01. 祝贺信——2025 年高考备考英语应用文写作快速突破
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【最新真题、模拟题、联考试题】
1．Dear Terry,
I am thrilled to hear that you have achieved the second prize in our Idiom Challenge Competition!
Congratulations on your remarkable accomplishment!
Your dedication and hard work have paid off, and your success is a testament to your efforts. This
achievement is not only a credit to you but also a proud moment for our school.
Keep up the good work, and I am sure that many more successes await you in the future. Once again,
congratulations!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Terry写一封祝贺信，祝贺他在校成语闯关比赛中获得二等奖，内
容包括：向他表示祝贺，肯定他的付出。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→excited
非凡的：remarkable→extraordinary
全身心投入：dedication→commitment
证明：testament→proof
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：This achievement is not only a credit to you but also a proud moment for our school.
拓展句：Not only is this achievement a credit to you but it also is a proud moment for our school.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
I am thrilled to hear that you have achieved the second prize in our Idiom Challenge Competition!(使用了不定式作状语、that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】
Keep up the good work, and I am sure that many more successes await you in the future. (使用了祈使句、that引
导宾语从句)
2．Dear Lucy,
With your birthday approaching, I sincerely wish you a happy birthday!
To convey my sincere wishes, I’ve made some paper cuttings for you. One piece is designed with four
Chinese characters that mean “happy birthday”. Another piece is in the shape of sunflowers, which stand for good
health and energy. There’s also one piece showing a monkey on a tree as the year in which you were born was the
Year of the Monkey in the Chinese zodiac.
The paper cuttings are expected to be delivered to you within seven days and I hope you’ll like them.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的英国笔友Lucy的生日即将到来，你特意给她寄了一些具有中国特色的礼
物，要求你给她写一封邮件，表达你的祝福，简要介绍你的礼物以及表达期望。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
来临：approach→come near
真诚地：sincerely→heartfelt
代表：stand for→represent
展示：show→display
2. 句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：The paper cuttings are expected to be delivered to you within seven days and I hope you’ll like them.
拓展句：The paper cuttings, which I expect to be delivered to you within seven days, are crafted with the hope that
they will bring you joy.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Another piece is in the shape of sunflowers, which stand for good health and energy.(运用了which引
导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]There’s also one piece showing a monkey on a tree as the year in which you were born was the Yearof the Monkey in the Chinese zodiac.(运用了现在分词作定语，in which引导的定语从句)
3．Dear Peter,
Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m
writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
It came as no surprise, for you are keenly interested in Chinese culture and have been continuously exploring
it. Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but you also consulted many locals and professionals, which
equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture.
Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture
and make it more accessible to people around the world.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛（Chinese
Traditional Culture Contest）”中获得外国选手组一等奖这件事写一封信，表达祝愿，回顾过程并表示期待。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
传达：extend→convey
对……感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in
充裕的：abundant→sufficient
致力于：devote oneself to→commit oneself to
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m
writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
拓展句：Learning that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our
city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but you also consulted many locals and professionals, which equips
you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture. (运用了not only…but also句型、
部分倒装句及which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】
Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and
make it more accessible to people around the world. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
4．Dear Peter,
I’m rather glad to learn that you have passed the examination and obtained the qualification to study in
China. I’d like to express my sincere congratulations on your success.
I’m deeply encouraged by what you’ve achieved. Although I work hard every day to prepare for the
upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory. Could you be kind enough
to share your learning experience with me? Meanwhile, I’m so much inspired by what you have achieved and, you
know, to study in a key university is a dream deep-rooted in my mind. How can I make a step forward from where I
am?
Looking forward to your coming to China. I hope we can meet in China during the summer vacation.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的英国笔友 Peter以优异的成绩通过考试，取得了到中国某大学留学的资
格。请给他写封邮件。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
快乐的：glad→pleased
获得：obtain→gain
鼓励：encourage→motivate
表达：express→extend
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Although I work hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my
learning efficiency isn’t satisfactory.
拓展句：Working hard every day to prepare for the upcoming college entrance examination, I feel my learning
efficiency isn’t satisfactory.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
I’m deeply encouraged by what you’ve achieved.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】
I’m rather glad to learn that you have passed the examination and obtained the qualification to study in China.（运
用了that引导的宾语从句）
5．Dear James,
I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you! Your performance in the table tennis match was so
excellent that it impressed all of us.
As you know, the table tennis can not only build up our body but also help relieve our stress. So we all attach
great importance to it. But among so many excellent competitors, you really stood out. Of course, no pains, no
gains. Thinking of the scenes where you practiced hard after school, we all agreed that you deserved the honor. You
really set a good example for us and greatly inspired us. Recently, many of my classmates have made up their
minds to take up playing table tennis.
Best wishes! Congratulations again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生 James写一封邮件，告诉他在学校举办的第一届乒乓球比赛
中取得了第三名的好成绩。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
诚挚的：sincere →genuine
比赛：match →competition
压力：stress →pressure
激励：inspire →encourage
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：As you know, the table tennis can not only build up our body but also help relieve our stress.
拓展句：As you know, not only can the table tennis build up our body but also it can help relieve our stress.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Your performance in the table tennis match was so excellent that it impressed all of us.（运用了“so…that…”句
型，其中that引导的结果状语从句）
【高分句型2】
Thinking of the scenes where you practiced hard after school, we all agreed that you deserved the honor.（运用了
现在分词短语作状语，where引导的定语从句和that引导的宾语从句）
