第01 讲 征文投稿
（考试时间：15 分钟/每题）
目 录
征文投稿常用词汇
P1
征文投稿常用句型
P2
征文投稿常用模版与演练
P 2
征文投稿精准测试22 篇
P 5
通用高分替换训练（传统文化）
P 37
一、征文投稿常用词汇
1. 旨在；以......为目的 be
aimed
at
2. 出版 publish
3. 文章的要求 requirements
of
the
article
4. 如果 on
condition
that
5. 限制在......词 be
limited
to about
... words
6. 是很受......欢迎的 be
very
popular
with...
7. 任何有关的事情 anything
relevant
to
8. 大约120 字就可以了 About
120
words
would
be
fine
9. 在......之前提交你的文章 submit
your
article
before
10. 体育专栏 sports
column
11. 娱乐专栏 entertainment
column
12. 栏目特点 characteristics
of
the
column
13. 语言风格 language
style
14. 改编自 be
adapted
from
15. 延长截止日期 extend
the
deadline
二、征文投稿常用句型
1.我想邀请某人写一篇......文章
I would
like
to invite
sb
to write
an
article
for...
2.我想请你为我们学校的英文报纸写一篇文章。
I ’ d like
to ask
you
to writer
an
article
for
our
school
’ s English
newspaper.
3. 你能写点关于你的学校生活吗？
Could
you/Would
you
please
write
something
concerning
your
school
life?
4.有兴趣的学生欢迎参加。
Any
student
who
is interested
is welcome
to participate
5.这里有一些关于我们渴望文章的相关细节。
And
here
are
some
relevant
detail
about
the
articles
we
are
eager
for
.
6.它携带外国学生写的关于他们家文化的文章。
It carries
articles
written
by
foreign
students
concerning
the
culture
of
their
country
.
7.这篇文章应该在400 字以内。
The
article
is supposed
to be
within
400
words
.
8.我们想知道在下周之前你是否完稿。
We
wonder
if it is practicable
to have
it before
next
week.
9.你最好下星期日把你的文章发送给我，词数约120 个词就好。
You
’ d better
send
your
article
to me
next
Sunday
and
about
120
words
would
be
fine
.
10.期待您方便时尽快答复。
Looking
forward
to your
reply
at your
convenience
.
11.期待您尽快确定。
Looking
forward
to your
confirmation
soon
.
三、征文投稿常用模版与演练
投稿，通常会有特定的主题，如你最敬爱的人等等，话题基本上围绕书信类，如推荐一个项目，那就
和推荐信写作思路一致。如最想感谢的人，那就喝感谢信思路一致，不过在表达上可能人称需要换一下。
基本上写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短文以记叙文或者议论文为主。学生需要掌握相关词汇，句式用
法等。
1.议论文常用模版：
As is often the case/Nowadays, ______ (陈述现象)
This is really a common phenomenon in our life. The reason is that ______( 现象的原因) .
However,______(现象所带来的问题一). Moreover, ______(现象所带来的问题二).
As far as I am concerned, ______(我的观点，并提出建议). And meanwhile/moreover, ______(建议
二).
In a word, ______(总结自己的观点).
2. 写作实操技巧
最新调查指出,人际关系正越来越被"人机关系"所取代,甚至有网友调侃:世界上最远的距离,是我在你面
前,而你在低头看手机.根据以下要点用英语写一篇短文给《21 世纪英文报》投稿.
1.描述这一现象
2.分析其原因及弊端
3.你认为该如何改变现状
注意:1.词数80 左右
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯.
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【模板套用】
As is often the case, when people are attending meetings, having meals or waiting for buses, you
can always find them addicted to their phones, completely ignoring others(陈述现象).
This is really a common phenomenon in our life. The reason is that smart phones nowadays can be
used for people to play mobile games and keep in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat
(现象的原
因) . However, too much exposure to phones is bad for people in terms of health (现象所带来的问题一).
Moreover, people engaged in phones fail to communicate well with those around them
(现象所带来的问
题二).
As far as I am concerned, people should wisely make use of their phones to help with their work and
study
(我的观点，并提出建议). And meanwhile care more about their family and friends rather than
mobile phones
(建议二).
3. 仿写演练
某英文报社正在开展 “环保”大讨论，向你约稿。请以垃圾分类为主题，按照以下要点发表你的观
点：
1. 意义；
2. 现状；
3. 建议
注意：1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 文章标题已拟好，不计入总次数。
3. 参考词汇：垃圾分类 garbage classification
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【模板范文】
Nowadays, g arbage classification is receiving mixed opinions with some people applauding it while others
dismissing it as inconvenient
. Nevertheless, however unaccustomed people may feel, they must observe the new
regulation (陈述现象).
As far as I am concerned, the value of garbage classification can’t be over-emphasized, and its advantages
are as follows. To begin with, it is environmentally-friendly in that it will reduce the land occupation used to bury
garbage
( 我的观点一). And moreover, it is economically-beneficial, for it will not only save the cost of
processing garbage, it will also enable the reuse of the recyclable
(进一步说明观点二).
Significant as garbage classification is, people’s confusion about the categories of trash sometimes discourages
their willingness to do it(现象的问题) . Accordingly, a series of campaigns should be in place to help people
build up a strong awareness of the necessity and understand how to categorize trash(解决方法).
In a word, garbage classification is a worthwhile course which will benefit future generations(总结自己的
观点).
四、征文投稿精准测试22 篇
1．（2025·湖南永州·三模）
假定你是李华，你校英语报“Happy leisure time”栏目拟刊登中学生课外生活的短文请给外国朋友
Janice 写一封电子邮件约稿，内容包括：1.栏目介绍；2.稿件内容及要求。
注意：1.词数80 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Janice,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Janice,
I’m writing to invite you to contribute an article to our school English newspaper.
In our school newspaper, there is a column titled “Happy Leisure Time” that features articles
written by international students about their after-school experiences. I believe this is a wonderful
opportunity for you to show your talents of writing. And your sharing personal experiences would
undoubtedly enrich our column. The length of the article should be limited to 400 words or so. If you
want to contribute to our newspaper, please remember to submit it before 28th June.
I would appreciate it if you could give me a reply as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Janice 写一封电子邮件约稿，简要介绍校英语报
“Happy leisure time”栏目，并说明稿件内容及要求。
【详解】1.词汇积累
相信：believe → have faith in
机会：opportunity → chance
展示：show → showcase
天赋：talent → gift
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：And your sharing personal experiences would undoubtedly enrich our column.
拓展句：And it is your sharing personal experiences that would undoubtedly enrich our column.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In our school newspaper, there is a column titled “Happy Leisure Time” that
features articles written by international students about their after-school experiences. (运用了that 引导的定
语从句)
【高分句型2】If you want to contribute to our newspaper, please remember to submit it before 28th
June.(运用了If 引导的条件状语从句)
2．（2025·河北衡水·三模）
近期，学校开展了“手工制作丰富生活 (Handicrafting Enriches Life)”活动，请你写一篇短文向校英文
报投稿，介绍你的作品，内容包括：
1. 作品描述 2. 创作缘由 3. 活动感受
注意：1. 写作词数为 80 字左右 2. 请在答题卡相应位置作答
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【参考范文】
Handicrafting Enriches Life
For the “Handicrafting Enriches Life” event, I transformed used plastic bottles into a unique pen
holder. First, I cut the bottles into proper sizes, then carefully painted vivid green leaves on the surface.
To make it more interesting, I decorated it with colorful cartoon stickers. Now, it stands on my desk,
both practical and eye-catching. I aimed to promote recycling and bring some charm to my study space.
Through this activity, I deeply experienced the joy of creation and learned the true value of reuse. It
made me realize that handicrafts not only add beauty to life but also enrich our inner world.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向校英文报投稿，介绍在“手工制作丰富生活”活动中的作
品，包括作品描述、创作缘由和活动感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
独特的：unique→special
装饰：decorate→adorn
吸引人的：eye-catching→attractive
旨在：aim to→intend to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I transformed used plastic bottles into a unique pen holder.
拓展句：I transformed used plastic bottles into a unique pen holder which can hold many pens.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To make it more interesting, I decorated it with colorful cartoon stickers. (运用了
不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型2】Through this activity, I deeply experienced the joy of creation and learned the true value
of reuse, which made me realize that handicrafts not only add beauty to life but also enrich our inner
world. (运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句和that 引导的宾语从句)
3．（2025·湖南长沙·三模）
校报Youth 正在为昨天的研学旅行进行征文活动，对此请你写一篇征文投稿。内容包括：
（1）研学地点；
（2）研学活动；
（3）你的感悟。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80 个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An Unforgettable Field Trip
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【参考范文1】
An Unforgettable Field Trip
Yesterday, our school organized a remarkable field trip to the Provincial Science and Technology
Museum, which left an indelible impression on me.
Upon arrival, we were immediately captivated by the high-tech exhibits. We engaged in hands-on
experiments, explored interactive displays, and even participated in a thrilling virtual reality experience.
These activities not only deepened our understanding of scientific knowledge but also sparked our
curiosity about the unknown.
This field trip was more than just a simple outing; it was a journey of discovery that broadened my
horizons and inspired me to embrace learning with enthusiasm. It was truly an educational and rewarding
experience.Possible
【参考范文2】
An Unforgettable Field Trip
Guided by professional instructors, our class embarked on an immersive exploration at the Future
Science Museum, a cutting-edge institution renowned for its interactive exhibits on robotics and sustainable
energy. Throughout the day, we engaged in hands-on experiments simulating AI algorithms, participated in
thought-provoking workshops about renewable resources, and collaborated in teams to design eco-friendly
urban models using 3D printing technology.
This experience not only enriched my understanding of how theoretical concepts translate into real-
world innovations but also highlighted the significance of interdisciplinary collaboration in tackling global
challenges. Witnessing the seamless fusion of creativity and technology, I now firmly believe that youth-
driven curiosity and cooperation are pivotal in shaping a sustainable tomorrow. The trip has undeniably
ignited a fervent passion within me to contribute to scientific advancements that harmonize humanity with
nature.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿征文，要求考生就昨天的研学旅行进行征文活动写一篇征文投稿。内容包
括：研学地点、研学活动和你的感悟。
【详解】1.词汇积累
立即地：immediately→instantly
参与： participate in→take part in
令人兴奋不已的：thrilling→exciting
理解： understanding→comprehension
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Upon arrival, we were immediately captivated by the high-tech exhibits.
拓展句：As soon as we arrived, we were immediately captivated by the high-tech exhibits.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Yesterday, our school organized a remarkable field trip to the Provincial Science
and Technology Museum, which left an indelible impression on me.（运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从
句）
【高分句型2】These activities not only deepened our understanding of scientific knowledge but also
sparked our curiosity about the unknown.（运用了并列连词not only...but also）
4．（2025·湖北·三模）
假设你是学生李华，你校即将举办一场以“绿色生活，从我做起”为主题的环保宣传活动，现面向全
校学生征集环保创意。请你给校英语报纸写一封投稿，内容包括：
1. 你的创意(如活动形式、具体内容等)；
2. 呼吁大家积极参与。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
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Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
Learning that our school is scheduled to hold a campaign themed “Green Life, Start from Me”, I
would like to propose the idea of hosting a “Green Fashion Show” as part of this initiative.
The show could take place in the school meeting hall where students will design and model clothes
made entirely from recycled or repurposed materials, such as old clothes, plastic bags, or newspapers.
Meanwhile, a panel of judges will be invited to evaluate the designs based on creativity, sustainability,
and presentation, with prizes awarded to the most innovative entries.
I’m convinced that the fashion show will inspire everyone to take action for a greener future. I
hope all students will participate and make this event a success!
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生李华的身份，为校英语报纸投稿，提出环保宣传活动
的创意并呼吁大家积极参与。
【详解】1.
词汇积累
举办：hold → organize
完全地：entirely → completely
确信的：convinced → assured
参与：participate → engage
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Meanwhile, a panel of judges will be invited to evaluate the designs based on creativity,
sustainability, and presentation, with prizes awarded to the most innovative entries.
拓展句：Meanwhile, a panel of judges will be invited to evaluate the designs, which will be assessed
based on creativity, sustainability, and presentation, with prizes awarded to the most innovative entries.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that our school is scheduled to hold a campaign themed “Green Life,
Start from Me”, I would like to propose the idea of hosting a “Green Fashion Show” as part of this
initiative. (运用了现在分词短语作状语以及that 引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】The show could take place in the school meeting hall where students will design and
model clothes made entirely from recycled or repurposed materials, such as old clothes, plastic bags, or
newspapers. (运用了where 引导的定语从句)
5．（2025·湖北武汉·三模）
最近，你班越来越多的同学使用AI 助手完成学习任务，请你就该现象写一篇短文投稿校英文刊，内
容包括：1、你的看法 2、你的建议
注意：写作词数应为80 词左右。
请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【参考范文】
Embracing AI Assistants Wisely
Recently, more classmates have turned to AI assistants for academic tasks. While AI tools boost
efficiency and offer instant solutions, over-reliance risks undermining independent learning. Students may
grow dependent, losing opportunities to hone critical thinking and problem-solving skills.
To maximize benefits, I suggest using AI as a supplementary tool rather than a replacement. Set
clear goals before seeking AI help — for example, verify answers after attempting tasks independently.
Additionally, allocate time for self-study to strengthen foundational knowledge and self-discipline.
By striking a balance between technology and personal effort, we can harness AI’s potential without
compromising academic growth.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就班级越来越多的同学使用AI 助手完成学习任务的现象写
一篇短文投稿校英文刊。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近：recently→lately
即时的：instant→immediate
而不是：rather than→instead of
此外：additionally→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additionally, allocate time for self-study to strengthen foundational knowledge and self-discipline.
拓展句：Additionally, allocate time for self-study so that you can strengthen foundational knowledge and
self-discipline.
【点睛】【高分句型1】While AI tools boost efficiency and offer instant solutions, over-reliance risks
undermining independent learning.（运用了while 引导的让步状语从句）
【高分句型2】To maximize benefits, I suggest using AI as a supplementary tool rather than a
replacement.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语和动名词作宾语）
6.（2025·福建泉州·三模）
假定你是李华，上周你校举办了“劳模校友进校园”宣讲活动。请你“Learning from Model Workers”
为题，给你校英文报Youth 写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 劳模故事；2. 劳模精神；3. 感受和启发。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Learning from Model Workers
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【参考范文】
Learning from Model Workers
Last week, our school invited several outstanding graduates who are model workers to share their
stories. One of them, Mr. Chen, has been devoted to teaching at a poverty-stricken mountain school since
1997. Despite the difficult conditions, he selflessly aided the students, funded learning clubs and took
good care of boarding students.
I’m filled with admiration for Chen’s story, which inspires me to face challenges courageously and
pursue my dreams with the same selfless spirit.
This activity makes me realize that true success lies in making a positive impact on others. I’m
determined to follow in the model workers’ footsteps and work hard to make the world brighter.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿征文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，就学校举办的“劳模校友进校园”宣
讲活动写一篇短文，需分享自己听到的劳模故事，感受到的劳模精神，以及参与该活动的感受和启发。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
杰出的：outstanding→exceptional, extraordinary
致力于：be devoted to→be committed to, be dedicated to
照顾：take care of→look after, attend to
意识到：realize→recognize
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Despite the difficult conditions, he selflessly aided the students, funded learning clubs and took
good care of boarding students.
拓展句：Although the conditions were difficult, he selflessly aided the students, funded learning clubs,
and took good care of boarding students.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Last week, our school invited several outstanding graduates who are model workers
to share their stories. (运用了who 引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] This activity makes me realize that true success lies in making a positive impact on others.
(运用了that 引导宾语从句)
7．（2025·福建三明·三模）
假定你是李华，请写一篇短文向校英语报“Senior Three”栏目投稿，给高三学生推荐一项减压活动，
内容包括：
1. 推荐活动； 2. 说明理由。
注意：
1. 词数80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear fellow senior three students,
I’d like to recommend jogging as a great way to relieve stress. Jogging doesn’t require any
special equipment. You can do it around the school playground or in a park near your home. Moreover,
it can be easily adjusted according to your physical condition and time, whether a short sprint or a long-
distance run. When you jog, you’ll breathe fresh air and enjoy the scenery, which can clear your mind.
It also helps release endorphins, making you feel happier. So, let’s jog and fight the pressure together!
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份向校英语报“Senior Three”栏目投稿，给高
三学生推荐一项减压活动并说明理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
推荐：recommend → suggest
减压：relieve stress → reduce pressure
此外：moreover → in addition/besides
帮助：help → assist
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Jogging doesn’t require any special equipment.
拓展句：Jogging, which is a simple and accessible activity, doesn’t require any special equipment.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] When you jog, you’ll breathe fresh air and enjoy the scenery, which can clear
your mind. (运用了when 引导时间状语从句和关系代词which 引导非限定性定语从句)
[高分句型 2] It also helps release endorphins, making you feel happier. (运用了现在分词作结果状语)
8．（2025·安徽合肥·三模）
假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举行主题为“Embracing Traditions, Shaping the Future”的征文活动，请
你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.介绍你熟悉的一项中国传统文化；2.谈谈它的现代意义。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80 个左右；2.段文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Embracing Traditions, Shaping the Future
Traditional Chinese culture connects who we were with who we are becoming.
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Embracing Traditions, Shaping the Future
Traditional Chinese culture connects who we were with who we are becoming. Among all the
traditions, the Spring Festival, which is the most important festival in China, has always held a special
place in my heart. The Spring Festival is a time when families gather together.
Today, the Spring Festival still plays a vital role. It reminds us of the importance of family, no
matter how busy we are. Moreover, it has become a window through which the world learns about
China. What’s more, the traditions during the festival, such as making dumplings, teach us patience and
creativity. By celebrating it, we not only keep our traditions alive but also show our pride in Chinese
culture.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Embracing Traditions, Shaping the Future”为题写短文
投稿，介绍一项中国传统文化并阐述其现代意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important → significant
聚集：gather → assemble
至关重要的：vital → crucial
庆祝：celebrate → observe
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Today, the Spring Festival still plays a vital role.
拓展句：Today, it is well-known that the Spring Festival still plays a vital role.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Among all the traditions, the Spring Festival, which is the most important festival
in China, has always held a special place in my heart.（运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】It reminds us of the importance of family, no matter how busy we are.（运用了no matter
how 引导的让步状语从句）
9．（2025·浙江·三模）
你校上周举办“中国古代诗词进校园”中英文化弥合活动。请你记录这次活动并投稿到校英文报上，
具体要求如下：
1. 结合具体中国古代诗词记录活动内容；
2. 表达期待。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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When Verses Build Bridges: A Chronicle of Cultural Harmony
Last week’s “Ancient Poetry Immersion” event unveiled the timeless charm of Chinese classics
while weaving cultural threads between East and West. Designed to foster cross-cultural empathy, the
activity transformed our campus into an aesthetic dialogue platform.
Students staged bilingual poetry recitals, breathing life into Li Bai’s “Toasting the moon, my
shadow makes us three” with immersive projections. Calligraphy workshops decoded Wang Wei’s
landscape imagery through brushstrokes and VR technology, allowing international peers to grasp “empty
mountains echoing with rain” beyond linguistic barriers. The highlight was collaborative translation
contests, where teams reinterpreted Su Shi’s philosophical resilience in “How can we fear life’s winds
and rains?” through modern slam poetry.
As Du Fu envisioned “Words that startle heaven and earth,” this poetic rendezvous proved cultural
boundaries dissolve when hearts resonate with universal beauty. The echoes of quatrains shall continue
nurturing our shared humanity.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生记录“中国古代诗词进校园”中英文化弥合活动并投稿到校
英文报上。
【详解】1.词汇积累
展示：unveil→unfold
培养：foster→cultivate
掌握：grasp→master
比赛：contest→competition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Calligraphy workshops decoded Wang Wei’s landscape imagery through brushstrokes and VR
technology, allowing international peers to grasp “empty mountains echoing with rain” beyond linguistic
barriers.
拓展句：Calligraphy workshops decoded Wang Wei’s landscape imagery through brushstrokes and VR
technology, which allowed international peers to grasp “empty mountains echoing with rain” beyond
linguistic barriers.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last week’s “Ancient Poetry Immersion” event unveiled the timeless charm
of Chinese classics while weaving cultural threads between East and West.（运用了while 引导的时间状语
从句省略句）
【高分句型2】The highlight was collaborative translation contests, where teams reinterpreted Su Shi’s
philosophical resilience in “How can we fear life’s winds and rains?” through modern slam poetry.
（运用了where 引导的非限制性定语从句）
10．（2025·河南新乡·三模）
假定你是李华，你校近期举办了“科普进校园”活动。请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，内容包括：
1.活动介绍；
2.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80 个左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Our school recently hosted an activity called “Promoting Tech on Campus”, bringing cutting-edge
technology to campus. Researchers demonstrated AI robotics, conducted chemistry magic shows, and led
VR space exploration sessions. The highlight was a drone programming workshop where students coded
flight patterns.
This immersive experience transformed abstract textbook concepts into visible wonders. Seeing my
classmates’ eyes light up while operating 3D printers, I realized science isn’t just formulas — it’s
creative problem-solving. The activity didn’t just display technology but it planted seeds of curiosity. As
one visiting scientist remarked, “Today’s hands-on experiments inspire tomorrow’s innovators.” Such
an activity will surely inspire us to innovate more in the future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，介绍“科普进
校园”活动并阐述自己的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近：recently → lately
可见的：visible → perceptible
激发：inspire → stimulate
创新：innovate → create
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our school recently hosted an activity called “Promoting Tech on Campus”, bringing cutting-edge
technology to campus.
拓展句：Our school recently hosted an activity, which is called “Promoting Tech on Campus”, bringing
cutting-edge technology to campus.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The highlight was a drone programming workshop where students coded flight
patterns.（运用了where 引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Seeing my classmates’ eyes light up while operating 3D printers, I realized science
isn’t just formulas — it’s creative problem-solving.（运用了while 引导的时间状语从句的省略、省略引
导词that 的宾语从句）
11．（2025·安徽·三模）
假定你是李华。你校音乐社团上周举行了露天音乐会(Open-air Concert)。请你为校园网英语专栏写一
篇新闻报道，内容包括：
1. 活动时间、地点；
2. 活动内容；
3. 活动意义。
注意：1. 词数80 左右 2. 可自拟标题。
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Open-air Concert Brings Campus to Life
Aiming to enhance campus culture and provide a platform for students to showcase their musical
talents, our school’s Music Club successfully held an open-air concert on the campus square last
Wednesday afternoon. The event attracted a large number of students and teachers.
The concert ran from 3: 00 p. m. to 5: 00 p. m. , featuring a variety of performances ranging from
classical pieces to modern pop songs. Performers displayed their skills on instruments like guitars, pianos,
and drums, vividly showcasing their passion and creativity in music.
The successful event not only enriched our campus life but also brought us closer through the power
of music, leaving a memorable impression on everyone involved.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。要求考生为校园网英语专栏写一篇关于学校音乐社团上周举行露天
音乐会的新闻报道。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提升，增强：enhance → improve/boost
展示：showcase → display/exhibit
各种各样的：a variety of → various/kinds of
留下印象：leave an impression on → impress
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The event attracted a large number of students and teachers.
拓展句：The event, which was held to enhance campus culture, attracted a large number of students and
teachers.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The concert ran from 3: 00 p. m. to 5: 00 p. m. , featuring a variety of
performances ranging from classical pieces to modern pop songs.(运用了现在分词短语featuring...作伴随状
语)
[高分句型2] The successful event not only enriched our campus life but also brought us closer through
the power of music, leaving a memorable impression on everyone involved. (运用了not only...but also...结
构和现在分词作结果状语)
12．（2025·安徽·三模）
上周末你参加了学校组织的以“Planting Trees for a Greener World”为主题的公益植树活动。现请你为
校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1．描述活动内容；
2．分享你的收获。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80 左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Planting Trees for a Greener World
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Planting Trees for a Greener World
Last Sunday, our school held a tree-planting event that involved all students and teachers.
Armed with shovels and saplings, we headed to the nearby park, where the air was sweet and the
ground was ready for new life. We dug holes, planted saplings, and watered them, working in teams with
laughter and determination.
This experience was incredibly rewarding. Not only did I learn practical skills about planting, but I
also felt a sense of achievement, realizing that every effort counts in creating a greener world.
【导语】本题书面表达是一篇报道，要求考生为校英文报写一篇关于参加公益植树活动的报道，内容包括
描述活动内容和分享收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：hold → organize
为……做好准备：be ready for → have everything in place for
重要：count → matter
意识到：realize → be aware of
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：This experience was incredibly rewarding.
拓展句：This experience proved to be astonishingly gratifying and fulfilling.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last Sunday, our school held a tree-planting event that involved all students and
teachers.（使用了关系代词that 引导的定语从句，先行词为event）
【高分句型2】Not only did I learn practical skills about planting, but I also felt a sense of achievement,
realizing that every effort counts in creating a greener world.（使用了部分倒装和现在分词短语作状语）
13.（2025·内蒙古包头·二模）
你们学校最近组织了一次植树活动，请以“An Interesting Tree-planting Activity”为题写一篇报道，向校
英语报投稿，内容包括：
1. 时间、地点及参与者；
2. 植树的过程；
3. 你的体验和感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为100 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An Interesting Tree-planting Activity
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An Interesting Tree-planting Activity
Last Sunday our school organized an interesting tree-planting activity on campus. Almost all students joined it
positively.
At the beginning, our teachers explained how to plant trees and then gave us a demonstration. Afterwards, we
got involved and cooperated with pleasure. Some dug holes, some planted trees while others watered them. We
worked hard, talking and laughing happily all the time, during which our teachers took many photos for us.
We truly enjoyed the activity. Not only did it help us cooperate better and beautify our campus, but also it
raised our awareness of protecting the environment.
【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的活动报道体裁，以“An Interesting Tree-planting Activity”为题，
向校英语报投稿，介绍学校组织的植树活动，需涵盖活动的时间、地点、参与者、植树过程以及个人体验
和感受。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
组织：organized→arranged
积极地：positively→enthusiastically
示范：demonstration→show
提高：raised→enhanced
2. 句式拓展
原句：Some dug holes, some planted trees while others watered them.
拓展句：Some students were busy digging holes, some focused on carefully planting the trees, and others
were responsible for watering them to ensure the young saplings’ growth.
原句：We truly enjoyed the activity.
拓展句：We thoroughly enjoyed the activity, immersing ourselves in the joyful process of contributing to
our campus.
【点睛】
[高分句型一] At the beginning, our teachers explained how to plant trees and then gave us a
demonstration.（“how to plant trees” 为 “疑问词+不定式” 结构，作宾语，简洁清晰地表达老师讲解
的内容，使句子结构多样且合理）
[高分句型二] We worked hard, talking and laughing happily all the time, during which our teachers took
many photos for us.（“talking and laughing happily all the time” 为现在分词短语作伴随状语，生动展
现活动中的欢乐氛围；“during which” 引导定语从句，修饰先行词 “We worked hard” 整个句子，补
充说明活动期间老师拍照的情况，让文章内容更丰富 ）
[高分句型三] Not only did it help us cooperate better and beautify our campus, but also it raised our
awareness of protecting the environment.（运用 “not only...but also...” 倒装结构，强调活动带来的多方
面积极意义，增强文章表达效果和逻辑性 ）
14.（2025·四川广安·二模）
假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以“文化传承”为主题的征文活动。请你以“The Rise of Chinese
Style”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括:
(1) 简述中国风流行的现象；
(2) 分析其流行的原因；
(3) 呼吁更多人关注中国文化。
注意：
(1) 写作词数应为80 个左右；
(2) 请按如下格式作答。
The Rise of Chinese Style
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The Rise of Chinese Style
In recent years, Chinese style has gained global popularity. Traditional elements like Hanfu, Peking Opera
motifs, and ink painting patterns now appear in fashion, movies, and daily products. Even international brands are
incorporating Chinese cultural symbols into their designs.
Several factors contribute to this trend. Firstly, since China’s global influence is growing, young generations
are increasingly proud of their cultural roots. Besides, creative integration of tradition with modern designs attracts
diverse audiences. Lastly, social media platforms spread these cultural products rapidly.
Chinese style is not just a trend but a bridge connecting the past and future. Let’s work together to explore and
promote our heritage, ensuring its vitality in the modern world.
【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的征文体裁，以 “The Rise of Chinese Style” 为题，围绕 “文化
传承” 主题，阐述中国风流行现象、分析原因，并呼吁关注中国文化，符合英文报征文要求。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
流行：gained popularity→become prevalent
因素：factors→elements
确保：ensuring→guaranteeing
2.句式拓展
原句：Traditional elements like Hanfu, Peking Opera motifs, and ink painting patterns now appear in
fashion, movies, and daily products.
拓展句：Elements deeply rooted in tradition, such as Hanfu, the motifs of Peking Opera, and patterns of
ink paintings, are now making appearances not only in the realm of fashion but also in movies and
various daily products.
原句：Let’s work together to explore and promote our heritage, ensuring its vitality in the modern
world.
拓展句：It's high time that we joined hands to explore and promote our cultural heritage, thereby
ensuring that it remains vibrant and dynamic in the contemporary world.
【点睛】
[高分句型一] Even international brands are incorporating Chinese cultural symbols into their designs.（简
单句直接点明国际品牌融入中国文化符号的现象，简洁有力，突出中国风流行的广度 ）
[高分句型二] Firstly, since China’s global influence is growing, young generations are increasingly proud
of their cultural roots.（since 引导原因状语从句，清晰地阐述中国风流行的首要原因，使文章逻辑连
贯 ）
[高分句型三] Chinese style is not just a trend but a bridge connecting the past and future.（“not
just...but...” 结构强调中国风的重要意义，“connecting the past and future” 现在分词短语作后置定语，
修饰 “bridge”，让表达更形象生动 ）
15.（2025·山西晋中·二模）
你校英文报正在开展以社区志愿活动为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.你参加的活动;
2.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80 个左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Last weekend, I took part in a community volunteer activity with my classmates.
During the activity, I cleaned the public park, picking up litter and weeding the flower beds. Moreover,
offering visitors information about the park’s attractions gave me a strong sense of value. After that, I visited the
elderly in the community center, chatting with them and helping with small chores, and performed a play to bring
them joy.
This experience was truly rewarding. It made me realize how much a small act of kindness can brighten
someone’s day. Volunteering is a great way to give back and make a difference.
【导语】此篇范文属于应用文写作中的征文体裁，围绕社区志愿活动主题，讲述作者参与的具体活动，
并分享活动感受，符合校英文报征文要求。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
参加：took part in→participated in
清理：cleaned→tidied up
给予：gave→conferred
意识到：realize→be aware of
2. 句式拓展
原句：During the activity, I cleaned the public park, picking up litter and weeding the flower beds.
拓展句：During the activity, I devoted myself to cleaning the public park, carefully picking up litter
scattered around and meticulously weeding the flower beds.
原句：This experience was truly rewarding.
拓展句：This experience turned out to be an incredibly rewarding one.
【点睛】
[高分句型一] During the activity, I cleaned the public park, picking up litter and weeding the flower
beds.（“picking up litter and weeding the flower beds” 现在分词短语作伴随状语，生动地展现了清理
公园时的具体行为，使句子更加丰富，避免平铺直叙 ）
[高分句型二] Moreover, offering visitors information about the park’s attractions gave me a strong
sense of value.（动名词短语 “offering visitors information about the park’s attractions” 作主语，直接
点明该行为带来的感受，突出志愿活动的意义，让表达简洁有力 ）
[高分句型三] It made me realize how much a small act of kindness can brighten someone’s day.
（“how much a small act of kindness can brighten someone’s day” 为 how 引导的宾语从句，作
realize 的宾语，深刻地表达出作者从志愿活动中获得的感悟，增强文章的感染力 ）
16. (2025 届河北省部分重点高中高三下学期调研考试)
假定你是学生会主席李华，最近你校实施了“校长陪餐制”。该制度实施后，学校发生了很大的变化。
校英语报对此情况进行征稿。请你投稿，内容包括：
(1)实施前后学校食堂的变化；
(2)鼓励同学们提出建议。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80 个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：校长陪餐制 the Principal’s Dining Accompaniment System
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Since the introduction of the Principal’s Dining Accompaniment System, our school canteen has seen
remarkable improvements. Previously, there were frequent complaints about food quality and cleanliness. Now,
with the principal joining us for meals, we’ve noticed fresher ingredients, a more varied and balanced menu, and a
cleaner dining area. This not only enhances our dining experience but also shows that the school cares about our
health and well-being.
I encourage you to share your thoughts and suggestions on how we can further improve our canteen. Your
feedback is valuable and can make a real difference!
Let’s work together to make our school canteen even better!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。最近考生学校实施了“校长陪餐制”。该制度实施后，学校发生了很
大的变化。要求考生对此情况写一篇稿件对校英语报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提高：improvement→enhancement
频繁的：frequent→recurring
有价值的：valuable→worthwhile/invaluable
真正的：real→genuine/authentic
2.句式拓展
原句： Since the introduction of the Principal’s Dining Accompaniment System, our school canteen has seen
remarkable improvements.
拓展句：Since the Principal’s Dining Accompaniment System was introduced, remarkable improvements have
been noticed in our school canteen.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Now, with the principal joining us for meals, we’ve noticed fresher ingredients, a more varied and
balanced menu, and a cleaner dining area. (运用了with 的复合结构)
【高分句型2】This not only enhances our dining experience but also shows that the school cares about our health
and well-being.(运用了not only…but also…的固定句型以及that 引导的宾语从句)
17. (2025·广东云浮市云安区·一模)
假定你是李华，你校刚刚结束了一场以“美丽的祖国”(Beautiful Motherland)为主题的摄影比赛。你的
作品荣获一等奖。请你给校英文报投稿分享这次经历，内容包括：
1.介绍你的作品；
2.你的感想。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80 个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Beautiful Motherland in My Picture
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Beautiful Motherland in My Picture
In the photography competition themed “Beautiful Motherland”, my entry won the first prize!
I submitted a photo of a vast golden wheat field under the setting sun. The gentle breeze made the wheat
waves ripple, and the warm glow of the setting sun painted the entire field with a layer of golden light. This scene
reminded me of the hardworking farmers and their bountiful harvest.
I am extremely thrilled and honored to have won the award. This contest has not only allowed me to show the
beauty of our motherland but also made me appreciate the charm of nature and the efforts of our people. It has
inspired me to keep observing and recording the wonderful moments of our country with my camera.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于投稿征文。要求考生给学校英文报投稿，分享刚刚结束的学校组织的以“美丽
的祖国”为主题的摄影比赛，介绍自己的获奖作品和感想。
【详解】1. 词汇积累：
比赛：competition→contest
奖、奖项：prize→award
勤奋的、努力工作的：hardworking→diligent
允许：allow→permit
激励、鼓励：inspire→encourage
2. 句式拓展：
原句：In the photography competition themed “Beautiful Motherland”, my entry won the first prize!
拓展句：In the photography competition which was themed “Beautiful Motherland”, my entry won the first prize!
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The gentle breeze made the wheat waves ripple, and the warm glow of the setting sun painted the
entire field with a layer of golden light.(动词made 后为复合宾语结构，并运用了以连词and 连接的两个并列
句。)
【高分句型2】 This contest has not only allowed me to show the beauty of our motherland but also made me
appreciate the charm of nature and the efforts of our people. (运用了固定短语not only...but also...连接并列谓
语。)
18. (2025·山东德州·一模)
假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以 “AI in My Life” 为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，
内容包括：
(1)AI 在你生活中的应用；
(2)你的感受和期待。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80 个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Al in My Life
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【参考范文】
Al in My Life
AI has integrated into multiple aspects of my daily life. Every morning, my smart alarm clock, guided by AI,
wakes me up with a customized weather forecast and the latest news. Besides, AI-powered learning apps like
Doubao offer me explanations and study tips and efficiently aid in my English practice.
Thanks to AI, my routine has become more convenient and my academic performance has been dramatically
boosted. AI has truly become a reliable helper in my life.
Full of anticipation for the future of AI, I’m eager to see AI making great leaps in fields such as healthcare and
education, and continuing to shape our lives in amazing ways.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文给以“AI in My Life” 为主题的征文活动投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
可靠的：reliable→credible
此外：besides→moreover
建议：tip→advice
显著地：dramatically→remarkably
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Thanks to AI, my routine has become more convenient and my academic performance has been
dramatically boosted.
拓展句：Thanks to AI, not only has my routine become more convenient, but also my academic performance has
been dramatically boosted.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Every morning, my smart alarm clock, guided by AI, wakes me up with a customized weather forecast
and the latest news. (运用了过去分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2]Full of anticipation for the future of AI, I’m eager to see AI making great leaps in fields such as
healthcare and education, and continuing to shape our lives in amazing ways. (运用了现在分词作宾补)
19. (2025·山东青岛·一模)
假定你是某国际学校的学生李华，你校官网正在征集以“My Favorite City”为主题的英语短视频。请你
给该活动的负责人Alan 写一封邮件投稿，内容包括：
1.介绍作品；
2.表达期望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80 个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alan,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Alan,
I’m Li Hua, an enthusiastic student from our school. I’m writing to submit my video on “My Favorite City”
for our school website.
In the video, I explore the beauty and cultural significance of Jinan, a city that truly fascinates visitors. The
video highlights the picturesque Daming Lake, where vibrant lotus flowers bloom in the summer months, and the
iconic Baotu Spring, renowned for its crystal clear waters. Additionally, the video features the city’s traditional
architecture, offering a window into Jinan’s rich history and heritage.
I truly hope that my video will be selected, as it will inspire students to experience the unique charm of Jinan.
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校官网组织的以“My Favorite City”为主题的英语短视
频征稿活动负责人Alan 写一封邮件投稿，介绍自己的短视频并表达期望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要性：significance→importance
此外：additionally→in addition
真诚地：truly→sincerely
希望：hope→wish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m Li Hua, an enthusiastic student from our school.
拓展句：I’m Li Hua, who is an enthusiastic student from our school.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】In the video, I explore the beauty and cultural significance of Jinan, a city that truly fascinates
visitors.(运用了that 引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】The video highlights the picturesque Daming Lake, where vibrant lotus flowers bloom in the
summer months, and the iconic Baotu Spring, renowned for its crystal clear waters.(运用了where 引导的非限制
性定语从句)
20. (2025 届湖北省圆创联考高三下学期第一次模拟英语试题)
假定你是李华，近期，你准备给学校英文报举办的故事续写大赛投稿，你已写好初稿。请你给外教
Mary 写一封邮件，请她给你指导，内容包括：
1. 写邮件的目的；
2. 征求建议；
3. 表示感谢。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答；
3. 参考词汇：故事续写大赛 Story Continuation Contest
Dear Mary,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mary,
I am writing to seek your invaluable advice regarding my entry for the Story Continuation Contest organized
by an English newspaper.
I have completed the first draft of my story, and I am eager to enhance its quality and I hope that you can help
me. I would be deeply grateful if you could take a look at my draft and offer suggestions on how to improve the
plot development, characterization and language use. Your insights would undoubtedly be instructive in refining
my work.
Your timely help would mean the world to me. Keenly anticipating your prompt reply.
Yours sincerely .
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生准备给学校英文报举办的故事续写大赛投稿，已写好初稿，要求
考生按照要求给外教Mary 写一封邮件，请她指导。
【详解】1.词汇积累
宝贵的：invaluable → precious
建议：advice → suggestion
关于：regarding → concerning
完成：complete → finish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to seek your invaluable advice regarding my entry for the Story Continuation Contest
organized by an English newspaper.
拓展句：I am writing to seek your invaluable advice regarding my entry for the Story Continuation Contest ,
which is organized by an English newspaper.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I have completed the first draft of my story, and I am eager to enhance its quality and I hope you
can help.(运用了that 引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I would be deeply grateful if you could take a look at my draft and offer suggestions on how to
improve the plot development, characterization and language use.(运用了if 引导的条件状语从句)
21. (2025 届江苏省南通市如皋市高三下上学期适应性考试(一))
国产动画电影《哪吒之魔童闹海》在国外热映，请你以此写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，内容包括：1.
分析这一现象； 2. 简述哪吒的故事给你的启示。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇： animated film “Ne Zha: The Reign of the Demon Child”
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【参考范文】
Recently, the Chinese animated film Ne Zha : The Reign of the Demon Child has enjoyed immense popularity
overseas, fascinating international viewers.
This success can be attributed to its engaging story of self-discovery and rebellion against predetermined fate,
combined with breathtaking visuals and deeply developed characters.
Ne Zha’s journey, from being labeled a demon to embracing his unique identity, offers a profound lesson: one
should never give in to societal pressures but instead try to shape one’s own destiny. This message of self-belief and
determination is something that we can all learn from, especially as we face our own challenges in life.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇投稿，分析《哪吒》这部电影在海外爆火的现象及受到的启
示。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
吸引，使着迷：fascinate →attract
挑战，困难：challenge →difficulty
令人惊叹的：breathtaking →spectacular
面临：face →be faced with
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Recently, the Chinese animated film Ne Zha: The Reign of the Demon Child has enjoyed immense
popularity overseas, fascinating international viewers.
拓展句：Recently, the Chinese animated film Ne Zha: The Reign of the Demon Child has enjoyed immense
popularity overseas, which fascinated international viewers.
【点睛】
【高分句型1 】This success can be attributed to its engaging story of self-discovery and rebellion against
predetermined fate, combined with breathtaking visuals and deeply developed characters. (运用了非谓语动词短语
作状语)
【高分句型2】This message of self-belief and determination is something that we can all learn from, especially
as we face our own challenges in life. (运用了that 引导限制性定语从句以及as 引导时间状语从句)
22. (2025·山东菏泽·一模)
假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举行以“AI in my eyes”为主题的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内
容包括：
1.AI 在生活和学习方面带来的变化；
2.你对AI 的观点和看法。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80 左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
AI in my eyes
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
AI in my eyes
In today’s rapidly evolving technological landscape, artificial intelligence (AI) plays a crucial role in shaping
various aspects of our lives. It has truly become an integral part of our lives. In transportation, self-driving cars are
gradually emerging. In education, it offers customized learning resources. And it powers voice assistants, enabling
us to control devices hands-free.
In my eyes, though AI boosts efficiency and convenience, it may cause concerns like job displacement and
privacy issues. We should regulate and utilize AI properly to maximize its benefits while minimizing risks.
In conclusion, AI is a powerful tool that can reshape our world for the better if we handle it with care.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“AI in my eyes”为主题，写一篇短文投稿到校英文报，内
容需涵盖AI 在生活和学习方面带来的变化以及个人对AI 的观点和看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
关键的：crucial→critical
出现：emerge→appear
提供：offer→provide
依我看： in my eyes→in my opinion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：And it powers voice assistants, enabling us to control devices hands-free.
拓展句：And it powers voice assistants, which enables us to control devices hands-free.
【点睛】
【高分句型1 】In my eyes, though AI boosts efficiency and convenience, it may cause concerns like job
displacement and privacy issues.(运用了though 引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】In conclusion, AI is a powerful tool that can reshape our world for the better if we handle it with
care.(运用了that 引导的限制性定语从句和if 引导的条件状语从句)
五、通用高分替换训练（传统文化）
1. 高分词汇替换
词义
普通词汇
高分词汇
高兴的
glad
delighted
许多
many
numerous/a great many/a large
number of/hundreds of
记住
remember
bear/keep... in mind
知道，意识到
know
be aware of/realize
使，让
make
enable
应该
should
be supposed to
喜欢
like
be fond of
有帮助的
helpful
of great help
到来
come
approach
利用
use
make use of/take advantage of
想要做……
want to do...
would like/intend/desire to do...
变好
get better
improve
关于
about
in terms of/as for
对…… 有好处
be good for
be beneficial to
越来越多
more and more
an increasing number of
告诉某人某事
tell sb. sth.
share sth. with sb./inform sb. of sth.
受欢迎
be popular with
enjoy wide popularity among/with
首先
firstly
to begin with
此外
secondly
in addition/what's more
2. 高分句型替换
句意
普通句型
高分句型
很高兴你对中华传统
文化感兴趣。
I am glad you are interested in
traditional Chinese culture.
Knowing that you are
interested in traditional
Chinese culture, I am
delighted.
我们很高兴能和你一
起庆祝……
We are happy to celebrate...
together with you.
We'll be honored to have
you celebrate... together
with us.
我邀请你庆祝……，
它是纪念…… 的一
天。
I'd like to invite you to
celebrate... It is a day in memory
of...
I'd like to invite you to
celebrate... which is a day in
memory of...
我建议你了解……
I advise you to learn...
My suggestion is that you
(should) learn...
我认为这是学习……
的最好的方式。
In my opinion, it is the best way
to learn...
I hold the view that it is the
best way to learn...
…… 是中国最重要
的节日，它有着悠久
... is the most important festival
in China. It has a long history.
..., the most important
festival in China, has a long
的历史。
history.
…… 期间，我们将
唱歌、跳舞、做游
戏。
We will sing, dance and play
games during...
We'll spend some fun time
together singing, dancing
and playing games during...
我相信你能够……
I believe that you can...
I am convinced that you
can...
3.经典表达
汉语释义
经典表达
中华传统文化
traditional Chinese culture
农历
lunar calendar
春节
the Spring Festival
端午节
the Dragon Boat Festival
元宵节
the Lantern Festival
清明节
the Tomb - sweeping Day
重阳节
the Double Ninth Day
中秋节
the Mid - Autumn Festival
满月
full moon
月饼
moon cake
放鞭炮/烟花
set off firecrackers/fireworks
包饺子
make dumplings
耍龙灯
play the dragon lantern
拜年
pay a new - year call
家庭团聚
family reunion
京剧是有着 200 多年历史的国粹。
Beijing Opera is a national treasure with a history of
more than 200 years.
了解到你对中国传统文化感兴趣，我
写信向你介绍。
Knowing that you are interested in traditional
Chinese culture, I am writing to introduce it to you.
这项活动旨在帮助更多的人了解中国
传统文化。
This event aims to help more people learn about
traditional Chinese culture.
你能让我们了解一些你们国家的东西
就更好了。
It will be nicer of you to show us something from your
country.
它是中国最重要的节日之一。
It is one of the most important festivals in China.
在农历正月十五庆祝这个节日。
The festival is celebrated on the 15th day of the first
lunar month.
祝你在中国诗歌的学习上取得更大的
进步。
Wish you greater progress in the study of Chinese
poetry.
