高频话题 14 旅行游玩
近五年考情分析
年份 卷区 体裁 话题 命题形式
对外交提出的“Fun at my school”和“Guess who
全国一卷 建议信 提纲类
I am”两个选项做出选择
全国二卷 咨询信 咨询外交介绍加拿大体育运动的文章进展 提纲类
2025年 浙 江 卷 1 发表关于在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象的演
发言稿 提纲类
月 讲稿
北京卷 建议信 给参加联合国倡议征集活动的好友提建议 提纲类
在论坛交流上围绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提
天津卷 推荐信 提纲类
出推荐
新 高 考 I
告知信 分享在公园上了一堂美术课经历 提纲类
和II卷
以Development of Transport in China 为题的发言
全国甲卷 发言稿 图标类
稿
北京卷 建议信 对好友介绍中国的发展成就提出建议 提纲类
2024年
天津卷 发言稿 “低碳校园，从我做起”英语主题的演讲稿 提纲类
浙 江 卷 1
征文投稿 推荐一项适合课间开展的运动 提纲类
月
在“排忧解难”专栏回复校友父母不容许自己做
上海卷 安慰信 提纲类
饭
新高考全
建议信 提出随机分组存在的问题并给建议 提纲类
国卷
全国甲卷 征文投稿 以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿 提纲类
用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得
全国乙卷 征文投稿 提纲类
2023年 的体验和感受
浙 江 卷 1
报道 报道“认识我们身边的植物”活动 提纲类
月
北京卷 建议信 为以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动提供建议 提纲类
天津卷 申请信 申请参加“中国工坊” 活动 提纲类
2022年 新高考全 邀请信 邀请外教做访谈 提纲类国卷
校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”
浙江卷 邀请信 提纲类
邀请外国留学生一同体验
浙江卷 (1
回忆经历 回忆中国-爱尔兰文化节 提纲类
月)
全国甲卷 征文投稿 世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛 提纲类
全国乙卷 征文投稿 英语学习方式图标的调查投稿 提纲类
北京卷 邀请信 邀请好友做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流 提纲类
天津卷 视频文字稿 用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 提纲类
新高考全
征文投稿 庆祝英文报创刊十周年投稿 提纲类
国卷
浙江卷 宣传稿 宣传学生国画作品展 提纲类
浙江卷 (1
发言稿 欢迎新西兰学生访校致辞 提纲类
2021年 月)
全国甲卷 咨询信 咨询国外友人对中国传统文化的看法 提纲类
全国乙卷 发言稿 以 Be smart online learners为题的发言稿 提纲类
北京卷 道歉信 你因故不能赴约周末一起外出 提纲类
天津卷 征文投稿 介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方 提纲类
语料表达
1. 通用词汇和句式
欣赏风景: admire the scenery / enjoy the picturesque landscape
参观古迹: visit historical sites / explore ancient ruins
活动体验 品尝美食: taste local delicacies / try special snacks
了解文化: learn about the culture / get a feel for the local customs
体验生活: experience the local life
著名的: famous / well-known / renowned
通用核心词汇 壮丽的: magnificent / splendid / breathtaking
景点描述 迷人的: charming / fascinating / attractive
历史悠久的: with a long history / historical
风景如画的: picturesque
印象深刻: be deeply impressed by / be struck by
情感感受 享受: enjoy / have a wonderful time
开阔眼界: broaden one's horizon / enrich one's experience放松身心: relax / unwind / escape from pressure
I highly recommend that you (should) visit...（我强烈推荐你参观……）
...is a must-see place that you can't afford to miss.（……是一个你绝不能错
推荐建议
过的必游之地。）
It would be a wonderful idea to...（……会是个很棒的主意。）
We were deeply impressed by the breathtaking view.（我们被那令人惊叹的
景色深深打动。）
描述经历 What amazed me most was...（最让我惊讶的是……）
It was an unforgettable experience that I will always cherish.（这是一次让
我永远珍藏的难忘经历。）
I am writing to invite you to join me for...（我写信是想邀请你和我一
万能句式
起……）
It would be more fun if you could come along.（如果你能一起来会更有
邀请同游
趣。）
I can act as your guide and show you around.（我可以当你的向导，带你四
处看看。）
I'd appreciate it if you could give me some advice on...（如果您能在……方
面给我一些建议，我将不胜感激。）
请求建议
Could you please recommend some places to visit?（你能推荐一些可以去参
观的地方吗？）
2. 实用范文片段
I would like to recommend [景点名称] to you. It is not only a symbol of [城市/国家], but
also a place where you can deeply feel the pulse of its history and culture. Walking through
推荐景点 it, you will be amazed by the exquisite architecture and the stories behind it.
我想向你推荐[景点名称]。它不仅是[城市/国家]的象征，更是一个你能深切感受其历史与
文化脉搏的地方。漫步其中，你会为其精美的建筑和背后的故事感到惊叹。
The moment we arrived at [景点名称], we were greeted by a picturesque landscape that
seemed straight out of a painting. The clear water, the green mountains, and the fresh air all
描述自然风光 worked together to create a tranquil paradise, far away from the hustle and bustle of the city.
我们一到达[景点名称]，就如画般的美景便映入眼帘，仿佛置身画中。清澈的水、翠绿的
山和新鲜的空气共同营造了一个远离城市喧嚣的宁静天堂。
This journey was more than just a sightseeing tour; it was a lesson in history and a feast for
the soul. It not only broadened my horizons but also allowed me to strike a better balance
总结旅行意义
between life and study. I returned home feeling refreshed and enriched.
这次旅行不仅仅是一次观光，更是一堂历史课，一次心灵的盛宴。它不仅开阔了我的眼界，也让我在生活和学习之间找到了更好的平衡。我回到家时感到神清气爽，收获颇丰。
Knowing that you are also fascinated by [某类景点，e.g., seaside cities], I thought it would
be a fantastic idea to explore it together. We can not only share the joy of discovery but also
help each other out during the trip. I am sure it will be an unforgettable memory for both of us.
发出旅行邀请
知道你也对[某类景点，例如：海滨城市]很着迷，我觉得一起探索会是个绝妙的主意。我
们不仅可以分享发现的快乐，还能在旅途中互相帮助。我相信这将会是我们俩一段难忘的
回忆。
必背满分范文
1．（2025·黑龙江·月考）假定你是李华，你的美国网友Mike因工作出色被公司奖励中国十日游，他来信
请你推荐旅游路线。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示祝贺；
2.推荐旅游路线；
3.期待回复。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Mike
I’m glad to know that you’ve been awarded by your company a ten-day tour of China because of your
outstanding performance at work. Congratulations!
To guarantee you an enjoyable and unforgettable trip in China, I’ d like to recommend you one of the most
popular and classic traveling routes. That is, a guided ten-day tour of Beijing, Shanghai and Hainan. During the
trip, you can see many ancient historical sites, enjoy amazingly beautiful scenery, experience different Chinese
traditions and cultures, and taste various Chinese cuisines. I’ m sure you’ll be deeply impressed by all of these.
What do you think of my recommendation? Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件。请你向Mike推荐旅游路线。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：三段式结构：第一段表达祝贺；第二段推荐路线；第三段期待回信。
要求：1.表示祝贺；
2.推荐旅游路线；
3.期待回复。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
ten-day；outstanding；performance；congratulations；guarantee；recommend；one of the most …；
historical sites ； beautiful scenery ； traditions and cultures ； Chinese cuisines ； be impressed by ；
recommendation；look forward to等
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m glad to know that you’ve been awarded by your company a ten-day tour of China because of your
outstanding performance at work.
2. I’ d like to recommend you one of the most popular and classic traveling routes. T
3. you can see many ancient historical sites, enjoy amazingly beautiful scenery, experience different Chinese
traditions and cultures, and taste various Chinese cuisines.
4. I’ m sure you’ll be deeply impressed by all of these.
5. What do you think of my recommendation?
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
That is；and等
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范
文中使用了较多高分句式，如：I’m glad to know that you’ve been awarded by your company a ten-
day tour of China because of your outstanding performance at work.使用了 that 引导的宾语从句以及
because引导的原因状语从句；I’ d like to recommend you one of the most popular and classic traveling
routes.使用了I would like to…句式以及one of the …短语；you can see many ancient historical sites,
enjoy amazingly beautiful scenery, experience different Chinese traditions and cultures, and taste various
Chinese cuisines.使用了动宾短语的并列；I’ m sure you’ll be deeply impressed by all of these.使用了
that省略的宾语从句等。此外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．（2025·四川成都·月考）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Alex 打算来中国旅游。请你写一封信， 给他
提一些建议。 内容包括：
1. 推荐一个城市及理由；
2. 行前准备；3. 你的祝愿。
注意：1. 字数 80 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alex,
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Yours，
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Alex,
I’m more than glad to know that you are to visit China. I’d like to offer you some suggestions.
Firstly, I recommend that you pay a visit to Beijing, our capital city as well as a popular tourist attraction,
where you can make a tour to the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and enjoy the excellent local food. Besides, you’d
better buy a guidebook to get more knowledge of Beijing before you start off.
I do hope my suggestions may be of help to you. Wish you a pleasant journey in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Alex写一封信，就他来中国旅游提出建议，需包
含城市推荐、行前准备和美好祝愿。
【详解】
词汇积累
高兴：more than glad → delighted / thrilled
推荐：recommend → suggest
旅游景点：tourist attraction → scenic spot
开始：start off → set out
有帮助的：be of help → be helpful
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I recommend that you pay a visit to Beijing. It is our capital city and a popular tourist attraction.
拓展句：I recommend that you pay a visit to Beijing, our capital city as well as a popular tourist
attraction... (运用了同位语结构，将两个简单句合并，使表达更加简洁流畅)
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I'm more than glad to know that you are to visit China. (运用了"more than + 形容词"结构
和that引导的宾语从句，生动表达了欣喜之情)[高分句型2] I recommend that you pay a visit to Beijing, our capital city as well as a popular tourist
attraction, where you can make a tour to the Great Wall... (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句，详细
说明了在北京可以进行的活动)
[高分句型3] I do hope my suggestions may be of help to you. (运用了助动词do表强调，凸显了真诚的
帮助意愿)
3．（2025·福建·月考）假定你是李华。你打算国庆节期间去海南三亚市旅游。请你给来自德国的交换生
Terry发邮件邀请他与你同游。内容主要包括：
1. 邀请Terry与你同游；
2. 你的旅游计划；
3. 邀请理由。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Terry,
How are you?
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________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Terry,
How are you? I intend to travel to Sanya in Hainan province during the National holiday. I am writing to invite
you to join me.
According to my plan, I will stay Sanya for five days. In addition to enjoying the beautiful scenery, I will take
part in some activities on the water. Not only can we taste various local snacks, but also we will experience the
local life and art.
As far as I know, you greatly enjoy traveling to seaside cities. It will be pleasant to travel with you. Moreover,
my spoken English is not very good, so you can help me a lot while we are travelling.
Please take my suggestion into account. Whatever your decision is, please let me know.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua【导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给德国交换生Terry写一封邮件，邀请他同游三亚，需包含
旅游计划与邀请理由。
【详解】
词汇积累
打算：intend to → plan to
参加：take part in → participate in
体验：experience → get a taste of
考虑：take...into account → consider
美丽的风景：beautiful scenery → picturesque landscape
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My spoken English is not very good. You can help me a lot while we are travelling.
拓展句：Moreover, my spoken English is not very good, so you can help me a lot while we are
travelling. (运用了"so"引导的结果状语从句，清晰地表达了因果关系，使行文更连贯)
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Not only can we taste various local snacks, but also we will experience the local life and
art. (运用了"not only...but also..."的倒装结构，强调了旅行体验的丰富性，增强了语言的感染力)
[高分句型 2] As far as I know, you greatly enjoy traveling to seaside cities. (运用了"As far as I
know"这一表达，自然地引出邀请理由，体现了对朋友的了解和关心)
[高分句型3] Whatever your decision is, please let me know. (运用了"Whatever"引导的让步状语从句，表
达了尊重对方选择的友好态度，使邀请显得更为得体)
4．（2025·安徽滁州·阶段考）假如你是李华，打算寒假和家人去北京旅游，你的新西兰笔友Richard对此
很感兴趣，来信询问旅行计划, 请你给他回一封信，介绍你的旅行安排。内容如下：
1. 交通方式；
2. 行程安排；
3. 邀请同行。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Richard,
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Yours,
Li Hua【范文】
Dear Richard,
Glad to hear from you! I'm writing to tell you our travel plan to Beijing. We're going there by plane and will
rent a car afterwards. Our first delight will definitely be the Great Wall, where we can appreciate the great wisdom
of ancient Chinese people. On the following day, we are visiting the Forbidden City to admire the unique royal
architectures. And as big fans of Peking Opera, we won’t miss a visit to Mei Lanfang Theatre on the last day.
Would you like to join us? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生新西兰笔友Richard介绍寒假去北京的旅行安排。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
乐事：joy→delight
当然：surely→definitely
欣赏：admire→appreciate
第二天：the second day→the following day
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：On the following day, we are visiting the Forbidden City to admire the unique royal architectures.
拓展句：On the following day, we are visiting the Forbidden City, where we can admire its unique royal
architectures.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Our first delight will definitely be the Great Wall, where we can appreciate the
great wisdom of ancient Chinese people. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] we are visiting the Forbidden City to admire the unique royal architectures (运用了不定式做
目的状语)
5．（2025·江苏南京·月考）假定你是李华，暑期在英国旅游时得到当地导游Mr. Smith的悉心照顾，回国
后给他写一封邮件表达谢意。
主要内容：
1.回忆旅行中美好时光；
2.遇到的困难和帮助；
3. 邀请他来中国旅游。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Smith,
I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help while I was traveling in England during summer
vacation.
It is your detailed and humorous introduction that enables me to have a deeper insight into British culture and
have a wonderful time there. I am also deeply impressed by your sincere help to get me some medicine when I
caught a cold and your perfect advice in choosing gifts for my family.
Thanks again for all your efforts! I do hope someday you’ll come to China and let me show you around my
hometown.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，暑期在英国旅游时得到当地
导游Mr. Smith的悉心照顾，回国后给他写一封邮件表达谢意。主要内容：1.回忆旅行中美好时光；2.遇到
的困难和帮助；3。邀请他来中国旅游。时态应以一般现在时为主，兼用过去时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；gratitude（感激），heartfelt（衷心的），humorous（幽
默的），detailed（详细的），introduction（介绍）及impress（使印象深刻）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的
整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有
express one’s gratitude for（因……表达感谢），enable sb to do（使某人能够……），have a deep
insight into(深入了解)，catch a cold（患感冒）以及show sb around（带某人参观），而且还使用了强调
句式“It is your detailed and humorous introduction that enables me to have a deeper insight into British
culture and have a wonderful time there.”，状语从句“I am also deeply impressed by your sincere help
to get me some medicine when I caught a cold and your perfect advice in choosing gifts for my
family.”，宾语从句“I do hope someday you’ll come to China and let me show you around my
hometown.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
6．（2025·重庆·调研考）你的美国朋友Daniel所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“红色之旅”或者” 丝绸 之路一行”。Daniel来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.你建议的线路；
2.你的理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Daniel,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Daniel,
I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the red tourist destinations and the Silk Road, both are highly recommended. Personally, I
prefer the red tourist destinations, which have played an important role in Chinese revolution, leaving a vital effect
on Chinese history. When you tour along the way you can learn a lot about the revolutionary history of China and
Chinese people. Moreover, the green hills and beautiful countryside along will be a feast for your eyes and well
worth a visit. That’s why I think the trip will be a better choice.
Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Daniel写一封回信，就“红色之旅”和“丝绸之
路”两条旅行线路提出建议并说明理由。
【详解】
词汇积累
收到：receive → get
强烈推荐：highly recommended → strongly advised
重要的作用：important role → significant part
深远影响：vital effect → profound impact
值得一游：well worth a visit → definitely worth visiting
句式拓展
简单句变复合句原句：I prefer the red tourist destinations. They have played an important role in Chinese revolution.
拓展句：Personally, I prefer the red tourist destinations, which have played an important role in Chinese
revolution... (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，使句子结构更紧凑，逻辑关系更清晰)
【点睛】
[高分句型 1] Of the two trips to the red tourist destinations and the Silk Road, both are highly
recommended. (运用了"Of the two..."的介词短语开头，直接切入主题，清晰地限定了讨论范围)
[高分句型 2] Personally, I prefer the red tourist destinations, which have played an important role in
Chinese revolution, leaving a vital effect on Chinese history. (运用了which引导的定语从句和现在分词短
语作状语，多层次地说明了红色旅游景点的重要性)
[高分句型3] Moreover, the green hills and beautiful countryside along will be a feast for your eyes and
well worth a visit. (运用了"a feast for your eyes"这一生动比喻，形象地描述了沿途的自然风光，增强了
语言的感染力)
7．（2025·河北衡水·月考）假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Charlie对中国文化很感兴趣。他和家人将于今
年农历春节来中国旅游，请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 欢迎他们来中国；
2. 旅行前的准备；
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Charlie,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Charlie,
I’m delighted to know you are coming to China with your family during the Chinese Spring Festival, which is
a great chance for you to experience Chinese culture personally. Here I am writing to offer you some advice.
It would be a good idea if you could make some preparations before your travel. First of all, learn some simple
Chinese, especially the daily expressions, which makes it easier for you to communicate with the locals wherever
you go. Besides, to get yourself familiar with some Chinese local customs and traditions may help you behave
properly during your stay. What’s more, you can learn how to use chopsticks beforehand so that you can taste
different varieties of Chinese food more conveniently.I hope you will find my advice helpful. Wish you a pleasant journey in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Charlie写一封邮件，就其春节期间来华旅游提出
行前准备建议，需体现对中国文化的介绍。
【详解】
词汇积累
高兴：delighted → thrilled / overjoyed
体验：experience → immerse in
建议：advice → suggestions
准备：preparations → arrangements
习俗：customs → traditions
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Learn some simple Chinese. This will make it easier to communicate with the locals.
拓展句：First of all, learn some simple Chinese, especially the daily expressions, which makes it easier
for you to communicate with the locals wherever you go. (运用which引导的非限制性定语从句，将两个
简单句有机融合，增强了语句的逻辑性和紧凑感)
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I'm delighted to know you are coming to China with your family during the Chinese Spring
Festival, which is a great chance for you to experience Chinese culture personally. (运用which引导的非
限制性定语从句，既表达了欢迎之情，又自然引出春节的文化体验价值)
[高分句型2] It would be a good idea if you could make some preparations before your travel. (运用虚拟
语气委婉提出建议，显得礼貌且得体)
[高分句型3] What's more, you can learn how to use chopsticks beforehand so that you can taste different
varieties of Chinese food more conveniently. (运用"so that"引导的目的状语从句，清晰说明了学习使用筷
子的实际意义)
8．（2025·太原·月考）你校英文报正在征稿。请以“A Fantastic Trip"为题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.旅行介绍；
2.旅行感受。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.短文题目已为你写好。
A Fantastic Trip
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【范文】
A Fantastic Trip
Last summer, my family organized a trip to Huang Mountian.
In the morning, we decided to climb the mountain on foot in order to admire the unique charm of the
mountain. Although the road which snakes along the mountains was hard to walk, the singing songs, blooming
flowers and greeting trees（ along the way encouraged me to continue. At one point, I was so high that I found
myself walking through clouds, which was like a poet’s dream. In the early morning, I lay beneath the sky and
waited for the sunrise. Soon a streak of pink dawn broke over the horizon, expanding gradually and becoming
brighter and brighter.
It was such a fantastic trip that it showed breathtaking sights, enriched my experience and struck a balance
between my life and study.
【导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“A Fantastic Trip”为题写一篇短文投稿，需包含旅行介
绍和个人感受。
【详解】
词汇积累
独特的魅力：unique charm → distinctive appeal
继续：continue → carry on
地平线：horizon → skyline
breathtaking → magnificent
丰富：enriched → enhanced
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The road was hard to walk. The road snakes along the mountains.
拓展句：Although the road which snakes along the mountains was hard to walk... (运用了which引导的
定语从句，生动地描绘出山路蜿蜒的特点，使描写更加形象具体)
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Although the road which snakes along the mountains was hard to walk, the singing songs,
blooming flowers and greeting trees along the way encouraged me to continue. (运用了which引导的定语
从句和"singing, blooming, greeting"等拟人手法，生动地展现了沿途美景，极具感染力)
[高分句型2] At one point, I was so high that I found myself walking through clouds, which was like a
poet's dream. (运用了"so...that..."结果状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句，将云雾中行走的体验比
作诗人之梦，富有诗意和想象力)
[高分句型3] It was such a fantastic trip that it showed breathtaking sights, enriched my experience andstruck a balance between my life and study. (运用了"such...that..."结果状语从句，从景色、经历和生活平
衡三个层面全面总结了旅行的意义)
9．（2025·辽宁丹东·月考）某英语报正在组织高中英语作文比赛。请以我爱旅行为题，写一篇短文参赛，
内容包括：
1.喜爱旅行的原因；
2.你的感受。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【范文】
I love traveling
Everyone has their own hobbies, such as collecting stamps and fishing. As for me. I love traveling. My reasons
are as follows.
First of all, living in a social environment with great pressure, we need our own time, giving ourselves a
relaxed holiday, enjoying life and discovering a different world. In addition, traveling allows me to absorb different
customs in the world. As a saying goes, reading thousands of books is not equal to traveling thousands of miles.
Honestly speaking. I benefit a lot by traveling. First it not only cultivates my taste but also increase my knowledge.
Second, dealing with all kinds of people during the journey helps me grow up.
【导语】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Henry写邮件请你推荐一个可以游览中国风景名胜
的虚拟旅游（virtual travel）网站。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1. 介绍所推荐网站（包括网址、网
站特点、如何使用等）；2. 推荐旅游景点。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be extremely enthusiastic about (对……充满热情)；virtual
travel website(虚拟旅游网站)；highly recommend(强烈推荐)；amazing(令人惊异的)；sights(风景)；
register(注册)；download(下载)；in addition(另外)；take photos(拍照)；such as(比如)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在
时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美
观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如 Knowingthat you are extremely enthusiastic about traveling around China through a virtual travel website, I highly
recommend www.virtualtravel.com.运用宾语从句；In addition, if you want to take photos in a place you
are interested in, just click the mouse.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的
驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．（2025·四川成都·阶段考）假如你是李华，你的伦敦朋友Terry打算到成都旅游，将于本周六上午10
点到达双流国际机场，写信询问你能否到机场接他并入住你家。请你写一封回信，要点包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 接机的具体时间和地点；
3. 愿意当向导和安排行程。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Terry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Terry,
How is everything going? I’m glad to receive your letter
Welcome to Chengdu. It’s my pleasure to meet you at the airport and have you stay at my home.
I’ll be at Shuangliu International Airport at 9:50 this Saturday morning, at the 4th Exit and wearing a red
jacket, so you won’t miss me. Besides, I wish to be your guide, showing you around Wuhou Temple, Kuan Zhai
Alley and other places of interest, where you can not only get a feel for the Tianfu Culture, but also have a taste of
special snacks in Chengdu.
I hope you can enjoy your stay in Chengdu and I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给伦敦朋友Terry写一封回信，确认接机与住宿安排，并表
达提供旅行向导的意愿。
【详解】
词汇积累
很高兴：I'm glad to → I'm delighted to欢迎：Welcome to → It's a great pleasure to welcome you to
不会错过：won't miss me → will easily spot me
体验文化：get a feel for the culture → experience the culture firsthand
品尝小吃：have a taste of special snacks → sample the local delicacies
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I wish to be your guide. I will show you around Wuhou Temple and other places. There you can
experience the culture and taste local snacks.
拓展句：Besides, I wish to be your guide, showing you around Wuhou Temple, Kuan Zhai Alley and
other places of interest, where you can not only get a feel for the Tianfu Culture, but also have a taste
of special snacks in Chengdu. (运用现在分词短语作状语和where引导的非限制性定语从句，将多个简单
句有机融合，使行程安排的描述更加完整流畅)
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I'll be at Shuangliu International Airport at 9:50 this Saturday morning, at the 4th Exit and
wearing a red jacket, so you won't miss me. (通过并列连词and连接多个接机细节，并运用so引导结果
状语从句，使接机安排具体明确、考虑周到)
[高分句型 2] Besides, I wish to be your guide, showing you around Wuhou Temple, Kuan Zhai Alley
and other places of interest, where you can not only get a feel for the Tianfu Culture, but also have a
taste of special snacks in Chengdu. (运用"not only...but also..."并列结构，全面概括了旅行体验的文化与美
食双重价值)
[高分句型3] I hope you can enjoy your stay in Chengdu and I'm looking forward to your coming. (并列
句的使用，既表达了美好祝愿，又传达了期待之情，结尾自然得体)
