第09 讲 感谢信
（考试时间：15 分钟/每题）
目 录
感谢信常用词汇
P1
感谢信常用句型
P 3
感谢信常用模版与演练
P 4
感谢信精准测试11 篇
P 6
通用高分替换训练（旅游与健康）
P 23
一、感谢信常用词汇
序号
中文
英文
1
慷慨的帮助
generous help
2
及时和无私的帮助
timely and selfless help
3
专业的帮助
professional assistance
4
对某人十分重要
mean a lot to sb
5
慷慨捐赠
generous donation
6
使某人能够做某事
enable sb to do sth
7
鼓励某人做某事
encourage sb to do sth
8
有机会做某事
have the chance to do sth
9
建设性的、有益的帮助
constructive and instructive help
10
因某事感激某人
be grateful/thankful to sb for sth
11
向某人表达无尽的谢意
convey the endless appreciation to sb
12
取得非凡的成就
make remarkable achievements
13
为某事表达真诚的谢意
express the sincere gratitude/thanks for sth
14
因某事而感激某人
thank sb. for sth. /doing sth.
15
因某事而感激某人
be grateful to sb. for sth.
16
向某人表达我诚挚的谢意
show/express/extend/convey my sincere thanks/gratitude
to sb. for sth.
17
陷入困境
in trouble
18
取得很大的进步
make great／good progress
19
过去四年
in/during/over the past/last four years
20
被一所大学录取
be admitted to/into a university
21
谢谢你帮助我
say thanks to you for helping me
22
时间过得真快！
How time flies!
23
随着时间的推移
As time goes on/goes by/with time going on/going by
24
多亏了你的帮助
thanks to/owing to/because of your help
25
玩得高兴
enjoy myself
26
去参观，拜访
pay a visit to...
27
对…… 有更好的理解
have a better understanding of…
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名胜
a place of interest
二、感谢信常用句型
1. 任何语言都无法表达我真挚的谢意。
My true gratitude is beyond any words/description.
2. 我们非常感激你为我们做的一切。
We all thank you and are very grateful for what you did for us.
3. 我写这封信是为了表达你帮我提高英语口语的谢意。
I am writing to express my thanks for your helping me improve my spoken English.
4. 再次感谢你的盛情招待，我非常期待不久会看到你。
Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
5. 我谨借此机会感谢你给我及时的帮助和支持。
I’d like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance.
6. 非常感谢您慷慨的帮助。
Thank you so much for your generous help.
7. 我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助。
I am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help.
8. 我很感谢你为我所做的一切。
I am so grateful to you for what you have done for me.
9. 我想感谢你的帮助。
I would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help.
10.为此，我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。
For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.
11.多亏了你的帮助，在... 我取得了飞速的进步。
Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in ....
12.要是没有你的帮助，我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。
Without/But for your help (lf it were not for your help), I would not have made so much progress in my English.
13.我太感谢你的帮助了。
I extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor.
14.如你能接受我诚挚的感谢，我不胜感激。
I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.
15.我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
Your kindness and help will always be remembered.
三、感谢信常用模版与演练
1. 模版
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am eagerly writing to extend my heartfelt gratitude to you for ______(感谢的原因). Undoubtedly，had it
not been your assistance in ______(对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been______ (没有对方帮助时
的后果).
Whenever I encounter difficulties, you ______(具体事由和感想) .
Again, no words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. Many thanks to you. I wish ______(表达祝
愿或者回报意愿).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
2. 写作实操技巧
假定你是李华，现在是中山大学(Sun Yat-sen University)大一新生，高三时在李老师的帮助下，英语进
步很大，为表示感谢，给李老师写一封感谢信。
要点如下：
1. 梦想成真，考上理想大学；
2. 因为李老师的辅导和鼓励，英语由差变好；
3. 对老师祝福。
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【模板范文】
Dear Mr. Li (称谓)
I am eagerly writing to extend my heartfelt gratitude to you for helping me improve my English (感谢的原
因). Undoubtedly，had it not been your assistance in providing me learning skills (对方给予的具体帮助), I fear
that I would not have been a student of Sun Yat-sen University (没有对方帮助时的后果).
Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always help me out and cheer me up, which helps me feul my
enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence (
具体帮助事由
) .
Again, no words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. Many thanks to you. I wish you plenty of
pleasure in your life (表达祝愿或者回报意愿).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
3. 仿写演练
假定你是李华，上周六你的英国好友Eric教你如何创建个人网站，你从中学到很多知识。 请你给他
写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 简述Eric 给予你的帮助；
3. 希望向Eric 学习更多相关知识。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【模板范文】
Dear Eric (称谓)
I am eagerly writing to extend my heartfelt gratitude to you for helping me create a personal website last
Saturday (感谢的原因). Undoubtedly ，had it not been your assistance in furnishing me with professional
guidance (对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would not have created my own personal website (没有对方帮助
时的后果).
Whenever I encounter difficulties, not only did you explain it to me carefully and patiently, but you also
taught me the steps of creating a personal website in detail. Eventually, with your help, I made it (
具体帮助事由
) .
Again, no words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. Many thanks to you. I wish that I’ll learn
more relevant knowledge from you (
表达祝愿或者回报意愿
).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
四、感谢信精准测试11 篇
1．（2025·湖南长沙·三模）
假设你是李华，上周你校请了心理专家来为大家做高考前心理辅导。校学生会委托你给心理讲师写一
封感谢信，内容包括：
（1）表达衷心感谢；
（2）表现辅导作用；
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80 个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Distinguished Mr. Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Distinguished Mr. Smith,
On behalf of all the students, I’m writing to express our sincere gratitude for your
wonderful psychological guidance last week.
Your lecture greatly helped us reduce stress and build confidence for the coming college
entrance exam. Many students said they felt calmer and more motivated after listening to your
talk. You gave us practical advice on how to manage anxiety and stay focused. We’ve learned
that staying positive is the key to success.
Thank you again for your valuable time and support.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生接受学生会的委托，给心理讲师写一封感
谢信，表达衷心感谢，并说明对方辅导的作用。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express → convey
感激：gratitude → thankfulness
减少：reduce → decrease
压力：stress → pressure
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句：Your lecture greatly helped us reduce stress and build confidence for the coming college
entrance exam.
拓展句：It was your lecture that greatly helped us reduce stress and build confidence for the
coming college entrance exam.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You gave us practical advice on how to manage anxiety and stay
focused.(运用了“疑问词+不定式”结构作宾语)
【高分句型2】We’ve learned that staying positive is the key to success.(运用了that 引导的
宾语从句)
2.（高三模拟题精选01）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你因为是新冠病毒的密接人员而居家隔离了一周，隔离期间，社区
的外国志愿者Jim 给予了你很多帮助，你打算给Jim 写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 感谢所帮你做的事情;
2. 对你的意义和你的感受。
注意：新冠病毒的密接人员: a close contact with COVID-19;
隔离：quarantine v./n.
1. 词数100 左右;
2. 信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m writing this letter to show my appreciation to you for your help during my quarantine.
As a close contact with COVID-19 ,I had to stay at home.As a student in Hongxing Middle school,I need
study to keep up with other students,and you offered to help me with my study.Not only did you help me with my
study,but you took good care of me.Without your help,I would fall behind others.
What you did means a lot for me.I determine to work hard and to be a person like you who help others as a
volunteer.Thanks for your devotion again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，因新冠密接而居家隔离，社区志愿者Jim 给予许多帮
助，要求考生写一封感谢信，感谢他所做的事及这些事的意义及自身感受。
第一步：词汇积累
感谢：appreciation→gratitude
照顾：take care of→look after
帮助：help →favor
表达：show→express
第二步：句式拓展
同义句转化
原句：What you did means a lot for me.I determined to work hard and to be a person like you who helps others as
a volunteer.
拓展句：What you did means a lot for me,so I determine to work hard and to be a person like you who helps
others as a volunteer.
第三步：高分句型
【高分句型1】Not only did you help me with my study,but you took good care of me.(运用了not only 的倒装
句)
【高分句型2】What you did means a lot for me.I determine to work hard and to be a person like you who helps
others as a volunteer. (运用了what 引导的主语从句以及who 引导的定语从句)
3.（高三模拟题精选02）
假定你是李华，国庆节在北京游玩时结识了当地的青年Li Lei，在游览故宫的过程中他为你提供了很
多帮助。为此，你给他写了一封感谢信。内容包括：
1.感谢他的帮助；
2.你的收获与祝福。
注意：1.写作词数应为80 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：故宫the Palace Museum
Dear Li Lei,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Li Lei,
I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for your help when I was visiting the Palace Museum. If it had
not been for your assistance, I wouldn’t have had such a wonderful time.
Thanks to your guidance and clear explanation, I went through an amazing tour. It was my first time to
experience the ancient royal life in person and appreciate the artistic paintings and architecture. Also, I am grateful
for your patience when I kept asking you questions.
Wish you happy every day! Next time if you come to my city, let me be your guide!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在北京故宫游玩时认识的青年Li Lei 写信，感激他在自己
游览期间提供的帮助，并说明自己的收获，表达自己的祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
由于：thanks to→due to
清楚的：clear→explicit
令人惊叹的：amazing→awesome
欣赏：appreciate→admire
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：If it had not been for your assistance, I wouldn’t have had such a wonderful time.
拓展句：But for your assistance, I wouldn’t have had such a wonderful time.
【点睛】【高分句型1】If it had not been for your assistance, I wouldn’t have had such a wonderful time.（运用
了if 引导的虚拟条件句）
【高分句型2】Also, I am grateful for your patience when I kept asking you questions.（运用了when 引导的状
语从句）
4.（高三模拟题精选03）
假定你是李华，不慎将Pride and Prejudice 这本书落在了操场。你校外教Vincent 捡到后交还于你。请
给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.描述经过；
3.表达感谢。
注意：1.词数80 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Vincent,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class One, Senior Two. I’m writing to express my gratitude for your returning my
book.
Last Sunday, I left my book Pride and Prejudice on the playground owing to my carelessness. I was worried
because the book was a gift from my best friend, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was
informed that my book was at the school’s Lost and Found Office and it was you who had found my book. My
excitement was truly beyond description at that moment!
I am deeply touched by your thoughtful kindness. Please accept my sincere thanks again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给捡到你丢失书的外教Vincent 写一封感谢信，内容包括：1.
写信目的；2.描述经过；3.表达感谢。
第一步：词汇积累
感激：gratitude→appreciation
由于：owing to→on account of
感动：touch→move
真诚的：sincere→genuine
第二步：句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I am deeply touched by your thoughtful kindness. Please accept my sincere thanks again.
拓展句：I am so deeply touched by your thoughtful kindness that you must accept my sincere thanks again.
第三步：高分句型
【高分句型1】 I was worried because the book was a gift from my best friend, which were very important to me.
(运用了because 引导的原因状语从句和which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my book was at the school’s Lost and Found Office and
it was you who had found my book.(运用了that 引导宾语从句以及强调句型)
5.（高三模拟题精选04）
假定你是李华，你被自己心仪的大学录取了。请你给你的外教Mrs. Wilson 写封感谢信，感谢在校期间
她对你的教导和帮助，内容包括：
1. 表达感谢；
2. 回顾老师对你的帮助；
3. 表达对老师的想念以及衷心祝愿。
注意：1. 词数不少于100； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mrs. Wilson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mrs. Wilson,
I’m glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to college, which I have been dreaming of.
I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
It was you who offer me a series of practical approaches to learning English. But for your guidance, I
couldn’t have made such unbelievable progress in English. In addition, it’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to win
the first prize in a recent English speech contest, which motivated me to devote myself to learning English and built
up my confidence. What’s more, not only did you cheer me up in difficulties, but you also inspired my enthusiasm
for learning English. Words fail to express my endless appreciation to you, as you have done so much for me.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant and safe journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mrs. Wilson 写封感谢信，感谢在校期间她对你的教导
和帮助。
第一步：词汇积累
高兴的：glad→ delighted
感谢：gratitude→ appreciation
要不是：but for→ without
比赛：contest→ competition
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：But for your guidance, I couldn’t have made such unbelievable progress in English.
拓展句：If I hadn’t had your guidance, I couldn’t have made such unbelievable progress in English.
第三步：高分句型
【高分句型1】In addition, it’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to win the first prize in a recent English speech
contest, which motivated me to devote myself to learning English and built up my confidence.（运用了which 引
导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】What’s more, not only did you cheer me up in difficulties, but you also inspired my enthusiasm for
learning English.（运用了not only 置于句首引起的倒装句）
6.（高三模拟题精选05）
假定你是光明中学学生会主席李华，上周你校邀请Smith 教授来校做了一场有关各国身势语的专题讲
座。请你代表学校全体师生，用英语给他写一封感谢信。
内容包括：
1.表达感谢;
2.通过讲座，师生对身势语有了更多的了解。
注意：
1.词数应为80 左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Professor Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Professor Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the student union of Guangming Middle School. Representing our school, I’m writing
to convey my sincere appreciation to you for the lecture you gave us last week.
Through your lecture, we have learned that body language is one of the most effective methods of expressing
our feelings. For example, smiling is the most universal expression of happiness. Looking away from a person
means showing no interest in the person. However, not all cultures greet people in the same way. I do believe the
knowledge will be very beneficial when we communicate with people from other countries.
Thank you again for your wonderful lecture.
Yours,
LiHua.
【导语】本篇文章属于应用文。要求考生代表光明中学全体师生给上周来校做有关身势语讲座的教授写一
封感谢信。其中需要包括表达感谢及大家对身势语的掌握情况。
第一步：词汇积累
表达：convey→express
真诚的：sincere→honest
感激：appreciation→gratitude
有效的：effective→potent
第二步：句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Representing our school, I’m writing to convey my sincere appreciation to you for the lecture you gave us
last week.
拓展句：I, who represent our school, write this letter to convey my sincere appreciation to you for the lecture you
gave us last week.
第三步：高分句型
【高分句型1】Through your lecture, we have learned that body language is one of the most effective methods of
expressing our feelings (运用了that 引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 I do believe the knowledge will be very beneficial when we communicate with people from other
countries.（运用了when 引导的时间状语从句）
7.（高三模拟题精选06）
假设你是李华，今年6 月外教Grace 就要完成她在你校一年的教学，启程返美。请你给她写一封电子
邮件，表示对她的感谢。邮件包含以下要点：
1.感谢Grace 这一年来的教学和帮助；
2.回忆去年感恩节一起做火鸡 (turkey)、开派对的情景；
3.希望可以得到回复并继续保持联系。
注意: 1.词数 80 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Grace,
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Grace,
I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your dedicated teaching and generous help in the past
year. Your attractive classes aroused my interest in learning English and your constant encouragement motivated
me to work harder. The time we spent together was always enjoyable and memorable. What impressed me most is
the Thanksgiving party we held last year. I will never forget how happy we were when cooking turkey together.
Words fail to express my thanks for the joy you have brought us. I do hope to keep in touch with you.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇感谢信。文章要求考生给外教写一封感谢信，感谢外教这一年来的辛苦教学，并期待
能和外教老师继续保持联系。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表达：express→extend
激励：motivate→stimulate
吸引人的：attractive→appealing/fascinating
难忘的：unforgettable→memorable
2. 句式拓展
并列句变独立主格结构
原句：Your attractive classes aroused my interest in learning English and your constant encouragement motivated
me to work harder.
拓展句：Your attractive classes aroused my interest in learning English, your constant encouragement motivating
me to work harder.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The time we spent together was always enjoyable and memorable.（省略关系代词的定
语从句）
【高分句型2】What impressed me most is the Thanksgiving party we held last year.（what 引导的主语从句，
省略关系代词的定语从句）
8.（高三模拟题精选07）
假定你是李华，明天就是一年一度的教师节了，请你给你的英语老师写一封感恩信。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 难忘的一件事；
3. 你的祝福。
注意：
1. 词数80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear Miss Gao,
I would like to write a letter to express my sincere gratitude to you for tomorrow’s Teachers’ Day.
I remember one Monday I was reading in class when my stomach hurt. Immediately you rushed to the
drugstore next to the school to buy me some medicine. Being taken good care of, I felt so much warmth. You are a
reliable teacher. I am very grateful to you because you teach me how to read as well as the truth of life.
Happy Teachers’ Day and wish you success in work and good health.
Your student,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给自己的英语老师写一封感恩信，介绍自己最难忘的一件事，
并表达祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：gratitude→thankfulness
立刻：immediately→right away
买：buy→purchase
照顾：take care of→look after
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Immediately you rushed to the drugstore next to the school to buy me some medicine.
拓展句：Immediately you rushed to the drugstore which was next to the school to buy me some medicine.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Being taken good care of, I felt so much warmth. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】I am very grateful to you because you teach me how to read as well as the truth of life.(运用了
because 引导的原因状语从句)
9.（高三模拟题精选08）
假定你是李华，在教师节来临之际你自制了一份有中国特色的礼物赠送给外教Chris，同时你想写一封
信表达对外教的感谢，内容包括：
1．赠礼原因;
2．礼物简介;
3．表达期待。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80 个左右;
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
With the Teachers’ Day approaching, I’m writing to express my gratitude to you. I present you a handcrafted
gift with Chinese characteristics because you have taught me so much and inspired me greatly. The gift is a
beautifully painted fan, featuring traditional Chinese landscapes. It symbolizes the elegance and charm of our
culture.
I sincerely hope it will bring you joy and you will continue to guide us in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Chris 一份有中国特色的礼物并写一封信表达对他的
感谢。其内容包括：赠礼原因、礼物简介和表达期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude→appreciation
鼓励：inspire→motivate
代表：symbolize→stand for
快乐：joy→happiness
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the Teachers’ Day approaching, I’m writing to express my gratitude to you.
拓展句：As the Teachers’ Day is approaching, I’m writing to express my gratitude to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The gift is a beautifully painted fan, featuring traditional Chinese landscapes.(运用了现
在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】I sincerely hope it will bring you joy and you will continue to guide us in the future.(hope 后运用
了省略that 的宾语从句)
10.（高三模拟题精选09）
假定你是李华，刚刚结束在英国为期三个月的语言培训课程，并返回国内。请给你在英国的老师Mrs.
Brown 写一封邮件表示感谢。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mrs. Brown,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mrs. Brown,
I have just returned to China. I am writing this letter to thank you for making my life enjoyable and
successful in Britain.
My first day of study is still in my memory. I remember that I was so nervous and made a lot of mistakes in
your class. Several times I was sure that you were going to lose your temper, but you didn’t. Your kind guidance
and behavior have helped me learn a lot during the past three months. I will really miss all your support and do my
best to learn English well.
Thank you once again for everything.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生结束在英国为期三个月的语言培训课程返回国内后给英国的
老师Mrs. Brown 写一封邮件感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
返回：return → come back
紧张的：nervous → tense
和蔼的：kind → amiable
竭尽全力：do one’s best → make great efforts
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句：Your kind guidance and behavior have helped me learn a lot during the past three months.
拓展句：It is your kind guidance and behavior that have helped me learn a lot during the past three months.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I remember that I was so nervous and made a lot of mistakes in your class.（运用了that
引导宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Several times I was sure that you were going to lose your temper, but you didn’t.（运用了that 引
导宾语从句）
11.（高三模拟题精选10）
假定你是李华，你在学校举办的“Adversity and Courage”英语演讲比赛中获奖，请给指导外教 Miss
Morton 写一封邮件表示感谢。内容包括：
1. 感谢指导；
2. 个人感悟。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Morton,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Miss Morton ,
I am writing the letter to tell you that I got a first prize in the English Speech Contest “Adversity and Courage”
held in my school last Friday.
Thanks for your guide in my English .You gave me a lot of help. I was very happy when we stayed together
studying. During the time when we stayed, you were kind to me. You were humorous. You taught me how to speak
English fluently. I made great progress with your kind help, without which I couldn't have got the prize.
Through this activity, I deeply realized that adversity and courage can make a person better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。假定考生是李华，你在学校举办的“Adversity and Courage”英语演讲比赛中获
奖，请给指导外教 Miss Morton 写一封邮件表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
告诉：tell→inform
快乐的：happy→pleased
帮助：help→assistance
举行：hold→throw
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Thanks for your guide in my English .You gave me a lot of help.
拓展句：Thanks for your guide in my English where you gave me a lot of help.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was very happy when we stayed together studying.（运用了when 引导的时间状语从
句）
【高分句型2】I made great progress with your kind help,without which I couldn't have got the prize.（运用了介
词+关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句）
五、通用高分替换训练（旅游与健康）
1. 高分词汇替换
词义
简单词汇
高分词汇
顶，顶部
top
peak/summit
古老的
old
ancient
严重的
serious
acute/severe
行走
travel/walk
cover
发生
happen
occur
欣赏
enjoy
appreciate
历史悠久
have a long history
with a long history of... years
吸引游客
attract tourists
appeal to tourists
和我们一起去
go with us
join us
去
go to
take a trip to
向…… 问好
say hello to...
greet...
午间野餐
have a picnic lunch
enjoy a picnic lunch
有更好的旅行
have a better trip
make the trip more enjoyable
更喜欢……
like... better
prefer...to...
突然停止
stop suddenly
come to a sudden stop
2. 高分句型替换
句意
普通句型
高分句型
我们有向导，所以不会迷路
的。
We have found a guide so we
won't lose our way.
With a guide's help, we won't get lost.
我们可以选择公共汽车作为
交通方式。
We can choose buses as our
means of transportation.
Buses will serve as our transportation.
司机应该在事故发生之前，
鸣喇叭警告行人。
Drivers should warn
pedestrians with their horns
before an accident happens.
Drivers have the responsibility to warn
pedestrians with their horns before it is too
late.
当心不要……
Be careful not to...
Take care that you don't...
那是我第一次参观……
It was my first visit to...
It was the first time that I had visited...
……（建筑）坐落在……
... lie in/to/near...
... is located/situated in/to/near...
3. 经典表达
汉语释义
经典表达
旅游业
tourism
游客
tourist
旅行者
traveler
旅游
travel/trip/visit/tour
签证
visa
旅游景点
tourist attractions
旅游旺 / 淡季
a busy/low season for tourism
名胜
places of interest
冒险
adventure
观光
sightseeing
远足
hiking
纪念品
souvenir
行李
luggage
帐篷
tent
睡袋
sleeping bag
救生衣
life-jacket
导游（名词）
guide
风景
scenery
便利的交通
convenient transportation
公共交通
public transportation
开放 15 天
15-day opening period
当地的
local
有吸引力的
attractive
有经验的
experienced
上（船、飞机等）（动词）
board
停车（动词）
park
乘坐公共汽车、出租车、飞机
take a bus/taxi/plane
交通事故
traffic accidents
交通阻塞
traffic jams
…… 的责任
the responsibilities of...
行人
pedestrian
高速公路
highway/expressway
乘客
passenger
在人行道上
on the sidewalk/pavement
在十字路口
at the crossing
过街
walk across the street/cross the street
闯红灯
run the lights
在交通灯处减速
slow down at the traffic lights
系安全带
wear a seat belt/fasten one's safety belt
伤得很重
be badly hurt
下车
get off
骑车上班
ride to work
燃烧化石燃料
burn fossil fuel
产生污染
create pollution
亲自开车
drive in person
冒着生命危险
risk one's life
警告行人有危险
warn pedestrians of danger
维持秩序
keep order
撞上
run into
去旅行
go on a tour/trip
保暖
keep warm
对…… 危险
be dangerous for...
去机场
go to the airport
询问方向
ask for directions
在…… 过得愉快
have a wonderful time in...
为旅行增添色彩
add color to the trip
动身，启程
set off
为某人送行
see sb. off
将…… 打包、装箱
pack...up
入住（旅馆）/ 退房
check in/out
环游世界
travel around the world
喘不过气来
out of breath
交通规则
traffic rules
向某人呼吁（做）某事
appeal to sb. for sth.
在很多国家，旅游业正成为一种繁荣的产
业。
Tourism is now becoming a booming industry in
many countries.
很显然，这会促进旅馆和购物设施的发
展，并为当地人创造工作机会。
It is obvious that it will contribute to the
development of hotels and shopping facilities, and
create jobs for the local people.
我需要带上…… 和……，因为山里……
I need to take... and... for in the mountains...
游客的到来能够促进…… 的改善。
The arrival of visitors always leads to improvements
in...
我们应该在学校门口集合，并且在 8 点整
出发。
We are supposed to gather at the school gate and set
out at 8:00 a.m. sharp.
你可以带上相机去记录美景，还要带上
伞，以防遇到大雨。
You may equip yourself with a camera to record the
beautiful scenery and an umbrella in case you are
caught in a heavy rain.
……（地点）有很多的景点，以及很多世界
闻名的名胜古迹，例如……
... is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many
world-famous places of interest, such as...
我真的希望你有时间来旅行，……（地方）
是一个可以让人们很享受的地方。
I do hope that you are available for this trip, for... is
such a fun place for people to enjoy themselves.
……（景点）定于……（时间）开放。
... is set to open on...
建议游客们使用公共交通方式抵达度假胜
地。
Visitors are advised to use public transport to reach
the resort.
据报道，有将近 100 万人参观过那里。
It's reported that nearly a million people have already
visited there.
对于行人来说，仅仅因为…… 受重伤或丧生
是不公平的。
It is unfair for a pedestrian to be badly injured or
even killed just because...
显然，如果我们不控制这个问题，有可
能……
Obviously, if we don't control the problem, the
chances are that...
迫切的是，我们要立刻采取措施去阻止这
种情况恶化。
It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken
to prevent the situation from worsening.
解决这些问题的最好办法是……
The best way to solve the problems is...
据说，语言无法描述出…… 的美，那里……
It's said that words cannot describe the beauty of...,
where...
有很多可以观赏的东西，我无法告诉你我
看到的一切。
There is so much to see that it is impossible for me to
tell you everything that I have seen.
