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外研社高中英语选修1议论文框架和例文分享
问：老师凭嘛给你高分？
答：立意新颖+高级词汇和高级句式的恰当运用。
顾拜旦曾说：“奥运会最重要的不是获胜，而是参与；人生最重要的不是凯旋，而是奋斗。”但也有人认为，那些说胜利并非一切的人，本身从未赢过。
你怎么看？过程是否比结果更加重要？写一篇不少于120词的短文，要求：
1.清晰地表明你的观点；
2.举例论证你的观点；
3.做出总结。
问题：
Ø关键词模糊，概念太多：
struggle ≠ process
failure, struggle, result, process, win, ...
Ø观点不清楚（表述；位置；没有关键词）
Ø衔接生硬
Para 1: Opinion 1 + Opinion 2 + Your opinion (clear)
Para 2: Argument 1 + Example 1
Para 3: Argument 2 + Example 2
Para 4: Conclusion (state your opinion again)
1.Argument 1: The struggling process shapes our character.
Textbook example: The Chinese women’s volleyball team fought through ups and downs. Daily training forged their steely nerves.
2.Argument 2: We gain lasting growth in the process.
Personal example: I took part in the English competition. I improved my oral English though I failed to win.
3. Argument 5: Persistence itself in the process is a kind of victory, which does not need prizes to prove it.
Example: Even if the Chinese women’s volleyball team did not win, their courage to keep fighting was valuable.
Point of view: The process of struggle is more important than the final result.
1.Argument 1: The struggling process shapes our character.
Textbook example: The Chinese women’s volleyball team fought through ups and downs. Daily training forged their steely nerves.
2.Argument 2: We gain lasting growth in the process.
Personal example: I took part in the English competition. I improved my oral English though I failed to win.
3. Argument 3: The process builds our ability to deal with failures.
Example: The Chinese women’s volleyball team learned to stay calm after many losses.
4. Argument 4: Results can be accidental, but our gains from the process stay with us.
Example: The Chinese women’s volleyball team may lose games, but their trained skills are permanent.
5. Argument 5: Persistence itself in the process is a kind of victory, which does not need prizes to prove it.
Example: Even if the Chinese women’s volleyball team did not win, their courage to keep fighting was valuable.
6.Argument 6 : Goals may change, while good habits formed in the processbenefit us lifelong.
Textbook example: The Chinese women’s volleyball team formed habits of practising day in and day out, which benefited them all the time.
Point of view: The final result matters more than the process.
1.Argument 1: Good results reward efforts and inspire more people.
Textbook example: The Chinese women’s volleyball team’s championships spread their fighting spirit nationwide.
2.Argument: Good results bring a sense of achievement and fuel future challenges.
Textbook example: Their victories gave the team confidence to face stronger opponents later.
3. Argument 2: Winning motivates us to set higher goals.
Personal example: I won the speech contest. The prize encouraged me to keep challenging myself.
4.Argument: Results objectively show whether our efforts work.
Textbook example: The Chinese women’s volleyball team’s championships proved their hard training paid off.
5.Argument: Winning brings recognition and spreads the value of struggle.
Textbook example: It was their titles that made the volleyball spirit inspire the whole nation.
Sample 1:
Process Matters More Than Results
Pierre de Coubertin once said,“The most important thing in the Olympic Games is not to win but to take part, just as the most important thing in life is not the triumph but the struggle.”Some argue only winners can understand victory. As for me, the process of struggle matters more than the final result.
Firstly, it is the tough process that shapes our qualities. As introduced in our textbook, the Chinese women’s volleyball team fought their way through ups and downs. Facing strong opponents, they practised day in and day out and gave their all to training. It was continuous struggles, not championships, that forged their steely nerves.
Secondly, growth from the process lasts forever. Last semester, I joined a school English competition. Though I won no prize, I improved my oral English and built confidence.
In short, victory brings short-lived joy, while the gains in the process are lifelong treasures.
Sample 2:
Results Count More Than Process
Pierre de Coubertin once said, “The most important thing in the Olympic Games is not to win but to take part, just as the most important thing in life is not the triumph but the struggle.” However, some say those claiming winning isn’t everything have never won. From my view, the final result carries greater weight.
Firstly, good results reward efforts and spread inspiration.As we learn from the textbook, the Chinese women’s volleyball team fought through difficulties and devoted themselves to training. It was their championship victories that made their fighting spirit known and inspired millions.
Secondly, satisfying results motivate us to advance. I took part in the school English speech contest and practised hard every day. Winning first prize greatly boosted my confidence and pushed me to aim higher.
To sum up, the process is necessary, but results give our struggle lasting power.
Sample 3:
Some people say the process carries greater weight than the result, while others believe the result is the most valuable thing. In my opinion, process is more important.
First, we improve ourselves during the process. Curry is a living proof that the struggles in the process make us better. He not only gains skills, but also develops the steeliest nerves in practice day in and day out. All these gradual changes shape him into an excellent player.
Besides, we can't fully decide the final result, but what we have learned in the process stays with us forever. The Chinese women's volleyball team once faced heavy losses and strong opponents, but they stuck to their goals. Every training and every match built their strong will. Even if they failed some games, the spirit they gained never disappeared.
In short, outcomes don't last long, but the growth gained along the way is permanent. For this reason, I argue that the process carries greater weight.
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