文档内容
02 感谢信
(2019年6月，浙江卷）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友 Alex即将返回自
己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3. 临别祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
__________
【答案】
Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my
heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under
your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a
pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I
encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for
English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey
how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua【解析】本文是应用文写作任务，要求写一封感谢信。
1. 审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一
般现在时。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助；
最后一段表达祝愿。
3. 关键词和句子
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：leaving
for the United States soon，express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me
up。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语
法错误。
【点睛】
本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了Alex对自己的帮助，详略得当，内容
完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：eagerly，heartfelt gratitude，Honestly
speaking，professional guidance等；高级句式：Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always
cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain
tremendous confidence.使用了让步状语从句和定语从句。这些都提升了文章的档次
首段：表达真挚谢意
1. Thank you so much for your generous help.
非常感谢您慷慨的帮助。
2.1 am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help.
我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助。
3.1t was so kind of you to treat me as your own sister.
谢谢你把我当作自己的妹妹。
4.1 am so grateful to you for what you have done for me.
我很感谢你为我所做的一切。
5.1 would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help.
我想感谢你的帮助。6. I’m writing to thank you for the few wonderful days in London.
我写信感谢你帮我在伦敦度过的快乐日子。
7.1 am writing to express/show/convey my sincere thanks to you for your help.
我写信真诚地感谢你的帮助。
8. For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.
为此，我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。
中间段：解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处
1.Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in my English.
多亏了你的帮助，我的英语有了飞速的进步。
2. Without/But for your help(lf it were not for your help) ,I would not have made so
much progress in my English.
要是没有你的帮助，我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。
3.1 extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor.
我太感谢你的帮助了。
结尾段：再次感谢
1.Thanks again for helping me.
再次感谢你对我的帮助。
2.Thank you again for your generous help.
再次感谢你的慷慨帮助。
3. 1 would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.
如果你能接受我诚挚的感谢，我将不胜感激。
4. Your kindness and help will always be remembered.
我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
5.1 deeply/greatly appreciate your hospitality（款待）．
我深深感谢你们的盛情款待。
模板①
Dear ________(对象),
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感谢
的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been________________________________(没有对
方帮助会产生的后果).
Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节).
Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere
thanks.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear ______,
How about your life/ study/ work? I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感
谢的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that
I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you
_____.What’s more, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is
_______. (原因)
Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢)
Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿)
Yours sincerely
_______
感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件不
适宜过长，只需写明感谢他人的理由，信文要感情真挚，措辞得体。
感谢信一般分为三个部分：
第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因；
第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助；
第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。
感谢信的写作指导
1.有序组织要点
首先，应当友善地对对方的生活表示关心；其次，应明确陈述写信的目的,即致谢；然后，应肯定对方的帮助恰当好处；最后，应对对方给予的帮助再次表示感谢并表示良好的祝愿。
2.灵活把握时态
感谢信的正文中的时态灵活多变。通常，在提到对方曾经所给予的帮助时，应用过去时
态；在提到对方的帮助所产生的实际效果时，可以使用现在完成时态；在涉及到现状时，
应用一般现在时；在表达祝愿或希望时，使用一般将来时态。
3.运用规范的语言
感谢信有其自身的特色语言，在行文的每一个环节也有一些常用句型。另外表示从对方
的帮助中获益时，可以从多种句型表达，要让句式灵活多样，这样更能增强表达效果。
4.表达感激之情
感谢信的主要目的在于向对方致谢，因此语言要诚挚，友善；在信的开头和结尾部分
一般会使用Thank you very much for your kindness and deep concern或 Thanks again and wish
you all the best之类的语言表达感激之情。
假如你是李华， 上周在英国参加了“中国学生文化交流周”活动，并住在 Kelly 家
里。请你给在英国期间认识的新朋友 Kelly 写封感谢信，内容包括：
1.交流活动中的收获；
2.难忘在 Kelly 家的美好日子；
3.感谢她送你的英文词典。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：文化交流周：Cultural Exchange Week
Dear Kelly,
I’ve been back home safely from
England.____________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
__________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua【范文】
Dear Kelly,
I’ve been back home safely from England. Thank you for the warm help during my stay in
England.Last week, I participated in the Cultural Exchange Week for Chinese students. I enjoyed
myself in your country. We visited the city museum and some places of interest, which made me
have a better understanding of the English society, culture and history. Of course, I also made
many new friends.
What’s more, I was lucky enough to stay at your home. And I’ll never forget the days we
spent together. Here I especially thank you for the dictionary you offered me as a gift. It’s a great
help for me to learn English well. I will treasure and make full use of it.
Welcome to China when it’s convenient for you!
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
1. 假定你是李华，上周你的朋友Jim请你去了天空自助餐厅（Sky Buffet）吃饭，请你给他
写一封感谢信，并邀请他本周末来你家吃饭。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2. 假如你是李华，目前在美国你校的友好学校Wilson High School学习交流，将于下周一
回国。请通过电子邮件给该校长Mr. Smith写一封感谢信。
注意：1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_____________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_____________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_____________
_____________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3. 你是李华，父亲节即将来临，在父亲节这天，需要说哪些话语来感谢自己的父亲呢？请
根据以下要点用英文给父亲写一封感谢信。内容包括：
1. 感谢养育之恩；
2. 感谢父亲在你遇到挫折时给你鼓励和安慰；
3. 感谢父亲在你成功时以你为荣；
4.爱父亲。
注意：1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
Dear Father,
With Father’s Day approaching,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
4. 假定你是李华，你在你校举办的英语辩论赛上取得了不俗的成绩。请给你的留学生朋友
Chris写一封感谢信，感谢他对你的帮助，内容包括：
1、表达感谢；
2、感谢的原因；3、表达祝愿。
注意：
1、写作词数应为80左右；
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5. 毕业季也是感恩季，来自澳大利亚的Feinstein在她的网站上发起感谢信接力的活动。假
设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请写一封感谢信参加接力，内容包括：
1. 感谢的人或事物；
2. 感谢的原因；
3. 你的美好愿望。
注意：1.词数100左右 字。 2.不得透露个人信息及感谢人信息
Dear ___________,
___________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
1. Dear Jim,
I am writing to thank you for taking me to Sky Buffet. It was so kind of you to invite me and
book a table by the window. It was wonderful to see the city scenery and watch the beautiful
sunset. I have always wanted to give Sky Buffet a try, and it certainly lived up to my expectations!
Do you have any arrangements next weekend? My plan is to invite you over to my home for
dinner next Saturday. The view won't be as good as at Sky Buffet but I would like to cook you
something special to thank you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给朋友Jim写一封感谢信，并邀请他本周末
来你家吃饭。
【解析】1.词汇积累
想要：would like to→want to
预定：reserve→book
好的：nice→kind
特别的：particular→special
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I have always wanted to give Sky Buffet a try, and it certainly lived up to my expectations!
拓展句：I have always wanted to give Sky Buffet a try, which certainly lived up to my
expectations!
【亮点表达】[高分句型1] I am writing to thank you for taking me to Sky Buffet. (运用了动名
词作宾语)
[高分句型2] It was wonderful to see the city scenery and watch the beautiful sunset. (运用了it
作形式主语句型)
2. Dear Mr. Smith,
How time flies! I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China visiting your school now. I’ve
been here for several weeks and will be back home next Monday. I’m writing to extend my sincerethanks to you.
During my stay, I’ve learnt so much about your school. To my amazement, your school
possesses great learning resources and excellent teachers. Thanks to your proper arrangements, I
attended many classes of different subjects, learning much knowledge. Meanwhile, I established
good relationship with some students in your school and got to know your culture at the same
time. I sincerely hope they can visit my school someday.
Thank you for your help and support again. Welcome to China. (115 words)
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如考生是李华，目前在美国你校的友好学校
Wilson High School学习交流，将于下周一回国。请通过电子邮件给该校长Mr. Smith写一
封感谢信。
【解析】1. 词汇积累
表达：extend→ express
建立：establish→ found
与此同时：at the same time→ in the meantime
希望：hope→wish
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To my amazement, your school possesses great learning resources and excellent teachers.
拓展句：What amazed me is that your school possesses great learning resources and excellent
teachers..
【亮点表达】[高分句型1] Thanks to your proper arrangements, I attended many classes of
different subjects, learning much knowledge.（现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2] I sincerely hope they can visit my school someday.（省略that的宾语从句）
3. Dear Father,
With Father’s Day approaching, I want to express my gratitude to you for bringing me up
from the bottom of my heart.(要点一) Never will I forget the timely encouragement and comfort
you gave to me whenever I was faced with difficulties(要点二) and the pride in your eyes when I
achieved my goals(要点三). Without you, I would not go further confidently and bravely.
Your love can never be repaid but I am determined to work hard and never make you
disappointed. I love you, Father(要点四)!
Yours,Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在父亲节这天给父亲写一封信。
【解析】第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封书信：你是李华，父亲节即将来临，在父亲
节这天，需要说哪些话语来感谢自己的父亲呢？请根据以下要点用英文给父亲写一封感谢
信。内容包括：
1. 感谢养育之恩；
2. 感谢父亲在你遇到挫折时给你鼓励和安慰；
3. 感谢父亲在你成功时以你为荣；
4.爱父亲。
第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：bringing sb up,be faced with, achieve one’s goal, be
determined to do sth 等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清
晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【亮点表达】本篇范文语言优美，情真意切。其中使用了一些高级句型让人眼前一亮。如：
“Never will I forget the timely encouragement and comfort you gave to me whenever I was faced
with difficulties”否定词位于句首的倒装句，增强语气。“Without you, I would not go further
confidently and bravely.”虚拟语气，渲染气氛。这些句型是使用大大增强了本文的感染力，
可供大家借鉴。
4. Dear Chris，
I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for the help you offered me.
To be honest, your assistance has a great impact on me. It was you who made my English
improve greatly. Had it not been for your patient guidance, I couldn’t have prepared so well.
Without your aid, I wouldn’t have done well in the English debate contest held in our school. I’ll
bear your kindness in mind forever.
Again, I’d like to thank you for what you did for me and wish you all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，考生在考生所在校举办的英语辩论
赛上取得了不俗的成绩，因此给留学生朋友Chris写一封感谢信，感谢他对自己的帮助。
【解析】1. 词汇积累表达：extend→ express
对……有影响：have an impact on→ have an influence on
感激： appreciate→ thank
提供：provide→ offer
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：To be honest, your assistance has a great impact on me
拓展句：To be honest, your assistance has a great impact on me,which makes me unforgettable.
【亮点表达】[高分句型1] It was you who made my English improve greatly.（强调句式）
[高分句型2] Had it not been for your patient guidance, I couldn’t have prepared so well.（虚拟
语气）
5. Dear Samantha,
I am writing to you to let you know how lucky I am to have you as a teacher. From day one, I
enjoyed each and every class of yours. You could always make your lessons informative,
educational and enjoyable all at the same time. Every day I looked forward to your class, which
was a surprise from a student who hated and dreaded English. It was you who awakened my
interest in English and restored my confidence in myself. I enjoyed everything you taught us, from
the English language to American culture. The smell of the pancakes we made together in your
class is still clear in our minds, and it simply makes my mouth water.
You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories. You are a great
inspiration to us all!
A big and warm “Thank you!” from your beloved student! May you continue to inspire
greatness in all of your students! (157 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封感谢信参加来自澳大利亚的
Feinstei在她的网站上发起感谢信接力的活动。
【解析】1.词汇积累
提供有用消息的；增长见闻的：informative→informatory
有教育意义的：educational→instructive
害怕：dread→fear/be afraid of唤醒：awaken→arouse
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：You could always make your lessons informative, educational and enjoyable all at the
same time.
拓展句：Not only could you always make your lessons informative, educational but also
enjoyable all at the same time.
【亮点表达】【高分句型1】It was you who awakened my interest in English and restored my
confidence in myself.(使用了强调句型)
【高分句型2】You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories.(使
用了whom引导的定语从句)
