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12 推荐信
（2019年3月，天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动，你
校英语社团的微信 公众号开展以“Let’s Read”为题的征文活动。要求同学们根据个人的阅
读体会，从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型，推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿，文章内容应
包括：
（1）推荐书籍的类型及特点；
（2）推荐的理由。 参考词
汇：
科幻小说 science fiction 侦探小说 detective novel 魔幻小说 fantasy
传记文学 biography 科普读物 popular science
注意：
（1）词数不少于 100；
（2）所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围；
（3）内容充实、行文连贯；
（4）题目已给出，不计入总词数。
March 22, 2019
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By Li Jin
【参考范文】
March 22, 2019
Today I'd like to introduce a book to you which I like much——The Five Thousand Years
History, which belongs to history books.The author selects important and famous figures and events in the history of China, which he
organizes and cuts them according to historical materials, and writes in modern language to make
them easy to understand.
This book opens a history gate to me and I feel more confident about my own country. I am
proud that I am a Chinese and I will make more effort to build a more powerful country and let
Chinese history more brilliant.
I think everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience. I do hope you'll like it !
Enjoy reading !
By Li Jin
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇英语征文。
第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇英语征文；假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学
校的“读书月”活动，你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Let’s Read”为题的征文活动。要求
同学们根据个人的阅读体会，从 所读过的书籍中选定一种类型，推荐给其他同学。现请你
投稿，文章内容应包括：（1）推荐书籍的类型及特点；（2）推荐的理由。人称应使用第
一、三人称，时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：introduce a book to you（给你推荐一
本书），belong to（属于），author（作者）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规
范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，
显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
【范文点评】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达
方式，如定语从句Today I'd like to introduce a book to you which I like much——The Five
Thousand Years History, which belongs to history books…in the history of China, which he
organizes and cuts them according to historical materials；不定式I will make more effort to
build a more powerful country and let Chinese history more brilliant.；宾语从句I think
everyone should read it and get this wonderful experience.；强调句I do hope you'll like it!全文
中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
一、推荐信三段可用句式
首段交代写信背景，开门见山表明写信目的：
1. Our school will celebrate its 100th birthday this July./Our school’s approaching 100th birthday
will be celebrated this July. Could you please recommend a student to address at the opening
ceremony in English?
2. Hearing/Learning that you are coming to visit China, I would like to recommend several place
interest to you.
3. I’m delighted to learn that you are going to visit Beijing, and I would like to offer my
recommendation.
4. Delighted to know that you are going to learn English, I consider it a wise choice to visit
5. It affords me much pleasure to recommend John to you.
主体部分：紧扣要点，推荐条件写2--3个，适当增加细节：
6. 在学校进行公开演讲相关的推荐条件：The speakers should be equipped with the
following qualities.
A. Initially , motivated and devoted to serving others, the speaker is supposed to hold a
positive attitude towards life and enjoy a good fame or high popularity among students.
B. Additionally/Aside from it, not only can he have excellent performance in all school
subjects, but also is furnished with extraordinary ability of spoken and written English.
C. Plus , I would be even better if the speaker is involved in relevant experience of public
speaking.
7. I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons.
8. One reason why I recommend it/sb. is that ...
9. He is an all-round students with excellent grades in all subjects; As a boy with great
potential, he is good/skillful at solving difficult problems.
10. Li Ming, a graduate from Peking University, majors in computer software design.
尾段写作：紧扣要点---表示感谢；增加细节---期待回信。
11. I would appreciate it very much if you could do me the favor. Your early/prompt reply ishighly expected.
12. If you need further information, don’t hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to your
early/prompt reply.
13. Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly appreciated/expected.
14. I do hope that you can find my recommendation beneficial. Looking forward to your
early/prompt reply.
二、推荐人物可用词汇
能力：have a gift/talent for=be gifted/talented in; be good/skillful at=be skilled in; be
experienced in, be an expert in, a boy with great ability/potential; give full play to his
talent; have a good knowledge/command of; be competent/equal/qualified for; creative,
efficient, intelligent...
经历：graduate from; be a graduate from, major in; gain/win/get the first grade
scholarship, an all-around students with excellent grades in all subjects; be given the title
of ...
性格：outgoing; easy to get along with, enthusiastic, enthusiasm is part of his
character...
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Dear ______ ,
①It is my great pleasure to recommend ______（要推荐的人）to you.②During his/her
graduate years he/she was my ______ . ③As his/her ______ I found him/her ______(介
绍与此人的关系)。
④His/Her performance in the school years was outstanding. ⑤First, he/she had been and
showed great talents in ______ . ⑥In addition, he/she has a very pleasant personality. ⑦He has
developed a strong sense of ______, and working with him/her is always_______. ⑧I can state
that he/she has all the qualities of being ______.（介绍此人的能力）⑨Therefore, I here recommend him/her to you with all my heart. ⑩Should you favor
him/her with a position in your company/Should you accept him/her in your university？I am sure
that his/her future conduct/academic work will prove worthy of your confidence. I look forward to
hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
推荐信的三段式结构：
Para1:写信目的 推荐
I am writing to recommend to you… 2.I would like to recommend to you… 3.It is a great honor fo
r me to recommend to you…
Para2全面介绍
1. He majors in computer software.
2. He has been given the title of the “excellent student”. 3. He has great potential.
4. Furthermore,moreover;besides
Para3:再次推荐 希望考虑雇佣
1. In a word, he would be a good choice. I would be grateful if you would like to consider my reco
mmendation.
2.If he can join your company, he will give full play to his talent. And your company will also be g
reatly benefited. So I strongly recommend… to you.
1．假如你是李明，根据学校安排，你给即将到你校任教的外籍教师Jack推荐一名学生助
手。请根据以下提示给Jack写一封介绍刘佳的推荐信。要点：
1. 欢迎Jack的到来；
2. 推荐刘佳同学做学生助手；
3. 刘佳的基本情况（18岁，高三学生，学校十佳学生）；
4. 刘佳的特点和特长（温和友好；做事认真；酷爱英语；电脑技能；沟通能力等）
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack，
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Yours，
Li Ming
2．美国的Green Top Middle School是育才中学（Yucai Middle School）的国际友好学校，
下周将有10名美国学生到校交流。育才中学面向全校公开招募10名学生，全程参加交流
活动。假设你是李萍的英语老师Mr. Lee，要向学校推荐她参加该活动。请结合下面有关李
萍的要点描述，代Mr. Lee写一封推荐信。
要点：1、年龄、班级和外貌特征；
2、有能力做好这份工作，性格开朗、擅长英语、了解历史等；
3、想参加的原因：作为学校的一员，想为学校做事；抓住运用英语的机会，提高英语水平。
要求：1、内容须包括所有提示，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2、字数100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总字数。
Dear Yucai Middle School,
I’m Lee Nan, headteacher and English teacher of Class 1, Grade 9. I’m writing with the
purpose that Li Ping will be chosen to communicate with the American students._______________________________________________________________________________
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I do believe Li Ping would put in great effort and do a perfect task if offered the chance.
Sincerely,
Lee Nan
3．假定你是李华，你们班下周要举行一场英语歌唱比赛，请你给比赛负责人Mr. Smith写
一封推荐信，推荐你的同学Jack做主持人。内容包括：
1. 写信的目的；
2. 推荐的理由；
3. 希望给予考虑。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．假如你是李华，你校学生会要评选年度风云人物，现在请你根据以下要点向你校学生会
主席(Mark)写一封推荐信。
1. 被推荐人姓名：你班学生李明。
2. 推荐理由：a. 学习刻苦成绩优良；b. 尊敬老师，乐于助人；c. 上周在上学途中他将一
位突发重病的老人送往医院。3. 参考词汇：年度风云人物the person of the year。
注意：
1. 字数：80词左右;
2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mark,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5．假如你是李华，计划利用寒假参加一个国际志愿者项目。该项目要求提交一封英文的推
荐信。请给外教Ms Jenkins写邮件，请她帮你写一封推荐信。内容包括：
1. 说明意图
2. 介绍志愿者项目
3. 表达感谢
注意1.词数约为80字左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Ms Jenkins,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假设你是学生李华，你校要开展评选“The Most Qualified Student(最美学生)”的活动，请你用英语写一封推荐信，推荐你班的同学林杨，词数100左右。
1. 简单介绍被推荐人
2. 说明推荐理由（学习、品德、特长等）
开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数
Dear School Leader,
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Yours,
LiHua
7．假定你是李华，你的学生陈丽想去一家公司充当英语翻译(translator)，她想请你给她写
一封推荐信，要点如下：
1. 陈丽的个性特点以及专长。
2. 陈丽平时在校的表现 (她的学业表现和获奖情况)。
注意：
1. 词数80个左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Manager,
I’m Li Hua, Chen Li’s teacher.
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Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，你已选修了校内选修课(elective course)，请你写一封推荐信，向同学们
推荐一门你最喜欢的选修课，主要内容包括：
1、你喜欢这门选修课的原因；
2、对想要选修该课的同学提出建议。
注意：1、写作词数应为80左右；
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9．为树立典型，增强榜样示范作用，我校正在评选“值得崇拜的校园人物”。请你写一封
推荐信，向学校推荐一位你所崇拜的具有正能量的校园人物。
内容包括：
1. 推荐的原因；
2. 对你的影响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 文中不出现真实姓名；
3. 推荐信开头已经给出，不计入总字数。
Dear school teachers,
I’d like to recommend a person I admire on campus.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
10．假如你是李华，你校英文报最近正在举行“最美书籍”评选活动。请你写一篇英语推
荐信，推荐一本你最喜欢的书，内容包括：1. 书名及作者；2. 内容概要；3. 推荐理由。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯；
3. 书信格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
11．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter打算这个寒假来中国旅游，让你推荐个城市，你想
推荐杭州作为他旅游行程的首选。请用英语给他写封推荐信，内容包括：
1.推荐城市；
2.推荐理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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12．重庆市三峡博物馆拟举办一次主题为“让艺术走进校园”(Lead Art into Campus)的活动，
在全市大中小学校中征集一个场所进行一次馆藏名画展览，假设你是新华中学的一名学生
李华，准备给博物馆写一封推荐信，推荐由自己的学校来承办这次展览。你的信必须满足
以下要求：
1. 表明推荐自己学校承办这次画展的目的；
2. 说明你的理由（浓厚的艺术氛围；现代化的图书馆展厅等）；
3. 希望能及时得到回复，表示感谢。注意：1. 词数100字左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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13．假定你是李华，中国青年志愿者网(China Youth Volunteers)计划在暑假面向高三毕业生
招募1000名志愿者，进行急救知识普及活动。你想申请成为其中一员。请用英语写一封自
我推荐信。要点如下：
1.个人情况；
2.个人优势；
3.申请目的。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a boy aged 18.
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Yours truly，
Li Hua
参考答案
1．Dear Jack,
I’m Li Ming. It’s great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next term.
I am asked to write to you to recommend Liu Jia, a Senior 3 student of 18, to be yourassistant. Liu Jia is a friendly and gentle girl. She is always committed to her work. She can use
the computer well and she is good at communicating with others. What’s more, she is one of the
top ten students in our school, and she has a passion for English. I’m sure she can be helpful in
your work and life in China.
If you have any questions, please tell me.
Yours,
Li Ming
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封介绍刘佳的推荐信，推荐她作为
即将到校任教的外籍教师Jack的学生助手。
【写作分析】1. 词汇积累
擅长：be good at→be great at
此外：what’s more→moreover
酷爱，非常喜欢：have a passion for→be passionate about
有帮助：be helpful→be of great help
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am asked to write to you to recommend Liu Jia, a Senior 3 student of 18, to be your
assistant.
拓展句：I am asked to write to you to recommend Liu Jia, who is a Senior 3 student of 18, to be
your assistant.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】It’s great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next term. (运用了it作
形式主语不定式作真正主语以及连接词that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】If you have any questions, please tell me. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
2．Dear Yucai Middle School,
I’m Lee Nan, headteacher and English teacher of Class 1, Grade 9. I’m writing with the
purpose that Li Ping will be chosen to communicate with the American students. Li Ping, a 15-
year-old girl, comes from Class 1, Grade 9. She is a beautiful girl with big eyes and long black
hair. I think she has the ability to do the job well because she is very good at English, especially
spoken English, which makes her have no trouble communicating with American friends. What’s
more, she is interested in history and has learned a lot about both China and American history.Last but not the least, she is so friendly that nobody wouldn’t like to talk with her.
As far as I know, the most important reasons why she wants to take part in the activity is that
she really wants to do something for our school as a member of this big family. Another reason is
that she won’t miss this golden chance to improve her English speaking skills.
I do believe Li Ping would put in great effort and do a perfect task if offered the chance.
Sincerely,
Lee Nan
【写作指导】这是一封推荐信。要求考生以李萍的英语老师Mr. Lee的身份，写一封推荐
信，推荐李萍参加美国的Green Top Middle School派10名美国学生到校交流的活动。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
漂亮的：beautiful→ nice-looking
认为：think → fancy
对……感兴趣：be interested in→ be keen on
想要做某事：want to do→ take a fancy to do
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Li Ping, a 15-year-old girl, comes from Class 1, Grade 9.
拓展句：Li Ping, who is a 15-year-old girl, comes from Class 1, Grade 9.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】I think she has the ability to do the job well because she is very good at English,
especially spoken English, which makes her have no trouble communicating with American
friends.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】As far as I know, the most important reasons why she wants to take part in the
activity is that she really wants to do something for our school as a member of this big family.
（运用了that引导的表语从句）
3．One possible version:
Dear Mr. Smith,I am writing to recommend my classmate, Jack, to be the host of our upcoming English
singing competition.
He has rich previous experience as a host, which enables him to handle any unexpected
situations during the competition with ease. Apart from that, he can engage the audience and keep
the show running smoothly. Additionally, he has good communication skills and is always open to
different opinions.
I strongly believe that Jack will be an asset to the competition and will help make it a
success. I’m expecting an early and timely reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给活动负责人Mr. Smith写一封推荐
信，推荐自己的同学Jack做下周将要举行的英语歌唱比赛的主持人。
【写作分析】1. 词汇积累
丰富的：rich→abundant/plentiful/copious
使能够：enable→allow/empower
处理：handle→deal with/cope with/tackle
轻松地：with ease→easily/effortlessly/with no trouble
想法：opinion→view/idea/thought
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to recommend my classmate, Jack, to be the host of our upcoming English
singing competition.
拓展句：I am writing to recommend Jack, who is my classmate, to be the host of our upcoming
English singing competition.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】He has rich previous experience as a host, which enables him to handle any
unexpected situations during the competition with ease.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从
句）
【高分句型2】I strongly believe that Jack will be an asset to the competition and will help make
it a success.（运用了that引导宾语从句作believe的宾语）4．Dear Mark,
Learning the Students’ Union will choose the person of the year, I can’t wait to recommend
Li Ming, a student in our class, to you. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, he studies hard and always gets good results, ranking first in our class.
Besides, he shows respect for teachers and it is so easy to get along with him that all the students
find it pleasant to work with him. Most importantly, he is always ready to help those in need. Last
week, he sent an old man who fell on the road with a sudden illness to hospital on his way to
school.
In short, Li Ming deserves the title and I do hope he will be named “the Person of the Year”.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向校学生会主席Mark写一封推荐信，
推荐你班同学李明参加学校学生会举办的年度风云人物的评选，并说明推荐的理由。
【写作分析】1. 词汇积累
选择：choose→select
推荐：recommend→suggest
此外：besides→what's more
突然的：sudden→abrupt
总之、简言之：in short→in brief
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Learning the Students’ Union will choose the person of the year, I can’t wait to recommend
Li Ming, a student in our class, to you.
拓展句：When I learn the Students’ Union will choose the person of the year, I can’t wait to
recommend Li Ming, a student in our class, to you.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Besides, he shows respect for teachers and it is so easy to get along with him that
all the students find it pleasant to work with him.（运用了以连词and引导的并列句和so...that...
引导的结果状语从句以及it为形式主语和形式宾语，动词不定式为真正的主语和宾语的句
式。）
【高分句型2】 Last week, he sent an old man who fell on the road with a sudden illness tohospital on his way to school.（运用了以关系代词who引导的定语从句。）
5．Dear Ms Jenkins,
How are you doing these days? I hope you’ve enjoyed your recent trip to Shangri-La in
Yunnan province. I’m writing this email to ask for a favor.
I signed up for an international volunteer program last week. If everything goes well, I will
be traveling to an island in Indonesia during the winter vacation, working with like -minded
volunteers from over the world to protect endangered sea turtles and educate people on the
importance of conserving the valuable maritime ecosystem. As he participants are supposed to
submit a recommendation letter while applying for the program, I was wondering if you’d like to
write a letter for me.
This is a life-changing experience I’ve been eagerly looking forward to. I’d be very grateful
if you could offer me some help. Thank you very much for your time!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于推荐信。李华计划利用寒假参加一个国际志愿者项目。该
项目要求提交一封英文的推荐信。要求考生李华给外教Ms Jenkins写邮件，请她帮你写一
封推荐信。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
感激的：thankful → grateful
提供：give →offer
报名参加：register for → sign up for
应该：should→ be supposed to
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I signed up for an international volunteer program last week.
拓展句：It was last week that I signed up for an international volunteer program.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】This is a life-changing experience I’ve been eagerly looking forward to（运用了
省略that的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I’d be very grateful if you could offer me some help.（运用了if引导的条件状
语从句）6．Dear School Leader,
I came across the news that our school is selecting “The Most Qualified Student”. It is my
pleasure to recommend Lin Yang to you.
Lin Yang is my best friend, who has a pretty face and always wears a bright smile. As a
student, he always devotes his time and energy to his study, so he has made great progress in this
semester and he is among the top students in our school. At the same time, he is willing to help
others either in study or in their life, because of which, he has a lot of friends and is highly spoken
of by the teachers and students. What’s more, Lin Yang is talented in traditional Chinese painting.
All in all, I think he deserves the title. I am proud of him.
Yours
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语写一封推荐信，推荐你班的同学
林杨参加“The Most Qualified Student(最美学生)”的评选活动。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
漂亮的：pretty→beautiful
有天赋的：talented→gifted
与此同时：at the same time→in the meantime
此外：what’s more→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As a student, he always devotes his time and energy to his study, so he has made great
progress in this semester and he is among the top students in our school.
拓展句：As a student, he always devotes his time and energy to his study, which enables him to
make great progress in this semester and among the top students in our school.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] I came across the news that our school is selecting “The Most Qualified Student”.
(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
[高分句型2] Lin Yang is my best friend, who has a pretty face and always wears a bright smile.
(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
7．Dear Manager,
I’m Li Hua, Chen Li’s teacher. Recently I’ve learned from her that you need a translator. It iswith great pleasure that I am writing to recommend Chen Li to you.
There are four main reasons why she is the best choice for you. First of all, she is both
outgoing and independent and she does very well in her study. Besides, she is a learned person, for
she is crazy about reading all kinds of English materials. What’s more, having lived in Boston for
half a year as an exchange student, she is undoubtedly good at English speaking and writing.
Finally, she once won the first prize in The National Middle School Students English Translation
Competition; consequently, she has enough relevant experience.
Hopefully the wonderful chance would be offered to her. If so, I am sure she would dedicate
all her effort and wisdom to your company. Thanks for reading.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以陈丽老师的身份写一封推荐信，推荐
她去一家公司充当英语翻译。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
首先：First of all→ To begin with
博学的：learned → knowledgeable
各种各样的：all kinds of→ a variety of
赢得：win→gain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, she is a learned person, for she is crazy about reading all kinds of English
materials.
拓展句：Besides, she is a learned person who is crazy about reading all kinds of English
materials.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1]It is with great pleasure that I am writing to recommend Chen Li to you.(运用了强调
句)
[高分句型2]There are four main reasons why she is the best choice for you. (运用了why引导的
定语从句)
[高分句型3]What’s more, having lived in Boston for half a year as an exchange student, she is
undoubtedly good at English speaking and writing. (运用了现在分词的完成式作状语)8．Dear classmates,
Since I have chosen Chinese ancient poetry as my elective course, I’d like to recommend it to
you all.
It’s my favorite option because I can have an extensive knowledge of history and culture in
ancient China through the course. Also, I am able to enjoy the charm of the language by reading
poems, which helps improve my Chinese. If you choose the course, you’d better read and recite as
many poems as possible. Besides, it is a good idea to search for related background knowledge so
that you will fully understand a poem.
I’m sure you will get a lot of fun from it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给同学们写一封推荐信，推荐自己最喜欢的
选修课，说明原因，并对要选择该课的同学提出建议。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
因为：because→since
欣赏：enjoy→appreciate
此外：besides→what’s more
充分地：fully→adequately
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It is a good idea to search for related background knowledge.
拓展句：It is a good idea that we search for related background knowledge.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Also, I am able to enjoy the charm of the language by reading poems, which
helps improve my Chinese. （运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Besides, it is a good idea to search for related background knowledge so that you
will fully understand a poem.（运用了so that引导目的状语从句）
9．One possible version:
Dear school teachers,
I’d like to recommend a person I admire on campus. My classmate Andy is an admirable
figure who in many aspects can set a good example for us.Through great efforts, he always ranks among the top students in our school and wins
numerous prizes in various competitions. Also, he never hesitates to offer a helping hand when
seeing people in trouble. Last year, he volunteered to care for the elderly in the local nursing
house. In addition, what makes him a shining model student is his positive attitude towards life. In
the face of challenges and obstacles, he doesn’t lose heart but tries to make a change and strives
for the better.
It is his courage and determination that impress and inspire me a lot. I believe everybody can
learn from him and lead a more positive and productive life on campus.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校推荐一位崇拜的具有正能量的校园人
物。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
人物：figure→character
而且：also→ in addition
照顾：care for→tend
面对：in the face of→be faced with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last year, he volunteered to care for the elderly in the local nursing house.
拓展句：Last year, he volunteered to care for the elderly who are in the local nursing house.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】I’d like to recommend a person I admire on campus.（由省略连词that引导的定
语从句）
【高分句型2】My classmate Andy is an admirable figure who in many aspects can set a good
example for us.（由连词who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型3】Also, he never hesitates to offer a helping hand when seeing people in trouble.
（由when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型4】In addition, what makes him a shining model student is his positive attitudetowards life.（由what引导的主语从句）
【高分句型5】It is his courage and determination that impress and inspire me a lot.（由It is…
that引导的强调句型）
【高分句型6】I believe everybody can learn from him and lead a more positive and productive
life on campus.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）
10．Dear Editor,
I’m writing to recommend one of my favorite books to you. My favorite book is Harry
Potter, which is a series of books written by JK Rowling. The book describes the adventures of
Harry Potter and his friends, all of whom are students at a magic school.
The reasons why I recommend the book are as follows. At first, by reading the book, we can
learn that the most important thing for us is about real life and friendship. Besides, we can also
learn about the power of love. It teaches us that if we want to be happy and live a good life, it is
not enough to be strong in heart and mind. We must also believe in ourselves and help others.
What’s more, from the book, we can know that if we want to succeed, we should know who we
are.
I really think the book is worth reading.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你校正在举行“最美书籍”评选活动的英
文报写一篇英语推荐信，推荐一本你最喜欢的书，内容包括：书名及作者；内容概要；推
荐理由。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
首先：at first→first of all
此外：besides→in addition
过着……的生活：live a…life→lead a…life
信任：believe in→trust
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, we can also learn about the power of love.拓展句：Besides, we can also learn about the power of love which is very powerful.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] My favorite book is Harry Potter, which is a series of books written by JK Rowling.
(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句和非谓语动词作后置定语)
[高分句型2] The book describes the adventures of Harry Potter and his friends, all of whom are
students at a magic school. (运用了whom引导的非限定性定语从句)
[高分句型3] The reasons why I recommend the book are as follows. (运用了why引导的限定性
定语从句)
11．Dear Peter,
I’m delighted to know you’re coming to China for your winter holiday. Personally, I’d like to
recommend the city of Hangzhou to you.
When it comes to Hangzhou, the first thing that comes to mind is West Lake, which has been
a scenic spot for hundreds of years. Besides, there are many tourist attractions in and around the
city, such as Tiger-running Spring, The Lingyin Monastery and Spring Dawn at Su Causeway.
Most importantly, Hangzhou is home to delicious food, such as Dongpo Pork and Longjing
Shrimp.
I hope the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more
enjoyable.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Peter写一封信，向他荐杭州作为
他旅游行程的首选。
【写作分析】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量现在完成时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍推荐城市；2. 介绍推荐理由;
3. 表达你的祝愿。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be delighted to do sth.; recommend sth. to sb.; come to mind; in and around the city; such as; be
home to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m delighted to know you’re coming to China for your winter holiday.
2. Personally, I’d like to recommend the city of Hangzhou to you.
3. When it comes to Hangzhou, the first thing that comes to mind is West Lake, which has been a
scenic spot for hundreds of years.
4. There are many tourist attractions in and around the city, such as Tiger-running Spring, The
Lingyin Monastery and Spring Dawn at Su Causeway.
5. I hope the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end,
At last(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系：besides, most importantly, and
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite
of+n/doing ,as for,(供参考)
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供参考)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【典型句式】
[高分句型1]When it comes to Hangzhou, the first thing that comes to mind is West Lake, which
has been a scenic spot for hundreds of years.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]I hope the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more
enjoyable.（由that引导宾语从句作hope的宾语，省略that）
[高分句型3]I invite you to visit Hangzhou, where you can enjoy the nice weather and delicious
food.（由关系副词where引导非限制性定语从句）
12．Dear sir or Madam,I’m pleased to learn that Chongqing Three Gorges Museum plans to hold an exhibition with the
theme of " Lead Art into Campus". I’m a middle school student named Li Hua from Xin Hua
Middle School. I take the pleasure in recommending Xin Hua Middle School to you to hold this
famous painting exhibition.
For us art lovers, this occasion will be a paradise where we taste, explore and grow, and we will be
able to enjoy many famous paintings at this coming exhibition. Besides, by getting together,
hopefully, we can make more friends.
There are several reasons why I think it is a good choice for our school to hold this exhibition.
Firstly, our school has a strong artistic atmosphere. Secondly, the equipment in our school is very
advanced, especially the modern library exhibition hall, which is big enough to hold more than
one thousand people. All in all, I’m sure you will be interested in our school.
I would be most grateful if you would like to consider my recommendation. I’m looking forward
to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ha
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生向重庆三峡博物馆写一封信，推荐自己所在
的新华中学举办“让艺术走进校园”的画展活动。
【写作分析】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 表明推荐自己学校承办这次画展的目的；
2. 说明推荐你学校的理由；
1）浓厚的艺术氛围。（strong artistic atmosphere）
2）现代化的图书馆展厅等。（modern library exhibition hall）
3. 希望能及时得到回复，表示感谢。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be pleased to; take the pleasure in; friendship; a good choice;strong artistic atmosphere; modern
library exhibition hall; be interested in; look forward to第三步：连词成句
1. I’m pleased to learn that Chongqing Three Gorges Museum plans to hold an exhibition with
the theme of " Lead Art into Campus".
2. I take the pleasure in recommending Xin Hua Middle School to you to hold this famous
painting exhibition.
3. Besides, by getting together, hopefully, we can make more friends.
4. There are several reasons why I think it is a good choice for our school to hold this exhibition.
5. Firstly, our school has a strong artistic atmosphere.
6. Secondly, the equipment in our school is very advanced, especially the modern library
exhibition hall, which is big enough to hold more than one thousand people.
7. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end,
At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not
only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite
of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【典型句式】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑
关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，如：especially the modern library exhibition
hall, which is big enough to hold more than one thousand people. 这句话运用了which引导的非
限制性定语从句。本文使用了固定词组，如be pleased to ; be interested in; look forward to等，
显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文
章增色添彩。
13．Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a boy aged 18. I feel honored to apply for a position to be a volunteer,getting across the common sense of first aid.
Firstly, I have a good knowledge of first aid because my parents are both doctors. They once
taught me how to perform first aid. What’s more, I am easy-going and good at communicating
with others, which guarantees me to be of help. Last but not least, thanks to the constant exercise
and body building, I am in good condition.
On the whole, I am qualified to be a volunteer. I hope to help out people in need and reward
our society as soon as possible. Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。中国青年志愿者网(China Youth Volunteers)计划在
暑假面向高三毕业生招募1000名志愿者，进行急救知识普及活动。要求考生用英语写一封
自我推荐信。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
职位、岗位：position → post
对……掌握熟练：have a good knowledge of → have a good command of
而且、此外：what’s more → in addition/besides
确保：guarantee → insure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合
原句：They once taught me how to perform first aid.
拓展句：They once taught me how to perform first aid, which benefits me a lot in my life.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] Firstly, I have a good knowledge of first aid because my parents are both doctors.(运
用了because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2]What’s more, I am easy-going and good at communicating with others, which
guarantees me to be of help. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
