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第一章 应用文写作
一、实战演练
Dear Glen ，
I am Li Hua, monitor of Class 1, Senior 3. I am writing to invite you to join us to climb a
mountain next Friday ， which is the Double Ninth Festival.Mountain climbing serves as a
traditional activity on that day.Standing on the top of the mountain ，we can enjoy broader
horizons.
We will gather at the school gate at 4：00 p．m.on that day.The school bus will take us to the
Qingyun Mountain.Bottled water and snacks will be offered.And there are stone steps up to the
mountaintop，so it won’t be so challenging and tiring.
We would appreciate it if you could join us.
Yours sincerely ，
Li Hua
二、实战演练
Dear Sir or Madam，
I have read your advertisement for a junior reporter at the “Campus Voice” section in the
English school newspaper and I show great interest in it.I feel quite qualified for the position so I
am writing to apply for it.
I have been learning English for more than 10 years with a good command of oral and written
English，which enables me to communicate with others fluently.Moreover，not only am I good at
researching and presenting information in a compelling and informative way but I am also
experienced in interviewing and photographing.Last but not least，I’m outgoing as well as warm-
hearted，which makes me get along well with others.
If given the chance，I plan to fully utilize my skills and work diligently to contribute to the
“Campus Voice” section.I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
三、实战演练
Dear Mr Smith ，
I’m glad to provide you with some suggestions on your upcoming trip to Beijing during theMidAutumn Festival.
Beijing，as the capital of China，offers a rich cultural experience.The Palace Museum
showcases Chinese history.The Tian’anmen Square is a symbol of China.The Great Wall offers
breathtaking views.You can also explore hutongs(traditional alleyways) to experience traditional
Chinese culture.
As for fine food，you can try Beijing Roast Duck，Zhajiangmian and Bingtanghulu.By the
way，use the subways，buses or taxis to get around.Renting a bike or using shared bicycles is also
convenient.
I hope these suggestions will be helpful.Enjoy your trip to Beijing during the MidAutumn
Festival!
Yours sincerely ，
Li Hua
四、实战演练
Dear Anne，
I’m writing to convey my sincere appreciation for your kind help and care during my stay in
London，without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.
During the week，the comfortable room，delicious meals and especially your friendly family
members all made me feel at home，leaving me lasting memories.Moreover，guided by you，I
was honored to have a chance to visit those tourist attractions in London and be exposed to such an
amazing culture as well as beautiful scenery.It was your generous help that enabled me to have a
better understanding of your country and culture.
Thanks again for your kind help and I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to
repay your kindness by showing you around Beijing.
Yours，
Li Hua
五、实战演练
Dear Wilson，
How’s everything with you? I’m excessively sorry to tell you that I can’t attend your
lecture concerning Internet Plus.I’m writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret.
The reason for my being absent is that my mother is seriously ill，so I will take her to hospital
tomorrow since my father is on a business trip for an urgent matter.I will care for my mother.To be
frank，I am extremely interested in the topic of Internet Plus.Therefore，it is really a pity that I
will miss it.I wonder if there are any relevant materials of the lecture.If so，I can learn it by myself
when it’s convenient.
I want to extend my apology to you once again.I hope it won’t cause you much trouble.I
sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apology.
Yours，Li Hua
六、实战演练
Dear Mr Green ，
How is everything going? I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we
adapted for the upcoming English Evening.
The play is based on the story of Hua Mulan who，after disguising herself as a man，joined
the army instead of her father in the Northern Wei Dynasty.To us，however，the adaption of such
an epic is quite challenging and we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play.So would
you please spare some time to revise the draft script attached to this email? If possible，may I pay
you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?
Any of your professional advice would be highly appreciated.Best wishes.
Yours truly ，
Li Hua
七、实战演练
Dear Michael ，
Learning that a study trip will be held，I’d like to recommend a wonderful destination：
Nanjing.Here are the reasons.
As an ancient capital of six dynasties and a modern city with highquality development，
Nanjing has much to provide for a study trip.For example ，the grand museums and solemn
monuments will undoubtedly educate us students not to forget history and motivate us to cherish
the present.Meanwhile，efficient and convenient transportation adds attraction and vitality to this
charming city.
A study trip to Nanjing promises to be fruitful!
Yours ，
Li Hua
八、实战演练
Dear Li Jin，
I’m going to study Chinese in Tianjin this summer vacation.I’m writing to see if it is
possible for you to provide me with information regarding relevant courses in your school.
First of all，I want to know how many students there will be in each class and if the courses
focus on listening and speaking practice.Besides，I wonder whether I’ll have the opportunity to
communicate with Chinese students，which will surely be a good chance for me to learn more
about China.At last，I would be grateful if you could tell me whether accommodations are
included.
I’m looking forward to your early response.
Yours faithfully，
Chris九、实战演练
Dear Terry，
I’m glad to know you desire to be a volunteer of the Sunshine Volunteer Club.As a
member，I do think it is worthwhile to be engaged in voluntary work.I’m writing to share with
you the details concerning it.
A wide variety of regular activities are scheduled on a weekly basis，such as visiting the
nursing home and organizing events to raise people’s awareness of environmental protection.Last
weekend we collected books for the children in remote areas who have little access to them.We
make great efforts to spread warmth and care，and it does pay off.Once you decide，please fill in
the attached application form and send it to me.
Eagerly looking forward to your participation.
Yours，
Li Hua
十、实战演练
Dear Australian friends ，
On behalf of our school，I feel greatly privileged to convey warm welcome to you.We are
delighted to have you with us.
To make your stay here memorable，various activities will be arranged to enhance our mutual
understanding and experience different culture.As planned，we will hold a talent show where
everyone can show their outstanding performances.Classes on traditional Chinese culture are also
scheduled，such as papercutting，Chinese opera，calligraphy，etc.，followed by a gift-
exchanging activity.Additionally，you’re invited to pay a visit to surrounding tourist attractions.
I sincerely hope that you can enjoy yourselves and wish you a pleasant journey.Thank you!
Yours ，
Li Hua
十一、实战演练
NOTICE
To promote our traditional Chinese culture，“Tang Suit Design Contest” will be held in the
school hall next Friday.
Every participant is allowed to hand in only one entry，which must be designed on your
own.Besides，each piece is required to be displayed with a brief introduction of your design
philosophy.All entries will be submitted to the Students’ Council before next Tuesday.Those that
stand out as the top ten will be awarded.Pictures of the winners’ works will be posted on our
school website.
Every student studying in the International Department is welcome to take part in the
competition.
The Students ’ Council十二、实战演练
World Environment Day on Campus
June 5th,2023 marked the 50th anniversary of World Environment Day，with the slogan
“Beat Plastic Pollution”．In honor of this occasion，our school organized various activities to
sensitize students about the urgent need to combat plastic pollution and promote sustainable
practices.
The event started with an engaging presentation by environmental experts，who highlighted
the detrimental impact of plastic and emphasized the importance of reducing，reusing，and
recycling plastic.Then a plastic collection drive was held so as to encourage everyone to bring in
their plastic waste for proper disposal.Additionally ，students participated in a postermaking
competition，creating thoughtprovoking artworks that showcased the importance of sustainable
alternatives.
The response to these activities was overwhelming.It is through such collective efforts that we
can hope to “Beat Plastic Pollution” and create a cleaner，healthier environment for future
generations.
English Club
十三、实战演练
Last week，I participated in our school sports meeting，competing in the 400meter race—a
thrilling and unforgettable experience.
On hearing the sharp whistle，I dashed out，the wind rushing against my face and the
crowd’s cheers echoing around me.My attempts to match the pace of fellow runners proved
challenging，but I did not give up.I pushed myself to the limit and crossed the finishing line with
all my strength.
I was glad that I took part in the sports meeting，which not only pushed my limits but also
made me realize the importance of persistence.
十四、实战演练
Dear schoolmates ，
Volunteering is playing a crucial role in students ’ overall development.With the approach of
winter vacation, it ’ s high time that we took up volunteering .
A willing heart to volunteer provides us with massive benefits.Volunteering not only makes us
feel connected with the community but also is beneficial to our wellbeing.Blessed with a sense of
purpose in life，we are offered an amazing opportunity to learn valuable skills.There are different
ways of serving people，ranging from volunteering at children’s home or libraries to virtual
volunteering，such as helping pupils with schoolwork online.
Why not throw ourselves into volunteering? It makes us a better person and creates a better
world.
Yours sincerely ，Li Hua
十五、实战演练
The Person I Admire Most
When it comes to the person I admire most，I can’t help thinking of Fan Jinshi who is an
archaeologist and a guard of Dunhuang.
After graduating from Peking University，Fan Jinshi chose to work in Mogao Caves，
Dunhuang.Although the living environment was terrible，she was deeply attracted by the works of
art and desired to protect them for the future generations.She and her team overcame difficulties，
explored scientific concepts and built a “digital Dunhuang” ， which has balanced the
relationship between cultural relics protection and tourism.
Fan Jinshi is called the daughter of Dunhuang.She deserves the respect of all at home and
abroad.
第二章 读后续写
第 2 节 技法指导
技法三
A few weeks later，when I almost forgot the contest，there came the news.To everyone’s
surprise，I，an immigrant，won first place in the writing contest.Hearing the good news，I felt a
sense of joy surging through me.I leapt into the air and shouted out loud，“I made it！”During
the award presentation ceremony，I was invited to deliver a speech.Patiently and confidently，I
told the audience how I once didn’t love writing and now enjoyed writing and how I realized the
value of perseverance with the help of my teacher.
I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation.With the trophy in hand，I entered
the office.My teacher rose from the seat and came up to me.“Congratulations！” he said，
slapping me on the back.He grinned from ear to ear as I showed him the trophy.“I owe my success
to you，” I said sincerely.“Without your encouragement and belief，I wouldn’t have
succeeded.” He laughed，his eyes shining with excitement.“I knew you had it in you.I’m
proud of you for not giving up.” Whenever looking back on this incident，I feel extremely
grateful to him.It was my social studies teacher who encouraged me to realize my potential and
thus changed the course of my life.
技法四 实战演练
Ⅰ.1.Relieved，Jenny told the truth to everyone.
2．Feeling scared and helpless，Jane sat beside a tree and held her shoulders in her arms to makeherself warm.
3．They hugged and kissed with tears rolling/pouring/streaming down their cheeks.
4．“I...I don’t know，” he stammered, his voice trembling with fear.
5．If she had not quarreled with Tom, they would have enjoyed a great time near the lake.
6．Mother hugged the twins tightly，whose faces were glowing with excitement.
7．Since he continued speaking about wanting to share his paintings with the world, I knew what
had to be done.
8．I thanked him，saying that not only did he mend my shirt with his craftsmanship but he also
repaired my dream with sportsmanship.
9．It was at that moment that I was overwhelmed with gratitude to my teacher.
10．A cold feeling crept over his heart and made him shiver.
11．Drowned in happiness，Jimmy dashed out of the school gate like a free bird.
12．Seeing such extraordinary beauty, I think every cell in my body woke up.
Ⅱ. But Molly insisted that they should wait and keep the book.She didn’t place the illustrated
book on the bookshelf，hoping Rick would show up soon.A kid might make all kinds of promises
and fail to keep them.But Rick was so sincere and eager that Molly believed he wouldn’t break
his promise.A kid’s promise is more valuable than the cost of the book.The book would rest in the
drawer still until Rick showed up.Then on one sunny morning，Molly found a little boy running all
the way towards her bookstore holding something.The little boy was exactly Rick.
Rick pushed the door open and rushed to the counter holding his money box.Molly excitedly
pulled the drawer open ， took out the illustrated book and walked out from the counter
immediately.She knelt with one leg and smiled at Rick，handing the book to Rick.Rick’s eyes
were shining looking at the book，and he put the box on the floor and held the book.“I think you
guys had better make your deal here at the coffee table，” said Rex.Molly winked at him
delightedly.The sunlight came through the glass window and cast on the little customer and the nice
lady.
第 3 节 语料素材
一、实战演练
1．Her face lit up with happiness as she received the presents prepared by the children.
2．They jumped to their feet at the news, with their eyes filled with joy.
Hearing the news, they jumped to their feet with joy in their eyes.
3．Overwhelmed with gratitude, I couldn’t say a word.
4．I was so deeply moved that tears welled up in my eyes.
5．Hearing the news that his father passed away, his eyes welled up with tears.6．She got lost and it began to rain, a deep sense of despair overwhelming her.
7．Her face turning pale, she stood there, tonguetied.
8．My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office.
9．At the thought of the frightening bear, a sense of fear welled up in him.
10．He was half dead with fear when he found he was surrounded by wolves.
实战演练
1．Having known others’ attitude, he shook/trembled with anger, holding his clothes firmly.
2．Filled with anger, Mike was unable to speak a word.
3．I was about to explode and waved my fist at him.
4．I was ashamed of my bad performance in the contest.
5．I stared at him in shock, with a small sound of disappointment escaping my throat.
6．What surprised me was that there was a path here.
7．A look of surprise crossed her face but she soon calmed down.
8．Uncontrollably, a wave of regret washed over me as I heard the bad news.
9．If only I had not left the farm alone!
10．If I had followed his advice, we would be having fun together.
二、实战演练
Ⅰ.1.She jumped up，dashed forward and hugged the boy tightly.
2．Standing beside the empty road，they looked up into the sky, feeling the precious peace.
3．As night was beginning to fall, Jane sat on the grass, staring at the vast sky, frightened and
hungry.
4．With a bunch of flowers in her hands，Mindy stood beside the sea and looked down at the
flowers with a smile，wondering what to do tomorrow.
5．She crept along the path，bent over swiftly and cupped her hands around the butterfly gently.
6．With her heart beating wildly，the innocent girl，held by her mom and screaming with
excitement，unwrapped her delicate gift box which she had been looking forward to without any
hesitation.
7．Every one of us on the bus looked on and laughed crazily.Ryan struggled to his feet，dusted the
jacket and made his way to an empty seat.
8．Looking straight into my eyes，Mike stroked my hair, whispering，“You are the most
beautiful girl I’ve ever met.”
Ⅱ.1.the twins got up early, tiptoed to the kitchen and scooped some flour out of the bag their
father slid into the kitchen，patting the twins’ shoulders and comforting them in a soft voice
they carried the breakfast，advanced upstairs and woke up their mother
2．I signaled to him with a thumbsup, feeling proud of him He smiled, took a deep breath and
got ready for the race，eyes brimming with determination every runner shot like an arrow
三、实战演练1．The gentle breeze stroked his head，as if comforting all his tiredness.
2．I closed my eyes and daydreamed in the speeding car.Winding rivers, lofty mountains, deep
alleys and sunny beaches held me entirely in their fascination.
3．The sun looked at her with a glowing smile and the flowers nodded merrily towards her.
4．The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven，whipping against
the branches of lined trees.
5．On the day back to school，dark clouds hung low in the sky.The rain poured down，with cold
drops and angry winds slapping my face.I was drowned in floods of warm tears and freezing rain.
四、实战演练
1．Festivals let us enjoy life，be proud of our customs and forget our work for a little while.
2．The precious tricycle not only helped me through that tough period，but also carried Father’s
love forward into the far，far future.
3．Seeing the paper bag，I felt as if it had been reminding me that I should pass on the kindness
that the Mexican family offered me every time I meet someone in need.
4．No matter how ordinary a job is，it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our respect.
5．Cold as the rain was，great warmth filled his heart like never before.
6．It dawned on me that we should always be an honest person whatever situations we are in.
7．I am firmly convinced that the slight power of every person can make our country more
prosperous.
8．All the students came to realize that everyone wants and deserves to be treated with respect，
dignity and warmth.
9．It is not how much we do but how much love we put into what we do that benefits our work
most.
10．The gift you give is not something your loved one keeps，but a voluntary contribution
towards the people who really need it in their lives.
第 4 节 分类集训
一、 When my Monday came，I again took the bus to KMTV alone and waited.Everything was
familiar this time.But hearing the musical sounds and applause from time to time，I felt my heart
was pounding with excitement and nervousness.Eventually，it was my turn.Taking a deep breath，
I calmed down.Confident，I went to the piano and began to play.Easy，so easy! Fun almost...right
up to the coda at the end.I suddenly realized I should not be at the end! My heart jumped to my
mouth.I had skipped a part.A huge part.How did that happen?
Somehow my brain went to work and I continued playing.I tried to smile at the camera and
played the rest smoothly as if no skipping had happened.After what seemed an eternity，I stoppedplaying.However，it turned out that my performance had probably lasted barely a minute.Surely
the result was as expected—I wasn’t the winner.On my way home，I surprised myself by feeling
more relieved than disappointed.I could not pretend that my performance was best.In truth，the
other three were far superior.When I came back home to talk about “The Big Skip”，Daddy
smiled，“It may not have been noticed by someone who doesn’t know Schubert’s ‘Ave
Maria’ ． Your movement was smooth.You didn’t fall apart.All in all ， a worthwhile
experience.”
二、 No sooner had I picked up my phone than Lisa called me.“Belle，how is it going? Do you
still need my help？” Lisa asked.“Thanks，Lisa.Everything is OK.And I’d like to tell you
about it，” I said.I told her exactly what had happened，and specifically described how I had
solved the problem.Lisa praised me for my quick wit.Then I asked her to teach me German in case
I needed it later.She promised.By the end of the holiday，I could have already communicated with
her in some simple German words.So I was ready for the new term with confidence.
When the German teacher entered the classroom in the new term，I felt I’d seen her
somewhere before.What amazed me was that she came over to me，saying，“Glad to see you
again！I’m Florence.” I was surprised to find that she was the daughter of the lady that I had
helped during the holiday.What a fantastic fate! As our new foreign teacher，Florence was patient
and considerate.We all respected her and took every lesson seriously.I even made friends with her
mother，so I had more opportunities to practise speaking German.I was resolved to visit Germany
the next summer holiday.
三、 Giving or keeping? I struggled with myself.Giving it? Hardly could I imagine life without
the model car! After all，it was my most precious treasure，which I had been proud of.My heart
kept aching at the prospect of giving it away.Nope! I shook my head determinedly.Glancing at my
mother’s expectant eyes，I couldn’t help sobbing.Keeping it? Definitely，it would otherwise
upset Alex.Torn between the two tough choices，I was totally at a loss.Nevertheless，deep
down，I could feel my affection for Alex.Yep! I resolved to do the right thing.
In the moment of parting，my model car went with Alex.Though I was crushed to see it go，
my heart sang when I saw his beaming face as he tightly clutched it.Seeing the thumbsup from my
mother and sister，I did swell with relief，pride and joy，for I knew it was not a gift；to some
extent，it was our concern and love for him.Plus，sharing the model car also strengthened our
bond，which，I was fully convinced，would always uplift him.An effort made for the happiness
of others lifted us above ourselves as well.
四、 Then came the final testing day.The whole class gathered in the science classroom，
watching breathlessly as Jeff carefully loaded their selfmade robotic hand onto Sergio’s right
arm.It fitted quite well! So excited was Sergio that his arm trembled slightly.Having put a baseball
on the desk，Jeff signed to Sergio to pick it up.Slowly，Sergio extended his right hand and
reached for the ball.Successfully he caught hold of it and everyone present broke into cheers!Holding the ball，Sergio couldn’t contain his tears.Never in his life did he expect to catch
something with his right hand!
The lifechanging gift for Sergio drew huge attention.Jeff and his students became an instant hit
and various media competed to cover the news.When interviewed about the intention of the
project，Jeff said，“I intended Sergio’s robotic hand to show our support for him.Meanwhile，
I hope to foster students’ scientific spirit through this handson operation.” His students stated
that Jeff challenged them to transform abstract concepts into reality，from which they benefited
greatly.Soon voluntary donations poured in，which would go to the school’s scientific research
and help students develop better.
五、 Ruby walked over to my mother，we girls holding our breath.We waited to see who would
shout first and what terrible things would be said.“We are sorry about the flowers.The girls will
fix them and help weed the roses，” said Mom.My sisters and I looked at each other in horror，
but Ruby smiled through her tears.“I know we’re particular about these roses，but they’re
very special because they remind me of my mother.” Soon both women were down on their knees
examining the damaged bushes together.
A few weeks later，the plants all came back to life.My mother and Ruby worked together on
the roses all summer and many summers to follow.So did my sisters and I．A friendship was
formed between the families.Ruby became part of our family，spending many happy hours at our
house，especially during countless birthdays，graduations and weddings.And the rose fence
wasn’t a fence any longer.My mother had turned it into a bridge.
六、 Suddenly，I remembered the door to the basement.I dashed to the door and opened it
without any hesitation.There she sat on the top step，quiet as a mouse，head down，ears hanging
down.She had been following me，as she always did，and I had casually closed the door on
her.So she had to wait quietly for me to find her.I don’t know whether she assumed that she was
being punished，but it was clear that she was hurt，for she behaved differently this time.
I held her in my arms tightly，telling her how sorry I was.I touched her head and rubbed her
belly gently，telling her that she was not making trouble.She let me hold her for exactly one
minute and then suddenly ran off，returning with a toy for me to throw.At that very moment，
Dottie taught me a valuable lesson：Forgive quickly because forgiveness is to light a lamp not just
for others but also for ourselves.Life is short.There is so much love to offer and receive and so
many toys to chase.
