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2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
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2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
2010-2015年六级写作真题答案解析_六级_六级写作专项
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2015年12月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第一套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 结构框图: 一、第1段描述图片,并指出图片寓意——社交网站对我们的日常阅读产生了重要影响。 二、第2段从正反两方面论述社交网站对阅读的影响。 三、第3段总结全文——意见不统一不足为奇,提出个人观点并给出原因。 TheImpactofSocialNetworkingWebsitesonReading Aswecanseefromthepicture,apairoflovers isdiscussingaboutreading.Toouramusement,theboysays hisfavorite bookis Facebook.While thepictureis seemingly humorousandridiculous,itis thought-provokingon second thought, intending to inform us that the social networks have exerted an important impact on o ur daily reading. Opinions vary when it comes to the impact of social networking websites on reading. Some-people insist that social networking websites provide large collections of information at great speed and stimulate our reading interest. On the other hand, some people claim that it is a common phenomenon that youngsters spend too much timereadingonsocialnetworking websites,anditis thesewebsitesthatmaketeenagers haveless opportunities or timetoreadtraditionalbooks. Thereisasayinggoeslikethis,“Everycoinhastwosides”.Sothereisnosurprisethattherearedifferentopinions on the impact of social networking websites on reading. However, I, as a college student, am convinced that it is necessary for us to read on social networking websites, but it is also of greater necessity for us to read traditional books, because social networking websites are just tools and a heavy dependence on them will bring more harm thangood. 2015年12月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第二套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 结构框图: 一、第1段描述图片,提出主题——难以获取有用的信息。 二、第2段分析难以获取有用信息的原因。 三、第3段提出建议:由不加甄别地索取信息转向仔细地挑选信息。 TheDifficultyinAcquiringUsefulInformation Asthepicturegivendepicts,severalemployeesarehavingameetingwhileoneofthemcomplains,“Wehave lots of information technology. We just don’t have much useful information.” What the picture presents is that eventhoughequippedwithadvanceddevicesandinformationtechnology,wecanhardlyobtainusefulinformation thatweneed. A multitude of reasons can account for the phenomenon. First of all, as we are increasingly, dependent on various advanced devices, they have brought us much information. However, faced with so much information, we’re actually notcompetentenough to tell the usefulinformation from the useless information.What’s more, the fact that the network management regulations are not perfect cannot be ignored, which makes it difficult to preventourlifebeinglumberedwithuselessbitsofinformation. Frommy pointofview,aswearenowinagreatneweraofinformation,wecannotsaynoto thebenefitsthat information technology has brought us. However, it’s high time we transferred our focus from acquiring information indiscriminately to selecting information. Only in this way can we acquire the exact information that weneed. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2015年12月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第三套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 结构框图: 一、第1段描述图画内容并介绍图中人物观点。 二、第2段分析网络误导性信息的危害——网络误导性信息会使人养成坏习惯,甚至犯罪;网络误导性信 息会造成个人和政府的信任危机,并举例说明。 三、第3段提出建议一采取措施来防止我们被垃圾信息误导,并提出个人见解。 TheHarmCausedbyMisleadingInformationOnline As is revealed in the picture, a man is sitting in front of a computer searching information from the Internet, while a woman is standing by the door,holding a cup of coffee.The most striking feature is the caption under the picture,whichreads“Ijustfeelunfortunatetoliveinaworldwithsomuchmisleadinginformation!” With a large amount of information coming up, the severity of misleading information arises. Unfortunately, if we lack the ability to distinguish the true information from the misleading one, we will finally fall prey to it, because the misleading information may get people into bad habits, even make them commit crimes. Numerous networkfraudisalivingexample. Inaddition,theremaybeatrustcrisisbetweenindividualsandthegovernment, if we cannot correct the misleading news as soon as possible. For instance, the nuclear leakage in Japan in 2011 has caused great panic in Eastern China, where thousands of people went out to rob salt after the rumor that salt hasaneffectofanti-radiation,whichbroughtaboutturbulenceinthedomesticmarket. From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures be taken to preventourselves from being misled byjunk information.And in my opinion, learning to identify the authenticity ofinformationonlineisthemostpracticalmeasure. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2015年6月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第一套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 结构框图: TheImportanceofPractice “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it” is a proverbvividly showing the relationship between knowledge and practice. Apparently, this saying delivers the message that if we want to truly acquire the knowledge,weoughtnottostoppracticingwhatwe’velearned. As for us college students, practice is of great importance.There are two reasons for this statement.Tobegin with, it is by practice that we can apply the knowledge we have obtained from our textbooks to solving practical problems. By doing so, we can get more experience. What’s more, knowledge has become so growingly complicated that if we don’t ponder over it again and again,we cannot genuinely grasp the essence of it. Oral English learning is a good case in point. Even if one is extremely familiar with the grammar of the language, he willneverbeafluentspeakerifhedoesn’topenhismouthtospeak. To sum up, practice is of great importance for those who are determined to truly grasp knowledge. Practice notonlyassistsusingettingmoresocialexperience,butalsoenablesustocapturetheessenceofknowledge. 话题词汇: reward回报,奖赏 consistent持续不变的 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化genius天才 hardship艰苦 refinement改进,改善 Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。 2015年6月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第二套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 1、审题:这是一篇六级考试中常见的名言哲理类作文【考频:★★★】,体裁为议论文。此次作文的话题是 “好奇心”(curiosity),这是考生日常生活中比较熟悉的话题,因此写起来并不难。写作时,考生应该将重点 放在第二段阐释好 奇心的重要性上。 2、列提纲: 3、语言:用词要准确,多使用从句等高分句型。 OnCuriosity Albert Einstein once said, “I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious.” Simple as the remark may sound, it informs us of the significance of curiosity.Actually doing everything curiously is conducive to our developmentandeventuallyleadsustosuccess. For one thing, curiosity is an important source of creativity,which is the key to success. Let’s take Edison as an example. It was curiosity that made him invent so many things and achieved great success in his career.For another, curiosity is the driving force for us to go forward. Curiosity can change boredom into freshness, which willmakeusacquirenewknowledge constantly.Lastbutnotleast,curiosityishelpfulinresolvingdifficultiesone byone.Apersonwithcuriosityispronetofindtheessenceoftheproblemandovercomevariousdifficulties. Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove,curiosityisveryimportantandhelpfulinpersonaldevelopment.Being enthusiasticaboutcuriosityhelpsusachievesuccesssoonerorlater. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2015年6月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第三套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 1. 审题:这是一篇六级考试中常见的名言哲理类作文【考频:★★★】,体裁上属于常考的议论文。本次写作 以“做好小 事”为主题,是考生日常生活中较为常见的话题,写起来并不难。考生应该将重点放在第二 段,论证做好小事的重要 性,可以联系实际例子来说明做好小事对取得成功有着非常重要的意义。 2. 列提纲: 3. 语言:合理选用词语,多用复合句来提高文章的档次。 DoingSmallThingsinaGreatWay Throughout the ages, only a few people can climb the ladder of success to the top and be admired by the world.What may surprise us is that most people achieve success by doing small things in a great way. Just as the saying goes,”If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way.” That means one does not necessarily becomeagreatman,buthecanstillbesuccessfulandwinrespectfromothersbydoingcommonworkinaperfect way. Actually,history abounds with examples to prove this saying. The late CEO ofApple, Steve Jobs,is a casein point. He was so addicted to details that he could not stop pushing his staff to pursue perfection in design and production. It is due to his focus on small things thatApple has made great success in the mobile field, producing productsthatarenotonlyinnovative,butalsosuperior. As college students, we should keep in mind that it is of great necessity for us to enhance ourselves by doing smallthingsperfectly.Onlywhenallsmallthingsaddupcanmanyimpossibilitiesbemadepossible. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2014年12月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第一套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 1、审题:本次作文是图画作文【考频:★★☆】,这是2013年12月六级改革后第一次出现该类型作文,但 体裁仍是常见 的议论文。本次作文给出的图画理解起来难度不大,而且涉及的话题是教育和科技的关系, 这是考生比较熟悉的话题,因此写起来并不难。 2、列提纲: 3. 语言:对图画的描述要用词准确,议论部分可适当使用从句等高分句型。 TechnologyandEducation What the drawing vividly depicts is that a pupil tells his teacher he needs tech support to solve an extremely easyquestionontheblackboard.The drawingillustratesthatwe-arehighly dependentontechnology,overlooking theimportanceofindependentthinking. Those who favor the significance of technology in education argue that it facilitates learning and enables us tohaveeasieraccesstoinfinitelearningresources.Incontrast,peoplewhoholdtheoppositeopinionmaintainthat over-dependence on technology is harmful. They think that a student who gets into the habit of doing his homeworkbydownloadinganswersfromtheInternetwillendupignorantandbeingunabletothinkcriticallyand creatively. And the drawing is a good illustration of this point. For another example, if you always write your homeworkorreportsonawordprocessor,youmayforgethowtowritethewordsinnotime. As far as I am concerned, technology plays an important but not indispensable role in education. Over-dependence on technology does more harm than good. I suggest that we should master the basic knowledge on our own and learn how to apply technology in education properly. Only in this way can we benefit most from ourlearningprocess. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2014年12月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第二套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 1、审题:这是一篇图画作文【考频:考查的是六级考试中最常见的体裁:议论文。图画中一位女士对一位年 轻 人说:“《如何不学习而获得好成绩》这本书在小说区(thefictionsection)。”由此可知,学习并无捷径。. 文章应重点阐 述学习并无捷径的原因,说明学生不应该抱有侥幸心理而不努力学习' 2、列提纲: 3、语言:注意用词的准确性,句式要多样化,正确使用过渡词使文章更连贯。 NoShortcuttoLearning The cartoon above is thought-provoking. A young man asks where he can find a book named “How To Do Well In SchoolWithout Studying”,and the woman suggests looking for it in the fiction section.Apparently, the cartoondemonstrates,atruththatthereisnosuchathingasashortcuttolearning. Just as we cannot build a castle in the air, neither can we perform well in school through a shortcut. First of ail, the nature of study requires it to be based on a solid foundation. Let’s take English learning as an example. If we want to improve our English listening ability, we are required to keep on listening to different materials, both intensively and extensively, and make notes from time to time. In addition. we are all very familiar with the famous proverb "No pains, no gains”, which conveys the message that we are supposed to make strenuous efforts whenever we attempt to succeed in a certain field.Therefore,we should spend a certain amount oftime learning and remembering the basic knowledge which lays the foundation for further study rather than search for the so-calledshortcut. Tosum up, students should come to realize that there exists no shortcutto learning. Only hard work will form the bedrockofgoodperformanceinschool. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2014年12月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第三套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: OnDiplomaDiscriminationinJobInterview Asisvividlyshowninthecartoon,anapplicantwithamaster'sdegreewasrejectedinajobinterviewbyan interviewerbecausealltheotherapplicantsarePh.D.s.Theapplicantseemsquitehelplessandembarrassed. Simpleasthecartoonmayseem,itconveysathought-provokingmessagethatpeopleareexaggeratingthe significanceofeducationaldegreesexcessively,whichinevitablyexertsanegativeinfluenceinsociety.What factorsmightcontributetodiplomadiscrimination?Answerstothisquestionmayinvolvemanyaspects,andhere areafewguesses:ontheonehand,quiteafewemployersholdthatthehigherdegreepeoplehave,themore competenttheywillbe.Ofcoursethisisnotnecessarilyalogicalviewpoint,becausecertificatescannotprove one'scapability.Ontheotherhand,duetoincreaseofenrollment,toomanystudentsgraduatefromuniversities andcollegesyearafteryear,andthenumberisstillgrowing;however,societyfailstoprovideadequateposts, 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化whichresultsinthecompanies'toopickyattitudeondiplomasincetheydon'tworryaboutlackingcandidates. Inmyopinion,thepublicshouldrealizethatrealabilityspeaksmuchlouderthanapieceofpaper.Onlyinthis waycanChina'seconomykeepbooming 2014年6月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第一套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 1、审题:本次作文仍旧是六级考试中常见的体裁:议论文【考频:★★★】,所选取的话题为itisunwisetojump toconclusionsuponseeingorhearingsomething(只凭所见所闻就仓促下结论是不明智的)。考生应该着重阐释 在信息 爆炸的当今社会,如果仅凭所见所闻就仓促得出结论,我们可能会深受其害。因此,我们在作结论 时要去伪存真,三思而后行。。 2、列提纲: 3.语言: 对谚语的描述要用词准确,议论部分可使用从句等高分句型。 Looking Before Leaping Confrontedwith various kinds of Information, modernpeopletend to trust whatever they have heardorread. However,it is unwise to jump to conclusions uponseeing or hearing something becausethe things we see or hear cannotallbecorrect.Livingintheinformationagefullofchanges,weshoulddiscernclearlyrightfromwrong. It is evident that some information is so misleading that we should not believe it. For instance several years ago, dueto thenuclearpollution in Japan,a hostof Chinese,especiallymiddle-aged peopleandseniors, rushedto buy salt, firmly believing salt could prevent radiation, which was very ridiculous. Also, although it is generally accepted that a picture is worth a thousand words, some pictures cannot be trusted in this day and age, for photoshophasprevailedallaroundtheworld. In conclusion, it is imperative for us to hold correct attitudes towards the information we see or hear. Instead of drawingconclusionsinahurry,weshouldraiseourawarenessofjudgingright fromwrongandlookbeforeleap.I firmlybelieveabetterfutureisawaitingusifwemakeeachandeverydecisionupondeepthinking. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2014年6月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第二套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 1、审题:本次作文仍旧是六级考试中常见的体裁:议论文【考频:★★★】。此次作文话题告诉我们,在做事 情时不应孤注一掷,而要作多手准备,很具哲理意味。该作文不仅考查考生描述一个社会现象或分析一个 社会问题的能力,同时还考查考生的思辨能力和论证能力。考生应该将重点放在阐释作多手准备的益处上, 如作多手准备可以降低风险, 同时有助于保持平衡的生活。 。 2、列提纲: 3. 语言:注意用词的准确性,适当使用表示衔接的过渡词及高分句式。 DoNotPutEverythingonaSingleVenture As anEnglish sayinggoes, “Do notputallyour eggs in onebasket. ”Whatitreveals is thatitis unwisetobe totallydependentononeresource. This proverb is applicable in ourdaily life. Tobegin with, having a plan B can reduce the risk of unexpected and disastrous results especially when it comes to important events. For example, if you want the admission to college, you shouldfill in application forms ofseveral colleges apartfrom theoneyou desire. In this way,there is a big chance foryou to be admitted.What is more, paying attention to all the aspects at the same time contributes to a more balanced life. If a student only focuses on sports or other extracurricular activities and neglects his schoolstudy,heismorelikelytolagbehindintermsofacademicperformance. Therefore,itisunadvisabletoputeverythingonasingleventure.Havingabackupplan,thoughcostlysometimes, couldsavealotofheadachesandevenbealifesaver. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2014年6月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第三套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 1、审题:这是一篇议论文【考频:★★★】。本次作文的主题是考生比较熟悉的“不要以貌取人”,理解起来难 度不大。现实生活中,很多人都不可避免地以貌取人,关注长相而不是个人能力,这种做法是不明智的。 2、列提纲: 3. 语言: 运用过渡词及富有逻辑性的词语为文章增色 Don’tJudgePeoplebyTheirAppearance Althoughmanypeopleacknowledgetheoldsayingthat"Neverjudgepeoplebytheirappearance’’,theystill fallintothetrapof“goodappearance”easily.Inmyopinion,foraperson,abilitiesarefarmoreimportantthanthe appearance. Firstly,althoughgoodappearancecanhelpmakeanimpression,itisalwaysabilitiesthatreallymatter. Secondly,peopledgoodappearanceisnatural,whileabilitieshavetobegainedthroughself-improvementand yearsofhardwork,whichspeakmoreofpeopledtrueselves.Lastbutnotleast,goodappearancefadeswhile abilitiescanbeimprovedovertime.Eventually,itisabilitiesthathelppeoplesucceed,soitissafetosaythat abilitieswillalwaysbringmoretolifethangoodappearance. Inconclusion,itisunwisetojudgepeoplebytheirappearanceanditisalwaysabilitiesthatcountinthelongrun. Ascollegestudents,weshouldspendmoreeffortsdevelopingourabilities. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2013年12月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第一套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 1、审题: 这是一篇评论性话题作文。首先,抓住题目中的主题词life和meaningful,避免跑题。接着,借 助谚语内容(将生命花在比生命更长远的事上,就是尽用生命),谚语与题目相结合,可提炼出主题:怎 样使生命更有意义。然后,弄清题目与谚语的关系:主题与例证关系勒最后,确定行文思路:引出话题+ 提出观点+举例论证+总结建议;总结时,注意要观点明确,贴合所给主题,切勿模棱两可。 2、写作思路: 第一段:以“总一分一总”形式引出话题,解释谚语。 第二段:提出观点,指出自己将怎样做,并举例论证。 第三段:做出呼吁,提出建议,总结全文。 How to Live a Meaningful Life Peoplealwayssaythatthegreatestuseoflifeistospenditforsomethingthatwilloutlastit. Ontheonehand, life is spenton something for the future,or for ouroffspring. For example, peopleworkto build theThree Gorges Damtomakeelectricity.Ontheotherhand,doingsome littlebutmeaningfulthings canalsoshowthegreatestuse oflife,suchasofferingaseattoawomanwithachild. I will do the following things to make my life meaningful. First, I will plant trees every year to contribute my effort to make the sky blue and the water clean. Second, I will learn my major biology well to cure some diseases,suchascancers.Third,asthesayinggoes,todoyourownjobistocontributeyourefforttothesociety. Onlybyspendingourlifeforsomethingthatwilloutlastitcanwecontributetooursociety.Foronething,we should learn from Lei Feng who did little but meaningful things. For another, we can do whatever we can to protecttheenvironment.Inaword,wecanmakeourlifemeaningfulbydoingmeaningfulthings. 2013年12月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第二套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 1、审题: 这是一篇评论性话题作文。 首先,抓住题目中的主题词 happiness,problems 和 ability, 避免跑 题。接着,借助谚语内容(幸福不在于不出现问题,而在于拥有解决问题的能力),谚语与题目相结合,可 提炼出主题:怎样提高解决问题的能力并因此而感到幸福。然后,弄清题目与谚语的关系:主题与例证关 系。最后,确定行文思路:引出话题+解释谚语+提出观点+举例论证+总结意义;总结时,注意观点要明确, 贴合所给主题,切勿模棱两可。 2、写作思路: 第一段:以“总—分—总”形式引出话题,解释谚语,提出观点。 第二段:指出怎样通过提高解决问题的能力而获得幸福,并举例论证。 第三段:总结全文,点明意义,呼应主题。 OnHappiness As the saying goes, happiness is notthe absenceofproblems, butthe ability to dealwith them. Happinessto our society does not mean that we ignore problems, such as environmental problems, unfair income among citizens, and corruption of the government officials, and so forth. Happiness to the individual is the ability to deal withproblems.Wewillfeelhappyifwetryourbesttodealwithvariousproblemsinourdailylife. I can develop my ability to deal with problems and be happy with the following ways. Firstly, I will learn logic reasoning to master the skills of dealing with problems. Secondly, when I come across problems, I will face them bravely and analyse them thoroughly. Thirdly, when they are too difficult to solve, I will discuss with my familyorfriendsaroundme,andaskthemforhelp. The ability to deal with problems and be happy is significant to all of us. It helps us to create a good environmenttothefamily,andafriendlycommunityaswell.What’smore,ithelpsusbuildaharmonioussociety. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2013年12月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第三套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: TheImpactoftheInformationExplosion As is known to us all, wearenowlivingintheageof “informationexplosion”.That is, wearesurroundedby much information.It is true that information explosion brings convenience to our life, but it also leads to the distractionofourattention. Just as the famous saying goes, “Awealthof informationcreatesapovertyofattention.” .For example, there areso many advertisements on the Internet that we areeasilydistractedbytheirrelevantinformationofthetarget website. In addition, theinformationitself isofvarious kinds,eitherhealthyorviolent.Thebadinformationmay evenarouseviolentcrimes. Therefore,itishightimeweadoptedpropermethodstoavoidbeingdistractedbyirrelevantinformation.Forone thing, wecanmakealistofkeywordsaboutwhatwewill searchontheInternet. For another,wecansetatimelimit forthesearchofthetargetinformation. Thus,thesearchismoreeffectiveandtimeissavedgreatlyatthesametime. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2013年6月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第一套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 1、审题: 本篇是评论性的话题作文。 “微笑”是常谈不衰的话题,它本应是人们最自然、最常见的表情, 而现代都市人大都为生活、工作、学业、子女等种种事务日复一日地劳碌奔波,背负着越来越大的压力, 那种最真诚、最自然、最质朴的微笑正渐渐从人们的脸上消失。在科技发达的现代社会,人与人之间在空 间上的距离更近了,但在心灵上却越走越远。本篇要求评论“微笑可以拉近两个人的距离”这句话并为文, 而在更深层次上,出题人似乎是想借这个题目引发人们的思考,让人们通过“微笑”消除彼此之间的冷漠、 仇恨、冲突,搭建良好的交流沟通和亲近的桥梁,因此这一题目开放性强,考生可发挥的空间很大。此外, 题目Drections中指出考生可以援引事例来证明观点,这为考生行文提供了一个思路,即:先陈述微笑的 作用,然后援引事例予以证明,并对事例简单评述以点题,最后提出个人看法。此外,考生也可先指出微 笑可以缩短人与人之间距离的几个方面,然后指出微笑所代表的深层含义(人与人之间的信任支持、关怀 友爱、宽容悲悯等真挚情感),最后再作出总结。 2、写作思路: 第一段:引用特蕾莎修女的名言,指出微笑能缩短人与人之间的距离,并从三个方面体现:消融冷漠或敌 意;赋予力量;拉近友情。 第二段:从不同角度举例证明微笑能缩短人与人之间的距离:绝望中抚慰心灵;陌生环境中与人亲近,获 得帮助;困境中,获得力量。 第三段:总结前面所述,给出个人看法:微笑让我们受益匪浅,笑口常开促进人与人的交流,促进社会的 和谐。 ASmileCanShortentheDistanceBetweenPeople Mother Teresa once said, “Every time you smile at someone, it is an action of love, a gift to that person,a beautiful thing.” Human beings are said to be one of the few species in this planet who can express sincere sentiments through a smile. And it is a smile that melts the indifference or hostility between people, that gives power to those who are at the edge of despair, and that brings friends close to each other. In a word, it is a smile thatcontinuouslyshortensthedistancebetweenpeople. A smile, with its strong power, brings out its miraculous glamour in different ways. When you are in the situation of despair, a smile from others will console your hurting heart. When you get into an unfamiliar circumstance,asmilewillmakethepeoplearoundyoufeelcomfortableandhelpyouwillingly.Whenyougetinto trouble, a smile from friends will give you power to stand up. Where there is no smile, there is no happiness of life. Seen from the discussion above, a smile benefits us very much. Let’s keep smiling so that better communication betweenpeoplecanbeachievedandamoreharmonioussocietycanbebuilt. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2013年6月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第二套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: GoodHabitsResultfromResistingTemptation As is known to all, good habits help us pave the way to success. However, lack of social experience and determined will, youngsters often fall into the traps of temptations such as computer games, smoking and so on. Soitishightimethatyoungstersrefusedtemptationsandformedgoodhabits. Good habits result from refusing temptation and contribute to the growth of youngsters in various ways. Firstly,ifyoungstersstopsuchtime-andhealthconsumingactivitiesasplayingcomputergamesandspendthetime reading several pages of books every day instead, a good habit of reading will be formed and their academic performance will be greatly improved. Secondly, refusing junk food by eating healthily and regularly, youngsters neednotbeconcernedabouttheir health andbodyshape.Thirdly, youngsters seem always to betempted bythose who pretend to be “cool” by smoking or drinking. Distancing themselves from these people and making friends withbetterones,youngstersthemselveswillbereallycool. Rome was not built in one day.Therefore, determined will and a wise mind should be gradually cultivated so that youngsters can resist various bad temptations and form good habits. Only in this way can they grow happilyandachievesuccess. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2013年6月英语六级写作真题答案解析(第三套) PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 1、审题: 本篇为评论性的话题作文。题目中要求评论的 “Earthprovidesenoughtosatisfyeveryman’sneed, butnoteveryman’sgreed”这句话出自圣雄甘地(MahatmaGandhi)之口,是甘地生态世界观的体现。地球一 直是哺育生于斯的人类的最无私的母亲,为人类提供着各种生存和生活所需。然而,随着科技进步、人口 数量的激增,人类对地球的抢夺也越来越严重。常言道:欲壑难填,而资源有限。寻找合适的方式,维持 人与地球及其资源之间的和谐关系,已是人类必须认真思考、快速行动的当务之急。出题人似乎也是鉴于 当前由于人类对自然界无穷无尽的索取,导致各种自然灾害频发、物种灭绝、资源枯竭等问题,借这个题 目引发思考和更多关注。考生可以从不同角度对这一主题进行阐释:可以先描述当前灾害频发、物种灭绝、 资源枯竭等现状,引出主题,然后分析产生这些现象的人为因素(只追求GDP,不保护资源;人口激增,资 源消耗,浪费更大;追求利益,盲目、过度开采等),最后发出呼吁;或者也可以先简述当前人与地球的关 系(人们为了满足自己的贪欲,向地球无止境地索取,造成一系列问题),然后陈述人类积极协调自身利益 与地球之间关系的意义,最后提出一两点建议结束全文。 2、写作思路: 第一段:描述人类欲望膨胀带来的问题,如灾害频发、物种灭绝、资源枯竭,指出地 球现状值得人们高度 关注。 第二段:分析产生上述各种现象的原因,如只追求GDP而不保护资源;人口激增,资源的消耗和浪费更大; 为求利益而盲目、过度开采等。 第三段:总结,指出人类应该控制自己的贪婪欲望,如此才能在地球上世代生存。 TimetoShakeoffGreedandHealtheEarth Earth, as has always been regarded as mother to human beings, has fallen ill with the symptoms of the frequent eruption of natural disasters, the extinction of wild animals and the exhaustion of natural resources.And thesituationillustratedshouldarousegreatattentionofallhumanbeings. As a matter of fact, blinded by greed, human beings have great responsibility for the present situation we confront with. To start with, human beings are so economy-oriented that they ignore the protection of the environment. Then, population in the planet has experienced great booming, which makes more and more resources needed and exhausted, and in turn threatens to end human life. Finally, human beings excessively exploit and abuse non-renewable energy and resources just for the expanding of their own benefits, which will onlyleadtothedarknessoffuturefortheiroffspring. Since the vista of the human’s greed towards the Mother Earth is so terrible that we should stop the unreasonable exploitationoftheearth.Let’sshakeoffgreedandhealtheearth,andbuildabetterhomeforourselvesandforour latergenerations. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2012年12月英语六级写作真题答案解析 PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: Computerand Man (1)It is believed that the computer can do almost every thing. At the time the computer was invented, scientists, carried away by its calculating speed, felt that they had created a miracle. It was gradually used not only in mathematics, physics, chemistry and astronomy, but in places like the library, hospital and military army to replace the work of man. For the work of man. For this reason, thecomputerwas entiled “Electronic Brain” interms ofappreciation。 Can man be controlled by computers? The answer is negative. Although a computer works much faster and accurately than man , a fact is undeniable; it is designed, manufactured and programmed by man, and therefore by human beings. Of course, science fictions have made up many fascinating stories about a computer, or rather robot, who conquers man and the earth, even the whole universe; however, they are only unrealistic imaginatio. A horse helps man a lot runs much faster thanwe, butit is onlya slave。 The future for the computer is very promising. With the help of it, we can do things that could not be done before. Conquering the universe, discovering new things, explaining mysteruiys phenomenapuzzling us at present are all madepossiblebycomputer。 (2)It is believed that the computer is bringing the world into a brand new era. At the time the computer was invented, scientists, marveling at its calculating speed, felt that they had created a miracle. Nowadays, the function of the computer is no longer confined to calculation; it permeates people’s daily lives andhas becomean inseparablepart ofhumansociety. People become so heavily dependent on computers that it is hard to imagine the life without computers. Therefore, some people are worried that “The real danger is not that the computer will thinklikeman, but man will thinklikethecomputer.” Their concern does make sense. Indeed, some people spend such a long time working on computers that they have few interactions with people in real life. According to a research, too many hours in front of a computer may lead to a poker face and interpersonal isolation. This fact should arouse our attention, because unlike computers, human beings are social creatures that need emotional connections with others. Yet, it is also unnecessary for us to be overwhelmed by the negative impacts of computers. After all,we humans are intelligent and will beableto figure out better ways tomakeimprovements. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2012年6月英语六级写作真题答案解析 PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: TheImpactof theInternet onInterpersonal Communication Asis described in thepicture, a fatherasks herdaughter how herschool today goes on.Instead ofanswering directly, thedaughter tells herfather toread her blog. It is common that youngsters nowadays inclineto communicate with others oninternet increasingly, and lack communication withpeople aroundthem. With thedevelopment ofInternet, it has influenced oursociety to alarge extent, especiallyinterpersonal communication. Tobegin with,we can communicate withothers anytime viainternet. Otherwise, wewould havetoarrange ourschedules strictlyin advance. Also, interpersonal communication through the internet is notrestricted byspace. For example, in mostmultinational corporations,instant messages and videoconferences help colleagues solveproblems timelyand efficiently. Last but notleast, the internet can greatly speed upourinterpersonal communication. Whereas, there are also disadvantages that the internet brings tous. Moreand more people complained that theyhave lost face-to-face communicating skills.As aresult, peoplebecome moreand moreindifferent toeach otherin real life. Somenetizens who are immersed in virtual world even have difficulty inmaking friends in reality. In conclusion, communication through theinternet couldbring us both convenienceand inconvenience. Weshould strikeabalance between them and makethebest oftheinternet. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2011年12月英语六级写作真题答案解析 PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 【标准版】 TheWaytoSuccess Successissomethingeveryonelooksfor,longsforanddiesfor.Buthaveyoueverconsideredwhatsuccessis? Somemayholdthatsuccessmeansonehasbeautifullife,likeprettyhouse,coolcarsandgreatpower.It’sindeed onewaytodefinesuccess.Buttome,successisdoingsomethingonereallyfeelslikedoing. Toachievethiskindofsuccess,onehastobearinmindthreeessentialprerequisites,namelyknowingwhereyour interestreallyliesin,possessingthestrongwilltopursueyourinterestandhavingthediligencetorealizeyour dream.Inotherwords,theyare“what”“why”and“how”ofsuccess.It’sreallyluckilygoodforone,especiallyfor theyoungergenerationoftodaytofindtheirdreams,followthemandintheend,makethemcometrueand becomesuccessful. Althoughit’snevereasytosucceed,progressingwiththestrongwillanddiligencetowardstherightdirection, you’llbetheone! 【作文解析】 这是一篇议论文。作者首先提出问题”whatissuccess?”,但并没有在这个问题上着更多的笔墨,而是直接引 出了自己的观点:successisdoingsomethingonereallyfeelslikedoing. 算是立意较为新颖的地方。随后在第 二段对这种成功背后的三种必要条件做出了阐述。整体看,行文流畅,用语规范地道。 本篇亮点: 1. 排比词组或句子的运用: Successissomethingeveryonelooksfor,longsforanddiesfor. …namely,knowingwhereyour interestreally liesin, possessingthestrongwillto pursueyourinterestandhaving thediligencetorealizeyourdream. 2.bearinmind 3.liein 4.strongwilltopursueyourinterest 本文有待提高之处: 1. 文中人称有些混乱。有些使用第二人称代指读者,有些又以第三人称指代,建议统一。 2. 结构上,一般情况下我们建议考生使用典型的“三段式”,即,提出问题、分析问题、解决问题。该作者 基本上遵循了这个原则,但第三段更多的却是重复了第二段的中心思想,并没有起到很好的总结作用。如 果第三段,作者可以与第一段的“成功定义”相呼应,例如:即使没有这些身外之物,但心灵上的满足,梦 想的实现,才是我心中成功的本质。 整体看,文章在语言表达和立意上还不错。但在文章结构上有些松散,有待提高。 【高分版】 TheWaytoSuccessFirstessay—streamofthoughttype TheWaytoSuccess "Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration."And here comes our question, what isthewaytosuccess? Astrongwillandgreateffortsarethemostessentialtwokeystothedoorofsuccess. Why do peoplefail to achieve their goal?The reason is thatmost of them give up halfwaydue to their lackof a strong will once they encounter any difficulty.Aman of a strong will always sticks to his cause no matter how toughitmightbe. WouldThomas Edison be such a great man in history if hehad done nothingbutpossessing astrong will?We are all familiar with his story that he had tried one thousand kinds of materials before he finally made his great bulblightup.Withouthardeffort,Edisonmighthavebeenanobody.Withoutefforts,noonecansucceed. To sum up, a strong will and great efforts can help one open up the way to success. Where there is a will with 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化efforts,thereisaway. 【作文解析】 本次六级考试作文题为Thewaytosuccess,与本次四级考试作文Nothingsucceedswithoutastrongwill遥相 呼应,大同小异,都是在讨论成功这一话题。 此次六级考试作文的话题依然是老生常谈,即通往成功的道路,相信很多考生对此并不陌生,背过范文的 同学写起来肯定也是得心应手。 该范文段落结构清晰,阐释说理也足以让人信服,是一篇不错的作文。 开篇作者通过引用爱迪生关于天才的一句名言来引出问题,吸引读者注意,引起读者的思考。紧随其后, 作者就开门见山地亮出了自己的观点:只有坚强的意志和不懈的努力才能打开成功的大门。 第二段,作者同样以一个问题来引领全段,引发思考。然后通过对比不成功和最终成功的人的不同表现, 来阐释坚强的意志对获得成功的重要作用。 第三段,作者进一步阐释“仅有坚强的意志,没有实在的努力,也能成功吗?”同样是先发问,然后举了爱 迪生的事例,来证明答案是否定的。举名人的例子,而非个人的实例来作为文章的论据才更有说服力,这 也是这篇作文的高明之处。 最后一段,作者先以第一句话进行了总结,然后为了加强作文结尾的力度,作者还对名言“Wherethereisa will,thereisway”进行了改编,换成了自己的观点,为我所用,这也是本篇范文的一个两点之处。注意,写 作文时对名言进行恰当地改编,不仅能体现幽默创新的一面,同样也体现了作者不错的文字驾驭技巧,考 官也是很欢迎这样的文章的。 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2011年6月英语六级写作真题答案解析 PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 标准版 Myopinion oncertificatecraze The growing tendency among college students to get all kinds of certificates has now evolved into a craze. Just randomly ask a student what he or she is busily engaged in doing, quite possibly, you would get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. So, why's the craze? The reason behind this phenomenon is common — the enormous pressure of finding a job. Faced with a harsh job market, most students have no choice but to seek more certificates to parlay their qualifications. Another factor is that diploma and certificates still weighs heavily in terms of signifying one's ability. For the sake of increasing their odds of landing a better job, the students are compelled to run from one examto another. Though I have an open mind toward the craze on certificates, I suggest that students should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since they do not necessarily tell their ability. Instead, they should be more involved in learning and capability boosting, thus, opportunities would come quitenaturally. 文章点评: 这是一篇“中等偏上”的学生作文。 本文先对学生的考证热进行简介,引出全篇;接着分析这 一现象背后的原因;整体看思路清晰,逻辑严密,行文流畅,句式多变,用语较为地道。 本篇亮点表达: The growing tendency …has nowevolved into… bebusily engagedin doing The reason behind… harsh job market have nochoice butto… parlay theirqualifications sth.weighs heavily interms of… increasing one’s oddsof… beinvolved indoing … becompelled to do… have an open mindtoward… capabilityboosting 本文有待提高之处: 1. 文章结构上,能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”(提出问题、分析问题、解决问 题)。逻辑严谨,论证严密;句式表达灵活,用语较为地道。 2. 微观语言点方面,有个主谓一致的方面的错误(diplomaand certificates stillweighs heavily); 有些语句稍显啰嗦,比quitepossibly, you would get theanswer that… 大可简化成you’dmost likelybe toldthat… 更好,意思没有丝毫减损,表达力反而增强许多;另外某些用语多重复, 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化比如 job多次出现;为了避免此类现象,文中的theenormous pressure offinding ajob 不妨改 为 theenormous pressure of getting employed。 从整体看,本篇文章不错,值得参考借鉴,不过用于方面还有待提高。 高分版 Certificatecraze Recently the phenomenon of certificate craze has become a big concern of the public. It is also a new craze in the university, which seems like a routine activity on campus, for certificates do play avital rolewhen studentslook for adecent job. Admittedly, there are different purposes behind this phenomenon. Some people aim at certificates because of the employment pressure. With the admission expansion of colleges, a great many graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. So it is the certificates that can make them more competitive. However, some others consider all the diploma and certificates important standards by which a person's ability can be measured. They spare no effort to get the certificates for the sole purpose of proving that they are qualified in a certain field. Moreover, there are those who just want to enrich their life by preparing for the certificates because they really enjoy theirprogress. From my point ofview,we should bemore rational when itcomes to certificates, since certificates donot necessarily prove one's ability.Being crazy ingetting certifications blindlyis nothingbut wasting time.Toconclude, weshould focus onimprovingour abilitybut not merely gettinga certificate. 文章点评: 本次六级作文探讨的是考生比较熟悉的话题——高校考证书热;本次试题延续了以往的 考试风格,关注点仍然放在与学生息息相关的话题上;从选题角度来说,考生还是比较好把 握的。需要注意的是由于第二部分可能需要列出多点原因,考生在该部分需要注意论述的条 理性;此外,在保证句法通顺的前提下,尽可能做到表达的多样化。 首先,在考生拿到题目的时候,应该先认真审题,心里大致对接下来文章的安排有一个 底。提起证书热的话,很多考生都会联想到就业压力,学校给予的压力以及学生自身的需求; 因此,全文可做如下安排; 第一段,考生可以整体阐述一下该话题,陈述下目前存在的考证热现象; 第二段,考生可以对考证热背后存在的各种各样的目的进行拓展;比如说由于日益严重 的就业压力,以及有的学校时不时给学生灌输的压力;或者是学生自身从身边感受到的一些 压力,都可能导致考证热的产生。 第三段要求考生对于该现象给出自己的理解,考生应在这里持一种客观的态度。因为考 证本身并不是一种错误,但是考生应当注意从题目“考证热”出发,重点放在“热”字上,对这 一现象做出最理性的评述。 综合来讲,本篇文章观点明确,思路清晰;在第二段给出的例证具有代表性;此外,文 章中有用到不少的亮点词汇;唯一比较遗憾的是,由于时间和篇幅的限制,论证的展开还未 完全挖掘出来,但在如此有限的条件下,可以称得上佳作了。 外教版 The job market today is increasingly sophisticated, requiring workers to have specialized knowledge in their fields.As a result, becoming certified is a trend among today's job seeking youth. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化More and more people, students especially, look at obtaining certification as a means to getting a betterjob and, therefore, enjoying brighter future. There are as many certificates as there are fields of study. Lawyers will take the LSAT, business majors will take the GMAT to further their study in the US, and those who study a foreign language, like English, might take the TOEFL, TOEIC, or any number of English certification exams. Is this necessary? Or, is the “certification craze” just a trend that will eventually pass? I myself have obtained two different certifications: one in Japanese (N2) and another in teaching English as a foreign language (TEFL). Both of thesecertifications have been beneficial ingetting good jobs. Therefore, it is my opinion that, trend or not, the results of becoming certified are real and can beinvaluablein opening upfuture opportunities. 文章点评: 1. 逻辑结构上,本文大体也是按照“提出问题(考证热的现象)”“分析问题(背后的动力)” 和“解决问题(个人的观点)”的结构展开。 2. 本文的亮点非常多,用语非常地道,用英语思维催动出来的英语文章,才是真正的极品。 相比用中式思维催动出来的英语文章,这篇文章是很美味的,强烈建议大家背诵下来。大家 记得《天龙八部》吗?鸠摩智用小无相功催动出的招式是敌不过藏经阁里的扫地和尚的。总 之,我们大可不必刻意使用难词难句,其实表意明确,用语地道的文章,就肯定可以拿到高 分。 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2010年12月英语六级写作真题答案解析 PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: MyView onUniversity Ranking In recent years, all kinds of University Ranking Lists can be found on some educational websites, or newspapers. The ranking standards also vary. These lists have great influence on students.They are even becoming theonly scale toevaluate the colleges and universities. People hold different views toward this phenomenon. Some believe that these lists help the students a lot, especially for those who will choose their university. While some other protest vigorously. In their points, the list is really ridiculous and harmful. In my view, the university ranking may have its own referencevalues, but itsdisadvantages overweigh its values. For those university-students-to-be, they are supposed to choose the school according to his or her own situation, but not the so-called Ranking List. What’s more, how about the university students? How do they feel about themselves when they see the ranking? The list may become some intangibleshackles for them iftheirownschool ranks poorly. In a nutshell, there is no easy method to rank these universities, but the Ranking, only helps studentsignore theessentials, namely, theirninety-ninepercent perspiration. 此次六级作文的自由度很大,看似给出了提纲,实际上具体的观点全靠个人发挥。第一段需 要点明大学排名这个现象,第二段需要铺陈不同人的观点,第三段要陈述自己的观点。 大学排名这个题目,实际上涉及到了对了大学的理解,对于大学排名标准的理解,以及对于 大学排名的目的的理解。而这件事更加离不开中国具体的国情,新中国50年代人至今受教育 的情况,90后择校的情况,目前大学的情况,考生发挥的空间可以纵横数十年的教育史,并 且可以深入探讨教育的本质。 当然,对于大多数考生来说,凑满150 个字万岁!那么,模板又可以派上用场了。 模板一 1.Different people havedifferent views on—— 2. Somepeople perfer,—— 3. Others tend to,—— 4.Asto me, I agree with / to —— (1)开门见山直入主体,表明对某事人们的不同看法。 (2)表明一部分人的看法。 (3)另一部分的看法。 (4)作者的看法 我们这里放出来的这篇文章,语言流畅,观点清晰,多处表述有闪光点。 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化2010年6月英语六级写作真题答案解析 PartⅠ Writing 参考范文: 此次作文考的是学生忽视汉语学习的现象及其原因、后果和对策分析。本次试题仍是延续以往的考试 风格,关注与学生相关的学习、生活和社会问题,应该说这个题目从选题角度来看还是比较好把握的。 拿到题目时如何分析?看到这个题目,分析一下题目涉及到了哪些方面,而原因和对策必然是与这几 方面相关的。题目是近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象。学生问题一般很容易联想到社会、校方 及自身。因此全文可做如下安排。 第一段总起全文,陈述这一现象的存在。由于国际交流的需要,如今语言学习的重心基本是外语学习, 汉语学习却越来越不受重视了。 第二段进行原因和后果分析。我们可以从社会、校方及自身三方面进行论述。由于是社会问题,我们 可以主要论述社会和校方两层原因。第一,整个社会重视外语多于汉语。在就业时,掌握至少一门外语比 掌握汉语更有优势。后果是大多数学生都不再认可汉语学习的重要性了。第二,高校中也是重视外语教育, 忽视汉语教育。有这两点原因就足够了。另外由于字数和时间限制,可以不必另起一段陈述后果,而将后 果放在每条原因后面进行简要说明。 第三段进行对策分析。需要注意的是,这里的对策应与第二段提出的原因相对应。因此,第三段也应 从社会和校方这两个角度进行论述。全社会应该重视起汉语学习,校方应推进汉语教育和研究。当然,我 们也可以加上一点,即我们每个人都要去努力学习和保护汉语。 最后一段总结全文,既可以概述全文主题思想,也可以提出期望和要求。 总的来说,这篇文章不难写。需要大家注意的有三点:一是论述的条理性,二是总-分-总结构的运用, 三是尽可能做到表达的多样化。 范文1 Do youremember thesefamouslitterateurs:Lu xun,Zhu ziqing, LaosheorBing xin? Howfamiliar thesenames are! Unfortunately, countless students pay no attention to the study of Chinese. Nowadays, Internet, English and game occupystudents’time and attention.For the majority of students, the studyofChinese has become aremote memory. Why such a phenomenon emerges? Educators attribute it to the ignorance of university administration. Chinese is an essential course for college students in China. However, for a long time there has been a neglect in the study of Chinese. Taking a look around, every teacher encourages students to spend all time on learning English. On the contrary, none of them promotes students to learn Chinese. In the wake of this situation, students willmakegrowingChinesemistakes inspelling, readingandspeaking.Maybesomeday,Chinesewouldfadefrom historicalstage. In my opinion, some drastic measures should be taken. First of all, we can raise students’awareness that the studyof Chinese is indispensable to us. In addition,teachers canoffer more coursesrelated to Chinese or Chinese culture. Finally, we can promote CCT(college Chinese testing) . In a word, due attention should be given to the studyofChinese。 范文2 WithChina’sopeningup,interculturalcommunication has become more andmore frequentbetweenChinese and foreigners. Agood command of at least one foreign language has increasingly been an essential skill for us. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化People,especiallytheyouths,paymuchmoreattentiontoforeignlanguageacquisitionthanChinesestudy. Various factors can account for this situation. First of all, a good command of a foreign language may help youngpeopleto get a good jobwhile Chinese skills may beof nosignificance in one’sjob hunting andeven their career. Consequently, some students may not treasure Chinese language any longer. Apart from that, nowadays fewer andfewer universities stimulate Chineselanguage study in campus, which hascausedit to be marginalized. Underthis circumstance,Chinese language becomes less andlesspopular in universities.It isclearthatprofessors inthefieldofChinesestudyarenotsorespectedthantheywerebefore. In view of this situation, effective measures should be taken to change it. First, the whole society should emphasizetheimportanceofChineselanguageinordertomakeitclearthatitisoneindispensablepartofChinese culture and Chinese race. Second, schools should promote Chinese language study and research. In addition, we individualsshouldcontributeourowneffortstothestudyandprotectionofChineselanguage. Toconclude, we should pay great attention to Chinese language, since the importance ofit is never too great tobeexaggerated. 淘宝店铺:https://shop499712503.taobao.com/ 店主旺旺:慧园文化