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Unit 5 Part 4 Writing 专项练
写作题目
假设你和你的同学李明一起去锅炉房打开水，在回寝室的路上，李明的热水瓶突然破
裂，开水烫伤了他的脚。于是你对他实施了必要的急救。请你结合此事，用英语写一篇 80
词左右的短文，向学校英文报Teens投稿，主要内容包括：
1．描述事故发生的经过：
2．你是如何实施急救的（冷水冲洗、送医院做进一步的处理）；
3．简要谈谈你对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的认识。
参考词汇：锅炉房boiler room
热水瓶thermos bottle
____
思路点拨
主题 处理烫伤，实施急救 体裁 记叙文
人称 以第一人称和第三人称为主 时态 以一般过去时为主
布局 第一部分：描述事故发生的经过；
第二部分：实施急救的措施；
第三部分：介绍对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的认识。
遣词造句
I．用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1．____ n．& v．烧伤：烫伤
2．____ adj.（身体部位）肿起的；肿胀的
3．____ n．急救
4．____ adj.急救的
5．____ adj.切实可行的；实际的
6．____ vt．减轻：缓解
7．____ 匆忙把某人送往医院
8．____ 立刻；马上
II．本单元语块、语法运用
1．完成句子
(1)烫伤非常严重。
The ____ was very severe.
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The skin was red and ____.
(3)我设法保持镇静，并快速回想在急救课堂上学到的内容。
I managed to ____ ____, and quickly recalled what I had learnt in my ____ class.
(4)我立即把他的脚放到流动的凉水下，以减轻疼痛。
I placed his feet under the ____ ____ ____ ____ ____ ____ ____ the pain.
(5)然后，我打电话叫了一辆出租车，并匆忙把他送往了医院。
Afterwards, I called a taxi and ____ ____ ____ ____ ____.
(6)在医院里，他接受了进一步的治疗。
In the hospital, he received further ____.
(7)在那时我意识到了基本的急救知识是多么重要和实用。
Then I was ____ how important and ____ a basic ____ of ____ ____ was.
2．句式升级
(8)将句(1)和句(2)合并为含有so…that…的句子
____
(9)将句(3)升级为含有现在分词作伴随状语的句子
____
(10)将句(5)和句(6)合并为含有where引导的定语从句的句子
____
(11)将句(7)升级为“only+状语”放句首的倒装句
____
III. 连句成篇
____
实战演练 （★★☆）
上周日下午，你和你的朋友在河边散步时，听到河中有人在喊救命。于是你们迅速地
救起了他，并对他实施了必要的急救。请你就这件事写一篇 80词左右的短文，投递到学校
英文报Youth，主要内容包括：
1．描述事故发生的过程：
2．实施急救的过程（让他平躺；实施口对口人工呼吸；联系救护车和家人）；
3．简要表达你对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的想法。
____
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I
1. burn 2. swollen 3. first aid 4. first-aid 5. practical 6. ease 7. rush sb. to the hospital 8.
right away/at once
II.
(1) burn (2) swollen (3) remain calm; first-aid (4) cool running water right away to ease (5)
rushed him to the hospital (6) treatment (7) aware; practical; knowledge; first aid
(8) The burn was so severe that the skin was red and swollen.
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(10) Afterwards, I called a taxi and rushed him to the hospital where he received further
treatment.
(11) Only then was I aware how important and practical a basic knowledge of first aid was.
III. 参考范文
One day, Li Ming and I were walking back to the dorm from the boiler room when suddenly
his thermos bottle burst and the boiling water caused injuries to his feet. The burn was so severe
that the skin was red and swollen. However, I managed to remain calm, quickly recalling what I
had learnt in my first-aid class. I placed his feet under the cool running water right away to ease
the pain. Afterwards, I called a taxi and rushed him to the hospital where he received further
treatment.
Only then was I aware how important and practical a basic knowledge of first aid was.
写作积累
1．描述事件发生的过程
①时间状语：at that time; right then; suddenly; all of a sudden; all at once;
abruptly; then; afterwards; soon after...
②某人正在做某事这时……sb. was doing sth. when...
某人刚做完某事这时……sb. had just done sth. when...
某人正要做某事这时……sb. was about to do sth. when...
2．实施急救的表达方式
① Bleeding:
Try to stop the bleeding.
Press a handkerchief onto the bleeding point and hold it there.
Hold up the part of the body which is bleeding if possible.
② Sprain:
Tie with a bandage.
It is better to avoid walking with the injured ankle.
It is correct to use an ice pack for removing the pain.
③Choke:
Make him/her spit it out by slapping him/her on the back.
To avoid this, we shouldn't talk or laugh when eating.
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Do not move the patient.
Call an ambulance at once.
Treat sb. for shock if necessary.
⑤ Nosebleed:
Stay calm.
Breathe through the mouth, not the nose.
Sit up and bend the head slightly forward.
Pinch（捏）both nostrils（鼻孔）together using a thumb and forefinger.
Spit out any blood that collects in the mouth.
实战演练
One possible version:
Last Sunday afternoon, my friend and I were walking along the river when we heard
someone screaming for help in the river. Seeing a drowning person, we jumped into the river as
quickly as possible, and lifted him out.
Upon reaching the bank, we were aware that we should give first aid to him right away. We
put him in place and applied the mouth-to-mouth resuscitation over and over again. Meanwhile,
my friend called his parents and an ambulance. Soon after he came to himself, his parents and
doctors arrived. His parents were very grateful for our timely help.
Through this accident, we realized that a knowledge of first aid could make a real difference.
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