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专题 01 读后续写进阶必备 20 个句型仿写（讲义）原卷版
句型仿写精讲
句型一: A sense(wave/flush/ripple) of +情绪 n flooded over(swept over/surged through/seized) sb
例句：(2024 新课标 I&II 卷)听到冈特的话，我心中涌起一股感激之情。
A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard Gunter’s words.
仿写 1：(2025 浙江 1 月卷)一种复杂的内疚感涌上凯文的心头，他怀疑自己的判断是否过于草率。
_______________________________ Kevin, wondering if his judgment had been too hasty.
仿写 2：(2025 八省联考卷)当我注意到一大群骑自行车的人都戴着徽章时，一阵恐慌席卷了我。
_______________________________ as I noticed a sea of bikers, all wearing insignia.
句型二：with+宾语+宾语补足语
例句：他冲出了房间，心怦怦直跳，满脸通红。
He rushed out of the room with his heart beating wildly and his face flushing .
仿写 1：(2025 浙江 1 月卷) 凯文紧张得心都提到了嗓子眼，他抓起希尔太太家的电话，拨打了警察的电话。
_______________________________, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
仿写 2：(2025 浙江 1 月卷) 他手里拿着那块旧表，被那人焦虑的声音弄糊涂了，无助地看着格林先生。
_______________________________, he was confused by the man's anxious voice, helplessly looking at Mr.
Green.
句型三：Done by sth, sb did sth
例句： Encouraged by my uncle’s word s, I refitted my bait, and put the pole again into the water.在叔叔的话的鼓
励下，我重新装上了鱼饵，又把鱼竿放进了水里。
仿写 1：(2025 八省联考卷)被他们的热情和善良所感动，我走近他们，表达了我的钦佩和尊重。
_______________________________, I approached them and expressed my admiration and respect.
仿写 2：(2025 八省联考卷)困惑和担忧交织在一起，我等待着电影的开始。
_______________________________, I waited for the film to start.
句型四：情绪名词 1 gave way to 情绪名词 2
例句：埃勒斯最终成功地将这只动物哄骗到他身边。紧张和恐惧让位于喜悦。
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司仿写 1：(2024 浙江 1 月卷) 看到这些感人的场景，我之前的恐慌变成了尊重。
At the sight of the touching scenes, _______________________________.
仿写 2：(2025 八省联考卷) 我早些时候感到的恐惧让位于对他们的奉献精神和善良深表敬意。
_______________________________a deep respect for their dedication and kindness.
句型五：So 情绪 adj. was sb that +从句
例句：汤姆伤心得眼泪夺眶而出。
So sad was Tom that tears welled up in his eyes.
仿写 1：我妈妈非常内疚，她低下头喃喃地说：“对不起。
_______________________________ that she lowered her head and murmured, “Sorry.”
仿写 2：(2025 浙江 1 月卷)凯文感到非常羞愧，他能感觉到鲜血涌上他的脸。
_______________________________ that he could feel the blood rush to his face.
句型六：What 情绪 v. sb was that +从句
例句：让我生气的是，他竟然背叛了我们的友谊。
What angered me was that he betrayed our friendship.
仿写 1：让他紧张的是，他即将面对一个大型的公众演讲。
_______________________________that he was about to face a large public speech.
仿写 2：使他们担忧的是，天气预报说明天会有一场大暴雨。
_______________________________ that the weather forecast said there would be a heavy rainstorm tomorrow.
句型七：Much/Greatly to one’s 情绪 n., sb did sth
例句：令家人惊讶的是，丹尼斯信守诺言！
Much to the family’s surpris e, Dennis stuck to his promise!
仿写 1：看到我的女儿在比赛中获得金牌，我深感骄傲。
_______________________________, I saw my daughter win a gold medal in the competition.
仿写 2：(2025 浙江 1 月卷)令所有人惊讶的是，它就在那里——一块旧表，正如那人所描述的那样。
_______________________________, there it was—an old watch, just as the man had described.
句型八：情绪 adj. and 情绪 adj., sb did sth
例句：疲惫和害怕的简躺在一块石头旁边，想念她的家人。
Exhausted and scared , Jane lay down near a stone, missing her family.
仿写 1：感到沮丧，挫败，汤姆在考试失败后独自坐在教室里。原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司_______________________________, Tom sat alone in the classroom after failing the exam.
仿写 2：(2025 八省联考卷)我惊讶地发现，那些骑自行车的人都很井然有序。
_______________________________, I noticed that the bikers were all in an orderly manner.
句型九：Adj. as 主+谓, sb did sth
例句：虽然简很虚弱，但她加快了沿着溪流的速度，找到了回去的路。
Weak as Jane was , she picked up speed along the stream to find the way back.
仿写 1：尽管他很害羞，但他还是鼓起勇气向女孩表白了。
_______________________________, he summoned up the courage to confess his feelings to the girl.
仿写 2：(2025 八省联考卷)尽管我仍然很紧张，但我试图让自己冷静下来，等待电影开始。
_______________________________, I tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film to start.
句型十：Having done sth, sb did sth
例句：写完报告后，他关掉了电脑准备休息。
Having finished writing the report , he turned off the computer and prepared to rest.
仿写 1：(2024 浙江 1 月卷)格林先生叹了一口气，拿起木质地板条陪凯文去警察局。
_______________________________, Mr. Green picked the floorboard up and accompanied Kevin to the police.
仿写 2：(2024 新课标 I&II 卷)留下电话号码后，我匆匆赶去赶公共汽车。当我回头看时，我看见他向我挥
手告别。
_______________________________, I hurried to catch the bus. When I looked back, I saw him waving me
goodbye.
句型十一：Sb did A, did B and did C
例句：拉里靠边停车，踩下刹车，拿起灭火器。
Larry pulled over , set the brake and got hold o f the fire extinguisher.
仿写 1：(2025 八省联考卷)中间休息时，其中一人甚至对我微笑，走近我，递给我一本关于他们救援工作的
小册子。
During the break, one of them even _______________________________ a booklet about their rescue work.
仿写 2：(2024 新课标 I&II 卷)冈特慷慨地微笑着把我的道歉抛在一边，把手伸进夹克口袋，递给我一堆钱。
Gunter waved my apology aside with a generous smile, _______________________________ me a stack of
money.
句型十二：Upon doing sth, sb did sth原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司on/upon 后面的动名词多为：go, arrive, leave, reach, return, step, enter 等。
例句：一听到这个好消息，学生们在教室里大声欢呼起来。
Upon hearing the good new s, the students cheered loudly in the classroom.
仿写 1：到达村子后，我们受到了村民的热烈欢迎。
_______________________________, we were warmly welcomed by the villagers.
仿写 2：走出房间后，杰克听到电话铃声。
_______________________________, Jack heard the telephone ringing.
句型十三：Doing sth, sb did sth
例句：我和其中一位教官挽着手，帮助把这个年轻人从水里抬了出来
Linking arms with one of the instructors , I helped carry the young man out of the water.
仿写 1：(2025 八省联考卷)看到他们的辛勤工作和奉献精神，我深受感动，但也为之前的恐惧感到有点羞愧。
_______________________________, I was deeply touched but felt a bit ashamed of my earlier fear.
仿写 2：(2025 八省联考卷) 深吸一口气，我设法找到了一个离他们尽可能远的空座位。
_______________________________, I managed to find an empty seat as far away from them as possible.
句型十四：Sb said (replied/answered ...) in a +情绪形容词+voice, “…”
例句：苏珊用愧疚的声音向祖母道歉，“对不起。这是我的错。
Susan apologized to her grandmother in a guilty voice, “I’m sorry . It’s my fault.”
仿写 1：她用兴奋的声音说：“我赢了比赛！”
She said in an excited voice, " _______________________________ "
仿写 2：(2024 新课标 I&II 卷) “别担心，”冈特用安抚的语气说，“我会想出办法的。”
" _______________________________ ," he said in a reassuring tone, " _______________________________ ."
句型十五：It was+被强调部分+that….
例句： It was on that day that he realized that what his son needed was nothing but company.
就是在那天，他才意识到他儿子需要的仅仅是陪伴。
仿写 1：(2025 八省联考卷)正是通过这次勇敢的冒险，我结识了这些热情的动物救援人员，他们外表坚强，
内心温柔。
_______________________________ I got acquainted with these enthusiastic animal rescuers, who were tough
outside but tender inside.
仿写 2：(2024 浙江 1 月卷) 直到那时，我才真正明白“不要以貌取人”。原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司_______________________________ I really understood “don’t judge a book by its cover”.
句型十六：With growing +情绪 n, Sb did sth
例句：随着焦虑的增加，我大声喊道：“救命！”
With growing anxiety , I shouted at the top of my lungs, “Help!”
仿写 1：随着恐惧的增加，艾莉和我以最快的速度收拾了我们的营地。
_______________________________, Elli and I packed up our camp as quickly as possible.
仿写 2：随着对友情的珍视不断增长，她更加珍惜与朋友的时光。
_______________________________, she cherished her time with friends even more.
句型十七：简洁对话或独白
例句：我不是故意的，”她低声说。
“I didn’t mean to,” she murmured in a low voice.
仿写 1：(2025 浙江 1 月卷)格林先生微笑着拍了拍他的肩膀，说：“凯文，你做得很好，你很勇敢。”
Mr. Green patted him on the shoulder with a smile, saying, “ _______________________________ ”
仿写 2：(2024 新课标 I&II 卷) 临别前，冈特掏出手机，拍拍我的肩膀，笑着说：“我们一起拍张照吧！”
Before parting, Gunter fished out his phone, patted me on the shoulder and smiled “ _______________________ ”
句型十八：No sooner…than…(部分倒装)
例句：直到那只兔子完全消失在我们的视线中，我们才不追了。
No sooner had the rabbit got completely out of sight than we stopped chasing after it.
仿写 1：(2024 新课标 I&II 卷) 直到我们分手我才意识到冈特不仅是我的救命恩人，也是我的好朋友。
_______________________________ I realized that Gunter had not only been a lifesaver but also a wonderful
friend.
仿写 2：(2025 八省联考卷)我刚安顿下来，就注意到一个骑自行车的人正在调整投影仪，另一个则抚摸着他
身边的小狗。
_______________________________ I noticed a biker adjusting the projector and another petting a small
dog by his side.
句型十九：表示时间、地点、天气等无生命词作主语
例句：我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。
Her face lit up/brightened when I gave her the present.
仿写 1：(2025 浙江 1 月卷)这段独特的经历教会了凯文如何正确处理道德困境。原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司_______________________________ taught Kevin how to properly deal with moral dilemmas.
仿写 2：(2024 新课标 I&II 卷) 这张照片至今仍放在我的桌子上，提醒我要相信他人，并给予善意。
_______________________________, which serves as a reminder of trusting others and offering kindness.
句型二十：It occurred to/dawned on sb that…（感悟内容）
例句：约翰突然想到，他可以用旧家具来做他的艺术项目。
It dawned on John tha t he could use the old furniture for his art project.
仿写 1：(2024 浙江 1 月卷)从那时起，伊娃不再被这座建筑的大小所压倒，而是将其视为一项需要克服的挑
战。
One lap at a time did work! So did one floor a week! _______________________________ goals are easier to
achieve in small steps.
仿写 2：(2025 浙江 1 月卷)凯文突然意识到，生活不仅仅是激动人心的；它还涉及勇气、责任和理解。
_______________________________ life held more than just excitement; it also involved courage, responsibility
and understanding.
句型仿写语篇精炼
【仿写精炼 1】（24-25 高三上·湖北·期末）阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
Forty or so years ago, Andreas was born in a little village in Northern Greece, Macedonia, a village where
old stone buildings could tell stories of a thousand years past and where tradition stayed strong and religious
festivities are upheld with the highest honor. Andreas’ parents gave it all to support his brother to go to a medical
college, which made life difficult for this family. When other children in the village played with toys, the only “toys”
Andreas had access to were his brother’s medical textbooks. His mother often sat by the flickering candlelight,
telling stories of bravery and hope. His father worked tirelessly to support the family.
When I first met Andreas, it was Christmas day this year. For Andreas, a dedicated doctor, it was simply
another day spent in a white-walled hospital. In the corner of Andreas’ office sat an evergreen tree decorated with
ribbons and fairy lights. But for Andreas, just like last Christmas, he would rather not enjoy the Christmas lights.
Instead, he was surrounded by flashes of red from arriving ambulances and beeping bedside monitors.
He shared with me his childhood hatred towards Santa Claus. “But, why did you hate Santa? Was it because原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司you knew he wasn’t real?” I asked Andreas. “No!” Andreas laughed out loud. “It was because Santa never brought
me Christmas gifts! Santa brought the other children gifts, but nothing for me. Never. Nothing!” He threw his head
back, and I couldn’t help but join the broken heart of the boy who hated Santa Claus.
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With a hint of sadness, Andreas continued to explain, “During my childhood, my parents couldn’t afford to buy me
gifts.”
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His appetite for reading and the example his brother set inspired him to study hard and become a doctor.
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【仿写精炼 2】（24-25 高三上·山东临沂·期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。
The minute we got into the taxi, I had a bad feeling. The driver asked me to fasten the kid’s safety belt after I
already had. His half-violent attitude made me uncomfortable.
Lev was almost 4 then. Unlike me, he cared less about the driver and focused mainly on the scenery along
the way. He sang quietly to himself with his short legs waving in the air. At one point, his right sandal (凉鞋) hit
the taxi’s plastic ashtray, knocking it over onto the floor. It was empty; nothing spilled. I had already bent to pick it
up when the driver stopped the car suddenly, turned around to us and, with his face really close to my son’s face,
began screaming. “You stupid kid. You broke my car!”
“Hey, are you crazy or something?” I shouted at the driver. “Yelling (大喊) at a 3-year-old because of a
piece of plastic? Turn around and start driving, or I swear, next week you will not be driving any public vehicle,
you hear me?” When I saw that he was about to say something, I added, “Shut your mouth now and drive!”
The driver gave me a hateful look. I could sense he was weighing the choice between hitting me in the face
and losing his job. After a long moment’s silence, he took a deep breath, turned around, and drove on.
On the taxi’s radio, somebody was singing “Don’t Worry, Be Happy,” but I felt very far from happy. I原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！
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学科网（北京）股份有限公司looked at Lev and tried to find another ray of light in that unpleasant ride, but I couldn’t. I smiled at Lev and held
his hand. He looked at me hard, but didn’t smile back. “Daddy,” he asked, “what did the man say?”
“The man said,” I answered quickly, as if it were nothing, “that when you’re riding in a car, you have to
watch how you move your legs so you don’t break anything.” Lev nodded, looked out the window and a second
later asked, “And what did you say to the man?”
“Me?” I said to Lev, trying to gain a little time. “I told the man that he was right, but that he should say
quietly and politely, and not yell.”
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“But you yelled at him,” Lev said, confused.
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The driver the car and turned around.
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