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03 申请信
(2012年，全国课标卷）假定你是李华，从互联网((the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生
组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括:
1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);
3.希望获准。
注意:
1.数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the
summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that
you welcome students from different countries and I’d like to take part in it. I’ve been
learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I’ll be able to
tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I
hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply!
Regards,Li Hua
【解析】随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学
生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1.
结构上：采用三段成文，第一段引出话题；第二段自我介绍；参加意图；第三段表达愿望
希望获准。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第一人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，
使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一
第一部分：说明写信的目的
套语：
(1) 兹申请刊登在……上的……工作。
I am writing to apply for the post of … advertised in …
(2) 见……上刊登的贵公司广告，我谨申请应聘贵公司的……职务。
In reply to your advertisement in …, I beg to apply for the post of … in your company.
(3) 看到贵公司在报上招聘……的广告，我马上感到这正是我这段时间所要寻找的工作，
并且我能胜任。
Immediately I saw your advertisement in the paper for …I felt it was just the kind of post for
which I have the qualifications and for which I have been looking for some time.
(4) 我想申请入贵校学习。
I would like to apply for admission to your college.
(5) 我想在贵校……系继续深造。
I would like to further my studies in …Department of your university.
第二部分：介绍详情
套语：
(1) 我的专业是……，我了解贵校在上述领域有极好的项目。
My major is…, and I understand your university has a good program in this field.
(2) ……年，我出生于……，毕业于……大学……专业。毕业后一直在……工作，因此积累
了该领域丰富的经验。
Born in …in…, I graduated from…University majoring in …I have been working in …since my
graduation, and I have therefore attained rich experience in this field.
(3) 毕业后，我先担任……，随后担任……，现任职于……Upon graduation, I first worked as … The following job was …and currently I am working
for/in …
(4) 我现在就读于北京第二外国语学院英语专业，即将毕业。
I am now studying at Beijing Second Foreign Language Institute and will soon be graduated as
an English major.
第三部分：说明申请该职位或学校的原因
套语：
(1) 贵公司目前做的这种工作特别使我感兴趣。
The kind of work in which your company is engaged particularly interests me.
(2) 我认为我具备了报上刊登的贵公司……一职所要求的必要条件和经验。
I feel I have the necessary qualifications and experience needed for the position of …advertised
in the newspaper.
(3) 受我所学课程的影响，我对饭店、酒店管理产生了浓厚的兴趣。
Under the influence of the courses I have taken, I have developed a special interest in Restaurant
and Hotel Management.
第四部分：恳请招聘单位或所申请的学校考虑自己的申请，并表示谢意，期望回复
套语：
(1) 如能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。
Your early response will be much appreciated.
(2) 希望贵校能给我寄来空白申请表。
I hope you will kindly send me an application form.
(3) 如能收到所需的申请表和有关入学的指南我将十分感激。
I would greatly appreciate receiving copies of the required application forms and any instructions
you may be so kind as to give me regarding my possible admission.
(4) 希望同意面试，届时我可以更详细地说明我的技能。
I hope I may be granted an interview, when I can explain my qualifications more fully.
(5) 我将乐意在您方便时接受面试，届时我将进一步介绍自己。
I should be pleased to attend for an interview at your convenience, when I could give you further
details concerning myself.模板①
Dear Sir or Madam,
I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised
in________________________(报纸/网站名称) of________________________(广告发布时
间).
Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but also I have the right
personality for a ______________ (工作名称). On one hand, _____________________(第
一个原因). On the other hand, ______________________(另一个原因).
Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. If you need to
know more about me ， please feel free to contact me at any time
at________________________(电话号码).
Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m _________(简单自我介绍). When I was reading the advertisement, _________(表
达看到相关广告后的感受). I think it’s a good opportunity for me to _____________(应聘
的原因). Therefore I recommend myself to without hesitation.
I ___________(陈述本人的性格优势). For one thing, I can ___________(陈述本人特
长一). For another thing, I can ___________(陈述本人特长二).
Please contact me at ___________(你的联系方式一：电话号码). Or e-mail me at
___________(你的联系方式二：电子邮箱地址).
I am looking forward to your early reply .
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板③Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m _________(简单自我介绍).I’m writing to apply for the position_____________(说
明写信的目的)。
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because
______________________________(说明为什么想得到这次宝贵的机会).
___________. Besides, __________________.(分层次说明自己的优势)
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you
could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your early reply .
Yours
Li Hua
1. 申请信写作方法
① 首段：
a. 自我介绍；
b. 申请原因；
c. 说明写信目的。
② 主体：
a. 详述有关背景资料：资历、教育经历、工作经历、兴趣爱好；
b. 询问有关学校、课程等具体内容。
③ 尾段：
a. 强调上述材料的重要性；
b. 希望尽快得到答复；
c. 要求手册及申请表；
d. 表示感谢。
2. 写作流程图
说明写信目的
介绍自我(包括：学历、工作简历、在学校或工作单位的表现)
说明申请该职位或学校的原因恳请招聘单位或所申请的学校考虑自己的申请，并表示谢意，期望回复
假设你是李华，从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家
教(tutor) 的广告，欢迎中国学生参加。 请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括：
1.自我介绍（包括中英文能力）；
2.参加意图（帮助别人学习中文和推介中国文化）；
3.希望获准。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总次数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a senior middle school student from China. I happened to read the advertisement
that you have posted on the Internet, employing Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese
language. I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from China and I’d like to get
this job.
For me, Chinese is my native tongue and I’m excellent at it. Besides, I’ve been learning
English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English. I’m willing to help
foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.假如你是李华，想参加学校组织的“走进美国家庭”夏令营活动，请用英语写一封100
词左右的申请信。申请信的开头和结尾已给出，申请信应包括以下三方面内容：
你参加这次活动的目的；
你的爱好和兴趣；
你希望住在有孩子的美国家庭。
注意：可根据所给信息适当发挥。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to join in US home stay programme.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_____
Yours,
Li Hua
2. 假如你叫王玲，今年参加了某大学自主招生。这所大学要求考生用英语写一封申请信，
请按下面提示写一封英语申请信。内容包括：
1.个人情况 2. 个人条件 3. 申请此大学原因
注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入总数。
2.可以增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Dean,
My name is Wang Ling. I’ve learned that your university will admit students in advance.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
3. 假定你是高中生李华，你在校园网上看到一则招募暑假英语夏令营志愿者的广告，请你
写一封申请信要求参加。内容包括：
1. 提出申请
2. 自身的英语情况；
3. 相关经验；
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：英语夏令营 English Summer Camp
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua and I’m a student in a high school.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4. 假设你是李华，你打算申请某国际著名书友会的会员。请你根据以下提示信息写一封申
请信给该网站的负责人Mr. Green。
内容主要包括：
1. 简要的自我介绍;
2. 表明参加意图;
3. 希望获准。
注意：1. 120词左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
5. 假定你是李华，你校外教Mr Smith将在暑假开展英语短剧表演培训活动，他需要招聘一
名学生助手。请你写一封申请信参加应聘，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 个人优势。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Smith,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考答案
1. Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to join in US home stay programme. I think it’s a good way to improve my English
and broaden my horizons, I also hope to have a chance to visit some famous places such as the
statue of Liberty and really want to experience authentic American culture.
I enjoy surfing on the Internet, am fond of travelling and love sports and pop music. I do quite
well in English and can talk easily with English speakers.
I hope to stay with an American family with three or four children. Staying with a local family
will give me a unique opportunity to experience America’s language, everyday life and customs.I’m sure we'll have a great time together.
Thank you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析：本文属于提纲作文，考生首先要看清楚要求，然后再根据要求详细讨
论。本文的话题是写一封申请信，申请参加学校组织的“走进美国家庭”夏令营活动，属
于书信类作文，所以使用一般现在时。在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因
为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的
整体。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语a good way to do sth.做某事的好方法；broaden my
horizons开拓视野；have a chance to do sth.做某事的机会；such as 诸如；be fond of doing
sth,喜欢做某事；have a great time玩得高兴。还有非谓语Staying with a local family …做主
语为文章增色不少。
2. Dear Dean,
My name is Wang Ling. I’ve learned that your university will admit students in advance.
With a great longing to enter your school, I’d like to make this application. I am a girl of 18
at Hongxing High School. I do well in every subject, especially in English. I ever won the first
prize in the National English Spoken Contest for the high school students. Deeply interested in
your school, which enjoys a high reputation and beautiful campus, I am writing to you in the hope
that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in your university. If you could give me a
chance , I’ll be very grateful.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours Truly,
Wang Ling
【解析】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你叫王玲，今年参加了某大学自主招生。这所大学
要求考生用英语写一封申请信，请按下面提示写一封英语申请信。人称为第一人称，时态
应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：long to渴望，application申请，do well in
在……某方面干得好，first prize一等奖，high reputation盛誉，campus大学，in the hope
that怀着…的希望，obtain获得，opportunity机会，grateful感谢的。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清
晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【亮点表达】作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：Deeply interested in your school,
which enjoys a high reputation and beautiful campus, I am writing to you in the hope that I may
obtain an opportunity to further my study in your university.运用了定语从句和in the hope等高
级表达方式。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英
语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，
为文章增色添彩。
3. Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua and I’m a student in a high school. I’d like to apply to be a volunteer of
the English Summer Camp.
First of all, I’m very fond of English and take an active part in all kinds of activities related to
English. Second, I’ve taken part in plenty of voluntary work since I was a junior middle school
student. Lastly, I’ve got a great deal of experience in organizing English activities.
I’d be honored if you can choose me. I’ll make every effort to do my job and you won’t
regret it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生写一封申请信，参加暑假英语夏令营志愿者。
【解析】词汇积累
首先：first of all→to begin with
参加：take part in→participate in
各种各样的：all kinds of→avariety of
大量的：plenty of→a large amount of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’ll make every effort to do my job and you won’t regret it.
拓展句：I’ll make every effort to do my job, ensuring that you won’t have any regrets in
choosing me.
【亮点表达】[高分句型1]Second, I’ve taken part in plenty of voluntary work since I was a
junior middle school student.(since引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2]I’d be honored if you can choose me.(if引导的条件状语从句)
4. Dear Mr. Green,
My name is Li Hua, a 16-year-old senior high school student from China. I learn from your
website that your book club welcomes members from different countries, so I’d like to take part in
it.
I love reading books and also like to share what I have read with others. Your book club
offers me a good chance to read, share books and meet other book lovers. So I’m writing to you
and hope I will be accepted as a member of your book club.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给某国际著名书友会网站的负责人Mr. Green写一
封申请信，申请成为其书友会的会员。
【解析】1. 词汇积累
参与：take part in → join in
喜欢：love → be fond of
提供，给予：offer → give
希望：hope → expect
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合
原句：My name is Li Hua, a 16-year-old senior high school student from China.
拓展句：My name is Li Hua, who is a 16-year-old senior high school student from China.
【亮点表达】【高分句型1】
I learn from your website that your book club welcomes members from different countries, so I’d
like to take part in it.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】
I love reading books and also like to share what I have read with others. （运用了what引导的
宾语从句）
5. Dear Smith,
I’m Li Hua, an enthusiast of English drama performance. I’m writing to apply for the
position of your assistant in the upcoming English short play performance training.As a senior student with an excellent command of English, I can communicate with native
speakers of English fluently. In addition, I’m equipped with remarkable organizational skills and
creative problem-solving abilities, making me a good candidate for the position.
Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份应聘信，向学校外教Mr Smith申
请暑假英语短剧表演培训活动的学生助手这个工作，内容包括写信目的，个人优势。
【解析】1.词汇积累
职位：position → post
此外：in addition → what’s more
考虑：consider → take…into account
非凡的：remarkable → extraordinary
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, I’m equipped with remarkable organizational skills and creative problem-
solving abilities, making me a good candidate for the position.
拓展句：In addition, I’m equipped with remarkable organizational skills and creative problem-
solving abilities, which make me a good candidate for the position.
【亮点表达】【高分句型1】I’m writing to apply for the position of your assistant in the
upcoming English short play performance training. (运用了动词不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型2】Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to hearing from
you. (运用了动名词作宾语)
