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乐山市高中 2025 届教学质量检测
英语参考答案及评分意见
2024.7
第Ⅰ卷（共100分）
第一部分 听力（共20小题；每小题1.5分，满分30分）
1-5 ABBAC 6-10 CABCB 11-15 CABCB 16-20 AACAC
第二部分 阅读（共两节，满分50分）
第一节（共15小题；每小题2.5分，满分37.5分）
21-23 CBD 24-27 ACDB 28-31 CABD 32-35 CABD
第二节（共5小题；每小题2.5分，满分12.5分）
36-40 CGEAD
第三部分 语言运用（共两节，满分30分）
第一节（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）
41-45 BCADC 46-50 BADBA 51-55 CADCD
第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
56.businesses 57.that / which 58. Born 59. at
60. growth 61. saw / had seen 62. to preserve / preserving 63. it
64. the 65. featuring
第四部分 写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节（满分15分）
（一）评分原则
1. 本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡
量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 词数少于80和多于130的，从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上
下文的连贯性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考
虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
（二）内容要点
1. 简单介绍个人身份，说明写信原因和目的（3分）
2. 介绍具体的问题（食堂标牌误译），需有所阐释（翻译不合理处、带来的后果等）
（5分）
3. 改进建议。建议应有可操作性（5分）
4. 恰当的开头和结尾（2分）
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司（三）评分标准
第五档(13-15分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的
覆盖所有内容要点。
应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强
的语言运用能力。
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
第四档(10-12分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的
虽漏掉次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所
致。
应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
第三档(7-9分)：基本完成了试题规定的任务，整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的
虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
第二档(4-6分)：未恰当完成试题规定的任务，信息未能清楚地传达给读者
漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
语法结构单调、词汇知识有限。
有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
第一档(1-3分)：未完成试题规定的任务，信息未能传达给读者
明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
语法结构单调、词汇知识有限。
较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
不得分(0分)：未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；所写内容均与所要求
内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
（四）One possible version
Dear Sir o r Madam ,
I am Li Hua, a senior 2 student. I am writing to bring to your attention a minor issue
regarding the English translation on the public notice boards on our campus.
I happened to notice that the translation in the canteen reads “Slip safely”. I believe there is a
grammatical error in this phrase. The correct phrase should be “Caution! Wet”. I suggest that we
correct this error to ensure clarity and accuracy in communication. Besides, Making this adjustment
will demonstrate our commitment to acceptance and attention to detail.
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Best regards,
Li Hua
第二节（满分 25分）
评分细则
（一）给分点位
1. 续写第一段：
（1）主人公Nina与狗Shavi的重逢场景描写（6分）
（2）主人公Nina决定与狗共同生活而产生的心理或行为活动（6分）
2. 续写第二段：
（1）主人公与狗的共同新生活状况描写（6分）
（2）主题升华（如：人与动物的情感联系；重逢给Nina带来的感悟或影响）（7分）
（二）评分标准
1．本题总分为25分，按七个档次进行评分。
2. 评分时，主要从内容、语言表达和篇章结构三个方面考查，具体为：续写内容质量、续写
的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。
3．评分时,应先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量,确
定或调整档次,最后给分。
4．评分时还应注意:
（1）词数少于120的，酌情扣分：
（2）单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面,评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以
考虑,英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
（3）书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。
档次 给分要求
创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情景融洽度高；
使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构、表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不
第七档
影响理解；
（22-25分）
自然有效地使用了段落间、句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义
连贯。
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原文情景
融洽度较高；
第六档
使用了比较多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达比较流畅，有个别错误，但
（18-21分）
不影响理解；
比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。
创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文情境相
关；
第五档
使用了比较恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达方式不够多样性，表达有些许错
（15-17分）
误，但基本不影响理解；
使用了语句衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。
创造了基本完整的故事内容，但有的情节不够合理或逻辑不强，与原文情景
第四档 基本相关；
（11-14分） 使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有部分语言错误和不恰当之处，个别部分影
响理解；
尚有语句衔接的意识，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。
内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文有一定程度脱节；
第三档
所用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多且比较低级，影响理解；
（6-10分）
未能有效地使用语句衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义欠连贯。
内容和逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原
第二档 文情景基本脱节；
（1-5分） 所使用的的词汇非常有限，语法结构单调，错误极多，严重影响理解；
几乎没有使用语句衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。
第一档 未作答，所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法判断，缩写内容全部抄自原文或
（0分） 与题目要求完全不相关。
（三）One possible Version
续写第一段：Two weeks later, while walking along the road outside her home, Nina felt something
brush ing up against her leg . Surprised, she looked down to find Shavi shaking her tail with
excitement. Tears of joy streamed down Nina’s face as she knelt down to embrace Shavi, knowing
that Shavi had made the almost 200-mile journey back to her. An sense of relief and happiness
washing over her，Nina knew deep down that she couldn’t bear to be separated from Shavi again.
She made up her mind to find a solution.
续写第二段：The pair stuck together and moved into a bigger apartment. Shavi's return brought a
new sense of purpose and happiness into Nina's life.They shared a bond that couldn’t be broken, and
Nina was determined to never give him away again. Animals are the most loyal and loving creatures
in the world. For every drop of human love, they are willing to give all of theirs in return. Nina
knows that from her personal experience. Shavi is like a child to her.
附：听力原文
Text 1
W: Would you like me to drive you to the train station this evening?
M: No, thanks. I’ll take the bus. But now I must walk to my office.
Text 2
W: You look so tired, are you all right?
M: My computer got infected by a virus. It took me the whole night to get it working again.
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司Text 3
M: My lecture starts at 9:30 am. It lasts two hours, so I can meet you after that.
W: Fine! But hurry. I have my lecture at 1:30 pm.
Text 4
M: I cannot believe Tom didn’t back you up at the meeting. I thought he was on board with your
idea.
W: He told me he’d agree with me. How could he break his word!
Text 5
W: I ran into Sally the other day. I could hardly recognize her. Do you remember her?
M: Yeah, she was a little out of shape back then. Well, has she lost a lot of weight?
W: Definitely. Totally beyond my imagination.
Text 6
M: Excuse me. Could you please check to see if we could stay till the day after tomorrow? We’ve
found some extra things we’d like to do in this area.
W: OK. But maybe you need to change to the second floor.
M: All right. At least we don’t have to pack up again. We’d like it if we could put off our checkout
till Thursday morning instead of tomorrow morning.
Text 7
W: Hello, Bob! Receive you voice finally.
M: Hi, Penny! I’m sorry for breaking our promise yesterday. I was asked to work extra hours.
W: Well, I see. But anyway, you should have given me a call.
M: I meant to, but I was about to call when the manager asked me to finish a report. I was totally
tied up. I’m really sorry, Penny.
Text 8
M: What are you up to lately?
W: I have been reading a book named Maybe You Should Talk to Someone.
M: How do you feel about it?
W: It is wonderful. I got to this book by chance. Then I was attracted from the very first page.
M: Tell me more!
W: Lori Gottlieb, the writer, helps the readers become aware of his or her own barriers and
strengths. I could even relate to some of the situations in the book. It is very real and not boring at
all.
M: So it is nothing like the serious books written by Aaron Esterson or Erik Erikson.
W: You bet! Lori Gottlieb is an excellent storyteller. Plus, the chapters are bite-sized, both laugh
out-loud funny and inspiring.
M: Sounds good. I will give it a shot.
W: I am sure you will find someone to talk to after reading the book.
Text 9
W: May I see your passport please?
M: Here it is.
W: What do you visit the United States for, Mr. Lee?
M: I am going to attend a trade meeting here in Chicago from April 19th to 21st.
W: How long will you be staying in the U. S.?
M: For 10 days. I’ll fly back to Beijing on April 27th.
W: Will you do any traveling during your stay here?
M: Yes, I will fly to Pennsylvania right after the meeting. I finished my college there and I want to
visit some of my professors. I haven’t seen them since I went back to Beijing.
W: Do you have anything to declare?
M: I’d like to declare two laptop computers.
W: Are you a computer engineer?
M: No. My company makes laptop computers. These are our latest products. I am in charge of
the financing part.
W: All right, Mr. Lee. You are good to go. Thank you for your cooperation and enjoy your trip in
the U. S.
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司Text 10
M: Honestly, I can’t believe my dream has come true. As a young man, I have always been
imagining moving to Los Angeles one day and putting my whole heart into music. Of course, at the
time, this seemed like a very distant hope. But thanks to my fans, supporters and my wife, I’m here
today. First, I released three twelve-song records, which slowly gained attention around my
hometown in Northern England and some nearby regions like Scotland and Ireland. And now, my
latest project, which was just a single song, caught the world’s attention. For that, I’d say it only
happened because I refused to give up. Through the ups and downs in my career, I did it all for the
love of music. So, being recognized for this award means a lot to me. To all the young musicians out
there, you can do it too. Plus, to all the fans and anyone enjoying my music, I’ve done this for you.
This award is for all of us — may many more great things come in the future. Now, put your hands
together for our host, Bob Cage, with the next award.
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