there is no need to ... 没有必要做...

例如:没有必要担心AI会取代人类。

There is no need to worry that AI will replace humans.

  1. because引导的原因状语从句

热门话题                 a  hot topic

与此同时                 meanwhile

事实上                     in fact

没有必要做某事     there is no need to do...

很多好处                 a great many advantages

2

List the advantages of AI

Firstly, AI makes our lives more convenient. For example, voice assistants like Siri can help us find information quickly. In addition, AI reduces the workload of humans. Take chatbots as an example, chatbots are capable of providing customer service at any moment instead of human customer service representatives.

    罗列优点或原因的时候,可以用first/firstly,in addition等,让作文更有层次和逻辑。有很多同学的内容比较空,可以适当地在观点或原因后跟一个具体的例子,可以用for example,for instance,take... as an example等,引出自己的例子

  1. AI使我们的生活更加便利   

     AI makes our lives more convenient

  1. AI减轻人类的工作量 

    AI reduces the workload of humans

  2. 能够做某事      be capable of doing sth

  3. 随时提供顾客服务 

    provide customer service at any moment

  4. 代替    instead of

  5. 人工客户服务代表

    human customer service representatives

3

Expectations of AI

   How great AI is! I’m looking forward to its further development. I hope it can help doctors diagnose diseases more accurately in the future.

期待做某事      look forward to  doing

进一步发展      further development

更准确地帮助医生诊断疾病 

help doctors diagnose diseases more accurately

总结

       除了本文中的AI优点和期待外,还有一些其他的素材,后台回复“人工智能”,获取更多素材~

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