09. 慰问信——2025 年高考备考英语应用文写作快速突破
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【最新真题、模拟题、联考试题】
1．Dear Victor,
I hope this letter finds you in a better state of health. Upon hearing of your illness, I am really concerned and
send you my best wishes for a speedy recovery. I think it might cheer you up a little to know the updates here at
school.
In your absence, the school has been buzzing with activities. Last week witnessed a wonderful exhibition of
traditional Chinese painting both by teachers and students in the school's gallery. Some of the paintings are of
exceptional beauty and quality. I found myself particularly drawn to relaxing landscape paintings, which
temporarily freed me from the daily routines.
Hopefully you can make it to the one-month exhibition after your recovery. Take care of yourself and get
better.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给最近生病的外教Victor写电子邮件表示安慰，并分享学校最近举办
的师生国画作品展活动。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
希望：hope→ wish
担忧的：concerned→ worried
非凡的：exceptional→ extraordinary
照顾：take care of→ look after
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Upon hearing of your illness, I am really concerned and send you my best wishes for a speedy recovery.
拓展句：I am really concerned and send you my best wishes for a speedy recovery as soon as I hear of your
illness.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I hope this letter finds you in a better state of health.(运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I found myself particularly drawn to relaxing landscape paintings, which temporarily freed me
from the daily routines.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2．Dear Anna,
I’m sorry to hear about your unsuccessful bid for the student council. Failure can be tough, but remember, as
Winston Churchill said, “Success is not final, failure is not fatal; it is the courage to continue that counts.” So, don't
let one small failure stand in your way.
Think of Edison, who failed thousands of times before inventing the light bulb. His courage to persevere led to a
world-changing discovery. You, too, have the potential to overcome this setback. Don’t let this failure define you;
let it be a stepping stone to greater success.
Keep going, Anna. It is your courage and determination that will lead you to new heights. I believe you will be
selected successfully in the next election.
Best wishes,
Xu Jing
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于远在英国的朋友Anna前几天给你发来电子邮件，向你叙述了她
未能成功入选校学生会的事情，为此一直闷闷不乐，恰巧你在图书馆看到下面图中英国前首相丘吉尔讲过
的这句名言这一情况，给Anna回一封邮件，用这句名言来劝慰和鼓励她。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
痛苦的：tough→ painful
挫折：setback→ frustration
克服：overcome→ conquer
决心：determination→ resolution
2.句式拓展
简单句变非谓语作状语
原句：I’m sorry to hear about your unsuccessful bid for the student council.
拓展句：Hearing about you failed in your bid for the student council, I feel so sorry.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Think of Edison, who failed thousands of times before inventing the light bulb.（运用了关系代词
who引导的非限制性定语从句。）【高分句型2】It is your courage and determination that will lead you to new heights.（运用了It is…that…的强
调句式。）
3．One possible version:
Dear Julia,
I’m really sorry to hear about the prank that hurt your self-esteem and made you doubt yourself.
Please remember that your worth is not determined by others’ actions or words. You are a strong and
incredible person, full of unique qualities and strengths. Don’t let this incident define you. Surround yourself with
people who truly appreciate and support you. Take some time to reflect on the things that make you special, and
focus on nurturing your self-confidence.
If there’s anything I can do to support you, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生回复英国笔友Julia的邮件，对她在邮件中描述的因恶作剧而受到
伤害的情况给予安慰。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
伤害：hurt→injure
决定：determine→decide
了不起的：incredible→remarkable, extraordinary
专注于：focus on→concentrate on
培养：nurture→develop, cultivate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You are a strong and incredible person, full of unique qualities and strengths.
拓展句：You are a strong and incredible person, who is full of unique qualities and strengths.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I’m really sorry to hear about the prank that hurt your self-esteem and made you doubt yourself. (运
用了that引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Please remember that your worth is not determined by others’ actions or words. (运用了that引导宾
语从句)4． Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t get your parents’ permission to go on a week-long trip in March with your
friends before this term starts. You’re upset and I’d like to give you some comfort and advice.
As far as I’m concerned, the most important thing that you need do now is have a good conversation with your
parents, which is beneficial to your relationship. Besides, there is no need for you to be disappointed about this
because your parents just want to protect you from potentially dangerous situation. Then it's better to promise that
you'll be devoted to your studies and improve your academic performance. Meanwhile, you should patiently
explain the safety of this plan to your parents to avoid their worries about you．
I hope you will get better in no time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。最近你收到英国好友Jim的来信，得知他他
计划在3月开学前一周与朋友出去旅行，但父母不同意，他感到非常沮丧。请你给Jim写一封回信，表示
理解并给予安慰，并提出建议。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
失望的：upset→ discouraged
建议：advice→ suggestion
有益的：beneficial→ helpful
此外：besides→ in addition
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：You’re upset and I’d like to give you some comfort and advice.
拓展句：Since you’re upset, I’d like to give you some comfort and advice.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] As far as I’m concerned, the most important thing that you need do now is have a good conversation
with your parents, which is beneficial to your relationship. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, there is no need for you to be disappointed about this because your parents just want to
protect you from potentially dangerous situation. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)5．Dear Alice,
I’m sorry to hear that you find it difficult to fit into the new environment since you entered a new senior
high school. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. Actually, it is not unusual for teenagers
like you to meet with such problems. Perhaps the following suggestions will be helpful to you.
First of all, I recommend that you exchange ideas with your classmates as often as possible. Only in this way
can you know each other better. Besides, it is also a good idea to take an active part in school activities, where you
can get more help and make more friends. Finally, faced with challenges or awkward problems, why not turn to
your teachers for help? I’m sure they will be always there for you.
In my eyes, you are confident, courageous, and cannot be defeated! I do believe that you will get through the
hard time and embrace a brighter future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生英国笔友Alice写封回信，帮助她走出因为刚刚转学导致的困境。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
适应：fit into→ adapt to
焦虑的：anxious→ tense
首先：first of all→to begin with
此外：besides→ what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Finally, faced with challenges or awkward problems, why not turn to your teachers for help?
拓展句：Finally, when you are faced with challenges or awkward problems, why not turn to your teachers for
help?
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
I’m sorry to hear that you find it difficult to fit into the new environment since you entered a new senior high
school.（运用了that引导宾语从句，since引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]Only in this way can you know each other better.（运用了部分倒装）
