第 17 讲 征文投稿
目录
01 考情透视·目标导航········································································································································1
02 知识导图·思维引航········································································································································2
03 考点突破·考法探究········································································································································2
一 征文投稿类写作技巧·····································································································································2
知识点1 命题规律········································································································································2
知识点2 写作技巧·······································································································································2
二 征文投稿类经典必背·····································································································································3
知识点1 好词好句积累 ····························································································································3
知识点2 满分模板必背 ·····························································································································5
04真题练习·命题洞现
1.真题实战 ·················································································································································5
2.命题演练 ··············································································································································12
近三年高考真题征文投稿考点细目表
年份 卷别 体裁 话题 内容
浙江1月卷 投稿 学校生活 向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿
2024
北京卷 投稿 学校生活 外国好友Jim准备给校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。
2023 全国甲卷 投稿 历史文化 介绍中国历史人物
2023 全国乙卷 投稿 生活学习 假期习得新技能
2022 全国甲卷 征文 世界海洋日 举办英语征文比赛
2022 全国乙卷 投稿 调查结果 英语学习方式的调查一 写作技巧
知识点1 命题规律
征文、投稿，区别与书信，一般会给出特定的主题。如庆祝英文栏目创刊十周年，你最敬爱的人等等。不要在开头
和结尾生搬硬套如“I’ writing to...”等书信格式。基本上写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短文以记叙文或者议论文为
主。
文章框架结构“引出话题-要点展开-总结全文”。主次分明，逻辑清晰。主题句要出现关键点，如现状、原因、看
法、影响、意义、措施、建议等。拓展句具体详细，有意识使用逻辑衔接词。
知识点2 写作技巧
第一段：开门见山，引出话题。
第二段：介绍主题人或事物细节。
第三段：表达愿望。
二 征文投稿类经典必背知识点1 好词好句积累
【必背词语】
1. 同意，赞同subscribe to
2. 忠实的读者faithful readers
3. 表达自己的观点voice their opinions
4. 不遗余力地做某事 spare no efforts to do ...
5. 共同努力做某事 make joint effort to do...
6. 对...…有害 do harm to/be harmful to...
7. 谈到、提到 When it comes to...
8. 不可否认...... There is no denying that...
9. 随着新学期的临近 With the new term approaching
10.面临考试 be faced with challenge exams
11.人们普遍认为.... It is universally acknowledged that...
12.很明显，明显地 It is obvious that.../obliviously
13.极为重要；强调...…的重要性...of great/crucial/vital significance/importance;
14.强调…的重要性emphasize the importance of...; highlight the significance of...; attach importance to......…
【必背开头段】
1. An article in the newspaper caught my attention. 报纸上一篇文章引起了我的注意
2. When it comes to protecting the ocean, it is well-known that ocean plays an important part in our life.
说到保护海洋，众所周知，海洋在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。
3. There are many people who I respect . As for me, my father is the one I respect. The reasons why I respect him are as
follows.
近来，随着智能手机和电脑的日益流行，越来越多的学生选择用它们在课外学习英语。
4. Nowadays, with the improvement of the standard of living, an increasing number of teenagers suffer from obesity, which
arouses social concerns.
如今，随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的青少年患有肥胖症，这引起了社会的关注。
5. In the long span of the Chinese history, the existence of the outstanding Confucius is like a shining pearl.
在中国漫长的历史上，杰出的孔子的存在就像一颗闪亮的珍珠。
6. Sb. is considered to be one of the most influential figures in history due to his/her accomplishments/achievements/impact].
某人被认为是历史上最具影响力的人物之一，因为他/她的[成就/影响力/贡献]。
7. The long history of China has witnessed the flourishing of poetry and the brilliance of many exceptional poets, among
whom I admire Du Fu most.
中国悠久的历史见证了诗歌的繁荣和许多杰出诗人的才华，其中我最欣赏杜甫。
【必背主题段】
1. As a high school student, I noticed that many students had a series of health problems because of irregular diet.
作为一名高中生，我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。
2. My favourite sports is rope skipping, because not only can I do it at home conveniently but also it can help to refresh me
after I get tired from doing homework.我最喜欢的运动是跳绳，因为跳绳不仅可以方便地在家里做，而且可以帮助我在做完作业累了之后提神。
3. Additionally, I take delight in various activities in the reading club every Friday, where I get immersed in the sea of
literature, greatly improving my literary competence.
此外，我喜欢每周五在阅读俱乐部的各种活动，在那里我沉浸在文学的海洋里，大大提高了我的文学能力。
4. Only if we take action to exercise can we be healthier and healthier in the future .
只有当我们采取行动去锻炼时，我们才能在未来变得更健康。
5. For one thing , not only does the ocean offers us various of sea food to eat, but also it is home to many kinds of animals.
首先，海洋不仅为我们提供了各种各样的海鲜可以吃，而且它也是多种动物的家园。
6. Not only does playing basketball build up my body and relieve stress from study, but it also promotes friendship with
others.
打篮球球不仅增强了我的体质，减轻了学习的压力，而且增进了与他人的友谊。
7. Faced with the challenge of being destroyed, missing or even being stolen, traditional Chinese relics are urgent to be
protected.
面对被销毁、失踪甚至被盗的挑战，中国传统文物迫切需要得到保护。
【必背结尾段】
1．I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.
如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。
2．I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.
我希望《青年》能出版更多的经典作品，并有一个光明的未来。
3．I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.
如果您能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。
4．We hope that with all these measures taken, eyesight problems can be greatly reduced.
我们希望这些有效的措施能大大减少视力问题。
5．I sincerely hope Youth will achieve greater success and have a promising future.
我衷心希望Youth能取得更大的成就，更受欢迎。
6．I sincerely hope that through more understanding of Confucius and his Confucianism, we can make the world filled
with more love, justice and peace.
我真诚地希望，通过对孔子及其儒家思想的进一步理解，我们能让世界充满更多的爱、正义与和平。
7．Personally, it is high time that we spared no effort to preserve traditional cultural relics.
就我个人而言，我们是时候不遗余力地保护传统文物了。
知识点2 满分模板必背
Dear Editor,
when it comes to ___________________( 当 谈 到 ... 时 ） , it is widely acknowledged
that________________________（众所周知）.
For one thing ,_________________________（主题特色一）. Not only_________________________but
also_________________________________( 具 体 特 点 ) For anther, there is no doubt
that________________________________(主题特色二)
I do hope that________________________.(表达期望). All in all , it is high time that ... .(sb did sth)一、 真题实战（无提示词填空）
1.（2024年浙江卷1月） 请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的
运动，内容包括：
1. 介绍这项运动；
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
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【答案】
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine?
One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your
arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body
and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your
focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is
essential for overall well-being.
So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big
difference in your day.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项
适合课间开展的运动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
厌倦：be tired of→be fed up with
首先：first→above all
减轻：combat→relieve
提高：improve→enhance
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句：This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep
breaths.
拓展句：This is a simple routine that involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few
deep breaths.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. (运用了which
引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep
breaths. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
2.（2024年北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今
年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding
of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.
To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few
decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s determination
to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China’s role in helping solving global issues such as the
global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，
他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的：great →wonderful
成就：achievement→ accomplishment建议：suggestion →advice
此外：In addition → what’s more
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句：It’s great to hear you’re planning to write about China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the
founding of this country.
拓展句：It’s great to hear what you’re planning to write about is China’s achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of
the founding of this country.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】To begin with, talk about China’s economic growth and technological advancements, which are the
highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型 2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China’s
determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
3.（2023年全国甲卷）
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
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【答案】
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for
elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a
profound impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese
culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to
guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge,
which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity,
compassion, and social responsibility.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
著名的：well-known → famous
人物：figure → person
强调：emphasize → stress
基础：foundation → basis4.（2023年全国乙卷）
请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【答案】
When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time
I watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply.
I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the
notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano. Although my fingers
were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.
Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. It is simply
because music is the best medication for my soul.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的
体验和感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
机会：opportunity → chance
使沮丧：demoralize → discourage
满意的：satisfied → content
空闲的：leisure → spare
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.
拓展句：The fantastic players touched me deeply, so I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.
点睛
【高分句型1】When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. (运用了
when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型 2】Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece
completely. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)
5.（2022年全国乙卷）
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，
内容包括：
1. 学习活动状况描述；
2. 简单评论；3. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】 Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing
to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is
respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account
for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books.
Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students
themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，对学生的英语学习活动状况进行
描述并作简单的评论，提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
缺乏：lack→shortage
加强：strengthen→enhance
各种各样的：various→all kinds of
就我而言：as far as I’m concerned→from my perspective
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
拓展句：However, those who choose reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and
12%.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching
English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
6.（2022年全国乙卷）
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 海洋的重要性；
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
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【答案】
When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at
raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.
Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example,
garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The
more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
越来越：more and more→increasingly
重视：place importance on→attach importance to
重要的：key→significant
此外：what’s more→furthermore
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
拓展句：World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.(运用了部分倒装
结构)
[高分句型2]When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious.(使用了固定句型)
[高分句型3]First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.(使用了主语从句)
二、 命题演练
1．（24-25高三上·广东广州·开学考试）
假定你是李华，你校计划在暑假期间重修图书馆，校英文报举办主题为“Small changes make an ideal library”的征文活动，
向同学们征求意见，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）提出建议；
（2）说明理由。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Small changes make an ideal library
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Small changes make an ideal library
As a student, I am excited about the upcoming renovation of our library. Among the many possible changes, I particularly
hope for two improvements.
Firstly, I envision a cozier reading area with soft lighting and comfortable seating. This will create a relaxing atmosphere,
encouraging students to immerse themselves in books for longer periods. Secondly, I believe the addition of more electrical outlets
and USB charging stations is crucial. With modern devices becoming indispensable for learning, having easy access to charging
facilities will be a great convenience.
These small yet significant changes will undoubtedly contribute to making our library an ideal place for learning and
exploration.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文，向校英文报投稿，参加校英文报举办的主题为“Small
changes make an ideal library”的征文活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋：excited→thrilled
特别：particularly→in particular
重要：crucial→vital
不可缺少的：indispensable→obbligato
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Firstly, I envision a cozier reading area with soft lighting and comfortable seating. This will create a relaxing atmosphere,
encouraging students to immerse themselves in books for longer periods.
拓展句：Firstly, I envision a cozier reading area with soft lighting and comfortable seating, which will create a relaxing
atmosphere, encouraging students to immerse themselves in books for longer periods.
【点睛】[高分句型1] This will create a relaxing atmosphere, encouraging students to immerse themselves in books for longer
periods. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
[高分句型2] With modern devices becoming indispensable for learning, having easy access to charging facilities will be a great
convenience. (运用了现在分词becoming作宾语补足语，动名词having作主语)
2．（24-25高三上·江苏南通·阶段练习）
你校英文报Echo正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；2. 喜爱的栏目；3. 期望和祝福。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。Echo and Me
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【答案】 Echo and Me
It has been 10 years since Echo was founded. In my memory, it is Echo that accompanies me through my whole high
school. When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. These stories
can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own fiction to Echo. Refused as I was, I still received
some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer.
I do expect Echo can publish more classic works and have a promising future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿，要求考生写一篇短文向学校英文报Echo投稿，内容包括：1. 读报的经历；2. 喜爱的
栏目；3. 期望和祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
沮丧的：depressed→downcast
减轻：relieve→ease
压力：stress→pressure
另外：besides→moreover
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.
拓展句：These stories, which can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon, are valuable to me.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In my memory, it is Echo that accompanies me through my whole high school. (运用了强调句)
[高分句型2] When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (运用了
when引导的时间状语从句，省略和which引导的限制性定语从句)
3．（23-24高三下·重庆黔江·阶段练习）
假定你是李华，你校英文报Communication正在组织是否应该进行考试成绩排名并公布的讨论，请你写一篇短文投稿，
内容包括：
1. 你赞成与否：
2. 简述你的理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Should students be ranked according to their exam grades and should the ranking be published? Recently the question is
under heated discussion. Personally, I argue that they can be ranked but the ranking should not be announced publicly. The ranking
can tell me my exact position in my class or even in my school so that I can know how academically good I am. The ranking can
also encourage me to work harder to catch my classmates ahead of me. However, I don’t like the ranking to be made known to
others. That will push me too hard. Anyway my scores are just my privacy.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，写一篇短文投稿，参与校英文报组织的是否应进行考
试成绩排名并公布的讨论，需涵盖个人观点和理由两方面的内容。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
激烈的：heated→fierce, furious
主张：argue→contend, maintain
公布：announce→declare, give out
激励某人做某事：encourage sb. to do→inspire sb. to do, motivate sb. to do
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：However, I don’t like the ranking to be made known to others. That will push me too hard.
拓展句：However, I don’t like the ranking to be made known to others because that will push me too hard.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Personally, I argue that they can be ranked but the ranking should not be announced publicly. (运用了that
引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] The ranking can tell me my exact position in my class or even in my school so that I can know how academically
good I am. (运用了so that引导目的状语从句、how引导宾语从句)
4．（24-25高三上·湖北武汉·阶段练习）
假定你是李华, 你校英文报举办了以“An Unforgettable Art Lesson”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇英文短文投稿，分享
你参加的某次艺术课程，内容包括：
1. 课程内容: 2. 你的感想
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右：
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
An Unforgettable Art Lesson
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【答案】 An Unforgettable Art Lesson
I’m Li Hua. I’d like to share an unforgettable art lesson I that had at school.
In that art lesson, our teacher guided us to explore the world of watercolor painting. We learned about different brush
strokes and color combinations. The teacher demonstrated how to create different textures and effects using watercolor, such as
the softness of a cloud or the vividness of a flower. Then, we were given the chance to practice and create our own paintings.
This art lesson was truly remarkable. It not only improved my artistic skills but also allowed me to express my creativity
and imagination freely. Through painting, I found a way to relax and escape from the daily stress. It made me realize that art is a
powerful form of self-expression and communication. Moreover, it taught me the importance of patience.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“An Unforgettable Art Lesson”为主题给校英文报写一篇英文短文投稿。
内容包括课程内容以及感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不同的：different→ various
机会：chance→ opportunity
提高：improve→ enhance
此处：moreover→ besides
2.句式拓展
两个独立句子合并为复合句
原句：This art lesson was truly remarkable. It not only improved my artistic skills but also allowed me to express my creativity
and imagination freely.
拓展句：This art lesson was truly remarkable because it not only improved my artistic skills but also allowed me to express my
creativity and imagination freely.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’d like to share an unforgettable art lesson I that had at school.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】Then, we were given the chance to practice and create our own paintings.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态与动
词不定式作定语）
5．（2024·黑龙江大庆·模拟预测）
近日，在公共场所，人们身着汉服拍照，演奏古筝、二胡等传统乐器；校园里，学生吟诵古典诗词，写毛笔字……处处
彰显着中国传统文化的魅力。你校英文报正在组织题为Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture 的征文活动，请你选择下表
中的一种传统文化的形式，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你最喜欢的一种传统文化的形式；
2. 你体验该传统文化的经历；
3. 你的收获及感受。
① 穿汉服 wearing Hanfu
② 写毛笔字 learn calligraphy
③ 讲中国故事 tell Chinese stories
④ 演奏中国传统乐器 play traditional Chinese musical instrument
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
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【答案】
Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture Nowadays, with the popularity of Chinese style, more people show great interest
in traditional Chinese culture. My favourite traditional Chinese culture is calligraphy, which has a long history and has influenced
many people.I started learning calligraphy at eight. At first, it was challenging for me to use the brush to write Chinese characters. My
wrist would ache after holding the brush for a long time. Fortunately, with the help of my teacher, I gradually improved. Now, I
can write spring couplets for my family every year. It makes me proud.
Learning calligraphy has a great influence on me. I become more patient and careful thanks to years of practice. I also feel
honoured to be able to pass down this traditional Chinese culture.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生选择一种传统文化的形式，写一篇短文投稿参加你校英文报正在组织题为
Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture 的征文活动。内容包括：你最喜欢的一种传统文化的形式、你体验该传统文化的经
历和你的收获及感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
影响： influence→affect
很多：many→plenty of
开始：start→begin
帮助：help→assistance
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Now, I can write spring couplets for my family every year. It makes me proud.
拓展句： Now, I can write spring couplets for my family every year, which makes me proud.
【点睛】【高分句型1】My favourite traditional Chinese culture is calligraphy, which has a long history and has influenced
many people. (运用which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 Learning calligraphy has a great influence on me. (运用了动名词作主语)
