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热考话题4 人与动物
情节构思
语段赏析
语段赏析
人鹿友谊
One day, I decided to approach to see if she would let me touch her. I reached out
my right hand slowly and softly. She kept on eye on me, slowly lowered her nose and
touched my hand gently. Her moist nose stayed for a while until I opened my fist and
tried to pet her on the cheek. Streak took a step back as we stood in silence, eyes
locked, both enjoying the moment. Over the next several years, I would find Streak in
my yard and welcome her.有一天，我决定走近看看她是否会让我碰她。我缓慢
而轻柔地伸出右手。她留意到我，缓慢地低下她的鼻子，轻轻地碰了碰我的
手。她湿润的鼻子停留了一段时间，直到我张开拳头试着抚摸她的脸颊。Streak
后退了一步，我们静静地站着，四目相对，都很享受这一刻。在接下来的几年
里，我都会在我的院子里看到Streak并欢迎她。
人犬情深
For a long time afterwards, Myers was accompanied by Sadie in recovery
training. Every time he trained, the dog watched him carefully and occasionally
barked, as if cheering him on. Now Myers has pulled through. He always says that he
thought he had given Sadie a chance, but what he hadn't expected was that Sadie gave
him a bigger one — a second life.之后很长一段时间里，Myers都在Sadie的陪同
下进行康复训练。他每次训练时，狗都会仔细地看着他，偶尔会吠叫，好像在为他加油。现在Myers已经康复。他总是说他以为自己给了Sadie一个机会，但
他没有没想到Sadie给了他一个更大的机会——第二次生命。
人狼激战
Dad flew out of the tent to resume the battle with his arms bleeding. Mom
showed great courage, waving her fists at the wolf, shouting and screaming with the
intention of intimidating it and scaring it away. Robert and I pelted the wolf with
rocks, forcing it back, and then fled to the shelter of our minivan. The wolf chased us
tightly. Howling wildly, the wolf crashed the van violently and scratched at it with its
sharp claws fiercely.爸爸从帐篷里冲出来，手臂流着血，继续战斗。妈妈表现出
了极大的勇气，向狼挥舞拳头，大喊大叫，意图恐吓并吓跑它。罗伯特和我也
向狼扔石头，迫使它后退，然后逃到我们的小货车里避难。狼紧紧地追着我
们，狂吠着，猛烈地撞上了小货车，并用锋利的爪子拼命地抓挠。
佳作赏ji
佳作欣赏
[2020浙江改编]One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph
polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside "the polar bear capital of the
world" — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like
all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to
face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But
sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a
nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high
wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the
wooden fence posts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the
bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises
like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear
down the fence with his massive paws（爪子）.I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but
it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter（相
遇）, I took some pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's
punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the
bears' eyes, but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,
through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar（吼叫），the bear
ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.
佳作1
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. It was Elli who came up
with the idea to throw our bread at the bear. Fortunately, he showed great interest in
the bread, thus offering us a short time to relieve anxiety and take pictures. However,
the bear seemed not to be adequately fed. He raised his head, with a look of
unrestrained greed in his eyes（眼神中流露出毫不掩饰的贪婪）. Once again, he
attacked the fence so violently that it might collapse at any time.
At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. Its noise scared the bear away.
Without a second thought, I grabbed the pepper spray and ran towards the helicopter...
Having settled down, I took out the camera to go through the pictures, finding that
they turned out to be satisfactory. "What an exciting experience!" I said to myself."
Dangerous but rewarding! Look at these pictures! They are so amazing!"
佳作2
A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Hadn't been scared away
by the pepper spray, instead, he was enraged and crashed his giant paws against the
fence. My body was frozen with terror（我吓得身体僵住了） and I had no idea
what to do next. "The bear seems to like the bread; why don't we give him some for a
try?" Elli said, all of a sudden. My eyes lit up（两眼一亮） and I asked her to get
some. She grabbed some bread and threw it right over the fence, which landed right in
front of the bear.At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. The loud sound chased away the
hungry bear, who was having the bread. The wind whipped my hair into my eyes
（风把我的头发吹到了眼睛里） as the helicopter landed. Having no time for the
helicopter, I was looking at my camera, where existed some pictures I had just taken
of the polar bear eating the bread. A big smile appeared on my face（我脸上露出了
灿烂的笑容）. These pictures are really unexpected. "What good material they are!"
I said to myself.
