07. 求助信——2025 年高考备考英语应用文写作快速突破
参考答案
【最新真题、模拟题、联考试题】
Dear Annie,
I’ve conducted a survey among my classmates to gather insights on the challenges that we face in English
learning. The results indicate that the most common difficulties are related to vocabulary retention and
comprehension of native English speakers’ accents. Additionally, some students struggle with grammar rules and
the application of them in real-world conversations.
Given our collective interest in improving these areas, I would greatly appreciate your guidance and
assistance. Your expertise in English teaching would be invaluable in helping us overcome these obstacles. Thank
you for considering our needs.
Yours, sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。外教Annie想了解学生在英语学习中遇到的问题，考生就此做了调查，要求考
生按照要求给外教写一封邮件。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
实施，做：conduct→ do
收集：gather→ collect
表明：indicate→ suggest
困难：difficulty→ trouble
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Your expertise in English teaching would be invaluable in helping us overcome these obstacles.
拓展句：It is your expertise in English teaching that would be invaluable in helping us overcome these obstacles.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’ve conducted a survey among my classmates to gather insights on the challenges that we face inEnglish learning.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】The results indicate that the most common difficulties are related to vocabulary retention and
comprehension of native English speakers’ accents.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
2．Dear Alice,
I feel upset these days because I have conflicts with my parents over my career choice.
Inspired by Yuan Longping, a great agricultural expert, I’m eager to devote myself to agriculture in the
future. However, my parents are strongly opposed. They wish me to become a lawyer, thinking I will find a good
job after graduation. I am caught in a dilemma. I don’t know whether I should obey my parents or pursue what
brings me happiness and satisfaction.
What would you do if you were in my position? I really hope that you can give me some advice.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Alice写一封信，就希望在未来成为一名农业专家，但是家长
并不支持这件事来征求她的意见。内容包括：说明你的想法、家长反对的理由、征求老师的意见。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
奉献，投身于：devote→dedicate
强烈地：strongly→violently
顺从：obey→be obedient to
建议：advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Inspired by Yuan Longping, a great agricultural expert, I’m eager to devote myself to agriculture in the
future.
拓展句：Inspired by Yuan Longping, who is a great agricultural expert, I’m eager to devote myself to agriculture
in the future.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I feel upset these days because I have conflicts with my parents over my career choice.(运用了
because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】I don’t know whether I should obey my parents or pursue what brings me happiness andsatisfaction.(运用了whether以及what引导的宾语从句)
3．Dear Professor Zhang,
I’m Li Hua, a senior three student. Recently, I’ve been struggling with my continuation writing. Learning
that you are an expert in it, I am writing to seek advice from you.
I am encountering some problems which bother me a lot. First of all, I have difficulty in designing plot. In
addition, I am at a loss how to apply proper expressions to my writing, which makes me frustrated.
Facing the problems, I’m anxious’ to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve
these problems? Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给吉林大学张教授（英语作文读后续写领域的专家）写一封求助信，
希望他在英语作文读后续写方面给予指导。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
最近：recently→lately
专家：expert→specialist
首先：first of all→first and foremost
面对……：face→be faced with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Recently, I’ve been struggling with my continuation writing.
拓展句： Recently, I’ve been struggling with my continuation writing, which troubles me a lot.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I am encountering some problems which bother me a lot. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, I am at a loss how to apply proper expressions to my writing, which makes me frustrated.
(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
4．Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua from Class 5, Grade 3 of our school. I’m writing to seek your help regarding idioms. I find it
quite challenging to grasp the meanings of some idioms while reading English texts. They often confuse me, and
I’m not sure how to interpret them correctly. I know that idioms are a crucial part of English language learning, andI am eager to improve my understanding of them.
I would really appreciate it if you could share some strategies or tips on how to better understand and
remember idioms. Your guidance would be invaluable to me. Thank you very much for your time and support.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith 写封邮件，说明自己在英语阅读过程中时对一些习
语感到的困惑并向对方寻求帮助。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
关于：regarding→concerning
理解：grasp→comprehend
使困惑：confuse→puzzle
无价的：invaluable→priceless
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：They often confuse me, and I’m not sure how to interpret them correctly.
拓展句：They often confuse me, and I’m not sure how I can interpret them correctly.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I find it quite challenging to grasp the meanings of some idioms while reading English texts.（运
用了状语从句的省略，不定式作真正宾语，it为形式宾语）
【高分句型2】I know that idioms are a crucial part of English language learning, and I am eager to improve my
understanding of them.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
5．Dear Sara,
I’m seeking guidance on my speech outline about “Food & Culture”. My point is that food and culture
go hand in hand. Two sub-points are provided to support it. One is that food reflects culture and the other is that
cultural changes and integration influence food landscape. To support the two points, many examples are used. For
example, people’s preference for spicy food is a way to adapt to the humid climate. Moreover, Chinese cuisine and
culinary culture were introduced to the world through the Silk Road. Apart from giving examples, other methods,
including making comparison and quotation, are also employed in my essay. Do you think my outline is well-
organized?I’d greatly appreciate your thoughts and any suggestions.
Your,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教写一封邮件，简述大纲中自己的观点和论证思路，并就此征
求对方的建议。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
许多的：many→all kinds of
例如：for example→for instance
除了：apart from→in addition to
此外：moreover→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To support the two points, many examples are used.
拓展句：Many examples are used so that I can support the two points.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
My point is that food and culture go hand in hand.（运用了that引导表语从句）
[高分句型2]
For example, people’s preference for spicy food is a way to adapt to the humid climate.（运用了动词不定式作后
置定语）
