《2025年高考英语读后续写高分宝典》
专题03 2025浙江1月卷读后续写及满分语料10类40句 (真假小偷) 原卷版
【读后续写六年高考考情】
年份 卷别 主题 话题 类型
浙江1月卷 人与社会/自我 勇寻真相并且学会共情的重要性 生活故事类
2025
八省联考卷 人与社会/动物 铁汉柔情让我感动流浪犬守护者 关爱动物类
新课标I&II卷 人与社会 车站履行承诺还钱给出租车司机 个人成长类
2024 浙江1月卷 人与自我 利用脑图来确定方位找到教学楼 校园生活类
九省联考卷 人与自然 志愿者训练意外发现海豚的秘密 关爱动物类
新课标I&II卷 人与自我 老师鼓励参加作文比赛终获大奖 写作竞赛类
2023
浙江1月卷 人与自然 作者两次与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅感悟 关爱动物类
新课标I&II卷 人与自我 鼓励身残志坚男孩参加校越野赛 越野比赛类
浙江6月卷 人与社会 为社区无家可归的人们发放食物 助人为乐类
2022
浙江1月卷 人与社会 与“最不合拍”搭档终成为好朋 校园生活类
友
新课标I&II卷 人与社会 孩子母亲节给妈妈做早餐送惊喜 家庭亲情类
2021 浙江6月卷 人与自我 作者上学时一次打工挣钱的经历 个人成长类
浙江1月卷 人与社会 少年头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络 生活故事类
新课标I&II卷 人与社会 三个孩子帮助贫困家庭孩子挣钱 个人成长类
2020 浙江7月卷 人与自然 与北极熊面对面的一次脱险经历 关爱动物类
浙江1月卷 人与自然 帮助宠物狗重获快乐收获新伙伴 关爱动物类
【读后续写竞赛类话题思维导图】
点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接
前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；
点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接
第二段段首句；
点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接
第二段段首语；
点4：续写结尾主旨升华，给予读者正
能量，揭示和强调主题。【读后续写竞赛类话题满分策略】
【读后续写真题深度解读】
【原题呈现】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and 段落大意：介绍 凯文 所处情境，父母不在家，
his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was 由邻居照顾，他无聊时窗外出现动静。
left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next
情节：凯文 的母亲上班，父亲出差，他由 Mrs.
Hill 照顾，Mrs. Hill 睡着，凯文 无聊叹气，突
door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good
然窗外的一个动静吸引了他的目光。
boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted
情感：初始状态是无聊烦闷，看到窗外动静后转
to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹 变为好奇与期待，渴望有新奇事情发生。
息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly,
a movement outside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s 段落大意：凯文 发现街对面异常情况并报警。
house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, 情节：凯文 通过窗户看到街对面格林夫妇家有人
从窗户进入，而主人都去上班他觉得怪异，便报
so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared
警。
at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped
情感：由好奇转为紧张与警惕，因察觉到潜在危
through an open window into the house. With his heart in 险而担忧，意识到事情的严重性。
his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and 情感：由好奇转为紧张与警惕，意识到事情严重
called the police. 性。
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever 段落大意：凯文为阻止男子逃脱，持树枝冲进屋
he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do 内。
情节：凯文 担心男子在警察到来前带着东西逃
something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed
走，于是迅速从 Mrs. Hill 家跑出，捡起砍倒树
the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree,he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You 上的树枝，从窗户跳进格林夫妇家，向男子发出
must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch 制止。
情感：在紧张氛围下鼓起勇气，表现出勇敢果
with both hands.
断，充满正义感，想要维护正义，阻止可疑行
为。
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the 段落大意：男子作出解释，引发凯文的疑惑。
skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that 情节：男子听到凯文制止后先是愣住，解释说房
子曾是自己家，想找回父亲手表，试图撬起地
down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and
板。
my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a
情感：原本坚定制止男子的态度，内心产生疑
floorboard. 惑。
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回 段落大意：警察到来男子被抓，凯文说明情况。
响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran 情节：男子惊慌失措，从窗户跳出逃走，凯文向
警察讲述事情经过，警察追捕并成功逮捕男子。
through the house toward the window and jumped out.
情感：完成协助警察的行为后情绪平稳，但脑海
Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers 中在思考之前与男子的冲突，对事件结果有所关
what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man. 注。
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he 段落大意：凯文 回家后对自己的行为产生怀疑。
wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has 情节：凯文反复思索男子的话，不确定是否做
对。
told the truth?” he thought to himself. The man’s words
情感：陷入纠结与自我怀疑之中，不确定自己行
sounded pretty convincing.
动是否合理，对事情的真相和自己的判断感到迷
茫。
Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business.
Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised
the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky
things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly,
a movement outside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both
gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front
door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth,
Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin
decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a
branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right
now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey,
kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he
explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic,
then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving
police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What
if he has told the truth?” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
【步步为赢】
一、文本解读
（一）故事梗概
文章讲述了 12 岁的 Kevin 在父母不在家，由邻居 Mrs. Hill 照顾时的经历。Mrs. Hill 睡着后，Kevin
看到街对面 Green 夫妇家有个男人从窗户进入。由于 Green 夫妇都去上班了，Kevin 觉得异常，便打电
话报警。之后，他还拿着树枝冲进屋内试图阻止男子。男子称房子曾是他家，想找回父亲的手表。警察到
来时，男子惊慌逃走，Kevin 向警察说明了情况。但 Kevin 对自己的行为产生了怀疑，担心男子说的是真
话。
（二）人物分析
Kevin：12 岁男孩，父母教导他成为一个好孩子，平时虽遵守规矩，但内心有时渴望冒险。在看到异常情
况时，勇敢地采取行动，先是报警，后又独自闯入屋内与男子对峙，然而事后对自己的行为产生了不确定
性的思考，体现出他既有勇敢的一面，又有心思细腻、会反思的性格特点。
闯入男子：行为可疑，从窗户进入无人的房子，但声称房子曾是自己家，父亲的手表遗留在屋内，他的解
释真假难辨，给故事增添了悬念。
（三）文本线索
明线：Kevin 发现男子闯入 Green 夫妇家，报警并与之对峙，男子逃走后 Kevin 的内心困惑。
暗线：男子闯入房子的真实目的，这一悬念贯穿故事始终，推动着情节的发展。
二、写作步骤
（一）分析所给段落开头
“When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.”此开头暗示接下来 Kevin 会向
Green 夫妇讲述事情经过，可能会提及男子的说法，同时引出 Green 夫妇对这件事的反应，为后续情节发
展奠定基础。
“Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.” 表明 Kevin 和 Mr. Green
找到了手表，这意味着前面的情节中会有关于寻找手表的内容，而带着手表去警局又会引发与警方的进一
步互动，推动故事走向结局。
（二）确定续写情节方向
基于第一段开头，考虑 Green夫妇听到 Kevin讲述后的反应，他们可能对男子的说法有不同看法，或许能
提供一些关于男子的信息，比如男子是否真的曾是房子主人，这有助于解开 Kevin 心中的疑惑。
从第二段开头可知，要先描述找到手表的过程，这可能涉及到 Kevin 和 Mr. Green 在房子里的探索，找
到手表后去警局，在警局可能会有新的发现，比如警察确认男子的身份和其话语的真实性，从而得出最终的故事结局。
（三）构思关键情节和细节
在 Kevin 与 Green 夫妇交流的情节中，可描述 Green 夫妇的表情、动作和语言，如 Mr. Green 皱着眉
头思考，Mrs. Green 惊讶地捂住嘴巴等细节，增强故事的生动性。
对于寻找手表的过程，可详细描写 Kevin 和 Mr. Green 在房子里的动作，如翻找地板、查看角落等，以
及他们的对话，如 Kevin 询问 Mr. Green 是否确定这里曾是男子的家等。在警局部分，可描写警察的反
应，如警察看到手表后严肃的神情，通过电脑查询信息时的专注等细节。
三、情节构建
（一）第一段续写情节
Kevin 向 Green 夫妇详细讲述了事情的经过，包括男子的一举一动以及他声称房子曾是自己家且要找父亲
手表的说法。Green 夫妇听后，Mr. Green 皱着眉头陷入沉思，过了一会儿，他缓缓说道，这房子之前确
实卖给过一家人，那家有个儿子，和 Kevin 描述的男子年龄相仿。Mrs. Green 则惊讶地捂住嘴巴，眼中
满是疑惑。Kevin 听了 Green 夫妇的话，心中更加纠结，他提议和 Mr. Green 一起去房子里找找看是否
真有手表，Mr. Green 同意了。
（二）第二段续写情节
Kevin 和 Mr. Green 来到房子里，开始仔细翻找。他们在男子试图撬起的地板下，终于发现了一块老式手
表。拿着手表，他们立刻前往警局。警察接过手表，仔细端详后，通过系统查询，确认了男子正是房子原
主人的儿子，他近期因经济困难，想找回这块有纪念意义且能换些钱的手表。Kevin 得知真相后，心中的
石头落了地，他虽然因误会男子感到有些不好意思，但也为自己的勇敢和坚持真相的行为感到自豪。警察
表扬了 Kevin 的勇敢和细心，Green 夫妇也对 Kevin 的行为赞不绝口。最终，Kevin 带着愉快的心情回
到 Mrs. Hill 家，等待父母归来，迫不及待地想和他们分享这段特别的经历。
四、参考答案
【读后续写真题满分语料】
满分语料一、无灵主语（时间、地点、情感、自然现象、动作行为类名词作主语）
1.
1.他们一进门，凯文就冲了过去。
2.
2.当格林先生点头表示理解时，凯文如释重负。
3.
3.凯文惊讶地睁大了眼睛，一种解脱和尴尬交织的感觉涌上心头。
4.
4.一种复杂的内疚感和解脱感涌上凯文的心头，他怀疑自己的快速判断是否过于草率。
满分语料二、动作链（A and B型，A, B and C 型）
5.
5.凯文冲到门口，打开门，领格林先生先生进去。
6.6. 格林先生先生拿起手表，仔细地看了看，摇了摇头。
7.
7.凯文走近格林夫妇，讲述了他所目睹的一切。
8.
8.警察表扬了凯文的勇敢和智慧，并接受手表作为证据。
满分语料三、独立主格结构/with复合结构
9.
9.凯文捂着嘴，抓起希尔太太家里的电话，报了警。
10.
10.格林先生聚精会神地听着，当凯文描述这名男子的说法时，他的眼睛眯着。
11.
11.凯文凝视着广阔的天空，一种深深的满足感涌上心头。
12.
12.“我们必须去警察局，”格林先生说，他的声音充满了坚定。
13.
13.手表握在手里，凯文走进警察局，他的疑虑像晨雾一样挥之不去。
满分语料四、非谓语短语（作主语、宾语、状语、定语、宾语补足语等）
14.
14.格林先生叹了一口气，把它捡起来，陪凯文去警察局。
15.
15.犹豫了一会儿，凯文把手表递给警官，手指微微颤抖。
16.
16.原来“窃贼”是手表的主人，所以这名男子被警方释放了。
17.
17.他们设法抬起地板，却发现一块用红手帕包着的手表躺在那里。
18.
18.警察表扬了凯文的勇敢，说他的敏捷思维帮助他们抓住了罪犯。
满分语料五、形容词/副词开头
19.
19.他紧张但坚定地详细叙述了整个事件。
20.
20.心怀感激之情，格林先生补充道：“你保护了我们的家园，也揭开了一段历史。”
21.21.感谢凯文的勇敢，格林先生先生建议他们去警察局澄清误会。
满分语料六、特殊句式（倒装+强调+省略）
22.
22.地板下有一个旧盒子，里面有一块积满灰尘的手表。
23.
23.直到那时，他才意识到，勇敢不是确定性，而是面对模糊的勇气。
满分语料七、介词短语位于句首
24.
24.凯文深深地叹了口气，感觉过去几个小时的重负渐渐消失了。
25.
25.他们毫不犹豫地急忙检查地板下是否有手表。
26.
26.获释后，那人拍了拍凯文的背，咯咯地笑着说：“你做得对。”
27.
27.在回家的路上，凯文松了一口气，因为他学会了勇气、责任和反思。
28.
28.令他们惊讶的是，木板下面有一个隐藏的小隔间，里面放着一块旧金表。
满分语料八、简洁对话/直接引语
29.
29.“但是为什么要闯进来买块手表呢？”凯文耸耸肩，感到很困惑。
30.
30.“他说他以前住在这里，正在找他父亲的手表，”凯文补充道。
31.
31.凯文感到比以往任何时候都更加困惑，他建议道：“我们能去房子里找手表吗？”
满分语料九、主从复合句
32.
32.凯文回来时，警察已经逮捕了这名男子。
33.
33.虽然他为误判那个人而感到尴尬，但他为自己有勇气寻求真相而感到自豪。
34.
34.很明显，这名男子的父母曾经住在这里，这块手表显然是他父亲的。
35.
35.警官们证实这块手表确实很值钱，属于该男子已故的父亲。
满分语料十、主题升华句
36.36.真相并不像看上去那么简单，但勇敢地行动可以带来正确的答案。
37.
37.正是这种独特的经历提醒了凯文他的行为和勇气的价值。
38.
38.格林先生先生表达了他的感激之情，他说：“谢谢你照顾我们的邻居。”
39.
39.有时候，勇敢不是无所畏惧，而是不顾恐惧做正确的事。
40.
40.凯文带着自豪感和成就感离开了警察局，他知道自己做了正确的事。
【读后续写名校好题调研】
1．（24-25高二上·河南商丘·期末）从受害者到守护者：王女士的反诈骗之路
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mrs. Wang, who is 72 years old, lives in a quiet neighborhood. She has been single for the past five years
and is known for her warm smile and the way she takes care of her garden. The day ended as peacefully as it has for
many years, but she didn’t know that her peace was about to be broken by a phone call that would change her life a
lot.
The phone rang, and Mrs. Wang answered with her customary warmth, “Hello, dear, how can I assist you?”
On the other end of the line was a man, his voice full of authority and urgency. Introducing himself as “Officer Li”
from the Public Security Bureau (局), he claimed that Ms. Wang’s bank account had been stolen and that her
immediate cooperation was essential to prevent major losses.
Mrs. Wang’s heart raced uncontrollably as the caller detailed how her personal information was used to take
her savings. He directed her to transfer (转移) 50,000 yuan from her account to a “secure” account number he
provided. His voice was urgent, hard to ignore. Worried about her savings, Mrs. Wang agreed after a moment’s
hesitation.
She went to the bank, her hands shaking as she took out the money. The bank teller saw she was upset and
asked if she was okay. Nervous and embarrassed, Mrs. Wang made an excuse about a family emergency and left in
a hurry. That day, she transferred the money as she was told, feeling lost and scared.
It wasn’t until the following morning, over a cup of tea with her neighbor, that Mrs. Wang’s experience
began to sound very familiar. Her neighbor, with a concerned expression, informed her about the recent scams (欺
诈) targeting the elderly in their community. When Mrs. Wang realized that this unfortunate event had happened to
her, her face turned pale.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Heartbroken, Mrs. Wang made her way to the local police station to report the scam.
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Mrs. Wang was very sad, but she decided to do something.
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2．（24-25高二上·湖南邵阳·阶段练习）意外的守护者：警察如何改变我的一生
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It was 1978. I was eight, and it was my birthday. I was told to make a list of two or three friends who’d enjoy
the water theme park in nearby Tampa, Florida. Since we didn’t have any spare money, the trip would be a packed
lunch and no extras. I didn’t care - I was getting a special treat!
The great day arrived, and my mother, younger brother, three friends, and I piled into our old beat-up car. We
headed out of town on the 90-minute ride to the amusement park for a day of sun and fun. About halfway to the
water park, the car started running badly and the “check engine” light came on. My mom pulled the car over. We
were stuck. An hour passed as we waited for someone to stop and help.
A police officer stopped to see if we were all right and called a tow truck (拖车) to pick up the car. On the
way to the service station, Mom told the officer that we had been headed to the water park for my birthday treat.
The officer dropped us off and left after giving me a short ride in the police car as a birthday present.
At the service station, the mechanic explained the water pump (水泵) needed to be replaced. The cost, plus
the tow, would be $135. Mom started crying and pulled me aside. She explained we wouldn’t have enough money
to go anywhere but home, and we’d have to save up to go somewhere else for my birthday later. I was disappointed
but tried not to show it, knowing even at that age that we didn’t have much money.
We tried to make the best of the day, the six of us having a picnic at the service station with the cake Mom
had baked. Eventually, the mechanic called Mom into the office, saying the repairs were completed but he had to
make a phone call before we could leave. He told Mom to have a seat and wait.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Twenty minutes later, the police officer came with a wrapped present.
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With great gratitude, Mom tried to give the $135 back to the officer.
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