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Section Ⅴ Writing——如何续写戏剧
续写《百万英镑》的某一场
戏剧是一种综合的舞艺术。我们这里要写的戏剧实际上就是剧本。它是文
学体裁的一种，戏剧的基本要素包括情感、欲望、争斗、妥协等组成部分。戏
剧离不开冲突，它表现在人物性格的冲突中，具体表现为一系列的动作。戏剧
语言包括人物语言(台词actor's/actress' lines)和舞台说明(stage direction)，舞台说
明是写在剧本每一幕的开端，结尾和对话中间的说明性的文字、内容包括人物、
时间、地点、服装、道具、布景及人物的表情、动作、上下场等。它具有增强
舞台气氛，烘托人物心情，展示人物性格，推动情节展开等多种作用。
[基本框架]
1．旁白(narrator)——交代故事的场地、人物、时间等；
2．主体(body)交代故事的发展、冲突、结果。
[常用词汇]
1．feels happily for a moment感觉高兴了一会儿
2．began to worry about开始担心
3．run back to the house and knock at the door跑回家开始敲门
4．I have made a bet on...对……打赌
5．feel honored to help you很荣兴地帮你
6．can afford it能负担的起买它
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1．The rich brothers Tom and Tim, have made a bet on the game in the house on
Sunday.
周末，Tom和Tim这对富有的哥俩在他们家里就这场比赛打了个赌。
2．They saw a young man wandering outside their house.
他们看见一个年轻人在他们的房子外徘徊．
3．He enters the house when he saw a sign for a place that sells clothes.
当他看见一个卖衣服的地方时他走进了房间。
★正文佳句
更多资料添加微信号：hiknow_007 淘宝搜索店铺：乐知课堂1．I'd like some ham and eggs and a nice big steak.Make it extra thick.I'd also
like a cup of coffee and a pineapple dessert.
我要火腿加鸡蛋还有一块大牛排，要特厚的。我还要一杯咖啡，一份菠萝
甜点。
2．Right, sir.I'm afraid it'll cost a large amount of money.
好的，先生。恐怕这得花费一大笔钱。
3．It's amazing how much pleasure you get out of the simple things in life，
especially if you can't have them for a while.
生活中从如此简单的东西之中竟能得到这么大的乐趣，真是令人吃惊，特
别是当你有一段时间吃不到这些东西的时候。
★余味结尾
1．I'm so sorry，sir，so sorry，but I cannot change this bank note.
对不起，先生，非常对不起，但是这张钞票我找不开。
2．Oh，please，don't worry，sir.Doesn't matter at all.We're so very glad that
you even entered our little eating place.Indeed ， sir ， I hope you'll come here
whenever you like.
哎呀，先生，请别担心。一点儿也没关系。我们非常高兴您能走进我们这
家小吃店。真的，先生，我希望您随时光临。
3．No，it's kind of you.You must come whenever you want and have whatever
you like.Just having you sit here is a great honour！As for the bill，sir，please forget
it.
不，先生，是您太好了。您什么时候想来就来，想吃什么就吃什么。您就
是在这儿坐一下也是我们莫大的荣幸！至于账单嘛，先生，请把它忘了吧。
请你根据本单元所学的内容，设想一下Henry来到一家理发店，他与店主
和其他客人会发生怎样的互动呢，思考一下，写一个简单的小剧本。
注意：1.交代清楚人物、地点和时间等；
2．注意故事情节的发展、冲突和结尾。
【参考范文】
Narrator：(Henry is smiling as he leaves the restaurant. As he is walking down
the street, he sees a sign for a place that cuts hair. He decides to get it cut.)
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H：Good afternoon, I'd like to get a cut, if I may. (The barber looks at Henry's
hair and continues cutting another man's hair.)Er, I'd really like a haircut. As you can
see it's much too long.
B：(in a rude manner) Yes, I can see that. Indeed, I can.
H：Fine, well I'll have a seat then.
(He sits in one of the barber's chairs. The barber turns to look at Henry.)
B：It's quite expensive here, you know！Are you sure you can afford it?
H：Yes. I think so.
(In comes the rude man.)
R：Hey you there.I need a haircut quickly. Can you do me straightaway?
B：All right, then, get in the chair and I'll see what I can do.
R：Thank you. (sits down in one of the barber's chairs)
H：Excuse me, but I was here first. Aren't you going to do my hair first?
B：This man's in a hurry.
H：Well so am I！I insist that you cut my hair first.
B：OK, but I'll have to be quick. This gentleman is waiting.
H：Thank you.
(They both become quiet. After his hair is cut, the barber tells Henry how much
he must pay. Henry shows the barber the bank note.)
B：Why, Mr ... (looks shocked)
H：Adams. Henry Adams. I'm sorry, I don't have any change.
R：You're that Mr Adams! Well，I'm glad I waited or I might never have known
it was you.
B：Why, Mr Adams, please don't worry！(wearing a big smile) Nothing to
worry about！Nothing at all!
Please come back any time, even if you only need too little hairs cut！It will be
my honour to serve you!
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