08. 感谢信——2025 年高考备考英语应用文写作快速突破
参考答案
【最新真题、模拟题、联考试题】
1．Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according
to the textbook.
We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English
play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is
going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script,
we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft
script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office
next Tuesday to give you more details?
Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look
forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于the Steamboat改编短剧的支持。
【解析】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构：总分总法
第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感
谢，并期待早日得到回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
write to；according to ；combine ； adaption ；challenge；attached to ；convenient
第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范
文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give
you more details? 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾
驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude
to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional
guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank
first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out,
which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong
enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本文是应用文写作任务，要求写一封感谢信。
【解析】
1. 审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助；最后一段表达祝
愿。
3. 关键词和句子
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：leaving for the United
States soon，express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me up。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】
本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了Alex对自己的帮助，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用
了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：eagerly，heartfelt gratitude，Honestly speaking，professional guidance等；
高级句式：Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my
enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.使用了让步状语从句和定语从句。这
些都提升了文章的档次
3．Dear dad and mom,
How time flies! Today I will become a real adult and I know what you have done for me since I was born. So
I’m writing this letter to convey my deepest gratitude and love to you.
During these years, I gradually gained a lot of confidence from your companion and encouragement, and I
still remember when I failed in maths exams and even tended to give it up, you just patted me on the shoulder and
inspired me to keep on. What’s more, you praised me for my earnest effort and progress, which really gave me a
sense of achievement. To be good parents is by no means an easy job as I imagined before, so I’m very grateful for
your patience, guidance, responsibility and affection as well as all you have done for me.
Dad and mom, I will spare no effort to pursue my dream and try my best to live up to your expectation.
Love you forever!
Yours loving boy,
Jim
【导语】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。学校下周将举办成人仪式典礼，要求考生写一封信给自己的父母，信的内容
大致如下：1. 成长与收获；2. 表达感恩；3. 继续努力。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
获得：gain→obtain
激励某人做某事：inspire sb. to do sth.→encourage sb. to do sth.
感激的：grateful→appreciative
此外：what’s more→in addition
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：So I’m writing this letter to convey my deepest gratitude and love to you.拓展句：So I’m writing this letter so that I can convey my deepest gratitude and love to you.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Today I will become a real adult and I know what you have done for me since I was born.(运用了
what引导宾语从句，since引导时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, you praised me for my earnest effort and progress, which really gave me a sense of
achievement. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
4．Dear Oliver,
This winter, the cold was very popular and I lacked exercise, so my physical condition has been poor. It is
your concern and encouragement that have continuously strengthened my confidence. I feel warm to have friends
like you.
Spring has arrived. A year’s plan lies in spring. I am planning to develop a detailed fitness plan according to
what you said. Firstly, participate in more outdoor activities and breathe fresh air. Secondly, handle the relationship
between learning and health correctly, and emphasize the role of physical health in learning. In the future, I will
continue to communicate with you about this situation. I also wish you better health.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于“前一段时间你的身体状况一直不好，你的网友Oliver时常关心
着你”这一情况，用英语写一封回复邮件。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
缺乏：lacked→ was short of
增强，提升：strengthened → enhanced
参加：participate in→ take part in
强调：emphasize→ stress
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This winter, the cold was very popular and I lacked exercise, so my physical condition has been poor.
拓展句：This winter, the cold was very popular and I lacked exercise, which led to my physical condition poor.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It is your concern and encouragement that have continuously strengthened my confidence.（运用了It is…that…的强调句式。）
【高分句型2】I am planning to develop a detailed fitness plan according to what you said.（运用了连接代词
what引导的宾语从句。）
5．Dear Miss Morton ,
I am writing the letter to tell you that I got a first prize in the English Speech Contest “Adversity and Courage”
held in my school last Friday.
Thanks for your guide in my English .You gave me a lot of help. I was very happy when we stayed together
studying. During the time when we stayed, you were kind to me. You were humorous. You taught me how to speak
English fluently. I made great progress with your kind help, without which I couldn't have got the prize.
Through this activity, I deeply realized that adversity and courage can make a person better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
这是一篇应用文。假定考生是李华，你在学校举办的“Adversity and Courage”英语演讲比赛中获奖，请给
指导外教 Miss Morton 写一封邮件表示感谢。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
告诉：tell→inform
快乐的：happy→pleased
帮助：help→assistance
举行：hold→throw
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Thanks for your guide in my English .You gave me a lot of help.
拓展句：Thanks for your guide in my English where you gave me a lot of help.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I was very happy when we stayed together studying.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】I made great progress with your kind help,without which I couldn't have got the prize.（运用了介
词+关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句）
